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* BadassAutomaton: [[spoiler: Siege, a 7.6' tall 600 lbs Geth platform that was made to fight Krogan in hand to hand and win. He/It/They out badass most other Spectres.]]
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* BadassAutomaton: Cohort, [[spoiler: Siege, a 7.6' tall 600 lbs Geth platform that was made to fight Krogan in hand to hand and win. He/It/They out badass most other Spectres.]]
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---> '''Siege:''' Takes out a Squad of Batarians "Strike?"
* CyberneticsEatYourSoul: [[spoiler:The control chip for Dempsey's cybernetics is implanted in the emotian center of his brain preventing him from feeling anything except anger.]]
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* SuperReflexes: Eli after his gene mods and boot camp. He once caught a falling glass almost as soon as he realized it was falling.
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* ActionMom: Shepard, Katsumi and YlaraShepard duh. Most Spectres by the epilogue.
* ArmorIsUseless: Zig zagd The armor the Young Guns start out with works as well as expected when it is 10-20 years old and comes face to face with modern high end weapons. How ever when you take a VibroSword to a Rachni's natural armor it will scrach it at best, piss off the rachni at worst.
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---> '''Siege''''''Siege''' "It is our affair because it is our battle brother's affair. Not that we expect you to understand the nuances of this fact. We do, however, expect you to respect it." Runtimes inside the platform made the specific decision to allow its biotic transceiver to broadcast in the clear. All the biotics there would feel the real, actual rage from the machine, true protection-anger and insult-anger wrapped inside that cold metal shell. "Give us cause and we will break you, you cold-song bitch."
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* PowerArmor: The quarians and the geth have made [[IronMan War Machine]] battle suits for the Quarinans to wear. [[spoiler:Instad of buying new armor after the First battle of Kar'Shan, Siara buys an Atlas mech]] .
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* PowerArmor: The quarians and the geth have made [[IronMan War Machine]] battle suits for the Quarinans to wear. [[spoiler:Instad of buying new armor after the First battle of Kar'Shan, Siara buys an Atlas mech]] .mech]].
* [[spoiler: Really700YearsOld: after 50,000 years of medical advancements death is more or less optional.]]
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This Epic MassEffect FanFic By Myetel is a 3 Million word+ AU Fiction where the Reaper War is over and Shepard and Garrus have hybrid kids and are now in charge of the [[SpacePolice Spectres]]. It follows the lives of Shepard and her new Spectres and their kids. It is so good other fanfic authors have used original ideas from this fic in their fics.
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This Epic MassEffect FanFic By Myetel is a 3 Million word+ AU Fiction where the Reaper War is over and Shepard and Garrus have hybrid kids and are now in charge of the [[SpacePolice Spectres]]. It follows the lives of Shepard and her new Spectres and their kids. It Is now part of what is so good other fanfic authors have used original ideas from this fic in their fics.
now called the Myetel-verse.
Side story Dualities and Harmonies is [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7283921/1/Dualities_and_Harmonies here.]]
Side story Dualities and Harmonies is [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7283921/1/Dualities_and_Harmonies here.]]
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* BadassBoast: AKA Shepard's Fav Interrogation Method
---> '''Shepard:''' You are on a Spectre base. Spectres are outside the law. This base is outside the law. You have inflicted atrocities, by any standard, against Spectres and those affiliated with them, and have attempted similar acts against the families and loved ones of other Spectres. On this base, you have no rights except those which I accord you. Not to sound like a tinpot dictator, but in a very real sense, here, I am the law. And you have offended me, deeply. What you need to understand at this point, Ms. Atieno, is this. The only thing that currently protects you is a personal code of conduct to which I generally adhere. There is nothing that legally prevents me from having you shot and fed to the damn varren for dinner. Oh, the Council might fuss at me for not allowing them the political gristmill that would result from the media spectacle of your trial, conviction, and punishment, and the wonderful posturing they could all take from it, but they put me outside the law, so if I remand you to their custody in the form of varren shit in a waste receptacle this big," Shepard held up her hands a couple of feet apart, "they really can't complain, can they?"
