History Fanfic / StarWarsRedone

* BloodierAndGorier: Especially compared to the other [=REDONE=] entries; blood, viscera, and (usually when [[TheDreaded Grievous]] is around) dismemberment are often mentioned/described. One badly injured Wookiee at the field hospital on Kashyyyk is described as having his face split open from blaster fire but still conscious.

''[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OpNXTBR4nDpK9o29wh5gGnOSXaPNyq25/view?usp=sharing Star Wars: Episode II REDONE – The Path to Destruction (Version 9) | Reimagining Attack of the Clones into James Bond in Space]]''

''[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1SdbK9mWaFCnvNo1smqf1KY6KVPLlGjrp/view?usp=sharing Star Wars: Episode III – Revenge of the Sith REDONE (Version 9) | Better motivating Anakin and the Republic's transition to fascism]]''

''[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1x60H-KbhV-wylOvcrs3M-tQs19J8ZSa1/view?usp=sharing Star Wars: Episode VI – Return of the Jedi REDONE (Version 5)]]''

''[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/17sLFJ9LwRJgedMxCasoM1o4S6QV8xFMR/view?usp=sharing Star Wars: Episode VII – The Force Awakens REDONE (Version 7)]]''

''[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/11EHabuGtgVVEQd2T6L-5Qofr7MKiwKiL/view?usp=sharing Star Wars: Episode VIII – The Last Jedi REDONE (Version 4)]]''

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* ActionPrologue: The first few minutes of The Phantom Menace [=REDONE=] starts with the Alderaanian Nubian royal starship being chased by the Scimitar.

** Master Yoda only appears a few times in [=REDONE=] to make his presence more impactful.

* BaitAndSwitch: Alana and Anakin hides just before Maul can sees them. They think they're clear but cut to the next scene, Maul calls the bounty hunters to converge on the two's location.

** The hyperspace chase scene at the start of this [=REDONE=] is exactly like how Film/ANewHope started with the iconic chase between the [=CR90=] corvette(blockade runner) and the Star Destroyer.

* DieOrFly: Anakin activates his Force powers just when the Trandosan is about to beat him to death.

* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Anakin begins to have a series of vision foretelling of a battle in the future with Alana involved in it. Unfortunately, this turns out to be the fateful event that resulted in Alana's death.
* EurekaMoment: After Alanna calls him 'brainless' for his reckless actions, [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Anakin]] lists down all his accomplishments including mechanics. Alanna wasn't interested until it quickly hits her that Anakin knows some parts for the starship.
* GenderFlip: Combined with AdaptationNameChange and AgeLift, Qui-Gon Jinn is remade into a young Padawan named Alana.

* MuggingTheMonster: Anakin steals Alana's sack that contains her lightsaber. It's a good thing Alana's a Jedi otherwise he would be in serious trouble.

** Alana's name came from one of the characters in George Lucas's rough draft on Star Wars.
** Anakin's pose when wielding Alana's lightsaber mirrors the original poster for Film/ANewHope.

* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Anakin unleashes the powers of the Dark Side to kill Darth Maul after he kills Alanna Jinn.
* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Anakin chooses to return to Alderaan and help Obi-Wan and Alana. Unfortunately, that choice would doom him.

* TwoLinesNoWaiting: Two separate storylines occur, one where Obi-Wan and Alana finding a way out of Tatooine and reach Alderaan while at Alderaan, Prince Organa and Queen Amidala trying to survive from the Separatists.

* ViceCity: This bit of dialogue after Alana caught Anakin.
--> '''Alana:''' Slimey thief! Come over here, I’m turning you over to the authority!

--> '''Alana:''' A new problem?

''[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1b3be6w77Ys6zbtIkwD8RXOI5gPYeqV9Q/view?usp=sharing Star Wars: Episode I REDONE – An Ancient Evil (Version 9) | Injecting urgency and stakes by making Anakin a clear protagonist]]''

* GoldenAge: Many of the Jedi and several individuals like Valorum and Bail speak fondly of the time of the Army of Light because the Jedi were more independent and free to maintain peace and order across the Galaxy.

-->''For over a thousand generations, the JEDI ORDER was the guardians of peace and justice in the galaxy. But peace can only last so long.''

