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!!This fic contains example of:
* AdaptationalHeroism: Sabrina, who was Chloé's BetaBitch for most of the show up until Season 5, becomes Marinette's best friend, [[spoiler:and later girlfriend]]. [[spoiler:She will also become the Bee Holder, calling herself Hornet]].
* AdaptationalHeroism: Sabrina, who was Chloé's BetaBitch for most of the show up until Season 5, becomes Marinette's best friend, [[spoiler:and later girlfriend]]. [[spoiler:She will also become the Bee Holder, calling herself Hornet]].
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!!This fic contains example examples of:
*AdaptationalHeroism: AdaptationalHeroism:
** Sabrina, who was Chloé's BetaBitch for most of the show up until Season 5, becomes Marinette's best friend, [[spoiler:and later girlfriend]]. [[spoiler:She will also become the Bee Holder, calling herself Hornet]].
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** Sabrina, who was Chloé's BetaBitch for most of the show up until Season 5, becomes Marinette's best friend, [[spoiler:and later girlfriend]]. [[spoiler:She will also become the Bee Holder, calling herself Hornet]].
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Sabrina, obviously, since she resolves her misunderstanding with Marinette.
** In the show, André, the ice cream vendor, is a ShipperOnDeck that believes that his ice cream is truly magical and that people should get with who his ice cream decides, getting sad when his pairings don't get together (evident in the canon episode "Glaciator 2"). In this fic, he's an ExcellentJudgeOfCharacter who correctly deduces that Marinette's feelings are confused and let her choose which flavors she wants, much to her classmates' surprise. In "Interlude 2", he's given a small backstory with a bit of sympathy added in.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Marinette and Sabrina are best friends in this fic thanks to the resolve of the misunderstanding that happened in "Evillustrator". [[spoiler:During "Heroes' Day, Part 2", they start dating each other after Ladybug kisses Hornet to remove Dark Cupid's influence and confesses her feelings to her]].
** In the show, André, the ice cream vendor, is a ShipperOnDeck that believes that his ice cream is truly magical and that people should get with who his ice cream decides, getting sad when his pairings don't get together (evident in the canon episode "Glaciator 2"). In this fic, he's an ExcellentJudgeOfCharacter who correctly deduces that Marinette's feelings are confused and let her choose which flavors she wants, much to her classmates' surprise. In "Interlude 2", he's given a small backstory with a bit of sympathy added in.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Marinette and Sabrina are best friends in this fic thanks to the resolve of the misunderstanding that happened in "Evillustrator". [[spoiler:During "Heroes' Day, Part 2", they start dating each other after Ladybug kisses Hornet to remove Dark Cupid's influence and confesses her feelings to her]].
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: AdaptationalNiceGuy:
** Sabrina, obviously, since she resolves her misunderstanding with Marinette.
** In the show, André, the ice cream vendor, is a ShipperOnDeckthat who believes that his ice cream is truly magical and that people should get with who whom his ice cream decides, getting sad when his pairings don't get together (evident in the canon episode "Glaciator 2"). In this fic, he's an ExcellentJudgeOfCharacter who correctly deduces that Marinette's feelings are confused and let lets her choose which flavors she wants, much to her classmates' surprise. In "Interlude 2", he's given a small backstory with a bit of sympathy added in.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Marinette and Sabrina are best friends in this fic thanks to theresolve resolution of the misunderstanding that happened in "Evillustrator". [[spoiler:During "Heroes' Day, Part 2", they start dating each other after Ladybug kisses Hornet to remove Dark Cupid's influence and confesses her feelings to her]].
** Sabrina, obviously, since she resolves her misunderstanding with Marinette.
** In the show, André, the ice cream vendor, is a ShipperOnDeck
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Marinette and Sabrina are best friends in this fic thanks to the
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*** Following that, [[spoiler:Hawk Moth's identity is never revealed. Only that he was young blonde man, who is extremely bony]]. [[spoiler:It ''is'' highly implied that he's Adrien's 'Ruined' self due to a comment he said in "Gabriel", but it's never said outright. Nooroo is shown to know who Hawk Moth is but feigns ignorance, saying that it's better that way]].
** The epilogue has the fic ending with [[spoiler:Marinette and Sabrina calling their classmates saying they have to tell them something, but it's not known if it's about them being heroes, them dating or both]].
