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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11261684/1/Rotting-Camellias Rotting Camellias]] is a Music/{{Vocaloid}} fanfic by masterofthefictionalyard. Based off of the song ''Dark Woods Circus'', it tells the story of a high school student named Miku who visits a strange circus. It's dark from the beginning, but she can't help being entranced by it. While there, she sees many strange acts, including a fortune-teller with a vague message and a tattered brown tent full of frightening freaks. But what really shocks her is the finale of the main act, where she is entranced by the enigmatic ringmaster and a mournful singer in a cage, covered in flowers. When she goes to investigate further, [[spoiler: the singer dies before her eyes, and Miku is captured and put into her cage. As her body begins to sprout its own flowers, she must find out what is happening to her and why.]]
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* {{Yandere}}: Rin, in particular, seems to have shades of this towards her brother and Meiko. [[spoiler: Tei is shown to have some yandere tendencies, too, when she threatens Miku for interrupting her time watching Len. But the true embodiment of this trope is Mayu, who, in one of the very last chapters, kills Cul when Meiko shows her more love.]]
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* {{Yandere}}: Rin, in particular, seems to have shades of this towards her brother and Meiko. [[spoiler: Tei is shown to have some yandere tendencies, too, when she threatens Miku for interrupting her time watching Len. But the true embodiment of this trope is Mayu, who, in one of the very last chapters, kills Cul when Meiko shows her more love.]]]]
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* DiesWideOpen: [[spoiler: Lily]]
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* MadOracle: Mew is this in spades.
* [[spoiler: MaybeEverAfter: At the end of the fic, it seems likely that Miku and Luka are going to get together, but it's understandably very tentative.]]
* MonsterClown: There are four of them: Teto, Tei, Ruko, and Ritsu.
* MadOracle: Mew is this in spades.
* [[spoiler: MaybeEverAfter: At the end of the fic, it seems likely that Miku and Luka are going to get together, but it's understandably very tentative.]]
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* RepulsiveRingmaster: Meiko.
* RedStringOfFate: A reoccurring theme in this story.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11261684/1/Rotting-Camellias Rotting Camellias]] is a {{Vocaloid}} fanfic by masterofthefictionalyard. Based off of the song ''Dark Woods Circus'', it tells the story of a high school student named Miku who visits a strange circus. It's dark from the beginning, but she can't help being entranced by it. While there, she sees many strange acts, including a fortune-teller with a vague message and a tattered brown tent full of frightening freaks. But what really shocks her is the finale of the main act, where she is entranced by the enigmatic ringmaster and a mournful singer in a cage, covered in flowers. When she goes to investigate further, [[spoiler: the singer dies before her eyes, and Miku is captured and put into her cage. As her body begins to sprout its own flowers, she must find out what is happening to her and why.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11261684/1/Rotting-Camellias Rotting Camellias]] is a {{Vocaloid}} Music/{{Vocaloid}} fanfic by masterofthefictionalyard. Based off of the song ''Dark Woods Circus'', it tells the story of a high school student named Miku who visits a strange circus. It's dark from the beginning, but she can't help being entranced by it. While there, she sees many strange acts, including a fortune-teller with a vague message and a tattered brown tent full of frightening freaks. But what really shocks her is the finale of the main act, where she is entranced by the enigmatic ringmaster and a mournful singer in a cage, covered in flowers. When she goes to investigate further, [[spoiler: the singer dies before her eyes, and Miku is captured and put into her cage. As her body begins to sprout its own flowers, she must find out what is happening to her and why.]]
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* ImAHumanitarian: Kaito is implied to be one, although he acts more like an animal than a human.
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* ImAHumanitarian: Kaito is implied to be one, although he acts more like an animal than a human. [[spoiler: It is confirmed in later chapters that he is fed the bodies of the dead divas.]]
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* DyingDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler: The former diva dedicates her final song to her love and tells Miku that she's "glad she got to see her face" before dying.]]
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* DyingDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler: The former diva dedicates her final song to her love and tells Miku that she's "glad she got to see her face" before dying. Later in the fic, Miki gets one of these for Lily, as well.]]
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* {{Synchronization}}: [[spoiler: At the climax, Miku is able to trick Meiko into cursing a double of herself instead of Luka. This causes both the double and Meiko to rot away and die.]]
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* {{Yandere}}: Rin, in particular, seems to have shades of this towards her brother and Meiko. [[spoiler: Anyone who is familiar with vocaloid lore might wonder about Tei and Mayu, as well ...]]
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* {{Yandere}}: Rin, in particular, seems to have shades of this towards her brother and Meiko. [[spoiler: Anyone who is familiar with vocaloid lore might wonder about Tei and is shown to have some yandere tendencies, too, when she threatens Miku for interrupting her time watching Len. But the true embodiment of this trope is Mayu, as well ...who, in one of the very last chapters, kills Cul when Meiko shows her more love.]]
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* [[spoiler: MayberEverAfter: At the end of the fic, it seems likely that Miku and Luka are going to get together, but it's understandably very tentative.]]
