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* OnceMoreWithClarity: This story explains how things went following the Day of Unity and building up to ''''The Family That Will Grow Forever''.
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* BeachEpisode: Chapters 6 to 8 had the second day of Ghoul Break be spent at Lake Shin, where the Clawthorne sisters, Camila, and Raine take the kids to spend the day. The knocked-down coven face off against Snotty and Braxas to protect King, Lilith and Camila relax and observe how things go, Eda drags Raine away to spend some time together alone, and [[spoiler:Jennifer's misfortune is chronicled as she begins to find Cat attractive enough to make her stance on witchkind waver.]]
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* TheMole: Chapter 9 reveals that [[spoiler:Mason]] is acting as one for the [[spoiler:rouge ex-Coven heads]].
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* InSpiteOfANail: Camila came to see how she failed to support Luz and accepts her for who she truly is. From this, Luz comes to see that her [[GoalInLife greatest wish is to be understood]], and her palisman egg hatches into Stringbean.
* LikeMotherLikeDaughter: Luz is shown to have the same skills and knowledge for taking care of animals as Camila, explaining her passion for Beast-Keeping.
* NamedAfterSomeoneFamous: Vee took her full name, Veessa, from a healer named Vennassa who was renowned for her techniques.
* LikeMotherLikeDaughter: Luz is shown to have the same skills and knowledge for taking care of animals as Camila, explaining her passion for Beast-Keeping.
* NamedAfterSomeoneFamous: Vee took her full name, Veessa, from a healer named Vennassa who was renowned for her techniques.
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* ClothingDamage: While fighting in Chapter 7: Vee has to shift her lower half into her tail, which tears apart her favorite pair of pants.
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* CoverInnocentEyesAndEars: In response to Eda's ComedicUnderwearExposure prank on Jacob, Masha covers Vee's eyes.
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* SequelHook: With the last two chapters and the epilogue, [[spoiler:the loyalist ex-coven heads are now free ane getting ready to attack the Owl Familia during thw upcoming Ghoul Break. Meanwhile, Boscha's finally outgrown her inconsiderate nature and her anger, ready to become a better person.]]
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* SequelHook: With the last two chapters and the epilogue, [[spoiler:the loyalist ex-coven heads are now free ane getting ready to attack the Owl Familia during thw the upcoming Ghoul Break. Meanwhile, Boscha's finally outgrown her inconsiderate nature and her anger, ready to become a better person.]]
*SplitPersonalitySplitPersonality: Abigail claims she has one she can no longer get rid of without Adegast. [[spoiler:Subverted as she turns out to be two people disguised with an illusion.]]
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** When Bria is flying, she's met by [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} a trio known as the Witch Rockets who, when launched into the sky, scream "they're blasting off again"]].
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* AssholeVictim: Belos ends up disoriented due to falling on expired potions Steve threw down a chute under his throne, and when he caused damage to a park ride, Eda tells the disgruntled operator to charge the Emperor's Coven for it since Belos caused the damage.
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* PottyFailure: Whrn she was four, Heather had a habit of wetting herself. While knocked-down, she and her father quickly discover this habit has returned.
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* ''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14249363/1/Ghoul-Break-The-Familia-s-Final-Outing GhoulBreak: The Familia's Final Outing]]'' has the entire Familia enjoy the one-year anniversary of their typical activity, now with Luz getting to spend time with her entire family and more. But with menacing forces plotting to ruin their fun, they seal their fates by messing with the Familia to begin with. (''Ongoing'')
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* ''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14249363/1/Ghoul-Break-The-Familia-s-Final-Outing GhoulBreak: Ghoul Break: The Familia's Final Outing]]'' has the entire Familia enjoy the one-year anniversary of their typical activity, now with Luz getting to spend time with her entire family and more. But with menacing forces plotting to ruin their fun, they seal their fates by messing with the Familia to begin with. (''Ongoing'')
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: [[spoiler:Odalia]]'s revenge hinged on the Clawthornes consuming drinks spiked with rejuvenation potions, Luz being aged down into non-existence and the Clawthorne sisters becoming young enough to allow her to overwhelm them. The plan tanks because she not only spiked Eda's apple blood and Lilith's tea (drinks Luz wouldn't have), but she didn't understand how the rejuvenation potion even works unlike Eda and Lilith, who are master potionists.
