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* RippleEffectProofMemory: Done half-way: characters with full forth wall awareness retain memories from before various retcons, but they also "remember" the current version of their backstory as well. And in Twilight's case, discovering the forth wall caused her to suddenly regain her memories of events that had been overwritten.
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* RippleEffectProofMemory: Done half-way: characters with full forth fourth wall awareness retain memories from before various retcons, but they also "remember" the current version of their backstory as well. And in Twilight's case, discovering the forth fourth wall caused her to suddenly regain her memories of events that had been overwritten.
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-->“Your own actions have paved the dolorous road which you must now trod. You, who would let others go hungry, shall know a hunger that can never be sated! You, who have hidden cruelty and selfishness beneath a beautiful face, shall henceforth wear a face as that matches your hideous heart! [...] Those who give no mercy shall receive none. And that shall remain your fate, until such time as you learn to love someone besides yourself.”
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* ConvenientlyInterruptedDocument: A page is missing from the middle of Resonius' journal, just at the point where explains everything. [[spoiler:Amusingly, Twilight's the one who misplaced that page. She finds it at the very end.]]
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* LowerDeckEpisode: The story focuses on background characters and offers explanations for Derpy's bizarre cameos in "May the Best Pet Win", "The Last Roundup", and "Feeling Pinkie Keen".
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: Referenced. When Ditzy hears her radio playing exactly the same broadcast as yesterday, she quickly concludes that she's stuck in a GroundhogDayLoop, and that ''''I’ll go mad with power just before I go mad with insanity!"''
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: Referenced. When Ditzy hears her radio playing exactly the same broadcast as yesterday, she quickly concludes that she's stuck in a GroundhogDayLoop, and fears that ''''I’ll ''"I’ll go mad with power just before I go mad with insanity!"''
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* PillarOfLight: In Ditzy's dream about the possible end of the world, she sees a beam of light that shoots straight into the sky--then widens and destroys everything it touches.
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* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/352110/the-princess-and-her-hunger The Princess and Her Hunger]]''. A side story--an old tale from the land of Faery, about a cursed princess and the changeling queen.
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* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/352110/the-princess-and-her-hunger The Princess and Her Hunger]]''. A side story--an old tale from the land of Faery, Faerie, about a cursed princess and the changeling queen.
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* BalefulPolymorph: The curse subjects the Princess to a slow-acting version of this trope, where injuries she receives over the course of a day cause her body to supernaturally change. Sharp rocks cut her hooves, leaving her with permanent holes through her legs. Sharp tree branches tear her fur off, leaving her with black, chitinous skin. And so on.
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* DramaticIrony: At the end, the narrator speculates about the Princess's ultimate fate. He mentions a few different possibilities, including the one that readers would recognize as the truth ([[spoiler:she became the changeling Queen, moved to the pony lands, and fought Princess Celestia]]), but immediately dismisses that.
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* ThemeNaming: All of the OC pony names are references to Music/{{Calexico}} songs.
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* EldritchAbomination: The rubber chicken "Boneless" is actually an avatar of the higher-dimensional being Gah Lus the Boneless.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: The goddess intends for the Princess to learn "Don't be a jerk to those of lower social status." The deer narrator doesn't think the Princess did anything wrong, so he comes away thinking instead that the goddess is completely inscrutable.
* CallForward: The condition for ending the curse specifies: ''"And that shall remain your fate, until such time as you learn to love someone besides yourself."'' [[spoiler: Thorax and the other changelings fulfill that condition in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS6E26ToWhereAndBackAgainPart2 "To Where and Back Again, Part 2"]]. So their sudden transformation is the result of the curse lifting.]]
* CompleteImmortality: The curse won't permit the Princess to die. When she gets shot with arrows and stabbed in the head, a HealingFactor kicks in and brings her back to life.
* {{Curse}}: The goddess places an [[IronicHell ironic curse]] on the Princess, formulated specifically to match the Princess's wrongdoings.
-->“Your own actions have paved the dolorous road which you must now trod. You, who would let others go hungry, shall know a hunger that can never be sated! You, who have hidden cruelty and selfishness beneath a beautiful face, shall henceforth wear a face as that matches your hideous heart! [...] Those who give no mercy shall receive none. And that shall remain your fate, until such time as you learn to love someone besides yourself.”
* CursedWithAwesome: The curse on the Princess is rather horrifying, but it has the side effect of making her immortal and giving her wings and unicorn magic--allowing her to go FromNobodyToNightmare.
* EtTuBrute: After being cursed, transformed, and mistaken for a monster by guards, the insult that pushes the Princess completely over the edge is when her sister tries to UnPerson her.
* FromNobodyToNightmare: The Princess would have been minor deer nobility--but the goddess's curse sets her on the path to become [[GodSaveUsFromTheQueen an evil queen who nearly conquers Equestria]] instead.
* HorrorHunger: The Princess is cursed with a hunger that no food can possibly satisfy. It's implied that she became an EmotionEater in a vain attempt to satiate it.
* LandOfFaerie: This story is set entirely in Faerie.
* NamelessNarrative: The goddess Macha Fionnadh Ruad is the only named character. Everyone else is just referred to by title.
* CallForward: The condition for ending the curse specifies: ''"And that shall remain your fate, until such time as you learn to love someone besides yourself."'' [[spoiler: Thorax and the other changelings fulfill that condition in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS6E26ToWhereAndBackAgainPart2 "To Where and Back Again, Part 2"]]. So their sudden transformation is the result of the curse lifting.]]
* CompleteImmortality: The curse won't permit the Princess to die. When she gets shot with arrows and stabbed in the head, a HealingFactor kicks in and brings her back to life.
* {{Curse}}: The goddess places an [[IronicHell ironic curse]] on the Princess, formulated specifically to match the Princess's wrongdoings.
-->“Your own actions have paved the dolorous road which you must now trod. You, who would let others go hungry, shall know a hunger that can never be sated! You, who have hidden cruelty and selfishness beneath a beautiful face, shall henceforth wear a face as that matches your hideous heart! [...] Those who give no mercy shall receive none. And that shall remain your fate, until such time as you learn to love someone besides yourself.”
* CursedWithAwesome: The curse on the Princess is rather horrifying, but it has the side effect of making her immortal and giving her wings and unicorn magic--allowing her to go FromNobodyToNightmare.
* EtTuBrute: After being cursed, transformed, and mistaken for a monster by guards, the insult that pushes the Princess completely over the edge is when her sister tries to UnPerson her.
* FromNobodyToNightmare: The Princess would have been minor deer nobility--but the goddess's curse sets her on the path to become [[GodSaveUsFromTheQueen an evil queen who nearly conquers Equestria]] instead.
* HorrorHunger: The Princess is cursed with a hunger that no food can possibly satisfy. It's implied that she became an EmotionEater in a vain attempt to satiate it.
* LandOfFaerie: This story is set entirely in Faerie.
* NamelessNarrative: The goddess Macha Fionnadh Ruad is the only named character. Everyone else is just referred to by title.
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* OriginsEpisode: The story is an overview of how a minor princess of the deer fairies became [[spoiler:the first changeling, Queen Chrysalis]].
* SelfMadeOrphan: In her rage over her sister's betrayal, the Princess uses her new telekinesis to pull the cornerstone out of her family's castle. It collapses, killing her entire family.
* SpoofAesop: Thanks to BlueAndOrangeMorality, the only lesson the narrator learns is almost a complete non-sequitur:
-->''And the moral of the tale is: Have no dealings with Goddesses, for they are cruel and their ways inscrutable.''
* TranquilFury:
-->She was silent, but it was not the silence of resignation. As one cannot contain the ocean in a goblet, so was her rage too vast and deep for words.
* UnPerson: The Princess's older sister sees the curse as an opportunity to usurp the Princess's place. So she insists she never had a younger sister--and if she hypothetically did have a younger sister, she had been killed by the Goddess, not transformed into a monster.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Several books of shapeshifting magic went missing from her castle's library. This led to the rumor that the former Princess could take on the form of any deer.
* SelfMadeOrphan: In her rage over her sister's betrayal, the Princess uses her new telekinesis to pull the cornerstone out of her family's castle. It collapses, killing her entire family.
* SpoofAesop: Thanks to BlueAndOrangeMorality, the only lesson the narrator learns is almost a complete non-sequitur:
-->''And the moral of the tale is: Have no dealings with Goddesses, for they are cruel and their ways inscrutable.''
* TranquilFury:
-->She was silent, but it was not the silence of resignation. As one cannot contain the ocean in a goblet, so was her rage too vast and deep for words.
* UnPerson: The Princess's older sister sees the curse as an opportunity to usurp the Princess's place. So she insists she never had a younger sister--and if she hypothetically did have a younger sister, she had been killed by the Goddess, not transformed into a monster.
* VoluntaryShapeshifting: Several books of shapeshifting magic went missing from her castle's library. This led to the rumor that the former Princess could take on the form of any deer.
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* IHaveManyNames: The big bad. Ditzy mainly calls it The Eyeless King, but other tribes and species know it as Czernobaa, Xollotll, the Morrígan, Angra Maneyu, The Void Treader, Th'cl'br'gh, or Ystravilim.
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* IHaveManyNames: The big bad. Ditzy mainly calls it The the Eyeless King, but other tribes and species know it as Czernobaa, Xollotll, the Morrígan, Angra Maneyu, The the Void Treader, Th'cl'br'gh, or Ystravilim.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Xanthorgh the Flayer is a multi-dimensional horror with multiple jointed limbs and six mouths. He also lives symbiotically with ponies by eating parasitic creatures that infest their brains and cause them stress. The name comes from flaying demons and other horrors.
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* MythologyGag: Golden Harvest told Dinky that foals come from [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyAndFriends magic mirrors]].
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* ShoutOut: The ''tyndalocurrs'', interdimensional monsters from the “corners between universes” attracted by angles and lattices and that can be summoned by spilled salt (it’s the sound of crystals on a flat surface that calls them) are a pretty clear shout-out to Creator/HPLovecraft's Hounds of Tindalos.
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* [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254620/split-eyes "Split Eyes"]]. A prequel, and companion piece to ''Black Magic Mare''. This is the story of how Ditzy traveled Equestria and eventually settled in Ponyville, as told through letters to her parents.
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* [[http://www.''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254620/split-eyes "Split Eyes"]].Split Eyes]]''. A prequel, and companion piece to ''Black Magic Mare''. This is the story of how Ditzy traveled Equestria and eventually settled in Ponyville, as told through letters to her parents.
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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/285028/6/six-shadows-to-warn-you/twilight-sparkle-and-the-strange-case-of-old-res "Twilight Sparkle and the Strange Case of Old Res"]].[[note]]Though this one is published in a "mature"-rated anthology, its content is only "teen"-rated at the worst.[[/note]] Side story to ''Beauty''. Twilight researches a forgotten spell, and discovers how its inventor came to an unfortunate end.
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* [[https://www.''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/285028/6/six-shadows-to-warn-you/twilight-sparkle-and-the-strange-case-of-old-res "Twilight Twilight Sparkle and the Strange Case of Old Res"]].Res]]''.[[note]]Though this one is published in a "mature"-rated anthology, its content is only "teen"-rated at the worst.[[/note]] Side story to ''Beauty''. Twilight researches a forgotten spell, and discovers how its inventor came to an unfortunate end.
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* [[https://www.''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/352110/the-princess-and-her-hunger "The The Princess and Her Hunger"]].Hunger]]''. A side story--an old tale from the land of Faery, about a cursed princess and the changeling queen.
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254441/black-magic-mare-roaming-queen Black Magic Mare, Roaming Queen]]''. A prequel, and companion piece to "Split Eyes". Before Ditzy settled in Ponyville, she traveled the backroads of Equestria. On one trip, she had a chance run-in with The Great And Powerful Trixie, and the two of them struck up a brief, odd friendship.
