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** Elphaba remembers her mother Melena fondly. In the books, Melena is shown apathetically towards Elphaba as a baby and has a difficult time feeling maternal towards her (though, Elphaba has good memories of her, showing that Melena likely changed at some point).
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** Elphaba remembers her mother Melena fondly. In the books, Melena is shown apathetically to be apathetic towards Elphaba as a baby and has a difficult time feeling maternal towards her (though, Elphaba has good memories of her, showing that Melena likely changed at some point).
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Frexspar is abusive towards Elphaba and only cares for Nessarose.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Frexspar is abusive towards Elphaba and only cares for his younger daughter Nessarose.
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* SlashFic: The story starts platonic but it ultimately becomes Galinda/Elphaba fic.
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* SlashFic: The story starts platonic but it ultimately becomes Galinda/Elphaba fic. Elphaba ends up falling for the ghostly Galinda.
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** Elphaba remembers her mother Melena fondly, In the books, Melena is shown apathetically towards Elphaba as a baby and has a difficult time feeling maternal towards her (though, Elphaba has good memories of her, showing that Melena likely changed at some point).
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** Elphaba remembers her mother Melena fondly, fondly. In the books, Melena is shown apathetically towards Elphaba as a baby and has a difficult time feeling maternal towards her (though, Elphaba has good memories of her, showing that Melena likely changed at some point).
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* OldMaid: In ''The Eternity Effect'' (which takes place roughly in the late 1800s), Pfannee who is 26 already considers herself too old to be unmarried. She says that she's lucky if a man even looked at her as a marriage prospect.
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* OldMaid: In ''The Eternity Effect'' (which takes place roughly in the late 1800s), 26-year old Pfannee who is 26 already considers herself too old to be unmarried. She says that she's lucky if a man even looked at her as a marriage prospect.
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* OldMaid: In ''The Eternity Effect'' (which takes place roughly in the late 1800s), Pfannee who is 26 already considers herself too old to be unmarried. She says that she's lucky if a man even looked at her as a marriage prospect.
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** Nessarose only has a few scenes early on. She disappears from the narrative after Elphaba and Glinda leave Shiz.
** Fiyero doesn't pop up until very late into the story. Even after that he's [[spoiler:killed off soon afterwards]].
** Fiyero doesn't pop up until very late into the story. Even after that he's [[spoiler:killed off soon afterwards]].
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** Nessarose only has a few scenes early on. She disappears from the narrative after Elphaba and Glinda leave Shiz.
Shiz. She's expanded on in ''The Eternity Effect''.
** Fiyero doesn't pop up until very late into the story. Even after that he's [[spoiler:killed off soon afterwards]]. He becomes more important in the sequel.
** Fiyero doesn't pop up until very late into the story. Even after that he's [[spoiler:killed off soon afterwards]]. He becomes more important in the sequel.
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* CanonicalCharacterAllAlong: Rora takes Tip's place as the next Ozma.
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* CanonicalCharacterAllAlong: CanonCharacterAllAlong: Rora takes Tip's place as the next Ozma.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Frexspar is abusive towards Elphaba and only cares for Nessarose.
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul:
** In the books, Frexspar is fairly close with Elphaba. Here, he barely tolerates her.
** Elphaba remembers her mother Melena fondly, In the books, Melena is shown apathetically towards Elphaba as a baby and has a difficult time feeling maternal towards her (though, Elphaba has good memories of her, showing that Melena likely changed at some point).
* AdaptationalRelationshipOverhaul:
** In the books, Frexspar is fairly close with Elphaba. Here, he barely tolerates her.
** Elphaba remembers her mother Melena fondly, In the books, Melena is shown apathetically towards Elphaba as a baby and has a difficult time feeling maternal towards her (though, Elphaba has good memories of her, showing that Melena likely changed at some point).
* CanonicalCharacterAllAlong: Rora takes Tip's place as the next Ozma.
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* TogetherInDeath: Glinda tries to subvert this [[spoiler:but Elphaba dies of her injuries. The two end up together and are taken by Dr. Dillamond into the afterlife to be with their families as well]].
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* TogetherInDeath: TogetherInDeath:
** Glinda tries to subvert this [[spoiler:but Elphaba dies of her injuries. The two end up together and are taken by Dr. Dillamond into the afterlife to be with their families aswell]].well]].
