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Deleting Break The Cutie misuse due to example having no context on The Cutie; Five Man Band is undergoing a wick-cleaning project, so zero-context examples, roles with little to no context, and examples featuring groups of more than five, will be deleted; Commenting out some ZCEs.
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* AlphaBitch: Bomber Jacket, Initially
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* BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler: Screwy in the last few chapters. She suffers internal hemorrhages of increasing severity whenever she tries to communicate normally. Narrowly averted in the end.]]
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* DeanBitterman: Principal Prunecrop is this in spades.
* DoggedNiceGuy: Red, to Cheerilee
* DoggedNiceGuy: Red, to Cheerilee
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* FiveManBand:
** TheLeader: Screwy
** TheLancer: Quest
** TheSmartGuy: Crunch
** TheBigGuy: Flip
** TheChick: Luster
** SixthRanger: Bomber
** TheLeader: Screwy
** TheLancer: Quest
** TheSmartGuy: Crunch
** TheBigGuy: Flip
** TheChick: Luster
** SixthRanger: Bomber
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* HighSchool
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* AbsentmindedProfessor - Red Glare is this with shades of CloudCuckoolander.
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* AbsentmindedProfessor - TheEighties: the story itself is a ShoutOut to ''Film/StandAndDeliver'' so this is only natural.
* AbsentmindedProfessor: Red Glare is this with shades of CloudCuckoolander.
* AbsentmindedProfessor: Red Glare is this with shades of CloudCuckoolander.
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* AdultsAreUseless - Since the festival goers don't believe Screwball's warnings, the students have to mount [[BigDamnHeroes the daring rescue]] [[spoiler: into the collapsed mine to save their trapped teachers and Sluice's father.]]
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* AdultsAreUseless - AdultsAreUseless: Since the festival goers don't believe Screwball's warnings, the students have to mount [[BigDamnHeroes the daring rescue]] [[spoiler: into the collapsed mine to save their trapped teachers and Sluice's father.]]
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* BuffySpeak: "You’re… good at the thing where you mix the words and the stuff and they do things in the brain.”
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* BuffySpeak: "You’re… "You're... good at the thing where you mix the words and the stuff and they do things in the brain.” "
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* CoolTeacher - Cheerilee, Golden Ratio, Globe Trotter and Red Glare all certainly qualify.
* DeanBitterman - Principal Prunecrop is this in spades.
* DeanBitterman - Principal Prunecrop is this in spades.
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* CoolTeacher - CoolTeacher: Cheerilee, Golden Ratio, Globe Trotter and Red Glare all certainly qualify.
*DeanBitterman - DeanBitterman: Principal Prunecrop is this in spades.
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* TheEighties - the story itself is a ShoutOut to ''Film/StandAndDeliver'' so this is only natural.
* EducationThroughPyrotechnics - Red Glare seems to be rather fond of this trope.
* FirstGuyWins - [[spoiler: Red Glare for Cheerilee.]]
* EducationThroughPyrotechnics - Red Glare seems to be rather fond of this trope.
* FirstGuyWins - [[spoiler: Red Glare for Cheerilee.]]
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* TheEighties - the story itself is a ShoutOut to ''Film/StandAndDeliver'' so this is only natural.
* EducationThroughPyrotechnics -EducationThroughPyrotechnics: Red Glare seems to be rather fond of this trope.
*FirstGuyWins - FirstGuyWins: [[spoiler: Red Glare for Cheerilee.]]
* EducationThroughPyrotechnics -
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** TheLeader- Screwy
** TheLancer- Quest
** TheSmartGuy – Crunch
** TheBigGuy- Flip
** TheChick – Luster
** SixthRanger- Bomber
* FundraiserCarnival - The plan Cheerilee comes up with to save the school.
** TheLancer- Quest
** TheSmartGuy – Crunch
** TheBigGuy- Flip
** TheChick – Luster
** SixthRanger- Bomber
* FundraiserCarnival - The plan Cheerilee comes up with to save the school.
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** TheLeader- TheLeader: Screwy
**TheLancer- TheLancer: Quest
**TheSmartGuy – TheSmartGuy: Crunch
**TheBigGuy- TheBigGuy: Flip
**TheChick – TheChick: Luster
**SixthRanger- SixthRanger: Bomber
*FundraiserCarnival - FundraiserCarnival: The plan Cheerilee comes up with to save the school.
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* InevitableWaterfall - Screwball and her friends face one [[spoiler:in the collapsed mine. While rafting on an underground river.]]
* InnerCitySchool - Naturally, as the school is located in Inner Canterlot.
* ManipulativeBastard - [[spoiler: Discord. He emotionally assaults Cheerilee during her darkest moments, creates a distraction in Ponyville which nearly holds up the element bearers and the princesses from helping the teachers when they are trapped in the mine, and tricks Celestia into believing he did it all to help Screwball, his "daughter"... who he in fact feels nothing but contempt for and is only using as a way of escaping his imprisonment, negating the elements binding of him. Clever bastard, eh?]]
* NoodleIncident - The Cutie Mark Crusader's escapades touched briefly on in the first chapter.
* InnerCitySchool - Naturally, as the school is located in Inner Canterlot.
* ManipulativeBastard - [[spoiler: Discord. He emotionally assaults Cheerilee during her darkest moments, creates a distraction in Ponyville which nearly holds up the element bearers and the princesses from helping the teachers when they are trapped in the mine, and tricks Celestia into believing he did it all to help Screwball, his "daughter"... who he in fact feels nothing but contempt for and is only using as a way of escaping his imprisonment, negating the elements binding of him. Clever bastard, eh?]]