** The epilogue has the fic ending with [[spoiler:Marinette and Sabrina calling their classmates saying they have to tell them something, but it's not known if it's about them being heroes, them dating or both]].
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*** Following that, [[spoiler:Hawk Moth's identity is never revealed. Only that he was a young blonde blond man, who is extremely bony]]. [[spoiler:It bony. It ''is'' highly implied that he's Adrien's 'Ruined' self due to a comment he said in "Gabriel", but it's never said outright. Nooroo is shown to know who Hawk Moth is but feigns ignorance, saying that it's better that way]].
** The epilogue has the fic ending with [[spoiler:Marinette and Sabrina calling their classmates saying they have to tell them something, but it's not known if it's about them being heroes, themdating dating, or both]].
** The epilogue has the fic ending with [[spoiler:Marinette and Sabrina calling their classmates saying they have to tell them something, but it's not known if it's about them being heroes, them
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* CassandraTruth: No matter how many times Marinette insists otherwise, everyone continues to claim that the only reason she's mean to Lila is because she's jealous Lila also likes Adrien.
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* CassandraTruth: No matter how many times Marinette insists otherwise, everyone continues to claim that the only reason she's mean to Lila is because she's jealous that Lila also likes Adrien.
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** Marinette slowly stops being as extreme as in the show, mainly thanks to Sabrina being her MoralityPet. In fact, Sabrina makes her realize that her crush on Adrien is toxic but not at the cost of her friendship with him (althought whenever or not they're still friends is left ambiguous). She also makes her realize that she can't fault her classmates for beliving Lila over her, as Marinette did have a jealousy streak and actually made herself unlovable at times.
** After a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech from Ladybug, Adrien realizes, as Cat Noir, that all of her responsibilities are chaining her down and his entitlement to her are only worsening things on her mental health. As such he finally begins to take his role more seriously, stops flirting with Ladybug and made amends with Hornet for treating her harshly.
** Bustier and Damocles, during "Lila" (which covers some of the events in the canon "Ladybug"), are definitely more reasonable and do not immediatelly accuse Marinette of cheating on the mock test and stealing Lila's pendant, finding strange how she was accused of two different things on the same day. Before then, in "Chameleon", Bustier is not as flexible about seats as in the show, as she rearranges them herself once she come to know Marinette was excluded from the seat change.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Audrey hits the nail on the head when she calls out Chloé over not doing anything noteworthy and only used her father's influence to get what she wanted.
** After a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech from Ladybug, Adrien realizes, as Cat Noir, that all of her responsibilities are chaining her down and his entitlement to her are only worsening things on her mental health. As such he finally begins to take his role more seriously, stops flirting with Ladybug and made amends with Hornet for treating her harshly.
** Bustier and Damocles, during "Lila" (which covers some of the events in the canon "Ladybug"), are definitely more reasonable and do not immediatelly accuse Marinette of cheating on the mock test and stealing Lila's pendant, finding strange how she was accused of two different things on the same day. Before then, in "Chameleon", Bustier is not as flexible about seats as in the show, as she rearranges them herself once she come to know Marinette was excluded from the seat change.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Audrey hits the nail on the head when she calls out Chloé over not doing anything noteworthy and only used her father's influence to get what she wanted.
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** Marinette slowly stops being as extreme as in the show, mainly thanks to Sabrina being her MoralityPet. In fact, Sabrina makes her realize that her crush on Adrien is toxic but not at the cost of her friendship with him (althought whenever (although whether or not they're still friends is left ambiguous). She also makes her realize that she can't fault her classmates for beliving believing Lila over her, as Marinette did have a jealousy jealous streak and actually made herself unlovable at times.
** After a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech from Ladybug, Adrien realizes, as Cat Noir, that all of her responsibilities are chaining her down and his entitlement to her are only worsening things on her mental health. As such he finally begins to take his role more seriously, stops flirting withLadybug Ladybug, and made makes amends with Hornet for treating her harshly.
** Bustier and Damocles, during "Lila" (which covers some of the events in the canon "Ladybug"), are definitely more reasonable and do notimmediatelly immediately accuse Marinette of cheating on the mock test and stealing Lila's pendant, finding strange how she was accused of two different things on the same day. Before then, in "Chameleon", Bustier is not as flexible about seats as in the show, as she rearranges them herself once she come comes to know Marinette was excluded from the seat change.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Audrey hits the nail on the head when she calls out Chloé over not doing anything noteworthy and onlyused uses her father's influence to get what she wanted.wants.
