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** Following the tradition of Saiyans being named after vegetables, minor character Zanar comes from zanahoria (carrot in Spanish), and Cabba's brother name is Suybe, from the same pun as Cabba in Japanese (kyabetsu). Minor characters Zukni and Mato are named after tomato and zucchini [[CriticalResearchFailure because the author thought they were vegetables.]]

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** Following the tradition of Saiyans being named after vegetables, minor character Zanar comes from zanahoria (carrot in Spanish), and Cabba's brother name is Suybe, from the same pun as Cabba in Japanese (kyabetsu). Minor characters Zukni and Mato are named after tomato and zucchini [[CriticalResearchFailure because the author thought they were vegetables.]]
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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Lampshaded with the author. He mistakenly called hovercars "spaceships" until the November rewrite, alongside other grammatical mistakes.

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* YouKeepUsingThatWord: Lampshaded with the author. He mistakenly called hovercars "spaceships" until the November rewrite, alongside other grammatical mistakes.----
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the Devil's Fruit.]]'' [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! [[/note]] is a fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. It is a [[AlternateUniverseFic alternate universe]] prequel to ''Anime/DragonBallSuper''.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the Devil's Fruit.]]'' [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! fruit!'' [[/note]] is a fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. It is a [[AlternateUniverseFic alternate universe]] prequel to ''Anime/DragonBallSuper''.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the Devil's fruit.]] [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! [[/note]] is a fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. It is a [[AlternateUniverseFic alternate universe]] prequel to Anime/DragonBallSuper.

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[[https://www.''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the Devil's fruit.]] Fruit.]]'' [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! [[/note]] is a fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. It is a [[AlternateUniverseFic alternate universe]] prequel to Anime/DragonBallSuper.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the Devil's fruit.]] [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! [[/note]] is a fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. Is a [[AlternateUniverseFic alternate universe]] prequel to Anime/DragonBallSuper.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the Devil's fruit.]] [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! [[/note]] is a fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. Is It is a [[AlternateUniverseFic alternate universe]] prequel to Anime/DragonBallSuper.
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** In March 2019, the author also took the time to rewrite chapter 2. The scenes with Cabba's parents were rewriten to include the characterization from the later chapters (a reporter and a NonActionGuy with lung problems), as they were {{Living Prop}}s in the original, and added the detail that the pet dinosaur was a feathered velociraptor. Likewise, the bully threatening Cabba with energy contradicted a later chapter where Cabba's school used a power limiter, so it was rewritten to just using his fists.

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** In March 2019, the author also took the time to rewrite chapter 2. The scenes with Cabba's parents were rewriten to include the characterization from the later chapters (a reporter and a NonActionGuy with lung problems), as they were {{Living Prop}}s in the original, and added the detail that the pet dinosaur was a feathered velociraptor. Likewise, the bully threatening Cabba with energy contradicted a later chapter where Cabba's school used a power limiter, so it was rewritten to just using his fists. A further update would include a line talking of said bully's background.
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** Cabba and Caulifla backstories [[OcStandIn are brand new], with them being [[TheRival rivals]], but them knowing each other as children is taken from a vague piece of dialogue from episode 88.

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** Cabba and Caulifla backstories [[OcStandIn are brand new], new]], with them being [[TheRival rivals]], but them knowing each other as children is taken from a vague piece of dialogue from episode 88.

