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* {{Irony}}: Despite [[spoiler:abandoning the bet all together ([[NiceJobBreakingItHero thanks to Scootaloo]])]], the antepenultimate chapter ends [[spoiler:with Discord making Penumbra laugh]].
** Which is because of [[spoiler:her learning that Discord [[TooDumbToLive actually thought]] she'd spend time with her once he took over the throne]]. Yes, as it turns out, [[spoiler:Penumbra find {{Irony}} funny]].
** Which is because of [[spoiler:her learning that Discord [[TooDumbToLive actually thought]] she'd spend time with her once he took over the throne]]. Yes, as it turns out, [[spoiler:Penumbra find {{Irony}} funny]].
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* PowerLimiter: Pinkie Pie is voluntarily keeping most of her Imaginary Friend power sealed off to avoid hurting others by accident. Unless a Pinkie Promise is involved - in that case, the entire arsenal is at her disposal for the purpose of Keeping the Promise.
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* PowerLimiter: Pinkie Pie is voluntarily keeping most of her Imaginary [[spoiler:Imaginary Friend power power]] sealed off to avoid hurting others by accident. Unless a Pinkie Promise is involved - in that case, the entire arsenal is at her disposal for the purpose of Keeping the Promise.
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* FishOutOfTemporalWaterFishOutOfTemporalWater: Take a guess.
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* CuttingTheKnot: Discord tries making Penumbra laugh by simply Discording her... [[NoSell except it does jack all to her]].
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* WhamLine: One piece of narration prior to TheReveal turns a seemingly simple one-shot into the start of a bigger story:
-->“I guess this goose chase wasn’t all that pointless after all,” Twilight concluded with a smile. Her issues thus resolved, she decided to open the scrapbook her parents had lovingly assembled for her.
-->What she saw in there nearly caused her to drop the book on the floor.
-->“I guess this goose chase wasn’t all that pointless after all,” Twilight concluded with a smile. Her issues thus resolved, she decided to open the scrapbook her parents had lovingly assembled for her.
-->What she saw in there nearly caused her to drop the book on the floor.
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* OvercomplicatedMenuOrder: We have a "venti two-thirds decaf low-fat soy caramel macchiato with whipped cream, mocha sprinkles, and a sprig of hay. And a cranberry orange-peel scone."
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor: Discord, of course. Early on most of his jokes just consist of transforming somepony or something and then making a pun about it, and he gets confused when nopony else laughs..
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor: Discord, of course. Early on most of his jokes just consist of transforming somepony or something and then making a pun about it, and he gets confused when nopony else laughs..laughs.
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* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMindJourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: Pinkie enters Twilight's mind to formulate a battle plan against the Nightmare. It's laid out very similar to Canterlot, with various parts of the castle and city dedicated to imagination, dreams, memories, knowledge, etc.
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor: Discord, of course. Early on most of his jokes just consist of transforming somepony or something and then making a pun about it, and he gets confused when nopony else laughs..
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* WimpFight: When Discord and Pinkie finally face off, the first thing they do is engage in a comically ineffective slap-fight while calling each other names. Only after several minutes of that do they start the proper magic duel. Of course, both of them only did it because they thought it would be funny.
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* IReadThatAs: Penumbra applies as a Barrister for Starbucks.
* MortonsFork: Penumbra being [[spoiler:a thousand years old]], she has no idea how modern workplace relations work. In the various jobs she tries, she is sent mixed signals of the highest degree, in job being fired for being too cold and "only doing her job" while in another quitting over sexual harassment.
* MortonsFork: Penumbra being [[spoiler:a thousand years old]], she has no idea how modern workplace relations work. In the various jobs she tries, she is sent mixed signals of the highest degree, in job being fired for being too cold and "only doing her job" while in another quitting over sexual harassment.
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* IReadThatAs: Penumbra applies for a job as a Barrister barrister [[spoiler:which turns out to be a position as a ''barista'' for Starbucks.
Starbucks]].
* MortonsFork: Penumbra being [[spoiler:a thousand years old]], she has no idea how modern workplace relations work. In the various jobs she tries, she is sent mixed signals of the highest degree, injob one instance being fired for being too cold and "only doing her job" while in another quitting over sexual harassment.
* MortonsFork: Penumbra being [[spoiler:a thousand years old]], she has no idea how modern workplace relations work. In the various jobs she tries, she is sent mixed signals of the highest degree, in
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* TrueArt: An InUniverse example, and Penumbra's reasons for selecting [[spoiler:cloud sculpting and contruction]] as her final job. She just got fed up with the mass-produced versions floating around everywhere.