** After a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech from Ladybug, Adrien realizes, as Cat Noir, that all of her responsibilities are chaining her down and his entitlement to her are only worsening things on her mental health. As such he finally begins to take his role more seriously, stops flirting with
** Bustier and Damocles, during "Lila" (which covers some of the events in the canon "Ladybug"), are definitely more reasonable and do not
* JerkassHasAPoint: Audrey hits the nail on the head when she calls out Chloé over not doing anything noteworthy and only
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* RedHerring: The narrative makes it believe that Adrien will be entitled, delusional and unrepentant. It's the complete opposite, as he'll eventually have a HeelRealization and apologize to Ladybug about his behaviour towards her.
* SecretlyDying: Fluff reveals that whoever comes from a different timeline will have their health deteriorated the longer they stay in it with Hornet comparing such thing to nuclear radiations. [[spoiler:Hawk Moth will in fact die, after staying in a timeline not his for too much time and will later disappear from existence]].
* SecretlyDying: Fluff reveals that whoever comes from a different timeline will have their health deteriorated the longer they stay in it with Hornet comparing such thing to nuclear radiations. [[spoiler:Hawk Moth will in fact die, after staying in a timeline not his for too much time and will later disappear from existence]].
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* RedHerring: The narrative makes it believe that Adrien will be entitled, delusional delusional, and unrepentant. It's the complete opposite, as he'll eventually have a HeelRealization and apologize to Ladybug about his behaviour towards her.
* SecretlyDying: Fluff reveals that whoever comes from a different timeline will have their healthdeteriorated deteriorate the longer they stay in it with Hornet comparing such a thing to nuclear radiations.radiation. [[spoiler:Hawk Moth will in fact die, after staying in a timeline not his for too much time and will later disappear from existence]].
* SecretlyDying: Fluff reveals that whoever comes from a different timeline will have their health
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* TakeThat: Marinette and Sabrina once read a book about a superheroine who is loved by many but heavily bullied outside the suit. However instead of telling anyone, she decides to suffer in silence, with both Marinette and Sabrina disliking it and stating how simply staying silent only prolong one's own pain. This is clearly a jab at several other fics with a similiar plot.
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* TakeThat: Marinette and Sabrina once read a book about a superheroine who is loved by many but heavily bullied outside the suit. However However, instead of telling anyone, she decides to suffer in silence, with both Marinette and Sabrina disliking it and stating how simply staying silent only prolong prolongs one's own pain. This is clearly a jab at several other fics with a similiar similar plot.
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* TakeThat: Marinette and Sabrina once read a book about a superheroine who is loved by many but heavily bullied outside the suit. However instead of telling anyone, she decides to suffer in silence, with both Marinette and Sabrina disliking it and stating how simply staying silent only prolong one own pain. This is clearly a jab at several other fics with a similiar plot.
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* TakeThat: Marinette and Sabrina once read a book about a superheroine who is loved by many but heavily bullied outside the suit. However instead of telling anyone, she decides to suffer in silence, with both Marinette and Sabrina disliking it and stating how simply staying silent only prolong one one's own pain. This is clearly a jab at several other fics with a similiar plot.
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* RedHerring: The narrative makes it believe that Adrien will be entitled, delusional and unrepentant. It's the complete opposite, as he'll eventually have a HeelRealization and apologize to Ladybug about his behaviour towards her.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: Marinette is heavily implied to be bisexual in this story, as while she does have her canon crush on Adrien at the beginning, she later develops [[spoiler:returned feelings towards Sabrina.]]
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* CassandraTruth: No matter how many times Marinette insists otherwise, everyone continues to claim that the only reason she's mean to Lila is because she's jealous Lila also likes Adrien.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: What gets through to Adrien that he needs to improve his behavior as Chat Noir is when Ladybug tells him that his lack of help and refusal to take anything seriously made her feel trapped. Adrien, who loves being Chat Noir to escape his ''own'' feelings of being trapped, is horrified that he made someone feel the same way.
