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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul:
** Touma and Mikoto being childhood friends compare to canon, to which the latter is the only girl in his eyes who he's romantically attracted to and vice-versa.
** In canon, Touma is the UnknownRival for Kuroko due to Mikoto's growing fondness for him; would ''often'' drop-kick at his head every time she caught him and Mikoto together, would always [[MaliciousMisnaming refer]] to him as "The Ape" or "The Troglodyte", and never warm up to the boy regardless. Here, the very first time they meet has Kuroko expressing her in-canon disdain for Touma, but the latter quickly notices this hostility and resolve any sort of misunderstandings, leading Kuroko to become much friendlier to Touma because of his bond with Mikoto but still treats him as TheRival.
** In canon, Touma and Teitoku never really met or knew each other, and the latter's animosity revolves around Accelerator and later Mugino Shizuri in ''New Testament''. Here, the two of them knew each other during their younger years in Academy City and are bitter enemies.
** Touma and Mikoto being childhood friends compare to canon, to which the latter is the only girl in his eyes who he's romantically attracted to and vice-versa.
** In canon, Touma is the UnknownRival for Kuroko due to Mikoto's growing fondness for him; would ''often'' drop-kick at his head every time she caught him and Mikoto together, would always [[MaliciousMisnaming refer]] to him as "The Ape" or "The Troglodyte", and never warm up to the boy regardless. Here, the very first time they meet has Kuroko expressing her in-canon disdain for Touma, but the latter quickly notices this hostility and resolve any sort of misunderstandings, leading Kuroko to become much friendlier to Touma because of his bond with Mikoto but still treats him as TheRival.
** In canon, Touma and Teitoku never really met or knew each other, and the latter's animosity revolves around Accelerator and later Mugino Shizuri in ''New Testament''. Here, the two of them knew each other during their younger years in Academy City and are bitter enemies.
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* AdaptationalNameChange: Justified. The name of the "[[NoNameGiven Girl in the Dress]]" wasn't revealed during the fanfic's released and Stormwolfex instead, gave her the name of Kokoro (meaning "Heart" in English), while the name of the girl is later revealed to be [[spoiler:Kaibi Gokusai]] in canon.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Justified. The name of the "[[NoNameGiven Girl in the Dress]]" wasn't revealed during the fanfic's released and Stormwolfex instead, gave her the name of Kokoro (meaning "Heart" in English), while the name of the girl is later revealed to be [[spoiler:Kaibi Gokusai]] in canon.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul:
** Touma and Mikoto being childhood friends compare to canon, to which the latter is the only girl in his eyes who he's romantically attracted to and vice-versa.
** In canon, Touma is the UnknownRival for Kuroko due to Mikoto's growing fondness for him; would ''often'' drop-kick at his head every time she caught him and Mikoto together, would always [[MaliciousMisnaming refer]] to him as "The Ape" or "The Troglodyte", and never warm up to the boy regardless. Here, the very first time they meet has Kuroko expressing her in-canon disdain for Touma, but the latter quickly notices this hostility and resolve any sort of misunderstandings, leading Kuroko to become much friendlier to Touma because of his bond with Mikoto but still treats him as TheRival.
** In canon, Touma and Teitoku never really met or knew each other, and the latter's animosity revolves around Accelerator and later Mugino Shizuri in ''New Testament''. Here, the two of them knew each other during their younger years in Academy City and are bitter enemies.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul:
** Touma and Mikoto being childhood friends compare to canon, to which the latter is the only girl in his eyes who he's romantically attracted to and vice-versa.
** In canon, Touma is the UnknownRival for Kuroko due to Mikoto's growing fondness for him; would ''often'' drop-kick at his head every time she caught him and Mikoto together, would always [[MaliciousMisnaming refer]] to him as "The Ape" or "The Troglodyte", and never warm up to the boy regardless. Here, the very first time they meet has Kuroko expressing her in-canon disdain for Touma, but the latter quickly notices this hostility and resolve any sort of misunderstandings, leading Kuroko to become much friendlier to Touma because of his bond with Mikoto but still treats him as TheRival.
** In canon, Touma and Teitoku never really met or knew each other, and the latter's animosity revolves around Accelerator and later Mugino Shizuri in ''New Testament''. Here, the two of them knew each other during their younger years in Academy City and are bitter enemies.
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''Of Science and Magics'' is a WhatIf story set in the ''LightNovel/ACertainMagicalIndex'' universe. In this timeline, Touma Kamijou is a childhood friend of Mikoto Misaka, and the story approaches the ''Index'' and ''Railgun'' canon in that direction.
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''Of Science and Magics'' is a WhatIf story set in the ''LightNovel/ACertainMagicalIndex'' ''Literature/ACertainMagicalIndex'' universe. In this timeline, Touma Kamijou is a childhood friend of Mikoto Misaka, and the story approaches the ''Index'' and ''Railgun'' canon in that direction.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: As expected from an Index related fanfiction, the number of characters that have appeared in both the main story by Stormwolfex and [=Knowledgeseeker66=]'s side stories easily reach dozens upon dozens This includes both canon and original characters.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Touma tells Saten that she doesn't need powers to be strong since he's also a Level 0 just like her only for Saten to call out on his hypocrisy since he still has the power of Imagine Breaker.
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** Mikoto almost says Superman's world-of-cardboard speech word-for-word, realizing that Kaori is an opponent she can go all out on.
-->"All my life, ever since I've reached Level 5, I feel like I'm living in a world of glass. Where everything is breakable and fragile. Especially humans, if I don't control my powers correctly, I could end up stopping their hearts in an instant or burn them to death with the heat produced. But… you can take it, can't you? A 'Child of God' means you must be blessed with some powerful protection. Then that's good. Maybe, just for today, I can cut loose and show you just how powerful I can be!"
-->"All my life, ever since I've reached Level 5, I feel like I'm living in a world of glass. Where everything is breakable and fragile. Especially humans, if I don't control my powers correctly, I could end up stopping their hearts in an instant or burn them to death with the heat produced. But… you can take it, can't you? A 'Child of God' means you must be blessed with some powerful protection. Then that's good. Maybe, just for today, I can cut loose and show you just how powerful I can be!"
