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* IdenticalStranger: Sarah, Finn's human childhood friend, is a borderline dead ringer for a younger version of Betty; being a red-headed girls with glasses who dresses in a green shirt, but they aren't related.
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* IdenticalStranger: Sarah, Finn's human childhood friend, is a borderline dead ringer for a younger version of Betty; being a red-headed girls girs with glasses who dresses in a green shirt, but they aren't related.related. Finn and Ice King even denote their similarities.
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* WeCanRuleTogether: The Lich [[spoiler:begins temping Gunter (AKA [[PlanetDestroyer Orgalorg]]) to aid him. Later on, Gunter starts to free him from his prison, albeit starts to regret this choice once the Lich is close to breaking out.]]
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* TemptingFate: In the penultimate chapter, Finn muses that Ooo should be doing fine in his absence [[spoiler:right as the Lich finally breaks out of his prison with help from Gunter.]]
* WeCanRuleTogether: The Lich [[spoiler:begins temping Gunter (AKA [[PlanetDestroyer Orgalorg]]) to aid him. Later on, Gunter starts to free him from his prison, albeit starts to regret this choice once the Lichis close actually starts to breaking out.break free.]]
* WeCanRuleTogether: The Lich [[spoiler:begins temping Gunter (AKA [[PlanetDestroyer Orgalorg]]) to aid him. Later on, Gunter starts to free him from his prison, albeit starts to regret this choice once the Lich
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** Even though PB develops feelings for Finn here as an adult, rather than a temporary infatuation during her stint as a de-aged child
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** Even though PB develops feelings for Finn here as an adult, rather than a temporary infatuation during her stint as a de-aged childchild she still never develops a relationship with him, primarily due to Finn going out first with Marceline and after their break-up Marceline and PB rekindle their own feelings all the while Finn dates Flame Princess.
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** The Lich might be frozen and trapped in the Ice Kingdom rendering him unable to cause ruin and death as he wishes, but he isn't truly dealt with yet and still plans on achieving his goals any way he can, [[spoiler:primarily by attempting to manipulate Finn and then Gunter/Orgalorg to join his side.]]
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** The Lich might be frozen and trapped in the Ice Kingdom rendering him unable to cause ruin and death as he wishes, but he isn't truly dealt with yet and still plans on achieving his goals any way he can, [[spoiler:primarily by attempting to manipulate Finn and then Gunter/Orgalorg to join his side. Only in the very final arc does he finally break out.]]
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* InSpiteOfANail: A number of things end up happening more or less the same way as in canon despite Finn arriving in OOO close to two decades late. Not limited but including the plague on Hub Island, the Lich's escape, Flame Princess becoming the Queen of the Fire Kingdom and Cinnamon Bun becoming her knight, etc.
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* InSpiteOfANail: InSpiteOfANail:
** A number of things end up happening more or less the same way as in canon despite Finn arriving in OOO close to two decades late. Not limited but including the plague on Hub Island, the Lich's escape, Flame Princess becoming the Queen of the Fire Kingdom and Cinnamon Bun becoming her knight,etc.etc.
** Even though PB develops feelings for Finn here as an adult, rather than a temporary infatuation during her stint as a de-aged child
** A number of things end up happening more or less the same way as in canon despite Finn arriving in OOO close to two decades late. Not limited but including the plague on Hub Island, the Lich's escape, Flame Princess becoming the Queen of the Fire Kingdom and Cinnamon Bun becoming her knight,
** Even though PB develops feelings for Finn here as an adult, rather than a temporary infatuation during her stint as a de-aged child
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** When Jake invites Finn over to eat references the Rainicorns' eating of humans and how they now only eat soy with human-like flavor while also mentioning Lady Rainicorn's parents.
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** When Jake invites Finn over to eat eat, he references the Rainicorns' eating of humans and how they now only eat soy with human-like flavor while also mentioning Lady Rainicorn's parents.
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* SealedEvilInACan: The Lich broke out of his old amber prison but without Finn around the Ice King had to save the day by freezing him and sealing his prison in the depths of the Ice Kingdom, regardless [[spoiler:the Lich is still able to try and reach out to Finn.]]
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* SealedEvilInACan: The Lich broke out of his old amber prison but without Finn around the Ice King had to save the day by freezing him and sealing his prison in the depths of the Ice Kingdom, regardless [[spoiler:the Lich is still able to try and reach out to Finn.Finn and later Gunter who eventually helps him.]]
