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* DidntThinkThisThrough: Hawk Moth akumatizes Kagami without considering the fact that she’s angry at Adrien or that akumatization will cause her to kill him.
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* IdiotBall: Hawk Moth's idea to create a lethal akuma ''whose main target is his son'' was already a boneheaded decision, but this fic explores how [[RealityEnsues reality would ensue]] if she were to actually focus on her goal. [[spoiler: There's also how he tells Riposte that she killed "his son" before removing her powers without wiping her memories, giving Kagami information about his civilian identity.]]
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* IdiotBall: Hawk Moth's idea to create a lethal akuma ''whose main target is his son'' was already a boneheaded decision, but this fic explores how [[RealityEnsues reality would ensue]] the realistic outcomes if she were to actually focus on her goal. [[spoiler: There's also how he tells Riposte that she killed "his son" before removing her powers without wiping her memories, giving Kagami information about his civilian identity.]]
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler:Hawk Moth wishes for one of the two miraculous users closest to him (meaning Marinette or Kagami) to have the curse on his wife shifted onto them. What he doesn't realise from the way he worded his wish, is that "two closest" could easily refer to himself. The curse hits him as he has misused his powers the most and ends up comatose.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Marinette and Kagami are captured by Gabriel and Mayura and about to be sacrificed to revive Emilie. Then Adrien walks in on them, allowing Marinette to reveal his father's true nature; this catches Gabriel off guard enough to make him panic and make a poorly worded wish that sends him into a coma.]]
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* NearVillainVictory: [[spoiler:Marinette and Kagami are captured by Gabriel and Mayura and about to be sacrificed to revive Emilie. Then Adrien walks in on them, allowing Marinette to reveal his father's true nature; this catches Gabriel off guard enough to make him panic and make a poorly worded wish that sends him into a coma.]]
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* TheAtoner: Kagami seeks to restore her honor after she soiled it by [[spoiler:murdering Adrien under Hawk Moth's influence]].
* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Marinette and Kagami are captured by Gabriel and Mayura and about to be sacrificed to revive Emilie. Then Adrien walks in on them, allowing Marinette to reveal his father's true nature; this catches Gabriel off guard enough to make him panic and make a poorly worded wish that sends him into a coma.]]
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* {{Retcon}}: Chapter 3 folds canonical revelations about the Peacock Miraculous into the ''Smart Adversaries''' existing lore. [[spoiler:The Peacock Miraculous was damaged by Emilie's constant selfish use of it to maintain her youth and beauty, and Nathalie/Mayura is a separate character from Le Paon (Emilie's nom de guerre).]]
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* {{Retcon}}: Chapter 3 folds canonical revelations about the Peacock Miraculous into the ''Smart Adversaries''' Adversaries'' series' existing lore. [[spoiler:The Peacock Miraculous was damaged by Emilie's constant selfish use of it to maintain her youth and beauty, and Nathalie/Mayura is a separate character from Le Paon (Emilie's nom de guerre).]]]]
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Kagami's goal [[spoiler:as Chat Noir]] is to pay Hawk Moth back with interest for driving her to [[spoiler:murder a helpless Adrien]].
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Kagami's goal [[spoiler:as Chat Noir]] is to pay Hawk Moth back with interest for driving her to [[spoiler:murder a helpless Adrien]].
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* {{Cliffhanger}}: The second chapter ended with the cliffhanger of [[spoiler:Mayura introducing herself to Ladybug and Kagami!Chat.]] The cliffhanger is now resolved.
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** Thecliffhanger is now resolved.story ends with [[spoiler:Emilie walking in on her comatose husband, her husband's supervillain assistant, her enraged son, and two handcuffed teenage superheroes]].
* TheDogBitesBack: Like in ''Fanfic/SyrenSinks'', Kagami wants to settle the score with Hawk Moth after how he made them villains, [[spoiler:with Kagami's case being her killing Adrien as Riposte.]]
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* TheDogBitesBack: Like in ''Fanfic/SyrenSinks'', Kagami wants to settle the score with Hawk Moth after how he made them villains, [[spoiler:with Kagami's case being her killing Adrien as Riposte.]]
* IdiotBall: Hawk Moth's idea to create a lethal akuma ''whose main target is his son'' was already a boneheaded decision, but this fic explores how [[RealityEnsues reality would ensue]] if she were to actually focus on her goal. [[spoiler: There's also how he tells Riposte that she killed "his son" before removing her powers without wiping her memories, giving Kagami information about his civilian identity.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: MyGodWhatHaveIDone:
** Kagami is horrified when she realizes that [[spoiler:she murdered Adrien as Riposte. She offers to take up the Cat Miraculous so she can help Ladybug defeat Hawk Moth after what he caused.]]