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** [[spoiler:Odalia]]'s revenge hinged on the Clawthornes consuming drinks spiked with rejuvenation potions, Luz being aged down into non-existence and the Clawthorne sisters becoming young enough to allow her to overwhelm them. The plan tanks because she not only spiked Eda's apple blood and Lilith's tea (drinks Luz wouldn't have), but she didn't understand how the rejuvenation potion even works unlike Eda and Lilith, who are masterpotionists.potionists.
** To hinder the Owl Familia, Tibbles [[SlippingAMickey drugs]] the food Luz, Amity, and Vee order during an outing with a potion that makes them see things. However, he completely fails to take into account Vee's ability to eat magic so she' unaffected by it, and defeats him and Bria easily.
** [[spoiler:Odalia]]'s revenge hinged on the Clawthornes consuming drinks spiked with rejuvenation potions, Luz being aged down into non-existence and the Clawthorne sisters becoming young enough to allow her to overwhelm them. The plan tanks because she not only spiked Eda's apple blood and Lilith's tea (drinks Luz wouldn't have), but she didn't understand how the rejuvenation potion even works unlike Eda and Lilith, who are master
** To hinder the Owl Familia, Tibbles [[SlippingAMickey drugs]] the food Luz, Amity, and Vee order during an outing with a potion that makes them see things. However, he completely fails to take into account Vee's ability to eat magic so she' unaffected by it, and defeats him and Bria easily.
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* FaceplantingIntoFood: The first morning after being knocked down, Luz does this with her breakfast. It becomes a running gag for the rest of the story and extends to the rest of the series.
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* {{Portmanteau}}: After the Owl Beast recognizes Luz and King as Eda's kids and accepts them as her own younglings, Luz offhandedly calls her "Owda", a combo of "Owl" and "Eda". She then takes this as her new name.
* AttentionWhore: Flora D'splora is stated to be one as she steals the credit for her colleagues' discoveries. She shows no hesitation at trying to put her name on the project Lilith has going in researching [[spoiler:how to separate hers and Eda's cursed beasts from each other.]]
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Zoe Blabberstone, daughter of Chloe and Shin from the first and third stories, tries getting revenge on the "knocked-down" coven by spanking Amity and threatening worse on Luz: Amity's retaliation results in her getting hurt, leading to Luz [[spoiler:and Boscha]] attacking the gorgon in retribution.
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** Zoe Blabberstone, daughter of Chloe and Shin from the first and third stories, tries getting revenge on the "knocked-down" coven by spanking Amity and threatening worse on Luz: Amity's retaliation results in her getting hurt, leading to Luz [[spoiler:and Boscha]] attacking the gorgon inretribution.retribution.
** Flora D'Splora finds herself being attacked by Eda, Roca, and [[spoiler:both Owda and Rath for spying on the Familia during the two days they spent researching how to separate the Clawthorne sisters from their respective beasts.]]
** Zoe Blabberstone, daughter of Chloe and Shin from the first and third stories, tries getting revenge on the "knocked-down" coven by spanking Amity and threatening worse on Luz: Amity's retaliation results in her getting hurt, leading to Luz [[spoiler:and Boscha]] attacking the gorgon in
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* RedMage: As shown in Chapter 15, multi-tracking has grown at Hexside even though there's still some students against it. [[spoiler:Vee, Hunter and Amelia are now studying Beast Keeping with the former two also being in Healing and Potions, respectively and Gus is now taking both Illusion and Bard classes.]]
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** In Chapter 11, Skara takes an interest in studying both bard and healing magic hoping to use the latter to make the former stronger.
** As shown in Chapter 15, multi-tracking has grown at Hexside even though there's still some students against it. [[spoiler:Vee, Hunter and Amelia are now studying Beast Keeping with the former two also being in Healing and Potions, respectively and Gus is now taking both Illusion and Bard classes.]]
** In Chapter 11, Skara takes an interest in studying both bard and healing magic hoping to use the latter to make the former stronger.
** As shown in Chapter 15, multi-tracking has grown at Hexside even though there's still some students against it. [[spoiler:Vee, Hunter and Amelia are now studying Beast Keeping with the former two also being in Healing and Potions, respectively and Gus is now taking both Illusion and Bard classes.]]
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* IfYouEverDoAnythingToHurtHer: When Heather asks Masha if she join in on being knocked-down for Ghoul Break, Masha warns her that they know about what she did to Luz so if she tries anything, they will not pull their punches.