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* TheWorfBarrage: With luck, Mikoto was able to grab onto Kaori Kanzaki and point-blank electrocute her. The only result Mikoto got was ClothingDamage and she was now at the mercy of the Saint.
* WorldOfCardboardSpeech: Mikoto almost says it word-for-word, realizing that Kaori is an opponent she can go all out on.
-->"All my life, ever since I've reached Level 5, I feel like I'm living in a world of glass. Where everything is breakable and fragile. Especially humans, if I don't control my powers correctly, I could end up stopping their hearts in an instant or burn them to death with the heat produced. But… you can take it, can't you? A 'Child of God' means you must be blessed with some powerful protection. Then that's good. Maybe, just for today, I can cut loose and show you just how powerful I can be!"
* WorldOfCardboardSpeech: Mikoto almost says it word-for-word, realizing that Kaori is an opponent she can go all out on.
-->"All my life, ever since I've reached Level 5, I feel like I'm living in a world of glass. Where everything is breakable and fragile. Especially humans, if I don't control my powers correctly, I could end up stopping their hearts in an instant or burn them to death with the heat produced. But… you can take it, can't you? A 'Child of God' means you must be blessed with some powerful protection. Then that's good. Maybe, just for today, I can cut loose and show you just how powerful I can be!"
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* TheWorfBarrage: With luck, Mikoto was able to grab onto Kaori Kanzaki and point-blank electrocute her. The only result Mikoto got was ClothingDamage and she was now at the mercy of the Saint.
* WorldOfCardboardSpeech: Mikoto almost says it word-for-word, realizing that Kaori is an opponent she can go all out on.
-->"All my life, ever since I've reached Level 5, I feel like I'm living in a world of glass. Where everything is breakable and fragile. Especially humans, if I don't control my powers correctly, I could end up stopping their hearts in an instant or burn them to death with the heat produced. But… you can take it, can't you? A 'Child of God' means you must be blessed with some powerful protection. Then that's good. Maybe, just for today, I can cut loose and show you just how powerful I can be!"Saint.
* WorldOfCardboardSpeech: Mikoto almost says it word-for-word, realizing that Kaori is an opponent she can go all out on.
-->"All my life, ever since I've reached Level 5, I feel like I'm living in a world of glass. Where everything is breakable and fragile. Especially humans, if I don't control my powers correctly, I could end up stopping their hearts in an instant or burn them to death with the heat produced. But… you can take it, can't you? A 'Child of God' means you must be blessed with some powerful protection. Then that's good. Maybe, just for today, I can cut loose and show you just how powerful I can be!"
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* AdaptationalSexuality: Compare to the Light Novels and the Railgun manga spin-off, Kuroko confirms to be a lesbian with a [[IfItsYouItsOkay slight exception]] for Touma in a threesome with Mikoto.
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** This version of Touma holds traits associated with [[SuperpowerLottery Accelerator]] and [[SpannerInTheWorks Shiage Hamazura]], the other two protagonists of the canon series. Like Accelerator, Touma has to deal with constant hardships due to possessing supernatural power, along with having to once fall into the Dark Side due to a personal failure of protecting a close companion. For Hamazura, Touma was once a former Skill-Out member with a bad view on some espers after a traumatizing event involving numerous SuperSupremacist espers, leading to him being rescued by Ritoku Komaba and being willing to get his hands dirty in order to achieve his goals.
** While the character wasn't introduced at the time of the fic, Mikoto's status as Touma's [[ChildhoodFriends childhood friend]] does channel an aspect from Mitsuari Ayu, being the first girl who gives the starting point of Touma's adventures. Tragically, Mikoto also shares her [[TheLostLenore lenore]] status when losing her memories of Touma at the end of the Index Arc.
** While the character wasn't introduced at the time of the fic, Mikoto's status as Touma's [[ChildhoodFriends childhood friend]] does channel an aspect from Mitsuari Ayu, being the first girl who gives the starting point of Touma's adventures. Tragically, Mikoto also shares her [[TheLostLenore lenore]] status when losing her memories of Touma at the end of the Index Arc.
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** This version of Touma holds traits associated with [[SuperpowerLottery Accelerator]] and [[SpannerInTheWorks Shiage Hamazura]], the other two protagonists of from the canon series. Like Accelerator, Touma has to deal with constant hardships due to possessing supernatural power, along with having to once fall into the Dark Side due to a personal failure of protecting a close companion. For Hamazura, Touma was once a former Skill-Out member with a bad view on some espers after a traumatizing event involving numerous SuperSupremacist espers, leading to him being rescued by Ritoku Komaba and being willing to get his hands dirty in order to achieve his goals.
** While the character wasn't introduced at the time of the fic, thus, as a result, is AdaptedOut, Mikoto's status as Touma's [[ChildhoodFriends childhood friend]] does channel an aspect fromMitsuari Ayu, Ayu Mitsuari, being the first girl who gives the starting point of Touma's adventures. Tragically, Mikoto also shares her [[TheLostLenore lenore]] status when losing her memories of Touma at the end of the Index Arc.
** While the character wasn't introduced at the time of the fic, thus, as a result, is AdaptedOut, Mikoto's status as Touma's [[ChildhoodFriends childhood friend]] does channel an aspect from
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: During a flashback in chapter 6, [[spoiler:Touma has this reaction when he realized that he harm Mikoto when the latter was snooping around in the Dark Side to find him.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: During a flashback in scene at the beginning of chapter 6, [[spoiler:Touma has this reaction when he realized that he harm Mikoto when the in his 'Devil' attire since latter was snooping around in the Dark Side to find him.]]
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An OriginalFlavor fanfiction created by Stormwolfex. It may be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6873009/1/Of_Science_and_Magics here]].
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An OriginalFlavor OriginalFlavour fanfiction created by Stormwolfex. It may be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6873009/1/Of_Science_and_Magics here]].
