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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/74410/the-abyssal-forge The Abyssal Forge]]'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by Ponydora Prancypants.
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Book Two of ''The Adamant Triskelion'', a planned trilogy. The first book, ''Fanfic/TheFlightOfTheAlicorn'' can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6007/The-Flight-of-the-Alicorn here]]..
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Book Two of ''The Adamant Triskelion'', a planned trilogy. The first book, ''Fanfic/TheFlightOfTheAlicorn'' ''Fanfic/TheFlightOfTheAlicorn'', can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6007/The-Flight-of-the-Alicorn here]]..
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* SuddenSequelDeathSyndrome: The second chapter reveals that Blueblood's mother, Princess Palladium, died in the time between books one and two. Unsurprisingly, considering what a horrible person she was, nopony was saddened by her passing.
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Rarity angrily questions what Princess Luna has been using Blueblood for. Then she realizes what the phrasing of her question implies.
* ThatCameOutWrong: Rarity angrily questions what Princess Luna has been using Blueblood for. Then she realizes what the phrasing of her question implies.
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* LadyDrunk: Rarity's casual alcoholism is becoming an pretty obvious running joke by the second chapter alone. One fears the DrinkingGame that one could create through matching her drink for drink, and how many casualties it could create.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/74410/the-abyssal-forge The Abyssal Forge]]'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by Ponydora Prancypants.
After her last adventure, Rarity just wants life to go back to normal. No jungles, no mud, and above all nopony trying to kill her. Unfortunately fate and Princess Luna have other plans.
Book Two of ''The Adamant Triskelion'', a planned trilogy. The first Book, ''Fanfic/TheFlightOfTheAlicorn'' can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6007/The-Flight-of-the-Alicorn here]]..
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* AccidentalInnuendo: In universe, Rarity angrily questions what Princess Luna has been using Blueblood. Then she realizes what the phrasing of her question implies.
* CovertGroup: Princess Luna is running the search for Benthippus off the books, even from her sister.
* HouseFire: the cliffhanger at the end of chapter two.
* LargeHam: Princess Luna knows how to make an entrance.
* MysteriousStranger: Coral, whose cloak prevents Rarity from determining whether she's an earth pony, pegasus, or unicorn.
* OfficialCoupleOrdealSyndrome: we're just at the start and things are already rocky for Rarity and Blueblood.
* PointyHairedBoss: Rainbow Dash really has no business in working in an office.
* TheProphecy: the prophecy from the end of the last book is mentioned, but so far hasn't played any part.
* PuttingTheBandBackTogether: at the behest of Princess Luna; Rarity, Blueblood, and Fancy Pants team up once more.
* SarcasticConfession: Rarity pulls one of these on ''herself.''
--> “I’m sure that he’s gone from designing air yachts and racing ships for the idle rich to developing some top secret invention upon which the fate of the entire nation rests, which he cannot disclose to me on account of its classified nature.” [[spoiler: Yes he has..]]
* SubStory: we haven't actually got to the sub yet, but based on the cover art it plays a major role.
* WorldBuilding: the history of Benthippus.
[[caption-width-right:250:Everything's better, [softreturn]down where it's wetter.]]
''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/74410/the-abyssal-forge The Abyssal Forge]]'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by Ponydora Prancypants.
After her last adventure, Rarity just wants life to go back to normal. No jungles, no mud, and above all nopony trying to kill her. Unfortunately fate and Princess Luna have other plans.
Book Two of ''The Adamant Triskelion'', a planned trilogy. The first Book, ''Fanfic/TheFlightOfTheAlicorn'' can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6007/The-Flight-of-the-Alicorn here]]..
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* AccidentalInnuendo: In universe, Rarity angrily questions what Princess Luna has been using Blueblood. Then she realizes what the phrasing of her question implies.
* CovertGroup: Princess Luna is running the search for Benthippus off the books, even from her sister.
* HouseFire: the cliffhanger at the end of chapter two.
* LargeHam: Princess Luna knows how to make an entrance.
* MysteriousStranger: Coral, whose cloak prevents Rarity from determining whether she's an earth pony, pegasus, or unicorn.
* OfficialCoupleOrdealSyndrome: we're just at the start and things are already rocky for Rarity and Blueblood.
* PointyHairedBoss: Rainbow Dash really has no business in working in an office.
* TheProphecy: the prophecy from the end of the last book is mentioned, but so far hasn't played any part.
* PuttingTheBandBackTogether: at the behest of Princess Luna; Rarity, Blueblood, and Fancy Pants team up once more.
* SarcasticConfession: Rarity pulls one of these on ''herself.''
--> “I’m sure that he’s gone from designing air yachts and racing ships for the idle rich to developing some top secret invention upon which the fate of the entire nation rests, which he cannot disclose to me on account of its classified nature.” [[spoiler: Yes he has..]]
* SubStory: we haven't actually got to the sub yet, but based on the cover art it plays a major role.
* WorldBuilding: the history of Benthippus.