-->''The galaxy is falling asunder. Thousands of solar systems are declaring their intentions to leave the Galactic Republic to join the CONFEDERACY OF INDEPENDENT SYSTEMS.''

-->''This reorganized Separatist Alliance, now led by mysterious GENERAL GRIEVOUS, mercilessly strikes back the crumbling Republic with unflinching resolve.''

-->''To battle the mass-produced Droid Armies, Chancellor Valorum Organa considers creating an ARMY OF THE REPUBLIC, while Jedi Padawan Anakin Skywalker awaits for the Trials of Knighthood....''

* EvolvingWeapon: Kyber crystals in lightsabers can turn red only as a result of dark side influence. This is hinted in ''The Path to Destruction,'' and put on full display in the rewrites for ''Revenge of the Sith'' (where Vader's lightsaber turns permanently red after starting the Temple assault by killing Jocasta Nu) and in ''The Force Awakens'' (where Kylo's lightsaber, previously blue, turns red after he gives in to the dark side and kills Han).

* EvolvingWeapon: Kyber crystals in lightsabers can turn red only as a result of dark side influence. This is hinted in ''Shroud of the Darkness,'' and put on full display in the rewrites for ''Revenge of the Sith'' (where Vader's lightsaber turns permanently red after starting the Temple assault by killing Jocasta Nu) and in ''The Force Awakens'' (where Kylo's lightsaber, previously blue, turns red after he gives in to the dark side and kills Han).

[[folder:The Shroud of Darkness]]

* AdaptationDistillation: Planets like Kamino, Naboo and Tatooine are removed in "Shroud of the Darkness". The only plot element that is retained are the clone army which has been adapted to be part of the Coruscant plot.
* AdaptationExpansion: ''The Shroud of Darkness focuses on key elements that was never touched upon in the second Prequel film.

** The Shroud of Darkness can be seen as James Bond in Space and pays a homage to On Her Majesty's Secret Service: a man-on-a-mission premise, a secret espionage mission on which hang the fate of the world, a solo infiltration, a blooming romance with an untrustworthy foreign agent, a supervillain who resides in a fortified lair, a secret weapon that might doom the world, and the good guys special forces battling against the bad guys in the climactic battle, snowy environments, the action set pieces, the intimate connection between the hero and the heroine, and the plot of the hero going into the villain’s lair to investigate.

''[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1b3be6w77Ys6zbtIkwD8RXOI5gPYeqV9Q/view?usp=sharing Star Wars: Episode I REDONE – An Ancient Evil (Version 9)]]''

''[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1OpNXTBR4nDpK9o29wh5gGnOSXaPNyq25/view?usp=sharing Star Wars: Episode II REDONE – The Path to Destruction (Version 9)]]''

''[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1SdbK9mWaFCnvNo1smqf1KY6KVPLlGjrp/view?usp=sharing Star Wars: Episode III – Revenge of the Sith REDONE (Version 9)]]''

''[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1zzL8m1IzC2EdYdJ8Ym-22P8xVEiZKyNe/view?usp=sharing Star Wars: Episode III – Revenge of the Sith REDONE (Version 8)]]''

''[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/192t6ZskpMuo7rznNgekHDwYXPVvuE5Yg/view?usp=sharing Star Wars: Episode II REDONE – The Shroud of Darkness (Version 8)]]''

''[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1W2t8SF-m6bLfYSEgKnT6AibqK7b5g8yK/view?usp=sharing Star Wars: Episode I REDONE – An Ancient Evil (Version 8)]]''

[[https://www.reddit.com/r/fixingmovies/comments/jpxyk0/a_small_change_to_the_mandalorian_chapter_10_s0202/ A small change to The Mandalorian Chapter 10 (S02E02]]

[[https://www.reddit.com/r/fixingmovies/comments/kcks1b/changing_one_scene_in_the_mandalorian_chapter_11/ Changing one scene in The Mandalorian Chapter 11: The Heiress (S02E03)]]

[[https://www.reddit.com/r/fixingmovies/comments/k3epux/one_change_to_the_mandalorian_chapter_13_the_jedi/ One change to The Mandalorian Chapter 13: The Jedi (S02E05)]]

* HeelFaceTurn: and a number of Stormtroopers joins the New Order.

* BlindEm: Kylo strikes at Rey's face that renders her completely blind. However that doesn't stop her from continue to fight on and by she's able to regain her sights by the time of the FinalBattle.