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* BlackMagic: Meiko seems to be a master of this.
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* [[spoiler: PastLifeMemories: Miku's dreams of Luka turn out to be this.]]
* RedStringOfFate: A reoccurring theme in this story.
* [[spoiler: ReincarnationRomance: Of the star-crossed variety. Miku snuck into the circus to find the pink-haired diva. She died, Miku took her place, and now Luka is getting closer, and seems doomed to repeat Miku and become the next diva.]]
* RedStringOfFate: A reoccurring theme in this story.
* [[spoiler: ReincarnationRomance: Of the star-crossed variety. Miku snuck into the circus to find the pink-haired diva. She died, Miku took her place, and now Luka is getting closer, and seems doomed to repeat Miku and become the next diva.]]
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* AxCrazy: Mayu is probably this, given the nature of the circus.
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* DissonantSerenity: Haku and Neru have this. Also Mew, to a lesser extent.
* DreamingOfTimesGoneBy: Miku has dreams of [[spoiler: being in love with a beautiful girl named Luka, who seemed to be in love with both her and Meiko.]]
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* DissonantSerenity: Len, Haku and Neru all have this. Also Mew, to a lesser extent.
* DreamingOfTimesGoneBy: Miku has dreams of [[spoiler: being in love with a beautiful girl named Luka, who seemed to be in love with both her and Meiko. With Miki's help, she eventually finds out that these dreams really happened long ago, with another mage named Miku.]]
* DreamingOfTimesGoneBy: Miku has dreams of [[spoiler: being in love with a beautiful girl named Luka, who seemed to be in love with both her and Meiko. With Miki's help, she eventually finds out that these dreams really happened long ago, with another mage named Miku.]]
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* NightmareFuelStationAttendant: Some of the circus members come across as this.
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* NightmareFuelStationAttendant: Some of the circus members come across as this. Special mention goes to Mayu, who is all cheer and smiles [[spoiler: while throwing knives at her stuffed rabbit and threatening to kill Miku for not singing]], but this trope could easily apply to many of the other characters, like Teto and Rin.
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* {{I'm a Humanitarian}}: Kaito is implied to be one, although he acts more like an animal than a human.
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* AdaptionExpansion: While the fic takes much inspiration from the popular fan PV of the song, it gives a lot more background to the characters and doesn't follow every detail religiously. It's more of an expansion of the song itself, truthfully.
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* AdaptionExpansion: AdaptationExpansion: While the fic takes much inspiration from the popular fan PV of the song, it gives a lot more background to the characters and doesn't follow every detail religiously. It's more of an expansion of the song itself, truthfully.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11261684/1/Rotting-Camellias Rotting Camellias]] is a {{Vocaloid}} fanfic by masterofthefictionalyard. Based off of the song Dark Woods Circus, it tells the story of a high school student named Miku who visits a strange circus. It's dark from the beginning, but she can't help being entranced by it. While there, she sees many strange acts, including a fortune-teller with a vague message and a tattered brown tent full of frightening freaks. But what really shocks her is the finale of the main act, where she is entranced by the enigmatic ringmaster and a mournful singer in a cage, covered in flowers. When she goes to investigate further, [[spoiler: the singer dies before her eyes, and Miku is captured and put into her cage. As her body begins to sprout its own flowers, she must find out what is happening to her and why.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11261684/1/Rotting-Camellias Rotting Camellias]] is a {{Vocaloid}} fanfic by masterofthefictionalyard. Based off of the song Dark ''Dark Woods Circus, Circus'', it tells the story of a high school student named Miku who visits a strange circus. It's dark from the beginning, but she can't help being entranced by it. While there, she sees many strange acts, including a fortune-teller with a vague message and a tattered brown tent full of frightening freaks. But what really shocks her is the finale of the main act, where she is entranced by the enigmatic ringmaster and a mournful singer in a cage, covered in flowers. When she goes to investigate further, [[spoiler: the singer dies before her eyes, and Miku is captured and put into her cage. As her body begins to sprout its own flowers, she must find out what is happening to her and why.]]
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* ArcWords: ''Even if the sun was to vanish, and every star was to fall from the sky ...''
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* DreamingOfTimesGoneBy: Miku has dreams of [[spoiler: being in love with a beautiful girl named Luka,
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11261684/1/Rotting-Camellias Rotting Camellias]] is a {{Vocaloid}} fanfic by masterofthefictionalyard. Based off of the song Dark Woods Circus, it tells the story of a high school student named Miku who gets kidnapped by a strange circus. She is forced into a cage in a tattered brown freak tent, with a pair of two-headed twins on one side of her and a man who acts more like an animal on the other side of her. Other members of the circus are equally frightening, and no one seems surprised to see her locked up. Before long, strange magic causes her body to change in painful, grotesque ways, and she must unravel the secrets of what's happening while discovering who in the circus is a foe, and who might be a friend ...
