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* TookaLevelinKindness: Because of Aqua rescuing both her and Ruby from the Branwen tribe and her temporary stay at the Xiao-Long manor ten years before the beginning of RWBY’s canon story, [[spoiler: Cinder]] does not become the power hungry tyrant we know today. [[spoiler: She even treats Emerald better.]] Somewhat subverted with her stance with some other characters [[spoiler: such as Mercury, making it clear that he is nothing but a hired gun to her and Emerald. It becomes understandable, especially later on after what he did to Yang.]]
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* TookaLevelinKindness: TookALevelInKindness: Because of Aqua rescuing both her and Ruby from the Branwen tribe and her temporary stay at the Xiao-Long manor ten years before the beginning of RWBY’s canon story, [[spoiler: Cinder]] does not become the power hungry tyrant we know today. [[spoiler: She even treats Emerald better.]] Somewhat subverted with her stance with some other characters [[spoiler: such as Mercury, making it clear that he is nothing but a hired gun to her and Emerald. It becomes understandable, especially later on after what he did to Yang.]]
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** [[spoiler: Yang and Qrow get tied up for attacking Cordovin due to the latter insulting the deceased Aqua. Blake and Tifa get this treatment due to the base's racism against Faunus.]]
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* ControlFreak: As in canon so too is James in this story. Believing the Keyblade to be the weapon needed to defeat Salem, he has Aqua enter Atlas under the guise of going through a very experimental and potentially fatal surgical procedure that would restore the use of her legs, he then tells her she cannot leave and even puts her in the servitude, really slavery in practice, of Jacques Schnee who is already distrustful of the Keyblade Master because of her Semblence, thus believing her to be a bastard Schnee.
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* ControlFreak: As in canon so too is James in this story. Believing the Keyblade to be the weapon needed to defeat Salem, he has Aqua enter Atlas under the guise of going through a very experimental and potentially fatal surgical procedure that would restore the use of her legs, he then tells her she cannot leave and even puts her in the servitude, really slavery in practice, of Jacques Schnee who is already distrustful of the Keyblade Master because of her Semblence, thus believing her to be a bastard Schnee. [[spoiler: This tendency lead to both getting much deserved karma by Aqua who beaten them up brutally for this.]]
** Ren starts to become this to Oscar when he and Nora became an official couple. He start accusing him of being really Ozpin, always lying, and attempting to break him and Nora off. This resulted in him getting called out by the others, especially Nora who pointed out he brought upon his self for his selfish obsession with Sephiroth.
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** [[spoiler: After freeing Cinder from the Grimm parasite controlling her, Aqua loses her heart after being pierced by Cinder’s Shadow Hand which Cinder has no control of. Aqua’s heart later forms into a Heartless and is later killed by Ruby, freeing Aqua’s heart. Her Nobody appears later on.]]
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** [[spoiler: After freeing Cinder from the Grimm parasite controlling her, Aqua loses her heart after being pierced by Cinder’s Shadow Hand which Cinder has no control of. Aqua’s heart later forms into a Heartless and is later killed by Ruby, freeing Aqua’s heart. Her Nobody counterpart Ash appears later on.]]
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* MyGod,WhatHaveIDone: Jaune reacts this way after [[spoiler: learning the truth about Salem. He lashes out physically at Oscar, but this makes Achilles start crying. Jaune is horrified at realizing how much he was scaring his son.]]
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* MyGod,WhatHaveIDone: MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Jaune reacts this way after [[spoiler: learning the truth about Salem. He lashes out physically at Oscar, but this makes Achilles start crying. Jaune is horrified at realizing how much he was scaring his son.]]
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* BabiesEverAfter: [[spoiler: During the Fall of Beacon, Pyrrha learns that she's pregnant with Jaune's child, but breaks up with him and goes home to Argus without telling him so he wouldn't have to choose to stop training as a Huntsman. The child has since been born, a boy named Achilles, but as of yet Jaune still doesn't know he exists.]]
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* BabiesEverAfter: [[spoiler: During the Fall of Beacon, Pyrrha learns that she's pregnant with Jaune's child, but breaks up with him and goes home to Argus without telling him so he wouldn't have to choose to stop training as a Huntsman. The child has since been born, a boy named Achilles, but as of yet Achilles. Jaune still doesn't know faints when he learns he exists.]]
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* MyGod,WhatHaveIDone: Jaune reacts this way after [[spoiler: learning the truth about Salem. He lashes out physically at Oscar, but this makes Achilles start crying. Jaune is horrified at realizing how much he was scaring his son.]]
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* A-CupAngst: Ruby is shown to have insecurities about her body image, feeling that she isn’t as attractive when comparing herself to the older girls around her.
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* A-CupAngst: Ruby is shown to have insecurities about her body image, feeling that she isn’t as attractive when comparing herself to the older girls around her.
** Weiss is annoyed when Ruby mentions that they have similar figures considering Weiss is two years older than Ruby. It doesn’t help Weiss when she finds that Ruby’s sports bra is bigger than her own.
