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->''"I am one who flew on the wings of the Valkyries."''
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* ArcWords: ''"I am one who flew on the wings of the Valkyries."''
** Valkyrie also keeps popping up, for A-01, Project Valkyries, the nickname of the [=VTF=]s, and as the VF-12 Valkyrja.
** Valkyrie also keeps popping up, for A-01, Project Valkyries, the nickname of the [=VTF=]s, and as the VF-12 Valkyrja.
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* ArcWords: ''"I am one who flew on the wings of the Valkyries."''
**Valkyrie also keeps popping up, for A-01, Project Valkyries, the nickname of the [=VTF=]s, and as the VF-12 Valkyrja.Valkyrja.
->''"I am one who flew on the wings of the Valkyries."''
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->''"I am one who flew on the wings of the Valkyries."''
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* ForWantOfANail: Yuuya Bridges being an SMS Valkyrie pilot instead of a US Army [=TSF=] pilot changes quite a few things, particularly the Kamchatka arc: [[spoiler: Ibrahim was piloting the 94 Second Phase 1 testbed, and died at the forward base, covering Yui's retreat; Natassja Ivanova was shanghaied by Yuuya to be his backseater in the VF-19A, with them eliminating the Lasers, so she survives Zhar's decimation; Leon Kuze's Raptor is stolen during the RLF Incident; Sagiri's battalion and the Fuji School Brigade receive railguns and the coup happens in 2002.]]
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* InterserviceRivalry: Humorously shown in "Anchors Aweigh", the first sidestory in the snippet collection, where US Navy Commander Roy Focker leads Skull Flight and their Crusaders on a MissionFromGod: to defeat the US Army's Infinities and their Raptors. [[spoiler: Both groups are later found [[DrowningMySorrows sharing the same bar]], thanks to the Marines in their Crusaders winning Blue Flag 02.]]
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* InterserviceRivalry: InterserviceRivalry:
** Humorously shown in "Anchors Aweigh", the first sidestory in the snippet collection, where US Navy Commander Roy Focker leads Skull Flight and their Crusaders on a MissionFromGod: to defeat the US Army's Infinities and their Raptors. [[spoiler: Both groups are later found [[DrowningMySorrows sharing the same bar]], thanks to the Marines in their Crusaders winning Blue Flag 02.]]
** Humorously shown in "Anchors Aweigh", the first sidestory in the snippet collection, where US Navy Commander Roy Focker leads Skull Flight and their Crusaders on a MissionFromGod: to defeat the US Army's Infinities and their Raptors. [[spoiler: Both groups are later found [[DrowningMySorrows sharing the same bar]], thanks to the Marines in their Crusaders winning Blue Flag 02.]]
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* PoorCommunicationKills: In ''Valkyries'', [[spoiler: Suzumiya Akane and Natassja Ivanova come to a confrontation because their parent organisations have no idea what each other is doing and instantly assume they're out to get them and steal Hibiki. It ends badly for Akane.]]
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* PoorCommunicationKills: PoorCommunicationKills:
** In ''Valkyries'', [[spoiler: Suzumiya Akane and Natassja Ivanova come to a confrontation because their parent organisations have no idea what each other is doing and instantly assume they're out to get them and steal Hibiki. It ends badly for Akane.]]
** In ''Valkyries'', [[spoiler: Suzumiya Akane and Natassja Ivanova come to a confrontation because their parent organisations have no idea what each other is doing and instantly assume they're out to get them and steal Hibiki. It ends badly for Akane.]]
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* RankUp: By 2003, Sakaki Chizuru is now a Captain in the IRG. Her rival Ayamine Kei, meanwhile, is now a Lieutenant Colonel in the IJA.
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* RankUp: RankUp:
** By 2003, Sakaki Chizuru is now a Captain in the IRG. Her rival Ayamine Kei, meanwhile, is now a Lieutenant Colonel in the IJA.
** By 2003, Sakaki Chizuru is now a Captain in the IRG. Her rival Ayamine Kei, meanwhile, is now a Lieutenant Colonel in the IJA.
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* StrawmanHasAPoint: Hibiki spends most of ''Valkyries'' being disgusted with the attitudes and ethos espoused by Imperial Japan, but Natassja points out that Japan was forced to adopt such attitudes, because it was necessary for survival as a nation.
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''Muv-Luv: Do You Remember Luv?'' (aka ''Muv-Luv: DYRL'') is a series of interconnected fanfics written by Sasahara17, a crossover between ''Anime/MacrossFrontier'' and ''VisualNovel/MuvLuvAlternative''. The general thrust of the story is this: during a field test of a new fold booster, four pilots of SMS' Mobius Squadron are flung from their home universe into the world of ''Muv-Luv Alternative'', arriving just before ''[[LightNovel/MuvLuvAlternativeTotalEclipse Total Eclipse]]'' begins. Alone and cut off from their home verse, they do their best to survive and reunite, and to bring hope to a shattered world.