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254441/black-magic-mare-roaming-queen Black Magic Mare, Roaming Queen]]''. A prequel, and companion piece to "Split Eyes". Before Ditzy settled in Ponyville, she traveled the backroads of Equestria. On one trip, she had a chance run-in with The the Great And and Powerful Trixie, and the two of them struck up a brief, odd friendship.
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* MindRape: [[spoiler:Upon understanding his RealityWarper powers, Resonius uses it to change Pitch Drop's sexual orientation.]] Upon realizing what he's done, he changes her mind back immediately. And he's horrified at himself for stooping to that.
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* BrokenMasquerade: Pinkie Pie and the Princesses have been hiding the truth of the FourthWall and {{Cosmic Retcon}}s from the rest of ponykind. Twilight Sparkle stumbles upon it, sees too much to ever go back, then gets the full story from Pinkie.
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* CosmicRetcon: Something from beyond the FourthWall has the power to retroactively alter Equestria's history. Though Princess Luna explains there are limitations on what it can do--essentially, that it can't outright contradict something that's shown "on screen".
-->“Retroactive magic doesn’t work quite like you fear. It can ''conjure'', but it cannot ''unmake''.”
* ForeignLanguageTitle: ''Den Fjerde Væg'' is Danish for ''The Fourth Wall''.
* FourthWallObserver: Pinkie has been keeping an eye on the Fourth Wall all her life. Twilight learns about it in chapter 2.
* HeroicBSOD: When Pinkie thinks she broke a [[SeriousBusiness Pinkie Promise]], first she collapses and goes nearly catatonic, then she goes manic as she schemes to avoid the pony she originally made the promise to. She snaps out of it when Twilight proves that breaking the promise wasn't really Pinkie's fault.
* IrisOut: The ending gag from "Magic Duel" becomes a major plot point. Twilight follows Pinkie beyond The Iris in order to restore Pinkie's [[WipeThatSmileOffYourFace deleted mouth]], which leads directly to Twilight [[BrokenMasquerade smashing through the masquerade]].
* MustHaveCaffeine: Pinkie, desperate to avoid Princess Luna (who can visit her dreams), asks Twilight for huge quantities of coffee, so she can stay awake ''forever''.
* RememberTheNewGuy: Happens in-universe. Neither Shining Armor nor Maud Pie were ever mentioned before their introductory episodes, because they ''literally didn't exist'' until immediately beforehand. When they did spring into existence, everypony's memories were altered to accommodate them.
* RippleEffectProofMemory: Done half-way: characters with full forth wall awareness retain memories from before various retcons, but they also "remember" the current version of their backstory as well. And in Twilight's case, discovering the forth wall caused her to suddenly regain her memories of events that had been overwritten.
* SpySpeak: RSS agents use the sign/countersign method to identify each other, or to signal that it's time to talk RSS business.
* TimeSkip: This is basically a series of vignettes, with each chapter set weeks or months apart. Chapter 1 happens in season 2 of the original show, chapter 2 happens in season 3, and the final chapter falls in season 4.
* TheWorldIsNotReady: The reason why Pinkie and Twilight are sworn to preserve the secret of the fourth wall. If the truth got out, it could cause huge numbers of ponies to suffer existential crises.
* WrongContextMagic: As Pinkie notes, the retroactive conjuration magic from the fourth wall doesn't fit into ''any'' known magic from Equestria.
-->“Retroactive magic doesn’t work quite like you fear. It can ''conjure'', but it cannot ''unmake''.”
* ForeignLanguageTitle: ''Den Fjerde Væg'' is Danish for ''The Fourth Wall''.
* FourthWallObserver: Pinkie has been keeping an eye on the Fourth Wall all her life. Twilight learns about it in chapter 2.
* HeroicBSOD: When Pinkie thinks she broke a [[SeriousBusiness Pinkie Promise]], first she collapses and goes nearly catatonic, then she goes manic as she schemes to avoid the pony she originally made the promise to. She snaps out of it when Twilight proves that breaking the promise wasn't really Pinkie's fault.
* IrisOut: The ending gag from "Magic Duel" becomes a major plot point. Twilight follows Pinkie beyond The Iris in order to restore Pinkie's [[WipeThatSmileOffYourFace deleted mouth]], which leads directly to Twilight [[BrokenMasquerade smashing through the masquerade]].
* MustHaveCaffeine: Pinkie, desperate to avoid Princess Luna (who can visit her dreams), asks Twilight for huge quantities of coffee, so she can stay awake ''forever''.
* RememberTheNewGuy: Happens in-universe. Neither Shining Armor nor Maud Pie were ever mentioned before their introductory episodes, because they ''literally didn't exist'' until immediately beforehand. When they did spring into existence, everypony's memories were altered to accommodate them.
* RippleEffectProofMemory: Done half-way: characters with full forth wall awareness retain memories from before various retcons, but they also "remember" the current version of their backstory as well. And in Twilight's case, discovering the forth wall caused her to suddenly regain her memories of events that had been overwritten.
* SpySpeak: RSS agents use the sign/countersign method to identify each other, or to signal that it's time to talk RSS business.
* TimeSkip: This is basically a series of vignettes, with each chapter set weeks or months apart. Chapter 1 happens in season 2 of the original show, chapter 2 happens in season 3, and the final chapter falls in season 4.
* TheWorldIsNotReady: The reason why Pinkie and Twilight are sworn to preserve the secret of the fourth wall. If the truth got out, it could cause huge numbers of ponies to suffer existential crises.
* WrongContextMagic: As Pinkie notes, the retroactive conjuration magic from the fourth wall doesn't fit into ''any'' known magic from Equestria.
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* OldBeggarTest: The old crone who begs for food from the Princess reveals at the end that she's actually the goddess Macha Fionnadh Ruad.
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* OnceMoreWithClarity: Twilight gets to a key passage in Resonius's journal, and a page is missing. From what she can read, she thinks [[spoiler:Resonius cut off other unicorns' horns to use in an arcane ritual]]. At the end, she finds the missing page, rereads the whole passage, and realizes the truth: [[spoiler:Resonius was cutting off his own horn, but it kept growing back]].
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* ProfessorGuineaPig: Resonius devises a way to increase a unicorn's spellcasting power. So ''of course'' he tests it on himself.
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* TouchedByVorlons: After his horn breaks, Resonius has a vision(?) of traveling to another world, where something with "a fierce intelligence behind her five eyes" bites his horn. Then he wakes up, and finds that his magic is stronger than it was before.
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* GoneHorriblyRight: Resonius experiments on his magic in hope of [[NextTierPowerUp boosting his raw spellcasting power]]. It works... but it gives him [[NoManShouldHaveThisPower power that nopony should have]].
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* RealityWarper: As a result of his experiments, Resonius sees strange patterns floating in the air, surrounding everything. And by altering those patterns, he can alter reality on a fundamental level.
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* [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/352110/the-princess-and-her-hunger "The Princess and Her Hunger"]]. A side story--and story--an old tale from the land of Faery, about a cursed princess and the changeling queen.
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* "[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254620/split-eyes Split Eyes]]". A prequel, and companion piece to ''Black Magic Mare''. This is the story of how Ditzy traveled Equestria and eventually settled in Ponyville, as told through letters to her parents.
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* "[[http://www.[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254620/split-eyes Split Eyes]]"."Split Eyes"]]. A prequel, and companion piece to ''Black Magic Mare''. This is the story of how Ditzy traveled Equestria and eventually settled in Ponyville, as told through letters to her parents.
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* "[[https://www.[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/285028/6/six-shadows-to-warn-you/twilight-sparkle-and-the-strange-case-of-old-res Twilight "Twilight Sparkle and the Strange Case of Old Res]]".Res"]].[[note]]Though this one is published in a "mature"-rated anthology, its content is only "teen"-rated at the worst.[[/note]] Side story to ''Beauty''. Twilight researches a forgotten spell, and discovers how its inventor came to an unfortunate end.
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* PowerGlows: All pony magic is visible to Ditzy as a glowing aura, with brightness corresponding to power. Twilight Sparkle is so powerful that it hurts to look straight at her.
* AlienGeometries: The interior of Les Livres Perdus. The aisles between the bookshelves appear to curve, even though Twilight walked in a straight line the whole time. And somehow, walking into the store takes longer than walking back out.
* ApocalypticLog: Twilight reads Resonius's journal, in which he details how his life became a living nightmare, [[spoiler:up until the day before his death]].
-->To whoever is reading this after I’m gone: hello. I’m Resonius IV. I hope you don’t do what I did.
* ApocalypticLog: Twilight reads Resonius's journal, in which he details how his life became a living nightmare, [[spoiler:up until the day before his death]].
-->To whoever is reading this after I’m gone: hello. I’m Resonius IV. I hope you don’t do what I did.
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* IncompatibleOrientation: [[spoiler:Resonis [[spoiler:Resonius IV and Pitch Drop]]. One's hetrosexual and (a stallion) falls in love with Pitch Drop, but she's gay.]]
* FantasyKeepsake: Resonius has vaguely disturbing dreams about another realm, with creatures resembling frogs and giant crabs. [[spoiler:He gets even more disturbed when he wakes up one morning with a crab-creature's leg sticking out of his mouth. Still alive.]]
* TheLittleShopThatWasntThereYesterday: Le Livres Perdus, a Canterlot bookstore in a secluded back alley where Twilight acquires theother one, but journal. It's got AlienGeometries; the other one owner is gay.something ''else'' masquerading as a pony; and when Twi tries to return to the store at the very end, the entire alley is gone.
* NoManShouldHaveThisPower: As Resonius gains RealityWarper powers, he sees all the myriad ways that he could cause death and destruction--and he knows from prior experience that he's too impulsive to trust with this power. Unfortunately, the power is harder to renounce than he thinks.
* PeacefulInDeath: [[spoiler:From the expression on Resonius's petrified body, Twilight thinks he was at peace when he died.]]
* TakenForGranite: [[spoiler:Resonius finally escapes by finding a cockatrice to petrify him.]]
* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler:When the shop owner realizes that his plan to corrupt Twilight Sparkle has failed, he throws her out of the shop and trashes the whole place in a rage.]]
* FantasyKeepsake: Resonius has vaguely disturbing dreams about another realm, with creatures resembling frogs and giant crabs. [[spoiler:He gets even more disturbed when he wakes up one morning with a crab-creature's leg sticking out of his mouth. Still alive.]]
* TheLittleShopThatWasntThereYesterday: Le Livres Perdus, a Canterlot bookstore in a secluded back alley where Twilight acquires the
* NoManShouldHaveThisPower: As Resonius gains RealityWarper powers, he sees all the myriad ways that he could cause death and destruction--and he knows from prior experience that he's too impulsive to trust with this power. Unfortunately, the power is harder to renounce than he thinks.
* PeacefulInDeath: [[spoiler:From the expression on Resonius's petrified body, Twilight thinks he was at peace when he died.]]
* TakenForGranite: [[spoiler:Resonius finally escapes by finding a cockatrice to petrify him.]]
* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler:When the shop owner realizes that his plan to corrupt Twilight Sparkle has failed, he throws her out of the shop and trashes the whole place in a rage.]]
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* BizzareBabyBoom: An aftereffect of the Great Bloop: "And, during the following June, July, and August, every foal born to Pasture citizens had red eyes and a silver mane. These “Bloop babies” were unusually long-lived, but otherwise normal ponies."
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* BizzareBabyBoom: BizarreBabyBoom: An aftereffect of the Great Bloop: "And, during the following June, July, and August, every foal born to Pasture citizens had red eyes and a silver mane. These “Bloop babies” were unusually long-lived, but otherwise normal ponies."
