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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13242815/1/Oblivio-Is-Not-Oblivious Oblivio Is Not Oblivious]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13242815/1/Oblivio-Is-Not-Oblivious Oblivio Is Not Oblivious]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], Creator/{{RockSunner}}, for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
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* BigDamnKiss: [[spoiler:Because the Miraculous cure could not be done, Marinette and Adrien remain in love to the end, and they kiss.]]
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Hawk Moth is thwarted because Tikki escapes with both Miraculous. Many people will suffer because of their loss of memory, but Marinette and Adrien will remain in love.]]
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Hawk Moth is thwarted because Tikki escapes with both Miraculous. Many people will suffer because of their loss of memory, but Marinette and Adrien will remain in love.]]
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* BigDamnKiss: [[spoiler:Because Because the Miraculous [[spoiler:Miraculous cure could not be done, done]], Marinette and Adrien remain [[spoiler:remain in love to the end, and they kiss.]]
* BittersweetEnding:[[spoiler:Hawk Hawk Moth is thwarted because Tikki [[spoiler:thwarted becauseTikki escapes with both Miraculous. Miraculous]]. Many people will suffer [[spoiler:suffer because of their loss of memory, memory]], but Marinette and Adrien will [[spoiler:will remain in love.]]
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* MacGyvering: [[spoiler:Marinette makes additional use of the tape she stuck to Adrien's phone to decoy Oblivio. She uses it to secure the Miraculous earrings and ring to Tikki so she can fly away with them without risking dropping them.]]
* NearVillainVictory: [[spoiler:Marinette and Adrien are cornered on high rooftop, with no idea how to activate Ladybug's powers. Only sending the Miraculous away with Tikki prevents Hawk Moth from getting them.]]
* NiceJobFixingItVillain: [[spoiler: By causing Ladybug and Chat Noir to lose their memories and rushing them with an effective chase by Oblivio, Hawk Moth causes them to do something they wouldn't think of normally: to send Tikki flying away with the Miraculous jewels and make his plan virtually impossible.]]
* NearVillainVictory: [[spoiler:Marinette and Adrien are cornered on high rooftop, with no idea how to activate Ladybug's powers. Only sending the Miraculous away with Tikki prevents Hawk Moth from getting them.]]
* NiceJobFixingItVillain: [[spoiler: By causing Ladybug and Chat Noir to lose their memories and rushing them with an effective chase by Oblivio, Hawk Moth causes them to do something they wouldn't think of normally: to send Tikki flying away with the Miraculous jewels and make his plan virtually impossible.]]
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* MacGyvering: [[spoiler:Marinette makes Marinette [[spoiler:makes additional use of the tape she stuck to Adrien's phone to decoy Oblivio. She uses it to secure the Miraculous earrings and ring to Tikki so she can fly away with them without risking dropping them.]]
* NearVillainVictory:[[spoiler:Marinette Marinette and Adrien are cornered [[spoiler:cornered on high rooftop, with no idea how to activate Ladybug's powers. Only sending the Miraculous away with Tikki prevents Hawk Moth from getting them.]]
* NiceJobFixingItVillain:[[spoiler: By causing Ladybug and Chat Noir to lose their memories and rushing [[spoiler:rushing them with an effective chase by Oblivio, Oblivio]], Hawk Moth causes them to do something they wouldn't think of normally: to [[spoiler:to send Tikki flying away with the Miraculous jewels and make his plan virtually impossible.]]
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* UnspokenPlanGuarantee: [[spoiler:The plan to send the Miraculous ring and earrings away with Tikki is not revealed until after the fact.]]
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* UnspokenPlanGuarantee: [[spoiler:The The plan to send [[spoiler:send the Miraculous ring and earrings away with Tikki Tikki]] is not revealed until after the fact.]]
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* NearVillainVictory: [[spoiler:Marinette and Adrien were cornered on high rooftop, with no idea how to activate Ladybug's powers. Only sending the Miraculous away with Tikki prevented Hawk Moth from getting them.]]
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* NearVillainVictory: [[spoiler:Marinette and Adrien were are cornered on high rooftop, with no idea how to activate Ladybug's powers. Only sending the Miraculous away with Tikki prevented prevents Hawk Moth from getting them.]]
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* NearVillainVictory: [[spoiler:Marinette and Adrien were cornered on high rooftop, with no idea how to activate Ladybug's powers. Only sending the Miraculous away with Tikki prevented Hawk Moth from getting them.]]
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* GenderNeutralWriting: Oblivio is consistently referred to in the narration with third-person pronouns like "they" and "their." This is appropriate for a creature made from two persons, male and female.
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* YouHaveFailedMe: Downplayed. [[spoiler:Hawk Moth says this to Oblivio, but just pulls their power in the desperate hope of akumatizing someone else to become a flying villain and go after Tikki.]]
* WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk: [[spoiler:When Marinette and Adrien lie that they hid the Miraculous in the office where they were chased, Oblivio first threatens them with the memory gun to reveal the hiding place. When the couple points out that erasing their memories would defeat the purpose of the interrogation, the villains threaten Marinette with physical violence instead.]]
* WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk: [[spoiler:When Marinette and Adrien lie that they hid the Miraculous in the office where they were chased, Oblivio first threatens them with the memory gun to reveal the hiding place. When the couple points out that erasing their memories would defeat the purpose of the interrogation, the villains threaten Marinette with physical violence instead.]]
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* YouHaveFailedMe: Downplayed. [[spoiler:Hawk Moth says this to Oblivio, but just pulls their power in the desperate hope of akumatizing someone else to become a flying villain and go after Tikki.]]
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* YouHaveFailedMe: Downplayed. [[spoiler:Hawk Moth says this to Oblivio, but just pulls their power in the desperate hope of akumatizing someone else to become a flying villain and go after Tikki.]]
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* YouHaveFailedMe: Downplayed. [[spoiler:Hawk Moth says this to Oblivio, but just pulls their power in the desperate hope of akumatizing someone else to become a flying villain and go after Tikki.]]
* WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk: [[spoiler:When Marinette and Adrien lie that they hid the Miraculous in the office where they were chased, Oblivio first threatens them with the memory gun to reveal the hiding place. When the couple points out that erasing their memories would defeat the purpose of the interrogation, the villains threaten Marinette with physical violence instead.]]
* WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk: [[spoiler:When Marinette and Adrien lie that they hid the Miraculous in the office where they were chased, Oblivio first threatens them with the memory gun to reveal the hiding place. When the couple points out that erasing their memories would defeat the purpose of the interrogation, the villains threaten Marinette with physical violence instead.]]
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: [[spoiler: By causing Ladybug and Chat Noir to lose their memories and rushing them with an effective chase by Oblivio, Hawk Moth causes them to do something they wouldn't think of normally: to send Tikki flying away with the Miraculous jewels and making his plan virtually impossible.]]
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: [[spoiler: By causing Ladybug and Chat Noir to lose their memories and rushing them with an effective chase by Oblivio, Hawk Moth causes them to do something they wouldn't think of normally: to send Tikki flying away with the Miraculous jewels and making make his plan virtually impossible.]]
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* VillainProtagonist: Most of the story is from the point of view of Oblivio.
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* VillainProtagonist: Most of the story is from the point of view of Oblivio.Oblivio.
* YouHaveFailedMe: Downplayed. [[spoiler:Hawk Moth says this to Oblivio, but just pulls their power in the desperate hope of akumatizing someone else to become a flying villain and go after Tikki.]]
* YouHaveFailedMe: Downplayed. [[spoiler:Hawk Moth says this to Oblivio, but just pulls their power in the desperate hope of akumatizing someone else to become a flying villain and go after Tikki.]]
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* ShownTheirWork: In real life there isn't an elevator to the terrace roof of Montparnesse Tower. This fic installs one by order of Major Bourgeois.
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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: [[spoiler: By causing Ladybug and Chat Noir to lose their memories and rushing them with an effective chase by Oblivio, Hawk Moth causes them to do something they wouldn't think of normally: to send Tikki flying away with the Miraculous jewels and making his plan virtually impossible.]]
* ShownTheirWork: In real life there isn't an elevator to the terrace roof of Montparnesse Tower. This fic installs one by order ofMajor Mayor Bourgeois.
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* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler: Ladybug and Chat Noir's identities are revealed to Hawk Moth, Nino, and Alya.]]
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* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler: Ladybug and Chat Noir's identities are revealed to Hawk Moth, Nino, and Alya. Ladybug and Chat Noir don't forget their own mutual reveal.]]
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* MacGyvering: [[spoiler:Marinette makes additional use of the tape she stuck to Adrien's phone to decoy Oblivio. She uses it to secure the Miraculous earrings and ring to Tikki so she can fly away with them without risking dropping them.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13242815/1/Oblivio-Is-Not-Oblivious Oblivio Is Not Oblivious]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for ''WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug''. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
This is a one-chapter work and it is complete.
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!!This fanfiction series contains examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that [[spoiler:Oblivio notices the movement of Tikki in the stairwell, and goes up the stairs instead of being decoyed down.]]
* BigDamnKiss: [[spoiler:Because the Miraculous cure could not be done, Marinette and Adrien remain in love to the end, and they kiss.]]
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Hawk Moth is thwarted because Tikki escapes with both Miraculous. Many people will suffer because of their loss of memory, but Marinette and Adrien will remain in love.]]
* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler: Ladybug and Chat Noir's identities are revealed to Hawk Moth, Nino, and Alya.]]
* VillainProtagonist: Most of the story is from the point of view of Oblivio.
This is a one-chapter work and it is complete.
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!!This fanfiction series contains examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that [[spoiler:Oblivio notices the movement of Tikki in the stairwell, and goes up the stairs instead of being decoyed down.]]
* BigDamnKiss: [[spoiler:Because the Miraculous cure could not be done, Marinette and Adrien remain in love to the end, and they kiss.]]
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Hawk Moth is thwarted because Tikki escapes with both Miraculous. Many people will suffer because of their loss of memory, but Marinette and Adrien will remain in love.]]
* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler: Ladybug and Chat Noir's identities are revealed to Hawk Moth, Nino, and Alya.]]
* VillainProtagonist: Most of the story is from the point of view of Oblivio.