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* WeCanRuleTogether: The Lich [[spoiler:begins temping Gunter (AKA [[PlanetDestroyer Orgalorg]]) to aid him.]]
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* StoryArc: The fic is divided into different plotlines per the chapters, each concerning a different overarching narrative:
** The Evolutionary Arc: Dr. Gross makes her move and attacks Ooo with the intent of expanding the human territory there, forcing Finn and his allies to stop her.
** The Island Arc: An alternate version of the ''Islands'' miniseries serving as the final arc; Finn goes back home to talk down his mother from her increasingly destructive actions to see him again. [[spoiler:However, while Finn is away the Lich begins to break out at last with help from Gunter.]]
* WeCanRuleTogether: The Lich [[spoiler:begins temping Gunter (AKA [[PlanetDestroyer Orgalorg]]) to aid him. Later on, Gunter starts to free him from his prison, albeit starts to regret this choice once the Lich is close to breaking out.]]
** The Evolutionary Arc: Dr. Gross makes her move and attacks Ooo with the intent of expanding the human territory there, forcing Finn and his allies to stop her.
** The Island Arc: An alternate version of the ''Islands'' miniseries serving as the final arc; Finn goes back home to talk down his mother from her increasingly destructive actions to see him again. [[spoiler:However, while Finn is away the Lich begins to break out at last with help from Gunter.]]
* WeCanRuleTogether: The Lich [[spoiler:begins temping Gunter (AKA [[PlanetDestroyer Orgalorg]]) to aid him. Later on, Gunter starts to free him from his prison, albeit starts to regret this choice once the Lich is close to breaking out.]]
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* WeCanRuleTogether:
** Just like in canon, [[spoiler:the Lich tries and contact Finn to get him to aid his goals, though this time he hints towards Finn's nature as a reincarnation of the Catalyst Comet in an attempt to get him to join his side, even referring to him as a "brother" since he too is a Catalyst Comet reincarnation's. All while still imprisoned]]
** He later [[spoiler:begins temping Gunter (AKA [[PlanetDestroyer Orgalorg]]) instead.]]
** Just like in canon, [[spoiler:the Lich tries and contact Finn to get him to aid his goals, though this time he hints towards Finn's nature as a reincarnation of the Catalyst Comet in an attempt to get him to join his side, even referring to him as a "brother" since he too is a Catalyst Comet reincarnation's. All while still imprisoned]]
** He later [[spoiler:begins temping Gunter (AKA [[PlanetDestroyer Orgalorg]]) instead.]]
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* WeCanRuleTogether:
** Just like in canon, [[spoiler:theWeCanRuleTogether: The Lich tries and contact Finn to get him to aid his goals, though this time he hints towards Finn's nature as a reincarnation of the Catalyst Comet in an attempt to get him to join his side, even referring to him as a "brother" since he too is a Catalyst Comet reincarnation's. All while still imprisoned]]
** He later[[spoiler:begins temping Gunter (AKA [[PlanetDestroyer Orgalorg]]) instead.to aid him.]]
** Just like in canon, [[spoiler:the
** He later
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** The Ice King scolds Gunter for trying to reach down to the dungeon where he's keeping the Lich prisoner and soaks him with a spray bottle when he won't listen to him. Likewise, the Lich is stated by Ice King to be trying to melt his prison just like he did in canon on the Citadel but is kept at bay by magic crystals continuously freezing him.
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** The Ice King scolds Gunter for trying to reach down to the dungeon where he's keeping the Lich prisoner and soaks him with a spray bottle when he won't listen to him.him like he did in "Reign of Gunters". Likewise, the Lich is stated by Ice King to be trying to melt his prison just like he did in canon on the Citadel but is kept at bay by magic crystals continuously freezing him.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Shoko developed feelings for Bonnibel because she was the first person to ever be nice to her.
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* PointOfDivergence: The main divergence between this timeline and the canon one is that Finn and Marten washed back up on the shores of the island rather than being swept out to sea and ending up in OOO.
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* PointOfDivergence: The main divergence between this timeline and the canon one is that Finn and Marten washed back up on the shores of the island rather than being swept out to sea and ending up in OOO. This is even acknowledged in-universe by [[spoiler:Prismo and the Cosmic Owl who groan that the current timeline is not the one that was "supposed" to happen and it's much harder now to handle.]]