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* BizzareBabyBoom: An aftereffect of the Great Bloop: "And, during the following June, July, and August, every foal born to Pasture citizens had red eyes and a silver mane. These “Bloop babies” were unusually long-lived, but otherwise normal ponies."
* IncompatibleOrientation: [[spoiler:Resonis IV and Pitch Drop]]. One's hetrosexual and in love with the other one, but the other one is gay.
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* BizzareBabyBoom: An aftereffect of the Great Bloop: "And, during the following June, July, and August, every foal born to Pasture citizens had red eyes and a silver mane. These “Bloop babies” were unusually long-lived, but otherwise normal ponies."
* IncompatibleOrientation: [[spoiler:Resonis IV and Pitch Drop]]. One's hetrosexual and in love with the other one, but the other one is gay.
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* CompoundTitle: The two chapter titles form a stanza from the Allen Toussaint song [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fortune_Teller_(song) "Fortune Teller"]].
-->I left there in a hurry, \\
looking forward to my big surprise.\\
The next morning I discovered\\
that the fortune teller told me lies.
-->I left there in a hurry, \\
looking forward to my big surprise.\\
The next morning I discovered\\
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* CompoundTitle: The three chapter titles, read back-to-back, are a quotation from Prince Myshkin, from ''Literature/TheIdiot'':
-->“Beauty is difficult to judge; I'm not prepared yet. Beauty is a mystery.”
* DramaticIrony: Time Turner insists that Trixie couldn't possibly pose a threat to TwilightSparkleSparkle.
-->“Beauty is difficult to judge; I'm not prepared yet. Beauty is a mystery.”
* DramaticIrony: Time Turner insists that Trixie couldn't possibly pose a threat to Twilight
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Trixie sets up an extremely loud alarm system (her own magic spell), then Ditzy and Time Turner accidentally trigger it with some ill-timed clumsiness. The alarm summons a dangerous monster. Then Trixie picks a bad time to yell at Ditzy
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Trixie sets up an extremely loud alarm system (her own magic spell), then Ditzy and Time Turner accidentally trigger it with some ill-timed clumsiness. The alarm summons a dangerous monster. Then Trixie picks a bad time to yell at DitzyDitzy, prompting the monster to attack them.
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* TimeTravel: [[spoiler:Dr. Time Turner Hooves can do this.]] It's an inborn ability of his--[[AvertedTrope there's no Dr. Whooves or TARDIS in this series]].
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* HowWeGotHere: Much like ''Alarm Clock'', this story opens with a bit of unattributed dialogue. The context for this dialogue pops up in the final chapter.
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* RevengeBeforeReason: Trixie is so obsessed that she hurts herself just to spite Twilight. Specifically, the story ends with [[spoiler:Trixie throwing away her job at the art museum, just because she learned it was Twilight's favorite.]]
* RevengeBeforeReason: Trixie is so obsessed that she hurts herself just to spite Twilight. Specifically, the story ends with [[spoiler:Trixie throwing away her job at the art museum, just because she learned it was Twilight's favorite.]]
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* TrickedOutTime: Many priceless works of art are damaged beyond repair. Ditzy wonders if they can use time travel to save them, but Time Turner points out that he can only create {{Stable Time Loop}}s, not change the past. [[spoiler:Ditzy figures out how to save them anyway: travel back and steal the original artworks, leave forgeries to get destroyed in their places, and return the originals immediately afterwards.]]
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* GirlfriendInCanada: After Ditzy claims to be dating Time Turner, Trixie immediately insists that she, too, has a girlfriend. ''“But you can’t meet her now, because she’s getting a degree in Vanhoofer.”''
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* UnknownRival: After the events of "Boast Busters", Trixie is obsessed with showing up Twilight Sparkle. But according to Ditzy, Twilight doesn't even remember Trixie at all.
-->[Trixie asked,] “How much does she know about Trixie? What does she say about Trixie?”\\
[Ditzy said,] “She ''doesn’t'' talk about you. As far I can tell, all of Ponyville just collectively forgot about you as soon as they fixed the bear damage.”
-->[Trixie asked,] “How much does she know about Trixie? What does she say about Trixie?”\\
[Ditzy said,] “She ''doesn’t'' talk about you. As far I can tell, all of Ponyville just collectively forgot about you as soon as they fixed the bear damage.”
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/261368/beauty-will-tear-us-apart Beauty Will Tear Us Apart]]''. Sequel to ''Alarm Clock''. Ditzy investigates a rash of vandalism at a Canterlot art museum, suspecting that the perpetrator is something ancient and inequine.
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/261368/beauty-will-tear-us-apart Beauty Will Tear Us Apart]]''. Sequel to ''Alarm Clock''. Ditzy investigates a rash of vandalism at a Canterlot art museum, suspecting that the perpetrator is something ancient otherworldly and inequine.
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* HumanAliens: [[spoiler:Upon arriving on another planet via a Krasnicker tube, Ditzy meets two extraterrestrial horses--indistinguishable from Saddle Arabians, as far as Ditzy can tell. Although from ''their'' perspective, Ditzy is a RubberForeheadAlien, because this alien world apparently doesn't have pegasus ponies.]]
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* HowWeGotHere: The story opens with a brief bit of chatter from the FeaturelessPlaneOfDisembodiedDialogue. The dialogue finally happens, in its proper context, in the final chapter.
* HumanAliens: Or Equine Aliens, in this case. [[spoiler:Upon arriving on another planet via a Krasnicker tube, Ditzy meets two extraterrestrial horses--indistinguishable from Saddle Arabians, as far as Ditzy can tell. Although from ''their'' perspective, Ditzy is a RubberForeheadAlien, because this alien world apparently doesn't have pegasus ponies.]]
* HumanAliens: Or Equine Aliens, in this case. [[spoiler:Upon arriving on another planet via a Krasnicker tube, Ditzy meets two extraterrestrial horses--indistinguishable from Saddle Arabians, as far as Ditzy can tell. Although from ''their'' perspective, Ditzy is a RubberForeheadAlien, because this alien world apparently doesn't have pegasus ponies.]]
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* LandOfFaerie: The ''sídhe'', current home of the ''fia''. It's fundamentally different from the ''other'' other dimensions, and as a result Ditzy can only enter or exit it at certain points. And Ditzy [[HourInsideYearOutside loses a few hours]] whenever she returns to Equestria from the ''sídhe''.
* LovecraftLight: There are forces beyond mortal comprehension lurking in the dark shadows around Equestria. It's possible to summon them ''completely by accident''. But there's no need to despair: some of these forces are on the ponies' side. And for those that are hostile, a smart, level-headed pony can thwart them ''without'' dying or going insane.
* LovecraftLight: There are forces beyond mortal comprehension lurking in the dark shadows around Equestria. It's possible to summon them ''completely by accident''. But there's no need to despair: some of these forces are on the ponies' side. And for those that are hostile, a smart, level-headed pony can thwart them ''without'' dying or going insane.
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* LandOfFaerie: The ''sídhe'', current home of the ''fia''. It's fundamentally different from the ''other'' other dimensions, and as a result Ditzy can only enter or exit it at certain points. And Ditzy [[HourInsideYearOutside [[YearOutsideHourInside loses a few hours]] whenever she returns to Equestria from the ''sídhe''.
*LovecraftLight: LovecraftLite: There are forces beyond mortal comprehension lurking in the dark shadows around Equestria. It's possible to summon them ''completely by accident''. But there's no need to despair: some of these forces are on the ponies' side. And for those that are hostile, a smart, level-headed pony can thwart them ''without'' dying or going insane.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromFast: In spite of his name, Xanthorgh the Flayer is very benign towards ponies.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromFast: In spite of his name, NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Xanthorgh the Flayer is very benign towards ponies.combines XMakesAnythingCool, AVillainNamedZrg, and SpellMyNameWithAThe... but he's on the ponies' side. He earned his title by flaying creatures that would parasitize ponies otherwise.
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* PublicDomainCharacter: Constable Peeler is an {{OC}} who predates this fic. He was created by a few different tropers in collaboration, for anyone to use in their own stories.
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A series of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfics by Tropers/MetaFour, mostly centering on Ditzy Doo (aka "Derpy Hooves")--a pegasus from Ponyville's weather patrol who sees the world a bit [[TrueSight differently]] than everyone around her. Where others see an eccentric rural town, Ditzy sees [[AlienGeometries spatial anomalies]], [[TheFairFolk Fae creatures]], and {{Eldritch Abomination}}s. And she's committed to protecting her friends and neighbors--and their sanity--from all of the aforementioned.
Ditzy eventually finds out that she isn't the only pony protecting Equestria from the shadows, and that the world is stranger than even she thinks.
Ditzy eventually finds out that she isn't the only pony protecting Equestria from the shadows, and that the world is stranger than even she thinks.
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[[caption-width-right:350:"''It’s just an average daaaaaay...''"]]
A series of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfics by Tropers/MetaFour, mostly centering on Ditzy Doo (aka "Derpy Hooves")--a pegasus from Ponyville's weather patrol who sees the world a bit [[TrueSight differently]] than everyone around her.
Where others see an eccentric rural town, Ditzy sees [[AlienGeometries spatial anomalies]], [[TheFairFolk Fae creatures]], and {{Eldritch Abomination}}s. And she's committed to protecting her friends and neighbors--and their sanity--from all of theaforementioned.
aforementioned. Ditzy eventually finds out that she isn't the only pony protecting Equestria from the shadows, and that the world is stranger than even she thinks.
[[caption-width-right:350:"''It’s just an average daaaaaay...''"]]
A series of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfics by Tropers/MetaFour, mostly centering on Ditzy Doo (aka "Derpy Hooves")--a pegasus from Ponyville's weather patrol who sees the world a bit [[TrueSight differently]] than everyone around her.
Where others see an eccentric rural town, Ditzy sees [[AlienGeometries spatial anomalies]], [[TheFairFolk Fae creatures]], and {{Eldritch Abomination}}s. And she's committed to protecting her friends and neighbors--and their sanity--from all of the
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56774/Alarm-Clock Alarm Clock]]''.
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254441/black-magic-mare-roaming-queen Black Magic Mare, Roaming Queen]]''.
* "[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254620/split-eyes Split Eyes]]".
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/261368/beauty-will-tear-us-apart Beauty Will Tear Us Apart]]''.
* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/285028/6/six-shadows-to-warn-you/twilight-sparkle-and-the-strange-case-of-old-res Twilight Sparkle and the Strange Case of Old Res]]".
* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/333699/den-fjerde-vg Den Fjerde Væg]]''.
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254441/black-magic-mare-roaming-queen Black Magic Mare, Roaming Queen]]''.
* "[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254620/split-eyes Split Eyes]]".
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/261368/beauty-will-tear-us-apart Beauty Will Tear Us Apart]]''.
* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/285028/6/six-shadows-to-warn-you/twilight-sparkle-and-the-strange-case-of-old-res Twilight Sparkle and the Strange Case of Old Res]]".
* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/333699/den-fjerde-vg Den Fjerde Væg]]''.
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* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56774/Alarm-Clock Alarm Clock]]''. \n The main story in the series, and longest. Ditzy uncovers the signs of an invasion which just might be too big for her to handle by herself. And it doesn't help that both Twilight Sparkle and Time Turner are getting suspicious of Ditzy.
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254441/black-magic-mare-roaming-queen Black Magic Mare, Roaming Queen]]''. \n A prequel, and companion piece to "Split Eyes". Before Ditzy settled in Ponyville, she traveled the backroads of Equestria. On one trip, she had a chance run-in with The Great And Powerful Trixie, and the two of them struck up a brief, odd friendship.
* "[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254620/split-eyes SplitEyes]]".
Eyes]]". A prequel, and companion piece to ''Black Magic Mare''. This is the story of how Ditzy traveled Equestria and eventually settled in Ponyville, as told through letters to her parents.
