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* VillainForgotToLevelGrind: Averted. The whole reason Jade is after the Teachings is so she can increase her powers and stand a better chance against the heroes.
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* NiceJobGuidingUsHero: Since the only method Jade has of finding the masks is astral projection, which she can't really control and doesn't really trust, she's using the SinisterSurveillance listed below to track Jackie and the others, allowing them to lead her to the masks. This is also how she managed to find the first tablet of the Teachings.
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* TheStotic: Blankman rarely shows any emotion.

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* TheStotic: TheStoic: Blankman rarely shows any emotion.
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** Also, Jade and Viper at times.


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* EvilVersusEvil: Valmont vs Jade, briefly, once he gets the first mask.


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* MexicanStandoff: A brief one occurs during the initial fight for the second mask -- Tohru captures Jade, so Right retaliates by holding him at sword point, and Uncle in turn aims his wand at him. It's quickly broken up when Ratso accidentally gains the mask, which provides enough of a distraction to allow Jade to escape.


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* ApologeticAttacker: Jackie, Tohru and Viper (though not as often) are this towards Jade, seeing as they care about her and are only reluctantly attacking her.



* CoDragons: Left and Right, being Jade's top Shadowkhan, arguably qualify. Hak Foo, being the heavy muscle, could also count, as could Jade's foreman (first Valmont, later Blankman)

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* CoDragons: Left and Right, being Jade's top Shadowkhan, arguably qualify. Hak Foo, being the heavy muscle, could also count, count (though he's more of TheBrute), as could Jade's foreman (first Valmont, later Blankman)Blankman)
* CombatPragmatist: Jackie and Tohru have a tendency to fight with whatever they can find.



** Jade's first few attempts at a wand are all built around using her hair as a power source, a reference to the Earth Demon episode, where Jade used a strand of hair and a flower to make a temporary wand.
** In-story, the fact that Ratso stayed loyal to Jade during Valmont's little coup attempt is brought up a couple of times, in reference to her liking him a bit more than the others.



* DividedWeFall: Uncle initially refuses to let Viper help in stopping Jade, as he doesn't want help from a thief. Tohru calls him out on this, and he ultimately agrees to work with her.



* DividedWeFall: Uncle initially refuses to let Viper help in stopping Jade, as he doesn't want help from a thief. Tohru calls him out on this, and he ultimately agrees to work with her.

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* DividedWeFall: Uncle initially refuses TheDragon: Ikazuki to let Viper help in stopping Jade, Tarakudo, as per canon. And when he doesn't want help from a thief. Tohru calls him out on this, temporarily takes control of the Shadow Hand, he forcibly [[DemotedToDragon demotes]] Jade to being ''his'' dragon -- and the only reason she has a relatively high position is because he ultimately agrees to work with looks down on the human members even worse than he does on her.


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* EvilSoundsDeep: It's noted how anyone who wears an Oni mask gets a much deeper voice.


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* HowDoIShotWeb: Ratso gets the Razor Khan mask, and is initially unable to summon any Shadowkhan, due to no one in the Shadow Hand (even Jade) knowing about the whole "darkness within" thing. It takes a brief meeting with Tarakudo in the astral realm to clear that up.


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* MiddleManagementMook: Jade's foreman is described as her NumberTwo (using those words), which would imply TheDragon, but is much closer to this trope. Blankman in particular is never shown in the field, leaving all the grunt work to the Enforcers. Valmont, at least, tried to act like TheDragon (particularly DragonInChief), but it was clear Jade held Left and Right in higher regard than him.


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* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: Ikazuki looks down on Jade because of her age and inexperience, which is probably understandable, but he also lists her being female as one of the reasons why she's unfit to be a General. Possibly justified by the fact that he originated in a feudal period, where there wouldn't have been much respect for women.


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** When Ratso is trying to figure out how to use his mask's powers, he at one point blurts out "{{Shazam}}!"
*** In the same chapter, Jade compares taking advice from a mysterious voice (Tarakudo) to ''CharliesAngels".
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* KlingonPromotion: Seems to be standard practice for the Oni. See also YouKillItYouBoughtIt below.
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** Jade is also being careful to avoid classic WorldDomination plots, as she knows that that's a fast track towards someone making her SealedEvilInACan.


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* EnemyMine: Jackie and Jade briefly (and reluctantly, in Jade's case) team up when Valmont uses the first mask to steal the Ninja tribe away from Jade.


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* EverythingsBetterWithSamurai: Or worse, considering we're talking about Ikazuki and his tribe. Incidentally, he considers his tribe superior to all others... and considering how they wipe the floor with Jade's ninja, he may be right.


