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The story can be read on Website/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9785051/1/The-Catacombs-of-Zalgo here]], on Website/FimfictionDotNet [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/2568/the-catacombs-of-zalgo here]], and on Deviantart [[https://www.deviantart.com/mlp-the-abyss/gallery/63326626/the-catacombs-of-zalgo here]].
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The story can be read on Website/FanfictionDotNet Platform/FanfictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9785051/1/The-Catacombs-of-Zalgo here]], on Website/FimfictionDotNet Platform/FimfictionDotNet [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/2568/the-catacombs-of-zalgo here]], and on Deviantart [[https://www.deviantart.com/mlp-the-abyss/gallery/63326626/the-catacombs-of-zalgo here]].
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* JerkToNiceGuyPlot: The CharacterDevelopment of Jack. As he and Fluttershy venture deeper into the titular catacombs and rescue the yellow pegasus' friends, he learns about the values of the Elements of Harmony and becomes a more selfless guy.
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* TookALevelInKindness: The CharacterDevelopment of Jack. As he and Fluttershy venture deeper into the titular catacombs and rescue the yellow pegasus' friends, he learns about the values of the Elements of Harmony and becomes a more selfless guy.
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* SurprisinglyHappyEnding: [[spoiler: While the entire fic is extremely grim and dark, especially considering that it's about ''MLP [=FiM=]'' characters having to endure the horrors caused by an EldritchAbomination, the canon ending is surprisingly sunny considering what the heroes had to endure. Sure, it has its shades of bitterness, but Jack gets to live by having a pony body and can coexist with the friends that changed him for the better, unlike in the alternate ending where he's KilledOffForReal.]]
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* SurprisinglyHappyEnding: [[spoiler: While the entire fic is extremely grim and dark, especially considering that it's about ''MLP [=FiM=]'' characters having to endure the horrors caused by an EldritchAbomination, the canon ending is surprisingly sunny considering what the heroes had to endure.pretty optimistic. Sure, it has its shades of bitterness, but Jack gets to live by having a pony body and can coexist with the friends that changed him for the better, unlike in the alternate ending where he's KilledOffForReal.]]
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* SurprisinglyHappyEnding: [[spoiler: While the entire fic is extremely grim and dark, especially considering the presence of the ''MLP [=FiM=]'' characters in it, the canon ending is surprisingly sunny considering what the heroes had to endure. Sure, it has its shades of bitterness, but Jack gets to live by having a pony body and can coexist with the friends that changed him for the better, unlike in the alternate ending where he's KilledOffForReal.]]
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* SurprisinglyHappyEnding: [[spoiler: While the entire fic is extremely grim and dark, especially considering the presence of the that it's about ''MLP [=FiM=]'' characters in it, having to endure the horrors caused by an EldritchAbomination, the canon ending is surprisingly sunny considering what the heroes had to endure. Sure, it has its shades of bitterness, but Jack gets to live by having a pony body and can coexist with the friends that changed him for the better, unlike in the alternate ending where he's KilledOffForReal.]]
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%%Both of which who can dual wield?* WeaponOfChoice: {{Katanas|AreJustBetter}} and [[GunFu guns]]. Both which he can [[DualWielding dual wield]].
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* BaitAndSwitch: While entering the Illusion Quarter's first bit, the Room of Horrors, the group is greeted by the friendly laugh of [[GenkiGirl Pinkie Pie]] and it seems at first they'll be reuniting with another one of the Mane Six. Then, Jack points out where they are and, while remembering something, Rainbow Dash panics. Turns out this Pinkie [[ShoutOut is part of a]] [[Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}} recurring nightmare of Dash]]...
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* BaitAndSwitch: While entering the Illusion Quarter's first bit, the Room of Horrors, the group is greeted by the friendly laugh of [[GenkiGirl Pinkie Pie]] and it seems at first they'll be reuniting with another one of the Mane Six. Then, Jack points out where they are and, while remembering something, Rainbow Dash panics. Turns out this Pinkie [[ShoutOut is part of a]] [[Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}} [[Fanfic/CupcakesSergeantSprinkles recurring nightmare of Dash]]...
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** [[spoiler: The Pinkie Pie from The Room of Horrors]] is a walking reference to the infamous ''Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}}''. The fanfic's story is also a recurring nightmare of Rainbow Dash.
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** [[spoiler: The Pinkie Pie from The Room of Horrors]] is a walking reference to the infamous ''Fanfic/{{Cupcakes}}''.''Fanfic/CupcakesSergeantSprinkles''. The fanfic's story is also a recurring nightmare of Rainbow Dash.
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* AdultFear: Rarity and Rainbow Dash's reaction to finding out Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo did indirectly see through their illusion's eyes in the Illusion Quarter despite not being them. The Cutie Mark Crusaders themselves react to this back in Equestria.
