History Fanfic / QueenOfAllOni

13th Apr '17 7:34:48 PM nombretomado
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** Speaking of Blankman, a flashback to his younger days reveals that he once killed the entity that the cult he was raised in worshipped. For bonus points, it's implied that this creature was [[spoiler: ''[[TheSlenderManMythos the Slender Man]]'']].

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** Speaking of Blankman, a flashback to his younger days reveals that he once killed the entity that the cult he was raised in worshipped. For bonus points, it's implied that this creature was [[spoiler: ''[[TheSlenderManMythos ''[[Franchise/TheSlenderManMythos the Slender Man]]'']].
4th Jan '17 11:18:21 AM ZimFan89
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** Jade towards the end of the story, who plans to [[spoiler: have Right and Left killed]] because they can't be "trusted", ignoring the fact that they proved their loyalty to her time after time, helped her carrying her plans, supported her when she was at her weakest, and saved her life more than once. Though in her case, this is just another symptom of her [[SanitySlippage failing mental state]].



* UngratefulBastard: Jade towards of the story, who plans to [[spoiler: have Right and Left killed]] because they can't be "trusted", ignoring the fact that they proved their loyaltly to her time after time, helped her carrying her plans, supported her when she was at her weakest, and saved her life more than once.
4th Jan '17 7:07:44 AM HappyMan
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* UngratefulBastard: Jade towards of the story, who plans to [[spoiler: have Right and Left killed]] because they can't be "trusted", ignoring the fact that they proved their loyaltly to her time after time, helped her carrying her plans, supported her when she was at her weakest, and saved her life more than once.
31st Dec '16 8:04:44 AM ZimFan89
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** During his second journey into Jade's mind, Tohru meets Desire, who warns him about Jade's plans, stating that "when the game ends, she'll come for you." Jade's plan for the FinalBattle is called Operation Endgame.
31st Dec '16 6:34:19 AM ZimFan89
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** By the eve of the FinalBattle, Jade's [[SanitySlippage lost it enough]] that she relaxes this stance, ordering Hebi to kill him first chance she gets during the next conflict.
30th Dec '16 10:57:03 PM Donquill
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* LampshadeHanging: Plenty, to the point that there's a gag on it in chapter 19.
30th Dec '16 5:53:14 PM ZimFan89
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* BeingEvilSucks: Initially, the story seems to be running on EvilFeelsGood, as Jade really lives it up as an EvilOverlord in training. But post-VillainousBreakdown, it's {{deconstructed|Trope}} down into this, as her quest for more power only consumes more and more, until she's little more than a bitter wreck of a person.



* TheCaligula: Jade devolves into this during the story's second half.



** Wisker gets his arm broken by Hak Foo in the Halloween episode. In his next several appearances, the arm's in a sling, until Captain Black finally convinces him to use the Horse to heal it.



* TheCavalryArrivesLate: During the fight for the last mask, Section 13 only shows up after the Shadow Hand's been driven off. Lampshaded by Uncle.



* [[spoiler: GoodGirlsAvoidAbortion: It is revealed that Jade's parents nearly had her aborted. But her mother suffered cold feet just moments before entering the clinic.]]

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* [[spoiler: GoodGirlsAvoidAbortion: [[spoiler: It is revealed that Jade's parents nearly had her aborted. But her mother suffered cold feet just moments before entering the clinic.]]
30th Dec '16 4:56:23 PM ZimFan89
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* AxCrazy: By the story's climax, Jade has almost completely lost touch with reality, held in the grip of paranoid delusions.



** Chapter 19 -- Both sides prepare for the FinalBattle [[spoiler: while Right and Blankman become aware Jade is plotting to eliminate them afterwards.]]



** Chapter 19 lampshades this, as its subtitle is "[[ShooOutTheClowns No More Whimsy Subtitles]]".



* EleventhHourSuperpower: During several battles in the story's second half, the J-Team faces defeat only for Tohru to suddenly manifest new chi powers that help tip the scales.



** Jade's plan for the FinalBattle is simply called Operation Endgame. Though in keeping with the pattern, Right jokingly suggests alternatives -- Operation DelayedReaction, Operation Coupon Cash-in, and Operation Tea Drinking Rhino.



* SanitySlippage: Jade suffers from PTSD after her encounter with Lung, which gets worse over time, culminating in an arguable VillainousBreakdown after Tohru's attempt to capture her in the Vault of Endless Night -- she's now convinced that the heroes, and humans in general, are all out to either seal or kill her.

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* SanitySlippage: Jade suffers from PTSD after her encounter with Lung, which gets worse over time, culminating in an arguable VillainousBreakdown after Tohru's attempt to capture her in the Vault of Endless Night -- she's now convinced that the heroes, and humans in general, are all out to either seal or kill her. After this point, she just continues to dissolve into an increasingly paranoid and delusional mess.
* ScaledUp: In Chapter 19, Jade creates a shadow construct around her body in the shape of her serpent form, but on a much larger scale.


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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler: Completely gripped by madness by the eve of the FinalBattle, Jade intends to eliminate all of her minions other than Hebi, as a preemption against the betrayals she's sure are coming.]]
24th Oct '16 7:38:05 AM dlchen145
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** Jackie is referred to as "superhuman" by Ratso at one point, echoing a similar comment he made in canon after one of Jackie's more {{Badass}} moments.

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** Jackie is referred to as "superhuman" by Ratso at one point, echoing a similar comment he made in canon after one of Jackie's more {{Badass}} badass moments.
7th Oct '16 5:10:09 PM Donquill
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* BadBoss: Anton Mortimer.

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* BadBoss: Anton Mortimer.Mortimer much abuses his assistant.
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