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* TheDogBitesBack: Like in ''Fanfic/SyrenSinks'', Kagami wants to settle the score with Hawk Moth after how he made them villains, [[spoiler:with Kagami's case being her killing Adrien as Riposte.]]
* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler:Adrien's identity as Chat Noir is revealed after Plagg is forced out of his Miraculous due to his holder's death. Gabriel's identity as Hawk Moth is also revealed to Kagami when he tells Riposte that she killed "his son". Ladybug's identity is revealed to Kagami when they are both caught by Mayura]]
* WhatAnIdiot: Hawk Moth's idea to create a lethal akuma ''whose main target is his son'' was already a boneheaded decision, but this fic explores how [[RealityEnsues reality would ensue]] if she were to actually focus on her goal. [[spoiler: There's also how he told Riposte that she killed "his son" before removing her powers, giving Kagami information about his civilian identity.]]
* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler:Adrien's identity as Chat Noir is revealed after Plagg is forced out of his Miraculous due to his holder's death. Gabriel's identity as Hawk Moth is also revealed to Kagami when he tells Riposte that she killed "his son". Ladybug's identity is revealed to Kagami when they are both caught by Mayura]]
* WhatAnIdiot: Hawk Moth's idea to create a lethal akuma ''whose main target is his son'' was already a boneheaded decision, but this fic explores how [[RealityEnsues reality would ensue]] if she were to actually focus on her goal. [[spoiler: There's also how he told Riposte that she killed "his son" before removing her powers, giving Kagami information about his civilian identity.]]
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* TheDogBitesBack: Like in ''Fanfic/SyrenSinks'', Kagami wants to settle the score OffingTheOffspring: Indirect example. [[spoiler:Hawk Moth stupidly drives a girl with Hawk Moth after how he made them villains, [[spoiler:with Kagami's case being her killing a grudge against Adrien as Riposte.murderously berserk, with predictable results.]]
* {{Retcon}}: Chapter 3 folds canonical revelations about the Peacock Miraculous into the ''Smart Adversaries''' existing lore. [[spoiler:The Peacock Miraculous was damaged by Emilie's constant selfish use of it to maintain her youth and beauty, and Nathalie/Mayura is a separate character from Le Paon (Emilie's nom de guerre).]]
* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler:Adrien's identity as Chat Noir is revealed after Plagg is forced out of his Miraculous due to his holder's death. Gabriel's identity as Hawk Moth is also revealed to Kagami when he tells Riposte that she killed "his son". Ladybug's identity is revealed to Kagami when they are both caught byMayura]]
* WhatAnIdiot: Hawk Moth's idea to create a lethal akuma ''whose main target is his son'' was already a boneheaded decision, but this fic explores how [[RealityEnsues reality would ensue]] if she were to actually focus on her goal. [[spoiler: There's also how he told Riposte that she killed "his son" before removing her powers, giving Kagami information about his civilian identity.Mayura.]]
* {{Retcon}}: Chapter 3 folds canonical revelations about the Peacock Miraculous into the ''Smart Adversaries''' existing lore. [[spoiler:The Peacock Miraculous was damaged by Emilie's constant selfish use of it to maintain her youth and beauty, and Nathalie/Mayura is a separate character from Le Paon (Emilie's nom de guerre).]]
* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler:Adrien's identity as Chat Noir is revealed after Plagg is forced out of his Miraculous due to his holder's death. Gabriel's identity as Hawk Moth is also revealed to Kagami when he tells Riposte that she killed "his son". Ladybug's identity is revealed to Kagami when they are both caught by
* WhatAnIdiot: Hawk Moth's idea to create a lethal akuma ''whose main target is his son'' was already a boneheaded decision, but this fic explores how [[RealityEnsues reality would ensue]] if she were to actually focus on her goal. [[spoiler: There's also how he told Riposte that she killed "his son" before removing her powers, giving Kagami information about his civilian identity.
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* HeroKiller: Riposte ends up [[spoiler: killing Adrien, meaning that she's killed Chat Noir as well]].
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* BackFromTheDead: After Ladybug's cure, Adrien. [[spoiler: After a wish, his mother]].
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: The reason behind Mayura's ([[spoiler: Nathalie's]]) loyalty to Hawk Moth.
* [[spoiler: HeroKiller: Riposte ends up killing Adrien, meaning that she's killed Chat Noir as well.]]
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: The reason behind Mayura's ([[spoiler: Nathalie's]]) Mayura [[spoiler: (Nathalie)]] having loyalty to Hawk Moth.
*[[spoiler: HeroKiller: Riposte ends up [[spoiler: killing Adrien, meaning that she's killed Chat Noir as well.]]well]].
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* BackFromTheDead: After Ladybug's cure, Adrien. [[spoiler: After a wish, his mother]].
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Gabriel's carelessly worded wish [[spoiler: turns his wife's curse back on himself]].
