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A cloning disaster puts Ritsuko on a new path...and gives her a second chance to make things right.
[[TagLine "To Know Her Is]] [[ComicBook/SpiderWoman To Fear]] [[ShoutOut Her!"]]
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4449889/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-Treacherous-Web Superwomen of Eva: Treacherous Web]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1439178/orionpax09 orionpax09]] is another of the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' stories set in his Creator/MarvelComics-based [[FusionFic fusion]] FanVerse.
Ritsuko Akagi, beginning to become disgusted with her work for Gendo Ikari, keeps on going because of her powerlessness. This all changes one day, though, when an experiment with a Rei clone body is tainted by a [[Franchise/SpiderMan little]] [[ComicBook/SpiderWoman spider...]]
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!!Tropes:
* AmazonianBeauty: Ritsuko becomes quite muscular when in "Spider-Woman" mode. At least once or twice this makes people feel attracted to her in the story (and on one Omake, it pretty much makes [[SempaiKohai Maya]] break out into a LesYay confession right then and there).
* BreastExpansion: As commonly happens in the Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva stories (''especially'' [[AuthorAppeal those written by Orionpax09]]), a side-effect of Ritsuko's genetic modification is a distinct increase in her breast size. One of the first things she notes about herself after getting over the shock of seeing she has fangs and claws is that she is at ''least'' as busty as Misato now.
* BrokenBird: Gendo's untimely death has the side-effect of tossing Shinji into a pretty deep depression. Ritsuko's attempts to liven his life (as best as she can) are a recurring plot point.
* ClothesMakeTheSuperman: A variation. Ritsuko devises a nanotechnology ComicBook/SpiderWoman costume which can retract and deploy from a wristwatch (in a ShoutOut to ''WesternAnimation/SpiderManUnlimited''), plus changing into a number of alternate modes (like additional armor) on vocal command.
* CompositeCharacter: Ritsuko's abilities are a mixture of Spider-Man 2099, the Sam Raimi film's Spider-Man and the various versions of Spider-Woman (mostly Jessica Drew, the extra limbs of Mattie Franklin).
* ComicBook/{{Deadpool}}: Hired by ComicBook/TheKingpin to try to take out Ritsuko, he rampages through Tokyo-3 for a couple of chapters, in a brutal mix of CrazyEnoughToWork and KickTheDog (for example, threatening the kids of Tokyo-3 High (and Shinji) to draw her out). Ritsuko kills him as DeaderThanDead as she can at the end of his arc, but well, we know how hard is it for it to ''take''...
* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Both the fact that Gendo (regardless of what {{Fanon}} may say [[TheStationsOfTheCanon or how important he is to the series canon]]) is just a normal man who can get killed by a superhuman if caught completely unprepared, and the fact that killing him does ''not'' automatically makes things easier to ''anybody''.
* EatingSolvesEverything: After killing Gendo, Ritsuko is presented with the problem of what to do about Adam, since she knows that letting the First Angel fall back into [=SEELE's=] hands is just asking for trouble. In desperation, she falls back on a crazy scheme: she ''eats'' the embryonic Angel. It's justified that she had conducted study on her now-venomous saliva and deduced it was lethally toxic to Angels, but it's also lampshaded that it was a desperate and rather crazy idea. It also gives Ritsuko a wicked case of gaseous indigestion.
* HowDoIShotWeb: Ritsuko spends a nice chapter or two figuring out just what her new physical abilities are, and that includes how to use her new organic webbing spinnerets.
* InSpiteOfANail: Killing Gendo Ikari has neither lessened the threat that series TheManBehindTheMan Seele is nor has changed the fact that the Angels are coming (and in the same order as canon, as well). This is one of the biggest things that teach Ritsuko [[ComesGreatResponsibility what all other spider-powered Marvel heroes have learned]].
* LateArrivalSpoiler: Ritsuko killing Gendo and eating Adam happens about halfway through the third chapter, so subsequent chapters can't help but give these facts away.
