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!!This fanfic is a retelling of ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStardustCrusaders JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders]]'', and this page assumes you're familiar with the series up to that part. As such, there will be unmarked spoilers for those. [[Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned You have been warned.]]

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!!This fanfic is a retelling of ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStardustCrusaders JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders]]'', and this page assumes you're familiar with the series up to that part. As such, there will be unmarked all spoilers for those.up to it will be unmarked. [[Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned You have been warned.]]
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!This fanfiction is a retelling of ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStardustCrusaders JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders]]''. As such, any spoilers from the original work will be left unmarked. [[Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned You have been warned.]]

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!This fanfiction !!This fanfic is a retelling of ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStardustCrusaders JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders]]''. Crusaders]]'', and this page assumes you're familiar with the series up to that part. As such, any there will be unmarked spoilers from the original work will be left unmarked.for those. [[Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned You have been warned.]]
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* AdaptationDeviation: The initial fight with Kakyoin does not take place in the nurse's office, instead, it takes place in the trees near the school, drawing more from the OVA.
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: [[spoiler:Avdol, Iggy, and Kakyoin still die, but after the events of ''Stardust Crusaders''. They do face similar fatalities that they originally did, with Avdol going missing during the 1992 Cairo earthquake with [[NeverFoundTheBody his body never recovered,]] Iggy still pulling a HeroicSacrifice to protect Polnareff later on, and Kakyoin being impaled by a fallen pole during a rainstorm]].
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* MythologyGag:
** In chapter 8, Joseph being curious to see if [[spoiler:the murderdolls have genitals after the Polnareff one is destroyed]] echoes a similar scene with Norisuke in ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureJoJolion JoJolion]]'', except Joseph actually gets to check, [[spoiler:only to see that they are entirely BarbieDollAnatomy]].
** Chapter 19 has another reference to ''[=JoJolion=]''. Jotaro's [[spoiler:TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to Steely Dan after everything he pulled on Hitomi, and later Dan trying to pathetically tell Hitomi he still loves her after his failed ISurrenderSuckers]] plays very closely to [[spoiler:Josuke's words to Damo, and then Damo trying the same pathetic retort after attacking Hato and her family]].
-->'''Jotaro''': [[spoiler:She thought you were brainwashed and she was making excuses for you... She never stopped believing in you. But you attacked her anyway.]]\\
'''Steely Dan''': [[spoiler:''Hitomi! I was only here for Enya! I was going to let Mr. Joestar go the whole time! I really do love you from the bottom of my heart!'']]
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** While the Hol Horse and Boingo arc [[AdaptationDistillation is skimmed a bit,]] not only does [[spoiler:Hitomi decide to heal Hol Horse's injury upon arriving at the scene, Iggy's attack on Boingo is stopped by Hitomi, and after learning about the situation, especially about how a kid like Boingo (and his older brother) would be killed if they revealed Dio's whereabouts, she lets Boingo go. Allowing him to keep the new resolve he initially had in the original]].
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The sequels would have all ''7th Stand User'' inspired elements retconned out, also changing Hitomi's surname to "Zeppeli", and her Stand (although it still has the ability to heal). This was all in favor of an original AlternateUniverse. Despite the original story being an adaptation, there were numerous elements original to the fanfic itself, which have been kept as shown by certain chapters in it.

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The sequels would have all ''7th Stand User'' inspired elements retconned out, also changing Hitomi's surname to "Zeppeli", and her Stand (although it still has the ability to heal). This was all in favor of an original AlternateUniverse. Despite the original story being an adaptation, there were numerous elements original to the fanfic itself, which have been kept as shown by certain chapters in it.
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The original iteration of the story was published on July 30th, 2017 and was completed on September 27th, 2018. It is followed by ''Fanfic/UnbreakableDiamondProteanRain''. This had all ''7th Stand User'' inspired elements retconned out, also changing Hitomi's surname to "Zeppeli", and her Stand (although it still has the ability to heal). This was all in favor of an original AlternateUniverse. Despite the original story being an adaptation, there were numerous elements original to the fanfic itself, which have been kept as shown by certain chapters in it.