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/261368/beauty-will-tear-us-apart Beauty Will Tear UsApart]]''.
Apart]]''. Sequel to ''Alarm Clock''. Ditzy investigates a rash of vandalism at a Canterlot art museum, suspecting that the perpetrator is something ancient and inequine.
* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/285028/6/six-shadows-to-warn-you/twilight-sparkle-and-the-strange-case-of-old-res Twilight Sparkle and the Strange Case of OldRes]]".
Res]]".[[note]]Though this one is published in a "mature"-rated anthology, its content is only "teen"-rated at the worst.[[/note]] Side story to ''Beauty''. Twilight researches a forgotten spell, and discovers how its inventor came to an unfortunate end.
* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/333699/den-fjerde-vg Den FjerdeVæg]]''.
Væg]]''. Sequel to ''Beauty''. Ditzy finds herself on the outside of TheMasquerade. Twilight and Pinkie Pie are the ones who must learn the unsettling truth (or reveal that they've known all along) and puzzle through its implications.
Also see [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/457688/alarmaverse-episode-guide this blog post]] for a listing of the stories in chronological order. And [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/598639/a-theme-song-for-that-one-story this post]] for a {{filk}} theme song.
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254441/black-magic-mare-roaming-queen Black Magic Mare, Roaming Queen]]''.
* "[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254620/split-eyes Split
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/261368/beauty-will-tear-us-apart Beauty Will Tear Us
* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/285028/6/six-shadows-to-warn-you/twilight-sparkle-and-the-strange-case-of-old-res Twilight Sparkle and the Strange Case of Old
* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/333699/den-fjerde-vg Den Fjerde
Also see [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/457688/alarmaverse-episode-guide this blog post]] for a listing of the stories in chronological order. And [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/598639/a-theme-song-for-that-one-story this post]] for a {{filk}} theme song.
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A series of WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfics by Meta Four, centering on Ponyville's mailmare, Ditzy Doo.
The order by first published is: [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56774/Alarm-Clock Alarm Clock]], [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254441/black-magic-mare-roaming-queen Black Magic Mare, Roaming Queen]], [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254620/split-eyes Split Eyes]], [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/261368/beauty-will-tear-us-apart Beauty Will Tear Us Apart]], [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/285028/6/six-shadows-to-warn-you/twilight-sparkle-and-the-strange-case-of-old-res “Twilight Sparkle and the Strange Case of Old Res”]], and [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/333699/den-fjerde-vg Den Fjerde Væg]].
The order by first published is: [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56774/Alarm-Clock Alarm Clock]], [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254441/black-magic-mare-roaming-queen Black Magic Mare, Roaming Queen]], [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254620/split-eyes Split Eyes]], [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/261368/beauty-will-tear-us-apart Beauty Will Tear Us Apart]], [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/285028/6/six-shadows-to-warn-you/twilight-sparkle-and-the-strange-case-of-old-res “Twilight Sparkle and the Strange Case of Old Res”]], and [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/333699/den-fjerde-vg Den Fjerde Væg]].
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A series of WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfics by Meta Four, Tropers/MetaFour, mostly centering on Ditzy Doo (aka "Derpy Hooves")--a pegasus from Ponyville's mailmare, weather patrol who sees the world a bit [[TrueSight differently]] than everyone around her. Where others see an eccentric rural town, Ditzy Doo.
sees [[AlienGeometries spatial anomalies]], [[TheFairFolk Fae creatures]], and {{Eldritch Abomination}}s. And she's committed to protecting her friends and neighbors--and their sanity--from all of the aforementioned.
Ditzy eventually finds out that she isn't the only pony protecting Equestria from the shadows, and that the world is stranger than even she thinks.
Theorder by first published is: [[http://www.stories are, in publication order:
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56774/Alarm-Clock AlarmClock]], [[http://www.Clock]]''.
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254441/black-magic-mare-roaming-queen Black Magic Mare, RoamingQueen]], [[http://www.Queen]]''.
* "[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254620/split-eyes SplitEyes]], [[http://www.Eyes]]".
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/261368/beauty-will-tear-us-apart Beauty Will Tear UsApart]], [[https://www.Apart]]''.
* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/285028/6/six-shadows-to-warn-you/twilight-sparkle-and-the-strange-case-of-old-res“Twilight Twilight Sparkle and the Strange Case of Old Res”]], and [[https://www.Res]]".
* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/333699/den-fjerde-vg Den FjerdeVæg]].
Væg]]''.
Compare and contrast with ''FanFic/ElementalsOfHarmony''.
Ditzy eventually finds out that she isn't the only pony protecting Equestria from the shadows, and that the world is stranger than even she thinks.
The
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56774/Alarm-Clock Alarm
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254441/black-magic-mare-roaming-queen Black Magic Mare, Roaming
* "[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/254620/split-eyes Split
* ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/261368/beauty-will-tear-us-apart Beauty Will Tear Us
* "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/285028/6/six-shadows-to-warn-you/twilight-sparkle-and-the-strange-case-of-old-res
* ''[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/333699/den-fjerde-vg Den Fjerde
Compare and contrast with ''FanFic/ElementalsOfHarmony''.
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* YouAlreadyChangedThePast: [[Dr. Hooves' time travel works this way. On morning two, the Dr. Hooves that Ditzy meets outside Town Hall was actually a time-traveller from a few days later.]]
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* YouAlreadyChangedThePast: [[Dr. Hooves' [[spoiler:Dr. Hooves']] time travel works this way. On From Ditzy's point of view, we see effects that precede their causes, like things from the future appearing in the past. [[spoiler:On morning two, the Dr. Hooves that Ditzy meets outside Town Hall was actually a time-traveller from a few days later.]]
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* AlienGeometries:
** As Ponyville Town Hall transforms into a portal to the void, it becomes spatially inverted.
-->The edge which should have been closest to Ditzy was now farthest away—the pillar now appeared concave rather than convex—without a single atom of the pillar being disturbed from its place.
** When traveling through a Krasnicker tube, one can see shapes outside the tube. Those shapes aren't constrained by Euclidean geometry, or logic for that matter.
* AnachronicOrder: The penultimate chapter copies the structure from ''{{Film/Memento}}'': scenes in chronological order alternate with scenes in reverse-chronological order. The chapter ends in the chronological middle.
* AnotherDimension: There are many, many other universes that one can step into quite easily, if you just know how to move in the right direction. Ditzy is one of the few who know.
* AnxietyDreams: Twice.
** First, Ditzy dreams about the destruction the Eyeless King could wreak. She sees a vision of Equestria reduced to a lifeless wasteland while Carrot Top offers vaguely-Biblical sounding narration.
** Second, Ditzy dreams that she's in a ska band, about to play a career-making live show, but she missed all the band's practice sessions and doesn't how to play the songs. [[NotWearingPantsDream And she's forgot to bring her suit, too.]]
* AwesomeMcCoolname: ''Ditzy Doo'' is actually short for ''Detsella Renombrada Morningdew''. And her dad's full name is ''[=LaMontagne=] Burningspear Morningdew'', but he normally goes by [=LaMonte=] Doo.
* BaconAddiction: Hay bacon, of course. The Muffin Emporium offers spinach-basil-and-hay-bacon muffins. And Ditzy improves a potato salad by adding hay bacon bits to it.
* BerserkButton: Fluttershy gets ''angry'' when she thinks somepony is hurting her chickens--angry enough to terrify Ditzy.
* BookEnds: The story opens with Ditzy waking up, noticing a dimensional rift in the sky above, and wishing that she could share the sight with somepony else. [[spoiler:The story ends with another dimensional rift, and Ditzy waking Dr. Hooves up so he can see it.]]
* BotheringByTheBook: When Ditzy gets arrested and R.S.S. agent Dr. Hooves tries to take custody of her, Constable Peeler emphatically states that Hooves needs to fill out the proper paperwork first. This is almost as good as outright refusal, because Hooves apparently doesn't know anything about this paperwork.
* ChewOutFakeOut: Spike replaces Twilight Sparkle's coffee with decaf, prompting an indignant "What?!" from Twilight when she finds out. But Twilight's just shocked at ''herself'' for not tasting the difference--she's actually happy that Spike made sure she got the rest she needed.
* CovertGroup: Dr. Hooves is an agent of the mysterious R.S.S., or [[spoiler:the Royal Secret Service. This agency is headed by Princess Luna, and they exist to protect Equestria from threats that the general public is better off not knowing about.]]
* CrashingDreams: A loud song intrudes into one of Ditzy's dreams--turns out it's her radio alarm clock playing.
* DeathGlare: Angel bunny doesn't like Ditzy for some reason, and he gives her "a look which could be classified a war crime in twelve different nations."
* DeliveryStork: Ponies have their own equivalent of that myth. Ditzy plays along with it, because she doesn't feel like giving TheTalk to somepony else's daughter.
-->Dinky poked her head out the bathroom door. “Mom says magic mirrors are where foals come from.”\\
[Ditzy said,] “What? No. I--I--I mean ... [[VerbalBackspace yes!]] Your mom is very smart and exactly right and you should definitely listen to her.”
* DidIJustSayThatOutLoud: Inverted. Ditzy tries to answer one of Carrot Top's questions, but forgets to say most of it out loud.
-->Ditzy answered, “Niches, Carrot Top, niches.” ''The bakers at Sugarcube Corner are the undisputed masters of sweet baked goods'', Ditzy thought, ''and I respect them for that. But for the muffin connoisseurs seeking subtler flavors, Drury Lane at the Emporium is simply the best there is.''\\
''Uh oh, Carrot Top is looking at me funny—how much of that did I remember to say out loud? Oh well, too late to elaborate.''
* DiscontinuityNod: Dinky Doo is Carrot Top's daughter, but Dr. Hooves mistakes her for Ditzy's daughter at one point, and Ditzy wonders how he could have possibly come to that conclusion--a nod to the ''ubiquitous'' fanon about Derpy being Dinky's mom.
* EasyAmnesia: When she gets hit by lightning, Ditzy forgets everything from the few minutes before and after the zap.
* EitherOrTitle / LongTitle:
** One chapter is named "Dr. Hooves, or, How I Learned to Start Worrying and Fear the Green" (doubles as a ShoutOut to ''Film/DrStrangelove''.)
** The penultimate chapter takes it to absurdity: "The Filly with the Moon in Her Head, or, The Bubblemaker's Dream, or, A Message from Another Time, or, Eternal Snarkness, or, Back in the Saddlebag, or, Muffindependence Day, or, Fridge Benefits, or, I Hope You Liked ''Memento''".
* EldritchAbomination:
** The Eyeless King. An entity banished beyond the ninth darkness--if it re-entered Equestria, it would reduce Ponyville to a radioactive crater in the process. When it's on the threshold, Ditzy notes a smell as if the air itself was dying in the monster's vicinity.
** ''Tyndalocurrs'', monsters attracted to lattices and right angles, and which effortlessly sever organic molecular bonds.
** Xanthorgh the Flayer is a higher-dimensional being with an arthropod appearance--but he has a symbiotic relationship with ponykind.
** Chromastaceans: they're like giant hermit crabs, but they wear ''colors'' instead of sea shells.
* EvilTwin: Parodied. [[spoiler:When past Dr. Hooves, still convinced that Ditzy is a spy, sees his future self taking Ditzy's side, he concludes his future self must be an "Evil mirror universe clone!" His future self points out how absurd that is--he doesn't even have [[BeardOfEvil the necessary goatee]]!]]
* FailedASpotCheck: The clock shop Time Turner's Time Pieces is ''right next'' to The Muffin Emporium and Xanthorgh the Flayer's designated spot in Ponyville--both locations that Ditzy frequents. Somehow, she never noticed the proprietor of the clock shop, until he started stalking her.