* OnceMoreWithClarity: [[spoiler:According to Chapter 5, Heather was panicking after discovering her orientation, and that was why she rejected Luz so harshly; she didn't sleep the couple following nights. Her growing feelings for Boscha are also described.]]
* OnceMoreWithClarity: [[spoiler:According to Chapter 5, Heather was panicking after discovering her orientation, and that was why she rejected Luz so harshly; she didn't sleep the couple following nights. Her growing feelings for Boscha are also described.]]
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: The blonde cheerleader girl becomes known as Heather Manson.
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** NoodleIncident: Luz asked Heather out once: Heather, who was going through some stuff, blew up at her and laughed in her face.
** NoodleIncident: Luz asked Heather out once: Heather, who was going through some stuff, blew up at her and laughed in her face.
* ComingOutStory: [[spoiler:Heather]] realized she was bisexual at some point, [[spoiler:and the reason she rejected Luz is because of how their peers saw those who were LGBTQ+. She develops a crush on Boscha some time prior to the events of ''The Sisters' Family Vacation'', and recognizing her turmoil, gets 'knocked-down' in an effort to help her.]]
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** The fifth chapter details how [[spoiler:Heather became a member of the "knocked-down" coven and why she blew up at Luz in the past.]]
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** The fifth chapter details how [[spoiler:Heather became a member of the "knocked-down" coven and why she blew up at Luz in the past.]]
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* AlternateSelf: The Drake Blacklight from the second story is the prime version, but another one exists in the Human Realm: he's Masha's father.
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* CallingTheOldWomanOutCallingTheOldWomanOut: [[spoiler:Once Odalia's captured, Amity proceeds to dump on her for all that she put Amity through her entire life, to which she needs to stop and collect herself numerous times with her family comforting her.]]
* TheCameo: Chapter 23 ends with [[spoiler:Anne Boonchuy being visited by Mr. X preparing to tell her about what he'd seen and heard in Gravesfield.]]
* TheCameo: Chapter 23 ends with [[spoiler:Anne Boonchuy being visited by Mr. X preparing to tell her about what he'd seen and heard in Gravesfield.]]
* ComedicUnderwearExposure: During a run in with Jacob, Eda animates his clothes, leaving him in his boxers.
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** The Famila doesn't take most of their enemies seriously anymore because they aren't intimidated by their repeating attempts at revenge.
** [[spoiler:After Amity captures Odalia and chews her out for her harsh treatment, she's able to move on and completely cut her ex-mother out of her life for good.]]
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** When they were hanging out with Eda as kids, Raine lost their pants while they were in front of Hexside.
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* ShoutOut: Raine's "knocked-down" outfit has the same color scheme as [[WesternAnimation/RockosModernLife Rocko's]], and they even use his shirt.
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** The sixth to ninth chapters revolve around Camila trying to decipher Luz's depression regarding [[spoiler:her guilt toward Belos and her unhatched palisman egg, which builds up to Stringbean's hatching.]]
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** Chapters 11 through 14 focus on Vee's first week adjusting to being "knocked-down".
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** Chapter 23 reveals that [[spoiler:Odalia was responsible for Sabria's injuries by ranting in a bar with Belos supporters]] and that Abigail is really [[spoiler:Adrian Graye and Mason, and that they, Vitimir, and Terra Snapdragon have escaped prison.]]
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** Chapter 23 reveals that [[spoiler:Odalia was responsible for Sabria's injuries by ranting in a bar with Belos supporters]] and that Abigail is really [[spoiler:Adrian Graye and Mason, and that they, Vitimir, and Terra Snapdragon have escaped prison.]] It's also mentioned that [[spoiler:the Goldagger family is made up of teachers and that Terra is a former student of one of Odalia's parents.]]
