Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13366059/1/Party-Crusher Party Crusher]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
to:
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13366059/1/Party-Crusher Party Crusher]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], Creator/{{RockSunner}}, for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* NoodleIncident: The Startrain incident is briefly brought up when the bodyguard meets Pegasus. The fic was written before "Startrain" aired, and the author correctly assumed that Pegasus would make his proper debut in that episode.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 14 (click to see context) from:
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Nino, Luka, and Max [[spoiler:don't become heroes fighting Party Crasher, and therefore are not captured by him. They are able to get away with the Miracle Box and one of the Miraculous that would have been loaned to them.]] However, it's [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] with [[spoiler:Max from the original timeline, since he and Bunnix suffer a RetGone after altering the past so that Hawk Moth never creates Party Crasher]].
to:
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Nino, Luka, and Max [[spoiler:don't become heroes fighting Party Crasher, and therefore are not captured by him. They are able to get away with the Miracle Box and one of the Miraculous that would have been loaned to them.]] However, it's [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] with [[spoiler:Max from the original timeline, since he and Bunnix Bunnyx suffer a RetGone after altering the past so that Hawk Moth never creates Party Crasher]].Crasher.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
That Shout Out originates from the original episode, not this fanfiic.
Changed line(s) 14,15 (click to see context) from:
* ShoutOut: In Chapter 3, the disguised Marinette says "[[Franchise/SuperMarioBros It's-a me, Marino!]]" in a bad Italian accent.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Nino, Luka, and Max [[spoiler:don't become heroes fighting Party Crasher, and therefore are not captured by him. They are able to get away with the Miracle Box and one of the Miraculous that would have been loaned to them.]]
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Nino, Luka, and Max [[spoiler:don't become heroes fighting Party Crasher, and therefore are not captured by him. They are able to get away with the Miracle Box and one of the Miraculous that would have been loaned to them.]]
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 6 (click to see context) from:
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that [[spoiler:Party Crasher notices Master Fu's presence behind a parked car when tries to hold back Chat Noir, with the result that Master Fu is captured before he can distribute any Miraculous and both Ladybug and Chat Noir are delivered into Hawk Moth's clutches.]]
to:
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that [[spoiler:Party Crasher notices Master Fu's presence behind a parked car when he tries to hold back Chat Noir, with the result that Master Fu is captured before he can distribute any Miraculous and both Ladybug and Chat Noir are delivered into Hawk Moth's clutches.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* HisNameIs: Subverted. [[spoiler:Bunnyx and Pegasus are only able to get out that Hawk Moth is in the Agreste mansion before vanishing from existence, but Ladybug and Chat Noir are able to figure out from that that he's almost certainly Gabriel Agreste.]]
* {{Hypocrite}}: In Chapter 2, [[spoiler:Hawk Moth chides Adrien for keeping secrets and sneaking out. Three seconds later, Marinette deduces he's Gabriel, and Adrien calls him out for keeping secrets and sneaking out.]]
* MyFutureSelfAndMe: While it's not directly commented on, [[spoiler:Max is present at the party when his future self appears to save the day as Pegasus]].
* {{Hypocrite}}: In Chapter 2, [[spoiler:Hawk Moth chides Adrien for keeping secrets and sneaking out. Three seconds later, Marinette deduces he's Gabriel, and Adrien calls him out for keeping secrets and sneaking out.]]
* MyFutureSelfAndMe: While it's not directly commented on, [[spoiler:Max is present at the party when his future self appears to save the day as Pegasus]].
Added DiffLines:
* RetGone: [[spoiler:Bunnyx and Pegasus from the original timeline]] are wiped from existence after [[spoiler:changing the future by preventing Wayhem's akumatization and telling the other heroes about Hawk Moth's location]].
* ShoutOut: In Chapter 3, the disguised Marinette says "[[Franchise/SuperMarioBros It's-a me, Marino!]]" in a bad Italian accent.