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11261684/1/Rotting-Camellias Rotting Camellias]] is a {{Vocaloid}} fanfic by masterofthefictionalyard. Based off of the song Dark Woods Circus, it tells the story of a high school student named Miku who gets kidnapped by visits a strange circus. She is forced into It's dark from the beginning, but she can't help being entranced by it. While there, she sees many strange acts, including a cage in fortune-teller with a vague message and a tattered brown freak tent, with a pair tent full of two-headed twins on one side of frightening freaks. But what really shocks her and a man who acts more like an animal on is the other side of her. Other members finale of the circus are equally frightening, main act, where she is entranced by the enigmatic ringmaster and no one seems surprised a mournful singer in a cage, covered in flowers. When she goes to see investigate further, [[spoiler: the singer dies before her locked up. Before long, strange magic causes eyes, and Miku is captured and put into her cage. As her body begins to change in painful, grotesque ways, and sprout its own flowers, she must unravel the secrets of what's find out what is happening while discovering who in the circus is a foe, to her and who might be a friend ...
why.]]
* AxCrazy: Mayu is probably this, given the nature of the circus.
* BlackMagic: Meiko seems to be a master of this.
* BlackMagic: Meiko seems to be a master of this.
* BodyHorror: Everyone in the freak tent has shades of this. Also notable are Haku and Neru, who are supernaturally tall with long, spindly limbs.
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* CreepyCircusMusic: In the very first chapter, Miku is lured into the circus by the calliope music. When she hears it in later chapters, it sounds frightening and strange.
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* CreepyCircusMusic: In the very first chapter, Miku is lured into the circus by the calliope music. [[spoiler: When she hears it in later chapters, it sounds frightening and strange.]]
* CreepyDoll: Mayu has a stuffed rabbit named Mimi who she occasionally [[spoiler: throws knives at]].
* CreepyTwins: Miku thought of Rin and Len like this from the very first chapter, even before she knew the truth.
* DissonantSerenity: Haku and Neru have this. Also Mew, to a lesser extent.
* DreamingOfTimesGoneBy: Miku has dreams of [[spoiler: being in love with a beautiful girl named Luka,
* DyingDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler: The former diva dedicates her final song to her love and tells Miku that she's "glad she got to see her face" before dying.]]
* FortuneTeller: Mew.
* CreepyDoll: Mayu has a stuffed rabbit named Mimi who she occasionally [[spoiler: throws knives at]].
* CreepyTwins: Miku thought of Rin and Len like this from the very first chapter, even before she knew the truth.
* DissonantSerenity: Haku and Neru have this. Also Mew, to a lesser extent.
* DreamingOfTimesGoneBy: Miku has dreams of [[spoiler: being in love with a beautiful girl named Luka,
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* ConjoinedTwins: Rin and Len, [spoiler: although they weren't born that way ...]
* {{Contortionist}}: Miki.
* CreepyCircusMusic: In the very first chapter, Miku is lured into the circus by the calliope music. When she hears it in later chapters, it sounds frightening andstrange,strange.
* TheFreakshow: The tattered brown tent features one of these. Circus-goers don't go into the tent, however — instead, there are three peepholes in the side of the tent where they can look into the cages. The circus also features some side-show acts (such as a contortionist and a fire breather) that aren't advertised as freaks.
* MonsterClown: There are four of them: Teto, Tei, Ruko, and Ritsu.
* RepulsiveRingmaster: Meiko.
* KnifeThrowingAct: Mayu has one during the main act.
* {{Contortionist}}: Miki.
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* TheFreakshow: The tattered brown tent features one of these. Circus-goers don't go into the tent, however — instead, there are three peepholes in the side of the tent where they can look into the cages. The circus also features some side-show acts (such as a contortionist and a fire breather) that aren't advertised as freaks.
* MonsterClown: There are four of them: Teto, Tei, Ruko, and Ritsu.
* RepulsiveRingmaster: Meiko.
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* CircusofFear: The "Dark Woods Circus" even has a creepy sounding name. From there, it only gets more disturbing.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11261684/1/Rotting-Camellias Rotting Camellias]] is a {{Vocaloid}} fanfic by masterofthefictionalyard. Based off of the song Dark Woods Circus, it tells the story of a high school student named Miku who gets kidnapped by a strange circus. She is forced into a cage in a tattered brown freak tent, with a pair of two-headed twins on one side of her and a man who acts more like an animal on the other side of her. Other members of the circus are equally frightening, and no one seems surprised to see her locked up. Before long, strange magic causes her body to change in painful, grotesque ways, and she must unravel the secrets of what's happening while discovering who in the circus is a foe, and who might be a friend ...
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* CircusofFear: The "Dark Woods Circus" even has a creepy sounding name. From there, it only gets more disturbing.
* CreepyCircusMusic: In the very first chapter, Miku is lured into the circus by the calliope music. When she hears it in later chapters, it sounds frightening and strange,
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* CircusofFear: The "Dark Woods Circus" even has a creepy sounding name. From there, it only gets more disturbing.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11261684/1/Rotting-Camellias Rotting Camellias]] is a {{Vocaloid}} fanfic by masterofthefictionalyard.