* MultiArmedAndDangerous: Ritsuko gets four "spider-legs" when she's ComicBook/SpiderWoman, which can be used as full-on hands.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The first thing Ritsuko decides to do once she has a grip on her spider-powers? Kill Gendo Ikari and eat Adam. Bad news, though: the DNA of Adam is interacting weirdly with her own, painting a big target on her back for the Angels to see during their rampages ([[RunningGag and giving her a rampaging case]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking of indigestion]])... and worse yet, this gives Seele free reign to place [[ComicBook/TheKingpin Wilson Fisk]] as their puppet liaison, ComicBook/NormanOsborn as their puppet commander.... and neither of them nor Alistair Smythe (Ritsuko's replacement as the head of Tech Division) have the [[EvenEvilHasStandards standards]] ([[PetTheDog however]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack few]]) that Gendo had...
* NoKillLikeOverkill: Gendo's lethal injuries (see [[RasputinianDeath the Rasputinian Death entry below]]) would have ''each'' been lethal on their own; combined, they would have been enough to kill him ''several times over''.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: When Kaji is about to report on Gendo's death, he acts completely serious the entire time.
* OffTheRails: Most other ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' stories keep [[MagnificentBastard Gendo]] as a BigBad for the superwomen to defeat. With no idea that a superwoman even exists up until she attacks him in his bedroom with full intent to kill and thus no preparedness, he becomes a [[DiscOneFinalBoss Disc One]] ZeroEffortBoss. Of course, look above to see [[NiceJobBreakingItHero how bad]] [[ForWantOfANail that]] [[InSpiteOfANail idea turned out]]...
* RasputinianDeath: Ritsuko went into a blind rage when getting revenge on Gendo, and it shows in just how thoroughly she killed him.
-->Taking in a deep breath, Kaji answered, "Well, according to the medics, Gendo could have died in several ways. His skull was crushed, his neck shattered, his skin had been ripped apart by some kind of cutting tools, he had been stabbed repeatedly, his lungs were punctured, his right forearm has been torn apart and shattered, and..." Once again, Kaji sucked in a deep breath as his gaze once again went to Shinji. "And there was some king of neuro-toxin present in his system. In large enough quantities to cause complete paralysis of the muscles, including the heart."
* ShoutOut:
** As mentioned above, Ritsuko's ComicBook/SpiderWoman outfit (and the super-science behind it) owes a lot to the ''WesternAnimation/SpiderManUnlimited'' series.
** Kanji's recitation of Gendo's fatal injuries is very similar to the coroner's report on Gramps Johnson from ''Film/{{Them}}''.
* TheyWouldCutYouUp: One of Ritsuko's initial fears upon discovering her Spider-powers and not knowing that she can "turn them off". Later on, upon [[NiceJobBreakingItHero unwillingly throwing Rei to the wolves]] by saying that the Angels may be detecting her half-Angel status and thus their rampages are not exactly going as expected (by chasing after Ritsuko, who ''was'' close to Rei at the time), Osborn and Fisk immediately order Ritsuko to dissect Rei to find out the details of why is this happening-which Ritsuko has to talk her way out of preventing for a while.
* TooSpicyForYogSothoth: Downplayed for comedy. Eating Adam gives Ritsuko a ''wicked'' case of gaseous indigestion, which she justifies to a concerned Misato as being a result of eating at a very poor quality greasy spoon diner the previous evening. She's still suffering the occasional stomachache several days later, to her surprised dismay.
* WeirdnessMagnet / SupernaturallyDeliciousAndNutritious / MagneticPlotDevice: Ritsuko swallowing ADAM has an unexpected secondary effect: that of becoming a beacon for the Angels to chase after, desperate to merge with ADAM... and her, as collateral damage. As well, the fact that the Angels can feel her when she's in Spider-Woman mode (and she is not going to ''stop'' being Spider-Woman) makes saving other people during an Angel rampage a chore.
* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To Be Spiders?]]: Ritsuko is shown to be arachnophobic early in the story, and as empowering as her augmentations are, every time she concentrates [[ByThePowerOfGrayskull to change into Spider-Woman]], she pictures spiders, and the narrative constantly mentions that it disgusts her.
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[[TagLine "To Know Her Is]] [[ComicBook/SpiderWoman To Fear]] [[ShoutOut Her!"]]