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** Because he died here long before Finn came to Ooo, Billy never encountered his successor and Finn only learns of his existence and deeds once he arrives in Ooo.
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** Because he died here at the hands of the Lich long before Finn came to Ooo, the events of "His Hero" don't take place as Billy never encountered his successor and Finn only learns of his the late hero's existence and deeds once he arrives in Ooo.
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* LivingIsMoreThanSurviving: LSP mentions to Finn that it seems like the humans of the islands have been doing a lot of surviving but not much living, and Finn comes to agree.
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* LivingIsMoreThanSurviving: After listening to his recountings of his life on Founders Island LSP mentions to Finn that it seems like the humans of the islands have been doing a lot of surviving but not much living, and Finn comes to agree.agree. This helps set Finn down his decision to stay in Ooo.
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** Per WordOfGod, Patience St. Pim will be completely absent from the story.
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** Per WordOfGod, statements from the author, Patience St. Pim will be completely absent from the story.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Slight case with Jake who was willing to take a snack break and ignore the threat of the Lich when the entity first broke out.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Since Finn has significantly matured compared to his canon self by the time he arrives on Ooo he's much more thoughtful and kinder to others, starting by befriending the Ice King as soon as he sees that he really just wants friends and even [[spoiler:isn't the one to cause his' and Phoebe's breakup this time, directly that is.]]
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Since Finn has significantly matured compared to his canon self by the time he arrives on Ooo he's much more thoughtful and kinder to others, starting by befriending the Ice King as soon as he sees that he really just wants friends and even [[spoiler:isn't the one to cause his' and Phoebe's breakup this time, directly that is.]]
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** Martin in canon was a caring father once to Finn but later on became a neglectful deadbeat, implied to be a result of a head injury affecting him with him leaving the series by AscendingToAHigherPlaneOfExistence while never really mending his relationship with Finn, here the two still see each other but their relationship is simply strained because of Martin's recklessness.
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** Martin in canon was a caring father once to Finn but later on became a neglectful deadbeat, implied to be a result of a head injury affecting him with him leaving the series by AscendingToAHigherPlaneOfExistence while never really mending his relationship with Finn, here the two still see each other but their relationship is simply strained because of Martin's recklessness.recklessness and manipulative behavior.
** Per WordOfGod, Patience St. Pim will be completely absent from the story.
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* ChickMagnet: Finn quickly starts catching the eyes of various girls in Ooo, especially Princesses.
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* ChickMagnet: Finn quickly starts catching is this, both in the eyes of Founders Island and in Ooo, among the girls that have been attracted to him he's had are his childhood friend Sarah, various girls in Ooo, especially Princesses.other human girls, various princesses, Lumpy Space Princess, Marceline, Flame Princess and as of late, Huntress Wizard.
* FamedInStory: Marceline has become a legend among the descendants of the humans she saved, even if the details of her one-woman crusade against the vampires have become muddled due to the passing of time.
* FamedInStory: Marceline has become a legend among the descendants of the humans she saved, even if the details of her one-woman crusade against the vampires have become muddled due to the passing of time.
* IdenticalStranger: Sarah, Finn's human childhood friend, is a borderline dead ringer for a younger version of Betty; being a red-headed girls with glasses who dresses in a green shirt, but they aren't related.
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* InSpiteOfANail: A number of things end up happening more or less the same way as in canon despite Finn arriving in OOO close to two decades late.
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* InSpiteOfANail: A number of things end up happening more or less the same way as in canon despite Finn arriving in OOO close to two decades late. Not limited but including the plague on Hub Island, the Lich's escape, Flame Princess becoming the Queen of the Fire Kingdom and Cinnamon Bun becoming her knight, etc.
* MythologyGag:
** When Jake invites Finn over to eat references the Rainicorns' eating of humans and how they now only eat soy with human-like flavor while also mentioning Lady Rainicorn's parents.
** The Ice King scolds Gunter for trying to reach down to the dungeon where he's keeping the Lich prisoner and soaks him with a spray bottle when he won't listen to him. Likewise, the Lich is stated by Ice King to be trying to melt his prison just like he did in canon on the Citadel but is kept at bay by magic crystals continuously freezing him.
