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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27096310 Mia Fey: Ace Attorney – The Fool's Turnabout]]'' is an ''Franchise/AceAttorney''[=/=]''VideoGame/Persona5'' crossover fic written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Snarky_SilverHaired_Sociopath Snarky_SilverHaired_Sociopath]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27096310 Mia Fey: Ace Attorney – The Fool's Turnabout]]'' is an ''Franchise/AceAttorney''[=/=]''VideoGame/Persona5'' crossover fic written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Snarky_SilverHaired_Sociopath Snarky_SilverHaired_Sociopath]].
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* GratuitousJapanese: Akechi tends to use Japanese honorifics for people. This wouldn't be unusual otherwise since this takes place in Japan, but almost no one else bothers to use them. Most notably, he uses them for Mia (calling her "Fey-san"), who still has her localized name. The only exceptions are Futaba calling Makoto "Mako-chan" (though that's only used as an AffectionateNickname) and Ryuji once calling Makoto [[SempaiKohai senpai]]. The other characters otherwise use English titles, so Akechi's use of honorifics stands out.
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* GratuitousJapanese: Akechi tends to use Japanese honorifics for people. This wouldn't be unusual otherwise since this takes place in Japan, but almost no one else bothers to use them. Most notably, he uses them for Mia (calling her "Fey-san"), who still has her localized name. The only exceptions are Futaba calling Makoto "Mako-chan" (though that's only used as an AffectionateNickname) and Ryuji once calling Makoto [[SempaiKohai senpai]].{{senpai|Kohai}}. The other characters otherwise use English titles, so Akechi's use of honorifics stands out.
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* MsFanservice: Mia and Ann, same as they are in their respective games. Not only do others comment on their looks, both of them {{lampshade|Hanging}} this aspect for the other. Mia narrates how Ann looks definitely fits a model. Ann openly goes into detail by saying that Mia looks like a model and mentions her face, [[BuxomIsBetter proportions]], [[ShesGotLegs legs]], and beauty mark.
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* MsFanservice: Mia and Ann, same as they are in their respective games. Not only do others comment on their looks, both of them {{lampshade|Hanging}} this aspect for the other. Mia narrates how Ann looks definitely fits a model. Ann openly goes into detail by saying that Mia looks like a model and mentions her face, [[BuxomIsBetter proportions]], [[ShesGotLegs legs]], {{leg|Focus}}s, and beauty mark.facial mole.
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* AbsenteeActor: Morgana, Yusuke and Haru are conspicuous on their absence. The latter however, is understandable as she would not have joined the Phantom Thieves yet.
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Mia Fey is a seasoned defense attorney starting up her own law office. One day, she gets a request from two high school students, Makoto Niijima and Ryuji Sakamoto. They come to her in the hopes that she would defend their friend, Ren Amamiya, after he was falsely accused of murder. With their help, she attempts to do everything she can to help defend the poor boy against the relentless methods of the case's prosecutor, Sae Niijima.
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Mia Fey is a seasoned defense attorney starting up her own law office. One day, she gets a request from two high school students, Makoto Niijima and Ryuji Sakamoto. They come to her in the hopes that she would defend their friend, Ren Amamiya, after he was falsely accused of murder. With their help, she attempts to do everything she can to help defend the poor boy against the relentless methods of the case's prosecutor, Sae Niijima.
Niijima. The story follows them through their investigations and the ensuing trial to battle for both Ren's innocence and to stop Sae from falling down a corrupt path.
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** ''VisualNovel/PhoenixWrightAceAttorney'':
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*** The title itself references Joker's Arcana as the Fool within the game's TarotMotifs.
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* ChivalrousPervert: Ryuji does seem to have some perverted tendencies such as encouraging Mia to present her cleavage and being interested in Ann's bikini shoots -- she even uses this prospect to get him to escort her to a shoot. However, he is a genuinely good guy at heart. While he does make a comment about Mia being more than a pretty face and nice tits, Mia can tell that the sentiment he was trying to convey was genuine. And while Ann knows he'll be perving on her during the shoot, she trusts him enough to have him along for protection if necessary.
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* ChivalrousPervert: Ryuji does seem to have some perverted tendencies such as encouraging Mia to present her cleavage and being interested in Ann's bikini shoots -- she even uses this prospect to get him to escort her to a shoot. However, he is a genuinely good guy at heart. While he does make a comment about Mia being more than a pretty face and nice tits, Mia can tell that the sentiment he was trying to convey was genuine.genuine despite its less than ideal wording. And while Ann knows he'll be perving on her during the shoot, she trusts him enough to have him along for protection if necessary.
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** When Makoto finds out who the real culprit is, Makoto loses her cool and shouts, "I'll fucking kill [[spoiler: him]]!"
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** When Makoto finds out who the real culprit is, Makoto loses her cool and shouts, "I'll fucking kill [[spoiler: him]]!"[them]!"
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* MsFanservice: Mia and Ann, same as they are in their respective games. Not only do others comment on their looks, both of them {{lampshade|Hanging}} this aspect for the other. Mia narrates how Ann looks definitely fits a model. Ann openly goes into detail by saying that Mia looks like a model and mentions her face, [[BuxomIsBetter proportions]], [[ShesGotLegs legs]], and BeautyMark.
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* MsFanservice: Mia and Ann, same as they are in their respective games. Not only do others comment on their looks, both of them {{lampshade|Hanging}} this aspect for the other. Mia narrates how Ann looks definitely fits a model. Ann openly goes into detail by saying that Mia looks like a model and mentions her face, [[BuxomIsBetter proportions]], [[ShesGotLegs legs]], and BeautyMark.beauty mark.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Sae's corrupt ways as a prosecutor are more intentional and ruthless than is implied in her game of origin. She behaves more like [[spoiler: her Shadow]] in this fic. It helps her fit in as an ''Ace Attorney'' prosecutor.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Sae's corrupt ways as a prosecutor are more intentional and ruthless than is implied in her game of origin. She behaves more like [[spoiler: her Shadow]] in this fic. It helps her fit in as an ''Ace Attorney'' prosecutor. She is also much harsher to Makoto despite eventually showing that she cares about her. [[spoiler: She [[TookALevelInKindness gets better]] by the end of the story.]]