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->-- '''Cabba's father, chapter 5'''


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->-- '''Cabba's father, father''', chapter 5'''

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* AdaptationExpansion: ''Sadala Chronicles'' expands very minor plot points from the [[Anime/DragonBallSuper source material]], and while it contradicts elements as an AlternateUniverseFic, it does try its best to remain faithful.
** Cabba and Caulifla backstories [[OcStandIn are brand new], with them being [[TheRival rivals]], but them knowing each other as children is taken from a vague piece of dialogue from episode 88.
--> '''Cabba:''' You mean Caulifla? No, there isn't a problem. But I'm not good with Caulifla.
** The author does acknowledge Cabba and Caulifla don't know each other in the manga in the author notes, but he remarks his criticism of Toyotaro's work and only took Caulifla's life as a bandit as her resolution in the ending.
** In the anime, Renso's leg injury was caused by unknown means. In the fanfic, it was caused by the terrorist attack done by the Crusher Corps, and [[spoiler: his healing cells not working as side-effect of the Tree of Might causing him to retire]].
** Cabba fighting alongside Frost on planet Mayone is shown in the epilogue against an OriginalCharacter named Manza, and why Cabba was chosen for the tournament of Champa. Them meeting Vados is also taken, with dialogue from ''Videogame/DragonBallXenoverse2''.
** Cabba taking Frost to the Galactic Patrol is adapted from a brief allusion in episode 71, although the episode states Cabba only told his testimony to the authorities.


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** Pirina is a Namekian fighter in the source material, with no ties to any of the characters. ''The Saiyan and the Devil's fruit'' turns him into a prisoner of the Galactic Patrol unjustly captured by Caulifla's aunt in the forces.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit "Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the Devil's fruit."]] [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! [[/note]] is a fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. Is a [[AlternateUniverseFic alternate universe]] prequel to ''Anime/DragonBallSuper''.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit "Sadala Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the Devil's fruit."]] ]] [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! [[/note]] is a fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. Is a [[AlternateUniverseFic alternate universe]] prequel to ''Anime/DragonBallSuper''.
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The fanfic started to get published in January, 2018 and finished publication in April, 2019. While an origin story for Cabba, it also serves as an adaptation of the concepts of ''Anime/DragonBallZTheTreeOfMight'' and ''Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug''. It received an epilogue that is a retelling of the [[Recap/DragonBallSuperChampaArc Champa saga]] from the [[PerspectiveFlip point of view of Cabba and Frost]].

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The fanfic started to get published in January, 2018 and finished publication in April, 2019. While an origin story for Cabba, it also serves as an adaptation of the concepts of ''Anime/DragonBallZTheTreeOfMight'' and ''Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug''. It received an epilogue that is a retelling of retells the events of [[Recap/DragonBallSuperChampaArc Champa saga]] from the [[PerspectiveFlip point of view of Cabba and Frost]].

Beware of spoilers.
spoilers. Despite the title, the story has nothing to do with the Devil Fruits from ''Manga/OnePiece''.
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** In the epilogue (part 5), when Cabba transforms into a Super Saiyan for the first time, his transformation is described as a sickly green color that quickly turned golden, like it happened to Vegeta in ''Anime/DragonBallSuperBroly''.

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** In the epilogue (part 5), when Cabba transforms into a Super Saiyan for the first time, his transformation is described as a sickly green color that quickly turned turns golden, like it happened to Vegeta in ''Anime/DragonBallSuperBroly''.
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* In the epilogue (part 5), when Cabba transforms into a Super Saiyan for the first time, his transformation is described as a sickly green color that quickly turned golden, like it happened to Vegeta in ''Anime/DragonBallSuperBroly''.

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* ** In the epilogue (part 5), when Cabba transforms into a Super Saiyan for the first time, his transformation is described as a sickly green color that quickly turned golden, like it happened to Vegeta in ''Anime/DragonBallSuperBroly''.

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** In the anime, Cabba seems to admire Frost, but it never stated he was inspired to be a hero because of him.

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** In the anime, Cabba seems to admire Frost, but it never stated he was inspired to be a hero because of him. [[spoiler: The fact Cabba transforms because, [[SurvivorGuilt among other reasons]], Frost's true nature is a plot point.]]