** Ozian believe that Galinda the Good and Fiyero the Brave had a heroic love so strong that death couldn't part them. ''Books'' have even been made about their supposed love. In reality, they're getting Fiyero mixed up with Elphaba (who they view as a Wicked Witch).
** Glinda tries to subvert this [[spoiler:but Elphaba dies of her injuries. The two end up together and are taken by Dr. Dillamond into the afterlife to be with their families as
** Ozian believe that Galinda the Good and Fiyero the Brave had a heroic love so strong that death couldn't part them. ''Books'' have even been made about their supposed love. In reality, they're getting Fiyero mixed up with Elphaba (who they view as a Wicked Witch).
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* GhostAmnesia: Glinda can't how she died, what she was doing a few weeks before she died, or even her last summer vacation. She ultimately regains the memory of her death after [[spoiler:touching the locker where she was murdered]].
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* GhostAmnesia: Glinda can't remember how she died, what she was doing a few weeks before she died, or even her last summer vacation. She ultimately regains the memory of her death after [[spoiler:touching the locker where she was murdered]].
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* PrecisionFStrike: When [[spoiler:Morrible creates a storm indoors]] to try and kill Elphaba, all Glinda can do is monologue "Oh. My. Fucking. ''OZ!" before telling Elphaba to run.
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* PrecisionFStrike: When [[spoiler:Morrible creates a storm indoors]] to try and kill Elphaba, all Glinda can do is monologue "Oh. My. Fucking. ''OZ!" ''OZ!''" before telling Elphaba to run.
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There is also a sequel called ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6069626/1/The-Eternity-Effect The Eternity Effect]]''.
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* BittersweetEndin: On one end [[spoiler:Madame Morrible is defeated]], but at the same time [[spoiler:Elphaba and Glinda are both dead (albeit happily TogetherInDeath).]]
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* BittersweetEndin: BittersweetEnding: On one end [[spoiler:Madame Morrible is defeated]], but at the same time [[spoiler:Elphaba and Glinda are both dead (albeit happily TogetherInDeath).]]
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* DumbBlonde: Subverted with Glinda. Everyone thinks she's a shallow, dumb blonde, but she's actually quite studious when she puts her mind to things. She's closer to an AcademicAlphaBitch who hides behind this image until Elphaba helps her fulfil her true potential.
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* DumbBlonde: Subverted with Glinda. Everyone thinks she's a shallow, dumb blonde, but she's actually quite studious when she puts her mind to things. She's closer to an AcademicAlphaBitch who [[ObfuscatingStupidity hides behind this image image]] until Elphaba helps her fulfil her true potential.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Elphaba joined Shiz a year later than she did in canon. Galinda died during that period.
* CuteGhostGirl: Galinda is in this form. She's as pretty as she was in life and still keeps most of her chipper attitude.
* CuteGhostGirl: Galinda is in this form. She's as pretty as she was in life and still keeps most of her chipper attitude.
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* AbusiveParents: Elphaba has a poor relationship with her father Frexspar. It's implied he was abusive towards her growing up. She's more than happy to stay at Shiz during the holidays in order to avoid him.
* AlternateUniverseFic: Elphaba joined Shiz a year later than she did in canon. Galinda died during thatperiod.period.
* BittersweetEndin: On one end [[spoiler:Madame Morrible is defeated]], but at the same time [[spoiler:Elphaba and Glinda are both dead (albeit happily TogetherInDeath).]]
* ChekhovsGun: Glinda learns a simple water vaporizing spell near the start of the story. Near the climax she uses it [[spoiler:against Morrible to save Elphaba from a storm Morrible created]].
* CompositeCharacter: Nessarose has the conservative, religious personality of her book persona while being wheelchair bound (rather than armless) like her musical persona.
* CuteGhostGirl: Glinda is in this form. She's as pretty as she was in life and still keeps most of her chipper attitude.
* DemotedToExtra:
** Nessarose only has a few scenes early on. She disappears from the narrative after Elphaba and Glinda leave Shiz.
** Fiyero doesn't pop up until very late into the story. Even after that he's [[spoiler:killed off soon afterwards]].
* DiedInYourArmsTonight: [[spoiler:Fiyero]] dies in [[spoiler:Glinda's]] arms after being speared through the heart.
*CuteGhostGirl: Galinda is in this form. DumbBlonde: Subverted with Glinda. Everyone thinks she's a shallow, dumb blonde, but she's actually quite studious when she puts her mind to things. She's as pretty as closer to an AcademicAlphaBitch who hides behind this image until Elphaba helps her fulfil her true potential.