* NoodleIncident - The Cutie Mark Crusader's escapades touched briefly on in the first chapter.
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* InevitableWaterfall - InevitableWaterfall: Screwball and her friends face one [[spoiler:in the collapsed mine. While rafting on an underground river.]]
*InnerCitySchool - InnerCitySchool: Naturally, as the school is located in Inner Canterlot.
*ManipulativeBastard - ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler: Discord. He emotionally assaults Cheerilee during her darkest moments, creates a distraction in Ponyville which nearly holds up the element bearers and the princesses from helping the teachers when they are trapped in the mine, and tricks Celestia into believing he did it all to help Screwball, his "daughter"... who he in fact feels nothing but contempt for and is only using as a way of escaping his imprisonment, negating the elements binding of him. Clever bastard, eh?]]
*NoodleIncident - NoodleIncident: The Cutie Mark Crusader's escapades touched briefly on in the first chapter.
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* SpeechImpediment - Screwball says the [[ConfusingMultipleNegatives exact opposite]] of what she means, and she's prone to using [[HulkSpeak third person]]. It is later revealed that [[spoiler:Discord created her this way on purpose.]] She can speak normally with a great effort of concentration, but it takes an [[BloodFromTheMouth enormous]] [[TearsOfBlood toll]] on her body to do so.
* SuckySchool - Unfortunately, Princess Luna's School For Disadvantaged Youngsters is not exactly up to scratch. The building itself being an old prison doesn't help matters much.
* TakeThat - One to Fanfic/PastSins.
* SuckySchool - Unfortunately, Princess Luna's School For Disadvantaged Youngsters is not exactly up to scratch. The building itself being an old prison doesn't help matters much.
* TakeThat - One to Fanfic/PastSins.
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* SpeechImpediment - SpeechImpediment: Screwball says the [[ConfusingMultipleNegatives exact opposite]] of what she means, and she's prone to using [[HulkSpeak third person]]. It is later revealed that [[spoiler:Discord created her this way on purpose.]] She can speak normally with a great effort of concentration, but it takes an [[BloodFromTheMouth enormous]] [[TearsOfBlood toll]] on her body to do so.
*SuckySchool - SuckySchool: Unfortunately, Princess Luna's School For Disadvantaged Youngsters is not exactly up to scratch. The building itself being an old prison doesn't help matters much.
*TakeThat - TakeThat: One to Fanfic/PastSins.''Fanfic/PastSins''.
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* SixStudentClique:
** The Head — Quest Talltale
** The Muscle — Flip Turnpage
** The Quirk — Screwball
** The Pretty One — Luster Shinebrick
** The Smart One — Crunch Tallymark
** The Wild One- Bomber Jacket
** The Head — Quest Talltale
** The Muscle — Flip Turnpage
** The Quirk — Screwball
** The Pretty One — Luster Shinebrick
** The Smart One — Crunch Tallymark
** The Wild One- Bomber Jacket
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* TheEighties - the story itself is a ShoutOut to StandAndDeliver so this is only natural.
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* TheEighties - the story itself is a ShoutOut to StandAndDeliver ''Film/StandAndDeliver'' so this is only natural.
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You can find it [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2432/School-Daze here]]. Its sequel, ''A Nightmare in Ponyville'' (in progress), can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/39063/A-Nightmare-in-Ponyville here]].
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You can find it [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2432/School-Daze here]]. Its sequel, ''A Nightmare in Ponyville'' (in progress), Ponyville'', can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/39063/A-Nightmare-in-Ponyville here]].
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* ShoutOut: Dozens of lines of dialogue are lines from 80's songs, especially Men at Work and Talking Heads.
* WaxingLyrical: Dozens of lines of dialogue are lines from 80's songs, especially Music/MenAtWork and Music/TalkingHeads.
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* YEAHShot: [[spoiler: There's an ending bro-hoof done with magical aid.]]
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* YEAHShot: [[spoiler: There's an ending bro-hoof done with magical aid.]]]]
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* SuckySchool - Unfortunately, Princess Luna's School For Disadvantaged Youngsters is not exactly up to scratch. The building itself being an old prison doesn't help matters much.
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* SuckySchool - Unfortunately, Princess Luna's School For Disadvantaged Youngsters is not exactly up to scratch. The building itself being an old prison doesn't help matters much. much.
* TakeThat - One to Fanfic/PastSins.
--> '''Celestia:''' Besides, does separating a youngster from her adopted mother for her father’s past sins really sound like something I’d do?
* TakeThat - One to Fanfic/PastSins.
--> '''Celestia:''' Besides, does separating a youngster from her adopted mother for her father’s past sins really sound like something I’d do?
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* AdaptationalBadass: Cherilee officially cements herself as one for bucking Discord in the face.
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* LesYay: [[spoiler: Word of God has it that the references to Lyra and Cheerilee's earlier relationship in college counts.]]
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The hero is no longer part of the five man band
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* As Himself: Running Dangerfield, who "gets no respect I tell ya."
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* As Himself: AsHimself: Running Dangerfield, who "gets no respect I tell ya."
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler: Averted: Cheerilee stays in Old Canterlot.]]
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler: Averted: Inverted: [[IChooseToStay Cheerilee stays in Old Canterlot.]] ]]]]
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** TheHero- Screwy
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** TheHero- TheLeader- Screwy