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* AngerBornOfWorry: An extremely worried Sabrina gets furious at Marinette for slipping into the Agreste Mansion to search for Adrien despite the Collector being on the loose. Of course, Sabrina doesn't know that was mainly an excuse for Marinette to transform into Ladybug but it still has an effect on her.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The chapters that depict events from [[spoiler:the 'Ruined Timeline']] are downright NightmareFuel in contrast to the other chapters. The chapter "???", in particular, is completely dedicated to [[spoiler:the day when the tragedy happened]].
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The chapters that depict events from [[spoiler:the 'Ruined Timeline']] are downright NightmareFuel Timeline']] in contrast to the other chapters. The chapter "???", in particular, is completely dedicated to [[spoiler:the day when the tragedy happened]].
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* MoralityPet: Sabrina is one for Marinette. In fact, she stops her from throwing a napkin at Lila, reminding her that it would certainyl not give her any favors.
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* MoralityPet: Sabrina is one for Marinette. In fact, she stops her from throwing a napkin at Lila, reminding her that it would certainyl certainly not give do her any favors.
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** In the show, André, the ice cream vendor, is a ShipperOnDeck that believes that his ice cream is truly magical and that people should get with who his ice cream decides, getting angry when his pairings don't get together (evident in the canon episode "Glaciator 2"). In this fic, he's an ExcellentJudgeOfCharacter who correctly deduces that Marinette's feelings are confused and let her choose which flavors she wants, much to her classmates' surprise. In "Interlude 2", he's given a small backstory with a bit of sympathy added in.
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** In the show, André, the ice cream vendor, is a ShipperOnDeck that believes that his ice cream is truly magical and that people should get with who his ice cream decides, getting angry sad when his pairings don't get together (evident in the canon episode "Glaciator 2"). In this fic, he's an ExcellentJudgeOfCharacter who correctly deduces that Marinette's feelings are confused and let her choose which flavors she wants, much to her classmates' surprise. In "Interlude 2", he's given a small backstory with a bit of sympathy added in.
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* TakeThat: Marinette and Sabrina once read a book about a superheroine who is loved by many but heavily bullied outside the suit. However instead of telling anyone, she decides to suffer in silence, with both Marinette and Sabrina disliking it and stating how simply staying silent simply prolong one own pain. This is clearly a jab at several other fics with a similiar plot.
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* TakeThat: Marinette and Sabrina once read a book about a superheroine who is loved by many but heavily bullied outside the suit. However instead of telling anyone, she decides to suffer in silence, with both Marinette and Sabrina disliking it and stating how simply staying silent simply only prolong one own pain. This is clearly a jab at several other fics with a similiar plot.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Sabrina, who was Chloé's BetaBitch for most of the show up until Season 5, becomes Marinette's best friend, [[spoiler:and later girlfriend]], right after. [[spoiler:She will also become the Bee Holder, calling herself Hornet]].
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Sabrina, who was Chloé's BetaBitch for most of the show up until Season 5, becomes Marinette's best friend, [[spoiler:and later girlfriend]], right after.girlfriend]]. [[spoiler:She will also become the Bee Holder, calling herself Hornet]].
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The plot starts with Sabrina walking at the side of the river and witnesses Marinette getting rescued from Evillustrator. This makes her realize that Marinette didn't actually dump the school work on her and she makes peace with her.
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The plot starts with Sabrina walking at the side of the river and witnesses witnessing Marinette getting rescued from Evillustrator. This makes her realize that Marinette didn't actually dump the school work on her and she makes peace up with her.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: Dark Cupid, who shoots Hornet with one of his arrows during "Heroes' Day, Part 2", making her become aggressive. This leads to [[spoiler:Ladybug having to kiss her, giving her the best reason to confess her true feelings to Sabrina]].
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: Dark Cupid, who shoots Hornet with one of his arrows during "Heroes' Day, Part 2", making her become aggressive. This leads to [[spoiler:Ladybug [[spoiler:Marinette having to kiss her, giving her the best reason to confess her true feelings to Sabrina]].Sabrina]].
* TakeThat: Marinette and Sabrina once read a book about a superheroine who is loved by many but heavily bullied outside the suit. However instead of telling anyone, she decides to suffer in silence, with both Marinette and Sabrina disliking it and stating how simply staying silent simply prolong one own pain. This is clearly a jab at several other fics with a similiar plot.
* TakeThat: Marinette and Sabrina once read a book about a superheroine who is loved by many but heavily bullied outside the suit. However instead of telling anyone, she decides to suffer in silence, with both Marinette and Sabrina disliking it and stating how simply staying silent simply prolong one own pain. This is clearly a jab at several other fics with a similiar plot.