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** This version of Touma holds traits associated with [[SuperpowerLottery Accelerator]] and [[SpannerInTheWorks Shiage Hamazura]], the other two protagonists of the canon series. Like Accelerator, Touma has to deal with constant hardships due to possessing supernatural power, along with having to once fall into the Dark Side due to losing a close companion. For Hamazura, Touma was once a former Skill-Out member with a bad view on some espers after a traumatizing event involving numerous SuperSupremacist espers, leading to him being rescued by Ritoku Komaba.
** Mikoto's status as Touma's [[ChildhoodFriends childhood friend]] does channel an aspect from Ayu Mitsuari, even though she had met Touma near the end of his middle school years in the canon Biohacker side-story. Tragically, Mikoto also shares her [[TheLostLenore lenore]] status when losing her memories of Touma at the end of the Index Arc.
** Mikoto's status as Touma's [[ChildhoodFriends childhood friend]] does channel an aspect from Ayu Mitsuari, even though she had met Touma near the end of his middle school years in the canon Biohacker side-story. Tragically, Mikoto also shares her [[TheLostLenore lenore]] status when losing her memories of Touma at the end of the Index Arc.
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** This version of Touma holds traits associated with [[SuperpowerLottery Accelerator]] and [[SpannerInTheWorks Shiage Hamazura]], the other two protagonists of the canon series. Like Accelerator, Touma has to deal with constant hardships due to possessing supernatural power, along with having to once fall into the Dark Side due to losing a personal failure of protecting a close companion. For Hamazura, Touma was once a former Skill-Out member with a bad view on some espers after a traumatizing event involving numerous SuperSupremacist espers, leading to him being rescued by Ritoku Komaba.
Komaba and being willing to get his hands dirty in order to achieve his goals.
** While the character wasn't introduced at the time of the fic, Mikoto's status as Touma's [[ChildhoodFriends childhood friend]] does channel an aspect fromAyu Mitsuari, even though she had met Touma near Mitsuari Ayu, being the end of his middle school years in first girl who gives the canon Biohacker side-story.starting point of Touma's adventures. Tragically, Mikoto also shares her [[TheLostLenore lenore]] status when losing her memories of Touma at the end of the Index Arc.
** While the character wasn't introduced at the time of the fic, Mikoto's status as Touma's [[ChildhoodFriends childhood friend]] does channel an aspect from
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* TheLostLenore: Mikoto doesn't actually ''die'', but having her memories of Touma being erased by the feathers of light effectively destroy the girl who was by Touma's side through thick and thin. The revelation that Mikoto's memories of him having a low chance of recovery only brings despair to the latter.
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* TheLostLenore: Mikoto doesn't actually ''die'', but having her memories of Touma being erased by the feathers of light effectively destroy the girl who was by Touma's side through thick and thin. The revelation that Mikoto's memories of him having a low chance of recovery only brings despair to the latter.latter into HeroicBSOD.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: During a flashback n chapter 6, [[spoiler:Touma has this reaction when he realized that he harm Mikoto when the latter was snooping around in the Dark Side to find him.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: During a flashback n in chapter 6, [[spoiler:Touma has this reaction when he realized that he harm Mikoto when the latter was snooping around in the Dark Side to find him.]]
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* OriginalFlavor: It's a retelling of the original Light Novels and spin-off manga with Touma and Mikoto being childhood friends.
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* OriginalFlavor: OriginalFlavour: It's a retelling of the original Light Novels and spin-off manga with Touma and Mikoto being childhood friends.
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** This version of Touma
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** This version of Touma
Touma holds traits associated with [[SuperpowerLottery Accelerator]] and [[SpannerInTheWorks Shiage Hamazura]], the other two protagonists of the canon series. Like Accelerator, Touma has to deal with constant hardships due to possessing supernatural power, along with having to once fall into the Dark Side due to losing a close companion. For Hamazura, Touma was once a former Skill-Out member with a bad view on some espers after a traumatizing event involving numerous SuperSupremacist espers, leading to him being rescued by Ritoku Komaba.
** Mikoto's status as Touma's [[ChildhoodFriends childhood friend]] does channel an aspect from Ayu Mitsuari, even though she had met Touma near the end of his middle school years in the canon Biohacker side-story. Tragically, Mikoto also shares her [[TheLostLenore lenore]] status when losing her memories of Touma at the end of the Index Arc.
** Mikoto's status as Touma's [[ChildhoodFriends childhood friend]] does channel an aspect from Ayu Mitsuari, even though she had met Touma near the end of his middle school years in the canon Biohacker side-story. Tragically, Mikoto also shares her [[TheLostLenore lenore]] status when losing her memories of Touma at the end of the Index Arc.
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* TheLostLenore: Mikoto doesn't actually ''die'', but having her memories of Touma being erased by the feathers of light effectively destroy the girl who was by Touma's side through thick and thin. The revelation that Mikoto's memories of him having a low chance of recovery only brings despair to the latter.
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** In canon, Touma is the UnknownRival for Kuroko due to Mikoto's growing fondness for him; would ''often'' drop-kick at his head every time she caught him and Mikoto together, would always [[MaliciousMisnaming refer]] to him as "The Ape" or "The Troglodyte", and never warm up to the boy regardless. Here, the very first time they meet has Kuroko expressing her in-canon disdain for Touma, but the latter quickly notices this hostility and resolve any sort of misunderstandings, leading Kuroko to become much friendlier to Touma because of his bond with Mikoto but still treats him as TheRival.
* AdaptationalBackstoryChange: In this fic, both Touma and Mikoto are reimaged as ChildhoodFriends due to their mothers' close friendship. Furthermore, the misfortune caused by Imagine Breaker created tragic events that weigh heavily on Touma, leading him to become a member of Skill-Out and [[spoiler:known as the dreaded "Devil of Academy City" in the Dark Side.]]
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** While Touma is a skilled street fighter in canon, it was mainly TaughtByExperience and it would often be a CurbStompBattle for him when facing against those who were formally taught in martial arts and have greater fighting experience than him. Furthermore, Touma was also very [[ReluctantWarrior reluctant to fight]] unless the situation calls for it. This version of Touma was once a member in ''Skill-Out'', specifically for the Big Spider gang, and used to be infamous for being a vigilante known as "The Devil of Academy City." Also, unlike his canon counterpart, Touma is able to use the [[spoiler:Invisible Thing]] ''without'' having Imagine Breaker severed off in the past.
