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Time travel is confusing XD


* InternalReveal: With his [[MentorOccupationalHazard dying breaths]], Professor Oak reveals to Ash [[spoiler:that he was the boy "Sammy" who Ash befriended after Celebi temporarily brought him to the past in ''Pokemon [=4Ever=]'']].

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* InternalReveal: With his [[MentorOccupationalHazard dying breaths]], Professor Oak reveals to Ash [[spoiler:that he was the boy "Sammy" who Ash befriended after Celebi temporarily brought him to the present from the past in ''Pokemon [=4Ever=]'']].
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* InternalReveal: With his [[MentorOccupationalHazard dying breaths]], Professor Oak reveals to Ash [[spoiler:that he was the boy "Sammy" who Ash befriended after Celebi temporarily brought him to the past in ''Pokemon [=4Ever=]'']].
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* AdamAndEvePlot: Deconstructed; the Clefairy from Mt. Moon have decided to evacuate Seymour and at least one other human in the hopes of restarting humanity if they die out on Earth. Seymour, being just one nerdy scientist with no experience with women or parenting, rapidly starts cracking under the pressure of such weighty expectations, to the point of being utterly terrified that if he fails and humanity reaches a dead end, [[ItsAllMyFault he'll be directly responsible for their extinction.]] To make matters worse, despite the Clefairy trying to be comforting, they approach it all from a [[BlueAndOrangeMorality cold, logical and, well, alien perspective]], which fails to comfort Seymour at all and indeed, he starts to wonder if they're just [[CondescendingCompassion pitying him]].


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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Seymour the Scientist gets evacuated into space by the Clefairies, with the very weighty expectation of repopulating the human race if they go extinct on Earth due to Ho-oh's actions no less. Despite having once dreamed of going into space with them, he's ultimately distraught at the realization that he'll never be able to see his home again.
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* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler: Ash]] has this revelation after the Battle at Pallet Town and symbolically buries his original hat and badge collection next to [[spoiler: his mom]]'s grave. [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness This is likely done to justify his out-of-character-ness.]]

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* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler: Ash]] has this revelation after the Battle at Pallet Town and symbolically buries his original hat and badge collection next to [[spoiler: his mom]]'s grave. [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness This is likely done to justify his his]] [[BuffySpeak out-of-character-ness.]]
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--> The boy's eyes were cold, unforgiving, and unmistakably red. Takeda hadn't helped slay a nest of monsters. He'd followed the [[HeWhoFightsMonsters real ones]] to it.

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--> The boy's eyes were cold, unforgiving, and unmistakably red.[[RedEyesTakeWarning red]]. Takeda hadn't helped slay a nest of monsters. He'd followed the [[HeWhoFightsMonsters real ones]] to it.
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* AngstUpgrade: [[spoiler: Ash]] is [[ThatManIsDead no longer]] [[spoiler: Ash]], to start.

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* AngstUpgrade: AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: [[spoiler: Ash]] is [[ThatManIsDead no longer]] [[spoiler: Ash]], to start.
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* AngstUpgrade: [[spoiler: Ash]] is [[ThatManIsDead no longer]] [[spoiler: Ash]], to start.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: The Viridian Forest Samurai is named Takada, though this isn't revealed to the characters.

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* NamedByTheAdaptation: The Viridian Forest Samurai is named Takada, Takeda, though this isn't revealed to the characters.
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* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler: Ash]] has this revelation near the end, after the Battle at Pallet Town, symbolically buries his original hat and badge collection next to his mom's grave. [[HeWhoFightsMonsters He becomes a lot]] [[GoMadFromTheRevelation less sympathetic after this.]]

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* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler: Ash]] has this revelation near the end, after the Battle at Pallet Town, Town and symbolically buries his original hat and badge collection next to [[spoiler: his mom's mom]]'s grave. [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness This is likely done to justify his out-of-character-ness.]]
--> The boy's eyes were cold, unforgiving, and unmistakably red. Takeda hadn't helped slay a nest of monsters. He'd followed the
[[HeWhoFightsMonsters He becomes a lot]] [[GoMadFromTheRevelation less sympathetic after this.]]real ones]] to it.
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* NamedInTheAdaptation: The Viridian Forest Samurai is named Takada, though this isn't revealed to the characters.

