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** While Stella is show to be a jerk in canon, it's ''extremely'' doubtful she would ever sink as low as to rape a subordinate like this version does to Moonchild.
** Retroactive example. At the time the story was first published, the source material has yet to provide any hint to Lucifer's personality beyond hinting towards [[WellDoneSonGuy a strained relationship with Charlie]], with his proper debut in the [[WesternAnimation/HazbinHotel 2024 Amazon Prime series]] ultimately shows him as a BumblingDad who holds no hope in Hell's denizens being able to redeem themselves. This version is a petty, moronic sociopath.
** Retroactive example. At the time the story was first published, the source material has yet to provide any hint to Lucifer's personality beyond hinting towards [[WellDoneSonGuy a strained relationship with Charlie]], with his proper debut in the [[WesternAnimation/HazbinHotel 2024 Amazon Prime series]] ultimately shows him as a BumblingDad who holds no hope in Hell's denizens being able to redeem themselves. This version is a petty, moronic sociopath.
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** While Stella is show to be a jerk total bitch in canon, canon to the point where she hires a hitman to kill her husband Stolas, it's ''extremely'' doubtful she would ever sink as low as to rape a subordinate like this version does to Moonchild.
** Retroactive example. At the time the story was first published, the source materialhas had yet to provide any hint to much regarding Lucifer's personality beyond hinting towards [[WellDoneSonGuy a strained relationship with Charlie]], with his proper debut in the [[WesternAnimation/HazbinHotel 2024 Amazon Prime series]] ultimately shows showing him as a BumblingDad who holds no hope in Hell's denizens being able to redeem themselves. This version is a petty, moronic sociopath.
** Retroactive example. At the time the story was first published, the source material
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* AdaptationalVillainy: While Stella is show to be a jerk in canon, it's ''extremely'' doubtful she would ever sink as low as to rape a subordinate like this version does to Moonchild.
** A possible case for Lucifer. While the source material has yet to provide any hint to his personality beyond likely having [[WellDoneSonGuy a strained relationship with Charlie]]. This version is a petty, moronic sociopath.
** A possible case for Lucifer. While the source material has yet to provide any hint to his personality beyond likely having [[WellDoneSonGuy a strained relationship with Charlie]]. This version is a petty, moronic sociopath.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: AdaptationalVillainy:
** While Stella is show to be a jerk in canon, it's ''extremely'' doubtful she would ever sink as low as to rape a subordinate like this version does to Moonchild.
**A possible case for Lucifer. While Retroactive example. At the time the story was first published, the source material has yet to provide any hint to his Lucifer's personality beyond likely having hinting towards [[WellDoneSonGuy a strained relationship with Charlie]].Charlie]], with his proper debut in the [[WesternAnimation/HazbinHotel 2024 Amazon Prime series]] ultimately shows him as a BumblingDad who holds no hope in Hell's denizens being able to redeem themselves. This version is a petty, moronic sociopath.
** While Stella is show to be a jerk in canon, it's ''extremely'' doubtful she would ever sink as low as to rape a subordinate like this version does to Moonchild.
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Now has two sequel, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14094380/1/Overdrive Overdrive]]'', starring [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureBattleTendency Joseph Joestar]] trying to keep his spot in Heaven, and ''Fanfic/GetOutAlive'', featuring Moonchild and Diavolo's new form working at Lady Belladonna's orphanage.
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Now has two sequel, ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14094380/1/Overdrive Overdrive]]'', ''Fanfic/{{Overdrive}}'', starring [[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventureBattleTendency Joseph Joestar]] trying to keep his spot in Heaven, and ''Fanfic/GetOutAlive'', featuring Moonchild and Diavolo's new form working at Lady Belladonna's orphanage.
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* UltimateJobSecurity: Husk almost gets fired by Charlie for his part in the events of Chapter 10. Thankfully, Angel's able to point out that Husk's become something of a MoralityChain that can rein in Diavolo, so Charlie decided to keep him on.
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* UltimateJobSecurity: UltimateJobSecurity:
** Moonchild notes he probably can't stay at the hotel because Stolas favors him. Vaggie agrees when Moonchild reveals he is still alive despite having sex with Stella.
** Husk almost gets fired by Charlie for his part in the events of Chapter 10. Thankfully, Angel's able to point out that Husk's become something of a MoralityChain that can rein in Diavolo, so Charlie decided to keep him on.
** Moonchild notes he probably can't stay at the hotel because Stolas favors him. Vaggie agrees when Moonchild reveals he is still alive despite having sex with Stella.
** Husk almost gets fired by Charlie for his part in the events of Chapter 10. Thankfully, Angel's able to point out that Husk's become something of a MoralityChain that can rein in Diavolo, so Charlie decided to keep him on.
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* AnimalMotif: Moonchild is analyzed by Charlie as being like a cuttlefish. He has minor shapeshifting and color-changing, tentacles, and she thinks his meek demeanor is hiding something, like a smaller male pretending to be a female.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: In contrast to Hazbin's BlackComedy and Jojo primarily being a WidgetSeries (something well-represented in the previous [[Fanfic/HelluvaJob two]] [[Fanfic/APeacefulAfterlife fics]]), ''Only the Results'' material comes off as much more depressing and disturbing at times. Following a very unstable protagonist and featuring a '''lot''' of AdaptationalVillainy and {{Gorn}}. [[spoiler:The best example is the final chapter. While Kira goes out in a HeroicSacrifice and is given a second chance at redemption, Red Nightmare and Soldio end the story as essentially the same characters Diavolo and Doppio were in life: a [[AxCrazy borderline]]-[[TheParanoiac feral]] gangster and a [[AcompliceByInaction willfully oblivious]] good side mostly uncaring of his worse half's crimes]].
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* DarkerAndEdgier: In contrast to Hazbin's BlackComedy and Jojo primarily being a WidgetSeries comedically weird (something well-represented in the previous [[Fanfic/HelluvaJob two]] [[Fanfic/APeacefulAfterlife fics]]), ''Only the Results'' material comes off as much more depressing and disturbing at times. Following a very unstable protagonist and featuring a '''lot''' of AdaptationalVillainy and {{Gorn}}. [[spoiler:The best example is the final chapter. While Kira goes out in a HeroicSacrifice and is given a second chance at redemption, Red Nightmare and Soldio end the story as essentially the same characters Diavolo and Doppio were in life: a [[AxCrazy borderline]]-[[TheParanoiac feral]] gangster and a [[AcompliceByInaction willfully oblivious]] good side mostly uncaring of his worse half's crimes]].