*TheFairFolk: The ''fia sídhe''. They live and travel in a realm inaccessible to most ponies, and they operate by a very different sort of morality. One of them, Abhean, thinks he would be doing Ditzy a great favor if he beheaded Bon Bon.
* FantasyKeepsake: Ditzy has a dream conversation with Princess Luna. But she's unaware that Luna's a DreamWalker, so she dismisses the whole thing as a figment of her subconscious--until she sees the same scroll that Luna gave her, resting on her nightstand.
* TheGadfly: At the restaurant, Carrot Top screws with the waiter by asking if she can order something from the carnivore menu. Ditzy joins in by telling the waiter, "I'll have what ''you're'' having!"
-->“Aw yeah,” Ditzy said between gigglesnorts, “we’re making him ''work'' for that tip.”\\
“The look on his face!” Carrot Top exclaimed. “I think he was ''this close'' to kicking us out!”
* HeroInsurance: The Royal Treasury has funds set aside specifically for rebuilding after world-threatening disasters, [[spoiler:and destroying Town Hall to keep the Eyeless King from entering Equestria certainly qualifies]]. So Ditzy doesn't have to pay directly for the biggest chunk of property damage she causes. She still gives a donation anyway, and buys Carrot Top a replacement fridge.
* HumanAliens: [[spoiler:Upon arriving on another planet via a Krasnicker tube, Ditzy meets two extraterrestrial horses--indistinguishable from Saddle Arabians, as far as Ditzy can tell. Although from ''their'' perspective, Ditzy is a RubberForeheadAlien, because this alien world apparently doesn't have pegasus ponies.]]
* HyperspaceIsAScaryPlace: Traveling through a Krasnicker tube is very dangerous, because normal matter reacts explosively if it touches the inside of the tube.
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: With the exception of the epilogue, all the chapter titles are puns on common phrases (like "Note Early, Note Often") or punny references to other works (like "Fridge Over Troubled Waters").
* IgnoringBySinging:
-->[Ditzy said,] “Yeah, can’t you use [your telekinesis]?”\\
[Dinky said,] “No. Don’t wanna talk about it.”\\
“Magic lessons not going well?”\\
“La la la la not talking about it!” Dinky clamped her forehooves over her ears. “La la la la laaaaaaaaaaa!”
* IHaveManyNames: The big bad. Ditzy mainly calls it The Eyeless King, but other tribes and species know it as Czernobaa, Xollotll, the Morrígan, Angra Maneyu, The Void Treader, Th'cl'br'gh, or Ystravilim.
* InSeriesNickname: The story reconciles the multiple names for some of the characters by making some of them nicknames. Ditzy Doo is the real name; "Derpy Hooves" is a nickname. Carrot Top's legal name is Golden Harvest, and Bon Bon's legal name is Sweetie Drops--and both of them prefer their nicknames over their real names. And Dinky Doo's legal name is Golden Ink. This becomes a plot point when Dr. Hooves misses the point and thinks that those ponies are all spies, and their nicknames are their ''alternate identities''.
* InsistentTerminology: Ditzy always uses the term "Krasnicker tube" (a pun on the theoretical [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Krasnikov_tube Krasnikov tube]]) instead of "wormhole". But the tubes in question pretty much are just wormholes--a fact that gets lampshaded later.
* InvertedTrope: "Derpy stealing food from Carrot Top's fridge" is a running gag with [[Webcomic/CarrotCakeStorybook roots in the earliest days of the fandom]]. In this story, Ditzy takes the fridge itself and leaves Carrot Top's food behind.
* IronicName: Ditzy's middle name, Renombrada, is Spanish for "renowned". Yet she goes out of her way to avoid the spotlight for all the "problems" she's solved in Ponyville.
* IsThatWhatTheyreCallingItNow:
-->“And why else would [Pinkie] and Dash spend so much time alone?”\\
“Because they’re ''prank buddies''?”\\
“Ooooooohhh,” the Mayor said, winking at Ditzy, “is that what the kids are calling it these days? Say no more, Ditzy, say no more.”
* JurisdictionFriction: Police Constable Peeler arrests Ditzy Doo, then R.S.S. agent Dr. Hooves swoops in and insists on taking custody of her. Peeler sides with Ditzy against Dr. Hooves, insisting that she's outside Hooves' jurisdiction and [[BotheringByTheBook throwing the book at the agent.]]
* LandOfFaerie: The ''sídhe'', current home of the ''fia''. It's fundamentally different from the ''other'' other dimensions, and as a result Ditzy can only enter or exit it at certain points. And Ditzy [[HourInsideYearOutside loses a few hours]] whenever she returns to Equestria from the ''sídhe''.
* LovecraftLight: There are forces beyond mortal comprehension lurking in the dark shadows around Equestria. It's possible to summon them ''completely by accident''. But there's no need to despair: some of these forces are on the ponies' side. And for those that are hostile, a smart, level-headed pony can thwart them ''without'' dying or going insane.
-->'''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56774/11/alarm-clock/postlude-morning-sixtyseven#comment/5638864 Meta Four:]]''' We've seen that the ponies carved their own home out of a dangerous, hostile world, and that they frequently defend Equestria from creatures straight out of the ''D&D Monster Manual''. From there, it's just a hop and a skip to say that there must also be ponies defending Equestria from creatures straight out of the ''Necronomicon''.
* LowerDeckEpisode: The story focuses on background characters and offers explanations for Derpy's bizarre cameos in "May the Best Pet Win", "The Last Roundup", and "Feeling Pinkie Keen".
* MagicMirror: A mirror in Carrot Top's house turns out to be a portal to a deserted pocket dimension.
* TheMarvelousDeer: The ''fia sídhe'', who are the Equestrian equivalent of TheFairFolk.
* MistakenForProfound: The ''fia sídhe'' believe Ditzy's eyes mark her as a prophet, so they visit her to ask for information about the future. Ditzy doesn't agree, but she's too scared to tell the ''fia'' that they're wrong. So she "prophesies" by clearing her head and just saying the first thing that comes to mind. The ''fia'' eat it up every time.
* MistakenForRomance:
** There's a running gag of different characters assuming that [[LauncherOfAThousandShips Rainbow Dash]] is in a relationship, because they saw and misinterpreted scenes from canon. Ditzy thinks Dash and Fluttershy are a couple, Cloudchaser is certain that Dash is dating Applejack, Mayor Mare argues that Dash and Pinkie Pie are more than just "prank buddies". And, although we don't get to hear his reasoning for it, Dr. Hooves is convinced that Dash is with ''Ditzy''.
** Twilight notices Dr. Hooves spying on Ditzy, and she assumes he must be romantically interested.
* MistakenForSpies: Both Dr. Hooves and Twilight Sparkle know ''just enough'' about what's going on to draw a wildly wrong conclusion about Ditzy.
** Dr. Hooves knows that Ditzy deliberately wrecked Town Hall--and decides Ditzy intended to drive Applejack out of Ponyville, to undermine the Elements of Harmony. And he mistakes Ditzy for a time traveler.
** Twilight discovers that Ditzy knows Equestrian state secrets--and, since Ditzy doesn't explain how she knows, concludes Ditzy must have broken into secret Canterlot archives and therefore must be Up To No Good.
* MustHaveCaffeine: In Twilight Sparkle's first scene, she's just pulled an all-nighter, and she's hopped herself up on coffee to stay awake.
-->“Technically I’m up much ''later'' than usual, haha! Got a new textbook on magilectronics, couldn’t stop at just one chapter, one thing led to another, and suddenly the sun was rising and I need more coffee! You know how it goes!”
* NamesToRunAwayFromFast: In spite of his name, Xanthorgh the Flayer is very benign towards ponies.
* TheNondescript: Dr. Hooves is first described as "aggressively drab".
-->His face was one that [Ditzy] could have walked past every week without remembering. Even his hourglass cutie mark looked vaguely familiar.
* NotUsingTheZWord: The ''fia sídhe'' are deer fairies, but the words "deer" and "fairy" don't come up at all.
* OtherMeAnnoysMe: Dr. Hooves has some serious self-esteem problems and can't stand his own past or future selves--even when they're only separated by a few minutes.
-->“Oh for the love of Celestia!” the third doctor interjected. “Do you blockheads even listen to the words coming out of your mouths?” He pointed at the first doctor. “You sound like an ungrateful simpleton!” He pointed at the second doctor. “And you sound like an egotistical imbecile! And now I sound stupid for yelling at you!”
* OurWormholesAreDifferent: They're naturally occurring, and seem to spring up spontaneously for reasons not fully understood. They can be used for FTL travel. [[TeleporterAccident Breaking one of them can cause a violent explosion.]] And Carrot Top has one of them in her fridge, somehow.
* PunctuationShaker: Lampshaded:
-->[Twilight said,] “So then. Ditzy, how do you know about Th’cl’br’gh the Overpunctuated? The one you called the Eyeless King?”\\
[Ditzy said,] “Wait, wait, ‘the Overpunctuated’? Unicorn scholars ''actually'' called him that?”\\
“In that particular field, a sense of humor goes a long way towards fighting off the creeping madness.”
* RantInducingSlight: Ditzy starts to flip out when she realizes her radio needs to be repaired. Carrot Top points out that it's really not that big a deal, and Ditzy agrees--and proceeds to mentally flip out over the fact that she was flipping out. Then she realizes she has a parasite influencing her brain chemistry, and ''that's'' the real reason she's flipping out.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Ditzy tells the ''fia sídhe'' hooligans in no uncertain terms that they are befouling the legacies of their once-proud people. The ''fia'' aren't very impressed, until Ditzy kicks their leader in the face.
* ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated: [[spoiler:After Ditzy blows up Town Hall, the newspaper erroneously reports that she died in the explosion. A crowd of ponies gathers to gawk at her, and she plays with them by claiming to be "the Ghost of Muffins Past!"]]
* RulesLawyer: Constable Peeler obsesses over enforcing minor rules because he worries about the potential slippery slope if they ''aren't'' enforced.
-->[Constable Peeler said,] “It always starts with the little rules. Littering. Leash regulations. Curfews. But it never ends there, Ditzy. If we let those hooligans get away with this, what will we ultimately get?”\\
“Anarchy,” Ditzy answered, her voice flat.\\
“Anar-- Yes, precisely!” Peeler beamed with satisfaction.
* SapientEatSapient: The fia hooligans threaten to cook Ditzy into a stew.
* ScheduleFanatic: Ditzy is a downplayed example. She doesn't schedule very much in her day, but she's ''very'' concerned about being punctual to those few events she ''does'' schedule.
* SealedEvilInACan: The main plot concerns the Eyeless King’s impending escape from the particular can it’s sealed in. [[spoiler:Unusually for this trope, Ditzy successfully reseals the can before the Eyeless King can escape.]]
* ShockAndAwe: Ditzy attempts to raze Town Hall by blasting it with lightning from a storm cloud. She causes some damage, but not enough--and then she winds up [[HoistByHisOwnPetard electrocuting herself]].
* SmallSecludedWorld: Carrot Top's magic mirror leads to another world consisting of an apartment building and its immediate environs, under a glass dome. [[spoiler:Ditzy doesn't realize it, but this is the interior of Cranky's snowglobe.]]
* {{Squick}}: [[invoked]] Ditzy deliberately grosses Constable Peeler out by telling him about pony brain parasites and how Xanthorgh the Flayer picks them off and eats them.
* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Ditzy takes the ''fia''-trail to sneak into Fluttershy's backyard and steal an egg from the henhouse. Fluttershy catches her, and wonders why Ditzy didn't just knock on her door and ''ask'' for an egg. Ditzy doesn't know, either.
* StoryboardingTheApocalypse: Ditzy dreams about the possible results if the Eyeless King returns. She sees a jagged wasteland under a yellow sky--a sky with cracks in it.