** When Jake invites Finn over to eat references the Rainicorns' eating of humans and how they now only eat soy with human-like flavor while also mentioning Lady Rainicorn's parents.
** The Ice King scolds Gunter for trying to reach down to the dungeon where he's keeping the Lich prisoner and soaks him with a spray bottle when he won't listen to him. Likewise, the Lich is stated by Ice King to be trying to melt his prison just like he did in canon on the Citadel but is kept at bay by magic crystals continuously freezing him.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: The Lich's escape in this timeline happened somewhat differently, and ultimately the Ice King managed to seal him away by freezing him and keeping the frozen Lich hidden in his Kingdom.
* OlderAndWiser: One of the main plot points for the fic's alternate canon is how Finn arrives on Ooo when he's already an older teenager/young adult and has had a normal upbringing in the Founders Island; thus he is able to avoid various pratfalls his canon self had.
* OlderAndWiser: One of the main plot points for the fic's alternate canon is how Finn arrives on Ooo when he's already an older teenager/young adult and has had a normal upbringing in the Founders Island; thus he is able to avoid various pratfalls his canon self had.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: The Lich's escape in this timeline happened somewhat differently, differently with Princess Bubblegum having to get Billy out of retirement and later enlisting Marceline, the Ice King, Jake and Flame Princess to aid her cause, it ended with Billy's death and ultimately the Ice King managed to seal him the Lich away by freezing him and keeping the frozen Lich hidden in his Kingdom.
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* OlderAndWiser: One of the main plot points for the fic's alternate canon is how Finn arrives on Ooo when he's already an older teenager/young adult and has had a normal upbringing in the FoundersIsland; thus Island thus, he is able to avoid various pratfalls his canon self had.
* OlderAndWiser: One of the main plot points for the fic's alternate canon is how Finn arrives on Ooo when he's already an older teenager/young adult and has had a normal upbringing in the Founders
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* SkewedPriorities: When the Lich broke out, Jake was among the many allies Princess Bubblegum recruited but he failed to be of help because he decided to take a snack break amidst the chaos, driving the Princess and Peppermint Butler to not trust him much.
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* AmicableExes: Finn ends up like this with both of his first girlfriends [[spoiler:Marceline and Flame Princess, a notable case with FP as unlike his initially frosty relationship post-breakup with the latter in canon the two split over much less harsh terms.]]
* GreaterScopeVillain:
** The Lich might be frozen and trapped in the Ice Kingdom rendering him unable to cause ruin and death as he wishes, but he isn't truly dealt with yet and still plans on achieving his goals any way he can, [[spoiler:primarily by attempting to manipulate Finn and then Gunter/Orgalorg to join his side.]]
** On a more humorous note, the one who hired Scorcher to assassinate Princess Bubblegum is none other than [[spoiler:Lemongrab]], who like [[MythologyGag Ice]] [[CallBack King]] had no idea of what a hitman actually was about. They only show up near the end as a closing joke.
** The Lich might be frozen and trapped in the Ice Kingdom rendering him unable to cause ruin and death as he wishes, but he isn't truly dealt with yet and still plans on achieving his goals any way he can, [[spoiler:primarily by attempting to manipulate Finn and then Gunter/Orgalorg to join his side.]]
** On a more humorous note, the one who hired Scorcher to assassinate Princess Bubblegum is none other than [[spoiler:Lemongrab]], who like [[MythologyGag Ice]] [[CallBack King]] had no idea of what a hitman actually was about. They only show up near the end as a closing joke.
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Just like in canon, [[spoiler:the Lich tries and contact Finn to get him to aid his goals, though this time he hints towards Finn's nature as a reincarnation of the Catalyst Comet in an attempt to get him to listen to his advice. All while still imprisoned]]
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* WeCanRuleTogether: WeCanRuleTogether:
** Just like in canon, [[spoiler:the Lich tries and contact Finn to get him to aid his goals, though this time he hints towards Finn's nature as a reincarnation of the Catalyst Comet in an attempt to get him tolisten to join his advice.side, even referring to him as a "brother" since he too is a Catalyst Comet reincarnation's. All while still imprisoned]]
** Just like in canon, [[spoiler:the Lich tries and contact Finn to get him to aid his goals, though this time he hints towards Finn's nature as a reincarnation of the Catalyst Comet in an attempt to get him to
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* AdaptationalHeroism: The Ice King stopped being a villain as early as Season 3 but in this fic he stops being one as soon as he shows up and Finn meets him, since the latter feels sympathy for him and helps him move on from his princess-kidnapping ways much earlier.