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* NamedInTheAdaptation: NamedByTheAdaptation: The Viridian Forest Samurai is named Takada, though this isn't revealed to the characters.
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* NamedInTheAdaptation: The Viridian Forest Samurai is named Takada, though this isn't revealed to the characters.
* ThatManIsDead: [[spoiler: Ash]] has this revelation near the end, after the Battle at Pallet Town, symbolically buries his original hat and badge collection next to his mom's grave. [[HeWhoFightsMonsters He becomes a lot]] [[GoMadFromTheRevelation less sympathetic after this.]]
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removal of magnificent bastard pothol


* KillerRabbit: [[MagnificentBastard Uxie]] should be on the top of everyone's "Do Not Fuck With" List if you value your life. Even [[BigBad Ho-oh]] fears him.

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* KillerRabbit: [[MagnificentBastard Uxie]] Uxie should be on the top of everyone's "Do Not Fuck With" List if you value your life. Even [[BigBad Ho-oh]] fears him.

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* {{Hellfire}}: Will-O-Wisp is a supernatural purple-blue fire that cannot be extinguished and can burn even rock.

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* {{Hellfire}}: {{Hellfire}}:
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Will-O-Wisp is a supernatural purple-blue fire that cannot be extinguished and can burn even rock.rock.
** A technological version appears in ''Poké Wars: The Files of Doctor Kaminko'' with some of the soldiers using the IW-229 "Houndoom" flamethrower to clear Mount Moon of Zubat. The flamethrower uses a highly toxic and corrosive organoborane fuel that burns with brilliant green flames. The fuel reacts to oxygen and water by catching fire and its combustion products are also extremely toxic and corrosive.


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* TechnicolorFire: In ''Poké Wars Wars: The Files of Doctor Kaminko'', some of the soldiers use the IW-229 "Houndoom" flamethrower to clear Mount Moon of Zubat. The flamethrower uses a highly toxic organoborane fuel that burns with brilliant green flames.
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* DeconstructionFic: Completely tears apart the sub-genre of Pokémon revolution fanfictions by pulling it pulling absolutely no punches with showing how divisive and destructive such an act would be and how it inevitably leads to WarIsHell. It also highlights how lethal the [[{{mons}} Pokémon]] can be.

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* DeconstructionFic: Completely tears apart the sub-genre of Pokémon revolution fanfictions by pulling it pulling absolutely no punches with showing how divisive and destructive such an act would be and how it inevitably leads to WarIsHell. It also highlights how lethal the [[{{mons}} Pokémon]] can be.
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* DeconstructionFic: Completely tears apart the sub-genre of Pokémon prevolution fanfictions by pulling it pulling absolutely no punches with showing how divisive and destructive such an act would be and how it inevitably leads to WarIsHell. It also highlights how lethal the [[{{mons}} Pokémon]] can be.

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* DeconstructionFic: Completely tears apart the sub-genre of Pokémon prevolution revolution fanfictions by pulling it pulling absolutely no punches with showing how divisive and destructive such an act would be and how it inevitably leads to WarIsHell. It also highlights how lethal the [[{{mons}} Pokémon]] can be.
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* DeconstructionFic: Completely tears apart the sub-genre of Pokémon pokémon revolution fanfictions by pulling it pulling absolutely no punches with showing how divisive and destructive such an act would be and how it inevitably leads to WarIsHell. It also highlights how lethal the [[{{mons}} Pokémon]] can be. . It also highlights how lethal the [[{{mons}} Pokémon]] can be.