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* VillainBall: Currently being juggled by Jade, who keeps lapsing into standard villain pitfalls ([[EvilGloating monologuing]] and overestimating her abilities), but always realizes when she's doing it, and tends to learn from her mistakes.
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* AWizardDidIt: Shendu raised his palace from nothing, and upon his defeat it collapsed into dust, yet when it is revisited (both here and in canon) in search for the first mask, there are some quite recognizable ruins that apparently no one's noticed. Jade ponders this for a bit, but then [[HandWave decides]] that it's magic and leaves it at that. [[WordOfGod This is the author trying to draw attention to what he views as a large plot hole.]]


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* GeniusBruiser: Tohru, of course, with the "genius" part being his talent at magic.


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* ManipulativeBastard: It is strongly implied that Tarakudo is influencing Jade's subconscious in order to drag up her resentment and frustration (primarily with her parents) in order to drive her further into the darkness.
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* GoodScarsEvilScars: Ikazuki slashes Jade across the forehead, leaving a large scar.
* GoodThingYouCanHeal: Jade is getting a lot of mileage out of her Shadowkhan HealingFactor, especially after the fight with the sages.


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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Jade, naturally. Of course, she isn't really the queen of anything; however, she insists on being referred to as such, and her minions -- the Shadowkhan ones, at least -- do so.
* GoodScarsEvilScars: Ikazuki slashes Jade across the forehead, leaving a large scar.
* GoodThingYouCanHeal: Jade is getting a lot of mileage out of her Shadowkhan HealingFactor, especially after the fight with the sages.


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* ItsPersonal: As you can imagine, the fact that the Chan clan are fighting against one of their own makes this fight much more personal than previous ones.


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* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: As noted above, Jade isn't actual royalty, but refers to herself as such, and is still as much an ActionGirl (albeit of the [[DarkActionGirl dark]] variety) as ever, if not more so.
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** Earlier, when Jade needs to get Tohru to come out of the shop's protective wards so she can capture him for Ikazuki, she has some of her Shadowkhan sneak attack Uncle, knowing that Tohru will come to his aid, allowing her to capture him.



*** In that same chapter, Jade threatens to burn down Uncle's shop in order to get the heroes to fight her.

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*** In that same chapter, Jade threatens to burn down Uncle's shop in order to get the heroes to fight her.her, which even she admits is a low blow.
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** There's also the ghouls haunting the Shadow Hand's mansion headquarters, who Jade uses as security (though as proven during Ikazuki's brief coup, they're not very effective)


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** At one point, when the Enforcers are entering the mansion headquarters, one of the house ghouls [[AChristmasCarol appears on the front door's knocker; Finn refers to him as "Marley".]]
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** Jade herself, following the below-mentioned BreakTheHaughty, decides that it might be wiser to play this role to Tarakudo, as she realizes she may not be in a position to outright overthrow him yet.


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* BlackCloak: Jade wears one on top of her ninja suit.


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* BodyHorror: Among other things, Jade has apparently gained contortionist abilities; the description of her initial use is rather disturbing.
* BreakTheHaughty: The incident mentioned below under HoistByHisOwnPetard, combined with the total failure of her plan in that chapter and [[spoiler: Scruffy's betrayal]], breaks Jade rather thoroughly, and she decides to scale down her plans a bit.


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** Naturally, there are plenty of references to the original episode where Jade was first transformed into the Queen (mostly about how she had the Shadowkhan spank the Enforcers)


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* EvilGloating: Jade, despite knowing it's a dangerous distraction, keeps doing this and scolding herself afterwards.


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* GoodScarsEvilScars: Ikazuki slashes Jade across the forehead, leaving a large scar.


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* {{Mooks}}: The Ninja tribe Shadowkhan serve as Jade's standard troops [[spoiler: until Ikazuki hexes her, stopping her from summoning them]].


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** This also allows them to [[spoiler: escape the above-mentioned hex]].


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** Shendu has had a few cameos, still sealed in [[TakenForGranite statue form]] and locked away in a Section 13 vault, as per the Season 3 finale.


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* ShoutOut: When Farmer [=MacDonald=] learns about Jade's FaceHeelTurn, he comments that she's "gone all [[StarWars Darth Vader]]".
** In the same chapter, when he learns about the Hana Fuda cards, he makes what might be a reference to ''YuGiOh''


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* TraumaticHaircut: When Ikazuki gives Jade her above-mentioned scar, he slices through her trademark bangs.
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* BlackMagic: There are apparently two types -- the dark chi magic used by wizards like Wong and Verde, and the shadow magic used by the Shadowkhan and Oni. Jade starts studying the latter after she learns that her transformation has made it impossible for her to use the former (apparently, chi magic can only be used by humans).


