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* CarFu: [[spoiler: Ashley ramming a Hunter with a hover truck.]]
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* CarFu: [[spoiler: Ashley [[spoiler:Ashley ramming a Hunter with a hover truck.]]
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** Shepard mentions talking to a psychologist named Doyle Resch. Dr. Resch is from ''Fanfic/BruceHasAProblem'', where he's a psychologist working at Arkham Asylum and is better known as "Doc Ironballs."
** Shepard mentions talking to a psychologist named Doyle Resch. Dr. Resch is from ''Fanfic/BruceHasAProblem'', where he's a psychologist working at Arkham Asylum and is better known as "Doc Ironballs."
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**ShoutOut: Shepard mentions talking to a psychologist named Doyle Resch. Dr. Resch is from ''Fanfic/BruceHasAProblem'', where he's a psychologist working at Arkham Asylum and is better known as "Doc Ironballs."
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* GenreSavvy: Garrus, when he sees [[spoiler: Saren standing in the open by himself in the midst of the Eden Prime chaos]], immediately gets suspicious and gets permission to cover Nihlus as the latter moves in.
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Overlapping with IKnowYouKnowIKnow, [[spoiler: Saren anticipated where Garrus would be holding a sniper position and had his Brute retainer lying in wait.]]
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* AnArmAndALeg: Nihlus looses a hand to [[spoiler: Saren's treacherous attack on Spectre headquarters.]]
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* AnArmAndALeg: Nihlus looses loses a hand to [[spoiler: Saren's treacherous attack on Spectre headquarters.]]
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Fast forward several decades. When Covenant forces attack the human colony of Eden Prime, a combined team of humans and Citadel races is deployed. Things get more complicated fast when it turns out there's more than meets the eye...
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Fast forward several decades. When Covenant forces attack the human colony of Eden Prime, a combined team of humans and Citadel races is deployed.deployed as reinforcements. Things get more complicated fast when it turns out there's more than meets the eye...
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: The Batarians [[spoiler: wanted to be isolated? They got just that.
** To be specific, once they were defeated by the Alliance, the only relays into and out of their space are now blockaded at all times. Anyone who tries to enter or leave is obliterated.]]
** To be specific, once they were defeated by the Alliance, the only relays into and out of their space are now blockaded at all times. Anyone who tries to enter or leave is obliterated.]]
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: The Batarians [[spoiler: wanted to be isolated? They got just that.
**that. To be specific, once they were defeated by the Alliance, the only relays into and out of their space are now blockaded at all times. Anyone who tries to enter or leave is obliterated.]]
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* TheCavalry: How humanity is introduced to the Citadel races via the latter doing this.
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* TheCavalry: How humanity Humanity is introduced to the Citadel races via the latter doing this.
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''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/blood-and-fire-a-mass-effect-halo-fusion.215185/ Blood and Fire]]'' by Tavi is a ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}[=/=]VideoGame/MassEffect'' FusionFic.
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''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/blood-and-fire-a-mass-effect-halo-fusion.215185/ Blood and Fire]]'' by Tavi is a ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}[=/=]VideoGame/MassEffect'' ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}[=/=]Franchise/MassEffect'' FusionFic.
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: The Batarians [[spoiler: wanted to be isolated? They got just that.]]
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: The Batarians [[spoiler: wanted to be isolated? They got just that.that.
** To be specific, once they were defeated by the Alliance, the only relays into and out of their space are now blockaded at all times. Anyone who tries to enter or leave is obliterated.]]
** To be specific, once they were defeated by the Alliance, the only relays into and out of their space are now blockaded at all times. Anyone who tries to enter or leave is obliterated.]]
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Fast forward several decades. When Covenant forces attack the human colony of Eden Prime...
Prime, a combined team of humans and Citadel races is deployed. Things get more complicated fast when it turns out there's more than meets the eye...
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* AnArmAndALeg: Nihlus looses a hand to Saren's techerous attack on Spectre headquarters.
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* AllYourBaseAreBelongToUs: [[spoiler: Saren sabotages the Spectre quarters.]]
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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: The Batarians [[spoiler: wanted to be isolated? They got just that.]]
* DangerouslyGenreSavvy: Overlapping with IKnowYouKnowIKnow, [[spoiler: Saren anticipated where Garrus would be holding a sniper position and had his Brute retainer lying in wait.]]