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* GreaterScopeVillain: [[spoiler: Considering Shido is the one who set Ren up initially and was instrumental in Akechi's FreudianExcuse, he can be seen as this for the fic even though he is already dead. He managed to tangle everyone together for this plot to happen.]]
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* AdaptationalDumbass: Ohya's credibility in this fic is much shakier in this fic than in canon. While she had a fall from grace there, this is not mentioned in the fic and she is {{Flanderiz|ation}}ed into a belligerent drunkard. She lacks the IntrepidReporter side of her in favor of barging her way into places. She was able to track down Shido, but her idea was to barge in to get an interview [[spoiler: which is odd since she knew he was corrupt in canon]].
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** Sae wastes no time being dismissive of the main group, but most notably towards Makoto and the opposing attorney. A no-nonsense prosecutor with a [[AloofBigBrother strained relationship with her sister]].
** Ohya is introduced by drunkenly arguing with cops while GoingForTheBigScoop. The next interaction confirms that she is a reporter with questionable credentials and minimal (if any) professionalism.
** Sae wastes no time being dismissive of the main group, but most notably towards Makoto and the opposing attorney. A no-nonsense prosecutor with a [[AloofBigBrother strained relationship with her sister]].
** Ohya is introduced by drunkenly arguing with cops while GoingForTheBigScoop. The next interaction confirms that she is a reporter with questionable credentials and minimal (if any) professionalism.
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* FirstPersonSmartass: Much like other ''Ace Attorney'' protagonists, Mia has her own amount of snark in the narration of the fic.
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* FirstPersonSmartass: Much like other ''Ace Attorney'' protagonists, Mia has her own amount no shortage of snark in the narration of the fic.
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* {{Americasia}}: Notably averted. Despite the fact that the ''Ace Attorney'' characters keep their localized names and the one OC's PunnyName that is clearly Western, the fic is set in Japan similar to [[Anime/AceAttorney the anime]]. With ''Persona 5'' being set in Japan, there was no way around this.
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* {{Americasia}}: Notably averted. Despite the fact that the ''Ace Attorney'' characters [[LocalizedNameInANonLocalizedSetting keep their localized names names]] and the one OC's PunnyName that is clearly Western, the fic is set in Japan similar to [[Anime/AceAttorney the anime]]. With ''Persona 5'' being set in Japan, there was no way around this.
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* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler: Like in the game, Shido didn't care much about Goro, especially since he was born out of wedlock. He uses him as his own personal attack dog and planned to discard him simply because he didn't think he was useful anymore. It's no surprise that Goro killed him.]]
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* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler: Like in the game, Shido didn't care much about Goro, especially since he was born out of wedlock. He uses him as his own personal attack dog and planned plans to discard him simply because he didn't think he was useful anymore. It's no surprise that Goro killed kills him.]]
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Sae's corrupt ways as a prosecutor are more intentional and ruthless than is implied in her game of origin. She behaves more like [[spoiler: her Shadow]] in this fic. It helps her fit in as an ''Ace Attorney'' prosecutor.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Sae's corrupt ways as a prosecutor are more intentional and ruthless than is implied in her game of origin. She behaves more like [[spoiler: her Shadow]] in this fic. It helps her fit in as an ''Ace Attorney'' prosecutor.
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* {{Americasia}}: Averted. Despite the fact that the ''Ace Attorney'' characters keep their localized names and the one OC's PunnyName that is clearly Western, the fic is set in Japan, similar to [[Anime/AceAttorney the anime]]. With ''Persona 5'' being set in Japan, there was no way around this.
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* {{Americasia}}: Averted. Notably averted. Despite the fact that the ''Ace Attorney'' characters keep their localized names and the one OC's PunnyName that is clearly Western, the fic is set in Japan, Japan similar to [[Anime/AceAttorney the anime]]. With ''Persona 5'' being set in Japan, there was no way around this.
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* GratuitousJapanese: Akechi tends to use Japanese honorifics for people. This wouldn't be unusual otherwise since this takes place in Japan, but no one else bothers to use them. Most notably, he uses them for Mia (calling her "Fey-san"), who still has her localized name. Futaba does call Makoto "Mako-chan", but that is more considered an AffectionateNickname rather than using them consistently.
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* GratuitousJapanese: Akechi tends to use Japanese honorifics for people. This wouldn't be unusual otherwise since this takes place in Japan, but almost no one else bothers to use them. Most notably, he uses them for Mia (calling her "Fey-san"), who still has her localized name. The only exceptions are Futaba does call calling Makoto "Mako-chan", but that is more considered "Mako-chan" (though that's only used as an AffectionateNickname rather than using them consistently.AffectionateNickname) and Ryuji once calling Makoto [[SempaiKohai senpai]]. The other characters otherwise use English titles, so Akechi's use of honorifics stands out.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: [[spoiler: Considering Shido is the one who set Ren up initially and was instrumental in Akechi's FreudianExcuse, he can be seen as this for the fic even though he is already dead. He managed to tangle everyone together for this plot to happen.]]
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* {{Americasia}}: Averted. Despite the fact that the ''Ace Attorney'' characters keep their names and the one OC's PunnyName that is clearly Western, the fic is set in Japan, similar to [[Anime/AceAttorney the anime]]. With ''Persona 5'' being set in Japan, there was no way around this.
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* {{Americasia}}: Averted. Despite the fact that the ''Ace Attorney'' characters keep their localized names and the one OC's PunnyName that is clearly Western, the fic is set in Japan, similar to [[Anime/AceAttorney the anime]]. With ''Persona 5'' being set in Japan, there was no way around this.