** Weiss is annoyed when Ruby mentions that they have similar figures considering Weiss is two years older than Ruby. It doesn’t help Weiss when she finds that Ruby’s sports bra is bigger than her own.
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* AccidentalPervert: A minor example is when [[spoiler: Riku]] is transported to Remnant and ends up on top of Ruby on her bed. Everyone’s reaction is expected.
** The same thing happens with [[spoiler: Sora]] only he ends up in a room right when Cinder comes out of a shower, thankfully covered in a towel. She and [[spoiler: Aqua’s Nobody]] knock him out and tie him to a chair for interrogation.
** The same thing happens with [[spoiler: Sora]] only he ends up in a room right when Cinder comes out of a shower, thankfully covered in a towel. She and [[spoiler: Aqua’s Nobody]] knock him out and tie him to a chair for interrogation.
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Aqua's body is reborn as a Nobody.]]
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Emerald claims she wanted to protect Cinder from being hurt Salem's group yet she is contributing to Cinder being a prisoner and not being freed. Ruby rightfully calls her out on that.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Emerald claims she wanted to protect Cinder from being hurt by Salem's group yet she is contributing to Cinder being a prisoner and not being freed. Ruby rightfully calls her out on that.
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* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: [[spoiler: The Brother Gods's origins are different compare to canon, for example the God of Light is the Master of Masters from Kingdom Hearts.]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: The God of Darkness is much more evil and destructive compare to his canon self, to the point he had to be sealed away in Kingdom Hearts itself.]]
* AdaptationalVillainy: [[spoiler: The God of Darkness is much more evil and destructive compare to his canon self, to the point he had to be sealed away in Kingdom Hearts itself.]]
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* BoundAndGagged: Happens a few times in this story.
** [[spoiler: Cardin kidnaps Ruby and wraps her up in duct tape to hold her hostage so Yang would have no choice to let him beat her up, and he ties Aqua to a chair and locks her in a storage closet so she wouldn't interfere. Aqua eventually is able to use her magic to escape, and Jaune comes up with a plan to free Ruby so Yang could beat Cardin up.]]
** Roman ties Ruby up after she gets knocked out in Mountain Glenn, and ties her to a chair on the train once her team shows up.
** [[spoiler: When Raven kidnaps Aqua and Weiss after their airship crashes, she ties the two of them up, even going so far as to trap Aqua's hands in a leather sack so she couldn't summon her Keyblade. Luckily for Aqua, Raven didn't know that Aqua had been practicing using her magic to perform telekinesis, and she uses that to escape.]]
** [[spoiler: The minions of the crime boss Midas kidnap Yang and chain her up in the cargo hold of an airship. Her summoning Simba for the first time allowed her to escape.]]
** [[spoiler: Midas also does this to Nora and Oscar, going so far as to turn Nora into a golden statue. See TakenForGranite below. Nora and Oscar are saved when the rest of the group comes to rescue them.]]
** [[spoiler: Cardin kidnaps Ruby and wraps her up in duct tape to hold her hostage so Yang would have no choice to let him beat her up, and he ties Aqua to a chair and locks her in a storage closet so she wouldn't interfere. Aqua eventually is able to use her magic to escape, and Jaune comes up with a plan to free Ruby so Yang could beat Cardin up.]]
** Roman ties Ruby up after she gets knocked out in Mountain Glenn, and ties her to a chair on the train once her team shows up.
** [[spoiler: When Raven kidnaps Aqua and Weiss after their airship crashes, she ties the two of them up, even going so far as to trap Aqua's hands in a leather sack so she couldn't summon her Keyblade. Luckily for Aqua, Raven didn't know that Aqua had been practicing using her magic to perform telekinesis, and she uses that to escape.]]
** [[spoiler: The minions of the crime boss Midas kidnap Yang and chain her up in the cargo hold of an airship. Her summoning Simba for the first time allowed her to escape.]]
** [[spoiler: Midas also does this to Nora and Oscar, going so far as to turn Nora into a golden statue. See TakenForGranite below. Nora and Oscar are saved when the rest of the group comes to rescue them.]]
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** [[spoiler: the woman that Cinder robs and murders in Volume 6 instead gets to offer shelter to the Fall Maiden and Aqua's Nobody. Her name is Alice.]]
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* DrowningMySorrows: After a few years of being sober following Qrow's relationship with Aqua, [[spoiler: her death drives him to fall off the wagon, much to his nieces' shock.]]
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** [[spoiler: After freeing Cinder from the Grimm parasite controlling her, Aqua loses her heart after being pierced by Cinder’s Shadow Hand which Cinder has no control of. Aqua becomes a Heartless and is later killed by Ruby. It is possible that Aqua may return but only time will tell. She does in the form of a Nobody.]]
