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** Other than being mentioned, Hitomi as yet to appear for some reason.
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** The title of Chapter 20 is [[Literature/TheDivineComedy 'Lasciate Ogne Speranza Voi Ch'Intrate']].
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* DownerBeginning: Mitakihara has been destroyed, everyone but Madoka and Homura is dead and Walpurgisnacht is about to erase everything, with Madoka wishing to keep her memories shortly before Homura rewinds time. And that's the first chapter.
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** During the monologue at the end of Chapter 18, [[spoiler:right after Kyoko turned into a witch]], the author wrote [[VideoGame/UnderTale 'It's dark. Darker. Yet Darker']].
** The title of Chapter 20 is [[Literature/TheDivineComedy 'Lasciate Ogne Speranza Voi Ch'Intrate']].
** When [[spoiler:Kyoko meets Ophelia for the first time]], when the former asks the latter who she is, [[spoiler:Ophelia]] jokingly says [[Franchise/{{Persona}} 'I am thou… Thou art I… From the sea of thy soul, I come…']].
** During the monologue at the end of Chapter 18, [[spoiler:right after Kyoko turned into a witch]], the author wrote [[VideoGame/UnderTale 'It's dark. Darker. Yet Darker']].
** The title of Chapter 20 is [[Literature/TheDivineComedy 'Lasciate Ogne Speranza Voi Ch'Intrate']].
** When [[spoiler:Kyoko meets Ophelia for the first time]], when the former asks the latter who she is, [[spoiler:Ophelia]] jokingly says [[Franchise/{{Persona}} 'I am thou… Thou art I… From the sea of thy soul, I come…']].
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** Instead of trying to kill her friends, Mami starts to laugh madly when she finds out how witches are created.
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** Instead of trying to kill her friends, Mami starts to laugh madly when she finds out how witches are created.
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** Chapter 10's ending has Homura about to be killed by a [[spoiler:an intelligent witch]].
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''Never Alone'' is a ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'' fanfiction.
The premise itself is simple. After Walpurgisnacht destroys Mitakihara, Homura reveals about her time-travelling powers to Madoka before rewinding time once again. Before such could happen, though, Madoka makes a wish to Kyubey.
Her wish is to keep her memories. And after this act, the entire timeline changed. It's it either for the better or the worst, it has yet to be determined.
The fic can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/44068071/chapters/110804094 here]].
!!!This fic contains example of the following tropes:
* AdaptationalBadass:
** Madoka becomes a magical girl literally the same day she and Sayaka are rescued by Mami.
** All of the protagonists get this at one point, some before others. Justified because [[spoiler:fusing with their witches has greatly raised their powers]].
* AdaptedOut:
** The only canon witch, so far, that has appeared is Charlotte. Gertrud is mentioned only once by Homura (and not even by name) while all the others are outright absent.
** Other than being mentioned, Hitomi as yet to appear for some reason.
* AdaptationExpansion: Mami's parents' death and her forming a contract with Kyubey are shown in a flashback. And they are even more tragic than canon.
* BigDamnHeroes:
** Madoka manages to save Mami literally one second before Charlotte could kill her.
** Later, Homura is rescued from a [[spoiler:smart witch]] by [[spoiler:Sayaka]].
* DemotedToExtra: After the first few chapters, Kyubey pretty much disappears and appears only to retrieve the grief seeds from the girls. Lampshaded as Homura is worried that he started to appear less and less.
* ForWantOfANail: Madoka brings this like a storm since she has all of her memories from the previous timeline. Th very first example is that she becomes a magical girl literally the same day Kyubey asks her to make a contract. And this also causes a chain reaction that changes a lot of things.
* MythologyGag: At one point, when Mami and [[spoiler:Sayaka]] are fighting in a barrier, the latter mentions that perhaps if she didn't [[spoiler:fuse with her witch]], she might have been the weakest magical girl of their group.
* RageBreakingPoint: Madoka outright screams at Charlotte to leave Mami alone before engaging her.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Mami is not killed by Charlotte as Madoka manages to rescue her before it's too late.
* TookALevelInKindness: Homura, after Madoka reveals to her that she remembers everything, starts to act far less cold than at the beginning.
The premise itself is simple. After Walpurgisnacht destroys Mitakihara, Homura reveals about her time-travelling powers to Madoka before rewinding time once again. Before such could happen, though, Madoka makes a wish to Kyubey.
Her wish is to keep her memories. And after this act, the entire timeline changed. It's it either for the better or the worst, it has yet to be determined.
The fic can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/44068071/chapters/110804094 here]].
!!!This fic contains example of the following tropes:
* AdaptationalBadass:
** Madoka becomes a magical girl literally the same day she and Sayaka are rescued by Mami.
** All of the protagonists get this at one point, some before others. Justified because [[spoiler:fusing with their witches has greatly raised their powers]].
* AdaptedOut:
** The only canon witch, so far, that has appeared is Charlotte. Gertrud is mentioned only once by Homura (and not even by name) while all the others are outright absent.
** Other than being mentioned, Hitomi as yet to appear for some reason.
* AdaptationExpansion: Mami's parents' death and her forming a contract with Kyubey are shown in a flashback. And they are even more tragic than canon.
* BigDamnHeroes:
** Madoka manages to save Mami literally one second before Charlotte could kill her.
** Later, Homura is rescued from a [[spoiler:smart witch]] by [[spoiler:Sayaka]].
* DemotedToExtra: After the first few chapters, Kyubey pretty much disappears and appears only to retrieve the grief seeds from the girls. Lampshaded as Homura is worried that he started to appear less and less.
* ForWantOfANail: Madoka brings this like a storm since she has all of her memories from the previous timeline. Th very first example is that she becomes a magical girl literally the same day Kyubey asks her to make a contract. And this also causes a chain reaction that changes a lot of things.
* MythologyGag: At one point, when Mami and [[spoiler:Sayaka]] are fighting in a barrier, the latter mentions that perhaps if she didn't [[spoiler:fuse with her witch]], she might have been the weakest magical girl of their group.
* RageBreakingPoint: Madoka outright screams at Charlotte to leave Mami alone before engaging her.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Mami is not killed by Charlotte as Madoka manages to rescue her before it's too late.
* TookALevelInKindness: Homura, after Madoka reveals to her that she remembers everything, starts to act far less cold than at the beginning.