* StrangeSyntaxSpeaker: The three ''fia sídhe'' hooligans speak in an improbable mix of Shakespearean English, Yoda-talk, [[Webcomic/SweetBroAndHellaJeff SBaHJ]]-isms, and Irish Gaelic PoirotSpeak. They swap subjects and prepositions willy-nilly, and they'll turn any word into an adjective by slapping "-wise" on the end.
* StronglyWordedLetter: [[spoiler:Twilight is convinced that Ditzy is some kind of spy, up to no good. She takes matters into her own hooves ... by explaining everything in a letter to Celestia.]]
* SuggestiveCollision: Rainbow Dash and Ditzy fall down a hole together and land on top of each other, with their faces just inches apart. Without missing a beat, Dash asks "Are you trying to seduce me?"
* SuspiciouslyAproposMusic: The song that keeps mysteriously repeating on Ditzy's radio is a surprising match for Ditzy's life. Most of the verses describe outlandish events (saving ponies from drowning, winning the lottery, etc.) while going on and on about how average the day is. Then, the night before Ditzy saves Equestria, she notices the song's final verse: "After all, tomorrow / is a big day, / and not an average day!"
* ThemeNaming: Ponies have names thematically related to their parents' names, but their parents' names aren't always related to each other's. So, Golden Harvest and Written Script have a daughter named Golden Ink. And Ditzy Doo's parents are [=LaMonte=] Doo and Loop-de-Loop (aka Loopy).
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Ditzy loves muffins, of course.
* TrueSight: Ditzy can see magic, other dimensions, and the creatures that live in them.
* TrustPassword: Dr. Hooves has one to prove to his own time-displaced selves that he actually is himself. It's a verse from the classic bossa nova song "Who Needs Forever".
* UnusualEuphemism: In addition to the show's usual practice of using pony terms in place of actual profanities, some pegasi also use weather terms as cusses.
* VirginPower: The blood of a virgin is one of the requirements for the Scarlet Ceremony to summon the Eyeless King. Turns out a single drop of blood is enough, which is both good (no need for a VirginSacrifice) and very bad (one can fulfill the ceremony ''completely by accident'').
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: Referenced. When Ditzy hears her radio playing exactly the same broadcast as yesterday, she quickly concludes that she's stuck in a GroundhogDayLoop, and that ''''I’ll go mad with power just before I go mad with insanity!"''
* WontTakeYesForAnAnswer: After Ditzy had brushed off Twilight multiple times:
-->[Ditzy said,] “How about we step into my place and talk it over?” [...]\\
[Twilight said,] “Yes, of course, Ditzy. But before you close that door, let me warn you that Princess Celestia answered my letter and ''authorized me to'' … Wait, did you say ‘talk it over’? Yes!”
* YeOldeButcheredEnglish: Ditzy and the ''fia sídhe'' speak to each other in Early Modern Equine. Ditzy is a little rusty and trips herself up a few times.
-->[Ditzy said,] “Uh, thankest thou?” This prompted another kick from Ditzy’s mental linguist.
* YouAlreadyChangedThePast: [[Dr. Hooves' time travel works this way. On morning two, the Dr. Hooves that Ditzy meets outside Town Hall was actually a time-traveller from a few days later.]]
* YouCalledMeXItMustBeSerious: Characters who normally call another pony by some nickname signal just how serious they are by using their real name:
** Ditzy towards Dinky:
-->“''Golden Ink!'' Be quiet and listen to me this instant, or I will ''tell your parents'' about this when they get home!”\\
Ditzy wasn’t sure whether the ultimatum itself or the use of Dinky’s real name had the greater effect on the filly.
** Rainbow Dash does it to Ditzy.
-->''What?'' Ditzy thought. ''Has she ever called me by my real name before?''
* YouCanNotGraspTheTrueForm: Owing to her True Sight, Ditzy can't look directly at Princess Luna or Twilight Sparkle. Twilight's raw magical power is so strong that Ditzy sees her shine like a miniature purple sun. And Ditzy sees Luna as an alicorn-shaped hole in reality, with an endless plane of clockwork and stars visible through the hole. Looking at it for more than a few seconds puts Ditzy into a trance-like state.
* YouWereTryingTooHard: Some foals get their internal flow of magic messed up. The way to fix it? Relax, and let the magic take care of itself.
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[[folder:Black Magic Mare, Roaming Queen]]
* CassandraTruth: Trixie ''sees'' Ditzy stick her hoof into [[AlienGeometries a hole that shouldn't exist]], but she concludes that Ditzy is a fellow stage magician, and that all the talk of higher dimensions is just part of Ditzy's act.
* DidNotGetTheGirl: [[spoiler:Trixie falls hard for Ditzy. Ditzy doesn't reciprocate, but she shows signs that she might, if given more time. They go their separate ways before the relationship can go any further.]]
* ItWasADarkAndStormyNight: Both of Trixie’s stories open with some variation on this line.
* JustTestingYou:
** Trixie forgets where she left off in her story, so she deliberately starts at the wrong point. When Ditzy corrects her, she claims she was testing to see if Ditzy was paying attention, then restarts at the point Ditzy mentioned.
** Another scene is ambiguous. When Ditzy calls Trixie out for constantly mispronouncing her name as “Dizzy”, Trixie claims she was just trying to get a reaction out of Ditzy. It’s equally possible that Trixie makes up this explanation to save face, or that she actually was trying to annoy Ditzy.
* OrphanedPunchline: Every time Trixie or Ditzy tell each other a story, we see the very beginning and very end, with little indication of how they got from one point to the other. But one instance is a subversion:
-->“... And that’s why amending laws in the Equestrian government is so darn complicated.”\\
“What?” Ditzy said. “That has nothing to do with the story you were telling!”\\
“Yes. Trixie was [[SecretTest testing to see if you were paying attention]].”
* ReallyGetsAround: Trixie.
-->“Well, Trixie’s rather more familiar than she’d prefer with getting chased out of towns by angry mobs. And angry wives. And angry husbands. Word of advice, Dizzy: don’t mess around with married ponies. It’s just not worth the extra headache.”
* SavingChristmas: Trixie tells the story of the time she saved Hearth's Warming Eve.
* ThatCameOutWrong: Ditzy, trying to fly Trixie down from a tree, asks Trix to climb onto her. When Trixie finally stops laughing, she explains:
-->“Dizzy, Dizzy, stop and think about what you’re saying to Trixie. You’re waving your butt at her and asking her to climb on … Is ''that'' the signal you want to send?”
* {{Tsundere}}: Trixie warms up to Ditzy, but anytime she does something nice, she disguises it as criticism or oneupmanship.
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[[folder:Split Eyes]]
* AllLowercaseLetters: Ditzy writes in all-lowercase, except where she uses all-caps for emphasis. This becomes a plot point when she switches to (sort of) normal capitalization, because she's using the capital letters to hide a secret message.
* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Downplayed. When Ditzy tries to explain her true sight, Roka overreacts and commits Ditzy to an insane asylum. Ditzy escapes, and the experience leaves her paranoid enough that she reacts to anypony else's curiosity by preemptively fleeing.
* ChildhoodFriend: Ditzy and Carrot Top were best friends while growing up. [[spoiler:So it's fitting that Carrot Top is the one who convinces Ditzy to settle down in Ponyville.]]
* ScrapbookStory: The whole story is told through letters. Mainly they're Ditzy writing to her parents, while the FramingDevice has Ditzy's grandchildren writing to each other about their grandmother.
* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Ditzy phases into another dimension just to cross a river, which winds up backfiring badly. She points out after the fact that she should have just flown or swam across.
* SternChase: In the first half of Ditzy's journey, she's barely one step ahead of police and hospital orderlies who are trying to drag her off to an insane asylum. Eventually, she hides in another dimension and waits for the heat to die down. Apparently it works, because she doesn't see any signs of the pursuit afterwards.
* WalkingTheEarth: Ditzy tries to settle down several times, but her pursuers--or problems with the town itself--keep forcing her to move on.
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[[folder:Beauty Will Tear Us Apart]]
* TheBeard: Ditzy preemptively tries to fend off Trixie's unrequited affection by claiming that Time Turner is her boyfriend.
* FriendOrFoe: Trixie leaps into action, swinging her billy club at a supposed art vandal--who turns out to be another security guard.
* MakeMeWannaShout: [[spoiler:The chladni, a monster literally made of echoing sound waves.]]
* StrangeMindsThinkAlike: In the first chapter, Trixie describes Ponyville as a backwater town, adding "You've probably never heard of it." In the final chapter, Ditzy and Time Turner mention to an artist that they're from Ponyville, and his response is, "Never heard of it."
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It starts with [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56774/Alarm-Clock Alarm Clock]]...
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[[folder:Alarm Clock]]
* AlienGeometries:
** As Ponyville Town Hall transforms into a portal to the void, it becomes spatially inverted.
-->The edge which should have been closest to Ditzy was now farthest away—the pillar now appeared concave rather than convex—without a single atom of the pillar being disturbed from its place.
** When traveling through a Krasnicker tube, one can see shapes outside the tube. Those shapes aren't constrained by Euclidean geometry, or logic for that matter.
* AnachronicOrder: The penultimate chapter copies the structure from ''{{Film/Memento}}'': scenes in chronological order alternate with scenes in reverse-chronological order. The chapter ends in the chronological middle.
* AnotherDimension: There are many, many other universes that one can step into quite easily, if you just know how to move in the right direction. Ditzy is one of the few who know.
* AnxietyDreams: Twice.
** First, Ditzy dreams about the destruction the Eyeless King could wreak. She sees a vision of Equestria reduced to a lifeless wasteland while Carrot Top offers vaguely-Biblical sounding narration.
** Second, Ditzy dreams that she's in a ska band, about to play a career-making live show, but she missed all the band's practice sessions and doesn't how to play the songs. [[NotWearingPantsDream And she's forgot to bring her suit, too.]]
* AwesomeMcCoolname: ''Ditzy Doo'' is actually short for ''Detsella Renombrada Morningdew''. And her dad's full name is ''[=LaMontagne=] Burningspear Morningdew'', but he normally goes by [=LaMonte=] Doo.
* BaconAddiction: Hay bacon, of course. The Muffin Emporium offers spinach-basil-and-hay-bacon muffins. And Ditzy improves a potato salad by adding hay bacon bits to it.
* BerserkButton: Fluttershy gets ''angry'' when she thinks somepony is hurting her chickens--angry enough to terrify Ditzy.
* BookEnds: The story opens with Ditzy waking up, noticing a dimensional rift in the sky above, and wishing that she could share the sight with somepony else. [[spoiler:The story ends with another dimensional rift, and Ditzy waking Dr. Hooves up so he can see it.]]
* BotheringByTheBook: When Ditzy gets arrested and R.S.S. agent Dr. Hooves tries to take custody of her, Constable Peeler emphatically states that Hooves needs to fill out the proper paperwork first. This is almost as good as outright refusal, because Hooves apparently doesn't know anything about this paperwork.
* ChewOutFakeOut: Spike replaces Twilight Sparkle's coffee with decaf, prompting an indignant "What?!" from Twilight when she finds out. But Twilight's just shocked at ''herself'' for not tasting the difference--she's actually happy that Spike made sure she got the rest she needed.
* CovertGroup: Dr. Hooves is an agent of the mysterious R.S.S., or [[spoiler:the Royal Secret Service. This agency is headed by Princess Luna, and they exist to protect Equestria from threats that the general public is better off not knowing about.]]
* CrashingDreams: A loud song intrudes into one of Ditzy's dreams--turns out it's her radio alarm clock playing.
* DeathGlare: Angel bunny doesn't like Ditzy for some reason, and he gives her "a look which could be classified a war crime in twelve different nations."