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* ''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14201194/1/The-Sisters-Family-Vacation The Sisters' Family Vacation]]'' has an old enemy resurface and in a revenge plan gone wrong, Eda, Lilith, and Camila are aged down to eight-year-olds. Now Luz, Amity, and Vee must keep their charges out of danger until the effects wear off. (''Ongoing'')
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* ''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14249363/1/Ghoul-Break-The-Familia-s-Final-Outing GhoulBreak: The Familia's Final Outing]]'' has the entire Familia enjoy the one-year anniversary of their typical activity, now with Luz getting to spend time with her entire family and more. But with menacing forces plotting to ruin their fun, they seal their fates by messing with the Familia to begin with. (''Ongoing'')
* ''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14249363/1/Ghoul-Break-The-Familia-s-Final-Outing GhoulBreak: The Familia's Final Outing]]'' has the entire Familia enjoy the one-year anniversary of their typical activity, now with Luz getting to spend time with her entire family and more. But with menacing forces plotting to ruin their fun, they seal their fates by messing with the Familia to begin with. (''Ongoing'')
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* CallingTheOldWomanOut
* CharacterDevelopment: Boscha slowly undergoes this when everybody repeatedly attempts to teach her compassion towards others and let go of her anger. It finally sinks in when [[spoiler:she sees what lacking said trait and refusing to change have done to Odalia.]]
* CharacterDevelopment: Boscha slowly undergoes this when everybody repeatedly attempts to teach her compassion towards others and let go of her anger. It finally sinks in when [[spoiler:she sees what lacking said trait and refusing to change have done to Odalia.]]
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** [[spoiler:For all their actions against the Owl Familia, the Blabberstones are left trapped in Amphibia at the mercy of Frobo.]]
** [[spoiler:Knowing that Odalia could escape prison again, Darius agrees to leave her in Mr. X's custody on Earth with witches watching her as she does community service.]]
** The epilogue confirms that Amity did get to spank young Eda for all the pranks she pulled throughout the story. It's a shame the final prank she pulled on her family right before turning back to normal slightly undermines that.
** [[spoiler:For all their actions against the Owl Familia, the Blabberstones are left trapped in Amphibia at the mercy of Frobo.]]
** [[spoiler:Knowing that Odalia could escape prison again, Darius agrees to leave her in Mr. X's custody on Earth with witches watching her as she does community service.]]
** The epilogue confirms that Amity did get to spank young Eda for all the pranks she pulled throughout the story. It's a shame the final prank she pulled on her family right before turning back to normal slightly undermines that.
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* SequelHook: With the last two chapters and the epilogue, [[spoiler:the loyalist ex-coven heads are now free ane getting ready to attack the Owl Familia during thw upcoming Ghoul Break. Meanwhile, Boscha's finally outgrown her inconsiderate nature and her anger, ready to become a better person.]]
* SequelHook: With the last two chapters and the epilogue, [[spoiler:the loyalist ex-coven heads are now free ane getting ready to attack the Owl Familia during thw upcoming Ghoul Break. Meanwhile, Boscha's finally outgrown her inconsiderate nature and her anger, ready to become a better person.]]
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* SequelHook: The story ends with [[spoiler:Lilith allowing Amity to multi-track in Bard and Potions magic while Eda falls asleep with Luz and King, planning on performing a heist for more rejuvenation potions.]]
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* SphereOfPower
* ChekhovsGun
* {{Crossover}}: Chapter 17 marks a three-way mix with ''Amphibia'' and ''[[spoiler:Gravity Falls]]''.
* DeathGlare: Vee and the Blacklights give Jacob one after he [[spoiler:uses a capture sphere in a misguided attempt to eliminate Vee's family and sends them to another realm.]]
* DisappointedByTheMotive: Drake calls the Blabberstones pathetic after he hears their motives for seeking vengeance on Luz.
* EvilIsPetty: The only reason the Blabberstones want revenge against Luz is because they [[spoiler:refuse to adapt to the changes in the Isles after Belos' downfall]].
* EvilIsPetty: The only reason the Blabberstones want revenge against Luz is because they [[spoiler:refuse to adapt to the changes in the Isles after Belos' downfall]].
* FullNameUltimatum: Jacob's mother Danna calls him "Jacob Donald Hopkins" after the stunt he pulls with the [[spoiler:capture sphere]].
** Chapters 16 and 17 reveal that the reason Luz and Amity ended up in Amphibia was because [[spoiler:Jacob used a capture sphere to try and banish the Owl Familia back to the Demon Realm. Since he had a Blacklight Rose (a flower that absorbs magic) in his pocket, the flower's magic flowed into the portal door and created a second portal, which sent the girls, their mothers, and the Blabberstones to Amphibia.]]
* YouAreGrounded: Jacob's parents punish him with this following the [[spoiler:capture sphere]] incident. What's sad is that he's a {{manchild}} who lampshades that he's too old for this.