* BadassBoast: AKA Shepard's Fav Interrogation Method
---> '''Shepard:''' You are on a Spectre base. Spectres are outside the law. This base is outside the law. You have inflicted atrocities, by any standard, against Spectres and those affiliated with them, and have attempted similar acts against the families and loved ones of other Spectres. On this base, you have no rights except those which I accord you. Not to sound like a tinpot dictator, but in a very real sense, here, I am the law. And you have offended me, deeply. What you need to understand at this point, Ms. Atieno, is this. The only thing that currently protects you is a personal code of conduct to which I generally adhere. There is nothing that legally prevents me from having you shot and fed to the damn varren for dinner. Oh, the Council might fuss at me for not allowing them the political gristmill that would result from the media spectacle of your trial, conviction, and punishment, and the wonderful posturing they could all take from it, but they put me outside the law, so if I remand you to their custody in the form of varren shit in a waste receptacle this big," Shepard held up her hands a couple of feet apart, "they really can't complain, can they?"
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---> '''Shepard:''' You are on a Spectre base. Spectres are outside the law. This base is outside the law. You have inflicted atrocities, by any standard, against Spectres and those affiliated with them, and have attempted similar acts against the families and loved ones of other
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* DiedInYourArmsTonight: Only once
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* GrandTheftMe: [[spoiler:Joker Uploads him self himself in to a prototype of the [[NighInvulnerability super tough]] [[EldritchAbomination ex Big Bad BigBad Race]] to have a BigDamnHeroes moment leading to the CurbStompBattle with a surprising good guy bias]]
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* ParrotPetPosition: The rachni workers mostly 1812 and Choptin
* PowerArmor: The quarians and the geth have made [[IronMan War Machine]] battle suits for the Quarinans to wear.[[spoiler:instad [[spoiler:Instad of buying new armor after the First battle of Kar'Shan, Siara buys an Atlas mech]] .
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* TangledFamilyTree: Holy box of hamsters crawling all over each other Batman, I made a Shepard Family tree as of the latest chapter and if [[spoiler: Agnes and Gavius]] get married then a Rachni will be related to the leader of the Turian government.
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* TangledFamilyTree: Holy box of hamsters crawling all over each other Batman, I made a Shepard Family tree as of the latest chapter and if [[spoiler: Agnes and Gavius]] get married then a Rachni will be related to the leader of the Turian government.government.
* Uncoffee: zig zaged Alpha (the not) and Coffee.
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* Alien Food Is Edible: Subverted, no nutrition is gained from eating said alien food. Played straight with royal jelly.
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This Epic MassEffect FanFic By Myetel is a 2 3 Million word+ AU Fiction where the Reaper War is over and Shepard and Garrus have hybrid kids and are now in charge of the [[SpacePolice Spectres]]. It follows the lives of Shepard and her new Spectres and their kids. It is so good other fanfic authors have used original ideas from this fic in their fics.
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* BadassAutomaton: [[spoiler: Siege, a Geth platform that was made to fight krogan hand to hand]]
---> '''Siege:''' Takes out a Squad of Batarians "Strike?"
---> '''Cohort:''' head shots the survivor "Spare."
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* DrugsAreBad: A asari drug Azure dust is turned into a gas grenade. Every spices has a different reaction: Its Ex for humans, pot for turians, Super Crack for Salarians, a increases biotics for Rachni and Asari.
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* DrugsAreBad: A asari drug Azure dust is turned into a gas grenade. Every spices species has a different reaction: Its Ex It's Extasy for humans, pot for turians, Super Crack for Salarians, a and increases biotics for Rachni and Asari.
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* HeroicRROD: Siara's Empathy she can take pain into herself, allowing a squad-mate to stay standing in spite of the worst wounds. A dangerous ability, because it does not actually heal the squad-mate, but prevents them from collapsing to the ground. Too much pain can damage her own nerve endings.
* HiveQueen: the Rachni queens [[spoiler: Dara is becoming one]]
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* HeroicRROD: Siara's Empathy she ability. She can take pain into herself, allowing a squad-mate to stay standing in spite of the worst wounds. A dangerous ability, because it does not actually heal the squad-mate, but prevents them from collapsing to the ground. Too much pain can damage her own nerve endings.