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* MsFanservice: Mia and Ann. Oddly enough, both of them {{lampshade|Hanging}} this aspect for the other. Mia narrates how Ann looks definitely fits a model. Ann openly goes into detail by saying that Mia looks like a model and mentions her face, [[BuxomIsBetter proportions]], [[ShesGotLegs legs]], and BeautyMark.
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* MsFanservice: Mia and Ann. Oddly enough, Ann, same as they are in their respective games. Not only do others comment on their looks, both of them {{lampshade|Hanging}} this aspect for the other. Mia narrates how Ann looks definitely fits a model. Ann openly goes into detail by saying that Mia looks like a model and mentions her face, [[BuxomIsBetter proportions]], [[ShesGotLegs legs]], and BeautyMark.
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* SoreLoser: Mia lampshades the fact about Sae when she has a meltdown in court after she loses her lead.
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* SoreLoser: Mia lampshades the fact about Sae when she has a meltdown in court after she loses her lead. Keep in mind that [[ExaggeratedTrope she hasn't even lost yet]]. Any indication that she isn't going to win ''when she wants'' is enough to cause her to lose it. [[spoiler: She outgrows this by the time she does lose the case thanks to her seeing the error of her ways.]]
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* GratuitousJapanese: Akechi tends to use Japanese honorifics for people. This wouldn't be unusual otherwise since this takes place in Japan, but no one else bothers to use them. Most notably, he uses them for Mia (calling her "Fey-san"), who still has her localized name. Futaba does call Makoto "Mako-chan", but that is more considered an AffectionateNickname rather than using them consistently.
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* AffectionateNickname: From [[Anime/Persona5TheAnimation the anime]], Ryuji has "Ren-Ren" for Amamiya.
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* DefrostingTheIceQueen: The intention of Makoto in this story, similar to the game. She wants to pull Sae out of the depths of cynicism that she has dropped herself into during her time as a prosecutor. [[spoiler: After seeing how corrupt the system was, losing the case, and being betrayed by Akechi, she finally does see the error of her ways and realizes what happened.]]
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* DefrostingTheIceQueen: The intention of Makoto in this story, similar to the game. She wants to pull Sae out of the depths of cynicism that she has dropped herself into during her time as a prosecutor. [[spoiler: After seeing how corrupt the system was, losing the case, and being betrayed by Akechi, she finally does see the error of her ways and realizes what happened.]]
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* [[AloofBigBrother Aloof Big Sister]]: When Sae [[EstablishingCharacterMoment first appears]], she immediately treats everyone coldly, but she is also notably dismissive of Makoto. Makoto later expands upon this later.
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* [[AloofBigBrother Aloof Big Sister]]: When Sae [[EstablishingCharacterMoment first appears]], she immediately treats everyone coldly, but she is also notably dismissive of Makoto. Makoto later expands upon this later.this.
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*** When Mia meets Sojiro, Ryuji mentions his passion for coffee. It is implied that Mia reminds herself of [[spoiler: her old boyfriend Diego Armando. She also mentions that he's currently in a coma.]]Armando, known coffee enthusiast]].
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* DemotedToExtra: While Ren is the protagonist of ''Persona 5'', this story doesn't have him doing much. Justified since he's the accused. He wouldn't be able to go with the group even if he wanted to, and ''Ace Attorney'' defendants typically aren't featured much throughout a case.
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* DemotedToExtra: DemotedToExtra:
** While Ren is the protagonist of ''Persona 5'', this story doesn't have him doing much. Justified since he's the accused. He wouldn't be able to go with the group even if he wanted to, and ''Ace Attorney'' defendants typically aren't featured much throughout acase.case.
** Ann is one of the founding members of the Phantom Thieves and close friend to Ryuji and Ren, but she isn't joining Mia in the case. She only appears as a witness rather than on the defense team.
** While Ren is the protagonist of ''Persona 5'', this story doesn't have him doing much. Justified since he's the accused. He wouldn't be able to go with the group even if he wanted to, and ''Ace Attorney'' defendants typically aren't featured much throughout a
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* FirstPersonSmartass: In grand ''Ace Attorney'' tradition, Mia has her own amount of snark in the narration of the fic.
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* UndercoverAsLovers: Ryuji tries this to give an excuse as to why Mia is with him at Untouchables. Iwai points out that he isn't the kind of person a woman like her is [[JailbaitTaboo willing to risk jail for]]. The ploy earns Ryuji a few crushed toes as she ''emphatically'' denies the claim.
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* HollywoodSilencer: The silencer used by the killer does not make any sound that would be heard by anyone in the surrounding rooms.
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* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler: Like in the game, Shido didn't care much about Goro, especially since he was born out of wedlock. He uses him as his own personal attack dog and planned discard him simply because he didn't think he was useful anymore. It's no surprise that Goro killed him.]]
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* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler: Like in the game, Shido didn't care much about Goro, especially since he was born out of wedlock. He uses him as his own personal attack dog and planned to discard him simply because he didn't think he was useful anymore. It's no surprise that Goro killed him.]]
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Ohya is a lot more belligerent than she is in the game.
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* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Ohya is a lot more belligerent than she is in the game. A commenter compared her to Lotta Hart.
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** While Sae fills the ''Ace Attorney'' role of the antagonistic prosecutor, she is not an inherently bad person. The stress of raising Makoto on her own, along with having to deal with the stresses of her job, drove her to the state of the AmoralAttorney she is.
** [[spoiler: Akechi. Despite the heinous actions he committed both for his father and framing Ren, he wanted to make sure that Shido was stopped. He couldn't trust anyone after being abandoned so many times in his life and he only wanted true friends like Ren. Mia acknowledges that he's just a sad kid in the end.]]
** [[spoiler: Akechi. Despite the heinous actions he committed both for his father and framing Ren, he wanted to make sure that Shido was stopped. He couldn't trust anyone after being abandoned so many times in his life and he only wanted true friends like Ren. Mia acknowledges that he's just a sad kid in the end.]]
