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* MythologyGag: Possibly also ShownTheirWork, [[spoiler: Lisa's Second Trigger ability is one of the powers she would have got in the event of a hypothetical Broken Trigger and going Titan during the finale of ''Ward''.]]
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Things quickly go wrong when Glory Girl sees the tail end of a conversation between Queen and Tattletale (both having very good reasons to want Coil out of the picture in this setting). Glory decides to beat the bad guy up nearly accidentally killing Taylor in the process. The consequences of Taylor diving deeper than ever in an attempt to not die, Amy reaching her [[RageBreakingPoint Breaking Point]] healing people very injured from Vicky's enthusiasm, and [[HumanityIsInfectious humanity becoming infectious]] for the Queen Administrator shard start having some long term [[JustForPun deviations]] from then on.
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Things quickly go wrong when Glory Girl sees the tail end of a conversation between Queen and Tattletale (both having very good reasons to want Coil out of the picture in this setting). Glory decides to beat the bad guy up nearly accidentally killing Taylor in the process. The consequences of Taylor diving deeper than ever in an attempt to not die, Amy reaching her [[RageBreakingPoint Breaking Point]] healing people very injured from Vicky's enthusiasm, and [[HumanityIsInfectious humanity becoming infectious]] for the Queen Administrator shard start having some long term [[JustForPun [[{{Pun}} deviations]] from then on.
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Can also be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/20716580/chapters/49263566/ Archive of Our Own]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13392201/1/Mutant-Deviations/ FanFiction]], and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/mutant-deviations-worm-au.91032/ Sufficient Velocity]].
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Can also be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/20716580/chapters/49263566/ org/works/20716580/chapters/49214276 Archive of Our Own]], [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13392201/1/Mutant-Deviations/ FanFiction]], and [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/mutant-deviations-worm-au.91032/ Sufficient Velocity]].
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* LivingEmotionalCrutch: Taylor is [[spoiler: Madison's. The rest of the Harem has noticed Madison's mental state. In the aftermath of the Shadow Stalker fight, and the belief that Taylor fell to her death, Maddie sneaks behind the school and tries to slit her own wrists. This also causes Lisa's Second Trigger, so the same is probably true of her too.]]
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* RageBreakingPoint: Jack Slash [[spoiler: after Queen Administrator basically permabans Broadcast from networking with Shards, and he notices that his secondary Thinker ability has stopped working. To be fair it was a RBP for QA too, being thoroughly fed up with Broadcast's shit.]]
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* HeelRealization: PlayedForLaughs after [[spoiler:Taylor watches "Simmy" and Mimi (formerly Burnscar) high fiving]].
--> '''Taylor''' (in narration): How had this become my life? Was it too late to go back to living in fear of being inducted into [[spoiler:my father's]] criminal empire in a [[WellIntentionedExtremist misguided effort to fix the Bay]]? Wait... had ''I'' somehow become the misguided, scary, criminal empire that was trying to fix the Bay?
--> '''Taylor''' (in narration): How had this become my life? Was it too late to go back to living in fear of being inducted into [[spoiler:my father's]] criminal empire in a [[WellIntentionedExtremist misguided effort to fix the Bay]]? Wait... had ''I'' somehow become the misguided, scary, criminal empire that was trying to fix the Bay?
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* BreakThemByTalking: Taylor uses [[spoiler: Gallant's power to bombard Scion with basically the sum total of humanity's emotion and show it there's more to existence than The Purpose]] to get it to finally stand down.
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* ButNowIMustGo: [[spoiler: Scion departs Earth to deal with the rest of the Entities; by conversion or annihilation.]]
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* SweetTooth: Not surprisingly, being an insect, [[spoiler: Monarch]] has one. Threatening to revoke her candy privileges is a pretty reliable way of keeping her in line. It a regular source of humour.
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** [[spoiler: The Siberian too. With 2 people (Flechette and Insight again) who can bypass her invulnerability, she's dealt with fairly easily.]]
* ArmorPiercingAttack: Flechette and The Siberian, as in canon. [[spoiler: Insight gets this power too after she 2nd Triggers.]]
* ArmorPiercingAttack: Flechette and The Siberian, as in canon. [[spoiler: Insight gets this power too after she 2nd Triggers.]]
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*** [[SoleSurvivor The Siberian]] [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere scarpers]] [[spoiler: after the swarm finds and nearly eats Manton]].
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*** [[SoleSurvivor The Siberian]] [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere scarpers]] [[spoiler: after the swarm finds and nearly eats Manton]].Manton. She gets hers later from a combination of Flechette's power opening up the Stinger (Manton's) Shard's pocket dimension, Queen determine where it is, then Insight's 2nd Trigger powers giving her the means to blow it to Kingdom Come]].
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted; Jessica Yamada has Taylor as a patient for a short time. [[spoiler: After she has a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment in an Endbringer Shelter during the Leviathan fight and consequently triggers, Super Therapy is basically Emma Barnes' power in a nutshell, which she inadvertently uses on Taylor (due to having only just got them and thus having no control, especially when she's stressed) to start down the long road to patching things up between them. She takes the Cape Name Heartsight.]]