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4449889/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-Treacherous-Web Superwomen of Eva: Treacherous Web]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1439178/orionpax09 orionpax09]] is another of the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' stories set in his Creator/MarvelComics-based [[FusionFic fusion]] FanVerse.
Ritsuko Akagi, beginning to become disgusted with her work for Gendo Ikari, keeps on going because of her powerlessness. This all changes one day, though, when an experiment with a Rei clone body is tainted by a [[Franchise/SpiderMan little]] [[ComicBook/SpiderWoman spider...]]
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!!Tropes:
* AmazonianBeauty: Ritsuko becomes quite muscular when in "Spider-Woman" mode. At least once or twice this makes people feel attracted to her in the story (and on one Omake, it pretty much makes [[SempaiKohai Maya]] break out into a LesYay confession right then and there).
* BreastExpansion: As commonly happens in the Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva stories (''especially'' [[AuthorAppeal those written by Orionpax09]]), a side-effect of Ritsuko's genetic modification is a distinct increase in her breast size. One of the first things she notes about herself after getting over the shock of seeing she has fangs and claws is that she is at ''least'' as busty as Misato now.
* BrokenBird: Gendo's untimely death has the side-effect of tossing Shinji into a pretty deep depression. Ritsuko's attempts to liven his life (as best as she can) are a recurring plot point.
* ClothesMakeTheSuperman: A variation. Ritsuko devises a nanotechnology ComicBook/SpiderWoman costume which can retract and deploy from a wristwatch (in a ShoutOut to ''WesternAnimation/SpiderManUnlimited''), plus changing into a number of alternate modes (like additional armor) on vocal command.
* CompositeCharacter: Ritsuko's abilities are a mixture of Spider-Man 2099, the Sam Raimi film's Spider-Man and the various versions of Spider-Woman (mostly Jessica Drew, the extra limbs of Mattie Franklin).
* ComicBook/{{Deadpool}}: Hired by ComicBook/TheKingpin to try to take out Ritsuko, he rampages through Tokyo-3 for a couple of chapters, in a brutal mix of CrazyEnoughToWork and KickTheDog (for example, threatening the kids of Tokyo-3 High (and Shinji) to draw her out). Ritsuko kills him as DeaderThanDead as she can at the end of his arc, but well, we know how hard is it for it to ''take''...
* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Both the fact that Gendo (regardless of what {{Fanon}} may say [[TheStationsOfTheCanon or how important he is to the series canon]]) is just a normal man who can get killed by a superhuman if caught completely unprepared, and the fact that killing him does ''not'' automatically makes things easier to ''anybody''.
* EatingSolvesEverything: After killing Gendo, Ritsuko is presented with the problem of what to do about Adam, since she knows that letting the First Angel fall back into [=SEELE's=] hands is just asking for trouble. In desperation, she falls back on a crazy scheme: she ''eats'' the embryonic Angel. It's justified that she had conducted study on her now-venomous saliva and deduced it was lethally toxic to Angels, but it's also lampshaded that it was a desperate and rather crazy idea. It also gives Ritsuko a wicked case of gaseous indigestion.
* HowDoIShotWeb: Ritsuko spends a nice chapter or two figuring out just what her new physical abilities are, and that includes how to use her new organic webbing spinnerets.
* InSpiteOfANail: Killing Gendo Ikari has neither lessened the threat that series TheManBehindTheMan Seele is nor has changed the fact that the Angels are coming (and in the same order as canon, as well). This is one of the biggest things that teach Ritsuko [[ComesGreatResponsibility what all other spider-powered Marvel heroes have learned]].
* LateArrivalSpoiler: Ritsuko killing Gendo and eating Adam happens about halfway through the third chapter, so subsequent chapters can't help but give these facts away.