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** [[spoiler:Gabriel is not Hawk Moth in this fic and in his DayInTheLimelight chapter, he starts to get his act together and be there for Adrien]].
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** [[spoiler:Gabriel is Gabriel [[spoiler:is not Hawk Moth in this fic fic]] and in his DayInTheLimelight chapter, he starts to get his act together and be there for Adrien]].Adrien.
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* FixFic: This isn't a SaltFic, by any stretch of the imagination, but some characters' flaws are definitely corrected.
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* FixFic: This isn't a SaltFic, salt fic, by any stretch of the imagination, or even a DeconstructionFic but some characters' flaws are definitely corrected.
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** After a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech from Ladybug, Adrien realizes, as Cat Noir, that all of her responsibilities are chaining her down and his entitlement to her are only worsening things on her mental health. As such he finally begins to take his role more seriously, stops flirting with Ladybug and made amends with Hornet for treating her harshly.
** Bustier and Damocles, during "Lila" (which covers some of the events in the canon "Ladybug"), are definitely more reasonable and do not immediatelly accuse Marinette of cheating on the mock test and stealing Lila's pendant, finding strange how she was accused of two different things on the same day. Before then, in "Chameleon", Bustier is not as flexible about seats as in the show, as she rearranges them herself once she come to know Marinette was excluded from the seat change.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Audrey hits the nail on the head when she calls out Chloé over not doing anything noteworthy and only used her father's influence to get what she wanted.
** Bustier and Damocles, during "Lila" (which covers some of the events in the canon "Ladybug"), are definitely more reasonable and do not immediatelly accuse Marinette of cheating on the mock test and stealing Lila's pendant, finding strange how she was accused of two different things on the same day. Before then, in "Chameleon", Bustier is not as flexible about seats as in the show, as she rearranges them herself once she come to know Marinette was excluded from the seat change.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Audrey hits the nail on the head when she calls out Chloé over not doing anything noteworthy and only used her father's influence to get what she wanted.
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* SmallRoleBigImpact: Dark Cupid, who shoots Hornet with one of his arrows during "Heroes' Day, Part 2", making her become aggressive. This leads to [[spoiler:Ladybug having to kiss her, giving her the best reason to confess her true feelings to Sabrina]].
* WhamEpisode:
** "Heroes' Day, Part 1" looks like a normal re-telling of the canon episode...at least until [[spoiler:Marinette has a dream about Paris being wrecked and people she knew being dead]].
** "Gabriel". Gabriel finally starts to be a father to Adrien but most importantly, [[spoiler:it's revealed he's not Hawk Moth in this fic. Oh, and the villain knew that Marinette is Ladybug and is coming to get the earrings]].
* WhamEpisode:
** "Heroes' Day, Part 1" looks like a normal re-telling of the canon episode...at least until [[spoiler:Marinette has a dream about Paris being wrecked and people she knew being dead]].
** "Gabriel". Gabriel finally starts to be a father to Adrien but most importantly, [[spoiler:it's revealed he's not Hawk Moth in this fic. Oh, and the villain knew that Marinette is Ladybug and is coming to get the earrings]].
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Sabrina, who was Chloé's BetaBitch for most of the show up until Season 5, becomes Marinette's best friend [[spoiler:and later girlfriend]]. [[spoiler:She will also become the Bee Holder, calling herself Hornet]].
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Sabrina, who was Chloé's BetaBitch for most of the show up until Season 5, becomes Marinette's best friend friend, [[spoiler:and later girlfriend]].girlfriend]], right after. [[spoiler:She will also become the Bee Holder, calling herself Hornet]].
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** In the show, André, the ice cream vendor, is a ShipperOnDeck that believes that his ice cream is truly magical and that people should get with who his ice cream decides, getting angry when his pairings don't get together (evident in the canon episode "Glaciator 2"). In this fic, he's an ExcellentJudgeOfCharacter who correctly deduces that Marinette's feelings are confused right now and lets her choose which flavors she wants, much to her classmates' surprise. In "Interlude 2", he's given a small backstory with a bit of sympathy added in.