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** While Touma is a skilled street fighter in canon, it was mainly TaughtByExperience and it would often be a CurbStompBattle for him when facing against those who were formally taught in martial arts and have greater fighting experience than him. Furthermore, Touma was also very [[ReluctantWarrior reluctant to fight]] unless the situation calls for it. This version of Touma was once a member in ''Skill-Out'', specifically for the Big Spider gang, and used to be infamous for being a dreaded vigilante known as "The Devil of Academy City." Also, unlike his canon counterpart, Touma is able to use the [[spoiler:Invisible Thing]] ''without'' having Imagine Breaker severed off in the past.
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* AdaptationalNameChange: Justified. The name of the "[[NoNameGiven Girl in the Dress]]" wasn't revealed during the fanfic's released and Stormwolfex instead, gave her the name of Kokoro (meaning "Heart" in English), while the name of the girl is later revealed to be [[spoiler:Kaibi Gokusai]].
* AdaptationalSexuality: In canon, Kuroko's attraction to Mikoto is more of the case of IfItsYouItsOk and SingleTargetSexuality as the former states that she doesn't swing that way. Here, Kuroko is confirmed to be a lesbian with Mikoto describing her as a "PsychoLesbian" at one point before the start of the story.
* AdaptationalSexuality: In canon, Kuroko's attraction to Mikoto is more of the case of IfItsYouItsOk and SingleTargetSexuality as the former states that she doesn't swing that way. Here, Kuroko is confirmed to be a lesbian with Mikoto describing her as a "PsychoLesbian" at one point before the start of the story.
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* AdaptationalNameChange: Justified. The name of the "[[NoNameGiven Girl in the Dress]]" wasn't revealed during the fanfic's released and Stormwolfex instead, gave her the name of Kokoro (meaning "Heart" in English), while the name of the girl is later revealed to be [[spoiler:Kaibi Gokusai]].
* AdaptationalSexuality: In canon, Kuroko's attraction to Mikoto is more of the case of IfItsYouItsOk and SingleTargetSexuality as the former states that she doesn't swing that way. Here, Kuroko is confirmed to be a lesbian with Mikoto describing her as a "PsychoLesbian" at one point before the start of the story.Gokusai]] in canon.
* AdaptationalSexuality: In canon, Kuroko's attraction to Mikoto is more of the case of IfItsYouItsOk and SingleTargetSexuality as the former states that she doesn't swing that way. Here, Kuroko is confirmed to be a lesbian with Mikoto describing her as a "PsychoLesbian" at one point before the start of the story.
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* ChivalrousPervert: PlayedForLaughs and ultimately {{subverted|Trope}}. Even if Touma could make a comment about a girl's bust size without making the said girl feel offended like his mentor, [[CanonForeigner Wataru Kurozuma]], he'll still be seen as an AccidentalPervert thanks to his [[BornUnlucky misfortune]].
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* ChivalrousPervert: PlayedForLaughs and ultimately {{subverted|Trope}}. Even if Touma could make Try as he might from taking a comment about a girl's bust size without making the said girl feel offended like his mentor, [[CanonForeigner Wataru Kurozuma]], few pages from [[TheMentor Kurozuma's]] book, he'll still be seen as an AccidentalPervert thanks to his [[BornUnlucky misfortune]].
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* PsychoLesbian: Like in canon, Kuroko would sexually harass Mikoto constantly whenever the latter enters the picture. In fact, Kuroko is explicitly described as this by Mikoto at one point in the very first chapter.
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* ChivalrousPervert: PlayedForLaughs and ultimately {{subverted|Trope}}. Even if Touma could make a comment about a girl's bust size without making the said girl feel offended like [[CanonForeigner Wataru Kurozuma]], he'll still be seen as an AccidentalPervert thanks to his [[BornUnlucky misfortune]].
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* ChivalrousPervert: PlayedForLaughs and ultimately {{subverted|Trope}}. Even if Touma could make a comment about a girl's bust size without making the said girl feel offended like his mentor, [[CanonForeigner Wataru Kurozuma]], he'll still be seen as an AccidentalPervert thanks to his [[BornUnlucky misfortune]].
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to reject the reasoning of adults and apply their own ideas to a situation, and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The big ''difference'' between them is that Touma's motives are entirely rooted in saving those around him and he was able to return to the side of the light thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine's motives are entirely self-centered and further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a '''''T''''' and a '''''K''''' respectively (vice-versa when written in the eastern order), their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[StoryBreakerPower Imagine Breaker]] being limited to [[SpecialOddHand touching with his right hand]] and it revolves around the [[AntiMagic destruction of the supernatural]] (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others and being more grounded in the natural world; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the normal reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even for Touma; ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in ([[OriginalCharacter Sasaki Ai]] for Touma and an unnamed girl from Kakine's canon spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to reject the reasoning of adults and apply their own ideas to a situation, and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The big ''difference'' between them is that Touma's motives are entirely rooted in saving those around him and he was able to return to the side of the light thanks to his bond with Mikoto Mikoto, along with being surrounded with TrueCompanions while Kakine's motives are entirely self-centered and further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend.OnlyFriend, along with being surrounded by acquaintances (at best). Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a '''''T''''' and a '''''K''''' respectively (vice-versa when written in the eastern order), their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[StoryBreakerPower Imagine Breaker]] being limited to [[SpecialOddHand touching with his right hand]] and it revolves around the [[AntiMagic destruction of the supernatural]] (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others and being more grounded in the natural world; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the normal reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to reject the reasoning of adults and apply their own ideas to a situation, and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The big ''difference'' between them is that Touma's motives are entirely rooted in saving those around him and he was able to return to the side of the light thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine's motives are entirely self-centered and further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a '''''T''''' and a '''''K''''' respectively (vice-versa when written in the eastern order), their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic Imagine Breaker]] being limited to touching with his right hand and it revolves around the destruction of the supernatural (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them and being more grounded in the natural world; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the normal reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to reject the reasoning of adults and apply their own ideas to a situation, and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The big ''difference'' between them is that Touma's motives are entirely rooted in saving those around him and he was able to return to the side of the light thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine's motives are entirely self-centered and further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a '''''T''''' and a '''''K''''' respectively (vice-versa when written in the eastern order), their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic [[StoryBreakerPower Imagine Breaker]] being limited to [[SpecialOddHand touching with his right hand hand]] and it revolves around the [[AntiMagic destruction of the supernatural supernatural]] (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them and being more grounded in the natural world; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the normal reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to reject the reasoning of adults and apply their own ideas to a situation, and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The big ''difference'' between them is that Touma's motives are entirely rooted in saving those around him and he was able to return to the side of the light thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine's motives are entirely self-centered and further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a ''''T'''' and a '''''K''''' respectively, their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic Imagine Breaker]] being limited to touching with his right hand and it revolves around the destruction of the supernatural (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them and being more grounded in the natural world; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the normal reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to reject the reasoning of adults and apply their own ideas to a situation, and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The big ''difference'' between them is that Touma's motives are entirely rooted in saving those around him and he was able to return to the side of the light thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine's motives are entirely self-centered and further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a ''''T'''' '''''T''''' and a '''''K''''' respectively, respectively (vice-versa when written in the eastern order), their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic Imagine Breaker]] being limited to touching with his right hand and it revolves around the destruction of the supernatural (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them and being more grounded in the natural world; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the normal reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* ArchEnemy: Teitoku is one for Touma.