* MultiArmedAndDangerous: Ritsuko gets four "spider-legs" when she's ComicBook/SpiderWoman, which can be used as full-on hands.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The first thing Ritsuko decides to do once she has a grip on her spider-powers? Kill Gendo Ikari and eat Adam. Bad news, though: the DNA of Adam is interacting weirdly with her own, painting a big target on her back for the Angels to see during their rampages ([[RunningGag and giving her a rampaging case]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking of indigestion]])... and worse yet, this gives Seele free reign to place [[ComicBook/TheKingpin Wilson Fisk]] as their puppet liaison, ComicBook/NormanOsborn as their puppet commander.... and neither of them nor Alistair Smythe (Ritsuko's replacement as the head of Tech Division) have the [[EvenEvilHasStandards standards]] ([[PetTheDog however]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack few]]) that Gendo had...
* NoKillLikeOverkill: Gendo's lethal injuries (see [[RasputinianDeath the Rasputinian Death entry below]]) would have ''each'' been lethal on their own; combined, they would have been enough to kill him ''several times over''.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: When Kaji is about to report on Gendo's death, he acts completely serious the entire time.
* OffTheRails: Most other ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' stories keep [[MagnificentBastard Gendo]] as a BigBad for the superwomen to defeat. With no idea that a superwoman even exists up until she attacks him in his bedroom with full intent to kill and thus no preparedness, he becomes a [[DiscOneFinalBoss Disc One]] ZeroEffortBoss. Of course, look above to see [[NiceJobBreakingItHero how bad]] [[ForWantOfANail that]] [[InSpiteOfANail idea turned out]]...
* RasputinianDeath: Ritsuko went into a blind rage when getting revenge on Gendo, and it shows in just how thoroughly she killed him.
-->Taking in a deep breath, Kaji answered, "Well, according to the medics, Gendo could have died in several ways. His skull was crushed, his neck shattered, his skin had been ripped apart by some kind of cutting tools, he had been stabbed repeatedly, his lungs were punctured, his right forearm has been torn apart and shattered, and..." Once again, Kaji sucked in a deep breath as his gaze once again went to Shinji. "And there was some king of neuro-toxin present in his system. In large enough quantities to cause complete paralysis of the muscles, including the heart."
* ShoutOut:
** As mentioned above, Ritsuko's ComicBook/SpiderWoman outfit (and the super-science behind it) owes a lot to the ''WesternAnimation/SpiderManUnlimited'' series.
** Kanji's recitation of Gendo's fatal injuries is very similar to the coroner's report on Gramps Johnson from ''Film/{{Them}}''.
* TheyWouldCutYouUp: One of Ritsuko's initial fears upon discovering her Spider-powers and not knowing that she can "turn them off". Later on, upon [[NiceJobBreakingItHero unwillingly throwing Rei to the wolves]] by saying that the Angels may be detecting her half-Angel status and thus their rampages are not exactly going as expected (by chasing after Ritsuko, who ''was'' close to Rei at the time), Osborn and Fisk immediately order Ritsuko to dissect Rei to find out the details of why is this happening-which Ritsuko has to talk her way out of preventing for a while.
* TooSpicyForYogSothoth: Downplayed for comedy. Eating Adam gives Ritsuko a ''wicked'' case of gaseous indigestion, which she justifies to a concerned Misato as being a result of eating at a very poor quality greasy spoon diner the previous evening. She's still suffering the occasional stomachache several days later, to her surprised dismay.
* WeirdnessMagnet / SupernaturallyDeliciousAndNutritious / MagneticPlotDevice: Ritsuko swallowing ADAM has an unexpected secondary effect: that of becoming a beacon for the Angels to chase after, desperate to merge with ADAM... and her, as collateral damage. As well, the fact that the Angels can feel her when she's in Spider-Woman mode (and she is not going to ''stop'' being Spider-Woman) makes saving other people during an Angel rampage a chore.
* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To Be Spiders?]]: Ritsuko is shown to be arachnophobic early in the story, and as empowering as her augmentations are, every time she concentrates [[ByThePowerOfGrayskull to change into Spider-Woman]], she pictures spiders, and the narrative constantly mentions that it disgusts her.
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[[TagLine "To Know Her Is]] [[ComicBook/SpiderWoman To Fear]] [[ShoutOut Her!"]]
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4449889/1/Superwomen-of-Eva-Treacherous-Web Superwomen of Eva: Treacherous Web]]'' by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1439178/orionpax09 orionpax09]] is another of the ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' stories set in his Creator/MarvelComics-based [[FusionFic fusion]] FanVerse.