* ForWantOfANail: The "nail" is that Elphaba came to Shiz one year later than shewas did in life canon. This resulted in Glinda never becoming her roommate and still keeps most of as a result [[spoiler:Glinda ending up in the wrong place at the wrong time, resulting in her chipper attitude.murder]].
* AlternateUniverseFic: Elphaba joined Shiz a year later than she did in canon. Galinda died during that
* BittersweetEndin: On one end [[spoiler:Madame Morrible is defeated]], but at the same time [[spoiler:Elphaba and Glinda are both dead (albeit happily TogetherInDeath).]]
* ChekhovsGun: Glinda learns a simple water vaporizing spell near the start of the story. Near the climax she uses it [[spoiler:against Morrible to save Elphaba from a storm Morrible created]].
* CompositeCharacter: Nessarose has the conservative, religious personality of her book persona while being wheelchair bound (rather than armless) like her musical persona.
* CuteGhostGirl: Glinda is in this form. She's as pretty as she was in life and still keeps most of her chipper attitude.
* DemotedToExtra:
** Nessarose only has a few scenes early on. She disappears from the narrative after Elphaba and Glinda leave Shiz.
** Fiyero doesn't pop up until very late into the story. Even after that he's [[spoiler:killed off soon afterwards]].
* DiedInYourArmsTonight: [[spoiler:Fiyero]] dies in [[spoiler:Glinda's]] arms after being speared through the heart.
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* ForWantOfANail: The "nail" is that Elphaba came to Shiz one year later than she
* OhMyGods: The fic mixes the musical-verse and book-verse terms together. Characters use "Oz", "Lurline", and occasionally "the Unnamed God".
* PrecisionFStrike: When [[spoiler:Morrible creates a storm indoors]] to try and kill Elphaba, all Glinda can do is monologue "Oh. My. Fucking. ''OZ!" before telling Elphaba to run.
* PrecisionFStrike: When [[spoiler:Morrible creates a storm indoors]] to try and kill Elphaba, all Glinda can do is monologue "Oh. My. Fucking. ''OZ!" before telling Elphaba to run.
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* SlumberParty: On the night Galinda died, she and the rest of her GirlPosse were having a sleepover. Galinda was dared to snatch Dr. Dillamond's coat from his locker. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, Galinda was in the wrong area at the wrong time. She knew that Madame Morrible had murdered the professor, so Morrible killed Galinda to keep her quiet]].
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* SlumberParty: On the night Galinda died, she and the rest of her GirlPosse were having a sleepover. Galinda was dared to snatch Dr. Dillamond's coat from his locker. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, Galinda was in the wrong area at the wrong time. She knew that Madame Morrible had murdered the professor, so Morrible killed Galinda to keep her quiet]].quiet]].
* TogetherInDeath: Glinda tries to subvert this [[spoiler:but Elphaba dies of her injuries. The two end up together and are taken by Dr. Dillamond into the afterlife to be with their families as well]].
* TogetherInDeath: Glinda tries to subvert this [[spoiler:but Elphaba dies of her injuries. The two end up together and are taken by Dr. Dillamond into the afterlife to be with their families as well]].
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''Not Completely, Altogether Here'' is a ''Theatre/{{Wicked}}'' fanfic based around Galinda meeting Elphaba as a ghost. This story is a "booksical" fic that mixes both the book and musical canon, Nessarose is wheelchair-bound while Elphaba still has her water allergy. It can be [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5581490/1/ read here]].
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''Not Completely, Altogether Here'' is a ''Theatre/{{Wicked}}'' fanfic based around Galinda meeting Elphaba as a ghost. This story is a "booksical" fic that mixes both the book [[Literature/{{Wicked}} book]] and musical canon, canon. For example, Nessarose is wheelchair-bound while yet Elphaba still has her water allergy. It can be [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5581490/1/ read here]].
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* GhostAmnesia: Glinda can't how she died, what she was doing a few weeks before she died, or even her last summer vacation.
* ISeeDeadPeople: Elphaba can ''hear'' Galinda, however she can't see her.
* TheNapoleon: Galinda is sensitive about her short height.
* SlashFic: The story starts platonic but it ultimately becomes Galinda/Elphaba fic.