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* PuppyLove: Eli and Dara in the beginning of the story [[spoiler: Amara and Madison]]
* RidiculouslyHumanRobots:[[spoiler:James]]
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* TangledFamilyTree: Holy box of hamsters crawling all over each other Batman, I made a Shepard Family tree as of the latest chapter and if [[spoiler: Anges Agnes and Gavius]] get married then a Rachni will be related to the leader of the Turian government.
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** TheHero: Rinus.
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** TheSmartGuy: Kirrahe, Dara.
** TheMedic: Dara.
** TheChick: Siara
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Batarian Vibro-swords
* BadassBoast: AKA Shepard's Fav Interrogation Method
---> '''Shepard:''' You are on a Spectre base. Spectres are outside the law. This base is outside the law. You have inflicted atrocities, by any standard, against Spectres and those affiliated with them, and have attempted similar acts against the families and loved ones of other Spectres. On this base, you have no rights except those which I accord you. Not to sound like a tinpot dictator, but in a very real sense, here, I am the law. And you have offended me, deeply. What you need to understand at this point, Ms. Atieno, is this. The only thing that currently protects you is a personal code of conduct to which I generally adhere. There is nothing that legally prevents me from having you shot and fed to the damn varren for dinner. Oh, the Council might fuss at me for not allowing them the political gristmill that would result from the media spectacle of your trial, conviction, and punishment, and the wonderful posturing they could all take from it, but they put me outside the law, so if I remand you to their custody in the form of varren shit in a waste receptacle this big," Shepard held up her hands a couple of feet apart, "they really can't complain, can they?"
---> '''Shepard:''' You are on a Spectre base. Spectres are outside the law. This base is outside the law. You have inflicted atrocities, by any standard, against Spectres and those affiliated with them, and have attempted similar acts against the families and loved ones of other Spectres. On this base, you have no rights except those which I accord you. Not to sound like a tinpot dictator, but in a very real sense, here, I am the law. And you have offended me, deeply. What you need to understand at this point, Ms. Atieno, is this. The only thing that currently protects you is a personal code of conduct to which I generally adhere. There is nothing that legally prevents me from having you shot and fed to the damn varren for dinner. Oh, the Council might fuss at me for not allowing them the political gristmill that would result from the media spectacle of your trial, conviction, and punishment, and the wonderful posturing they could all take from it, but they put me outside the law, so if I remand you to their custody in the form of varren shit in a waste receptacle this big," Shepard held up her hands a couple of feet apart, "they really can't complain, can they?"
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* BerserkButton: Call Shepard's kids monsters, It'll be fun. [[spoiler:You better not do anything that is not in Madison's best interest or else you will have a [[NighInvulnerability wolverine healing]] [[PapaWolf death machine with the same biotic power as a brood warrior]] who just happens to be immune from the law coming after you(Dempsey).]]
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* PowerArmor: The quarinans and the geth have made [[War Machine IronMan]] battle suits for the Quarinans to wear. [[spoiler:instad of buying new armor after the First battle of Kar'Shan, Siara buys an Atlas mech]]
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* BerserkButton: You better not do anything that is not in Madison's best interest or else you will have a [[NighInvulnerability wolverine healing]] [[PapaWolf death machine with the same biotic power as a brood warrior]] who just happens to be immune from the law coming after you(Dempsey)
* CrowningMomentOfFunny: [[spoiler:Anything involving Dara's workers]]
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* BerserkButton: You [[spoiler:You better not do anything that is not in Madison's best interest or else you will have a [[NighInvulnerability wolverine healing]] [[PapaWolf death machine with the same biotic power as a brood warrior]] who just happens to be immune from the law coming after you(Dempsey)
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*CrowningMomentOfFunny: [[spoiler:Anything involving Dara's workers]]CanonImmigrant: [[spoiler: some of the fan characters from the Role play forums have been added to the story]]
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* CurbStompBattle:[[spoiler:The Batarians send a small invasion force to a planet that happens to have the Secret Base of the Spectres. That goes as well as you might think.]]
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* DrugsAreBad: A fake asari drug Azure dust is turned into a gas grenade. Every spices has a different reaction: Its Ex for humans, pot for turians, Super Crack for Salarians, a sex change for Rachni, and takes asari biotics UpToEleven
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* DrugsAreBad: A fake asari drug Azure dust is turned into a gas grenade. Every spices has a different reaction: Its Ex for humans, pot for turians, Super Crack for Salarians, a sex change for Rachni, and takes asari increases biotics UpToElevenfor Rachni and Asari.