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* ArchEnemy: Teitoku Kakine is one for Touma.Touma Kamijou and the feeling is equally mutual between them.
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** While Touma is a skilled street fighter in canon, it was mainly TaughtByExperience and it would often be a CurbStompBattle for him when facing against those who were formally taught in martial arts and have greater fighting experience than him. Furthermore, Touma was also very [[ReluctantWarrior reluctant to fight]] unless the situation calls for it. This version of Touma was once a member in ''Skill-Out'', specifically for the Big Spider gang, and used to be infamous for being a vigilante known as "The Right Arm of the Devil."
** Like with Touma, Mikoto also gets an upgrade. Her own experience in the Dark Side and constant matches against the former beforehand as training allows her to control her esper abilities better and use them in more offensive ways than in canon to where she could not only hold her against Teitoku Kakine (the #2 ranked esper) for a brief while, but she also manages to make ''Kanzaki Kaori'' get serious while being low on "juice" (at the same time, however, Kanzaki was also holding back as well).
** Like with Touma, Mikoto also gets an upgrade. Her own experience in the Dark Side and constant matches against the former beforehand as training allows her to control her esper abilities better and use them in more offensive ways than in canon to where she could not only hold her against Teitoku Kakine (the #2 ranked esper) for a brief while, but she also manages to make ''Kanzaki Kaori'' get serious while being low on "juice" (at the same time, however, Kanzaki was also holding back as well).
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** While Touma is a skilled street fighter in canon, it was mainly TaughtByExperience and it would often be a CurbStompBattle for him when facing against those who were formally taught in martial arts and have greater fighting experience than him. Furthermore, Touma was also very [[ReluctantWarrior reluctant to fight]] unless the situation calls for it. This version of Touma was once a member in ''Skill-Out'', specifically for the Big Spider gang, and used to be infamous for being a vigilante known as "The Right Arm Devil of Academy City." Also, unlike his canon counterpart, Touma is able to use the Devil."
[[spoiler:Invisible Thing]] ''without'' having Imagine Breaker severed off in the past.
** Like with Touma, Mikoto also gets an upgrade. Her own experience in the Dark Side and constant matches against the former beforehand as training allows her to control her esper abilities better and use them in more offensive ways than in canon to where she could not only hold her against Teitoku Kakine (the #2 ranked esper) for a brief while, but she also manages to make ''Kanzaki Kaori'' get serious while being low on "juice" (at the same time, however, Kanzaki was also holding back as well).
** Like with Touma, Mikoto also gets an upgrade. Her own experience in the Dark Side and constant matches against the former beforehand as training allows her to control her esper abilities better and use them in more offensive ways than in canon to where she could not only hold her against Teitoku Kakine (the #2 ranked esper) for a brief while, but she also manages to make ''Kanzaki Kaori'' get serious while being low on "juice" (at the same time, however, Kanzaki was also holding back as well).
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to reject the reasoning of adults and apply their own ideas to a situation, and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The big ''difference'' between them is that Touma's motives are entirely rooted in saving those around him and he was able to leave the Dark Side thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine's motives are entirely self-centered and further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a ''T'' and a ''K'' respectively, their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic Imagine Breaker]] being limited to touch and it revolves around the destruction of the supernatural (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them and being more grounded in the natural world; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the normal reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to reject the reasoning of adults and apply their own ideas to a situation, and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The big ''difference'' between them is that Touma's motives are entirely rooted in saving those around him and he was able to leave return to the Dark Side side of the light thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine's motives are entirely self-centered and further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a ''T'' ''''T'''' and a ''K'' '''''K''''' respectively, their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic Imagine Breaker]] being limited to touch touching with his right hand and it revolves around the destruction of the supernatural (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them and being more grounded in the natural world; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the normal reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* MoralityChain: Mikoto serves as this for Touma, considering the morally dubious things he committed in the Dark Side to protect those around him as the "Right Arm of the Devil."
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* MoralityChain: Mikoto serves as this for Touma, considering the morally dubious things he committed in the Dark Side to protect those around him as the "Right Arm "Devil of Academy City."
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: During a flashback n chapter 6, [[spoiler:Touma has this reaction when he realized that he harm Mikoto when theDevil."latter was snooping around in the Dark Side to find him.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: During a flashback n chapter 6, [[spoiler:Touma has this reaction when he realized that he harm Mikoto when the
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* ShipTease: Touma has loads of it with Saten.
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* ShipTease: Touma has loads of it with Saten.Saten, but he really [[SingleTargetSexuality only has eyes for Mikoto]].
