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* HappyBirthdayToYou: After getting her revenge against the Dursleys, Jen sings "Happy birthday to me, Happy birthday to me, Happy birthday, dear Je~en, Happy birthday... to... '''me'''".
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* RuleOfThree: According to the contract between the Malfoys and the Blacks, Narcissa will be allowed to annul her marriage to Lucius if he does one of three things: try to kill her; does something that causes House Malfoy to be censored and lose its noble status; or give his rights as her husband to another, which Lucius did by standing back and allowing Voldemort to torture her.
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** The ritual to turn Jen into Bellatrix's daughter requires a blood sample willingly given by Bellatrix. Instead of visiting Azkaban and trying to convince Bellatrix to give a sample for the ritual, Jen's family uses some of the blood Bellatrix gave for their tapestry.
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** In the fourth and final book, Moody rips into Dumbledore for being willing to curse a friend simply because they disagree with him.
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** In the fourth and final book, [[WhatTheHellHero Moody rips into Dumbledore for being willing to curse a friend simply because they disagree with him.him. ]]
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* WhipItGood: When [[OurZombiesAreDifferent Inferi]] attack Hogwarts, Jen helps fight them off by using whips made of flames.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: In "Coronation of the Black Queen", Rita Skeeter is outlived by her mother.
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The first story in the series has a Reading the Book version, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11399034/1/ Who is Jen Black?]]'' written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6161951/Abyranss Abyranss]], which has sadly been discontinued.
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%% The first story in the series has a Reading the Book version, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11399034/1/ Who is Jen Black?]]'' written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6161951/Abyranss Abyranss]], which has sadly been discontinued.
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* TooGoodToBeTrue: When Jen is declared Bellatric Lestrange's daughter in "Black Princess Ascendant", the goblins tell her she can claim every vault belonging to the Lestranges since they're in Azkaban. Suspecting the goblins must have some ulterior motive to tell her, Sirius tells Jen to get advice from Ted Tonks on the matter. It turns outs the Ministry froze the vaults when the Lestranges were arrested and the goblins weren't allowed to collect any fees from them ever since. Ted helped Jen to make a good deal so she wouldn't lose much of the vaults' contents paying those fees.
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* HornyDevils: Blaise Zabini is an incubus.
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* SuccubiAndIncubi: Blaise Zabini is an incubus.
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* [[FatalFlaw Fatal Flaws]]: For Jen, Pride and Wrath. She's avoided the worst of the possible consequences thus far, but there are strong hints that she's going to be hit hard by them eventually.
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* [[FatalFlaw Fatal Flaws]]: FatalFlaw: For Jen, Pride and Wrath. She's avoided the worst of the possible consequences thus far, but there are strong hints that she's going to be hit hard by them eventually.
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* [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy I Want My Daughter To Be Happy]]: Lily realizes that Jen can't stand her and is willing to stay out of her life in the hopes they might one day reconcile.
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* [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy I Want My Daughter To Be Happy]]: IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Lily realizes that Jen can't stand her and is willing to stay out of her life in the hopes they might one day reconcile.
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* [[RacistGrandma Racist Grandpa]]: Specifically, Tracey's grandfather is racist against her for being a halfblood. It's bad enough that back before she knew the girl was magical Narcissa still liked Jen more than Tracey's grandfather likes her, and Narcissa doesn't even consider muggles to be human.
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* [[RacistGrandma Racist Grandpa]]: RacistGrandpa: Specifically, Tracey's grandfather is racist against her for being a halfblood. It's bad enough that back before she knew the girl was magical Narcissa still liked Jen more than Tracey's grandfather likes her, and Narcissa doesn't even consider muggles to be human.
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* [[YouAreNotMyFather You Are Not My Mother]]: Jen undergoes a ritual to replace Lily as her mother with Bellatrix. She'd have done it a second time to replace her father if it had been possible. Since it isn't, she's forced to simply insist that she is a Black, not a Potter.
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* YoureNotMyMother: Jen undergoes a ritual to replace Lily as her mother with Bellatrix. She'd have done it a second time to replace her father if it had been possible. Since it isn't, she's forced to simply insist that she is a Black, not a Potter.
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** Even knowing she was fine, Sirius admits to how terrified he is when he thinks of what would have happened to Jen when she was ambushed if she really did need a wand. She'd have been trapped in a building with ten others who hated her and wanted her dead.
** [[spoiler: "Albus, we need help! Hogwarts is under attack!"]]
** Even knowing she was fine, Sirius admits to how terrified he is when he thinks of what would have happened to Jen when she was ambushed if she really did need a wand. She'd have been trapped in a building with ten others who hated her and wanted her dead.