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* UnwantedHarem: Taylor, though she part won't admit it and part can't see it, has amassed her own little lesbian harem. [[Lisa is first lady, Madison's feelings have been lit up in neon for a while, and Cassie eventually admits to having a crush. Possibly Flechette too. Hell even frickin' ''Emma''. The only question mark over Amy is whether she chooses Taylor or Vicky, since she has finally had a (100% consensual, albeit Truth Or Dare prompted) kiss with the latter.]]
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* UnwantedHarem: Taylor, though she part won't admit it and part can't see it, has amassed her own little lesbian harem. [[Lisa [[spoiler: Lisa is first lady, Madison's feelings have been lit up in neon for a while, and Cassie eventually admits to having a crush. Possibly Flechette too. Hell Hell, even frickin' ''Emma''. The only question mark over Amy is whether she chooses Taylor or Vicky, since she has finally had a (100% consensual, albeit Truth Or Dare prompted) kiss with the latter.]]
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* AmbiguouslyHuman: Definitely [[spoiler: Taylor post Shadow Stalker fight, where she to all intents and purposes fell to her death. QA wasn't willing to let it end there and with some help from the network was able to put her mind back together near enough to what it was. Taylor is quite open and okay with the fact, and thinks that the same is becoming true of others in The Outcasts.]]
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* UnwantedHarem: Taylor, though she part won't admit it and part can't see it, has amassed her own little lesbian harem. [[Lisa is first lady, Madison's feelings have been lit up in neon for a while, and Cassie eventually admits to having a crush. Possibly Flechette too. Hell even frickin' ''Emma''. The only question mark over Amy is whether she chooses Taylor or Vicky, since she has finally had a (100% consensual, albeit Truth Or Dare prompted) kiss with the latter.]]
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* BadassNormal: Madison Clements, the only non-Parahuman in the outcasts, who [[spoiler: shoots Jack Slash to death]].
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* BadassNormal: Madison Clements, the only non-Parahuman in the outcasts, who [[spoiler: shoots Jack Slash to death]].death. No longer the case as she ''does'' eventually get powers around the time of the Echidna fight]].
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* FlatWhat: After [[spoiler: Taylor hijacks control of The Endbringers by subjugating High Priest, she tries to make them less terrifying. That apparently involves Ziz choosing their wardrobe. This is Cassie's response.]]
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* AnticlimaxBoss : [[spoiler: Khonsu. Clonedolon summons it during the Echidna battle to try and get the other Endbringers to stop fighting each other. It appears for less than a minute before Insight and Flechette blast it to Kingdom Come.]]
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* EnemyCivilWar: [[spoiler: Endbringer Civil War. Clonedolon summons all 3 Endbringers to the Echidna fight. QA attempts to override the network, which leads to the 3 getting into a disagreement about how to proceed, which quickly turns violent.]]
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** Sophia Hess is so obsessed with revenge on Taylor for [[spoiler: getting thrown in jail]] [[RevengeBeforeReason that she]] [[spoiler: [[DealWithTheDevil joins the Slaughterhouse Nine]], which gets a retroactive Kill Order on her after her death]].
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** Sophia Hess is so obsessed with revenge on Taylor for [[spoiler: getting thrown in jail]] [[RevengeBeforeReason that she]] [[spoiler: [[DealWithTheDevil joins the Slaughterhouse Nine]], which gets a retroactive Kill Order on her after her death]].death (though that is just for the purposes of giving her a bounty that Queen can collect)]].
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*** Jack Slash and Cherish are tag-teamed by [[spoiler: Watchtower and Monarch]].
*** Mannequin is killed by [[spoiler: Glory Girl/Sanctuary]]
*** Bonesaw is killed by [[spoiler: Darwin]]
*** Shatterbird is killed by [[spoiler: Artillery]]
*** Crawler is killed by [[spoiler: Lung]]
*** The Nine's new recruit, [[spoiler: Shadow Stalker]], is killed by Queen.
*** Mannequin is killed by [[spoiler: Glory Girl/Sanctuary]]
*** Bonesaw is killed by [[spoiler: Darwin]]
*** Shatterbird is killed by [[spoiler: Artillery]]
*** Crawler is killed by [[spoiler: Lung]]
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*** Jack Slash and Cherish are tag-teamed by [[spoiler: Watchtower and Monarch]].
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*** Mannequin is killed by [[spoiler: GloryGirl/Sanctuary]]
Girl/Sanctuary via Trans sonic HumanCannonball]].
*** Bonesaw is killed by [[spoiler:Darwin]]
Darwin's bugs]]
*** Shatterbird is killed by [[spoiler:Artillery]]
Artillery squishing her with a slab of concrete]].
*** Crawler is killed by [[spoiler:Lung]]
Lung breathing fire down his gob in classic Godzilla fashion]].