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The original iteration of the story was published on July 30th, 2017 and was completed on September 27th, 2018. It is followed by ''Fanfic/UnbreakableDiamondProteanRain''. This had

The sequels would have
all ''7th Stand User'' inspired elements retconned out, also changing Hitomi's surname to "Zeppeli", and her Stand (although it still has the ability to heal). This was all in favor of an original AlternateUniverse. Despite the original story being an adaptation, there were numerous elements original to the fanfic itself, which have been kept as shown by certain chapters in it.
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* CombatMedic: Hitomi is able to use her stand's weapon to both accelerate the healing of wounds, and attack. (Cardigans' scalpel in the [=7SU=] version, and Ace of Cups' ribbons in the Remix version onward)

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* CombatMedic: Hitomi is able to use her stand's Stand's weapon to both accelerate the healing of wounds, and attack. (Cardigans' scalpel in the [=7SU=] version, and Ace of Cups' ribbons in the Remix version onward)



* ChekhovsSkill: Hitomi has Jotaro learn a bit of ripple. He prefers to stick to using his stand until [[spoiler:he uses it to resuscitate Hitomi near the end.]]

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* ChekhovsSkill: Hitomi has Jotaro learn a bit of ripple. He prefers to stick to using his stand Stand until [[spoiler:he uses it to resuscitate Hitomi near the end.]]



* MythologyGag: The new name of Hitomi's stand, "Ace of Cups", is actually taken from the Tarot card of the Minor Arcanum it represented when Hitomi requested to draw a Tarot card from Avdol in chapter 8 of the original version.

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* MythologyGag: The new name of Hitomi's stand, Stand, "Ace of Cups", is actually taken from the Tarot card of the Minor Arcanum it represented when Hitomi requested to draw a Tarot card from Avdol in chapter 8 of the original version.



* TarotMotifs: All of the original enemies (except for Whitney) so far still follow this, now taking their stand names from the Minor Arcanum.

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* TarotMotifs: All of the original enemies (except for Whitney) so far still follow this, now taking their stand Stand names from the Minor Arcanum.
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The story follows a girl named [[TheProtagonist Hitomi]], who is a descendant of the Zeppeli bloodline, having descended from one of the sons of one of Caesar Zeppeli's two brothers. At the start of the story, she has a very weak constitution that has her on the brink of death until her stand is awakened, which allows her to heal at an increased rate, and also heal other people. Soon after, she has a fateful encounter with Jotaro Kujo that unexpectedly puts her in the same journey as him, and along the way, she discovers the destiny behind her family name.

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The story follows a girl named [[TheProtagonist Hitomi]], who is a descendant of the Zeppeli bloodline, having descended from one of the sons of one of Caesar Zeppeli's two brothers. At the start of the story, she has a very weak constitution that has her on the brink of death until her stand Stand is awakened, which allows her to heal at an increased rate, and also heal other people. Soon after, she has a fateful encounter with Jotaro Kujo that unexpectedly puts her in the same journey as him, and along the way, she discovers the destiny behind her family name.



This fanfiction started out as an adaptation of ''[[VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureThe7thStandUser JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: The 7th Stand User]]''. It was initially titled ''The Seventh Crusader''. Later, it was changed to its current name, but had the suffix ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11655507 The 7th Stand User]]'', and as mentioned above, gave even further characterization to the characters original to that game. However, given the game that it adapts, this also meant that there are spoilers for ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStoneOcean Stone Ocean]]'' present in it as well. Hitomi's surname was also "Isaji" in this, and her stand was "Cardigans", one of the stands in the game.

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This fanfiction started out as an adaptation of ''[[VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureThe7thStandUser JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: The 7th Stand User]]''. It was initially titled ''The Seventh Crusader''. Later, it was changed to its current name, but had the suffix ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11655507 The 7th Stand User]]'', and as mentioned above, gave even further characterization to the characters original to that game. However, given the game that it adapts, this also meant that there are spoilers for ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStoneOcean Stone Ocean]]'' present in it as well. Hitomi's surname was also "Isaji" in this, and her stand Stand was "Cardigans", one of the stands Stands in the game.



The original iteration of the story was published on July 30th, 2017 and was completed on September 27th, 2018. It is followed by ''Fanfic/UnbreakableDiamondProteanRain''. This had all ''7th Stand User'' inspired elements retconned out, also changing Hitomi's surname to "Zeppeli", and her stand, although it still has the ability to heal. This was all in favor of an original AlternateUniverse. Despite the original story being an adaptation, there were numerous elements original to the fanfiction itself, which have been kept as shown by certain chapters in it.