** [[spoiler: "Albus, we need help! Hogwarts is under attack!"]]
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* {{Stripperific}}: Menagerie's combat garb consists of a sports bra and [[WhoWearsShortShorts daisy dukes]]. Though this is because she fights by bringing her tattoos to life and dislikes having her clothing destroyed as a result.
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* {{Stripperific}}: Menagerie's combat garb consists of a sports bra and [[WhoWearsShortShorts daisy dukes]].dukes. Though this is because she fights by bringing her tattoos to life and dislikes having her clothing destroyed as a result.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome/PrincessOfTheBlacks Has its own page]].
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The [=DMLE=] member who first got the news of the [[spoiler: attack on Hogsmeade brushed it off as a prank after hearing that werewolves were attacking when it wasn't the full moon]], and took his time reporting it to his superior. [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Said wizard is investigated and fired due to his negligence resulting in several deaths.]]
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The [=DMLE=] member who first got the news of the [[spoiler: attack on Hogsmeade brushed it off as a prank after hearing that werewolves were attacking when it wasn't the full moon]], and took his time reporting it to his superior. [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Said wizard is investigated and fired due to his negligence resulting in several deaths.]]
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* {{Asexuality}}: Due to a charm she put around her bed, Luna has absolutely no sexual thoughts or feelings. At least until Jen clues her in.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: [[RealityEnsues/PrincessOfTheBlacks [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome/PrincessOfTheBlacks Has its own page]].
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* MirroringFactions: Back in the early parts of the war against Voldemort, there was a muggleborn group called New Wizardkind. According to Andromeda, they were exactly like the Death Eaters except they targeted purebloods.
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* RealityEnsues: [[RealityEnsues/PrincessOfTheBlacks Has its own page]].
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The [=DMLE=] member who first got the news of the [[spoiler: attack on Hogsmeade brushed it off as a prank after hearing that werewolves were attacking when it wasn't the full moon]], and took his time reporting it to his superior. [[RealityEnsues [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Said wizard is investigated and fired due to his negligence resulting in several deaths.]]
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* CombatPragmatist: Unlike the "Light fools" as she calls them, Jen will go immediately for lethal force in combat along with having no problems with "dirty" tactics like attacking from behind or while her opponent's guard is down.
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** Unlike the "Light fools" as she calls them, Jen will go immediately for lethal force in combat along with having no problems with "dirty" tactics like attacking from behind or while her opponent's guard isdown.down.
** One of the Black Family's mottos is to "fight fair only when there is no other choice, and even that isn't guaranteed".
** Unlike the "Light fools" as she calls them, Jen will go immediately for lethal force in combat along with having no problems with "dirty" tactics like attacking from behind or while her opponent's guard is
** One of the Black Family's mottos is to "fight fair only when there is no other choice, and even that isn't guaranteed".
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* MagicSkirt: Averted. Jen's fear of being flipped at Hogwarts for a prank made her decide to wear trousers.
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** Skeeter is forced into UndyingLoyalty to Jen, but her mind is subconsciously fighting it. If you look closely at one article she publishes after that happens to her, there's a number of capitalized letters that shouldn't be. They spell out HELP ME.
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** Skeeter is forced into UndyingLoyalty to Jen, but her mind is subconsciously fighting it. If you look closely at one article she publishes after that happens to her, there's a number of capitalized letters that shouldn't be. They spell out HELP ME. [[spoiler: This appears to keep happening throughout in Skeeter's articles: in chapter 37 of book 2, letters are doubled or out of place in a more subtle example. The author cheekily referred to a hidden message in the chapter.]]
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* TranquilFury: Upon learning that Dumbledore is responsible for her being sent to the Dursleys, Jen is described as being outwardly calm though mechanical. Her aura however badly burns Lily's hand when the latter tries to reach for her.
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* TranquilFury: Upon learning that Dumbledore is responsible for her being sent to the Dursleys, Jen is described as being outwardly calm though mechanical. Her aura however badly burns Lily's hand when the latter tries to reach for her. This tranquility also doesn't last very long, as later on in the day, when Flitwick checks in on Jen to make sure she's doing okay, she's set an entire room ablaze with cursed fire while she screams imprecations in as many languages as she knows.
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* InTheBlood: The Black family worries that Bellatrix's insanity might be genetic and thus passed to Jen after she's magically made Jen's mother.
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* ItRunsInTheFamily: Apparently, everyone in the Black family is some form of sexual deviant.
** Likewise all Blacks have black hair.
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** The Black family worries that Bellatrix's insanity might be genetic and thus passed to Jen after she's magically made Jen's mother.
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* DeathByChildbirth: In Chapter 27 of ''Black Princess Ascendant'', it's revealed that Lily and Petunia are half-sisters and Petunia's mother died while giving birth to her.
