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Chiyo Suzuhara, little sister of Toji, suffered a horrible accident the day of the Angel's attack, and thought her life changed forever. Until she found a lost legacy her mother left behind...
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Chiyo Suzuhara, little sister of Toji, suffered a horrible accident the day of the Third Angel's attack, and thought her life changed forever. Until she found a lost legacy her mother left behind...
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* AlternateUniverse: In addition to the obvious, unlike the other stories in the series, ''Soaring High'' seems to be based more on ''Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion'' than the original ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion''. This appears to be a plot point, [[spoiler:as it seems Gendo is working off the original ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' playbook.]]
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* AlternateUniverse: In addition to the obvious, unlike the other stories in the series, ''Soaring High'' seems to be based more on ''Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion'' than the original ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion''. This appears to be a plot point, [[spoiler:as it seems Gendo is working off of the original ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' playbook.]]
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* CityOfAdventure: With no fewer than ''six'' superwomen (Hawkgirl, [[Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton Supergirl]] and others), ''Soaring High'''s version of Tokyo-3 has by far the highest population of superwomen in the entire series.
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* CityOfAdventure: With no fewer than ''six'' superwomen (Hawkgirl, [[Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton Supergirl]] Supergirl]], and others), ''Soaring High'''s version of Tokyo-3 has by far the highest population number of superwomen in the entire series.
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** [[CarryABigStick Carry a Big Mace]]
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* DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength: Downplayed. She's not breaking anything she doesn't intend violence on, but she's hitting bad guys a ''lot'' harder than she intends.
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* DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength: Downplayed. She's not breaking anything she doesn't intend to bring violence on, upon, but she's hitting bad guys a ''lot'' harder than she intends.
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* LegacyCharacter: Hawkgirl is revealed to be one by a report Kensuke wrote for class on pre-Second Impact history. Of course, given the reincarnation aspect, whether this actually counts as a LegacyCharacter or the same character in a new life is up for debate.
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* LegacyCharacter: Hawkgirl is revealed to be one by a report Kensuke wrote for his class on pre-Second Impact history. Of course, given the reincarnation aspect, whether this actually counts as a LegacyCharacter or the same character in a new life is up for debate.
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* NotTheFallThatKillsYou: Hawkgirl catches [[spoiler:Toji]] after he's sent plummeting off a high-rise by [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult the Light of the Divine]].]]
* OutdatedByCanon: Chiyo's name -- already subject to AdaptationNameChange as mentioned above -- has been Jossed by ''Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion 3.0''.
* OutdatedByCanon: Chiyo's name -- already subject to AdaptationNameChange as mentioned above -- has been Jossed by ''Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion 3.0''.
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* NotTheFallThatKillsYou: Hawkgirl catches [[spoiler:Toji]] after he's sent plummeting off a high-rise by [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult the Light of the Divine]].]]
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* OutdatedByCanon: Chiyo'sname -- already name--already subject to AdaptationNameChange as mentioned above -- has above--has been Jossed by ''Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion 3.0''.
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* PoliceAreUseless: As is [[TheMenInBlack Section Two]], when [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult the Light of the Divine]] kidnap Shinji, Toji, and Kensuke.]]
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* PoliceAreUseless: As is [[TheMenInBlack Section Two]], when [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult the Light of the Divine]] kidnap Shinji, Toji, and Kensuke.]]Kensuke]].
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* BareYourMidriff: Hawkgirl's costume.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7882039/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-2-Soaring-High Superwomen of Eva 2: Soaring High]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1483890/Rassilon001 Rassilon001]] is a ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' story in which [[SatelliteCharacter Toji's sister]], [[TheGhost Chiyo]] [[OCStandIn Suzuhara]], finds some ancient Egyptian artifacts and becomes [[ComicBook/{{Hawkman}} Hawkgirl]].
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* AdaptationNameChange: Per WordOfGod, it was a conscious decision to give Toji's sister the name Chiyo.
* AlternateUniverse: In addition to the obvious, unlike the other stories in the series, ''Soaring High'' seems to be based more on ''Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion'' than the original ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion''. This appears to be a plot point, [[spoiler:as it seems Gendo is working off the original ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' playbook.]]
* ApocalypseCult: The Light of the Divine, naturally.
* BareYourMidriff: Hawkgirl's costume.
* BroadStrokes: The approach to ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and other stories in the series, especially if one keeps in mind that other stories are based on the original ''Anime/NeonGenesisEvangelion'' plotline, while ''Soaring High'' is going off of the ''Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion'' plotline.
* CatUpATree: At one point, Chiyo's so bored that she's lamenting the lack of even this kind of superheroing to do.
* CityOfAdventure: With no fewer than ''six'' superwomen (Hawkgirl, [[Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton Supergirl]] and others), ''Soaring High'''s version of Tokyo-3 has by far the highest population of superwomen in the entire series.
* ClothesMakeTheSuperman: Hawkgirl gains her powers from a variety of items:
** [[CarryABigStick Carry a Big Mace]]
*** ShockAndAwe: The mace is electrified.
** SuperStrength: Granted by the bracers.
** [[PowerGivesYouWings Wings Give You Power]]: The wing harness, obviously.
*** FeatherFlechettes: A nifty addition to the ''ComicBook/{{Hawkman}}'' power set.
*** {{Flight}}: Natch.
*** ImmuneToBullets: When she wraps her wings around herself.
* CompositeCharacter: Copperhead, by WordOfGod.
* {{Determinator}}: Chiyo demonstrates these traits right out of the gate after Sachiel's attack.
* DoesNotKnowHisOwnStrength: Downplayed. She's not breaking anything she doesn't intend violence on, but she's hitting bad guys a ''lot'' harder than she intends.
* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Possibly. It's a little unclear.
* HandicappedBadass: Chiyo is paraplegic due to the injuries she received during Sachiel's attack. That doesn't stop her from beating heads in with her mace.
* HostageSituation: Hawkgirl's first public debut.
* LegacyCharacter: Hawkgirl is revealed to be one by a report Kensuke wrote for class on pre-Second Impact history. Of course, given the reincarnation aspect, whether this actually counts as a LegacyCharacter or the same character in a new life is up for debate.
* MostCommonSuperpower: Thankfully [[AvertedTrope averted]], given the character in question. Well, aside from one {{omake}}.
* NotTheFallThatKillsYou: Hawkgirl catches [[spoiler:Toji]] after he's sent plummeting off a high-rise by [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult the Light of the Divine]].]]
* OutdatedByCanon: Chiyo's name -- already subject to AdaptationNameChange as mentioned above -- has been Jossed by ''Anime/RebuildOfEvangelion 3.0''.
* PluckyGirl: Chiyo is this in spades.
* PoliceAreUseless: As is [[TheMenInBlack Section Two]], when [[spoiler:[[ApocalypseCult the Light of the Divine]] kidnap Shinji, Toji, and Kensuke.]]
* {{Reincarnation}}: The version of the ''ComicBook/{{Hawkman}}'' mythos used is the Egyptian reincarnation, not the Thanagarian police officer. [[spoiler:Though Thanagar is apparently still involved somehow.]]
* StealthHiBye: Kaworu seems fond of this.
* SupermanStaysOutOfGotham: Strangely, despite sharing the city with ''five'' other superwomen, Hawkgirl has yet to actually run into any of them.
* ThrowingOffTheDisability: [[spoiler:Thanks to an experimental surgical treatment from Yamagishi Enterprises]], Chiyo is later able to walk again.]]
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