Ritsuko Akagi, beginning to become disgusted with her work for Gendo Ikari, keeps on going because of her powerlessness. This all changes one day, though, when an experiment with a Rei clone body is tainted by a [[Franchise/SpiderMan little]] [[ComicBook/SpiderWoman spider...]]
----
!!Tropes:
* AmazonianBeauty: Ritsuko becomes quite muscular when in "Spider-Woman" mode. At least once or twice this makes people feel attracted to her in the story (and on one Omake, it pretty much makes [[SempaiKohai Maya]] break out into a LesYay confession right then and there).
* BreastExpansion: As commonly happens in the Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva stories (''especially'' [[AuthorAppeal those written by Orionpax09]]), a side-effect of Ritsuko's genetic modification is a distinct increase in her breast size. One of the first things she notes about herself after getting over the shock of seeing she has fangs and claws is that she is at ''least'' as busty as Misato now.
* BrokenBird: Gendo's untimely death has the side-effect of tossing Shinji into a pretty deep depression. Ritsuko's attempts to liven his life (as best as she can) are a recurring plot point.
* ClothesMakeTheSuperman: A variation. Ritsuko devises a nanotechnology ComicBook/SpiderWoman costume which can retract and deploy from a wristwatch (in a ShoutOut to ''WesternAnimation/SpiderManUnlimited''), plus changing into a number of alternate modes (like additional armor) on vocal command.
* CompositeCharacter: Ritsuko's abilities are a mixture of Spider-Man 2099, the Sam Raimi film's Spider-Man and the various versions of Spider-Woman (mostly Jessica Drew, the extra limbs of Mattie Franklin).
* ComicBook/{{Deadpool}}: Hired by ComicBook/TheKingpin to try to take out Ritsuko, he rampages through Tokyo-3 for a couple of chapters, in a brutal mix of CrazyEnoughToWork and KickTheDog (for example, threatening the kids of Tokyo-3 High (and Shinji) to draw her out). Ritsuko kills him as DeaderThanDead as she can at the end of his arc, but well, we know how hard is it for it to ''take''...
* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Both the fact that Gendo (regardless of what {{Fanon}} may say [[TheStationsOfTheCanon or how important he is to the series canon]]) is just a normal man who can get killed by a superhuman if caught completely unprepared, and the fact that killing him does ''not'' automatically makes things easier to ''anybody''.
* EatingSolvesEverything: After killing Gendo, Ritsuko is presented with the problem of what to do about Adam, since she knows that letting the First Angel fall back into [=SEELE's=] hands is just asking for trouble. In desperation, she falls back on a crazy scheme: she ''eats'' the embryonic Angel. It's justified that she had conducted study on her now-venomous saliva and deduced it was lethally toxic to Angels, but it's also lampshaded that it was a desperate and rather crazy idea. It also gives Ritsuko a wicked case of gaseous indigestion.
* HowDoIShotWeb: Ritsuko spends a nice chapter or two figuring out just what her new physical abilities are, and that includes how to use her new organic webbing spinnerets.
* InSpiteOfANail: Killing Gendo Ikari has neither lessened the threat that series TheManBehindTheMan Seele is nor has changed the fact that the Angels are coming (and in the same order as canon, as well). This is one of the biggest things that teach Ritsuko [[ComesGreatResponsibility what all other spider-powered Marvel heroes have learned]].
* LateArrivalSpoiler: Ritsuko killing Gendo and eating Adam happens about halfway through the third chapter, so subsequent chapters can't help but give these facts away.
* MultiArmedAndDangerous: Ritsuko gets four "spider-legs" when she's ComicBook/SpiderWoman, which can be used as full-on hands.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The first thing Ritsuko decides to do once she has a grip on her spider-powers? Kill Gendo Ikari and eat Adam. Bad news, though: the DNA of Adam is interacting weirdly with her own, painting a big target on her back for the Angels to see during their rampages ([[RunningGag and giving her a rampaging case]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking of indigestion]])... and worse yet, this gives Seele free reign to place [[ComicBook/TheKingpin Wilson Fisk]] as their puppet liaison, ComicBook/NormanOsborn as their puppet commander.... and neither of them nor Alistair Smythe (Ritsuko's replacement as the head of Tech Division) have the [[EvenEvilHasStandards standards]] ([[PetTheDog however]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack few]]) that Gendo had...