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* TrueArt: An InUniverse example, and Penumbra's reasons for selecting [[spoiler:cloud sculpting and contruction]] construction]] as her final job. She just got fed up with the mass-produced versions floating around everywhere.
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* TrueArt: Penumbra's reasons for selecting [[spoiler:cloud sculpting and contruction]] as her final job. She just got fed up with the mass-produced versions floating around everywhere.
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* TrueArt: An InUniverse example, and Penumbra's reasons for selecting [[spoiler:cloud sculpting and contruction]] as her final job. She just got fed up with the mass-produced versions floating around everywhere.
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* [[SealedEvilInACan Sealed Mass Murderer In An Amulet]]SealedEvilInACan: [[spoiler:Or rather in an amulet.]]
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* IdiosyncraticChapterTitles: Every chapter shares its title with a song by the Legendary Shack Shakers.
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* IdiosyncraticChapterTitles: [[IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming Idiosyncratic Chapter Titles]]: Every chapter shares its title with a song by the Legendary Shack Shakers.
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With the ending of ''Pandeliriium'', the author has declared the cycle complete.
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With the ending of ''Pandeliriium'', ''Pandelirium'', the author has declared the cycle complete.
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The series currently consists of, in chronological order: ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14298/petriculture Petriculture]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/35688/inscape Inscape]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68226/avocation Avocation]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/87692/- Pi]]'', and ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/105303/pandelirium Pandelirium]]''. (Also, as the premise of each successive story is more or less grounded in the surprise ending of the previous story, be extra careful of spoilers below!)
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The series currently consists of, in chronological order: of the following five stories: ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/14298/petriculture Petriculture]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/35688/inscape Inscape]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/68226/avocation Avocation]]'', ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/87692/- Pi]]'', and ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/105303/pandelirium Pandelirium]]''. (Also, as the premise of each successive story is more or less grounded in the surprise ending of the previous story, be extra careful of spoilers below!)
below!)
With the ending of ''Pandeliriium'', the author has declared the cycle complete.
With the ending of ''Pandeliriium'', the author has declared the cycle complete.
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Compared to some of the things that don\'t have spoiler tags, the Cutie Mark Crusaders being turned into stone is rather inconsequential.
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* TakenForGranite: [[spoiler: The Cutie Mark Crusaders.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Discord takes the bullet for Celestia. It's not clear as whether or not he knew the consequences when he did it. He survives, anyway.]]
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* [[spoiler: PrematureEulogy: Penumbra for Discord.]]
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* YourWorstNightmare: Trixie, [[spoiler: with Sombra's power]], can do this. The repeated illusions have a draining effect on the Mane Six, but it only takes one to give Celestia a full, sobbing breakdown.
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* InsistentTerminology: "Don't call me 'Penny.'"
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* TitleDrop: Discord intends to name his kingdom "Panderilium"."Pandelirium".
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* [[AtLeastIAdmitIt At Least I ''Know'' I'm Crazy]]: Discord considers this a point in his favor when comparing himself to Trixie.
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* TitleDrop: Discord intends to name his kingdom "Panderilium".
** "And what, pray tell, does it mean?" "Who cares?"
** "And what, pray tell, does it mean?" "Who cares?"
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* LiterallyShatteredLives: The ponies on the receiving end of Sombra's genocide.
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* SugarApocalypse: Sombra's destruction of the Crystal Empire.
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Finally got off my lazy butt to find the whole quote.
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--> [[spoiler:'''Trixie''': ''…crystals.''] %%yeah, can't remember the whole line.
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler:Trixie (and an [[EverythingsWorseWithBears Ursa Major]]) vs. Everypony.]] The author pointed out in a note that this is supposed to evoke a feeling of "Wait, this isn't reasonably possible..."
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: [[spoiler:Trixie (and an [[EverythingsWorseWithBears [[BearsAreBadNews Ursa Major]]) vs. Everypony.]] The author pointed out in a note that this is supposed to evoke a feeling of "Wait, this isn't reasonably possible..."
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* IndyPloy: Celestia gets the sense that the order-obsessed Trixie is just making it up as she goes.
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* [[spoiler: UnwinnableByDesign: The bet. Penumbra has the ability to not laugh if she doesn't want to. The idea was to force Discord to put himself in Penumbra's shoes, and hopefully this empathy would lead him to friendship. But then Scootaloo unwittingly spills the beans...]] ]]
* WeaponOfChoice: Discord seems to favor eggnog.
* WeaponOfChoice: Discord seems to favor eggnog.
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* DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu: Trixie [[spoiler:Trixie (and an [[EverythingsWorseWithBears Ursa Major]]) vs. Everypony. ]] The author pointed out in a note that this is supposed to evoke a feeling of "Wait, this isn't reasonably possible..."