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* SingleTargetSexuality: Touma really only has eyes for Mikoto, and the same holds true for the latter.
* SupremeChef: Touma upgrades to this after spending several years working at a restaurant in his backstory
* SupremeChef: Touma upgrades to this after spending several years working at a restaurant in his backstory
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* SingleTargetSexuality: Touma really only has eyes for Mikoto, and While also being a close friend, Mikoto is the apple in Touma's eyes. The same holds true for the latter.
* SupremeChef: Touma upgrades to this after spending several years working at a restaurant in hisbackstorybackstory, with Mikoto, Kuroko, and Index enjoying his cooking.
* SupremeChef: Touma upgrades to this after spending several years working at a restaurant in his
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* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:Instead of Touma losing his memories from the Feather of Light near the end of the Index Arc, it's Mikoto who gets some of her memories destroyed instead. Arguably, this leaves Touma worse state of anguish by having a near mental breakdown with TearsOfRemorse upon seeing his closet friend recoiled in fear of him because he's now a stranger to her, to which he blames himself for failing to prevent her memory loss in the first place.]]
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* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:Instead of Touma losing his memories from the Feather of Light near the end of the Index Arc, it's Mikoto who gets some of her memories destroyed instead. Arguably, this leaves Touma in a very worse state of anguish by having a near mental breakdown with TearsOfRemorse upon seeing his closet friend recoiled in fear of him because he's now a stranger to her, to which he blames himself for failing to prevent her memory loss in the first place.]]
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* ChivalrousPervert: PlayedForLaughs and ultimately {{subverted|Trope}}. Even if Touma could make a comment about a girl's bust size without making the said girl feel offended like [[CanonForeigner Wataru Kurozuma]], he'll still be seen as an AccidentalPervert thanks to his [[BornUnlucky misfortune]].
-->'''Touma''': "You should drink more of those. I once knew a girl with bust size like the both of you. She's grown rather marvelously thanks to the milk." ''(Mikoto and Kuroko blinked.)''
-->'''Kuroko''': "Somehow... even though he just talked about breasts..."
-->'''Mikoto''': "It didn't sound lewd at all... but what's this about the girl growing marvelously!?"
-->'''Touma''': "You don't have to so jealous, just drink more milk and you'll be fine."
-->'''Mikoto''': "Why you!" ''(Mikoto pounced without warning.)''
-->'''Touma''': "Oi! I'm still... argh! Such Misfortune!"
-->'''Touma''': "You should drink more of those. I once knew a girl with bust size like the both of you. She's grown rather marvelously thanks to the milk." ''(Mikoto and Kuroko blinked.)''
-->'''Kuroko''': "Somehow... even though he just talked about breasts..."
-->'''Mikoto''': "It didn't sound lewd at all... but what's this about the girl growing marvelously!?"
-->'''Touma''': "You don't have to so jealous, just drink more milk and you'll be fine."
-->'''Mikoto''': "Why you!" ''(Mikoto pounced without warning.)''
-->'''Touma''': "Oi! I'm still... argh! Such Misfortune!"
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* GlassCannon: Despite her immense power as the #3 Level 5 [[ShockAndAwe Electromaster]], Mikoto is still a 14-year-old girl who's no less durable than a regular athletic teen of her age. The author lampshades this when comparing her to Kanzaki, who's practically an [[Lightningbruiser Uber]], who he then compares to Acqua of the Back as the [[ImplacableMan Superman]] for defying all logic centered around the [[BornWinner Saints]].
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* GlassCannon: Despite her immense power as the #3 Level 5 [[ShockAndAwe Electromaster]], Mikoto is still a 14-year-old girl who's no less durable than a regular athletic teen of her age. The author lampshades this when comparing her to Kanzaki, who's practically an [[Lightningbruiser [[LightningBruiser Uber]], who he then ''then'' compares to Acqua of the Back as the [[ImplacableMan Superman]] '''[[ImplacableMan Superman]]''' for defying all logic centered around the [[BornWinner Saints]].
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* MoralityChain: Mikoto serves as this for Touma, considering the morally dubious things he committed to protect those around him as "The Arm of the Devil."
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* MoralityChain: Mikoto serves as this for Touma, considering the morally dubious things he committed in the Dark Side to protect those around him as "The the "Right Arm of the Devil."
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* AdaptationalSexuality: In canon, Kuroko's attraction to Mikoto is more of the case of IfItsYouItsOk and SingleTargetSexuality as the former states that she doesn't swing that way. Here, Kuroko is confirmed to be a lesbian with Mikoto describing her as a "PsychoLesbian" early on in the story.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: In canon, Kuroko's attraction to Mikoto is more of the case of IfItsYouItsOk and SingleTargetSexuality as the former states that she doesn't swing that way. Here, Kuroko is confirmed to be a lesbian with Mikoto describing her as a "PsychoLesbian" early on in at one point before the story.start of the story.
* AffectionateNickname: Unlike the EmbarrassingNickname Touma uses for Mikoto in canon, Biri-Biri considered this for Mikoto here.
* AffectionateNickname: Unlike the EmbarrassingNickname Touma uses for Mikoto in canon, Biri-Biri considered this for Mikoto here.
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** Like with Touma, Mikoto also gets an upgrade. Her own experience in the Dark Side and constant matches against the former beforehand as training allows her to control her esper abilities better and use them in more offensive ways than in canon to where she could not only hold her against Teitoku Kakine (the #2 ranked esper) for a brief while, but she also manages to make ''Kanzaki Kaori'' get serious.
* AdaptationalNameChange: Justified. The name of the "[[NoNameGiven Girl in the Dress]]" wasn't revealed during the fanfic's released and [=Knowledgeseeker66=] instead, gave her the name of Kokoro (meaning "Heart" in English), while the name of the girl is later revealed to be [[spoiler:Kaibi Gokusai]].
* AdaptationalSexuality: In canon, Kuroko's attraction to Mikoto is more of the case of IfItsYouItsOk and SingleTargetSexuality as the former states that she doesn't swing that way. Here, Kuroko is confirmed to be a lesbian with Mikoto describing her as a "Psycho Lesbian" early on in the story.