*** The Nine's new recruit, [[spoiler: Shadow Stalker]], is killed byQueen.Queen[[spoiler:'s swarm eating her alive after throwing themselves off of Wilmslow's roof]].
*** Mannequin is killed by [[spoiler: Glory
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* RevengeBeforeReason: [[EnemyMine Allying with]] [[DealWithTheDevil the Slaughterhouse Nine]] for revenge on [[spoiler: Taylor]] does nothing to help [[spoiler: Shadow Stalker]], and only gets her [[spoiler: a posthumous retroactive Kill Order]].
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* RevengeBeforeReason: [[EnemyMine Allying with]] [[DealWithTheDevil the Slaughterhouse Nine]] for revenge on [[spoiler: Taylor]] does nothing to help [[spoiler: Shadow Stalker]], and only gets her [[spoiler: a posthumous retroactive Kill Order]].Order so that a bounty can be assigned. Queen gets the credit]].
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* EatenAlive: Taylor's horde goes all the way on [[spoiler: Shadow Stalker]] and costs [[spoiler: Jack Slash]] his right arm and half his face.
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* KilledOffscreen: [[spoiler: Amy is too busy trying (and ultimately succeeding) to restore Mouse Protector from Murder Rat that she doesn't even acknowledge Bonesaw's demise as Monarch's bugs rip her apart.]]
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* BadassBoast: Amy to the newly arrived Flechette, "Welcome to Brockton Bay, where the monsters come to hunt, and then ''we hunt them''."
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* AdaptiveAbility: [[spoiler: Part of what makes fighting Monarch so tricky. While it itself doesn't have one once it is exposed to a parahuman ability it can reproduce specialised offspring to counter specific powers and tactics. For example Fireproof bugs to deals with Lung's pyrokinesis and exploding bugs with superacid in their stomachs to deal with his HealingFactor.]]
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* AdaptiveAbility: [[spoiler: Part of what makes fighting Monarch so tricky. While it itself doesn't have one once it is exposed to a parahuman ability it can reproduce specialised offspring to counter specific powers and tactics. For example Fireproof bugs to deals deal with Lung's pyrokinesis and exploding bugs with superacid in their stomachs to deal with his HealingFactor.]]
* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: [[spoiler: The Leviathan fight and Queen's revelations rocks Cauldron to its core. Alexandria now knows that Eidolon is responsible for The Endbringers, has to be talked out of killing him on the spot, and realising that all her sacrifices have been for nothing declares ScrewThisImOuttaHere Eidolon suffers a HeroicBSOD because he doesn't know how to make them stop. Legend finds out the hard way about the character of the people he's worked with for years. Even Contessa, Miss IDidWhatIHadToDo, is ashamed of herself.]]
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* OnlySaneMan: Kevin Lemark, Coil's right hand man. He has to remind his boss about pretty much ''everything'' that doesn't directly pertain to his plans like a living Personal Organiser, and is probably the only one who calls him out of his more irrational moments, can talk back to him and get away with it.
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* OnlySaneMan: Kevin Lemark, Coil's right hand man. He has to remind his boss about pretty much ''everything'' that doesn't directly pertain to his plans like a living Personal Organiser, including details of his personal life like ''Taylor's Birthday'', and is probably the only one who calls him out of his more irrational moments, can talk back to him and get away with it.
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* GoneHorriblyRight: Amy tried to create bugs to go after Empire 88 members. [[spoiler: if not for Queen Mastering Monarch, it would have resulted in humanity losing a BugWar]].
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* GoneHorriblyRight: Amy tried to create bugs to go after Empire 88 members. [[spoiler: if not for Queen Mastering Monarch, it would have resulted in humanity losing a BugWar]].BugWar. Leviathan would have been a casualty. And due to Eidolon's carelessness, they crack Interdimensional Travel and can access all Earth's and Cauldron's Pocket Dimension]].
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* MissionControl: Watchtower [[spoiler: (Madison Clements)]] is this to the Outcasts. She's their computer whizz and through their family connections is one of the ways of procuring whatever the gand needs without arousing suspicion.
* MundaneUtility: Canary's CompellingVoice can help with pain relief, up,to and including Thinker Headaches.
* MundaneUtility: Canary's CompellingVoice can help with pain relief, up,to and including Thinker Headaches.
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* MissionControl: Watchtower [[spoiler: (Madison Clements)]] is this to the Outcasts. She's their computer whizz and through their family connections is one of the ways of procuring whatever the gand gang needs without arousing suspicion.
* MundaneUtility: Canary's CompellingVoice can help with pain relief,up,to up to and including Thinker Headaches.
* MundaneUtility: Canary's CompellingVoice can help with pain relief,
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: [[spoiler: One of Amy's experimental butterflies escapes. Taylor sees this and Amy waves it off as nothing to worry about. This butterfly eventually becomes Monarch and nearly wrecks the city. Taylor gives Amy both barrels for not telling her at the time, when they could have nipped it in the bud.]]
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