* ISeeDeadPeople: Elphaba can ''hear'' Galinda, however she can't see her.
* TheNapoleon: Galinda is sensitive about her short height.
* SlashFic: The story starts platonic but it ultimately becomes Galinda/Elphaba fic.
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* CuteGhostGirl: Galinda is in this form. She's as pretty as she was in life and still keeps most of her chipper attitude.
* GhostAmnesia: Glinda can't how she died, what she was doing a few weeks before she died, or even her last summervacation.
vacation. She ultimately regains the memory of her death after [[spoiler:touching the locker where she was murdered]].
* HeightAngst: Galinda is sensitive about her short height.
* ISeeDeadPeople: Elphaba can ''hear'' Galinda, however she can't seeher.
* TheNapoleon: Galinda is sensitive abouther short height.
until several chapters in.
* SlashFic: The story starts platonic but it ultimately becomes Galinda/Elphabafic.fic.
* SlumberParty: On the night Galinda died, she and the rest of her GirlPosse were having a sleepover. Galinda was dared to snatch Dr. Dillamond's coat from his locker. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, Galinda was in the wrong area at the wrong time. She knew that Madame Morrible had murdered the professor, so Morrible killed Galinda to keep her quiet]].
* GhostAmnesia: Glinda can't how she died, what she was doing a few weeks before she died, or even her last summer
* HeightAngst: Galinda is sensitive about her short height.
* ISeeDeadPeople: Elphaba can ''hear'' Galinda, however she can't see
* TheNapoleon: Galinda is sensitive about
* SlashFic: The story starts platonic but it ultimately becomes Galinda/Elphaba
* SlumberParty: On the night Galinda died, she and the rest of her GirlPosse were having a sleepover. Galinda was dared to snatch Dr. Dillamond's coat from his locker. [[spoiler:Unfortunately, Galinda was in the wrong area at the wrong time. She knew that Madame Morrible had murdered the professor, so Morrible killed Galinda to keep her quiet]].
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''Not Completely, Altogether Here'' is a ''Theatre/{{Wicked}}'' fanfic based around Galinda meeting Elphaba as a ghost. This story is a "booksical" fic that mixes both the book and musical canon, Nessarose is wheelchair-bound while Elphaba still has her water allergy. It can be read here.
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''Not Completely, Altogether Here'' is a ''Theatre/{{Wicked}}'' fanfic based around Galinda meeting Elphaba as a ghost. This story is a "booksical" fic that mixes both the book and musical canon, Nessarose is wheelchair-bound while Elphaba still has her water allergy. It can be [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5581490/1/ read here.
here]].
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Galinda Upland is used to being one of the most popular girls at her university, but now she finds that no one notices her. This silent treatment has been going on for several weeks. Galinda suspects this to be a prank done by her so-called "friends". Her new roommate, however, lets a completely different idea slip out: She's a ghost. After all, everyone at Shiz knows that Galinda is dead.
''Not Completely, Altogether Here'' is a ''Theatre/{{Wicked}}'' fanfic based around Galinda meeting Elphaba as a ghost. This story is a "booksical" fic that mixes both the book and musical canon, Nessarose is wheelchair-bound while Elphaba still has her water allergy. It can be read here.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: Elphaba joined Shiz a year later than she did in canon. Galinda died during that period.
* GhostAmnesia: Glinda can't how she died, what she was doing a few weeks before she died, or even her last summer vacation.
* ISeeDeadPeople: Elphaba can ''hear'' Galinda, however she can't see her.
* TheNapoleon: Galinda is sensitive about her short height.
* SlashFic: The story starts platonic but it ultimately becomes Galinda/Elphaba fic.
''Not Completely, Altogether Here'' is a ''Theatre/{{Wicked}}'' fanfic based around Galinda meeting Elphaba as a ghost. This story is a "booksical" fic that mixes both the book and musical canon, Nessarose is wheelchair-bound while Elphaba still has her water allergy. It can be read here.
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* AlternateUniverseFic: Elphaba joined Shiz a year later than she did in canon. Galinda died during that period.
* GhostAmnesia: Glinda can't how she died, what she was doing a few weeks before she died, or even her last summer vacation.
* ISeeDeadPeople: Elphaba can ''hear'' Galinda, however she can't see her.
* TheNapoleon: Galinda is sensitive about her short height.
* SlashFic: The story starts platonic but it ultimately becomes Galinda/Elphaba fic.