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* BrokenPedestal: After finding out that Adrien and Chat are the same person, and that he was in large responsible for akumatizing Ladybug, Chloe rips Adrien a new one, and vows to be more like the hero Ladybug hopes her to be.

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* BrokenPedestal: After finding out that Adrien and Chat are the same person, and that he was in large responsible for akumatizing Ladybug, Chloe Chloé rips Adrien a new one, and vows to be more like the hero Ladybug hopes her to be.



** Not as bad for Chloe, but when she realizes that her holding her tongue or trying to stay out of everyone's business to risk not causing any more akumas doesn't work, she feels pretty guilty about the situation at hand.

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** Not as bad for Chloe, Chloé, but when she realizes that her holding her tongue or trying to stay out of everyone's business to risk not causing any more akumas doesn't work, she feels pretty guilty about the situation at hand.



---> '''Kagami:''' "Congratulations, Adrien Agreste. You've managed to make one of the kindest, most hard working girls in our entire school into the most vengeful akuma Hawkmoth has ever created. I thought Chloe Bourgeois was reckless with her bullying, but at least she attempted to change her ways. You on the other hand..."

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---> '''Kagami:''' "Congratulations, Adrien Agreste. You've managed to make one of the kindest, most hard working girls in our entire school into the most vengeful akuma Hawkmoth has ever created. I thought Chloe Chloé Bourgeois was reckless with her bullying, but at least she attempted to change her ways. You on the other hand..."



---> '''Luka:''' "Shut the hell up. Don't tell me what to do. You didn't take it easy on Marinette when you decided to ruthlessly pursue her into being your girlfriend. You remember that day at the ice rink? I told Marinette to go after you, not because I wanted her to, but because I thought it would make her happy. I cared about her a lot, but I knew for a fact that she wasn't mine to control. Knowing that you went out of your way to hurt her for your own selfish purposes... Damn, you really know how to sicken a guy."

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---> '''Luka:''' "Shut the hell up. Don't tell me what to do. You didn't take it easy on Marinette when you decided to ruthlessly pursue her into being your girlfriend. You remember that day at the ice rink? I told Marinette to go after you, not because I wanted her to, but because I thought it would make her happy. I cared about her a lot, but I knew for a fact that she wasn't mine to control. Knowing that you went out of your way to hurt her for your own selfish purposes... Damn, you really know how to sicken a guy.""
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Up To Eleven is a defunct trope


* {{Flanderization}}: Adrien's flaws get taken UpToEleven.

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* {{Flanderization}}: Adrien's flaws get taken UpToEleven.up to eleven.
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* {{Flanderization}}: Adrien’s flaws get taken UpToEleven.

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* {{Flanderization}}: Adrien’s Adrien's flaws get taken UpToEleven.



---> '''Marinette:''' "And I know you’ve flirted with multiple girls, like Rena Rouge and me before you found out who I was. Which, if that’s who you want to be, whatever. But I don’t want a boyfriend that leads other people on, even as a joke.”

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---> '''Marinette:''' "And I know you’ve you've flirted with multiple girls, like Rena Rouge and me before you found out who I was. Which, if that’s that's who you want to be, whatever. But I don’t don't want a boyfriend that leads other people on, even as a joke."



---> '''Nino:''' "Neither one of us have ever done the sort of shit you’ve done. We’ve always respected each other’s boundaries. Dude, if this is what you’re willing to do just courting her, what are you going to do once you start dating her?”

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---> '''Nino:''' "Neither one of us have ever done the sort of shit you’ve you've done. We’ve We've always respected each other’s other's boundaries. Dude, if this is what you’re you're willing to do just courting her, what are you going to do once you start dating her?”her?"



---> '''Marinette/Bewitched:''' “Well, did you get that, Ladyblogger? It turns out the whole time you were reporting about Lila and Ladybug’s legendary friendship, you were getting played for a fool the entire time. Someone who refuses to fact check and blindly believes that they’re right and yet gets fame and attention for it is just asking to be cursed.”

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---> '''Marinette/Bewitched:''' “Well, "Well, did you get that, Ladyblogger? It turns out the whole time you were reporting about Lila and Ladybug’s Ladybug's legendary friendship, you were getting played for a fool the entire time. Someone who refuses to fact check and blindly believes that they’re they're right and yet gets fame and attention for it is just asking to be cursed."



---> '''Kagami:''' "Congratulations, Adrien Agreste. You’ve managed to make one of the kindest, most hard working girls in our entire school into the most vengeful akuma Hawkmoth has ever created. I thought Chloe Bourgeois was reckless with her bullying, but at least she attempted to change her ways. You on the other hand…”
---> '''Felix:''' “You’re on a whole new level of stupid. Did you honestly think that Marinette was going to want your pushy, obsessive behavior in a relationship? You know better than anyone that she hates bullies.”