* DeliveryStork: Ponies have their own equivalent of that myth. Ditzy plays along with it, because she doesn't feel like giving TheTalk to somepony else's daughter.
-->Dinky poked her head out the bathroom door. “Mom says magic mirrors are where foals come from.”\\
[Ditzy said,] “What? No. I--I--I mean ... [[VerbalBackspace yes!]] Your mom is very smart and exactly right and you should definitely listen to her.”
* DidIJustSayThatOutLoud: Inverted. Ditzy tries to answer one of Carrot Top's questions, but forgets to say most of it out loud.
-->Ditzy answered, “Niches, Carrot Top, niches.” ''The bakers at Sugarcube Corner are the undisputed masters of sweet baked goods'', Ditzy thought, ''and I respect them for that. But for the muffin connoisseurs seeking subtler flavors, Drury Lane at the Emporium is simply the best there is.''\\
''Uh oh, Carrot Top is looking at me funny—how much of that did I remember to say out loud? Oh well, too late to elaborate.''
* DiscontinuityNod: Dinky Doo is Carrot Top's daughter, but Dr. Hooves mistakes her for Ditzy's daughter at one point, and Ditzy wonders how he could have possibly come to that conclusion--a nod to the ''ubiquitous'' fanon about Derpy being Dinky's mom.
* EasyAmnesia: When she gets hit by lightning, Ditzy forgets everything from the few minutes before and after the zap.
* EitherOrTitle / LongTitle:
** One chapter is named "Dr. Hooves, or, How I Learned to Start Worrying and Fear the Green" (doubles as a ShoutOut to ''Film/DrStrangelove''.)
** The penultimate chapter takes it to absurdity: "The Filly with the Moon in Her Head, or, The Bubblemaker's Dream, or, A Message from Another Time, or, Eternal Snarkness, or, Back in the Saddlebag, or, Muffindependence Day, or, Fridge Benefits, or, I Hope You Liked ''Memento''".
* EldritchAbomination:
** The Eyeless King. An entity banished beyond the ninth darkness--if it re-entered Equestria, it would reduce Ponyville to a radioactive crater in the process. When it's on the threshold, Ditzy notes a smell as if the air itself was dying in the monster's vicinity.
** ''Tyndalocurrs'', monsters attracted to lattices and right angles, and which effortlessly sever organic molecular bonds.
** Xanthorgh the Flayer is a higher-dimensional being with an arthropod appearance--but he has a symbiotic relationship with ponykind.
** Chromastaceans: they're like giant hermit crabs, but they wear ''colors'' instead of sea shells.
* EvilTwin: Parodied. [[spoiler:When past Dr. Hooves, still convinced that Ditzy is a spy, sees his future self taking Ditzy's side, he concludes his future self must be an "Evil mirror universe clone!" His future self points out how absurd that is--he doesn't even have [[BeardOfEvil the necessary goatee]]!]]
* FailedASpotCheck: The clock shop Time Turner's Time Pieces is ''right next'' to The Muffin Emporium and Xanthorgh the Flayer's designated spot in Ponyville--both locations that Ditzy frequents. Somehow, she never noticed the proprietor of the clock shop, until he started stalking her.
*TheFairFolk: The ''fia sídhe''. They live and travel in a realm inaccessible to most ponies, and they operate by a very different sort of morality. One of them, Abhean, thinks he would be doing Ditzy a great favor if he beheaded Bon Bon.
* FantasyKeepsake: Ditzy has a dream conversation with Princess Luna. But she's unaware that Luna's a DreamWalker, so she dismisses the whole thing as a figment of her subconscious--until she sees the same scroll that Luna gave her, resting on her nightstand.
* TheGadfly: At the restaurant, Carrot Top screws with the waiter by asking if she can order something from the carnivore menu. Ditzy joins in by telling the waiter, "I'll have what ''you're'' having!"
-->“Aw yeah,” Ditzy said between gigglesnorts, “we’re making him ''work'' for that tip.”\\
“The look on his face!” Carrot Top exclaimed. “I think he was ''this close'' to kicking us out!”
* HeroInsurance: The Royal Treasury has funds set aside specifically for rebuilding after world-threatening disasters, [[spoiler:and destroying Town Hall to keep the Eyeless King from entering Equestria certainly qualifies]]. So Ditzy doesn't have to pay directly for the biggest chunk of property damage she causes. She still gives a donation anyway, and buys Carrot Top a replacement fridge.
* HumanAliens: [[spoiler:Upon arriving on another planet via a Krasnicker tube, Ditzy meets two extraterrestrial horses--indistinguishable from Saddle Arabians, as far as Ditzy can tell. Although from ''their'' perspective, Ditzy is a RubberForeheadAlien, because this alien world apparently doesn't have pegasus ponies.]]
* HyperspaceIsAScaryPlace: Traveling through a Krasnicker tube is very dangerous, because normal matter reacts explosively if it touches the inside of the tube.
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: With the exception of the epilogue, all the chapter titles are puns on common phrases (like "Note Early, Note Often") or punny references to other works (like "Fridge Over Troubled Waters").
* IgnoringBySinging:
-->[Ditzy said,] “Yeah, can’t you use [your telekinesis]?”\\
[Dinky said,] “No. Don’t wanna talk about it.”\\
“Magic lessons not going well?”\\
“La la la la not talking about it!” Dinky clamped her forehooves over her ears. “La la la la laaaaaaaaaaa!”
* IHaveManyNames: The big bad. Ditzy mainly calls it The Eyeless King, but other tribes and species know it as Czernobaa, Xollotll, the Morrígan, Angra Maneyu, The Void Treader, Th'cl'br'gh, or Ystravilim.
* InSeriesNickname: The story reconciles the multiple names for some of the characters by making some of them nicknames. Ditzy Doo is the real name; "Derpy Hooves" is a nickname. Carrot Top's legal name is Golden Harvest, and Bon Bon's legal name is Sweetie Drops--and both of them prefer their nicknames over their real names. And Dinky Doo's legal name is Golden Ink. This becomes a plot point when Dr. Hooves misses the point and thinks that those ponies are all spies, and their nicknames are their ''alternate identities''.
* InsistentTerminology: Ditzy always uses the term "Krasnicker tube" (a pun on the theoretical [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Krasnikov_tube Krasnikov tube]]) instead of "wormhole". But the tubes in question pretty much are just wormholes--a fact that gets lampshaded later.
* InvertedTrope: "Derpy stealing food from Carrot Top's fridge" is a running gag with [[Webcomic/CarrotCakeStorybook roots in the earliest days of the fandom]]. In this story, Ditzy takes the fridge itself and leaves Carrot Top's food behind.
* IronicName: Ditzy's middle name, Renombrada, is Spanish for "renowned". Yet she goes out of her way to avoid the spotlight for all the "problems" she's solved in Ponyville.
* IsThatWhatTheyreCallingItNow:
-->“And why else would [Pinkie] and Dash spend so much time alone?”\\
“Because they’re ''prank buddies''?”\\
“Ooooooohhh,” the Mayor said, winking at Ditzy, “is that what the kids are calling it these days? Say no more, Ditzy, say no more.”
* JurisdictionFriction: Police Constable Peeler arrests Ditzy Doo, then R.S.S. agent Dr. Hooves swoops in and insists on taking custody of her. Peeler sides with Ditzy against Dr. Hooves, insisting that she's outside Hooves' jurisdiction and [[BotheringByTheBook throwing the book at the agent.]]
* LandOfFaerie: The ''sídhe'', current home of the ''fia''. It's fundamentally different from the ''other'' other dimensions, and as a result Ditzy can only enter or exit it at certain points. And Ditzy [[HourInsideYearOutside loses a few hours]] whenever she returns to Equestria from the ''sídhe''.
* LovecraftLight: There are forces beyond mortal comprehension lurking in the dark shadows around Equestria. It's possible to summon them ''completely by accident''. But there's no need to despair: some of these forces are on the ponies' side. And for those that are hostile, a smart, level-headed pony can thwart them ''without'' dying or going insane.
-->'''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/56774/11/alarm-clock/postlude-morning-sixtyseven#comment/5638864 Meta Four:]]''' We've seen that the ponies carved their own home out of a dangerous, hostile world, and that they frequently defend Equestria from creatures straight out of the ''D&D Monster Manual''. From there, it's just a hop and a skip to say that there must also be ponies defending Equestria from creatures straight out of the ''Necronomicon''.
* LowerDeckEpisode: The story focuses on background characters and offers explanations for Derpy's bizarre cameos in "May the Best Pet Win", "The Last Roundup", and "Feeling Pinkie Keen".
* MagicMirror: A mirror in Carrot Top's house turns out to be a portal to a deserted pocket dimension.
* TheMarvelousDeer: The ''fia sídhe'', who are the Equestrian equivalent of TheFairFolk.
* MistakenForProfound: The ''fia sídhe'' believe Ditzy's eyes mark her as a prophet, so they visit her to ask for information about the future. Ditzy doesn't agree, but she's too scared to tell the ''fia'' that they're wrong. So she "prophesies" by clearing her head and just saying the first thing that comes to mind. The ''fia'' eat it up every time.
* MistakenForRomance:
** There's a running gag of different characters assuming that [[LauncherOfAThousandShips Rainbow Dash]] is in a relationship, because they saw and misinterpreted scenes from canon. Ditzy thinks Dash and Fluttershy are a couple, Cloudchaser is certain that Dash is dating Applejack, Mayor Mare argues that Dash and Pinkie Pie are more than just "prank buddies". And, although we don't get to hear his reasoning for it, Dr. Hooves is convinced that Dash is with ''Ditzy''.
** Twilight notices Dr. Hooves spying on Ditzy, and she assumes he must be romantically interested.
* MistakenForSpies: Both Dr. Hooves and Twilight Sparkle know ''just enough'' about what's going on to draw a wildly wrong conclusion about Ditzy.
** Dr. Hooves knows that Ditzy deliberately wrecked Town Hall--and decides Ditzy intended to drive Applejack out of Ponyville, to undermine the Elements of Harmony. And he mistakes Ditzy for a time traveler.
** Twilight discovers that Ditzy knows Equestrian state secrets--and, since Ditzy doesn't explain how she knows, concludes Ditzy must have broken into secret Canterlot archives and therefore must be Up To No Good.
* MustHaveCaffeine: In Twilight Sparkle's first scene, she's just pulled an all-nighter, and she's hopped herself up on coffee to stay awake.
-->“Technically I’m up much ''later'' than usual, haha! Got a new textbook on magilectronics, couldn’t stop at just one chapter, one thing led to another, and suddenly the sun was rising and I need more coffee! You know how it goes!”
* NamesToRunAwayFromFast: In spite of his name, Xanthorgh the Flayer is very benign towards ponies.
* TheNondescript: Dr. Hooves is first described as "aggressively drab".
-->His face was one that [Ditzy] could have walked past every week without remembering. Even his hourglass cutie mark looked vaguely familiar.
* NotUsingTheZWord: The ''fia sídhe'' are deer fairies, but the words "deer" and "fairy" don't come up at all.
* OtherMeAnnoysMe: Dr. Hooves has some serious self-esteem problems and can't stand his own past or future selves--even when they're only separated by a few minutes.
-->“Oh for the love of Celestia!” the third doctor interjected. “Do you blockheads even listen to the words coming out of your mouths?” He pointed at the first doctor. “You sound like an ungrateful simpleton!” He pointed at the second doctor. “And you sound like an egotistical imbecile! And now I sound stupid for yelling at you!”
* OurWormholesAreDifferent: They're naturally occurring, and seem to spring up spontaneously for reasons not fully understood. They can be used for FTL travel. [[TeleporterAccident Breaking one of them can cause a violent explosion.]] And Carrot Top has one of them in her fridge, somehow.