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PowerArmor: The quarinans and the geth have made [[War Machine IronMan]] battle suits for the Quarinans to wear. [[spoiler:instad of buying new armor after the First battle of Kar'Shan, Siara buys an Atlas mech]]
* PuppyLove: Eli and Dara in the beginning of thestorystory [[spoiler: Amara and Madison]]
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* AscendedFanBoy: Some of Forum Role Players have become canon characters.
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* DrugsAreBad: A fake asari drug Azure dust is turned into a gas grenade. every Every spices has a different reaction: Its Ex for humans, pot for turians, Super Crack for Salarians, a sex change for Rachni, and takes asari biotics UpToEleven
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* [[spoiler: ParentalIncest]]:[[spoiler: Siara suffered this in a bad way.]]
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* StudentAndMasterTeam: Dara and ShepardShepard, Dara and Mordin
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Just try counting them all. Dare you.
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* ActionMom: Shepard, Katsumi and Yarla
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* ActionMom: Shepard, Katsumi and Yarla
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* Alien Food Is Edible: Subverted, no nutrition is gained from eating said alien food. Played straight with royal jelly.
* [[CoolPet Alien Pet]]: Shepard's pet varren Urz. Inverted with Solanna's dog.
* AllThereInTheManual: Myetel has made D&D style stat sheets for the characters on the forums(links in FF.net profile HAS SPOILERS) and on the official wiki there are skill wright ups as well again links in FF profile HAS MILD SPOILERS.
* Alien Food Is Edible: Subverted, no nutrition is gained from eating said alien food. Played straight with royal jelly.
* [[CoolPet Alien Pet]]: Shepard's pet varren Urz. Inverted with Solanna's dog.
* AllThereInTheManual: Myetel has made D&D style stat sheets for the characters on the forums(links in FF.net profile HAS SPOILERS) and on the official wiki there are skill wright ups as well again links in FF profile HAS MILD SPOILERS.
* BerserkButton: You better not do anything that is not in Madison's best interest or else you will have a [[NighInvulnerability wolverine healing]] [[PapaWolf death machine with the same biotic power as a brood warrior]] who just happens to be immune from the law coming after you(Dempsey)
* CuteKitten: Loki
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* HeelFaceTurn: Seheve Liakos
* HeelFaceTurn: Seheve Liakos
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* Hive Queen: the Rachni queens [[spoiler: Dara is becoming one]]
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* Hive Queen: HiveQueen: the Rachni queens [[spoiler: Dara is becoming one]]
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* BadassGrandpa: Gavius
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* Hive Queen: the Rachni queens [[spoiler: Dara is becoming one]]
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* AIIsACrapshoot: inverted with the NCAI's especially EDI and Pelagia
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* Cyborg: [[spoiler:Dempsey,]] Shepard
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* RidiculouslyHumanRobots:[[spoiler:James]]
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* ApocalypseHow: Pre-fic Planetary/Physical Annihilation with the asari homeworld.
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* SyntheticPlague: [[spoiler: Batarians do this to the galaxy]]
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny / CrowningMomentOfCuteness: [[spoiler:Anything involving Dara's workers]]
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny / CrowningMomentOfCuteness: CrowningMomentOfFunny: [[spoiler:Anything involving Dara's workers]]
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* StudentAndMasterTeam: Dara and Shepard
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6735812/1/The_Spirit_of_Redemption Spirit Of RedemptionRedemption]]
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* HeroicRROD: Siara's Empathy she can take pain into herself, allowing a squad-mate to stay standing in spite of the worst wounds. A dangerous ability, because it does not actually heal the squad-mate, but prevents them from collapsing to the ground. Too much pain can damage her own nerve endings.
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* [[spoiler: ParentalIncest]]:[[spoiler: Siara suffered this in a bad way.]]
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This Epic Mass Effect FanFic By Myetel is a 2 Million word+ AU Fiction where the Reaper War is over and Shepard and Garrus have hybrid kids and are now in charge of the Spectres. It follows the lives of Shepard and her new spectres and their kids. It is so good other fanfic authors have used original ideas from this fic in their fics.