* AdaptationalNameChange: Justified. The name of the "[[NoNameGiven Girl in the Dress]]" wasn't revealed during the fanfic's released and [=Knowledgeseeker66=] instead, gave her the name of Kokoro (meaning "Heart" in English), while the name of the girl is later revealed to be [[spoiler:Kaibi Gokusai]].
* AdaptationalSexuality: In canon, Kuroko's attraction to Mikoto is more of the case of IfItsYouItsOk and SingleTargetSexuality as the former states that she doesn't swing that way. Here, Kuroko is confirmed to be a lesbian with Mikoto describing her as a "Psycho Lesbian" early on in the story.
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** Like with Touma, Mikoto also gets an upgrade. Her own experience in the Dark Side and constant matches against the former beforehand as training allows her to control her esper abilities better and use them in more offensive ways than in canon to where she could not only hold her against Teitoku Kakine (the #2 ranked esper) for a brief while, but she also manages to make ''Kanzaki Kaori'' get serious.serious while being low on "juice" (at the same time, however, Kanzaki was also holding back as well).
* AdaptationalNameChange: Justified. The name of the "[[NoNameGiven Girl in the Dress]]" wasn't revealed during the fanfic's released and[=Knowledgeseeker66=] Stormwolfex instead, gave her the name of Kokoro (meaning "Heart" in English), while the name of the girl is later revealed to be [[spoiler:Kaibi Gokusai]].
* AdaptationalSexuality: In canon, Kuroko's attraction to Mikoto is more of the case of IfItsYouItsOk and SingleTargetSexuality as the former states that she doesn't swing that way. Here, Kuroko is confirmed to be a lesbian with Mikoto describing her as a"Psycho Lesbian" "PsychoLesbian" early on in the story.
* AdaptationalNameChange: Justified. The name of the "[[NoNameGiven Girl in the Dress]]" wasn't revealed during the fanfic's released and
* AdaptationalSexuality: In canon, Kuroko's attraction to Mikoto is more of the case of IfItsYouItsOk and SingleTargetSexuality as the former states that she doesn't swing that way. Here, Kuroko is confirmed to be a lesbian with Mikoto describing her as a
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* GlassCannon: According to the author, Mikoto is considered this due to her body still being within the human limits despite her immense electrical power.
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* GlassCannon: According to the author, Mikoto is considered this due to her body still being within the human limits despite Despite her immense electrical power.power as the #3 Level 5 [[ShockAndAwe Electromaster]], Mikoto is still a 14-year-old girl who's no less durable than a regular athletic teen of her age. The author lampshades this when comparing her to Kanzaki, who's practically an [[Lightningbruiser Uber]], who he then compares to Acqua of the Back as the [[ImplacableMan Superman]] for defying all logic centered around the [[BornWinner Saints]].
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** Touma and Mikoto being childhood friends compare to canon.
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** Touma and Mikoto being childhood friends compare to canon.canon, to which the latter is the only girl in his eyes who he's romantically attracted to and vice-versa.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Touma's backstory is notably darker compare to canon.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Touma's backstory is notably darker compare to canon.canon, with his misfortune being indirectly responsible [[spoiler:for the death of a man's wife and child]] to Mikoto being a LivingEmotionalCrutch for him and vice-versa. [[spoiler:Mikoto's memory loss of him at the end of the Index Arc justifiably weighs ''heavily'' on his conscience.]]
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* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:Instead of Touma losing his memories from the Feather of Light near the end of the Index Arc, it's Mikoto who gets some of her memories destroyed instead. Arguably, this leaves Touma into a near mental breakdown with TearsOfRemorse upon seeing his closet friend recoiled in fear of him because he's now a stranger to her.]]
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* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:Instead of Touma losing his memories from the Feather of Light near the end of the Index Arc, it's Mikoto who gets some of her memories destroyed instead. Arguably, this leaves Touma into worse state of anguish by having a near mental breakdown with TearsOfRemorse upon seeing his closet friend recoiled in fear of him because he's now a stranger to her.her, to which he blames himself for failing to prevent her memory loss in the first place.]]
* SingleTargetSexuality: Touma really only has eyes for Mikoto, and the same holds true for the latter.
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* TheGadfly / TheTease: Misaki Shokuhou, specifically towards Touma and Mikoto.
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* TheGadfly / TheTease: TheGadfly[=/=]TheTease: Misaki Shokuhou, specifically towards Touma and Mikoto.
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* AdaptationalBadass:
** While Touma is a skilled street fighter in canon, it was mainly TaughtByExperience and it would often be a CurbStompBattle for him when facing against those who were formally taught in martial arts and have greater fighting experience than him. Furthermore, Touma was also very [[ReluctantWarrior reluctant to fight]] unless the situation calls for it. This version of Touma was once a member in ''Skill-Out'', specifically for the Big Spider gang, and used to be infamous for being a vigilante known as "The Right Arm of the Devil."
** Like with Touma, Mikoto also gets an upgrade. Her own experience in the Dark Side and constant matches against the former beforehand as training allows her to control her esper abilities better and use them in more offensive ways than in canon to where she could not only hold her against Teitoku Kakine (the #2 ranked esper) for a brief while, but she also manages to make ''Kanzaki Kaori'' get serious.
** While Touma is a skilled street fighter in canon, it was mainly TaughtByExperience and it would often be a CurbStompBattle for him when facing against those who were formally taught in martial arts and have greater fighting experience than him. Furthermore, Touma was also very [[ReluctantWarrior reluctant to fight]] unless the situation calls for it. This version of Touma was once a member in ''Skill-Out'', specifically for the Big Spider gang, and used to be infamous for being a vigilante known as "The Right Arm of the Devil."
** Like with Touma, Mikoto also gets an upgrade. Her own experience in the Dark Side and constant matches against the former beforehand as training allows her to control her esper abilities better and use them in more offensive ways than in canon to where she could not only hold her against Teitoku Kakine (the #2 ranked esper) for a brief while, but she also manages to make ''Kanzaki Kaori'' get serious.
