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* AdaptationalVillainy: Ribbons is already a monster in canon, but here he gets an additional crime in trying to seize control of Anew during the climax specifically so that he can make her kill her friends.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Ribbons is already a monster in canon, but here he gets an additional crime in trying to seize take control of Anew during the climax specifically so that he can make her kill her friends.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Anew and Lyle have to overcome great odds but they are able to have a life together in the end.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Anew and Lyle have to overcome great odds but they are able to have a life together in the end. (with there even being implications that they can have a family.)
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* ThrowTheDogABone: The entire story can be seen as one for Anew; she has to overcome a great deal but she and Lyle are able to have the happy ending that canon denied them. In the follow up story it's even revealed that she'll be able to have children, meaning she and Lyle can have a family.
* TraumaButton: Ribbons becomes one to Anew; even after he's dead just hearing his name makes her tense up.
* TraumaButton: Ribbons becomes one to Anew; even after he's dead just hearing his name makes her tense up.
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* ThrowTheDogABone: The entire story can be seen as one for Anew; she has to overcome a great deal but she and Lyle are able to have the happy ending that canon denied them. In the follow up story it's even revealed that she'll be able to have children, meaning she and Lyle can have start a family.
* TraumaButton: Ribbons becomes one to Anew; even after he's dead and locked away forever just hearing his name makes her tenseup.up.
* WhoWantsToLiveForever: Anew ultimately decides to give up her immortality so that she and Lyle can grow old together.
* TraumaButton: Ribbons becomes one to Anew; even after he's dead and locked away forever just hearing his name makes her tense
* WhoWantsToLiveForever: Anew ultimately decides to give up her immortality so that she and Lyle can grow old together.
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* DemonicPossession: Ribbons does this to Anew in Chapter 1 and attempts to repeat the process in Chapter 6 (a process that is described as extremely tortuous.)
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* DemonicPossession: Ribbons does this to Anew in Chapter 1 and attempts to repeat the process in Chapter 6 (a process that is described as extremely tortuous.)6.
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* HeroicWillpower: How Anew is able to regain control in order to avoid her canon death; she also displays it when Ribbons tries to possess her again, holding out against his attempt for ten minutes despite being in extreme agony the entire time.
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* AGodAmI: Ribbons has this attitude in spades.
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* AGodAmI: Ribbons has this attitude attitude, just like in spades.canon.
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* DemonicPossession: Ribbons does this to Anew in Chapter 1 and attempts to repeat the process in Chapter 6 (a process that is described as extremely tortuous.)
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* TheWoobie: Anew is this for most of the story. She survives her canon death, but is imprisoned and wracked with guilt the entire time. Lyle making it clear he still cares for her despite everything only makes her feel worse, and when she is released Ribbons tries to possess her in the climax, which is extremely tortuous and painful. Fortunately Anew is able to overcome these odds and get a happy ending.
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* EasilyForgiven: Played with. Lyle and Mileina forgive Anew easily, as does Setsuna. Others (like Feldt and Soma) are much more hostile, and in Feldt's case it takes her seeing Anew struggling to fight off Ribbons' brainwashing for her to finally forgive her.
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* EasilyForgiven: Played with. Lyle and Mileina forgive Anew easily, as does Setsuna. Others (like Feldt and Soma) are much more hostile, and in Feldt's case it takes her seeing Anew struggling to fight off Ribbons' brainwashing for her to finally forgive her.
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* SealedEvilInACan: Tieria mentions that Hilling is trapped within Veda.
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* SealedEvilInACan: Tieria mentions that Hilling is trapped within Veda.Veda; Ribbons is as well, ensuring he can never hurt Anew again.
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* ThrowTheDogABone: The entire story can be seen as one for Anew; she has to overcome a great deal but she and Lyle are able to have the happy ending that canon denied them.
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* ThrowTheDogABone: The entire story can be seen as one for Anew; she has to overcome a great deal but she and Lyle are able to have the happy ending that canon denied them. In the follow up story it's even revealed that she'll be able to have children, meaning she and Lyle can have a family.
* TraumaButton: Ribbons becomes one to Anew; even after he's dead just hearing his name makes her tense up.
* TraumaButton: Ribbons becomes one to Anew; even after he's dead just hearing his name makes her tense up.
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* BabiesEverAfter: It's hinted this may be the case with Lyle and Anew further down the road; according to Tieria and Regene Ribbons designed Anew to pass for human, which means that her reproductive organs are fully intact and capable of carrying a pregnancy to term.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Anew and Lyle have to overcome great odds but they are able to have a life together.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Anew and Lyle have to overcome great odds but they are able to have a life together.together in the end.