Later, a shorter version of the story, called the ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/21264575 Ace of Cups Remix]]'' was published. This rewrites Hitomi's origin and other important parts of the story to line up better with the world that's been established in the sequel. On top of the retained elements, the author does mention the original fic still has a lot of interactions between the cast, which are the groundwork for interactions in the sequel onward.

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The original iteration of the story was published on July 30th, 2017 and was completed on September 27th, 2018. It is followed by ''Fanfic/UnbreakableDiamondProteanRain''. This had all ''7th Stand User'' inspired elements retconned out, also changing Hitomi's surname to "Zeppeli", and her stand, although Stand (although it still has the ability to heal.heal). This was all in favor of an original AlternateUniverse. Despite the original story being an adaptation, there were numerous elements original to the fanfiction fanfic itself, which have been kept as shown by certain chapters in it.

Later, a shorter version of the story, called the ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/21264575 Ace of Cups Remix]]'' was published. This rewrites Hitomi's origin and other important parts of the story to line up better with the world that's been established in the sequel. On top of the retained elements, the author does mention the original fic fanfic still has a lot of interactions between the cast, which are the groundwork for interactions in the sequel onward.



** Thanks to Hitomi's healing ability, [[spoiler:Kakyoin does not have to stay in the hospital after the fight with Geb, allowing him to stay with the group for various different arcs.]]
** Unlike the original game, there are several deviations from even the game. such as [[spoiler:Avdol actually dying in Calcutta, Berlin and Alicia "resurrecting" him and he goes through the game's submarine route, and none of the endings in the game are directly adapated. This fanfic instead goes for an original ending.]]

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** Thanks to Hitomi's healing ability, [[spoiler:Kakyoin does not have to stay in the hospital after the fight with Geb, allowing him to stay with the group for various different arcs.]]
arcs]].
** Unlike the original game, there are several deviations from even the game. such as [[spoiler:Avdol actually dying in Calcutta, Berlin and Alicia "resurrecting" him and he goes through the game's submarine route, and none of the endings in the game are directly adapated. This fanfic instead goes for an original ending.]]ending]].
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* EarlyBirdCameo: [[spoiler:Johngali A. makes an appearance in chapter 20 as one of Don Cherry's pupils.]]
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-->'''Narrator:''' "In fact, Alessi never made it back to Earth... He turned into something halfway between mineral and life-form and floated through space for all eternity--"\\
'''Hitomi:''' "Hey, don't make nonsense up like this! Are you trying to get us to break the fourth wall again?"

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-->'''Narrator:''' "In In fact, Alessi never made it back to Earth... He turned into something halfway between mineral and life-form and floated through space for all eternity--"\\
eternity--\\
'''Hitomi:''' "Hey, Hey, don't make nonsense up like this! Are you trying to get us to break the fourth wall again?"again?



-->[[spoiler:'''Kakyoin''']]: "[[spoiler:I knew this would happen! Bathroom disasters are your thing, Polnareff!]]"\\
[[spoiler:'''Polnareff''']]: "[[spoiler:Why does this keep happening to meee?!]]"

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-->[[spoiler:'''Kakyoin''']]: "[[spoiler:I [[spoiler:I knew this would happen! Bathroom disasters are your thing, Polnareff!]]"\\
Polnareff!]]\\
[[spoiler:'''Polnareff''']]: "[[spoiler:Why [[spoiler:Why does this keep happening to meee?!]]"meee?!]]



-->'''Jotaro''': "[[spoiler:Be safe, Irene...]]"

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-->'''Jotaro''': "[[spoiler:Be [[spoiler:Be safe, Irene...]]"
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!This fanfiction is a retelling of ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStardustCrusaders JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders]]''. As such, any spoilers from the original work will be left unmarked. You have been warned.

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!This fanfiction is a retelling of ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStardustCrusaders JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders]]''. As such, any spoilers from the original work will be left unmarked. [[Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned You have been warned.
warned.]]
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Later, a shorter version of the story, called the [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/21264575 ''Ace of Cups'' Remix]] was published. This rewrites Hitomi's origin and other important parts of the story to line up better with the world that's been established in the sequel. On top of the retained elements, the author does mention the original fic still has a lot of interactions between the cast, which are the groundwork for interactions in the sequel onward.