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** In the show, André, the ice cream vendor, is a ShipperOnDeck that believes that his ice cream is truly magical and that people should get with who his ice cream decides, getting angry when his pairings don't get together (evident in the canon episode "Glaciator 2"). In this fic, he's an ExcellentJudgeOfCharacter who correctly deduces that Marinette's feelings are confused right now and lets let her choose which flavors she wants, much to her classmates' surprise. In "Interlude 2", he's given a small backstory with a bit of sympathy added in.
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* DrivenByEnvy:
** Discussed. Alya believed that the reason Marinette was antagonistic towards Lila was because she was seated next to Adrien. While in the show it might have been a factor, in this fic it most certainly isn't.
** Ironically, Alya reveals that the reason her ShipperOnDeck tendencies were more prominent is because she thought Marinette replaced her with Sabrina and thought that she would do her a favor by getting her together with Adrien. Marinette reassures her that it was definitely not the case.
* FixFic: This isn't a SaltFic, by any stretch of the imagination, but some characters' flaws are definitely corrected.
** Marinette slowly stops being as extreme as in the show, mainly thanks to Sabrina being her MoralityPet. In fact, Sabrina makes her realize that her crush on Adrien is toxic but not at the cost of her friendship with him (althought whenever or not they're still friends is left ambiguous). She also makes her realize that she can't fault her classmates for beliving Lila over her, as Marinette did have a jealousy streak and actually made herself unlovable at times.
* MoralityPet: Sabrina is one for Marinette. In fact, she stops her from throwing a napkin at Lila, reminding her that it would certainyl not give her any favors.
** Discussed. Alya believed that the reason Marinette was antagonistic towards Lila was because she was seated next to Adrien. While in the show it might have been a factor, in this fic it most certainly isn't.
** Ironically, Alya reveals that the reason her ShipperOnDeck tendencies were more prominent is because she thought Marinette replaced her with Sabrina and thought that she would do her a favor by getting her together with Adrien. Marinette reassures her that it was definitely not the case.
* FixFic: This isn't a SaltFic, by any stretch of the imagination, but some characters' flaws are definitely corrected.
** Marinette slowly stops being as extreme as in the show, mainly thanks to Sabrina being her MoralityPet. In fact, Sabrina makes her realize that her crush on Adrien is toxic but not at the cost of her friendship with him (althought whenever or not they're still friends is left ambiguous). She also makes her realize that she can't fault her classmates for beliving Lila over her, as Marinette did have a jealousy streak and actually made herself unlovable at times.
* MoralityPet: Sabrina is one for Marinette. In fact, she stops her from throwing a napkin at Lila, reminding her that it would certainyl not give her any favors.
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''Outcasts'' is ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' fanfiction.
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''Outcasts'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' fanfiction.
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* AlasPoorVillain: The heroes agree that [[spoiler:despite being an absolute madman, Hawk Moth didn't deserve the fate of dying and then be erased]].
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*** Following that, [[spoiler:Hawk Moth's identity is never revealed. Only that he was young blonde man, who is extremely bony]]. [[It ''is'' highly implied that he's Adrien's 'Ruined' self due to a comment he said in "Gabriel", but it's never said outright. Nooroo is shown to know who Hawk Moth is but feign ignorance, saying that it's better that way]].
* CruelToBeKind: Audrey acts like this, calling out Chloé for her slothful behaviour harshly. When she meets up with André, she says that she was harsh so that Chloé can actually start to pull her weight.
* CruelToBeKind: Audrey acts like this, calling out Chloé for her slothful behaviour harshly. When she meets up with André, she says that she was harsh so that Chloé can actually start to pull her weight.
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*** Following that, [[spoiler:Hawk Moth's identity is never revealed. Only that he was young blonde man, who is extremely bony]]. [[It [[spoiler:It ''is'' highly implied that he's Adrien's 'Ruined' self due to a comment he said in "Gabriel", but it's never said outright. Nooroo is shown to know who Hawk Moth is but feign feigns ignorance, saying that it's better that way]].
** The epilogue has the fic ending with [[spoiler:Marinette and Sabrina calling their classmates saying they have to tell them something, but it's not known if it's about them being heroes, them dating or both]].
* CruelToBeKind: Audrey acts like this, calling out Chloé for her slothful behaviour harshly. When she meets up with André, she says that she was harsh so that Chloé can actually start to pull herweight.weight.