* NoKillLikeOverkill: Gendo's lethal injuries (see [[RasputinianDeath the Rasputinian Death entry below]]) would have ''each'' been lethal on their own; combined, they would have been enough to kill him ''several times over''.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: When Kaji is about to report on Gendo's death, he acts completely serious the entire time.
* OffTheRails: Most other ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' stories keep [[MagnificentBastard Gendo]] as a BigBad for the superwomen to defeat. With no idea that a superwoman even exists up until she attacks him in his bedroom with full intent to kill and thus no preparedness, he becomes a [[DiscOneFinalBoss Disc One]] ZeroEffortBoss. Of course, look above to see [[NiceJobBreakingItHero how bad]] [[ForWantOfANail that]] [[InSpiteOfANail idea turned out]]...
* RasputinianDeath: Ritsuko went into a blind rage when getting revenge on Gendo, and it shows in just how thoroughly she killed him.
-->Taking in a deep breath, Kaji answered, "Well, according to the medics, Gendo could have died in several ways. His skull was crushed, his neck shattered, his skin had been ripped apart by some kind of cutting tools, he had been stabbed repeatedly, his lungs were punctured, his right forearm has been torn apart and shattered, and..." Once again, Kaji sucked in a deep breath as his gaze once again went to Shinji. "And there was some king of neuro-toxin present in his system. In large enough quantities to cause complete paralysis of the muscles, including the heart."
* ShoutOut:
** As mentioned above, Ritsuko's ComicBook/SpiderWoman outfit (and the super-science behind it) owes a lot to the ''WesternAnimation/SpiderManUnlimited'' series.
** Kanji's recitation of Gendo's fatal injuries is very similar to the coroner's report on Gramps Johnson from ''Film/{{Them}}''.
* TheyWouldCutYouUp: One of Ritsuko's initial fears upon discovering her Spider-powers and not knowing that she can "turn them off". Later on, upon [[NiceJobBreakingItHero unwillingly throwing Rei to the wolves]] by saying that the Angels may be detecting her half-Angel status and thus their rampages are not exactly going as expected (by chasing after Ritsuko, who ''was'' close to Rei at the time), Osborn and Fisk immediately order Ritsuko to dissect Rei to find out the details of why is this happening-which Ritsuko has to talk her way out of preventing for a while.
* TooSpicyForYogSothoth: Downplayed for comedy. Eating Adam gives Ritsuko a ''wicked'' case of gaseous indigestion, which she justifies to a concerned Misato as being a result of eating at a very poor quality greasy spoon diner the previous evening. She's still suffering the occasional stomachache several days later, to her surprised dismay.
* WeirdnessMagnet / SupernaturallyDeliciousAndNutritious / MagneticPlotDevice: Ritsuko swallowing ADAM has an unexpected secondary effect: that of becoming a beacon for the Angels to chase after, desperate to merge with ADAM... and her, as collateral damage. As well, the fact that the Angels can feel her when she's in Spider-Woman mode (and she is not going to ''stop'' being Spider-Woman) makes saving other people during an Angel rampage a chore.
* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To Be Spiders?]]: Ritsuko is shown to be arachnophobic early in the story, and as empowering as her augmentations are, every time she concentrates [[ByThePowerOfGrayskull to change into Spider-Woman]], she pictures spiders, and the narrative constantly mentions that it disgusts her.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The first thing Ritsuko decides to do once she has a grip on her spider-powers? Kill Gendo Ikari and eat Adam. Bad news, though: the DNA of Adam is interacting weirdly with her, painting a big target on her back for the Angels to see during their rampages ([[RunningGag and a rampaging case]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking of indigestion]])... and worse yet, this gives Seele free reign to place [[ComicBook/TheKingpin Wilson Fisk]] as their puppet liaison, ComicBook/NormanOsborn as their puppet commander.... and neither of them nor Alistair Smythe (Ritsuko's replacement as the head of Tech Division) have the [[EvenEvilHasStandards standards]] ([[PetTheDog however]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack few]]) that Gendo had...