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** While Sae fills the ''Ace Attorney'' role of the antagonistic prosecutor, just like many of them, she is not an inherently bad person. The stress of raising Makoto on her own, along with having to deal with the stresses of her job, drove her to the state of the AmoralAttorney she is.
** [[spoiler: Akechi. Despite the heinous actions he committed both for his father and for framing Ren, he wanted to make sure that Shido was stopped. He couldn't trust anyone after being abandoned so many times in his life and he only wanted true friends like Ren. Mia acknowledges that he's just a sad kid in the end.]]
** [[spoiler: Akechi. Despite the heinous actions he committed both for his father and for framing Ren, he wanted to make sure that Shido was stopped. He couldn't trust anyone after being abandoned so many times in his life and he only wanted true friends like Ren. Mia acknowledges that he's just a sad kid in the end.]]
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* ChivalrousPervert: Ryuji does seem to have some perverted tendencies such as encouraging Mia presenting her cleavage and being interested in Ann's bikini shoots -- she even uses this prospect to get him to escort her to a shoot. However, he is a genuinely good guy at heart. While he does make a comment about Mia being more that a pretty face and nice tits, Mia can tell that the sentiment he was trying to convey was genuine. And while Ann knows he'll be perving on her during the shoot, she trust him enough to have him along for protection if necessary.
* ContinuityNod: To both games the fic is based on.
* ContinuityNod: To both games the fic is based on.
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* ChivalrousPervert: Ryuji does seem to have some perverted tendencies such as encouraging Mia presenting to present her cleavage and being interested in Ann's bikini shoots -- she even uses this prospect to get him to escort her to a shoot. However, he is a genuinely good guy at heart. While he does make a comment about Mia being more that than a pretty face and nice tits, Mia can tell that the sentiment he was trying to convey was genuine. And while Ann knows he'll be perving on her during the shoot, she trust trusts him enough to have him along for protection if necessary.
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* DissonantSerenity: Even though his friends and attorney have passionate emotions about his situation, Ren still remains calm even in detention after being falsely charged for murder again. Mia is confused how she's more nervous about defending him than he is while ''being accused of murder''.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: This is how Shido sees people. Tools to be used and thrown out once he's done with them. [[spoiler: This is the fate that Akechi was trying to avoid, which drove him to murder him first.]]
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* ChivalrousPervert: Ryuji does seem to have some perverted tendencies such as encouraging Mia presenting her cleavage and being interested in Ann's bikini shoots -- she even uses this prospect to get him to escort her to a shoot. However, he is a genuinely good guy at heart. While he does make a comment about Mia being more that a pretty face and nice tits, Mia can tell that the sentiment he was trying to convey was genuine. And while Ann knows he'll be perving on him during the shoot, she trust him enough to have him along for protection if necessary.
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* ChivalrousPervert: Ryuji does seem to have some perverted tendencies such as encouraging Mia presenting her cleavage and being interested in Ann's bikini shoots -- she even uses this prospect to get him to escort her to a shoot. However, he is a genuinely good guy at heart. While he does make a comment about Mia being more that a pretty face and nice tits, Mia can tell that the sentiment he was trying to convey was genuine. And while Ann knows he'll be perving on him her during the shoot, she trust him enough to have him along for protection if necessary.
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* TranquilFury: Compared to her extreme reaction to the killer beforehand, Makoto is described as having a cold fury as she demands that [[spoiler: Akechi stays at the witness stand]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27096310 Mia Fey: Ace Attorney – the Fool's Turnabout]]'' is an ''Franchise/AceAttorney''[=/=]''VideoGame/Persona5'' crossover fic written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Snarky_SilverHaired_Sociopath Snarky_SilverHaired_Sociopath]].
Mia Fey is a seasoned defense attorney starting up her own law office. One day, she gets a request from two high school students, Makoto Niijima and Ryuji Sakamoto. They come to her in the hopes that she would defend their friend, Ren Amamiya, after he was falsely accused of murder. With their help, she attempts to do everything she can to help defend the poor boy against the relentless methods of the case's prosecutor, Sae Niijima.
!!Tropes include:
* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler: Like in the game, Shido didn't care much about Goro, especially since he was born out of wedlock. He uses him as his own personal attack dog and planned discard him simply because he didn't think he was useful anymore. It's no surprise that Goro killed him.]]
* AcquittedTooLate: An example that doesn't involve death. Ren was about to be cleared of the assault charges against Shido when the police realized that there was some corruption going on about him. Unfortunately for him, he was framed for murder before his probation could be lifted. Thus, his probation was revoked.
* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Ohya is a lot more belligerent than she is in the game.
* AdaptationalVillainy: Sae's corrupt ways as a prosecutor are more intentional and ruthless than is implied in her game of origin. She behaves more like [[spoiler: her Shadow]] in this fic. It helps her fit in as an ''Ace Attorney'' prosecutor.
* AffectionateNickname: From [[Anime/Persona5TheAnimation the anime]], Ryuji has "Ren-Ren" for Amamiya.
* [[AloofBigBrother Aloof Big Sister]]: When Sae [[EstablishingCharacterMoment first appears]], she immediately treats everyone coldly, but she is also notably dismissive of Makoto. Makoto later expands upon this later.
* AlternateContinuity: The author notes that the timelines of ''VideoGame/Persona5'' and ''VisualNovel/PhoenixWrightAceAttorney'' both take place in 2016, allowing for there to be some overlap within the two games. However, they also note that some liberties had to be taken due to Mia's death in that game taking place in early September. It is implied that the Metaverse and the Phantom Thieves are a thing, it doesn't seem that they've made it to Okumura. The only target mentioned is Kamoshida and Futaba has stopped being as much of a shut-in as she was before.
* TheAlcoholic: Ohya is even more of a belligerent drunk in this fic.