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Gabriel's carelessly worded wish [[spoiler: turns his wife's curse back on himself]].
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* {{Cliffhanger}}: The fanfic currently ends with the cliffhanger of [[spoiler:Mayura introducing herself to Ladybug and Kagami!Chat.]] Considering it hasn't been updated in two months, the story may still remain a cliffhanger for a long time.
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* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler:Adrien's identity as Chat Noir is revealed after Plagg is forced out of his Miraculous due to his holder's death. Gabriel's identity as Hawk Moth is also revealed to Kagami when he tells Riposte that she killed "his son".]] Ladybug's identity is revealed to Kagami when they are both caught by Mayura]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13047311/1/Riposte-Lets-Rip Riposte Lets Rip]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
This is a two-chapter work.
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!!This fanfiction series contains examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that [[spoiler:Riposte got her revenge on Adrien when she had the chance.]]
* BerserkButton: Kagami goes berserk when [[spoiler: Hawk Moth reminds her of how she used her superpowers to kill Adrien as Riposte. She angrily charges at him and then knocks him unconscious.]]
* {{Cliffhanger}}: The fanfic currently ends with the cliffhanger of [[spoiler:Mayura introducing herself to Ladybug and Kagami!Chat.]] Considering it hasn't been updated in two months, the story may still remain a cliffhanger for a long time.
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Hawk Moth is horrified when [[spoiler:Riposte kills Adrien and takes away her powers as punishment, except maybe [[DidntThinkThisThrough he really should've thought it through first]].]]
* [[spoiler: HeroKiller: Riposte ends up killing Adrien, meaning that she's killed Chat Noir as well.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Kagami is horrified when she realises that [[spoiler:she murdered Adrien as Riposte. She offers to take up the Cat Miraculous so she can help Ladybug defeat Hawk Moth after what he caused.]]
** Hawk Moth is full of grief and cries ManlyTears about [[spoiler:Adrien's death]], but he brushes those feelings aside when he goes on to fight the heroes.
* TheDogBitesBack: Like in ''Fanfic/SyrenSinks'', Kagami wants to settle the score with Hawk Moth after how he made them villains, [[spoiler:with Kagami's case being her killing Adrien as Riposte.]]
* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler:Adrien's identity as Chat Noir is revealed after Plagg is forced out of his Miraculous due to his holder's death. Gabriel's identity as Hawk Moth is also revealed to Kagami when he tells Riposte that she killed "his son".]]
* WhatAnIdiot: Hawk Moth's idea to create a lethal akuma ''whose main target is his son'' was already a boneheaded decision, but this fic explores how [[RealityEnsues reality would ensue]] if she were to actually focus on her goal. [[spoiler: There's also how he told Riposte that she killed "his son" before removing her powers, giving Kagami information about his civilian identity.]]
This is a two-chapter work.
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!!This fanfiction series contains examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that [[spoiler:Riposte got her revenge on Adrien when she had the chance.]]
* BerserkButton: Kagami goes berserk when [[spoiler: Hawk Moth reminds her of how she used her superpowers to kill Adrien as Riposte. She angrily charges at him and then knocks him unconscious.]]
* {{Cliffhanger}}: The fanfic currently ends with the cliffhanger of [[spoiler:Mayura introducing herself to Ladybug and Kagami!Chat.]] Considering it hasn't been updated in two months, the story may still remain a cliffhanger for a long time.
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Hawk Moth is horrified when [[spoiler:Riposte kills Adrien and takes away her powers as punishment, except maybe [[DidntThinkThisThrough he really should've thought it through first]].]]
* [[spoiler: HeroKiller: Riposte ends up killing Adrien, meaning that she's killed Chat Noir as well.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Kagami is horrified when she realises that [[spoiler:she murdered Adrien as Riposte. She offers to take up the Cat Miraculous so she can help Ladybug defeat Hawk Moth after what he caused.]]
** Hawk Moth is full of grief and cries ManlyTears about [[spoiler:Adrien's death]], but he brushes those feelings aside when he goes on to fight the heroes.
* TheDogBitesBack: Like in ''Fanfic/SyrenSinks'', Kagami wants to settle the score with Hawk Moth after how he made them villains, [[spoiler:with Kagami's case being her killing Adrien as Riposte.]]
* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler:Adrien's identity as Chat Noir is revealed after Plagg is forced out of his Miraculous due to his holder's death. Gabriel's identity as Hawk Moth is also revealed to Kagami when he tells Riposte that she killed "his son".]]
* WhatAnIdiot: Hawk Moth's idea to create a lethal akuma ''whose main target is his son'' was already a boneheaded decision, but this fic explores how [[RealityEnsues reality would ensue]] if she were to actually focus on her goal. [[spoiler: There's also how he told Riposte that she killed "his son" before removing her powers, giving Kagami information about his civilian identity.]]