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* DeconstructionFic: Completely tears apart the sub-genre of Pokémon pokémon revolution prevolution fanfictions by pulling it pulling absolutely no punches with showing how divisive and destructive such an act would be and how it inevitably leads to WarIsHell. It also highlights how lethal the [[{{mons}} Pokémon]] can be. . It also highlights how lethal the [[{{mons}} Pokémon]] can be.
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* DeconstructionFic: This series completely tears apart the sub-genre of Pokémon revolution fanfictions. It also highlights how lethal the [[{{mons}} Pokémon]] can be.

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* DeconstructionFic: This series completely Completely tears apart the sub-genre of Pokémon pokémon revolution fanfictions.fanfictions by pulling it pulling absolutely no punches with showing how divisive and destructive such an act would be and how it inevitably leads to WarIsHell. It also highlights how lethal the [[{{mons}} Pokémon]] can be. . It also highlights how lethal the [[{{mons}} Pokémon]] can be.
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%% * WarFic: It's in the name! Do not uncomment until further context has been added.

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%% * WarFic: It's in The stories are about a group of Legendaries led by Lugia trying to stop a genocidal crusade by Ho-Oh. And of course, the name! Do not uncomment until further context has been added.humans end up as a third faction.
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Removing unnecesary pothole.


* AttackAttackAttack: Some wild Pokémon are guilty of this. The most JustForFun/{{egregious}} example is a Persian inhabiting Celadon with his pack of Meowth. He chucks his whole group at the Kanto survivors, and even after all of his underlings are slaughtered, he still tries using Thunderbolt. [[CaptainObvious He doesn't live long enough to pull it off]].

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* AttackAttackAttack: Some wild Pokémon are guilty of this. The most JustForFun/{{egregious}} example is a Persian inhabiting Celadon with his pack of Meowth. He chucks his whole group at the Kanto survivors, and even after all of his underlings are slaughtered, he still tries using Thunderbolt. [[CaptainObvious He doesn't live long enough to pull it off]].off.



* WarFic: [[CaptainObvious It's in the name!]]

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%% * WarFic: [[CaptainObvious It's in the name!]]name! Do not uncomment until further context has been added.
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Didn't think these should be erased just because Five Bad Man trope been's suspended.

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* DragonInChief: [[EvilGenius Uxie]] is a far more competent antagonist than Ho-oh lacking Ho-oh's SmugSnake ego. He's the one who constantly upgrades and expands Ho-oh's forces, keeps all of the megalomaniacs that Ho-oh's recruited in line, and basically makes all the plans. Ho-oh has recently realized this and is fearing that he might soon be DemotedToDragon. [[spoiler: Although Uxie just tosses him into the Reverse World and effectively takes over.]]


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* EvilGenius: Uxie: The Being of Knowledge who sees the genocide and everything else as a chance to experiment. He's doing it ForScience, though, and only joined Ho-Oh because he won't complain about Uxie's lack of morality.
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Five Bad Band has been cut, as discussed here.


* FiveBadBand
** BigBad: Ho-oh: Leader of the genocide campaign.
** TheDragon: Raikou: Ho-oh's "lieutenant", who accompanies him at nearly all times.
*** Entei: Another one of Ho-Oh's dragons, sent on a mission to recruit wild Pokémon.
*** Kyogre: Has so far been commanding the majority of the underwater Pokémon to do Ho-oh's bidding, and has also discovered an "ace" that supposedly could guarantee Ho-oh's victory.
*** DragonInChief: Uxie is a far more competent antagonist than Ho-oh lacking Ho-oh's SmugSnake ego. He's the one who constantly upgrades and expands Ho-oh's forces, keeps all of the megalomaniacs that Ho-oh's recruited in line, and basically makes all the plans. Ho-oh has recently realized this and is fearing that he might soon be DemotedToDragon. [[spoiler: Although Uxie just tosses him into the Reverse World and effectively takes over.]]
** TheBrute: Shadow Lugia: A corrupted Lugia clone who only desires to take the real Lugia's mate and cause as much destruction as possible.
** EvilGenius: Uxie: The Being of Knowledge who sees the genocide and everything else as a chance to experiment. He's doing it ForScience, though, and only joined Ho-Oh because he won't complain about Uxie's lack of morality.
** DarkChick: Mewtwo: An artificial being who first fought against Ho-oh and lost, ending up as little more than a mind controlled puppet.