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* AdaptedOut: The original Enchiridion plotline has been completely eschewed thanks to the events' divergence, primarily because of Finn only arriving at Ooo much later.
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* AdaptedOut: AdaptedOut:
** Because he died here long before Finn came to Ooo, Billy never encountered his successor and Finn only learns of his existence and deeds once he arrives in Ooo.
** The original Enchiridion plotline has been completely eschewed thanks to the events' divergence, primarily because of Finn only arriving at Ooo much later.
** Because he died here long before Finn came to Ooo, Billy never encountered his successor and Finn only learns of his existence and deeds once he arrives in Ooo.
** The original Enchiridion plotline has been completely eschewed thanks to the events' divergence, primarily because of Finn only arriving at Ooo much later.
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* ItsNotYouItsMe: The reason Phoebe [[spoiler:breaks up with Finn, she feels that as long as her emotions are thrown out of wack by her feelings for Finn she will be a danger to everyone and even her boyfriend so she ends things after the rather recent incident of thinking Finn didn't trust her.]]
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* ItsNotYouItsMe: The This is the reason Phoebe [[spoiler:breaks up with Finn, she feels that as long as her emotions are thrown out of wack by her feelings for Finn she will be a danger to everyone and even her boyfriend boyfriend, so she ends things for both their safeties after the rather recent incident of thinking Finn didn't trust her.her about her innocence in Scorcher's attempted assassination of PB.]]
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* PosthumousCharacter: Billy has already passed away by the start of the fic so he never meets Finn in the flesh.
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* PosthumousCharacter: Billy has already passed away long since died at the hands of the Lich by the start of the fic so he never meets Finn in the flesh.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: The Ice King stopped being a villain as early as Season 3 but in this fic he stops being one as soon as he shows up and Finn meets him, since the latter feels sympathy for him and helps him move on from his princess-kidnapping ways much earlier.
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* AdaptationalContextChange: Finn enters a relationship with Flame Princess and ends getting dumped by her here like in canon, but while in the show it was due to Finn manipulating FP into fighting Ice King to satisfy a strange dream he had here [[spoiler:she breaks up with him due to FP realizing that her feelings for Finn drive her to irrational anger after she came to believe that Finn thought she'd been the one to hire Scorcher to kill PB.]]
* AdaptationalHeroism: The Ice King stopped being a villain as early as Season 3 but in this fic he stops being one as soon as he shows up and Finn meets him, since the latter feels sympathy for him and helps him move on from his princess-kidnapping ways much earlier.
* AdaptationalHeroism: The Ice King stopped being a villain as early as Season 3 but in this fic he stops being one as soon as he shows up and Finn meets him, since the latter feels sympathy for him and helps him move on from his princess-kidnapping ways much earlier.
* AdaptedOut: The original Enchiridion plotline has been completely eschewed thanks to the events' divergence, primarily because of Finn only arriving at Ooo much later.
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** Shoko in the show only appeared twice in major roles and was fully gone by her second appearance. Here, Finn accesses her memories and discovers her past much earlier and she acts as a [[SpiritAdvisor ghostly companion]] to Finn and is one of the fic's major characters.
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** Shoko in the show only appeared twice in major roles and was fully gone by her second appearance. besides cameos or pictures. Here, Finn accesses her memories and discovers her past much earlier and she acts as a [[SpiritAdvisor ghostly companion]] to Finn and is one of the fic's major characters.characters even getting to take part in the action.
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* ChickMagnet: Finn quickly starts catching the eyes of various girls in OOO, especially Princesses.
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* ChickMagnet: Finn quickly starts catching the eyes of various girls in OOO, Ooo, especially Princesses.
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* ItsNotYouItsMe: The reason Phoebe [[spoiler:breaks up with Finn, she feels that as long as her emotions are thrown out of wack by her feelings for Finn she will be a danger to everyone and even her boyfriend so she ends things after the rather recent incident of thinking Finn didn't trust her.]]
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* NoodleIncident: Apparently, the Ice King once hired Scorcher to "hit" Jake for whatever reason, unlike in canon where he had to fool Scorcher by freezing the intended target the latter relented from his hit due to the payment Ice King was going to give him not going through.