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''Muv-Luv: Do You Remember Luv?'' (aka ''Muv-Luv: DYRL'') is a series of interconnected fanfics written by Sasahara17, a crossover between ''Anime/MacrossFrontier'' and ''VisualNovel/MuvLuvAlternative''. The general thrust of the story is this: during a field test of a new fold booster, four pilots of SMS' Mobius Squadron are flung from their home universe into the world of ''Muv-Luv Alternative'', arriving just before ''[[LightNovel/MuvLuvAlternativeTotalEclipse ''[[Literature/MuvLuvAlternativeTotalEclipse Total Eclipse]]'' begins. Alone and cut off from their home verse, they do their best to survive and reunite, and to bring hope to a shattered world.
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* [[GivingRadioToTheRomans Giving Valkyries to Alternative Earth]]: Yuuya and his backseater, Shinsei Industries engineer Vincent Lowell, decide to help Alternative Earth tech up as much as possible, by reverse engineering the technologies in their VF-19A. As a result of this, the XFJ Plan, [[LightNovel/MuvLuvAlternativeTotalEclipse originally conceived to develop a new TSF for Japan]], is reborn as Project Valkyrie, an R&D project to develop new warfighting technologies (though it's less developing, and more reverse-engineering technologies from Yuuya's VF-19, and adapting them to the limitations of Alternative Earth). Among their early successes include making the EML-99X railgun a more practical weapon and developing prototype Valkyries based off the VF-0.
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* [[GivingRadioToTheRomans Giving Valkyries to Alternative Earth]]: Yuuya and his backseater, Shinsei Industries engineer Vincent Lowell, decide to help Alternative Earth tech up as much as possible, by reverse engineering the technologies in their VF-19A. As a result of this, the XFJ Plan, [[LightNovel/MuvLuvAlternativeTotalEclipse [[Literature/MuvLuvAlternativeTotalEclipse originally conceived to develop a new TSF for Japan]], is reborn as Project Valkyrie, an R&D project to develop new warfighting technologies (though it's less developing, and more reverse-engineering technologies from Yuuya's VF-19, and adapting them to the limitations of Alternative Earth). Among their early successes include making the EML-99X railgun a more practical weapon and developing prototype Valkyries based off the VF-0.
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** More seriously, ''Journey Home'' shows that the Imperial Royal Guard has succeeded in marginalizing the Imperial Japanese Army, to the point where the [[LightNovel/MuvLuvAlternativeTotalEclipse Type-02 Shiranui Niigata]] is an IRG machine, with the IJA forced to make do with the near-obsolete Type-94 Shiranui and Type-89 Kagerou.
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** More seriously, ''Journey Home'' shows that the Imperial Royal Guard has succeeded in marginalizing the Imperial Japanese Army, to the point where the [[LightNovel/MuvLuvAlternativeTotalEclipse [[Literature/MuvLuvAlternativeTotalEclipse Type-02 Shiranui Niigata]] is an IRG machine, with the IJA forced to make do with the near-obsolete Type-94 Shiranui and Type-89 Kagerou.
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* BreakTheCutie: Hibiki suffers from this due to his time at a mental asylum. Not only was he subjected to be told his previous life was all in his head but he's also is disgusted with the xenophobia and racism by the Imperial Japanese forces.
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* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler:Akane is easily subdued by Natassja due the former having no experience in close human combat while the latter does.]]
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* WildWeasel: Mention is made during ''Try Again'' of how Yuuya took his VF-19 on a sortie to clear Laser-class BETA in Kamchatka, relying on his pin-point barrier for defense.
** By the time of ''Journey Home'' (2003), laserjagd missions are a key tasking for [=VTF=] squadrons, allowing [=TSF=]s and airpower to move freely.
** By the time of ''Journey Home'' (2003), laserjagd missions are a key tasking for [=VTF=] squadrons, allowing [=TSF=]s and airpower to move freely.
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* RedBaron: Yuuya picks up the sobriquet "White Knight of the Atlantic." A so far unnamed ISAF pilot has picked up the handle "[[AceCombatZeroTheBelkanWar Demon Lord]] of the Pacific."
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* RedBaron: Yuuya picks up the sobriquet "White Knight of the Atlantic." A so far unnamed ISAF pilot has picked up the handle "[[AceCombatZeroTheBelkanWar "[[VideoGame/AceCombatZeroTheBelkanWar Demon Lord]] of the Pacific."