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* InformedAbility: Blankman's magic skills; they were one of the reasons Jade hired him, but aside from a reference to protective wards he's placed over Jade's mansion, he's yet to be shown actually performing any magic.
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* BastardUnderstudy: This is played with in an interesting way when Jade recruits the Bat General; she tells him that if he sides with her against Tarakudo, then he's free to try and take the throne from her if she doesn't work out as ruler, terms the General agrees to. In other words, ''they're agreeing that he'll be her Bastard Understudy.''
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* DarkIsEvil: Jade and the other Shadowkhan. Also, Daolon Wong.


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* ThereWasADoor: After being tossed through the shrine walls by Brother Light a few times, Jade gives up coming back in through the door and smashes through a wall.
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* LikeAFatherToMe: Played with, in that it's ''Uncle'' who points out that Jackie is "Jade's father in all but blood and title", and that he's aware of it even if they aren't.


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* ParentalSubstitute: Played with, in that it's Uncle who points out that Jackie is "Jade's father in all but blood and title", and that he's aware of it even if they aren't.

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** Hero also mentions [[AmbitionIsEvil Ambition]], [[GreenEyedMonster Envy]], and [[TheResenter Resentment]] as having joined with the Queen, but we've yet to meet them.



* ChekhovsGag: When asked what she did with Wong, Jade says "he's in the closet" (which Ratso takes to mean [[AmbiguouslyGay something else]]) and doesn't elaborate. The following chapter, it turns out she literally locked him in a closet.
* ChekhovsGun: Jade buys a magic dog carrier from Verde, with no explanation as to what she plans to do with it. It's a couple of chapters before we find out what she plans on doing with it (see HoistByHisOwnPetard below).



* CurbStompBattle: The fight against the sages in their shrine is entirely in their favor; Dark and Gray hold the advantage against the Shadow Hand and the heroes the whole time, and White doesn't even seem to exert himself when continually throwing Jade, Viper, and Hak Foo out of the inner shrine.
** Also, when Ikazuki usurped control of the Shadow Hand, it was greatly helped by his samurai wiping the floor with Jade's ninja.



* DarkMagicalGirl: What Jade is turning into to compensate for the fact that she's not much of a physical threat.



* DarkIsNotEvil: A bit literally, as Brother Dark (of the three sages), despite being a JerkAss, isn't so bad. He's apparently just there to balance things out.
* DarkMagicalGirl: What Jade is turning into to compensate for the fact that she's not much of a physical threat.



* GoodThingYouCanHeal: Jade is getting a lot of mileage out of her Shadowkhan HealingFactor, especially after the fight with the sages.



* GhostInTheMachine: Jade's mind is represented as a sea of clouds (literally; the clouds act like water) filled with islands of bizarre landscapes that represent her memories and views of the world, and is inhabited by beings who represent different aspects of Jade's personality (see AnthropomorphicPersonification). There's also a pirate ship (known as the ''Jade'') that sails it, which seems to represent her consciousness, as whatever aspect controls it appears to be dominant; when Jade was good, Hero (her inherent goodness) was captain, whereas following her FaceHeelTurn, the Queen (her SuperpoweredEvilSide) seized control.

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* GhostInTheMachine: Jade's mind is represented as a sea of clouds (literally; the clouds act like water) filled with islands of bizarre landscapes that represent her memories and views of the world, and is inhabited by beings who represent different aspects of Jade's personality (see AnthropomorphicPersonification). There's also a pirate ship (known as the ''Jade'') that sails it, which seems to represent her consciousness, as whatever aspect controls it appears to be dominant; when Jade was good, Hero (her inherent goodness) was captain, whereas following her FaceHeelTurn, the Queen (her SuperpoweredEvilSide) seized control.control.
** There's also the center of the mindscape, which Hero describes as "Home", which is represented by a grander version of Uncle's shop with light pouring out of it. Hero isn't sure, but seems to think it represents Jade's soul.


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* LaserGuidedKarma: When Jade complains about getting more beat up during fights than she did when she was one of the good guys, Uncle blames it on her karma.


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* MeleeATrois: The fight in the sages' shrine -- it's Shadow Hand vs the Three Shades vs the heroes[[hottip:*:who are only fighting because the sages are {{True Neutral}}s who fight everyone and don't give them a choice in the matter]].


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* RantInducingSlight: After getting tossed out of the sages' shrine at least a dozen times, Jade outright demands Brother Light give her the first tablet of the Teachings... which he does, saying she could have simply asked. This causes Jade to snap a bit, and she goes on a rant where she accuses the Light of messing with her and the tablet being booby trapped, before saying "screw it" (literally), grabbing the tablet, and running off with it.


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* WrongGenreSavvy: When she finally gets the first tablet of the Teachings from the sages, Jade assumes it's booby trapped and will cause the whole mountain to turn into a volcano and in the resulting fight she'll drop the tablet in the lava just when she assumes she's won. None of this happens.
** Though in fairness, this was part of her [[RantInducingSlight slight-induced rant]], so she may not have actually believed any of it.
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* BatmanGambit: Uncle knows that Wong knows how to summon Tarakudo (who the heroes need to interrogate), but that he won't unless there's something in it for him, and also that he'll just double cross him the first chance he gets. So, Uncle and Captain Black stage a jailbreak in order to get Wong out and lure him into a false sense of security, then set an ambush for him for when he inevitably betrays Uncle during the summoning.


