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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13283713/1/Ominous-Onichan Ominous Onichan]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]]. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13283713/1/Ominous-Onichan Ominous Onichan]] is a ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]].Creator/{{RockSunner}}. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13283713/1/Ominous-Onichan Ominous Onichan]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13283713/1/Ominous-Onichan Ominous Onichan]] is an a ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug'' AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''.RockSunner]]. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. decisions.
The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Ladybug's superhero identity is exposed and she loses one of her earrings. Hawk Moth loses his Miraculous, and he is exposed and on the run. It is left up in the air how things will develop between Marinette and Adrien, but given the track record in this series when one hero's vice is capitalized on as part of the story, then the friendship would be damaged, ranging between simple forgiveness to irreparable levels. In this case, Marinette's stalking behavior has been outed by Lila's photo, leaving speculation on Adrien's reaction.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Ladybug's superhero identity is exposed and she loses one of her earrings. Hawk Moth loses his Miraculous, and he is exposed and on the run. It is left up in the air how things will develop between Marinette and Adrien, but given the track record in this series when one hero's vice is capitalized on as part of the story, then the friendship would be damaged, ranging between simple forgiveness to irreparable levels. In this case, Things do not look good for Marinette's prospects with Adrien. Marinette's stalking behavior has been outed by Lila's photo, leaving speculation on Adrien's reaction.and Adrien is upset with her. He has left for Japan to stay with Kagami and her family.]]
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* TheUnmasking: By going into action [[spoiler:with a horn on her forehead]], Ladybug is very much at risk for losing her secret identity. [[spoiler:She ultimately is caught by Onichan and Hawk Moth, and reveals her identity to Chat and Tom shortly afterward. Hawk Moth is also exposed when Ladybug suddenly unbinds herself and is able to snatch his Miraculous.]]
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* TheUnmasking: By going into action [[spoiler:with a horn on her forehead]], Ladybug is very much at risk for losing her secret identity. [[spoiler:She ultimately is caught by Onichan and Hawk Moth, and reveals her identity to Chat and Tom shortly afterward. Hawk Moth is also exposed when Ladybug suddenly unbinds herself and is able to snatch his Miraculous. Chat Noir has exposed his identity to Marinette, but he has given the Cat Miraculous back to Master Fu.]]
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Ending prospects aren't necessarily always good as the author's past stories has one side disappointed by the other's flaws come to life (ie: Marinette's stalking or Adrien's self-entitlement) and their friendship is damaged to various degrees as a result.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Ladybug's superhero identity is exposed and she loses one of her earrings. Hawk Moth loses his Miraculous, and he is exposed and on the run. It is left up in the air how things will develop between Marinette and Adrien, but prospects are usually good once identities are revealed.given the track record in this series when one hero's vice is capitalized on as part of the story, then the friendship would be damaged, ranging between simple forgiveness to irreparable levels. In this case, Marinette's stalking behavior has been outed by Lila's photo, leaving speculation on Adrien's reaction.]]
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* ExactWords: Ladybug gets Onichan [[spoiler:to tell her the exact words of Lila's promise about giving up Adrien if Onichan gets rid of Ladybug, and finds a loophole.]]
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* YouCantMakeAnOmelette: Both Ladybug and Onichan [[spoiler:involve a civilian in their battle. Ladybug lassos the civilian as she gets a swapping call from Onichan, but Onichan anticipated that and placed the call from a high window ledge, forcing Ladybug to go to the civilian's rescue.]]
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* BrickJoke: The fic ends with Juleka calling Marinette to ask where her bike is.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Hawk Moth spectacularly screws up when [[spoiler:he yanks Onichan's akuma, giving Ladybug the opening she needs to trigger a Miraculous Ladybug]].
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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Marinette is surprised that the only superpower Onichan seems to have is giving people horns. Tikki warns her there is more to it than that.
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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Marinette is surprised that the only superpower Onichan seems to have is giving people horns. Tikki warns her there is more to it than that.that.
* YouHaveFailedMe: Hawk Moth [[spoiler: pulls the power from Onichan when she is tricked away from getting the Miraculous and he comes to claim it in person. It's also a VillainBall, because he doesn't realize it will allow Ladybug to unbind herself and turn the tables on him.]]
* YouHaveFailedMe: Hawk Moth [[spoiler: pulls the power from Onichan when she is tricked away from getting the Miraculous and he comes to claim it in person. It's also a VillainBall, because he doesn't realize it will allow Ladybug to unbind herself and turn the tables on him.]]
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* LaserGuidedKarma: [[spoiler: due to an interrupted Miraculous Ladybug cure, Lila is left with an incurable horn that will grow any time she lies again.]]
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* LaserGuidedKarma: [[spoiler: due Due to an interrupted Miraculous Ladybug cure, Lila is left with an incurable horn that will grow any time she lies again.]]
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This is a multi-chapter work and it is still in progress.
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This is a multi-chapter three-chapter work and it is still in progress.now complete.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Ladybug's superhero identity is exposed and she loses one of her earrings. Hawk Moth loses his Miraculous, and he is exposed and on the run. It is left up in the air how things will develop between Marinette and Adrien, but prospects are usually good once identities are revealed.]]