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Later, a shorter version of the story, called the [[https://archiveofourown.''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/21264575 ''Ace Ace of Cups'' Remix]] Cups Remix]]'' was published. This rewrites Hitomi's origin and other important parts of the story to line up better with the world that's been established in the sequel. On top of the retained elements, the author does mention the original fic still has a lot of interactions between the cast, which are the groundwork for interactions in the sequel onward.
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Later, a shorter version of the story, called the [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/21264575 Ace of Cups Remix]] was published. This rewrites Hitomi's origin and other important parts of the story to line up better with the world that's been established in the sequel. On top of the retained elements, the author does mention the original fic still has a lot of interactions between the cast, which are the groundwork for interactions in the sequel onward.

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Later, a shorter version of the story, called the [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/21264575 Ace ''Ace of Cups Cups'' Remix]] was published. This rewrites Hitomi's origin and other important parts of the story to line up better with the world that's been established in the sequel. On top of the retained elements, the author does mention the original fic still has a lot of interactions between the cast, which are the groundwork for interactions in the sequel onward.
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** During the climax, [[spoiler:Vins is looking through Jotaro's future in The Observer's Realm after seemingly killing Hitomi, she gets to where Stone Ocean should have taken place. Then, scenes that never happened originally are shown. Jotaro then says his daughter's name:]]

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** During the climax, [[spoiler:Vins is looking through Jotaro's future in The Observer's Realm after seemingly killing Hitomi, she Hitomi. She gets to where Stone Ocean ''Stone Ocean'' should have taken place. Then, place, where much to her suspicion, scenes that never happened originally are shown. Jotaro then says his daughter's name:]]
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** During the climax, [[spoiler:Vins is looking through Jotaro's future in The Observer's Realm after seemingly killing Hitomi, she gets to where Stone Ocean should have taken place, scenes that never happened originally are shown. Then, Jotaro says his daughter's name:]]
-->'''Jotaro''': "[[spoiler: Be safe, Irene...]]"

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** During the climax, [[spoiler:Vins is looking through Jotaro's future in The Observer's Realm after seemingly killing Hitomi, she gets to where Stone Ocean should have taken place, place. Then, scenes that never happened originally are shown. Then, Jotaro then says his daughter's name:]]
-->'''Jotaro''': "[[spoiler: Be "[[spoiler:Be safe, Irene...]]"



** Also in that same chapter, Whitney asks Enya about if she had a second son when she mentions J. Geil having died. Enya responds by saying she doesn't count him and he's TheUnfavorite. [[spoiler:This is alluding to Thin Lizzy, who would properly show up 2 Parts later.]]

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** Also in that same chapter, Whitney asks Enya about if she had a second son when she mentions J. Geil having died. Enya responds by saying she doesn't count him and he's TheUnfavorite. [[spoiler:This is alluding to [[Fanfic/LacrimeDoroDelVentoAureo Thin Lizzy, who would properly show up 2 Parts later.Lizzy]].]]
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* BigBadEnsemble: Whitney, her sister Aretha are the main villains of the story, on top of how they're working for Dio.

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* BigBadEnsemble: Whitney, Whitney and her sister Aretha are the main villains of the story, on top of how they're working for Dio.

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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Subverted. While Avdol, Iggy, and Kakyoin survive the final battle with Dio, they all die later at different points in time after the events of ''Stardust Crusaders''. The sequel confirms this still happens by showing Hitomi learning about Kakyoin's death in a flashback chapter.]]

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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Subverted. While Avdol, Iggy, and Kakyoin survive the final battle with Dio, they all die later at different points in time after the events of ''Stardust Crusaders''. The sequel confirms this still happens by showing Hitomi learning about Kakyoin's death stuff that adds up with this in a flashback chapter.]]



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'''Beware of spoilers for ''Stone Ocean'' considering the game the fanfic adapts.'''