-->'''James:''' You still live with us, and you've been behaving like a child ever since [[spoiler:we made contact with the demon realm]]. So tell us why we shouldn't treat you like one.
-->'''James:''' You still live with us, and you've been behaving like a child ever since [[spoiler:we made contact with the demon realm]]. So tell us why we shouldn't treat you like one.
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** The fifth sixth to eighth ninth chapters revolve around Camila trying to decipher Luz's depression regarding [[spoiler:her guilt toward Belos and her unhatched palisman egg, which builds up to Stringbean's hatching.]]
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* NoodleIncident: The reason people shout "JANE PORTER, STOP THIS CRAZY THING!" stems from something that occurred during Perry and Jane's third date.
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* NoodleIncident: NoodleIncident:
** One time when Eda was in the Human Realm with the kids, she got arrested by the Gravesfield sheriff's department for getting into a fistfight with [[spoiler:Stan Pines]].
** The reason people shout "JANE PORTER, STOP THIS CRAZY THING!" stems from something that occurred during Perry and Jane's third date.
** One time when Eda was in the Human Realm with the kids, she got arrested by the Gravesfield sheriff's department for getting into a fistfight with [[spoiler:Stan Pines]].
** The reason people shout "JANE PORTER, STOP THIS CRAZY THING!" stems from something that occurred during Perry and Jane's third date.
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* BigBadEnsemble: While [[spoiler:Odalia]] acts solo in trying to get her revenge on the Owl Familia, the Blabberstones, Tibbles, Bria, and [[spoiler:Bill & Tarak]] team up to do the same.
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* BigBadEnsemble: While [[spoiler:Odalia]] acts solo in trying to get her revenge on the Owl Familia, the Blabberstones, Tibbles, Bria, and [[spoiler:Bill & Tarak]] team up to do the same. In the Human Realm, Jacob Hopkins is a recurring antagonist towards the Familia.
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* HowWeGotHere: The story begins by showing Luz waking up to find that she and Amity somehow got stuck in ''Amphibia'' of all places, then flashes back to four days ago when somebody ([[spoiler:Odalia]]) sabotaged the Clawthornes' drinks with the rejuvenation potions in an attempt to "knock-down" Luz out of existence, only to turn Eda, Lilith, and Camila into eight-year-olds.
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* HowWeGotHere: The story begins by showing Luz waking up to find that she and Amity somehow got stuck in ''Amphibia'' of all places, then flashes back to four days ago when somebody ([[spoiler:Odalia]]) sabotaged the Clawthornes' drinks with the rejuvenation potions in an attempt to "knock-down" Luz out of existence, only to turn Eda, Lilith, and Camila into eight-year-olds. Things progress towards that moment in time, which is revealed to be a result of [[spoiler:Jacob]] misusing magical items he didn't understand near the portal door, which sent the girls, their mothers, and the [[spoiler:Blabberstones]] to Amphibia.
* StoryArc:
** The first four chapters show the aftermath of the Day of Unity from Raine and Darius' perspective.
** The fifth to eighth chapters revolve around Camila trying to decipher Luz's depression regarding [[spoiler:her unhatched palisman egg, which builds up to Stringbean's hatching.]]
** The first four chapters show the aftermath of the Day of Unity from Raine and Darius' perspective.
** The fifth to eighth chapters revolve around Camila trying to decipher Luz's depression regarding [[spoiler:her unhatched palisman egg, which builds up to Stringbean's hatching.]]
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* ShipTease: Molly develops an immediate attraction to Skara during the second chapter and by the third one, they're already a couple.
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* ShipTease: Molly develops an immediate attraction to Skara during the second chapter and by the third one, [[OffscreenRomance they're already a couple.couple]].
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* ''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14157001/1/The-Daily-Lives-of-the-Owl-Familia The Daily Lives of the Owl Familia]]'' shows off a few important events in the timeline, answering many questions that lead to the Owl Familia becoming who they are by this point.[[note]]Though the fourth story of the series to be released, it's actually a spinoff.[[/note]] (''Ongoing'')
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* ''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14178130/1/The-knocked-down-Holidays-Spectacular The knocked-down Holiday Spectacular]]'' features the author himself being dragged into his own stories by the wacky-minded Steve and interacting with the Owl Famila, being "knocked-down" and somehow [[GenderBender turning into a girl]] in the process.