* AmbiguouslyGay: Ohya seems to have an odd fascination with Mia's bust.
* AmoralAttorney: Sae Niijima is set up to be this the same way she was in the game, much like many ''Ace Attorney'' prosecutors. She is known for forcing confessions out of people, manipulating evidence, and doing just about anything in the pursuit of a guilty verdict. It's one thing that concerns both Akechi and Makoto.
* AntiVillain:
** While Sae fills the ''Ace Attorney'' role of the antagonistic prosecutor, she is not an inherently bad person. The stress of raising Makoto on her own, along with having to deal with the stresses of her job, drove her to the state of the AmoralAttorney she is.
** [[spoiler: Akechi. Despite the heinous actions he committed both for his father and framing Ren, he wanted to make sure that Shido was stopped. He couldn't trust anyone after being abandoned so many times in his life and he only wanted true friends like Ren. Mia acknowledges that he's just a sad kid in the end.]]
* ArtisticLicenseLaw:
** While not out of place in the ''Ace Attorney'' franchise, the author specifically acknowledges this in the notes of the second chapter. For the most part, the proceedings are carried out similarly to how they are in the visual novels and not based on how court cases work in real life.
** A specific example would be [[spoiler: Mia, Makoto, and Futaba getting away with breaking-and-entering and using illegally obtained evidence]]. These actions should realistically have them all arrested and Mia ''disbarred''.
* AssholeVictim: The victim was Masayoshi Shido, and anyone who has played ''P5'' knows that he will not be missed. His AttemptedRape of his subordinate was mentioned and Ren's intervention is the reason he was on probation in the first place. Mia also mentions that he had some potential connections to Redd White, a known blackmailer. [[spoiler: He used Goro to carry out hits (with the implication that it's through the Metaverse) with the intention of discarding him for not seeing much use for him anymore -- fully knowing that he was his son.]] Even Mia says that she doesn't consider his death a tragedy.
* BadassBookworm: Makoto is trained in aikido, and she gets a chance to show it off [[spoiler: when Akechi corners them]].
* BigBadEnsemble: Sae and the killer. Sae is the one trying to get Ren convicted for the murder while Mia must find who the real killer is that framed him. [[spoiler: It turns out that the killer, Akechi, is the true BigBad since he was also manipulating Sae.]]
* BitchInSheepsClothing: [[spoiler: While not too much of a surprise to ''P5'' fans, Akechi is the culprit. However, he presents himself as someone who is concerned about Sae convicting an innocent person. The same person he ''personally framed'' for murder.]]
* BuxomIsBetter: Both Ryuji and [[AmbiguouslyGay Ohya]] take notice of Mia's bustiness. Although, it seems that she might be somewhat self-conscious about it.
* CallingTheOldManOut: Makoto does this to Sae [[spoiler: when she's in the detention center]]. It seems that she took it to heart since she warms up in the end.
* TheCameo: Phoenix makes a brief appearance at the beginning of the first chapter, but he is not a major character in this story.
* ChivalrousPervert: Ryuji does seem to have some perverted tendencies such as encouraging Mia presenting her cleavage and being interested in Ann's bikini shoots -- she even uses this prospect to get him to escort her to a shoot. However, he is a genuinely good guy at heart. While he does make a comment about Mia being more that a pretty face and nice tits, Mia can tell that the sentiment he was trying to convey was genuine. And while Ann knows he'll be perving on him during the shoot, she trust him enough to have him along for protection if necessary.
* ContinuityNod: To both games the fic is based on.
** ''Franchise/AceAttorney'':
*** Mia mentions her investigations into Redd White.
*** Mia mentions meeting Gumshoe before, alluding to Case 3-4.
*** When Mia expresses disbelief in the idea of a high school student working with the police as a detective, she illustrates the audacity of it by mentioning the idea of a thirteen-year-old prosecutor. [[CallForward Anyone familiar with the franchise should already hear]] [[WhipItGood the whip cracking]].
*** When Mia meets Sojiro, Ryuji mentions his passion for coffee. Mia reminds herself of [[spoiler: her old boyfriend Diego Armando. She also mentions that he's currently in a coma.]]
** ''VideoGame/Persona5'': While there are many that factor into the plot itself, here are some minor ones:
*** Ryuji mentions his experiences with Kamoshida and almost seems gives away that they had a hand in exposing him.
*** [[spoiler: Shido's position in the Conspiracy is noted, and Akechi's role as his Metaverse hitman.]]
* DemotedToExtra: While Ren is the protagonist of ''Persona 5'', this story doesn't have him doing much and he is little more than a LivingProp. Justified due to the fact that he's the accused. He wouldn't be able to go with the group even if he wanted to, and ''Ace Attorney'' defendants typically aren't featured much throughout the case.
* DefrostingTheIceQueen: The intention of Makoto in this story, similar to the game. She wants to pull Sae out of the depths of cynicism that she has dropped herself into during her time as a prosecutor. [[spoiler: After seeing how corrupt the system was, losing the case, and being betrayed by Akechi, she finally does see the error of her ways and realizes what happened.]]
* DissonantSerenity: Even though his friends and attorney have passionate emotions about his situation, Ren still remains calm even in detention after being falsely charged for murder again. Mia is confused how she's more nervous about defending him than he is while ''being accused of murder''.
-->''Does'' anything ''faze him?''
* DodgyToupee: Albertson's toupee is described as pretty obvious and crappy by Mia. And he has plenty of spares. [[spoiler: It is implied one of them was used by the killer, but it was a RedHerring.]]
* EvenEvilCanBeLoved: [[spoiler: Ren admits that if not for everything Akechi did, he would have been friends with him.]]
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: [[spoiler: Goro's plan initially hinged on the idea that Ren's friends would leave him as soon as they found out he was a murderer and wouldn't do anything to help his case. So, he had to do everything he could to make sure that they wouldn't be able to convict anyone other than Ren.]]