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* In the epilogue (part 5), when Cabba transforms into a Super Saiyan for the first time, his transformation is described as a sickly green color that quickly turned golden, like it happened to Vegeta in ''Anime/DragonBallSuperBroly''.
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* ChekhovsGunman: The coliseum referee (name's Das, by the way) mentions a rival named Brad in chapter 7. [[spoiler: he is the referee from the Tournament between Universe 7 and 6, and he recorded Frost confession of being the leader of the Space Pirates. ]]

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* ChekhovsGunman: The coliseum referee (name's Das, by the way) mentions a rival named Brad in chapter 7. [[spoiler: he He is the referee from the Tournament between Universe 7 and 6, and he recorded Frost confession of being the leader of the Space Pirates. ]]
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* AerithAndBob: The work follows the EdibleThemeNaming of ''Dragon Ball'', with all characters having names based on vegetables or other pieces of food. However, there is a character named Brad among everyone else.


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* ChekhovsGunman: The coliseum referee (name's Das, by the way) mentions a rival named Brad in chapter 7. [[spoiler: he is the referee from the Tournament between Universe 7 and 6, and he recorded Frost confession of being the leader of the Space Pirates. ]]

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Taura is killed off, and the Tree of Might is destroyed, allowing Cabba to archieve his dream of turning into a member of the Elite Saiyans and fight alongside Frost. [[TheBadGuyWins But Camelo achieve her goal of returning to the Demon Realm]], [[KarmaHoudini doesn't suffer consequences for her actions]], and due to her involvement Sadala and its army is crippled with at least one thousand individuals dying, with Cabba suffering SurvivorGuilt, Renso being arrested and Caulifla abandoning her home out of shame about her aunt.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: The ending of the main story, [[spoiler: Taura is killed off, and the Tree of Might is destroyed, allowing Cabba to archieve achieve his dream of turning into a member of the Elite Saiyans and fight alongside Frost. [[TheBadGuyWins But Camelo achieve her goal of returning to the Demon Realm]], [[KarmaHoudini doesn't suffer consequences for her actions]], and due to her involvement Sadala and its army is crippled with at least one thousand individuals dying, with Cabba suffering SurvivorGuilt, Renso being arrested and Caulifla abandoning her home out of shame about her aunt.]]
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* BookEnds: The story starts and ends with similar sentences about a victory against the space pirates. It starts with a young Cabba and Frost trusting each other, and it ends with Cabba [[spoiler:taking him to prison.]]
--> '''Chapter 1:''' ''The great hero held the kid in his arms while the cameras were capturing the moment for the history of the planet. The child was excited, with a great smile on his face. It wasn't every day the Emperor of the Universe personally visited Sadala and interacted with its citizens – as he usually came just for reunions with the king. This time though, he was with the small children and their parents – celebrating another victory in the war against the space pirates.''
--> '''Epilogue, final:''' ''The great faker was taken over by the same kid he thought he could manipulate, as the cameras of the Galactic headquarters were saving the moment for the history of the universe. The kid was nervous about what the future may hold, but it was rather exciting for him. It wasn't every day where the emperor of the universe was discovered to be a fraud, and the patrollers were arresting the man. In Cabba's mind though, he was more than happy - he was celebrating a true victory against the Space Pirates.''
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** The post-credits scene has Cabba talking about how Champa [[spoiler: traded the Yardrats with a fellow destroyer]] because she found them cute, and thought he was "beautiful", a nod to Universe 2.

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* CompositeCharacter: Taura is Turles analog, but she has a twin brother named Esparra. This is a combination of Turles with his minions, Rezun and Rakasei.
* DeadGuyJunior: In chapter 5, Cabba discovers that his uncle who died in battle shared his name, which makes him guess he was named after him.



* HiddenDepths: Cabba's biggest secret is that he enjoys reading romantic novels, with his favorite one being ''Romance of the shooting stars'', about a young dorky man and a shy girl who is possessed by a demon. He doesn't talk about it with anyone.
* LateArrivalSpoiler: Averted. [[spoiler: The story treats Frost as a complete heroic individual, despite his true nature as evil in the series until the very epilogue.]]