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* InspectorJavert: Feldt is this for Anew, refusing to trust her when she comes back. Ultimately subverted when Feldt sees Anew trying to fight off Ribbon's brainwashing in the climax
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* ThrowTheDogABone: The entire story can be seen as one for Anew; she has to overcome a great deal but she and Lyle are able to have the happy ending that canon denied them.
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* BrutalHonesty: Setsuna says quite bluntly that he fully planned to kill Anew when he fired.
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* BrutalHonesty: Setsuna says quite bluntly that he fully planned to kill Anew when he fired. Ironically this is what saves Anew from being executed, since it raises enough doubts about her culpability when she attacked Lyle that they're willing to hear her out.
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* ForWantOfANail: The entire premise is that Anew is able to fight off Ribbon's control long enough to slow down, causing Setsuna to shoot her sword arm rather than her torso. This allows Anew to live past her canon death.
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* ChivalrousPervert: Lyle is openly attracted to Anew and doesn't bother to hide it; that said, he still gracefully accepts her decision not to get married because she's not ready.
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* BrutalHonesty: Setsuna says quite bluntly that he fully planned to kill Anew when he fired.
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* RealAfterAll: Feldt has this reaction when she sees Anew visibly struggling to throw off Ribbons' brainwashing.
* SealedEvilInACan: Tieria mentions that Hilling is trapped within Veda.
* SealedEvilInACan: Tieria mentions that Hilling is trapped within Veda.
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* AGodAmI: Ribbons has this attitude in spades.
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* KickTheDog: Ribbons not only tries to force Anew back under his control during the final battle, he also tells her he plans to make her kill her friends.
* MindRape: Ribbons does this to Anew in the final battle, failing only because Setsuna intervenes.
* MindRape: Ribbons does this to Anew in the final battle, failing only because Setsuna intervenes.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: Anew and Lyle have to overcome great odds but they are able to have a life together.
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Can be found on [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/13958274/1/ FanFiction.Net]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/33962299 Archive of Our Own]]
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!!You can ''trust'' that ''Renewing Trust'' shows examples of the following:
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: Ribbons tries this with Anew in the climax, failing only because of Setsuna's intervention.
* BrokenPedestal: Anew goes from viewing Ribbons as god to outright hating him.
* BrokenPedestal: Anew goes from viewing Ribbons as god to outright hating him.
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* EasilyForgiven: Played with. Lyle and Mileina forgive her easily, as does Setsuna. Others (like Feldt and Soma) are much more hostile, and in Feldt's case it takes her seeing Anew struggling to fight off Ribbons' brainwashing for her to finally forgive her.
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* EasilyForgiven: Played with. Lyle and Mileina forgive her Anew easily, as does Setsuna. Others (like Feldt and Soma) are much more hostile, and in Feldt's case it takes her seeing Anew struggling to fight off Ribbons' brainwashing for her to finally forgive her.
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A fanfic that diverges from Season 2 episode 20 of Gundam 00; in this story Anew is able to fight off Ribbons Almark's control for a split second, causing Setsuna's shot to hit her sword arm rather than the torso. This results in Anew surviving her canon death, and the story follows how the rest of Season 2 is changed with Anew's survival.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Ribbons is already a monster in canon, but here he gets an additional crime in trying to seize control of Anew during the climax specifically so that he can make her kill her friends.
* TheAtoner: Anew is desperate to make up for her actions in service to the Innovators.
* BroughtDownToNormal: Anew ultimately asks Tieria to make her mortal so that she can spend her life with Lyle.
* EasilyForgiven: Played with. Lyle and Mileina forgive her easily, as does Setsuna. Others (like Feldt and Soma) are much more hostile, and in Feldt's case it takes her seeing Anew struggling to fight off Ribbons' brainwashing for her to finally forgive her.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: The entire point of the story is that Anew survives her canon death.
* YouAreWorthHell: Lyle has this in regards to Anew.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Ribbons is already a monster in canon, but here he gets an additional crime in trying to seize control of Anew during the climax specifically so that he can make her kill her friends.
* TheAtoner: Anew is desperate to make up for her actions in service to the Innovators.
* BroughtDownToNormal: Anew ultimately asks Tieria to make her mortal so that she can spend her life with Lyle.
* EasilyForgiven: Played with. Lyle and Mileina forgive her easily, as does Setsuna. Others (like Feldt and Soma) are much more hostile, and in Feldt's case it takes her seeing Anew struggling to fight off Ribbons' brainwashing for her to finally forgive her.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: The entire point of the story is that Anew survives her canon death.
* YouAreWorthHell: Lyle has this in regards to Anew.