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* MindRape: [[spoiler: Uxie harvests knowledge human scientists minds before killing them.]]

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* MohsScaleOfViolenceHardness: A solid 7 on the scale ''at minimum''. Usually around 8-9 on the scale.
* MindRape: [[spoiler: Uxie harvests knowledge from the minds of human scientists minds before killing them.]]
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* AttackAttackAttack: Some wild Pokémon are guilty of this. The most {{egregious}} example is a Persian inhabiting Celadon with his pack of Meowth. He chucks his whole group at the Kanto survivors, and even after all of his underlings are slaughtered, he still tries using Thunderbolt. [[CaptainObvious He doesn't live long enough to pull it off]].

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* AttackAttackAttack: Some wild Pokémon are guilty of this. The most {{egregious}} JustForFun/{{egregious}} example is a Persian inhabiting Celadon with his pack of Meowth. He chucks his whole group at the Kanto survivors, and even after all of his underlings are slaughtered, he still tries using Thunderbolt. [[CaptainObvious He doesn't live long enough to pull it off]].
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* Tunnel Network - Alola's Underground System is basically this, complete with underground cities and bases for their civilians and soldiers in the event of an island-wide cataclysm.

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* PowerCrystal - the crystals used by Ransei are these, allowing them to power virtually everything in their country, ranging from their GUNDAM Soldiers to their vehicles, and even can be used in beam weaponry, making the Heart of Ransei a very versatile power source.

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*** [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8284869/1/Poke_Wars_El_Escuadron_Zero El Escuadrón Zero]] (''Poké Wars: The Zero Squad'') which is set on the millitary future of the series and introduces MiniMecha inspired on [[VideoGame/FrontMission wanzers]] called the Overlords.

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*** [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8284869/1/Poke_Wars_El_Escuadron_Zero El Escuadrón Zero]] (''Poké Wars: The Zero Squad'') which is set on the millitary military future of the series and introduces MiniMecha inspired on [[VideoGame/FrontMission wanzers]] called the Overlords.


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* MiniMecha: Ransei's GUNDAM Soldiers are these by default.
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** ZAFT Prime:
*** ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12827220/1/PokeWars-Files-of-the-Underground; Poké Wars: Files of the Underground]]'' is a technical [[TechnologyPorn field manual]] detailing Alola's weapons and technology, complete with field reports to showcase their use.
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*** ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11162713/1/Pok%C3%A9-Wars-Ransei-Chronicles-What-I-ve-Done]]'' The start of Ransei's troubles in the aftermath of the Undampening, as well as the start of the subsequent Unification of the region.
*** ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11610899/1/Pok%C3%A9-Wars-Ransei-Military-Files-Weapons-and-Firearms]]'' A second[[TechnologyPorn field manual]] detailing all the weapons used by Ransei, including "field reports" which covers their use both domestic and abroad, including reports from other regions in the Post-Undampening world.

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*** ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11162713/1/Pok%C3%A9-Wars-Ransei-Chronicles-What-I-ve-Done]]'' net/s/11162713/1/Pok%C3%A9-Wars-Ransei-Chronicles-What-I-ve-Done; Poké Wars: The Ransei Chronicles: What I've Done]]'' The start of Ransei's troubles in the aftermath of the Undampening, as well as the start of the subsequent Unification of the region.
*** ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11610899/1/Pok%C3%A9-Wars-Ransei-Military-Files-Weapons-and-Firearms]]'' net/s/11610899/1/Pok%C3%A9-Wars-Ransei-Military-Files-Weapons-and-Firearms; Poké Wars: Ransei Military Files: Weapons and Firearms]]'' A second[[TechnologyPorn second [[TechnologyPorn field manual]] detailing all the weapons used by Ransei, including "field reports" which covers their use both domestic and abroad, including reports from other regions in the Post-Undampening world.

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