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---> '''Kagami:''' "Congratulations, Adrien Agreste. You’ve You've managed to make one of the kindest, most hard working girls in our entire school into the most vengeful akuma Hawkmoth has ever created. I thought Chloe Bourgeois was reckless with her bullying, but at least she attempted to change her ways. You on the other hand…”
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---> '''Felix:''' “You’re "You're on a whole new level of stupid. Did you honestly think that Marinette was going to want your pushy, obsessive behavior in a relationship? You know better than anyone that she hates bullies."



---> '''Luka:''' “Shut the hell up. Don’t tell me what to do. You didn’t take it easy on Marinette when you decided to ruthlessly pursue her into being your girlfriend. You remember that day at the ice rink? I told Marinette to go after you, not because I wanted her to, but because I thought it would make her happy. I cared about her a lot, but I knew for a fact that she wasn’t mine to control. Knowing that you went out of your way to hurt her for your own selfish purposes… Damn, you really know how to sicken a guy.”

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---> '''Luka:''' “Shut "Shut the hell up. Don’t Don't tell me what to do. You didn’t didn't take it easy on Marinette when you decided to ruthlessly pursue her into being your girlfriend. You remember that day at the ice rink? I told Marinette to go after you, not because I wanted her to, but because I thought it would make her happy. I cared about her a lot, but I knew for a fact that she wasn’t wasn't mine to control. Knowing that you went out of your way to hurt her for your own selfish purposes… purposes... Damn, you really know how to sicken a guy."
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Adrien wasn't a complete saint in Canon, but the story's main arc revolves around his flaws escalating.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Adrien wasn't a complete saint in Canon, canon, but the story's main arc revolves around his flaws escalating.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Adrien wasn't a complete saint in canon (witness his attitude in "Copycat"), but the story's main arc revolves around his flaws escalating.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Adrien wasn't a complete saint in canon (witness his attitude in "Copycat"), Canon, but the story's main arc revolves around his flaws escalating.

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Don’t hunk the readers are supposed to


* AdaptationalJerkass: Adrien's nice qualities are thrown out the window.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Adrien's nice qualities are thrown out Adrien wasn't a complete saint in canon (witness his attitude in "Copycat"), but the window.story's main arc revolves around his flaws escalating.



* OutOfCharacter: Adrien, obviously, but the other characters also get hit with this.



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* OutOfCharacter: Adrien, obviously, but the other characters also get hit with this.






* MoralDissonance: Despite taking her love interests' free will when Marinette is akumatized the audience is apparently supposed to see it as "romantic" that she turned them into her slaves.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Adrien wasn't a complete saint in canon (witness his attitude in "Copycat"), but the story's main arc revolves around his flaws escalating.
* AdaptationalVillainy: Adrien, despite being one of the nicest characters in the show, gets treated in [[MultipleEndings a few of the endings]] as a bigger threat than Hawkmoth.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Adrien wasn't a complete saint in canon (witness his attitude in "Copycat"), but Adrien's nice qualities are thrown out the story's main arc revolves around his flaws escalating.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Adrien, despite being one of the nicest characters in the show, gets treated in [[MultipleEndings a few of the endings]] as a bigger threat than Hawkmoth.''Hawkmoth''.



* {{Flanderization}}: Adrien’s flaws get exaggerated.

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* {{Flanderization}}: Adrien’s flaws get exaggerated.taken UpToEleven.






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\n\n* OutOfCharacter: Adrien, obviously, but the other characters also get hit with this.




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* MoralDissonance: Despite taking her love interests' free will when Marinette is akumatized the audience is apparently supposed to see it as "romantic" that she turned them into her slaves.
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* FromBadToWorse: In versions where not only does have to Marinette contend with Adrien, but also [[StalkingIsLove Stalker!Lila.]]

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* FromBadToWorse: In versions where not only does have to Marinette have to contend with Adrien, but also [[StalkingIsLove Stalker!Lila.]]
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The basic premise revolving around Adrien finding out about Marinette being Ladybug and professes his love for her. Marinette isn't too sure about following a relationship however, pointing out some of the problems they've had in their relationship. From there, Adrien's worst flaws and behaviors spiral out of control, turning him into a thorough "Nice Guy".

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The basic premise revolving revolves around Adrien finding out about Marinette being Ladybug and professes professing his love for her. Marinette isn't too sure about following a relationship however, pointing out some of the problems they've had in their relationship. From there, Adrien's worst flaws and behaviors spiral out of control, turning him into a thorough "Nice Guy".
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* EntitledToHaveYou: It gets so bad that Marinette decides to give back the ladybug miraculous to Fu, hoping that Adrien's feelings will fade. It doesn't work.