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* HiddenDepths: Cabba's biggest secret is that he enjoys reading romantic novels, with his favorite one being ''Romance of the shooting stars'', about a young dorky man and a shy girl who is possessed by a demon. He doesn't talk about it with anyone.
* LateArrivalSpoiler: Averted. [[spoiler: The story treats Frost as a complete heroic individual, despite his true nature as evil in the series until the very epilogue.]]



* SmugSuper: Caulifla, who with only being 8 years old claims to be the strongest Saiyan in the universe and considers the emperor of the universe a "wimp". Likewise, she never calls Cabba by name, telling him she will only do so if he beats her in combat.



** In the series, Cabba is simply a soldier from Sadala that was Vegeta's opponent during the Universe 6 saga. In the story, he is portrayed as a naive young man from a pretty mundane family trying to become a great soldier just like his childhood hero Frost, but with doubts about himself, and secretly liking romantic novels.

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** In the series, Cabba is simply a soldier warrior from Sadala that was Vegeta's opponent during the Universe 6 saga. In the story, he is portrayed as a naive young man from a pretty mundane family trying to become a great soldier just like his childhood hero Frost, but with doubts about himself, and secretly liking romantic novels.



** In March 2019, the author also took the time to rewrite chapter 2. The scenes with Cabba's parents were rewriten to include the characterization from the later chapters (a reporter and a NonActionGuy with lung problems), as they were {{Living Prop}}s in the original, and added the detail that the pet dinosaur was a feathered velociraptor. Likewise, the bully threatening Cabba with energy contradicted a later chapter where Cabba's school used a power limiter, so it was rewriten to just using his fists.
* OvershadowedByAwesome: Cabba, to everyone. The fact he is outclassed by Caulifla since they were kids saddens him.
---> ''While Cabba was able to participate, he couldn't help but feel somewhat helpless to hear such words. It was like all the time he invested in training for years were for naught, as he was going to be overshadowed by everyone else. Everyone would think of the eight times champion who worked directly with Frost, or the second place which fought alongside the Arlians in a war. Even a delinquent was better than him since they were toddlers. By contrast, he was just a kid, with no exceptional abilities except for some vague oddity or even a family name to hold into. He was normal, he was average, he was simply Cabba.''

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** In March 2019, the author also took the time to rewrite chapter 2. The scenes with Cabba's parents were rewriten to include the characterization from the later chapters (a reporter and a NonActionGuy with lung problems), as they were {{Living Prop}}s in the original, and added the detail that the pet dinosaur was a feathered velociraptor. Likewise, the bully threatening Cabba with energy contradicted a later chapter where Cabba's school used a power limiter, so it was rewriten rewritten to just using his fists.
* OvershadowedByAwesome: Cabba, to everyone. The fact he is outclassed by Caulifla since they were kids saddens him.
---> ''While Cabba was able to participate, he couldn't help but feel somewhat helpless to hear such words. It was like all the time he invested in training for years were for naught, as he was going to be overshadowed by everyone else. Everyone would think of the eight times champion who worked directly with Frost, or the second place which fought alongside the Arlians in a war. Even a delinquent was better than him since they were toddlers. By contrast, he was just a kid, with no exceptional abilities except for some vague oddity or even a family name to hold into. He was normal, he was average, he was simply Cabba.''
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* WouldntHitAGirl: Downplayed, Cabba tries to fight Caulifla, and manages to strike a punch in her face, but has trouble attacking her in general. Taura remarks that he needs to learn how to do so if he wants to be a soldier.
--> '''Taura:''' There is no shame in that!
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* DemotedtoExtra: Goku himself, who only appears in the epilogue, and his role during the rewrite fighting Botamo and Frost is given to Piccolo. His encounter with Hit is glossed over too, since Son Goku's conflict with Hit is not important to Cabba's CharacterDevelopment.