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** He later [[spoiler:begins temping Gunter (AKA [[PlanetDestroyer Orgalorg]]) instead.]]
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* AdaptationalUpbringingChange: Finn was raised by Minerva on Founders Island here, since he and Martin wound up washing back onto Founders Island during the day where Martin tried to escape his enemies with him. Martin also forms a part of his life, though much more strained with Finn than Minerva.
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* AscendedExtra:
** Shoko in the show only appeared twice in major roles and was fully gone by her second appearance. Here, Finn accesses her memories and discovers her past much earlier and she acts as a [[SpiritAdvisor ghostly companion]] to Finn and is one of the fic's major characters.
** NEPTR was constantly absent in the series and his frequent absence was made fun of throughout the series, here he is a much more recurring character and even joins Finn's group in his expedition back to Founders Island.
** Shoko in the show only appeared twice in major roles and was fully gone by her second appearance. Here, Finn accesses her memories and discovers her past much earlier and she acts as a [[SpiritAdvisor ghostly companion]] to Finn and is one of the fic's major characters.
** NEPTR was constantly absent in the series and his frequent absence was made fun of throughout the series, here he is a much more recurring character and even joins Finn's group in his expedition back to Founders Island.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: The Ice King stopped being a villain as early as Season 3 but in this fic he stops being one as soon as he shows up and Finn meets him, since the latter feels sympathy for him and helps him move on from his princess-kidnapping ways much earlier.
* OlderAndWiser: One of the main plot points for the fic's alternate canon is how Finn arrives on Ooo when he's already an older teenager/young adult and has had a normal upbringing in the Founders Island; thus he is able to avoid various pratfalls his canon self had.
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Just like in Canon, [[spoiler:the Lich tries and contact Finn to get him to aid his goals, though this time he hints towards Finn's nature as a reincarnation of the Catalyst Comet in an attempt to get him to listen to his advice. All while still imprisoned]]
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* WeCanRuleTogether: Just like in Canon, canon, [[spoiler:the Lich tries and contact Finn to get him to aid his goals, though this time he hints towards Finn's nature as a reincarnation of the Catalyst Comet in an attempt to get him to listen to his advice. All while still imprisoned]]
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* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul:
** In canon Finn and Marceline stayed entirely as friends and never really developed feelings for one another. Here Marceline becomes Finn's FirstLove [[spoiler:though they end up breaking up.]]
** Finn at first hated the Ice King for kidnapping princesses and threatening him and Jake in his attempts to befriend them and it took finding out his past as Simon Petrikov for the two to become friends, here Finn initially goes to stop the Ice King but upon seeing how miserable he is begins to take pity on him earlier on and the Ice King becomes one of his earliest friends.
** Martin in canon was a caring father once to Finn but later on became a neglectful deadbeat, implied to be a result of a head injury affecting him with him leaving the series by AscendingToAHigherPlaneOfExistence while never really mending his relationship with Finn, here the two still see each other but their relationship is simply strained because of Martin's recklessness.
** In canon Finn and Marceline stayed entirely as friends and never really developed feelings for one another. Here Marceline becomes Finn's FirstLove [[spoiler:though they end up breaking up.]]
** Finn at first hated the Ice King for kidnapping princesses and threatening him and Jake in his attempts to befriend them and it took finding out his past as Simon Petrikov for the two to become friends, here Finn initially goes to stop the Ice King but upon seeing how miserable he is begins to take pity on him earlier on and the Ice King becomes one of his earliest friends.
** Martin in canon was a caring father once to Finn but later on became a neglectful deadbeat, implied to be a result of a head injury affecting him with him leaving the series by AscendingToAHigherPlaneOfExistence while never really mending his relationship with Finn, here the two still see each other but their relationship is simply strained because of Martin's recklessness.
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* ForWantOfANail: The main divergence between this timeline and the canon one is that Finn and Marten washed back up on the shores of the island rather than being swept out to sea and ending up in OOO.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: The Lich's escape in this timeline happened somewhat differently, and ultimately the Ice King managed to seal him away by freezing him.
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: The Lich's escape in this timeline happened somewhat differently, and ultimately the Ice King managed to seal him away by freezing him.him and keeping the frozen Lich hidden in his Kingdom.