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!Additional Stories
* ''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14157001/1/The-Daily-Lives-of-the-Owl-Familia The Daily Lives of the Owl Familia]]'' shows off a few important events in the timeline, answering many questions that lead to the Owl Familia becoming who they are by this point.[[note]]Though the fourth story of the series to be released, it's actually a spinoff.[[/note]] (''Complete'')
* ''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14225626/1/The-Daily-Lives-of-The-Owl-Familia-P2 The Daily Lives of the Owl Familia: P2]]'' follows the Familia's exploits after the Day of Unity showing how their recovering since those events. (''Ongoing'')
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* AuthorAvatar: The author has two witch identities he assumes in-universr, both female: Michelle/Aunt Milly, a young adult, and Molly, a teenage girl who multi-tracks in the Illusion and Oracle tracks.
* ChristmasEpisode
* ChristmasEpisode
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* AuthorAvatar: The author has two witch identities he assumes in-universr, in-universe, both female: Michelle/Aunt Milly, a young adult, adult and Steve's cousin, and Molly, a teenage girl who multi-tracks in the Illusion and Oracle tracks.
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* GoofyPrintUnderwearGoofyPrintUnderwear: Milly is always said to wear unicorn-print panties whenever she suffers a WardrobeMalfunction.
* ShipTease: Molly develops an immediate attraction to Skara during the second chapter and by the third one, they're already a couple.
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* AuthorAvatar: The author has two witch identities he assumes in-universr, both female: Michelle/Aunt Milly, a young adult, and Molly, a teenage girl who multi-tracks in the Illusion and Oracle tracks.
* ChristmasEpisode
* ComedicUnderwearExposure: It's a small RunningGag that Milly tends to have the center of her skirt's rear ripped, exposing her unicorn-themed unmentionables.
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** The Owl Familia have several plans set up for potential Luz-related disasters, the total known number currently being nine.
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** The Owl Familia have several plans set up for potential Luz-related disasters, the total known number currently being nine.forty-seven.
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* TheReveal: Chapter 3 reveals that Abigail, the demon who tries to recruit [[spoiler:Odalia]] into her LegionOfDoom, is Adegast's big sister. Since Luz and Eda were responsible for his death, she can't get rid of her second identity without his help.
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* TheReveal: TheReveal:
** Chapter 3 reveals that Abigail, the demon who tries to recruit [[spoiler:Odalia]] into her LegionOfDoom, is Adegast's big sister. Since Luz and Eda were responsible for his death, she can't get rid of her second identity without hishelp.help.
** Masha's family, the Blacklights (known as the House Black), migrated to Gravesfield [[spoiler:and have witch ancestry, explaining Masha and Drake's magical sensory.]]
** Chapter 3 reveals that Abigail, the demon who tries to recruit [[spoiler:Odalia]] into her LegionOfDoom, is Adegast's big sister. Since Luz and Eda were responsible for his death, she can't get rid of her second identity without his
** Masha's family, the Blacklights (known as the House Black), migrated to Gravesfield [[spoiler:and have witch ancestry, explaining Masha and Drake's magical sensory.]]
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** 3 weeks after finding the light glyph, Luz accidentally blinded herself with an light orb in the kitchen and knocked over a jar that left her covered head to toe in expired sauce. Eda [[SecretKeeper had promised to never tell anyone]] because of how embarrassed Luz was about it.
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** 3 weeks after finding the light glyph, Luz accidentally blinded blinds herself with an light orb in the kitchen and knocked knocks over a jar that left leaves her covered head to toe in expired sauce. Eda [[SecretKeeper had promised promises to never tell anyone]] because of how embarrassed Luz was is about it.
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* OnceMoreWithClarity: The fourth story reveals several events that weren't seen in the first three stories and fills in many PlotHoles for ''The Family That Will Grow Forever'';
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* OnceMoreWithClarity: The fourth story reveals several events that weren't seen in the first three stories and fills in many PlotHoles for plot holes present in ''The Family That Will Grow Forever'';
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* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: At some point prior to the story, Luz created two new spells, an advanced ice glyph which creates a snow-jelly mold and a plant spell that turns into abomination matter. [[spoiler:She also hides several belts with glyph boxes around the Owl House using the invisibility glyph.]]
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* ForWantOfANail: Amity and Lilith are given an AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul that makes them much closer in the past, [[spoiler:to the point that Lilith ''is'' the teacher Amity called "Mom" once.]]