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This fanfiction started out as an adaptation of ''[[VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureThe7thStandUser JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: The 7th Stand User]]''. It was initially titled ''The 7th Crusader''. Later, it was changed to its current name, but had the suffix "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11655507 The 7th Stand User]]", and as mentioned above, gave even further characterization to the characters original to that game. However, given the game that it adapts, this also meant that there are spoilers for ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStoneOcean Stone Ocean]]'' present in it as well. Hitomi's surname was also "Isaji" in this, and her stand was "Cardigans", one of the stands in the game.

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This fanfiction started out as an adaptation of ''[[VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureThe7thStandUser JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: The 7th Stand User]]''. It was initially titled ''The 7th Seventh Crusader''. Later, it was changed to its current name, but had the suffix "[[https://archiveofourown.''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11655507 The 7th Stand User]]", User]]'', and as mentioned above, gave even further characterization to the characters original to that game. However, given the game that it adapts, this also meant that there are spoilers for ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStoneOcean Stone Ocean]]'' present in it as well. Hitomi's surname was also "Isaji" in this, and her stand was "Cardigans", one of the stands in the game.
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Also has a [[https://imgur.com/a/g0X4XPe gallery]], containing images used throughout the story with some extra images mixed in.
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* TheFirstCutIsTheDeepest: Even after [[spoiler:Steely Dan is defeated]], Hitomi still has some emotional baggage to work out, mainly guilt about not telling the others about him, and how she let herself get used by him.

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* TheFirstCutIsTheDeepest: Even after [[spoiler:Steely Dan is defeated]], Hitomi still has some emotional baggage to work out, mainly guilt about not telling the others about him, and how she let herself get used by him.him by opening up to a stranger.
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-->'''Narrator:''' "In fact, Alessi never made it back to Earth... He turned into something halfway between mineral and life-form and floated through space for all eternity--"//
-->'''Hitomi:''' "Hey, don't make nonsense up like this! Are you trying to get us to break the fourth wall again?"

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-->'''Narrator:''' "In fact, Alessi never made it back to Earth... He turned into something halfway between mineral and life-form and floated through space for all eternity--"//
-->'''Hitomi:'''
eternity--"\\
'''Hitomi:'''
"Hey, don't make nonsense up like this! Are you trying to get us to break the fourth wall again?"
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This fanfiction started out as an adaptation of ''[[VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureThe7thStandUser JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: The 7th Stand User]]''. It had the suffix "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11655507 The 7th Stand User]]", and as mentioned above, gave even further characterization to the characters original to that game. However, given the game that it adapts, this also meant that there are spoilers for ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStoneOcean Stone Ocean]]'' present in it as well. Hitomi's surname was also "Isaji" in this, and her stand was "Cardigans", one of the stands in the game.

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This fanfiction started out as an adaptation of ''[[VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureThe7thStandUser JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: The 7th Stand User]]''. It was initially titled ''The 7th Crusader''. Later, it was changed to its current name, but had the suffix "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11655507 The 7th Stand User]]", and as mentioned above, gave even further characterization to the characters original to that game. However, given the game that it adapts, this also meant that there are spoilers for ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStoneOcean Stone Ocean]]'' present in it as well. Hitomi's surname was also "Isaji" in this, and her stand was "Cardigans", one of the stands in the game.
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The original iteration of the story was published on July 30th, 2017 and was completed on September 27th, 2018. It is followed by ''Unbreakable Diamond, Protean Rain''. This had all ''7th Stand User'' inspired elements retconned out, also changing Hitomi's surname to "Zeppeli", and her stand, although it still has the ability to heal. This was all in favor of an original AlternateUniverse. Despite the original story being an adaptation, there were numerous elements original to the fanfiction itself, which have been kept as shown by certain chapters in it.

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The original iteration of the story was published on July 30th, 2017 and was completed on September 27th, 2018. It is followed by ''Unbreakable Diamond, Protean Rain''.''Fanfic/UnbreakableDiamondProteanRain''. This had all ''7th Stand User'' inspired elements retconned out, also changing Hitomi's surname to "Zeppeli", and her stand, although it still has the ability to heal. This was all in favor of an original AlternateUniverse. Despite the original story being an adaptation, there were numerous elements original to the fanfiction itself, which have been kept as shown by certain chapters in it.
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** Unlike the original game, there are several deviations from even the game. such as [[spoiler:Avdol actually dying in Calcutta and Berlin and Alicia "resurrect" him and he goes through the game's submarine route, and none of the endings in the game are directly adapated. This fanfic instead goes for an original ending.]]