* DarkerAndEdgier: The chapters that depict events from [[spoiler:the 'Ruined Timeline']] are downright NightmareFuel in contrast to the other chapters. The chapter "???", in particular, is completely dedicated to [[spoiler:the day when the tragedy happened]].
* SecretlyDying: Fluff reveals that whoever comes from a different timeline will have their health deteriorated the longer they stay in it with Hornet comparing such thing to nuclear radiations. [[spoiler:Hawk Moth will in fact die, after staying in a timeline not his for too much time and will later disappear from existence]].
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** The epilogue has the fic ending with [[spoiler:Marinette and Sabrina calling their classmates saying they have to tell them something, but it's not known if it's about them being heroes, them dating or both]].
* CruelToBeKind: Audrey acts like this, calling out Chloé for her slothful behaviour harshly. When she meets up with André, she says that she was harsh so that Chloé can actually start to pull her
* DarkerAndEdgier: The chapters that depict events from [[spoiler:the 'Ruined Timeline']] are downright NightmareFuel in contrast to the other chapters. The chapter "???", in particular, is completely dedicated to [[spoiler:the day when the tragedy happened]].
* SecretlyDying: Fluff reveals that whoever comes from a different timeline will have their health deteriorated the longer they stay in it with Hornet comparing such thing to nuclear radiations. [[spoiler:Hawk Moth will in fact die, after staying in a timeline not his for too much time and will later disappear from existence]].
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** [[spoiler:Gabriel is not Hawk Moth in this fic and in his DayInTheLimelight chapter, he starts to get his act together and be there for Adrien]].
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** In the show, André, the ice cream vendor, was a ShipperInDeck that believed that his ice cream was truly magical and got angry when his pairings didn't get together. In this fic, he's an ExcellentJudgeOfCharacter who correctly deduces that Marinette's feelings are confused right and lets her choose which flavors she wants.
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverall: Marinette and Sabrina are best friends in this fic thanks to the resolve of the misunderstanding that happened in "Evillustrator". [[spoiler:During "Heroes' Day, Part 2", they start dating each other after Ladybug kisses Hornet to remove Dark Cupid's influence and confesses her feelings to her]].
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverall: Marinette and Sabrina are best friends in this fic thanks to the resolve of the misunderstanding that happened in "Evillustrator". [[spoiler:During "Heroes' Day, Part 2", they start dating each other after Ladybug kisses Hornet to remove Dark Cupid's influence and confesses her feelings to her]].
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** In the show, André, the ice cream vendor, was is a ShipperInDeck ShipperOnDeck that believed believes that his ice cream was is truly magical and got that people should get with who his ice cream decides, getting angry when his pairings didn't don't get together. together (evident in the canon episode "Glaciator 2"). In this fic, he's an ExcellentJudgeOfCharacter who correctly deduces that Marinette's feelings are confused right now and lets her choose which flavors she wants.
wants, much to her classmates' surprise. In "Interlude 2", he's given a small backstory with a bit of sympathy added in.
*AdaptationalRelationshipOverall: AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Marinette and Sabrina are best friends in this fic thanks to the resolve of the misunderstanding that happened in "Evillustrator". [[spoiler:During "Heroes' Day, Part 2", they start dating each other after Ladybug kisses Hornet to remove Dark Cupid's influence and confesses her feelings to her]].
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** [[spoiler:The whole 'Ruined Timeline' is completely shrouded in mystery, except for small glimpses that Marinette (and Adrien, once) dream. All that is known is that is a CrapsackWorld where TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt was caused by several Akumas that got out of Gabriel's control and started killing people left and right]].
** Hawk Moth himself is a giant mystery [[spoiler:once he's revealed to not be Gabriel]]. [[spoiler:Apparently he comes from the 'Ruined Timeline' and wanted to obtain the Ladybug and Cat Miraculous for unspecified reasons. This also leads on what happened to the two Miraculous in the alternate timeline for Hawk Moth to not be able to use them. But how did he come in this timeline? How did he get the Butterfly and Peacock Miraculous from this world? Questions never answered]].
*** Following that, [[spoiler:Hawk Moth's identity is never revealed. Only that he was young blonde man, who is extremely bony]]. [[It ''is'' highly implied that he's Adrien's 'Ruined' self due to a comment he said in "Gabriel", but it's never said outright. Nooroo is shown to know who Hawk Moth is but feign ignorance, saying that it's better that way]].