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This Epic Mass Effect MassEffect FanFic By Myetel is a 2 Million word+ AU Fiction where the Reaper War is over and Shepard and Garrus have hybrid kids and are now in charge of the Spectres.the [[SpacePolice Spectres]]. It follows the lives of Shepard and her new spectres and their kids. It is so good other fanfic authors have used original ideas from this fic in their fics.
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* AscendedMeme: Blasto the hanar Spectre. Started as a joke in Mass Effect 2, in the fic-verse he is actual spectre and a pretty badass one at that. He can make people taffy. mmmm taffy...
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* ActionMom: Shepard, Katsumi and Yarla
* AscendedMeme: Blasto the hanar Spectre. Started as a joke inMass Effect 2, MassEffect2, in the fic-verse he is actual spectre and a pretty badass one at that. He can make people taffy. mmmm taffy...
* AscendedMeme: Blasto the hanar Spectre. Started as a joke in
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* GrandTheftMe: [[spoiler:Joker Uploads him self in to a prototype of the [[NighInvulnerability super tough]] [[EldritchAbomination ex Big Bad Race]] to have a BigDamnHeroes moment leading to the CurbStompBattle with a surprising good guy bias]]
* GrandTheftMe: [[spoiler:Joker Uploads him self in to a prototype of the [[NighInvulnerability super tough]] [[EldritchAbomination ex Big Bad Race]] to have a BigDamnHeroes moment leading to the CurbStompBattle with a surprising good guy bias]]
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This Epic Mass Effect FanFic By Myetel is a 2 Million word+ AU Fiction where the Reaper War is over and Shepard and Garrus have hybrid kids and are now in charge of the Spectres. It follows the lives of Shepard and her new spectres and their kids. It is so good other fanfic authors have used original ideas from this fic in their fics.
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!! This FanFic provides examples of:
* AscendedMeme: Blasto the hanar Spectre. Started as a joke in Mass Effect 2, in the fic-verse he is actual spectre and a pretty badass one at that. He can make people taffy. mmmm taffy...
* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: Taken to Over 9000. You can count the number of characters with out kids of some form on 3 hands
* CrowningMomentOfFunny / CrowningMomentOfCuteness: [[spoiler:Anything involving Dara's workers]]
* HalfHumanHybrid: one of the few good uses of this troupe.
* HospitalHottie: Dara
* ImDyingPleaseTakeMyMacGuffin: [[spoiler: Kella gives part of her essence to Elijah Allowing him to speak asari among other things]]
* InterspeciesRomance
* OfficialCouple: Shepard and Garrus
* PuppyLove: Eli and Dara in the beginning of the story
* TangledFamilyTree: Holy box of hamsters crawling all over each other Batman, I made a Shepard Family tree as of the latest chapter and if [[spoiler: Anges and Gavius]] get married then a Rachni will be related to the leader of the Turian government.
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This Epic Mass Effect FanFic By Myetel is a 2 Million word+ AU Fiction where the Reaper War is over and Shepard and Garrus have hybrid kids and are now in charge of the Spectres. It follows the lives of Shepard and her new spectres and their kids. It is so good other fanfic authors have used original ideas from this fic in their fics.
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!! This FanFic provides examples of:
* AscendedMeme: Blasto the hanar Spectre. Started as a joke in Mass Effect 2, in the fic-verse he is actual spectre and a pretty badass one at that. He can make people taffy. mmmm taffy...
* BabiesMakeEverythingBetter: Taken to Over 9000. You can count the number of characters with out kids of some form on 3 hands
* CrowningMomentOfFunny / CrowningMomentOfCuteness: [[spoiler:Anything involving Dara's workers]]
* HalfHumanHybrid: one of the few good uses of this troupe.
* HospitalHottie: Dara
* ImDyingPleaseTakeMyMacGuffin: [[spoiler: Kella gives part of her essence to Elijah Allowing him to speak asari among other things]]
* InterspeciesRomance
* OfficialCouple: Shepard and Garrus
* PuppyLove: Eli and Dara in the beginning of the story
* TangledFamilyTree: Holy box of hamsters crawling all over each other Batman, I made a Shepard Family tree as of the latest chapter and if [[spoiler: Anges and Gavius]] get married then a Rachni will be related to the leader of the Turian government.