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** Unlike the original game, there are several deviations from even the game. such as [[spoiler:Avdol actually dying in Calcutta and Calcutta, Berlin and Alicia "resurrect" "resurrecting" him and he goes through the game's submarine route, and none of the endings in the game are directly adapated. This fanfic instead goes for an original ending.]]
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The original iteration of the story was published on July 30th, 2017 and was completed on September 27th, 2018. It is followed by ''Unbreakable Diamond, Protean Rain'', which had all ''7th Stand User'' inspired elements retconned out, also changing Hitomi's surname to "Zeppeli", and her stand, although it still has the ability to heal. This was all in favor of an original AlternateUniverse. Despite the original story being an adaptation, there were numerous elements original to the fanfiction itself, which have been kept as shown by certain chapters in it.

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The original iteration of the story was published on July 30th, 2017 and was completed on September 27th, 2018. It is followed by ''Unbreakable Diamond, Protean Rain'', which Rain''. This had all ''7th Stand User'' inspired elements retconned out, also changing Hitomi's surname to "Zeppeli", and her stand, although it still has the ability to heal. This was all in favor of an original AlternateUniverse. Despite the original story being an adaptation, there were numerous elements original to the fanfiction itself, which have been kept as shown by certain chapters in it.
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!This fanfiction is a retelling of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStardustCrusaders''. As such, any spoilers from the original work will be left unmarked. You have been warned.

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!This fanfiction is a retelling of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStardustCrusaders''.''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStardustCrusaders JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders]]''. As such, any spoilers from the original work will be left unmarked. You have been warned.



This fanfiction started out as an adaptation of ''VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureThe7thStandUser''. It had the suffix "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11655507 The 7th Stand User]]", and as mentioned above, gave even further characterization to the characters original to that game. However, given the game that it adapts, this also meant that there are spoilers for ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStoneOcean Stone Ocean]]'' present in it as well. Hitomi's surname was also "Isaji" in this, and her stand was "Cardigans", one of the stands in the game.

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This fanfiction started out as an adaptation of ''VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureThe7thStandUser''.''[[VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureThe7thStandUser JoJo's Bizarre Adventure: The 7th Stand User]]''. It had the suffix "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11655507 The 7th Stand User]]", and as mentioned above, gave even further characterization to the characters original to that game. However, given the game that it adapts, this also meant that there are spoilers for ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStoneOcean Stone Ocean]]'' present in it as well. Hitomi's surname was also "Isaji" in this, and her stand was "Cardigans", one of the stands in the game.
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!This fanfiction is a retelling of ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStardustCrusaders''. As such, any spoilers from the original work will be left unmarked. You have been warned.

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''Star-Crossed Crusaders'' is a ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' fanfiction by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/CandyAshes/pseuds/CandyAshes CandyAshes]]. It is a retelling of ''Stardust Crusaders'' with original elements added to the story.

The story follows a girl named [[TheProtagonist Hitomi]], who is a descendant of the Zeppeli bloodline, having descended from one of the sons of one of Caesar Zeppeli's two brothers. At the start of the story, she has a very weak constitution that has her on the brink of death until her stand is awakened, which allows her to heal at an increased rate, and also heal other people. Soon after, she has a fateful encounter with Jotaro Kujo that unexpectedly puts her in the same journey as him, and along the way, she discovers the destiny behind her family name.

This fanfiction is the beginning of a series of fanfics that center around a Zeppeli descendant being among the main cast, and also retelling its respective story with new elements, further developing the established characters, and various original characters, friend and foe. Despite this being the very beginning, it has an interesting history.

This fanfiction started out as an adaptation of ''VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureThe7thStandUser''. It had the suffix "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11655507 The 7th Stand User]]", and as mentioned above, gave even further characterization to the characters original to that game. However, given the game that it adapts, this also meant that there are spoilers for ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureStoneOcean Stone Ocean]]'' present in it as well. Hitomi's surname was also "Isaji" in this, and her stand was "Cardigans", one of the stands in the game.