* FirstPersonSmartass: In grand ''Ace Attorney'' tradition, Mia has her own amount of snark in the narration of the fic.
* {{Foil}}: Mia and Sae. Both of them are lawyers with younger sisters who look up to them. In addition, they have cases of ParentalAbandonment that pushed them into the path they are now. However, aside from the fact that Mia is a defense attorney and Sae is a prosecutor, they have some obvious differences. While Mia has become more idealistic and maintains [[CoolBigSis a better relationship with Maya]], Sae has grown bitter and cynical and has [[AloofBigBrother a strained relationship with Makoto at best]]. In addition, Mia does her best to practice law the honest way to [[CrusadingLawyer defend people who need defending]]. Sae is an AmoralAttorney who only cares about winning, even if that means doing things like forcing false confessions or manipulating evidence. This is something that helps Mia push Sae's CharacterDevelopment along.
* FrameUp: Like many ''Ace Attorney'' games, Ren is falsely accused and set up by the true murderer, and it's up to Mia to get him cleared of the charges.
* FreudianTrio: The protagonist and her companions. [[TheMcCoy Ryuji]] is the brash, hot-headed one while [[TheSpock Makoto]] tends to be the calm, level-headed one. [[TheKirk Mia]] has to act as a mediator between the two.
* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse:
** Mia understands Sae's struggle in the workplace dealing with sexism on top of the ruthlessness of the prosecutor's office, but she still calls her out by saying it doesn't excuse trying to convict Ren and what she says to Makoto.
** [[spoiler: While the characters understand why Akechi did what he did, none of them excuse it since he went out of his way to manipulate Sae and frame Ren. Ryuji even says that the fact that he used people makes him no better than his father. Akechi agrees.]]
* TheGlomp: Ryuji does this to Ren on the first and last days of the trial.
* GreenEyedMonster: [[spoiler: Goro's MotiveRant shows that he was jealous of Ren. While Goro had fans, he never had anyone close to him. During all his time observing him, he became resentful of [[MagneticHero how easy it was for Ren to pick up friends]] [[TrueCompanions who were so loyal to him and each other]]. This is why he thought to frame him for the murder.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: By the end of the fic, Sae is no longer antagonistic towards Mia and Ren.]]
* HeelRealization: It is a slow one, but [[spoiler: Sae comes to realize what she became over the course of the fic]].
* HotBlooded: Ryuji, much like canon, tends to have very strong emotions and is prone to being confrontational and shouting often.
* IncomingHam: Ohya knows how to make an entrance.
-->''"HOLD ON TO YOUR BUTTS, [[ThisIsForEmphasisBitch BITCHES]], BECAUSE THE PARTY IS HERE!"''
* JokeAndReceive: An example that serves as a CallForward. While astounded at the idea that a high school student could work with the police as a detective, she compares it to the idea of a thirteen-year-old prosecutor -- a pretty obvious reference to Franziska von Karma. With the timeframe of the fic, von Karma has already been a prosecutor for at least four years.
* JustAKid: When Makoto tried to confront Sae about her [[AmoralAttorney prosecuting methods]] in the past, Sae responded by saying she wouldn't understand since she's a kid.
* JustFollowingOrders: How Sae justifies her actions as an AmoralAttorney.
* TheKillerWasLeftHanded: [[spoiler: The security footage supposedly showing Ren had the killer shoving the gun in his coat using his left-hand. However, the prints recovered from the gun were from Ren's right hand.]]
* LampshadeHanging: The protagonists tend to point out their [[NoBadgeNoProblem legally dubious investigation methods]].
* LastSecondWordSwap: Mia looks like she's about to drop an f-bomb at one point out of frustration, but she composes herself and changes it to "fine."
* LimpAndLivid: The description of Sae after her supposedly airtight evidence was invalidated describes her this way.
* LowerDeckEpisode: To ''Persona 5''. While the Metaverse is implied to be used, it is presented from the perspective of someone who knows nothing about it. While the ''Ace Attorney'' is no stranger to supernatural happenings (Mia herself being a spirit medium from a family of mediums), there is nothing on that scale.
* MaskOfSanity: [[spoiler: Akechi]] puts up a good front, but it is later revealed to be borderline AxCrazy. [[spoiler: First shown when he corners Mia, Futaba, and Makoto in his place. The second is during his VillainousBreakdown during the third day of the trial.]]
* MsFanservice: Mia and Ann. Oddly enough, both of them {{lampshade|Hanging}} this aspect for the other. Mia narrates how Ann looks definitely fits a model. Ann openly goes into detail by saying that Mia looks like a model and mentions her face, [[BuxomIsBetter proportions]], [[ShesGotLegs legs]], and BeautyMark.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: Sae realizing that she was used as a pawn to prosecute an innocent person made her realize just how corrupt she was.]]
* NoodleIncident: Apparently, the Grand Royal got in some legal trouble over something to do with seafood.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Finding the real murderer enrages Makoto so much that she not only drops a PrecisionFStrike, but she also declares that she'll kill them. [[spoiler: Especially since it was someone who seemed to be helping them prove Ren's innocence.]]
* PrecisionFStrike: The fic does have some profanity, but never has any f-bombs. Ryuji comes the closest to that, but he only uses "eff" like in the game. However, there are two in this fic. Not only is it in a work that doesn't have f-bombs, but they also come from unlikely sources.
** When Sae loses her open-and-shut case, she [[LimpAndLivid breaks down]] and releases an ''AtomicFBomb''. [[{{Understatement}} Looks like she didn't take it well.]]
** When Makoto finds out who the real culprit is, Makoto loses her cool and shouts, "I'll fucking kill [[spoiler: him]]!"
* PunnyName: The OriginalCharacter who is the manager of the Grand Royal hotel is named '''Grant Roy Al'''bertson.
* RedOniBlueOni: Ryuji and Makoto respectively. Ryuji is brash, openly emotional, and confrontational. Makoto tends to be calm and reserved unless she's reacting to Ryuji's impulsiveness.