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* DeathByAdaptation: The fic presumes that Zhar Battalion was wiped out as per the anime, while most of their members actually survive in the visual novel.
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** The fighter launch sequence in ''Journey Home'' is a shoutout to [[{{VideoGame/Battlefield3}} Going Hunting]], while the AWACS callsign is [[AceCombatXSkiesOfDeception Crux]].
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** The fighter launch sequence in ''Journey Home'' is a shoutout to [[{{VideoGame/Battlefield3}} Going Hunting]], while the AWACS callsign is [[AceCombatXSkiesOfDeception [[VideoGame/AceCombatXSkiesOfDeception Crux]].
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* NoodleIncident: Due to the InMediaRes format and the timeskips, a number of these occur, such as the details behind Project Valkyrie's move to Dover from Alaska, what ''really'' happened during the Red Shift incident, Makabe getting the Golden Kite with Illfriede's help, and so on.
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* NoodleIncident: Due to the InMediaRes InMediasRes format and the timeskips, a number of these occur, such as the details behind Project Valkyrie's move to Dover from Alaska, what ''really'' happened during the Red Shift incident, Makabe getting the Golden Kite with Illfriede's help, and so on.
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''Muv-Luv: Do You Remember Luv?'' (aka ''Muv-Luv: DYRL'') is a series of interconnected fanfics written by Sasahara17, a crossover between Anime/MacrossFrontier and VisualNovel/MuvLuvAlternative. The general thrust of the story is this: during a field test of a new fold booster, four pilots of SMS' Mobius Squadron are flung from their home universe into the world of VisualNovel/MuvLuvAlternative, arriving just before [[LightNovel/MuvLuvAlternativeTotalEclipse Total Eclipse]] begins. Alone and cut off from their home verse, they do their best to survive and reunite, and to bring hope to a shattered world.
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''Muv-Luv: Do You Remember Luv?'' (aka ''Muv-Luv: DYRL'') is a series of interconnected fanfics written by Sasahara17, a crossover between Anime/MacrossFrontier ''Anime/MacrossFrontier'' and VisualNovel/MuvLuvAlternative. ''VisualNovel/MuvLuvAlternative''. The general thrust of the story is this: during a field test of a new fold booster, four pilots of SMS' Mobius Squadron are flung from their home universe into the world of VisualNovel/MuvLuvAlternative, ''Muv-Luv Alternative'', arriving just before [[LightNovel/MuvLuvAlternativeTotalEclipse ''[[LightNovel/MuvLuvAlternativeTotalEclipse Total Eclipse]] Eclipse]]'' begins. Alone and cut off from their home verse, they do their best to survive and reunite, and to bring hope to a shattered world.
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Several months later, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9002368/1/Muv-Luv-DYRL-Valkyries Valkyries]]'' follows IJA Cadet Sendou Yuzuka, as she prepares for the last day of pre-graduation training excercises, and runs into a interesting TSF mechanic by the name of Hibiki Tatsunami. But there are other forces at work, and Yuzuka finds herself in the middle of a web of intrigue focused on Hibiki.
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Several months later, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9002368/1/Muv-Luv-DYRL-Valkyries Valkyries]]'' follows IJA Cadet Sendou Yuzuka, as she prepares for the last day of pre-graduation training excercises, exercises, and runs into a interesting TSF mechanic by the name of Hibiki Tatsunami. But there are other forces at work, and Yuzuka finds herself in the middle of a web of intrigue focused on Hibiki.
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While the setting does feature mecha, it's mostly window dressing to the real focus of the story: the interaction of characters with completely different worldviews, and the culture clash between the despair of MuvLuv and the hope of Macross.
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While the setting does feature mecha, it's mostly window dressing to the real focus of the story: the interaction of characters with completely different worldviews, and the culture clash between the despair of MuvLuv Franchise/MuvLuv and the hope of Macross.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: A mild version between Hibiki and Ilfriede, where they trade barbs, Ilfriede fills Hibiki's cockpit with Haggis, Hibiki makes an earnest attempt to kill Ilfriede (or at least brain her with a heavy wrench), but they're as close as siblings.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: A mild version between Hibiki and Ilfriede, where they trade barbs, Ilfriede fills Hibiki's cockpit with Haggis, Hibiki makes an earnest attempt to kill Ilfriede (or at least brain her with a heavy wrench), but they're as close as siblings.
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Sadly, the story is now a DeadFic as the last update was in 2013.
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Are they fragile?
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* FragileSpeedster: The VF-8 Crusader and the EF-2002 Dragoon Variable Tactical Fighters. In-universe [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9162721/1/ Evaluation]] notes that they hold significant advantages over conventional [=TSFs=], but lack the ammunition capacity for prolonged firefights and rely on hit and run attacks.
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