* PunctuationShaker: Lampshaded:
-->[Twilight said,] “So then. Ditzy, how do you know about Th’cl’br’gh the Overpunctuated? The one you called the Eyeless King?”\\
[Ditzy said,] “Wait, wait, ‘the Overpunctuated’? Unicorn scholars ''actually'' called him that?”\\
“In that particular field, a sense of humor goes a long way towards fighting off the creeping madness.”
* RantInducingSlight: Ditzy starts to flip out when she realizes her radio needs to be repaired. Carrot Top points out that it's really not that big a deal, and Ditzy agrees--and proceeds to mentally flip out over the fact that she was flipping out. Then she realizes she has a parasite influencing her brain chemistry, and ''that's'' the real reason she's flipping out.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Ditzy tells the ''fia sídhe'' hooligans in no uncertain terms that they are befouling the legacies of their once-proud people. The ''fia'' aren't very impressed, until Ditzy kicks their leader in the face.
* ReportsOfMyDeathWereGreatlyExaggerated: [[spoiler:After Ditzy blows up Town Hall, the newspaper erroneously reports that she died in the explosion. A crowd of ponies gathers to gawk at her, and she plays with them by claiming to be "the Ghost of Muffins Past!"]]
* RulesLawyer: Constable Peeler obsesses over enforcing minor rules because he worries about the potential slippery slope if they ''aren't'' enforced.
-->[Constable Peeler said,] “It always starts with the little rules. Littering. Leash regulations. Curfews. But it never ends there, Ditzy. If we let those hooligans get away with this, what will we ultimately get?”\\
“Anarchy,” Ditzy answered, her voice flat.\\
“Anar-- Yes, precisely!” Peeler beamed with satisfaction.
* SapientEatSapient: The fia hooligans threaten to cook Ditzy into a stew.
* ScheduleFanatic: Ditzy is a downplayed example. She doesn't schedule very much in her day, but she's ''very'' concerned about being punctual to those few events she ''does'' schedule.
* SealedEvilInACan: The main plot concerns the Eyeless King’s impending escape from the particular can it’s sealed in. [[spoiler:Unusually for this trope, Ditzy successfully reseals the can before the Eyeless King can escape.]]
* ShockAndAwe: Ditzy attempts to raze Town Hall by blasting it with lightning from a storm cloud. She causes some damage, but not enough--and then she winds up [[HoistByHisOwnPetard electrocuting herself]].
* SmallSecludedWorld: Carrot Top's magic mirror leads to another world consisting of an apartment building and its immediate environs, under a glass dome. [[spoiler:Ditzy doesn't realize it, but this is the interior of Cranky's snowglobe.]]
* {{Squick}}: [[invoked]] Ditzy deliberately grosses Constable Peeler out by telling him about pony brain parasites and how Xanthorgh the Flayer picks them off and eats them.
* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Ditzy takes the ''fia''-trail to sneak into Fluttershy's backyard and steal an egg from the henhouse. Fluttershy catches her, and wonders why Ditzy didn't just knock on her door and ''ask'' for an egg. Ditzy doesn't know, either.
* StoryboardingTheApocalypse: Ditzy dreams about the possible results if the Eyeless King returns. She sees a jagged wasteland under a yellow sky--a sky with cracks in it.
* StrangeSyntaxSpeaker: The three ''fia sídhe'' hooligans speak in an improbable mix of Shakespearean English, Yoda-talk, [[Webcomic/SweetBroAndHellaJeff SBaHJ]]-isms, and Irish Gaelic PoirotSpeak. They swap subjects and prepositions willy-nilly, and they'll turn any word into an adjective by slapping "-wise" on the end.
* StronglyWordedLetter: [[spoiler:Twilight is convinced that Ditzy is some kind of spy, up to no good. She takes matters into her own hooves ... by explaining everything in a letter to Celestia.]]
* SuggestiveCollision: Rainbow Dash and Ditzy fall down a hole together and land on top of each other, with their faces just inches apart. Without missing a beat, Dash asks "Are you trying to seduce me?"
* SuspiciouslyAproposMusic: The song that keeps mysteriously repeating on Ditzy's radio is a surprising match for Ditzy's life. Most of the verses describe outlandish events (saving ponies from drowning, winning the lottery, etc.) while going on and on about how average the day is. Then, the night before Ditzy saves Equestria, she notices the song's final verse: "After all, tomorrow / is a big day, / and not an average day!"
* ThemeNaming: Ponies have names thematically related to their parents' names, but their parents' names aren't always related to each other's. So, Golden Harvest and Written Script have a daughter named Golden Ink. And Ditzy Doo's parents are [=LaMonte=] Doo and Loop-de-Loop (aka Loopy).
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: Ditzy loves muffins, of course.
* TrueSight: Ditzy can see magic, other dimensions, and the creatures that live in them.
* TrustPassword: Dr. Hooves has one to prove to his own time-displaced selves that he actually is himself. It's a verse from the classic bossa nova song "Who Needs Forever".
* UnusualEuphemism: In addition to the show's usual practice of using pony terms in place of actual profanities, some pegasi also use weather terms as cusses.
* VirginPower: The blood of a virgin is one of the requirements for the Scarlet Ceremony to summon the Eyeless King. Turns out a single drop of blood is enough, which is both good (no need for a VirginSacrifice) and very bad (one can fulfill the ceremony ''completely by accident'').
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: Referenced. When Ditzy hears her radio playing exactly the same broadcast as yesterday, she quickly concludes that she's stuck in a GroundhogDayLoop, and that ''''I’ll go mad with power just before I go mad with insanity!"''
* WontTakeYesForAnAnswer: After Ditzy had brushed off Twilight multiple times:
-->[Ditzy said,] “How about we step into my place and talk it over?” [...]\\
[Twilight said,] “Yes, of course, Ditzy. But before you close that door, let me warn you that Princess Celestia answered my letter and ''authorized me to'' … Wait, did you say ‘talk it over’? Yes!”
* YeOldeButcheredEnglish: Ditzy and the ''fia sídhe'' speak to each other in Early Modern Equine. Ditzy is a little rusty and trips herself up a few times.
-->[Ditzy said,] “Uh, thankest thou?” This prompted another kick from Ditzy’s mental linguist.
* YouAlreadyChangedThePast: [[Dr. Hooves' time travel works this way. On morning two, the Dr. Hooves that Ditzy meets outside Town Hall was actually a time-traveller from a few days later.]]
* YouCalledMeXItMustBeSerious: Characters who normally call another pony by some nickname signal just how serious they are by using their real name:
** Ditzy towards Dinky:
-->“''Golden Ink!'' Be quiet and listen to me this instant, or I will ''tell your parents'' about this when they get home!”\\
Ditzy wasn’t sure whether the ultimatum itself or the use of Dinky’s real name had the greater effect on the filly.
** Rainbow Dash does it to Ditzy.
-->''What?'' Ditzy thought. ''Has she ever called me by my real name before?''
* YouCanNotGraspTheTrueForm: Owing to her True Sight, Ditzy can't look directly at Princess Luna or Twilight Sparkle. Twilight's raw magical power is so strong that Ditzy sees her shine like a miniature purple sun. And Ditzy sees Luna as an alicorn-shaped hole in reality, with an endless plane of clockwork and stars visible through the hole. Looking at it for more than a few seconds puts Ditzy into a trance-like state.
* YouWereTryingTooHard: Some foals get their internal flow of magic messed up. The way to fix it? Relax, and let the magic take care of itself.
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[[folder:Black Magic Mare, Roaming Queen]]
* CassandraTruth: Trixie ''sees'' Ditzy stick her hoof into [[AlienGeometries a hole that shouldn't exist]], but she concludes that Ditzy is a fellow stage magician, and that all the talk of higher dimensions is just part of Ditzy's act.
* DidNotGetTheGirl: [[spoiler:Trixie falls hard for Ditzy. Ditzy doesn't reciprocate, but she shows signs that she might, if given more time. They go their separate ways before the relationship can go any further.]]
* ItWasADarkAndStormyNight: Both of Trixie’s stories open with some variation on this line.
* JustTestingYou:
** Trixie forgets where she left off in her story, so she deliberately starts at the wrong point. When Ditzy corrects her, she claims she was testing to see if Ditzy was paying attention, then restarts at the point Ditzy mentioned.
** Another scene is ambiguous. When Ditzy calls Trixie out for constantly mispronouncing her name as “Dizzy”, Trixie claims she was just trying to get a reaction out of Ditzy. It’s equally possible that Trixie makes up this explanation to save face, or that she actually was trying to annoy Ditzy.
* OrphanedPunchline: Every time Trixie or Ditzy tell each other a story, we see the very beginning and very end, with little indication of how they got from one point to the other. But one instance is a subversion:
-->“... And that’s why amending laws in the Equestrian government is so darn complicated.”\\
“What?” Ditzy said. “That has nothing to do with the story you were telling!”\\
“Yes. Trixie was [[SecretTest testing to see if you were paying attention]].”
* ReallyGetsAround: Trixie.
-->“Well, Trixie’s rather more familiar than she’d prefer with getting chased out of towns by angry mobs. And angry wives. And angry husbands. Word of advice, Dizzy: don’t mess around with married ponies. It’s just not worth the extra headache.”
* SavingChristmas: Trixie tells the story of the time she saved Hearth's Warming Eve.
* ThatCameOutWrong: Ditzy, trying to fly Trixie down from a tree, asks Trix to climb onto her. When Trixie finally stops laughing, she explains:
-->“Dizzy, Dizzy, stop and think about what you’re saying to Trixie. You’re waving your butt at her and asking her to climb on … Is ''that'' the signal you want to send?”
* {{Tsundere}}: Trixie warms up to Ditzy, but anytime she does something nice, she disguises it as criticism or oneupmanship.
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[[folder:Split Eyes]]
* AllLowercaseLetters: Ditzy writes in all-lowercase, except where she uses all-caps for emphasis. This becomes a plot point when she switches to (sort of) normal capitalization, because she's using the capital letters to hide a secret message.
* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Downplayed. When Ditzy tries to explain her true sight, Roka overreacts and commits Ditzy to an insane asylum. Ditzy escapes, and the experience leaves her paranoid enough that she reacts to anypony else's curiosity by preemptively fleeing.
* ChildhoodFriend: Ditzy and Carrot Top were best friends while growing up. [[spoiler:So it's fitting that Carrot Top is the one who convinces Ditzy to settle down in Ponyville.]]
* ScrapbookStory: The whole story is told through letters. Mainly they're Ditzy writing to her parents, while the FramingDevice has Ditzy's grandchildren writing to each other about their grandmother.
* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Ditzy phases into another dimension just to cross a river, which winds up backfiring badly. She points out after the fact that she should have just flown or swam across.
* SternChase: In the first half of Ditzy's journey, she's barely one step ahead of police and hospital orderlies who are trying to drag her off to an insane asylum. Eventually, she hides in another dimension and waits for the heat to die down. Apparently it works, because she doesn't see any signs of the pursuit afterwards.
* WalkingTheEarth: Ditzy tries to settle down several times, but her pursuers--or problems with the town itself--keep forcing her to move on.
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[[folder:Beauty Will Tear Us Apart]]
* TheBeard: Ditzy preemptively tries to fend off Trixie's unrequited affection by claiming that Time Turner is her boyfriend.
* FriendOrFoe: Trixie leaps into action, swinging her billy club at a supposed art vandal--who turns out to be another security guard.
* MakeMeWannaShout: [[spoiler:The chladni, a monster literally made of echoing sound waves.]]
* StrangeMindsThinkAlike: In the first chapter, Trixie describes Ponyville as a backwater town, adding "You've probably never heard of it." In the final chapter, Ditzy and Time Turner mention to an artist that they're from Ponyville, and his response is, "Never heard of it."
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