The original iteration of the story was published on July 30th, 2017 and was completed on September 27th, 2018. It is followed by ''Unbreakable Diamond, Protean Rain'', which had all ''7th Stand User'' inspired elements retconned out, also changing Hitomi's surname to "Zeppeli", and her stand, although it still has the ability to heal. This was all in favor of an original AlternateUniverse. Despite the original story being an adaptation, there were numerous elements original to the fanfiction itself, which have been kept as shown by certain chapters in it.

Later, a shorter version of the story, called the [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/21264575 Ace of Cups Remix]] was published. This rewrites Hitomi's origin and other important parts of the story to line up better with the world that's been established in the sequel. On top of the retained elements, the author does mention the original fic still has a lot of interactions between the cast, which are the groundwork for interactions in the sequel onward.

The "Remix" version was published on November 1st, 2019, and is ongoing.

It also has a [[https://imgur.com/a/Y1iY1Yk gallery]] full of biographies for the characters who appear, and illustrations made for certain points in the story.
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!!''Star-Crossed Crusaders'' provides examples of the following tropes:

[[folder:Tropes Applying to Both Versions]]
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: [[spoiler:Ms. Shiobana, Giorno's mother, appears as a teacher at the school Jotaro and Hitomi attend. She's also Hitomi's teacher and plays a crucial role in Hitomi's past. Here, she is [[NamedByTheAdaptation given the first name of Shiori]].]]
* CallForward: Both versions of the fanfic allude to different things. Specific examples are shown in their respective folders.
* CombatMedic: Hitomi is able to use her stand's weapon to both accelerate the healing of wounds, and attack. (Cardigans' scalpel in the [=7SU=] version, and Ace of Cups' ribbons in the Remix version onward)
* FirstLove: While she's alone in Singapore, Hitomi runs into [[spoiler:Steely Dan, who she becomes infatuated with, not knowing he's working for Dio.]]
* ShootTheMedicFirst: Due to being the healer of the Joestar group, some enemies target Hitomi because of her ability. As such, the heroes also value Hitomi's safety to make sure she's able to tend to anyone wounded.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Subverted. While Avdol, Iggy, and Kakyoin survive the final battle with Dio, they all die later at different points in time after the events of ''Stardust Crusaders''. The sequel confirms this still happens by showing Hitomi learning about Kakyoin's death in a flashback chapter.]]
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[[folder:Tropes Applying to the Original version (The 7th Stand User)]]
* BreakingTheFourthWall: After Alessi is defeated, the narrator inexplicably begins to mention how he had the same fate as Kars before Hitomi interrupts him.
-->'''Narrator:''' "In fact, Alessi never made it back to Earth... He turned into something halfway between mineral and life-form and floated through space for all eternity--"//
-->'''Hitomi:''' "Hey, don't make nonsense up like this! Are you trying to get us to break the fourth wall again?"
* BittersweetEnding: While [[spoiler:Hitomi and the rest of the Joestar group survive their battle with Dio and Vins is defeated, Avdol, Iggy, and Kakyoin would all die after the events of ''Stardust Crusaders'', and Hitomi would also grow apart from Jotaro.]]
* ChekhovsSkill: Hitomi has Jotaro learn a bit of ripple. He prefers to stick to using his stand until [[spoiler:he uses it to resuscitate Hitomi near the end.]]
%%CruelAndUnusualDeath: (There are examples, but I don't know any examples off the top of my head)
* DeathByAdaptation: A minor one, but [[spoiler:Steely Dan is stated to have been killed after his beatdown from Jotaro. Likely due from shock after Hitomi made him far more sensitive to pain before his beatdown.]]
* DisneyDeath: [[spoiler:Hitomi has one at the end of chapter 58, even after Jotaro gets her out of Dio's mansion and tries to resuscitate her. She's better in the next chapter after Jotaro successfully stabilized her.]]
* FailedASpotCheck: [[spoiler:As described by Steel, Vins' fatal mistake was failing to see if Pucci still existed due to being too absorbed with going after Hitomi and obtaining The Path to Heaven. This renders her ultimate goal AllForNothing.]]
* NotHisSled:
** Thanks to Hitomi's healing ability, [[spoiler:Kakyoin does not have to stay in the hospital after the fight with Geb, allowing him to stay with the group for various different arcs.]]
** Unlike the original game, there are several deviations from even the game. such as [[spoiler:Avdol actually dying in Calcutta and Berlin and Alicia "resurrect" him and he goes through the game's submarine route, and none of the endings in the game are directly adapated. This fanfic instead goes for an original ending.]]
* LaserGuidedKarma: Steely Dan's eventual comeuppance is not only for everything he originally does, but also manipulating and even taking advantage of Hitomi.
* RoleSwapAU: During the Bastet and Set arc, a few roles get swapped around that lead to some big changes.
** [[spoiler:Polnareff and Kakyoin face Mariah]], leading to things like [[spoiler: Polnareff having [[RunningGag yet another bathroom disaster]], an interesting inversion of the two women's reactions in the hotel hallway, and Kakyoin managing to end the fight at the railroad tracks by outsmarting Mariah.]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Kakyoin''']]: "[[spoiler:I knew this would happen! Bathroom disasters are your thing, Polnareff!]]"\\
[[spoiler:'''Polnareff''']]: "[[spoiler:Why does this keep happening to meee?!]]"
** Just like an optional path in the original game, [[spoiler:Hitomi takes Polnareff's place during the fight with Alessi. It even ends with Joseph looking for them, and getting turned into his younger self from ''Battle Tendency''. Nonetheless, some creative liberties are taken with the adaptation of something possible in the game.]]
* SequelHook: Doubling as a TimeSkip, the fanfic's epilogue is one of these, with Joseph, Hitomi and [[spoiler:her then-unnamed son preparing to head for Morioh.]]
* ShoutOut: During the battle with Vins and Hanoi Rocks in chapter 38, three of the zombies that attack the group are very much the Special Infected from ''VideoGame/Left4Dead'' in all but name.[[note]]The Smoker, Tank, and Boomer. The Tank is referred to as a "Tank-like zombie", though.[[/note]]
* TheFirstCutIsTheDeepest: Even after [[spoiler:Steely Dan is defeated]], Hitomi still has some emotional baggage to work out, mainly guilt about not telling the others about him, and how she let herself get used by him.
* TheReveal: In the climax, [[spoiler:the world the fanfic is set in is revealed to be the one born after Pucci was killed, and Made in Heaven's collapse. As a result, Pucci has been [[UnPerson Un-Personed]], and the instructions to reach Heaven are missing from the book as a result.]]
* WhamLine:
** During the climax, [[spoiler:Vins is looking through Jotaro's future in The Observer's Realm after seemingly killing Hitomi, she gets to where Stone Ocean should have taken place, scenes that never happened originally are shown. Then, Jotaro says his daughter's name:]]
-->'''Jotaro''': "[[spoiler: Be safe, Irene...]]"