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* DemotedtoExtra: DemotedToExtra: Goku himself, who only appears in the epilogue, and his role during the rewrite fighting Botamo and Frost is given to Piccolo. His encounter with Hit is glossed over too, since Son Goku's conflict with Hit is not important to Cabba's CharacterDevelopment.

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The fanfic started to get published in January, 2018 and finished publication in April, 2019. While an origin story for Cabba, it also serves as an adaptation of the concepts of ''Anime/DragonBallZTheTreeOfMight'' and ''Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug''.

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The fanfic started to get published in January, 2018 and finished publication in April, 2019. While an origin story for Cabba, it also serves as an adaptation of the concepts of ''Anime/DragonBallZTheTreeOfMight'' and ''Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug''.
''Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug''. It received an epilogue that is a retelling of the [[Recap/DragonBallSuperChampaArc Champa saga]] from the [[PerspectiveFlip point of view of Cabba and Frost]].



* AlternateUniverseFic: The fanfic originally started as a PseudocanonicalFic, but it ended changing many events of the original story to the point it counts now as its own story.



* CallForward: In chapter 8, Vidalia slaps Cabba's hand and tells him she doesn't participate in the Coliseum games to make friends, just like Caulifla with Goku in the Tournament of Power. [[spoiler: Also counts as FiveSecondForeshadowing of Vidalia's real identity.]]

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In chapter 8, Vidalia slaps Cabba's hand and tells him she doesn't participate in the Coliseum games to make friends, just like Caulifla with Goku in the Tournament of Power. [[spoiler: Also counts as FiveSecondForeshadowing of Vidalia's real identity.]]]]
** In the epilogue, Vados mentions that Champa wanted to invite Dr.Rota to the tournament against Beerus, but she had to desist him from doing so.


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* DemotedtoExtra: Goku himself, who only appears in the epilogue, and his role during the rewrite fighting Botamo and Frost is given to Piccolo. His encounter with Hit is glossed over too, since Son Goku's conflict with Hit is not important to Cabba's CharacterDevelopment.


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* FixFic: The fanfic combine elements of both versions of the original ''Universe 6'' saga and is very faithful except for one thing: Piccolo is the first one to fight against Botamo, leaving Goku to only fight at the very end. The author has made clear in his notes that he hates Goku's original role in the saga.
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** In both versions, Cabba and Auta Magetta are never implied to know each other as they never interact in neither the anime or manga. In this tale, Cabba and Magetta are friends after meeting in the Meteor Desert, with Cabbain particular finding him as a sort of best friend.

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** In both versions, Cabba and Auta Magetta are never implied to know each other as they never interact in neither the anime or manga. In this tale, Cabba and Magetta are friends after meeting in the Meteor Desert, with Cabbain Cabba in particular finding him as a sort of best friend.
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** Esparra's fate. He disappeared one day and was found on a nameless planet, so nobody knows what happened to him. Renso remembers he was worried about something and went to investigate it, but then ended up dead. [[spoiler: Even after reviving, he doesn't remember how he ends up in a cave and ended up dying soon after, revealing nothing.]]

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** Esparra's fate. He disappeared one day and was found on a nameless planet, so nobody knows what happened to him. Renso remembers he was worried about something and went to investigate it, but then ended up dead. [[spoiler: Even after reviving, he doesn't remember how he ends up in a cave and ended ends up dying soon after, revealing nothing.]]

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit "Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the Devil's fruit."]] [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! [[/note]] is a fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. Is a [[AlternateUniverseFic alternate universe]] prequel to ''Anime/DragonBallSuper.''