* ResentfulGuardian: Like in the game, Sae regards Makoto as more of a burden.
* ASinisterClue: [[spoiler: Akechi is left-handed and the killer who framed Ren.]]
* SkewedPriorities: Ann takes more time taking selfies just before meeting with the attorney who is attempting to exonerate her friend from a false murder charge.
* SoreLoser: Mia lampshades the fact about Sae when she has a meltdown in court after she loses her lead.
* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler: Akechi could have gotten away with the murder if not for Futaba. The hotel did not pursue the thief in the hoodie since they returned the bag without stealing anything in it. However, Futaba's hacking experience allows her to find the hooded figure and follow him back to Akechi's place. They never would have been able to open the safe without her either.]]
* TheUnfought: Munehisa Iwai is met at Untouchables, but he does not appear in court.
* UnwittingPawn: [[spoiler: Akechi had manipulated Sae into convicting Ren by putting forth evidence that would finger him as the murderer. He even openly gloats about it once he is caught.]]
* VictoriasSecretCompartment: When Mia finds [[spoiler: a notebook of Shido's containing a list of opponents that he has implied to have had killed]], she stuffs it away in her coat, wanting to keep this evidence from Sae on the chance that the police attempt to cover it up.
* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler: Akechi starts going full AxCrazy as Mia starts to corner him as being the true culprit. He's shouting and ranting against the evidence that Mia has laid out. Once there is no room for doubt, he releases a SkywardScream and breaks down sobbing before launching into his MotiveRant.]]
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27096310 Mia Fey: Ace Attorney – the Fool's Turnabout]]'' is an ''Franchise/AceAttorney''[=/=]''VideoGame/Persona5'' crossover fic written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Snarky_SilverHaired_Sociopath Snarky_SilverHaired_Sociopath]].
Mia Fey is a seasoned defense attorney starting up her own law office. One day, she gets a request from two high school students, Makoto Niijima and Ryuji Sakamoto. They come to her in the hopes that she would defend their friend, Ren Amamiya, after he was falsely accused of murder. With their help, she attempts to do everything she can to help defend the poor boy against the relentless methods of the case's prosecutor, Sae Niijima.
!!Tropes include:
* AbusiveParents: [[spoiler: Like in the game, Shido didn't care much about Goro, especially since he was born out of wedlock. He uses him as his own personal attack dog and planned discard him simply because he didn't think he was useful anymore. It's no surprise that Goro killed him.]]
* AcquittedTooLate: An example that doesn't involve death. Ren was about to be cleared of the assault charges against Shido when the police realized that there was some corruption going on about him. Unfortunately for him, he was framed for murder before his probation could be lifted. Thus, his probation was revoked.
* AdaptationPersonalityChange: Ohya is a lot more belligerent than she is in the game.
* AdaptationalVillainy: Sae's corrupt ways as a prosecutor are more intentional and ruthless than is implied in her game of origin. She behaves more like [[spoiler: her Shadow]] in this fic. It helps her fit in as an ''Ace Attorney'' prosecutor.
* AffectionateNickname: From [[Anime/Persona5TheAnimation the anime]], Ryuji has "Ren-Ren" for Amamiya.
* [[AloofBigBrother Aloof Big Sister]]: When Sae [[EstablishingCharacterMoment first appears]], she immediately treats everyone coldly, but she is also notably dismissive of Makoto. Makoto later expands upon this later.
* AlternateContinuity: The author notes that the timelines of ''VideoGame/Persona5'' and ''VisualNovel/PhoenixWrightAceAttorney'' both take place in 2016, allowing for there to be some overlap within the two games. However, they also note that some liberties had to be taken due to Mia's death in that game taking place in early September. It is implied that the Metaverse and the Phantom Thieves are a thing, it doesn't seem that they've made it to Okumura. The only target mentioned is Kamoshida and Futaba has stopped being as much of a shut-in as she was before.
* TheAlcoholic: Ohya is even more of a belligerent drunk in this fic.
* AmbiguouslyGay: Ohya seems to have an odd fascination with Mia's bust.
* AmoralAttorney: Sae Niijima is set up to be this the same way she was in the game, much like many ''Ace Attorney'' prosecutors. She is known for forcing confessions out of people, manipulating evidence, and doing just about anything in the pursuit of a guilty verdict. It's one thing that concerns both Akechi and Makoto.
* AntiVillain:
** While Sae fills the ''Ace Attorney'' role of the antagonistic prosecutor, she is not an inherently bad person. The stress of raising Makoto on her own, along with having to deal with the stresses of her job, drove her to the state of the AmoralAttorney she is.
** [[spoiler: Akechi. Despite the heinous actions he committed both for his father and framing Ren, he wanted to make sure that Shido was stopped. He couldn't trust anyone after being abandoned so many times in his life and he only wanted true friends like Ren. Mia acknowledges that he's just a sad kid in the end.]]
* ArtisticLicenseLaw:
** While not out of place in the ''Ace Attorney'' franchise, the author specifically acknowledges this in the notes of the second chapter. For the most part, the proceedings are carried out similarly to how they are in the visual novels and not based on how court cases work in real life.
** A specific example would be [[spoiler: Mia, Makoto, and Futaba getting away with breaking-and-entering and using illegally obtained evidence]]. These actions should realistically have them all arrested and Mia ''disbarred''.
* AssholeVictim: The victim was Masayoshi Shido, and anyone who has played ''P5'' knows that he will not be missed. His AttemptedRape of his subordinate was mentioned and Ren's intervention is the reason he was on probation in the first place. Mia also mentions that he had some potential connections to Redd White, a known blackmailer. [[spoiler: He used Goro to carry out hits (with the implication that it's through the Metaverse) with the intention of discarding him for not seeing much use for him anymore -- fully knowing that he was his son.]] Even Mia says that she doesn't consider his death a tragedy.