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** In order to temporarily summon and interrogate Tarakudo, Uncle is forced to get help from Wong in order to balance out the spell -- he then compares it to the Season 2 episode "The Good, The Bad, The Blind, The Deaf, And The Mute", where Wong needed Uncle to balance out a spell of his own.


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* DarkActionGirl: Jade wants to be one, but even with her new SuperStrength, her age and size are a hinderance.
* DarkMagicalGirl: What Jade is turning into to compensate for the fact that she's not much of a physical threat.


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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Uncle calls Wong out on this at one point, saying that trust and teamwork are things that he knows exist, but can't understand.


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* EvilSorcerer: In addition to the canonical Daolon Wong, there's Monsieur Verde and Blankman (though the latter is more of an InformedAbility; we've yet to see him use any magic)


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* LikeAFatherToMe: Played with, in that it's ''Uncle'' who points out that Jackie is "Jade's father in all but blood and title", and that he's aware of it even if they aren't.


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* ThePatriarch: Uncle refers to himself as such at one point.
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* VillainousBSOD: Jade has one after [[spoiler: Scruffy turns on her.]]
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* TheBrute: Hak Foo.



* TechnicalPacifist[=/=]MartialPacifist: Brother Light/the White Sage claims to be a pacifist. When Jade calls him out on this -- pointing out how he's spent the past several minutes tossing her around the shrine -- he responds by saying that ''he'' isn't the one hurting her, the things she's slamming into are.

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* TechnicalPacifist[=/=]MartialPacifist: TechnicalPacifist / MartialPacifist: Brother Light/the White Sage claims to be a pacifist. When Jade calls him out on this -- pointing out how he's spent the past several minutes tossing her around the shrine -- he responds by saying that ''he'' isn't the one hurting her, the things she's slamming into are.
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** Monsieur Verde is also pretty affable. Though considering who he's loosely based on (see {{Expy}} below) that's to be expected.



* ForWantOfANail[=/=]InSpiteOfANail: There are some distinct differences from the canon, but for the most part the plot is still following the same route.

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* ForWantOfANail[=/=]InSpiteOfANail: ForWantOfANail / InSpiteOfANail: There are some distinct differences from the canon, but for the most part the plot is still following the same route.
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* SinisterSurveillance: Jade manages to install bugs in Uncle's shop to keep tabs on the heroes.



* SurveillanceAsThePlotDemands: Jade manages to install bugs in Uncle's shop to keep tabs on the heroes.
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* {{Archenemy}}: Jade views Tohru as hers.

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* {{Archenemy}}: ArchEnemy: Jade views Tohru as hers.


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* CastingAShadow: Naturally, Jade gets this after her transformation; she gains the ability to teleport through shadows, and shadow energy forms the basis of her magic.

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* BigEater: After her transformation, Jade's metabolism and appetite shoot through the roof.



* CanonForeigner: Blankman, Monsieur Verde, the Sages, and arguably Left and Right (being Shadowkhan, but ones that become actual characters).



* {{Original Character}}s: Blankman, Monsieur Verde, the Sages, and arguably Left and Right (being Shadowkhan, but ones that become actual characters).



* WeCanRuleTogether: Jade offers Viper a place as her [[NumberTwo right hand]], but Viper refuses.

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* VillainsOutShopping: See MundaneUtility above. Also, when the Bat-Khan General attacks a theme park, Jade and the Enforcers stay off to the side enjoying some carnival food, and are discussing riding one of the rollercoasters when the heroes show up to fight them.
* WeCanRuleTogether: Jade offers Viper a place as her [[NumberTwo [[TheDragon right hand]], but Viper refuses.
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* AchillesHeel: After absorbing the first mask, Jade gains the Oni weakness to onions.



* WeakSauceWeakness: After absorbing the first mask, Jade gains the Oni weakness to onions.

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* DividedWeFall: Uncle initially refuses to let Viper help in stopping Jade, as he doesn't want help from a thief. Tohru calls him out on this, and he ultimately agrees to work with her.



* HangingSeparately: Uncle initially refuses to let Viper help in stopping Jade, as he doesn't want help from a thief. Tohru calls him out on this, and he ultimately agrees to work with her.
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* DemonicPossession: As to be expected from the Oni masks; Ratso is briefly possessed a couple of times by the Razor-tribe mask so the General can pass messages from Tarakudo, Ikazuki assumes complete control of Chow, and the Bat-tribe General is able to do likewise with Scruffy (though only with assistance from a spell Jade performed).

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