** [[spoiler:The whole 'Ruined Timeline' is completely shrouded in mystery, except for small glimpses that Marinette (and Adrien, once) dream. All that is known is that is a CrapsackWorld where TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt was caused by several Akumas that got out of Gabriel's control and started killing people left and right]].
** Hawk Moth himself is a giant mystery [[spoiler:once he's revealed to not be Gabriel]]. [[spoiler:Apparently he comes from the 'Ruined Timeline' and wanted to obtain the Ladybug and Cat Miraculous for unspecified reasons. This also leads on what happened to the two Miraculous in the alternate timeline for Hawk Moth to not be able to use them. But how did he come in this timeline? How did he get the Butterfly and Peacock Miraculous from this world? Questions never answered]].
*** Following that, [[spoiler:Hawk Moth's identity is never revealed. Only that he was young blonde man, who is extremely bony]]. [[It ''is'' highly implied that he's Adrien's 'Ruined' self due to a comment he said in "Gabriel", but it's never said outright. Nooroo is shown to know who Hawk Moth is but feign ignorance, saying that it's better that way]].
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''Outcasts'' is ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' fanfiction.
The plot starts with Sabrina walking at the side of the river and witnesses Marinette getting rescued from Evillustrator. This makes her realize that Marinette didn't actually dump the school work on her and she makes peace with her.
This simple event changes the story we know quite a lot.
The fic can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38509432/chapters/96249811 here]]
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!!This fic contains example of:
* AdaptationalHeroism: Sabrina, who was Chloé's BetaBitch for most of the show up until Season 5, becomes Marinette's best friend [[spoiler:and later girlfriend]]. [[spoiler:She will also become the Bee Holder, calling herself Hornet]].
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Sabrina, obviously, since she resolves her misunderstanding with Marinette.
** In the show, André, the ice cream vendor, was a ShipperInDeck that believed that his ice cream was truly magical and got angry when his pairings didn't get together. In this fic, he's an ExcellentJudgeOfCharacter who correctly deduces that Marinette's feelings are confused right and lets her choose which flavors she wants.
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverall: Marinette and Sabrina are best friends in this fic thanks to the resolve of the misunderstanding that happened in "Evillustrator". [[spoiler:During "Heroes' Day, Part 2", they start dating each other after Ladybug kisses Hornet to remove Dark Cupid's influence and confesses her feelings to her]].
** Unfortunately, them becoming friends causes a rift between Chloé and Sabrina. The former in fact starts to bully the latter, at least until "Style Queen", when Audrey gives her daughter a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.
* CruelToBeKind: Audrey acts like this, calling out Chloé for her slothful behaviour harshly. When she meets up with André, she says that she was harsh so that Chloé can actually start to pull her weight.
The plot starts with Sabrina walking at the side of the river and witnesses Marinette getting rescued from Evillustrator. This makes her realize that Marinette didn't actually dump the school work on her and she makes peace with her.
This simple event changes the story we know quite a lot.
The fic can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38509432/chapters/96249811 here]]
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!!This fic contains example of:
* AdaptationalHeroism: Sabrina, who was Chloé's BetaBitch for most of the show up until Season 5, becomes Marinette's best friend [[spoiler:and later girlfriend]]. [[spoiler:She will also become the Bee Holder, calling herself Hornet]].
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Sabrina, obviously, since she resolves her misunderstanding with Marinette.
** In the show, André, the ice cream vendor, was a ShipperInDeck that believed that his ice cream was truly magical and got angry when his pairings didn't get together. In this fic, he's an ExcellentJudgeOfCharacter who correctly deduces that Marinette's feelings are confused right and lets her choose which flavors she wants.
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverall: Marinette and Sabrina are best friends in this fic thanks to the resolve of the misunderstanding that happened in "Evillustrator". [[spoiler:During "Heroes' Day, Part 2", they start dating each other after Ladybug kisses Hornet to remove Dark Cupid's influence and confesses her feelings to her]].
** Unfortunately, them becoming friends causes a rift between Chloé and Sabrina. The former in fact starts to bully the latter, at least until "Style Queen", when Audrey gives her daughter a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.
* CruelToBeKind: Audrey acts like this, calling out Chloé for her slothful behaviour harshly. When she meets up with André, she says that she was harsh so that Chloé can actually start to pull her weight.