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** [[spoiler: After freeing Cinder from the Grimm parasite controlling her, Aqua loses her heart after being pierced by Cinder’s Shadow Hand which Cinder has no control of. Aqua becomes Aqua’s heart later forms into a Heartless and is later killed by Ruby. It is possible that Aqua may return but only time will tell. She does in the form of a Nobody.Ruby, freeing Aqua’s heart. Her Nobody appears later on.]]
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** [[spoiler: Pyrrha Nikos. See BabiesEverAfter above]]
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler: Aqua's body is reborn as a Nobody.]]
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** [[spoiler: Pyrrha Nikos. See BabiesEverAfter above]]
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* CovertPervert: Jacques Schnee was fairly obsessed with Aqua while he was keeping her as his personal maid, even dressing her up like one. He even tried to grope her initially, but Aqua shut that down. Klein later told Whitley that he was worried about how far Jacques might have taken things if Aqua hadn't escaped when she did.
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* CovertPervert: Surprisingly, Aqua and Qrow are into BDSM play. When Aqua wakes up after their first night together when they reunite during the Vytal Tournament, she's still handcuffed to the bed and gagged from the night before.
** A less entertaining example is JacquesSchnee Schnee. He was fairly obsessed with Aqua while he was keeping forcing her as to be his personal maid, even dressing her up like one. He even tried as one and attempting to grope her initially, but Aqua shut that down. when he first saw her in the outfit, though she made sure he never tried again. Klein later told expresses to Whitley later that he was worried concerned about how far Jacques might have taken was going to take things if Aqua hadn't escaped when she did.
** A less entertaining example is Jacques
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** And now, [[spoiler: Aqua has become one for Qrow.]]
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* BabiesEverAfter: [[spoiler: During the Fall of Beacon, Pyrrha learns that she's pregnant with Jaune's child, but breaks up with him and goes home to Argus without telling him so he wouldn't have to choose to stop training as a Huntsman. The child has since been born, a boy named Achilles, but as of yet Jaune still doesn't know he exists.]]
** Played with after [[spoiler: Aqua became trapped in the Kingdom Hearts that formed over Beacon. She was trapped in a dream world that showed her an idealized version of her own life, where Xehanort never enacted his plan, but she still met Qrow, Ruby, and Yang. The most important detail of that dream world is that it included a hypothetical daughter that she had with Qrow, named Larmina.]]
** Played with after [[spoiler: Aqua became trapped in the Kingdom Hearts that formed over Beacon. She was trapped in a dream world that showed her an idealized version of her own life, where Xehanort never enacted his plan, but she still met Qrow, Ruby, and Yang. The most important detail of that dream world is that it included a hypothetical daughter that she had with Qrow, named Larmina.]]
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** [[spoiler: Volume 5 ends with the reveal that Sienna Khan was somehow saved from her canon death at the hands of Adam by the Hooded Man.]]
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** [[spoiler: Raven takes a blow meant for Yang by Aqua's Heartless and dies, not boefre passing the Spring Maiden's power to her daughter.]]
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** [[spoiler: After freeing Cinder from the Grimm parasite controlling her, Aqua loses her heart after being pierced by Cinder’s Shadow Hand which Cinder has no control of. Aqua becomes a Heartless and is later killed by Ruby. It is possible that Aqua may return but only time will tell.]]
** [[spoiler: Raven takes a blow meant for Yang by Aqua's Heartless and dies, not boefre passing the Spring Maiden's power to her daughter.]]
** [[spoiler: Raven takes a blow meant for Yang by Aqua's Heartless and dies, not boefre passing the Spring Maiden's power to her daughter.]]
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* HatesTheirParent: Yang wants nothing to do with Raven, her womb downer as she considers her now, after she kidnapped Ruby when they were still little kids.
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* HatesTheirParent: Yang wants nothing to do with Raven, [[MaliciousMisnaming her womb downer donor as she considers her now, now]], after she kidnapped Ruby when they were still little kids.
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* Teacher/StudentRomance: Cinder and Emerald have a teacher-student relationship, but the romance is one-sided on Emerald’s part.
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* AffectionateNickname: Cinder calls Emerald “Tea Leaf”. It is an Old English phrase that means “Thief”, but a nicer way to say it.
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* TookaLevelinKindness: [[spoiler: Cinder]] after a result of Aqua rescuing both her and Ruby from the Branwen tribe ten years before the beginning of RWBY’s canon story, and her temporary stay at the Xiao-Long manor.
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* TookaLevelinKindness: [[spoiler: Cinder]] after a result Because of Aqua rescuing both her and Ruby from the Branwen tribe and her temporary stay at the Xiao-Long manor ten years before the beginning of RWBY’s canon story, [[spoiler: Cinder]] does not become the power hungry tyrant we know today. [[spoiler: She even treats Emerald better.]] Somewhat subverted with her stance with some other characters [[spoiler: such as Mercury, making it clear that he is nothing but a hired gun to her and her temporary stay at the Xiao-Long manor.Emerald. It becomes understandable, especially later on after what he did to Yang.]]