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* EntitledToHaveYou: It gets so bad that Marinette decides to give back the ladybug miraculous Ladybug Miraculous to Fu, hoping that Adrien's feelings will fade. It doesn't work.
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* FromBadToWorse: Not only did Marinette return the Ladybug Miraculous, Fu fails to take the cat miraculous back from Adrien. He can only hope that Adrien doesn't go back after her.

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* FromBadToWorse: Not only did Marinette return the Ladybug Miraculous, Fu fails to take the cat miraculous Cat Miraculous back from Adrien. He can only hope that Adrien doesn't go back after her.
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* FromBadToWorse: Not only did Marinette return the Ladybug miraculous, Fu fails to take the cat miraculous back from Adrien. He can only hope that Adrien doesn't go back after her.

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* FromBadToWorse: Not only did Marinette return the Ladybug miraculous, Miraculous, Fu fails to take the cat miraculous back from Adrien. He can only hope that Adrien doesn't go back after her.



* RageAgainstTheMentor: Chat starts a fight against Fu when he demands the miraculous back.

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* RageAgainstTheMentor: Chat starts a fight against Fu when he demands the miraculous Miraculous back.
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If a character's flaws are exaggerated, that's not necessarily Out of Character. It's just not accurate. Even if you want to argue that, it's better to put in YMMV (which is the same problem you've had with a lot of past entries).


* OutOfCharacter: Many of the characters' personalities are [[UpToEleven exaggerated]] in [[AdaptationalJerkass one way]] or [[AdaptationalHeroism another]].


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* OutOfCharacter: Many of the characters' personalities are [[UpToEleven exaggerated]] in [[AdaptationalJerkass one way]] or [[AdaptationalHeroism another]].



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How are her flaws getting exaggerated, it would be if she was so clumsy now she can’t do anything without it going wrong or if her stalker is tendencies are made worse


* {{Flanderization}}: Adrien’s flaws get exaggerated. And even Marinette gets this treatment.

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* {{Flanderization}}: Adrien’s flaws get exaggerated. And even Marinette gets this treatment.
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To Logan Light: OK, sure, Up To Eleven. How are they brought Up To Eleven? Flanderization may not completely fit (technically that trope's supposed to mean "character's flaws increasingly become more apparent until they are nothing but the flaw), but it still fits best than "Up To Eleven".


* AdaptationalJerkass: Adrien's flaws are brought UpToEleven.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Adrien's Adrien wasn't a complete saint in canon (witness his attitude in "Copycat"), but the story's main arc revolves around his flaws are brought UpToEleven.escalating.



* {{Flanderization}}: Adrien’s flaws get [[UpToEleven exaggerated.]] And even Marinette gets this treatment.

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* {{Flanderization}}: Adrien’s flaws get [[UpToEleven exaggerated.]] exaggerated. And even Marinette gets this treatment.
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* {{Flanderization}}: Adrien’s flaws gets exaggerated.

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* {{Flanderization}}: Adrien’s flaws gets get [[UpToEleven exaggerated.]] And even Marinette gets this treatment.
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* OutOfCharacter: Many of the characters' personalities are [[Flanderization exaggerated]] in one way or another.


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* OutOfCharacter: Many of the characters' personalities are [[Flanderization [[UpToEleven exaggerated]] in [[AdaptationalJerkass one way way]] or another.

[[AdaptationalHeroism another]].

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Adrien wasn't a complete saint in canon, but the story's main arc revolves around his flaws escalating.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Adrien wasn't a complete saint in canon, but the story's main arc revolves around his Adrien's flaws escalating.are brought UpToEleven.





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\n* OutOfCharacter: Many of the characters' personalities are [[Flanderization exaggerated]] in one way or another.

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* BrokenAesop: Supposedly, the fic tries to criticize Chat Noir's behavior regarding Ladybug. But the blatant Flanderization completely nullifies any potential grievances.
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* {{Flanderization}}: It's less accurate to say Adrien's flaws are exaggerated than it is to say that the author believes Adrien is nothing but flaws.

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* {{Flanderization}}: It's less accurate to say Adrien's Adrien’s flaws are exaggerated than it is to say that the author believes Adrien is nothing but flaws.gets exaggerated.



* RevengeFic: Basically, the entire premise of the story is an excuse to bash Adrien.
* RonTheDeathEater: For the versions were the author wants to replace Adrien with [[EntitledToHaveYou Felix.]]


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* RevengeFic: Basically, the entire premise of the story is an excuse to bash Adrien.
* RonTheDeathEater: For the versions were the author wants to replace Adrien with [[EntitledToHaveYou Felix.]]


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