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* FusionFic: The author avoids several problems with the matchup, most obviously the power level gap, by doing this. Rather than using the Covenant wholesale in their original Halo form, the Covenant here are an advanced faction with Geth- or Collector-level grasp of the Mass Effect, enabling them to keep their energy weapons without grossly overpowering the Citadel races. Similarly, the object of their religious worship is changed to the Protheans, who they consider Forerunner, rather than Halo-canon Forerunners.
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* FusionFic: The author avoids several problems with the matchup, most obviously the power level gap, by doing this. Rather than using the Covenant wholesale in their original Halo form, the Covenant here are an advanced faction with Geth- or Collector-level grasp of the Mass Effect, enabling them to keep their energy weapons without grossly overpowering the Citadel races. Similarly, the object of their religious worship is changed to the Protheans, who they consider Forerunner, rather than Halo-canon Forerunners.Forerunners who would utterly destroy the Reapers in a straight fight.
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* GenreSavvy: Garrus, when he sees [[spoiler: Saren standing in the open by himself in the midst of the Eden Prime chaos]], immediately gets suspicious and gets permission to cover Nihlus as the latter moves in.
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* RequiredSecondaryPowers: The Citadel races know the science between Covenant plasma weapons, but they lack the material science and power generation knowledge to make the things work.
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* RequiredSecondaryPowers: The Citadel races know the science between behind Covenant plasma weapons, but they lack the material science and power generation knowledge to make the things work.work in a practical, combat-useful package rather than in the laboratory.
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* AwesomeButImpractical: The original Spartan programme was just too costly despite the extreme quality products, such as augmentations still unrivaled after 50 years. Its replacement, the N7 Programme, is more economical without losing too much effectiveness.
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* AwesomeButImpractical: The original Spartan programme was just too costly despite the extreme quality products, such as augmentations still unrivaled after 50 years. WordOfGod directly states that the cost of equipping and training one Spartan matches that of a mechanized company. Its replacement, the N7 Programme, is more economical without losing too much effectiveness.
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* AlternateUniverse: Humanity being on much better terms with the Citadel. Garrus already a Spectre trainee. Tali on the Normandy's shakedown. Quarians and Krogan getting a better deal from the Council.
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* AlternateUniverse: Humanity being on much better terms with the Citadel. Garrus already a Spectre trainee. Tali on the Normandy's shakedown. Quarians and Krogan getting a better deal from the Council. [[spoiler: Ashley is an officer and N5.]]
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* FusionFic: The author avoids several problems with the matchup, most obviously the power level gap, by doing this. Rather than using the Covenant wholesale in their original Halo form, the Covenant here are an advanced faction with Geth- or Collector-level grasp of the Mass Effect, enabling them to keep their energy weapons without grossing overpowering the Citadel races. Similarly, the object of their religious worship is changed to the Protheans, who they consider Forerunner, rather than Halo-canon Forerunners.
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* FusionFic: The author avoids several problems with the matchup, most obviously the power level gap, by doing this. Rather than using the Covenant wholesale in their original Halo form, the Covenant here are an advanced faction with Geth- or Collector-level grasp of the Mass Effect, enabling them to keep their energy weapons without grossing grossly overpowering the Citadel races. Similarly, the object of their religious worship is changed to the Protheans, who they consider Forerunner, rather than Halo-canon Forerunners.
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* AwesomeButImpractical: The original Spartan programme was just too costly despite the extreme quality products, such as augmentations still unrivaled after 50 years. Its replacement, the N7 Programme, is more economical but still highly effective.
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* AwesomeButImpractical: The original Spartan programme was just too costly despite the extreme quality products, such as augmentations still unrivaled after 50 years. Its replacement, the N7 Programme, is more economical but still highly effective.without losing too much effectiveness.
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''[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/blood-and-fire-a-mass-effect-halo-fusion.215185/ Blood and Fire]]'' by Tavi is a ''VideoGame/{{Halo}}[=/=]VideoGame/MassEffect'' FusionFic.
The Citadel races have long been involved in a cold-again, hot-again war with the Covenant, a technologically advanced but numerically inferior theocratic empire. When they attack Shanxi, a colony belonging to the newly encountered race known as "humanity", the Citadel comes to the rescue with offers of assistance to the newcomers, who gladly accept.
Fast forward several decades. Covenant forces attack the human colony of Eden Prime...
!This fanfic contains examples of the following:
* AlternateUniverse: Humanity being on much better terms with the Citadel. Garrus already a Spectre trainee. Tali on the Normandy's shakedown. Quarians and Krogan getting a better deal from the Council.
* AwesomeButImpractical: The original Spartan programme was just too costly despite the extreme quality products, such as augmentations still unrivaled after 50 years. Its replacement, the N7 Programme, is more economical but still highly effective.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: The Batarians wanted to be isolated? They got just that.