* AdaptationalExpansion:

* AdaptationalDistillation:
** Alderaan takes Naboo's role in the story.
** The plot to return to Coruscant has been effectively removed. The planet's screen-time has been reduced to a small number of short scenes.
** The Trade Federation are replaced with the Separatists (see below).
** The Chosen One prophecy is removed.
** Master Yoda only appears a few times in [=REDONE=] to make his presence more impactful.

* AdaptationOriginConnection: In the [=REDONE=], [=R2-D2=] is an astro droid, built by Anakin who use scraps to replace his lost parts. Ever since then, R2 serves Anakin and helps in the workplace to fix pod racers or anything that came by.

* AdaptationalJobChange: Owen Lars is changed from a farmer to a pilot.

* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: The Nelvaanians are changed to be amphibious, similar to the Mon Calamari. The author cites [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaOcarinaOfTime the Zora]] as an influence.

* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: Padme in the films is a paragon and a staunch believer in democracy. Padme in [=REDONE=], however, is more of an antiheroine and is more open to authoritarianism if it means maintaining peace and justice in the galaxy.

* AdaptationalExpansion: [=REDONE=] focuses on the Battle of Kashyyyk allowing much of the environment or landscape be explored and have a glimpse on Wookie culture.
* AdaptationalPersonalityChange:
** Anakin still kills Mace, but unlike his movie counterpart, he did it without any remorse or hesitation which is justified since he found his wife on the floor, wounded by the Jedi master.
** Obi-Wan refuses to believe Anakin has turned evil until only the latter shows to him far gone he is, in contrast to movie Obi-Wan's determination to kill his student.

* AdaptationDistillation: [=REDONE=] Revenge of the Sith has removed Utapau (aside from a brief cameo during Order 66) and much of Coruscant but their plots are added alongside Kashyyyk's.
* AdaptationalHeroism: Downplayed in Anakin's case. He is personally responsible for many deaths in the Jedi Temple, but the younglings are not among them (the clones kill them instead).

* AdaptationDistillation: The Tatooine plot is effectively removed. Instead, it is reintegrated as part of the Kashyyyk plot.

* AdaptationalWimp: Intentionally done on Rey by onex7805. Rey is only good on two things; repairing and using the Force.

* SparedByAdaptation:

'''Rebels''':

[[https://old.reddit.com/r/StarWarsREDONE/comments/u6uwwk/some_ideas_about_star_wars_rebels_redone/ Some ideas about Star Wars Rebels REDONE]]

''[[https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HNCnn6PNrPyCKgZT5gu8VAZdnZWtuSfo/view?usp=drivesdk The outline of Star Wars: Episode IX – A New Order]]

* SimpleStaff: The Magnaguard's Electrostaff. Anakin will use one since losing his Lightsaber.

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''For over a thousand generations, the JEDI ORDER was the guardians of peace and justice in the galaxy. But peace can only last so long.''

''A secessionist movement arose against the twenty-five-millennia GALACTIC REPUBLIC. The Separatists have formed a blockade of deadly battleships around the tranquil planet of Alderaan.''

''As turmoil engulfs his homeworld, Supreme Chancellor Valorum Organa has secretly dispatched two Jedi Knights to settle the dispute and avert the impending war....''

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''The galaxy is falling asunder. Thousands of solar systems are declaring their intentions to leave the Galactic Republic to join the CONFEDERACY OF INDEPENDENT SYSTEMS.''

''This reorganized Separatist Alliance, now led by mysterious GENERAL GRIEVOUS, mercilessly strikes back the crumbling Republic with unflinching resolve.''

''To battle the mass-produced Droid Armies, Chancellor Valorum Organa considers creating an ARMY OF THE REPUBLIC, while Jedi Padawan Anakin Skywalker awaits for the Trials of Knighthood....''

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''The CLONE WARS rage across the galaxy like wildfire. A thousand generations is coming to a close. Though this is the end of an era, it has saved its best for last.''

''In a stunning move, the fiendish droid leader, General Grievous, has swept into the Republic capital and kidnapped CHANCELLOR PALPATINE, leader of the Galactic Senate.''

''As the Separatist Droid Army attempts to flee the besieged capital with their valuable hostage, two Jedi Knights lead a desperate mission to rescue the captive Chancellor....''