The story deals with a young Cabba and his quest to become an elite member of the Sadala Forces entering into the Lad Sarced Coliseum games, motivated by his greatest hero: the emperor of the universe, Frost. However, it also deals with a case of a disappeared planet and its people, with the only clue being a mysterious spiky fruit which grants great power.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12797409/1/Sadala-Chronicles-The-Saiyan-and-the-devil-s-fruit "Sadala Chronicles: The Saiyan and the Devil's fruit."]] [[note]] Previously known as ''I'll become an Elite Hero! The young Saiyan and the fruit! [[/note]] is a fanfic published by [=TrueUtopian=] about Cabba, the Saiyan from Universe 6 and his origin on how he became an Elite member of the Sadala Army. Is a [[AlternateUniverseFic alternate universe]] prequel to ''Anime/DragonBallSuper.''

''Anime/DragonBallSuper''.

The story deals with a young Cabba and his quest to become an elite member of the Sadala Forces entering into the Lad Sarced Coliseum games, motivated by his greatest hero: the emperor of the universe, Frost. However, it also deals with a case of a disappeared planet and its people, with the only clue being a mysterious spiky fruit which grants great power.power found by the current champion of the Coliseum, Taura.



* AscendedExtra: Renso and Auta Magetta. The author admits to liking the steel giant.

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* AscendedExtra: Renso, Auta Magetta and Pirina. While Renso was a vital part in the recruitment of Caulifla in the anime, both Magetta and Auta Magetta. The author admits to liking the steel giant.Pirina were rather minor members of Team Universe 6 in both tournaments.



* AdaptationAmalgamation: The fanfic originally started only as an adaptation of ''Anime/DragonBallZTheTreeOfMight'' due to the use of the Tree of Might and Turles as a character, but later chapters started to implement elements from ''Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug'' due to the creation of Lusk, a Slug analog.

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The fanfic originally started only as an adaptation of ''Anime/DragonBallZTheTreeOfMight'' due to the use of the Tree of Might and Turles as a character, but later chapters started to implement elements from ''Anime/DragonBallZLordSlug'' due to the creation of Lusk, a Slug analog.analog.
** In turn, the fanfic started to borrow ideas and characterization for the Universe 6 characters from both the anime and manga continuities of ''Dragon Ball Super'', alongside some ideas and interpretations from ''Videogame/DragonBallXenoverse2''.



* BeigeProse: ''Sadala Chronicles'' is narrated with very little descriptions, with many characters barely being described, and an abundance of dialogue.

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* BeigeProse: ''Sadala Chronicles'' is narrated with very little descriptions, with many characters barely being described, and an abundance of dialogue. Occasionally turns into PurpleProse.



** In the series, Cabba is simply a soldier from Sadala that was Vegeta's opponent during the Universe 6 saga. In the story, he is potrayed as a naive young man from a pretty mundane family trying to become a great soldier just like his childhood hero Frost, but with doubts about himself, and secretly liking romantic novels.

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** In the series, Cabba is simply a soldier from Sadala that was Vegeta's opponent during the Universe 6 saga. In the story, he is potrayed portrayed as a naive young man from a pretty mundane family trying to become a great soldier just like his childhood hero Frost, but with doubts about himself, and secretly liking romantic novels.
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** The second part of the epilogue has Lord Sadala calling the concept of Saiyans from another universe "cheap" and critizing the use of RuleOfCool at the expense of [[CatharsisFactor meaning]]. While a [[SelfDeprecation form of deprecation]] towards ''Super'' and the Universe 6 Saiyans, is also a critique towards any fan story using similar ideas with the Saiyans (like ''Multiverse'' and some variations of ''AF'')

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** The second part of the epilogue has Lord Sadala calling the concept of Saiyans from another universe "cheap" and critizing the use of RuleOfCool at the expense of [[CatharsisFactor meaning]]. While a [[SelfDeprecation form of deprecation]] towards ''Super'' and the Universe 6 Saiyans, is also a critique towards any fan story using similar ideas with the Saiyans (like ''Multiverse'' and some variations of ''AF'')''AF'')[[invoked]]

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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: There are some changes to the source.

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