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* ForWantOfANail: ForWantOfANail:
** Amity and Lilith are given an AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul that makes them much closer in the past, [[spoiler:to the point that Lilith ''is'' the teacher Amity called "Mom" once.]]
** [[spoiler:Near the end of the story, Lilith gains a harpy form. The epilogue of the series finale "Watching and Dreaming" shows she accomplished this during the TimeSkip, but here it occurs four years early.]]
** Amity and Lilith are given an AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul that makes them much closer in the past, [[spoiler:to the point that Lilith ''is'' the teacher Amity called "Mom" once.]]
** [[spoiler:Near the end of the story, Lilith gains a harpy form. The epilogue of the series finale "Watching and Dreaming" shows she accomplished this during the TimeSkip, but here it occurs four years early.]]
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: In Chapter 2, Tiny Nose tells Raine that [[CreatorCameo she's her]] [[Creator/DanaTerrace creator]] and doesn't care if they're bonked by Steve.
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: In Chapter 2, Tiny Nose tells Raine that [[CreatorCameo [[AuthorAvatar she's her]] [[Creator/DanaTerrace creator]] and doesn't care if they're bonked by Steve.
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* MarilynManeuver: When Bria's sabotaging of the bumper carcasses backfires, she ends up hanging upside down from a spike holding her skirt in place.
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* ShoutOut: When Bria is flying, she's met by [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} a trio known as the Witch Rockets who, when launched into the sky, scream "they're blasting off again"]].
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** When Bria is flying, she's met by [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} a trio known as the Witch Rockets who, when launched into the sky, scream "they're blasting offagain"]].again"]].
** At one point Steve says "Ayyy!", the catchphrase of [[Series/HappyDays The Fonz]].
** Shortly after the above moment, a witch version of [[WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb the farmer and his wife]] are seen with the wife lecturing her husband for renting a dunk tank with no one to dunk. When she says "What, did you think someone would fall from the sky?", Boscha falls into the tank and the farmer says he's owed an apology.
** When Bria is flying, she's met by [[Anime/{{Pokemon}} a trio known as the Witch Rockets who, when launched into the sky, scream "they're blasting off
** At one point Steve says "Ayyy!", the catchphrase of [[Series/HappyDays The Fonz]].
** Shortly after the above moment, a witch version of [[WesternAnimation/PhineasAndFerb the farmer and his wife]] are seen with the wife lecturing her husband for renting a dunk tank with no one to dunk. When she says "What, did you think someone would fall from the sky?", Boscha falls into the tank and the farmer says he's owed an apology.
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* IdeaBulb: Parodied and lampshaded in the prologue, where Hooty holds a lit candle over Eda's head when she thinks up her plan to help Luz relax.
-->'''Eda:''' Hooty, what did I tell you about holding a candle over my head?\\
'''Hooty:''' Only do it when you have one of your brilliant ideas, hoot, hoot.\\
'''Eda:''' [[BerateAndSwitch Darn straight!]]
-->'''Eda:''' Hooty, what did I tell you about holding a candle over my head?\\
'''Hooty:''' Only do it when you have one of your brilliant ideas, hoot, hoot.\\
'''Eda:''' [[BerateAndSwitch Darn straight!]]
* AndAllIGotWasThisLousyTShirt: Somebody places an "I got blown across the Isles and all I got was this t-shirt" t-shirt on the disoriented Belos at some point.
* DemotedToExtra: King sits out of the action this time, not appearing until the end when Eda finds he spend the entire day napping in her nest.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: Boscha sends a Titan skull back to where it came from and it crushes [[spoiler:Bill the Titan Trapper]], who had been launching them for a month.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: KickTheSonOfABitch: Belos ends up disoriented due to falling on expired potions Steve threw down a chute under his throne, and when he caused damage to a park ride, Eda tells the disgruntled operator to charge the Emperor's Coven for it since Belos caused the damage.
* LaserGuidedKarma:
** Bria constantly receives comeuppance for causing trouble for the Owl Familia, her day ending with her being severely injured.
** Boscha sends a Titan skull back to where it came from and it crushes [[spoiler:Bill the Titan Trapper]], who had been launching them for amonth.month.
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: In Chapter 2, Tiny Nose tells Raine that [[CreatorCameo she's her]] [[Creator/DanaTerrace creator]] and doesn't care if they're bonked by Steve.