* NoKillLikeOverkill: Gendo's lethal injuries (see [[RasputinianDeath the Rasputinian Death entry below]]) would have ''each'' been lethal on their own; combined would have been enough to kill him ''several times over''.
* NoKillLikeOverkill: Gendo's lethal injuries (see [[RasputinianDeath the Rasputinian Death entry below]]) would have ''each'' been lethal on their own; combined would have been enough to kill him ''several times over''.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The first thing Ritsuko decides to do once she has a grip on her spider-powers? Kill Gendo Ikari and eat Adam. Bad news, though: the DNA of Adam is interacting weirdly with her, her own, painting a big target on her back for the Angels to see during their rampages ([[RunningGag and giving her a rampaging case]] [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking of indigestion]])... and worse yet, this gives Seele free reign to place [[ComicBook/TheKingpin Wilson Fisk]] as their puppet liaison, ComicBook/NormanOsborn as their puppet commander.... and neither of them nor Alistair Smythe (Ritsuko's replacement as the head of Tech Division) have the [[EvenEvilHasStandards standards]] ([[PetTheDog however]] [[ALighterShadeOfBlack few]]) that Gendo had...
* NoKillLikeOverkill: Gendo's lethal injuries (see [[RasputinianDeath the Rasputinian Death entry below]]) would have ''each'' been lethal on their own;combined combined, they would have been enough to kill him ''several times over''.
* NoKillLikeOverkill: Gendo's lethal injuries (see [[RasputinianDeath the Rasputinian Death entry below]]) would have ''each'' been lethal on their own;
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* TooSpicyForYogSothoth: Downplayed for comedy. Eating Adam gives Ritsuko a ''wicked'' case of gaseous indigestion, which she justifies to a concerned Misato as being a result of eating at a very poor quality greasy spoon diner the previous evening.
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* TooSpicyForYogSothoth: Downplayed for comedy. Eating Adam gives Ritsuko a ''wicked'' case of gaseous indigestion, which she justifies to a concerned Misato as being a result of eating at a very poor quality greasy spoon diner the previous evening. She's still suffering the occasional stomachache several days later, to her surprised dismay.
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* BreastExpansion: As commonly happens in the Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva stories (''especially'' [[AuthorAppeal those written by Orionpax09]]), a side-effect of Ritsuko's genetic modification is a distinct increase in her breast size. One of the first things she notes about herself after getting over the shock of seeing she has fangs and claws is that she is at ''least'' as busty as Misato now.
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* HowDoIShotWeb: Ritsuko spends a nice chapter or two figuring out just that.
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* EatingSolvesEverything: After killing Gendo, Ritsuko is presented with the problem of what to do about Adam, since she knows that letting the First Angel fall back into [=SEELE's=] hands is just asking for trouble. In desperation, she falls back on a crazy scheme: she ''eats'' the embryonic Angel. It's justified that she had conducted study on her now-venomous saliva and deduced it was lethally toxic to Angels, but it's also lampshaded that it was a desperate and rather crazy idea. It also gives Ritsuko a wicked case of gaseous indigestion.
* HowDoIShotWeb: Ritsuko spends a nice chapter or two figuring out justthat.what her new physical abilities are, and that includes how to use her new organic webbing spinnerets.
* HowDoIShotWeb: Ritsuko spends a nice chapter or two figuring out just
* LateArrivalSpoiler: Ritsuko kills Gendo and eats Adam happens about halfway through the third chapter, so subsequent chapters can't help but give these facts away.
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* ShoutOut: As mentioned above, Ritsuko's ComicBook/SpiderWoman outfit (and the super-science behind it) owes a lot to the ''WesternAnimation/SpiderManUnlimited'' series.
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** As mentioned above, Ritsuko's ComicBook/SpiderWoman outfit (and the super-science behind it) owes a lot to the ''WesternAnimation/SpiderManUnlimited''series.series.
** Kanji's recitation of Gendo's fatal injuries is very similar to the coroner's report on Gramps Johnson from ''Film/{{Them}}''.