* CarFu: [[spoiler: Ashley ramming a Hunter with a hover truck.]]
* TheCavalry: How humanity is introduced to the Citadel races via the latter doing this.
* CompositeCharacter: Shepard's origin combines several of the canon backgrounds.
* DoomedByCanon: Averted with [[spoiler: Nihlus and Jenkins.]]
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: InUniverse for Tali. "Tali, Nihlus wouldn’t drag you across half the galaxy if you weren’t up to this. You introduced yourself to us by throwing a grenade at a crooked info-broker!"
* FourStarBadass: The Spartans we've seen so far, including John, Linda and Kelly.
* FusionFic: The author avoids several problems with the matchup, most obviously the power level gap, by doing this. Rather than using the Covenant wholesale in their original Halo form, the Covenant here are an advanced faction with Geth- or Collector-level grasp of the Mass Effect, enabling them to keep their energy weapons without grossing overpowering the Citadel races. Similarly, the object of their religious worship is changed to the Protheans, who they consider Forerunner, rather than Halo-canon Forerunners.
* HigherTechSpecies: The Covenant have a tech advantage over the Citadel races, with this being balanced out by personnel numbers.
* HumanityIsInfectious: 'Where the hell had [Garrus] heard that? Damn human memes.'
* MagicKnight: The Covenant have their own biotic combatants. WordOfGod directly equates Zealots with Krogan Battlemasters.
* MythologyGag: '[Jacob Keyes] made a mental note to find out who had told the cranky old Turian about air quotes. There was going to be hell to pay for that one.'
* RequiredSecondaryPowers: The Citadel races know the science between Covenant plasma weapons, but they lack the material science and power generation knowledge to make the things work.
* TitleDrop: "Every turning point in [Shepard's] life has involved two things doctor. Blood and fire."
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The Citadel races have long been involved in a cold-again, hot-again war with the Covenant, a technologically advanced but numerically inferior theocratic empire. When they attack Shanxi, a colony belonging to the newly encountered race known as "humanity", the Citadel comes to the rescue with offers of assistance to the newcomers, who gladly accept.
Fast forward several decades. Covenant forces attack the human colony of Eden Prime...
!This fanfic contains examples of the following:
* AlternateUniverse: Humanity being on much better terms with the Citadel. Garrus already a Spectre trainee. Tali on the Normandy's shakedown. Quarians and Krogan getting a better deal from the Council.
* AwesomeButImpractical: The original Spartan programme was just too costly despite the extreme quality products, such as augmentations still unrivaled after 50 years. Its replacement, the N7 Programme, is more economical but still highly effective.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: The Batarians wanted to be isolated? They got just that.
* CarFu: [[spoiler: Ashley ramming a Hunter with a hover truck.]]
* TheCavalry: How humanity is introduced to the Citadel races via the latter doing this.
* CompositeCharacter: Shepard's origin combines several of the canon backgrounds.
* DoomedByCanon: Averted with [[spoiler: Nihlus and Jenkins.]]
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: InUniverse for Tali. "Tali, Nihlus wouldn’t drag you across half the galaxy if you weren’t up to this. You introduced yourself to us by throwing a grenade at a crooked info-broker!"
* FourStarBadass: The Spartans we've seen so far, including John, Linda and Kelly.
* FusionFic: The author avoids several problems with the matchup, most obviously the power level gap, by doing this. Rather than using the Covenant wholesale in their original Halo form, the Covenant here are an advanced faction with Geth- or Collector-level grasp of the Mass Effect, enabling them to keep their energy weapons without grossing overpowering the Citadel races. Similarly, the object of their religious worship is changed to the Protheans, who they consider Forerunner, rather than Halo-canon Forerunners.
* HigherTechSpecies: The Covenant have a tech advantage over the Citadel races, with this being balanced out by personnel numbers.
* HumanityIsInfectious: 'Where the hell had [Garrus] heard that? Damn human memes.'
* MagicKnight: The Covenant have their own biotic combatants. WordOfGod directly equates Zealots with Krogan Battlemasters.
* MythologyGag: '[Jacob Keyes] made a mental note to find out who had told the cranky old Turian about air quotes. There was going to be hell to pay for that one.'
* RequiredSecondaryPowers: The Citadel races know the science between Covenant plasma weapons, but they lack the material science and power generation knowledge to make the things work.
* TitleDrop: "Every turning point in [Shepard's] life has involved two things doctor. Blood and fire."
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