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* PinocchioNose: Because she's inflicted with Onichan's horn spell, Ladybug cannot lie as her horn grows with each lie she speaks, [[spoiler:forcing her to come clean about her true identity with her father and her partner]].
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* FixFic: A plot hole in the original episode is patched because [[spoiler: it was never explained why Onichan made the tracking call to the firefighter which got her swapped away. In this version, Ladybug tricks Onichan into getting riled up about Lila again, causing her to place the call by accident.]]
* {{Irony}}: Chat Noir asks Ladybug to tell him about Hawk Moth's identity later, not knowing how big an effect it will have on him once he knows.
* LaserGuidedKarma: [[spoiler: due to an interrupted Miraculous Ladybug cure, Lila is left with an incurable horn that will grow any time she lies again.]]
* PinocchioNose: Because she's inflicted with Onichan's horn spell, Ladybug cannot lie as her horn grows with each lie she speaks, [[spoiler:forcing her to come clean about her true identity with her father and herpartner]]. partner]].
* SummonToHand: The Lucky Charm can be summoned right before a Miraculous Ladybug cure. This is how [[spoiler:Ladybug is able to unbind herself and catch Hawk Moth by surprise.]]
* {{Irony}}: Chat Noir asks Ladybug to tell him about Hawk Moth's identity later, not knowing how big an effect it will have on him once he knows.
* LaserGuidedKarma: [[spoiler: due to an interrupted Miraculous Ladybug cure, Lila is left with an incurable horn that will grow any time she lies again.]]
* PinocchioNose: Because she's inflicted with Onichan's horn spell, Ladybug cannot lie as her horn grows with each lie she speaks, [[spoiler:forcing her to come clean about her true identity with her father and her
* SummonToHand: The Lucky Charm can be summoned right before a Miraculous Ladybug cure. This is how [[spoiler:Ladybug is able to unbind herself and catch Hawk Moth by surprise.]]
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* TheUnmasking: By going into action [[spoiler:with a horn on her forehead]], Ladybug is very much at risk for losing her secret identity. [[spoiler:She ultimately is caught by Onichan and Hawk Moth, and reveals her identity to Chat and Tom shortly afterward.]]
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* TheUnmasking: By going into action [[spoiler:with a horn on her forehead]], Ladybug is very much at risk for losing her secret identity. [[spoiler:She ultimately is caught by Onichan and Hawk Moth, and reveals her identity to Chat and Tom shortly afterward. Hawk Moth is also exposed when Ladybug suddenly unbinds herself and is able to snatch his Miraculous.]]
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* PinocchioNose: Because she's inflicted with Onichan's horn spell, Ladybug cannot lie as her horn grows with each lie she speaks, [[spoiler:forcing her to come clean about her true identity with her father and her partner]].
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* TheUnmasking: By going into action [[spoiler:with a horn on her forehead]], Ladybug is very much at risk for losing her secret identity. [[spoiler:She ultimately is caught by Onichan and Hawk Moth, and reveals her identity to Chat and Tom shortly afterward.]]
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* ThatCameOutWrong:
-->'''Ladybug:''' Now to find that horny demon! No... that didn't come out right.
-->'''Ladybug:''' Now to find that horny demon! No... that didn't come out right.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Averted. Lila thinks the cheap shot against Marinette is worthwhile, so she takes the picture she didn't take in the original.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Averted. Lila thinks the cheap shot against Marinette is worthwhile, so she [[spoiler:she takes the picture she didn't take in the original.]]
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* TheUnmasking: By going into action [[spoiler:with a horn on her forehead]], Ladybug is very much at risk for losing her secret identity.identity.
* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Marinette is surprised that the only superpower Onichan seems to have is giving people horns. Tikki warns her there is more to it than that.
* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Marinette is surprised that the only superpower Onichan seems to have is giving people horns. Tikki warns her there is more to it than that.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13283713/1/Ominous-Onichan Ominous Onichan]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
This is a multi-chapter work and it is still in progress.
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!!This fanfiction series contains examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that [[spoiler:Lila takes a picture of Marinette among the trash cans, showing that she is stalking Adrien. As a result, Marinette becomes a target along with Lila for Onichan, and Marinette is also tagged with a horn.]]
* CheapCostume: Ladybug is forced to wear a firefighter's helmet in addition to her regular costume, [[spoiler:in order to conceal the horn that Onichan placed on her.]]
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Averted. Lila thinks the cheap shot against Marinette is worthwhile, so she takes the picture she didn't take in the original.
* TheUnmasking: By going into action [[spoiler:with a horn on her forehead]], Ladybug is very much at risk for losing her secret identity.
This is a multi-chapter work and it is still in progress.
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!!This fanfiction series contains examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that [[spoiler:Lila takes a picture of Marinette among the trash cans, showing that she is stalking Adrien. As a result, Marinette becomes a target along with Lila for Onichan, and Marinette is also tagged with a horn.]]
* CheapCostume: Ladybug is forced to wear a firefighter's helmet in addition to her regular costume, [[spoiler:in order to conceal the horn that Onichan placed on her.]]
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Averted. Lila thinks the cheap shot against Marinette is worthwhile, so she takes the picture she didn't take in the original.
* TheUnmasking: By going into action [[spoiler:with a horn on her forehead]], Ladybug is very much at risk for losing her secret identity.