** As mentioned above, Ritsuko's ComicBook/SpiderWoman outfit (and the super-science behind it) owes a lot to the ''WesternAnimation/SpiderManUnlimited''
** Kanji's recitation of Gendo's fatal injuries is very similar to the coroner's report on Gramps Johnson from ''Film/{{Them}}''.
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* TooSpicyForYogSothoth: Downplayed for comedy. Eating Adam gives Ritsuko a ''wicked'' case of gaseous indigestion, which she justifies to a concerned Misato as being a result of eating at a very poor quality greasy spoon diner the previous evening.
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* DroppedABridgeOnHim: Both the fact that Gendo (regardless of what {{Fanon}} may say [[TheStationsOfTheCanon or how important he is to the series canon]]) is just a normal man who can get killed by a superhuman if caught completely unprepared, and the fact that killing him does ''not'' automatically makes things easier to ''anybody''.
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* OffTheRails: Most other ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' stories keep [[MagnificentBastard Gendo]] as a BigBad for the superwomen to defeat. With no idea that a superwoman even exists up until she attacks him in his bedroom with full intent to kill and thus no preparedness, [[RealityEnsues he becomes]] a [[DiscOneFinalBoss Disc One]] ZeroEffortBoss. Of course, look above to see [[NiceJobBreakingItHero how bad]] [[ForWantOfANail that]] [[InSpiteOfANail idea turned out]]...
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* OffTheRails: Most other ''Fanfic/SuperwomenOfEva'' stories keep [[MagnificentBastard Gendo]] as a BigBad for the superwomen to defeat. With no idea that a superwoman even exists up until she attacks him in his bedroom with full intent to kill and thus no preparedness, [[RealityEnsues he becomes]] becomes a [[DiscOneFinalBoss Disc One]] ZeroEffortBoss. Of course, look above to see [[NiceJobBreakingItHero how bad]] [[ForWantOfANail that]] [[InSpiteOfANail idea turned out]]...
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* RealityEnsues: Both the fact that Gendo (regardless of what {{Fanon}} may say [[TheStationsOfTheCanon or how important he is to the series canon]]) is just a normal man who can get killed by a superhuman if caught completely unprepared, and the fact that killing him does ''not'' automatically makes things easier to ''anybody''.
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* ComicBook/{{Deadpool}}: Hired by ComicBook/TheKingpin to try to take out Ritsuko, he rampages through Tokyo-3 for a couple of chapters, in a brutal mix of CrazyAwesome and KickTheDog (for example, threatening the kids of Tokyo-3 High (and Shinji) to draw her out). Ritsuko kills him as DeaderThanDead as she can at the end of his arc, but well, we know how hard is it for it to ''take''...
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* ComicBook/{{Deadpool}}: Hired by ComicBook/TheKingpin to try to take out Ritsuko, he rampages through Tokyo-3 for a couple of chapters, in a brutal mix of CrazyAwesome CrazyEnoughToWork and KickTheDog (for example, threatening the kids of Tokyo-3 High (and Shinji) to draw her out). Ritsuko kills him as DeaderThanDead as she can at the end of his arc, but well, we know how hard is it for it to ''take''...
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* SelfDemonstrating/{{Deadpool}}: Hired by ComicBook/TheKingpin to try to take out Ritsuko, he rampages through Tokyo-3 for a couple of chapters, in a brutal mix of CrazyAwesome and KickTheDog (for example, threatening the kids of Tokyo-3 High (and Shinji) to draw her out). Ritsuko kills him as DeaderThanDead as she can at the end of his arc, but well, we know how hard is it for it to ''take''...
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* SelfDemonstrating/{{Deadpool}}: ComicBook/{{Deadpool}}: Hired by ComicBook/TheKingpin to try to take out Ritsuko, he rampages through Tokyo-3 for a couple of chapters, in a brutal mix of CrazyAwesome and KickTheDog (for example, threatening the kids of Tokyo-3 High (and Shinji) to draw her out). Ritsuko kills him as DeaderThanDead as she can at the end of his arc, but well, we know how hard is it for it to ''take''...