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[[folder:Tropes Applying to Ace of Cups Remix]]
* AmbiguouslyHuman: Aretha and Whitney are implied to be this, with the former stating while talking to Dio that her blood is not suitable for Dio when asked about lending her blood.
* BigBadEnsemble: Whitney, her sister Aretha are the main villains of the story, on top of how they're working for Dio.
* CallForward:
** In chapter 1, Whitney reads Ms. Shiobana's fortune, saying she's going to get married in the future. [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureGoldenWind She also clues her in on learning to speak Italian.]]
** In chapter 4, Hitomi mentions having gone to a town called Morioh as a child, and how she has an aunt who lives there. This is a reference to her connection to Fubuki's family in ''Unbreakable Diamond, Protean Rain''.
** Also in that same chapter, Whitney asks Enya about if she had a second son when she mentions J. Geil having died. Enya responds by saying she doesn't count him and he's TheUnfavorite. [[spoiler:This is alluding to Thin Lizzy, who would properly show up 2 Parts later.]]
* MythologyGag: The new name of Hitomi's stand, "Ace of Cups", is actually taken from the Tarot card of the Minor Arcanum it represented when Hitomi requested to draw a Tarot card from Avdol in chapter 8 of the original version.
* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Chapter 4 reveals that [[spoiler:Whitney and her sister Aretha are an unspecified amount of centuries old. Only Dio knows this.]]
* SiblingRivalry: Even though Whitney and Aretha are sisters and servants of Dio, they don't seem to get along that well, with Whitney even being jealous of the attention Aretha gets from Dio.
* TarotMotifs: All of the original enemies (except for Whitney) so far still follow this, now taking their stand names from the Minor Arcanum.
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