* LaserGuidedKarma:
** Bria constantly receives comeuppance for causing trouble for the Owl Familia, her day ending with her being severely injured.
** Boscha sends a Titan skull back to where it came from and it crushes [[spoiler:Bill the Titan Trapper]], who had been launching them for a
* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: In Chapter 2, Tiny Nose tells Raine that [[CreatorCameo she's her]] [[Creator/DanaTerrace creator]] and doesn't care if they're bonked by Steve.
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* ScreamsLikeALittleGirl: Belos performs such a scream when he learns that Luz has been knocked down again.
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* BadassAdorable: As an eight-year-old, Eda acts like the prank-happy hellraiser she used to be during her first childhood and is rather cute and ferocious in her "harpy chick" form.
* BigEater: Steve and Hettie Cutburn are the only two people who've beaten the eating challenge at Diablo Delights sandwich shop, where one must eat a sandwich with every topping in under a half-hour..
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: [[spoiler:Odalia]]'s revenge hinged on the Clawthornes consuming drinks spiked with rejuvenation potions, Luz being aged down into non-existence and the Clawthorne sisters becoming young enough to allow her to overwhelm them. The plan tanks because she not only spiked Eda's apple blood and Lilith's tea (drinks Luz wouldn't have), but she didn't understand how the rejuvenation potion even works unlike Eda and Lilith, who are master potionists.
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* CutenessProximity: Luz is captivated by "knocked-down" Eda in her harpy form and Amity agrees with how cute she looks.
* ADayInTheLimelight:
** "Chapter 4: A Cat's Eye View" has ''Severine'' put under the spotlight as she aids [[spoiler:Bill and Tarak]] in messing with the Owl Familia.
** As per the second story, Hunter has his own arc investigating the cause of the attempt on Luz by working with Boscha to find the culprit.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: [[spoiler:Odalia]]'s revenge hinged on the Clawthornes consuming drinks spiked with rejuvenation potions, Luz being aged down into non-existence and the Clawthorne sisters becoming young enough to allow her to overwhelm them. The plan tanks because she not only spiked Eda's apple blood and Lilith's tea (drinks Luz wouldn't have), but she didn't understand how the rejuvenation potion even works unlike Eda and Lilith, who are masterpotionists. potionists.
* ExorcistHead: [[spoiler:Belos]] turns his head a full 360 degrees in Chapter 2.
* {{Familiar}}: "Chapter 6: Who Was That Again?" shows that Vee obtained her own palisman, a robin named Nyx.
* FunWithAcronyms: "LOL", which apparently stands for "League of Isle-Saviors" (and jokingly called "Legion of Luz-haters" by [[spoiler:Odalia]]) is the name of the group of enemies against the Owl Familia.
* ADayInTheLimelight:
** "Chapter 4: A Cat's Eye View" has ''Severine'' put under the spotlight as she aids [[spoiler:Bill and Tarak]] in messing with the Owl Familia.
** As per the second story, Hunter has his own arc investigating the cause of the attempt on Luz by working with Boscha to find the culprit.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: [[spoiler:Odalia]]'s revenge hinged on the Clawthornes consuming drinks spiked with rejuvenation potions, Luz being aged down into non-existence and the Clawthorne sisters becoming young enough to allow her to overwhelm them. The plan tanks because she not only spiked Eda's apple blood and Lilith's tea (drinks Luz wouldn't have), but she didn't understand how the rejuvenation potion even works unlike Eda and Lilith, who are master
* ExorcistHead: [[spoiler:Belos]] turns his head a full 360 degrees in Chapter 2.
* {{Familiar}}: "Chapter 6: Who Was That Again?" shows that Vee obtained her own palisman, a robin named Nyx.
* FunWithAcronyms: "LOL", which apparently stands for "League of Isle-Saviors" (and jokingly called "Legion of Luz-haters" by [[spoiler:Odalia]]) is the name of the group of enemies against the Owl Familia.
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* SharedFamilyQuirks: Vee may not be Luz's biological sister, but she has one moment where she does something Luz would do. [[spoiler:After having her first kiss with Masha, Vee says "Oh, blimey" before passing out, like how Luz always says "Oh, cwikey" whenever Amity surprises her with a kiss.]]
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** The "Beast-Bonding" arc, the last one in Part 1, focuses on how [[Lilith and Jane figure out how to cure Eda and Lilith of their curses by freeing Owda and the Raven Beast from the sisters.]]