* ShoutOut: In Chapter 3, the disguised Marinette says "[[Franchise/SuperMarioBros It's-a me, Marino!]]" in a bad Italian accent.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 8 (click to see context) from:
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Bunnyx and Pegasus]] sacrifice themselves by [[spoiler:changing the timeline so that Party Crasher is never created. This wipes out their own timeline and their own existence in a RetGone.]]
to:
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Bunnyx and Pegasus]] sacrifice themselves by [[spoiler:changing the timeline so that Party Crasher is never created. This wipes out their own timeline and their own existence in a RetGone.existence.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 8 (click to see context) from:
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Bunnyx and Pegasus]] sacrifice themselves by [[spoiler:changing the timeline so that Party Crasher is never created. This wipes out their own timeline and their own existence.]]
to:
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Bunnyx and Pegasus]] sacrifice themselves by [[spoiler:changing the timeline so that Party Crasher is never created. This wipes out their own timeline and their own existence.existence in a RetGone.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* NonProtagonistResolver: Kim, by [[spoiler:getting critical information to the others about Hawk Moth and Party Crasher, allows Bunnyx to resolve the akuma problem by time travel. Pegasus unknowingly saves Emilie as well, by clearing the party to avoid a panic and getting Markov unplugged.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
This is a multi-chapter work and it is still in progress.
to:
This is a multi-chapter three-chapter work and it is still in progress.now complete.
Added line(s) 9 (click to see context) :
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Bunnyx and Pegasus]] sacrifice themselves by [[spoiler:changing the timeline so that Party Crasher is never created. This wipes out their own timeline and their own existence.]]
Changed line(s) 9 (click to see context) from:
* TheUnmasking: Hawk Moth and Party Crasher [[spoiler:discover the secret identities of Ladybug and Chat Noir. By his reaction to seeing Adrien, Hawk Moth gives his own identity away.]]
to:
* TheUnmasking: Hawk Moth and Party Crasher [[spoiler:discover the secret identities of Ladybug and Chat Noir. By his reaction to seeing Adrien, Hawk Moth gives his own identity away.]] However, [[spoiler:in the altered timeline at the end, only Hawk Moth and Cat Noir have their identities exposed.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 9 (click to see context) from:
* TheUnmasking: Hawk Moth and Party Crasher [[spoiler:discover the secret identities of Ladybug and Chat Noir. By his reaction to seeing Adrien, Hawk Moth gives his own identity away.]]
to:
* TheUnmasking: Hawk Moth and Party Crasher [[spoiler:discover the secret identities of Ladybug and Chat Noir. By his reaction to seeing Adrien, Hawk Moth gives his own identity away.]]
* WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk: Hawk Moth [[spoiler:puts Marinette back into the mirror ball to break her so that she will reveal where the Guardian is.]] Ironically, [[spoiler:he already has Master Fu in his power without realizing it.]]
* WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk: Hawk Moth [[spoiler:puts Marinette back into the mirror ball to break her so that she will reveal where the Guardian is.]] Ironically, [[spoiler:he already has Master Fu in his power without realizing it.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Nino, Luka, and Max [[spoiler:don't become heroes fighting Party Crasher, and therefore are not captured by him. They are able to get away with the Miracle Box and one of the Miraculous that would have been loaned to them.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
new page
Added DiffLines:
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13366059/1/Party-Crusher Party Crusher]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
This is a multi-chapter work and it is still in progress.
----
!!This fanfiction series contains examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that [[spoiler:Party Crasher notices Master Fu's presence behind a parked car when tries to hold back Chat Noir, with the result that Master Fu is captured before he can distribute any Miraculous and both Ladybug and Chat Noir are delivered into Hawk Moth's clutches.]]
* AndIMustScream: Hawk Moth intends [[spoiler:to imprison his enemies in Party Crasher's mirrors forever, fully conscious but unable to move.]]
* TheUnmasking: Hawk Moth and Party Crasher [[spoiler:discover the secret identities of Ladybug and Chat Noir. By his reaction to seeing Adrien, Hawk Moth gives his own identity away.]]
This is a multi-chapter work and it is still in progress.
----
!!This fanfiction series contains examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that [[spoiler:Party Crasher notices Master Fu's presence behind a parked car when tries to hold back Chat Noir, with the result that Master Fu is captured before he can distribute any Miraculous and both Ladybug and Chat Noir are delivered into Hawk Moth's clutches.]]
* AndIMustScream: Hawk Moth intends [[spoiler:to imprison his enemies in Party Crasher's mirrors forever, fully conscious but unable to move.]]
* TheUnmasking: Hawk Moth and Party Crasher [[spoiler:discover the secret identities of Ladybug and Chat Noir. By his reaction to seeing Adrien, Hawk Moth gives his own identity away.]]