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* RunningGag: People keep telling Finn [[spoiler: he is a necrophiliac for having sex with Marceline]]
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* PointOfDivergence: The main divergence between this timeline and the canon one is that Finn and Marten washed back up on the shores of the island rather than being swept out to sea and ending up in OOO.
* PosthumousCharacter: Billy has already passed away by the start of the fic so he never meets Finn in the flesh.
* RunningGag: People keep telling Finn [[spoiler: he is a necrophiliac for having sex withMarceline]]Marceline.]]
* SealedEvilInACan: The Lich broke out of his old amber prison but without Finn around the Ice King had to save the day by freezing him and sealing his prison in the depths of the Ice Kingdom, regardless [[spoiler:the Lich is still able to try and reach out to Finn.]]
* WeCanRuleTogether: Just like in Canon, [[spoiler:the Lich tries and contact Finn to get him to aid his goals, though this time he hints towards Finn's nature as a reincarnation of the Catalyst Comet in an attempt to get him to listen to his advice. All while still imprisoned]]
* PosthumousCharacter: Billy has already passed away by the start of the fic so he never meets Finn in the flesh.
* RunningGag: People keep telling Finn [[spoiler: he is a necrophiliac for having sex with
* SealedEvilInACan: The Lich broke out of his old amber prison but without Finn around the Ice King had to save the day by freezing him and sealing his prison in the depths of the Ice Kingdom, regardless [[spoiler:the Lich is still able to try and reach out to Finn.]]
* WeCanRuleTogether: Just like in Canon, [[spoiler:the Lich tries and contact Finn to get him to aid his goals, though this time he hints towards Finn's nature as a reincarnation of the Catalyst Comet in an attempt to get him to listen to his advice. All while still imprisoned]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13753015/1/Something-More Something More]] is an ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' fanfic where [[ForWantOfANail [[PointOfDivergence baby Finn and Martin got washed back to shore on the islands instead of being swept out to sea like in canon's timeline]], letting him grow up under his mother's watchful robotic eyes. But fate is not so easily deterred...
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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler:Dr. Gross meets her end by being impaled by Finn's sword.]]
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* ProperlyParanoid: In Chapter 35, LSP asks Finn and Jake to come to Lumpy Space with her to help protect her parents from an assassin. She turns out to be right to be worried, as Me-Mow is trying to kill them.
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* PastLifeMemories: Finn still has instinctive fighting skills despite having grown up on a peaceful island in this timeline, which turn out to be bleedover from his past life as Shoko.
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* PastLifeMemories: Finn still has instinctive fighting skills despite having grown up on a peaceful island in this timeline, which turn out to be bleedover from his past life as Shoko.Shoko. Later, he views her memories consciously.
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* ChickMagnet: Finn quickly starts catching the eyes of various girls in OOO, especially Princesses.
* ForWantOfANail: The main divergence between this timeline and the canon one is that Finn and Marten washed back up on the shores of the island rather than being swept out to sea and ending up in OOO.
* InSpiteOfANail: A number of things end up happening more or less the same way as in canon despite Finn arriving in OOO close to two decades late.
* LivingIsMoreThanSurviving: LSP mentions to Finn that it seems like the humans of the islands have been doing a lot of surviving but not much living, and Finn comes to agree.
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: The Lich's escape in this timeline happened somewhat differently, and ultimately the Ice King managed to seal him away by freezing him.
* PastLifeMemories: Finn still has instinctive fighting skills despite having grown up on a peaceful island in this timeline, which turn out to be bleedover from his past life as Shoko.
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* ChickMagnet: Finn quickly starts catching the eyes of various girls in OOO, especially Princesses.
* ForWantOfANail: The main divergence between this timeline and the canon one is that Finn and Marten washed back up on the shores of the island rather than being swept out to sea and ending up in OOO.
* InSpiteOfANail: A number of things end up happening more or less the same way as in canon despite Finn arriving in OOO close to two decades late.
* LivingIsMoreThanSurviving: LSP mentions to Finn that it seems like the humans of the islands have been doing a lot of surviving but not much living, and Finn comes to agree.
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: The Lich's escape in this timeline happened somewhat differently, and ultimately the Ice King managed to seal him away by freezing him.
* PastLifeMemories: Finn still has instinctive fighting skills despite having grown up on a peaceful island in this timeline, which turn out to be bleedover from his past life as Shoko.
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