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to reject the reasoning of adults and apply their own ideas to a situation, and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The difference is that Touma was able to leave the Dark Side thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a ''T'' and a ''K'' respectively, their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic Imagine Breaker]] being limited to touch and it revolves around the destruction of the supernatural (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them and being more grounded in the natural world; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the normal reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to reject the reasoning of adults and apply their own ideas to a situation, and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The difference big ''difference'' between them is that Touma Touma's motives are entirely rooted in saving those around him and he was able to leave the Dark Side thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine Kakine's motives are entirely self-centered and further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a ''T'' and a ''K'' respectively, their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic Imagine Breaker]] being limited to touch and it revolves around the destruction of the supernatural (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them and being more grounded in the natural world; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the normal reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* ShoutOut: When Kuroko comments on Touma's scars, he calls them a [[Fanfic/InFlight "legacy of a misspent youth".]]
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** When Kuroko comments on Touma's scars, he calls them a [[Fanfic/InFlight "legacy of a misspent youth".]]
** When Kuroko comments on Touma's scars, he calls them a [[Fanfic/InFlight "legacy of a misspent youth".]]
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* WorldOfCardboardSpeech: Mikoto almost says it word-for-word, realizing that Kaori is an opponent she can go all out on.
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* WorldOfCardboardSpeech: Mikoto almost says it word-for-word, realizing that Kaori is an opponent she can go all out on.on.
-->"All my life, ever since I've reached Level 5, I feel like I'm living in a world of glass. Where everything is breakable and fragile. Especially humans, if I don't control my powers correctly, I could end up stopping their hearts in an instant or burn them to death with the heat produced. But… you can take it, can't you? A 'Child of God' means you must be blessed with some powerful protection. Then that's good. Maybe, just for today, I can cut loose and show you just how powerful I can be!"
-->"All my life, ever since I've reached Level 5, I feel like I'm living in a world of glass. Where everything is breakable and fragile. Especially humans, if I don't control my powers correctly, I could end up stopping their hearts in an instant or burn them to death with the heat produced. But… you can take it, can't you? A 'Child of God' means you must be blessed with some powerful protection. Then that's good. Maybe, just for today, I can cut loose and show you just how powerful I can be!"
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to [[IRejectYourReality reject the reality of what they see and substitute them with their own ideals]], and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The difference is that Touma was able to leave the Dark Side thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a ''T'' and a ''K'' respectively, their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic Imagine Breaker]] being limited to touch and it revolves around the destruction of the supernatural (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them and being more grounded in the natural world; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the normal reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to [[IRejectYourReality reject the reality reasoning of what they see adults and substitute them with apply their own ideals]], ideas to a situation, and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The difference is that Touma was able to leave the Dark Side thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a ''T'' and a ''K'' respectively, their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic Imagine Breaker]] being limited to touch and it revolves around the destruction of the supernatural (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them and being more grounded in the natural world; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the normal reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to [[IRejectYourReality reject the reality of what they see and substitute them with their own ideals]], and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The difference is that Touma was able to leave the Dark Side thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a ''T'' and a ''K'' respectively, their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic Imagine Breaker]] being limited to touch and it revolves around the destruction of the supernatural (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the normal reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to [[IRejectYourReality reject the reality of what they see and substitute them with their own ideals]], and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The difference is that Touma was able to leave the Dark Side thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a ''T'' and a ''K'' respectively, their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic Imagine Breaker]] being limited to touch and it revolves around the destruction of the supernatural (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them; them and being more grounded in the natural world; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the normal reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to [[IRejectYourReality reject the reality of what they see and substitute them with their own ideals]], and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The difference is that Touma was able to leave the Dark Side thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a ''T'' and a ''K'' respectively, their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic Imagine Breaker]] being limited to touch and it revolves around the destruction of the supernatural (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to [[IRejectYourReality reject the reality of what they see and substitute them with their own ideals]], and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The difference is that Touma was able to leave the Dark Side thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a ''T'' and a ''K'' respectively, their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic Imagine Breaker]] being limited to touch and it revolves around the destruction of the supernatural (i.e. magic, esper, etc.), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the normal reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]]''.
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to [[IRejectYourReality reject the reality of what they see and substitute them with their own ideals]], and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The difference is that Touma was able to leave the Dark Side thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a ''T'' and a ''K'' respectively, their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic Imagine Breaker]] being limited to touch and it revolves around the destruction of the supernatural (i.e. magic, esper, etc.) along with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by [[IRejectYourReality rejecting the reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]].
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* EvilCounterpart: Arguably, Kakine is this to Touma, and even ''moreso'' than with Post-CharacterDevelopment Accelerator and Mugino. The two of them were teens with powerful abilities that suffer from a DarkAndTroubledPast with a StartOfDarkness that involves failing to save a close female friend from death (as seen in Kakine's spin-off manga), have confidence issues that lead them into doing what they do to validate their purpose in life, have a tendency to [[IRejectYourReality reject the reality of what they see and substitute them with their own ideals]], and did many morally dubious things in the Dark Side along with having a female companion who cares for them (Mikoto for Touma and Kokoro for Kakine). The difference is that Touma was able to leave the Dark Side thanks to his bond with Mikoto while Kakine further involves himself in the Dark Side with Kokoro being his OnlyFriend. Tellingly, aside from both of their full names starting with a ''T'' and a ''K'' respectively, their abilities and fighting styles are practically diametric opposites to each other. Touma's a CloseRangeCombatant with his [[AntiMagic Imagine Breaker]] being limited to touch and it revolves around the destruction of the supernatural (i.e. magic, esper, etc.) along ), which goes in line with his perchance to "shatter the illusions" of others to save them; while Kakine's a LongRangeFighter with [[OurDarkMatterIsMysterious Dark Matter]] being only limited to his [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower imagination]] and it revolves around [[ThePowerOfCreation creation]] by pulling "theoretically" existing matter out into the ordinary world, which goes in line to how esper abilities are described by [[IRejectYourReality ''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin rejecting the reality surrounding them and substituting it with one's own personal reality]].reality]]''.