* BadassBookworm: Makoto is trained in aikido, and she gets a chance to show it off [[spoiler: when Akechi corners them]].
* BigBadEnsemble: Sae and the killer. Sae is the one trying to get Ren convicted for the murder while Mia must find who the real killer is that framed him. [[spoiler: It turns out that the killer, Akechi, is the true BigBad since he was also manipulating Sae.]]
* BitchInSheepsClothing: [[spoiler: While not too much of a surprise to ''P5'' fans, Akechi is the culprit. However, he presents himself as someone who is concerned about Sae convicting an innocent person. The same person he ''personally framed'' for murder.]]
* BuxomIsBetter: Both Ryuji and [[AmbiguouslyGay Ohya]] take notice of Mia's bustiness. Although, it seems that she might be somewhat self-conscious about it.
* CallingTheOldManOut: Makoto does this to Sae [[spoiler: when she's in the detention center]]. It seems that she took it to heart since she warms up in the end.
* TheCameo: Phoenix makes a brief appearance at the beginning of the first chapter, but he is not a major character in this story.
* ChivalrousPervert: Ryuji does seem to have some perverted tendencies such as encouraging Mia presenting her cleavage and being interested in Ann's bikini shoots -- she even uses this prospect to get him to escort her to a shoot. However, he is a genuinely good guy at heart. While he does make a comment about Mia being more that a pretty face and nice tits, Mia can tell that the sentiment he was trying to convey was genuine. And while Ann knows he'll be perving on him during the shoot, she trust him enough to have him along for protection if necessary.
* ContinuityNod: To both games the fic is based on.
** ''Franchise/AceAttorney'':
*** Mia mentions her investigations into Redd White.
*** Mia mentions meeting Gumshoe before, alluding to Case 3-4.
*** When Mia expresses disbelief in the idea of a high school student working with the police as a detective, she illustrates the audacity of it by mentioning the idea of a thirteen-year-old prosecutor. [[CallForward Anyone familiar with the franchise should already hear]] [[WhipItGood the whip cracking]].
*** When Mia meets Sojiro, Ryuji mentions his passion for coffee. Mia reminds herself of [[spoiler: her old boyfriend Diego Armando. She also mentions that he's currently in a coma.]]
** ''VideoGame/Persona5'': While there are many that factor into the plot itself, here are some minor ones:
*** Ryuji mentions his experiences with Kamoshida and almost seems gives away that they had a hand in exposing him.
*** [[spoiler: Shido's position in the Conspiracy is noted, and Akechi's role as his Metaverse hitman.]]
* DemotedToExtra: While Ren is the protagonist of ''Persona 5'', this story doesn't have him doing much and he is little more than a LivingProp. Justified due to the fact that he's the accused. He wouldn't be able to go with the group even if he wanted to, and ''Ace Attorney'' defendants typically aren't featured much throughout the case.
* DefrostingTheIceQueen: The intention of Makoto in this story, similar to the game. She wants to pull Sae out of the depths of cynicism that she has dropped herself into during her time as a prosecutor. [[spoiler: After seeing how corrupt the system was, losing the case, and being betrayed by Akechi, she finally does see the error of her ways and realizes what happened.]]
* DissonantSerenity: Even though his friends and attorney have passionate emotions about his situation, Ren still remains calm even in detention after being falsely charged for murder again. Mia is confused how she's more nervous about defending him than he is while ''being accused of murder''.
-->''Does'' anything ''faze him?''
* DodgyToupee: Albertson's toupee is described as pretty obvious and crappy by Mia. And he has plenty of spares. [[spoiler: It is implied one of them was used by the killer, but it was a RedHerring.]]
* EvenEvilCanBeLoved: [[spoiler: Ren admits that if not for everything Akechi did, he would have been friends with him.]]
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: [[spoiler: Goro's plan initially hinged on the idea that Ren's friends would leave him as soon as they found out he was a murderer and wouldn't do anything to help his case. So, he had to do everything he could to make sure that they wouldn't be able to convict anyone other than Ren.]]
* FirstPersonSmartass: In grand ''Ace Attorney'' tradition, Mia has her own amount of snark in the narration of the fic.
* {{Foil}}: Mia and Sae. Both of them are lawyers with younger sisters who look up to them. In addition, they have cases of ParentalAbandonment that pushed them into the path they are now. However, aside from the fact that Mia is a defense attorney and Sae is a prosecutor, they have some obvious differences. While Mia has become more idealistic and maintains [[CoolBigSis a better relationship with Maya]], Sae has grown bitter and cynical and has [[AloofBigBrother a strained relationship with Makoto at best]]. In addition, Mia does her best to practice law the honest way to [[CrusadingLawyer defend people who need defending]]. Sae is an AmoralAttorney who only cares about winning, even if that means doing things like forcing false confessions or manipulating evidence. This is something that helps Mia push Sae's CharacterDevelopment along.
* FrameUp: Like many ''Ace Attorney'' games, Ren is falsely accused and set up by the true murderer, and it's up to Mia to get him cleared of the charges.
* FreudianTrio: The protagonist and her companions. [[TheMcCoy Ryuji]] is the brash, hot-headed one while [[TheSpock Makoto]] tends to be the calm, level-headed one. [[TheKirk Mia]] has to act as a mediator between the two.
* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse:
** Mia understands Sae's struggle in the workplace dealing with sexism on top of the ruthlessness of the prosecutor's office, but she still calls her out by saying it doesn't excuse trying to convict Ren and what she says to Makoto.
** [[spoiler: While the characters understand why Akechi did what he did, none of them excuse it since he went out of his way to manipulate Sae and frame Ren. Ryuji even says that the fact that he used people makes him no better than his father. Akechi agrees.]]
* TheGlomp: Ryuji does this to Ren on the first and last days of the trial.
* GreenEyedMonster: [[spoiler: Goro's MotiveRant shows that he was jealous of Ren. While Goro had fans, he never had anyone close to him. During all his time observing him, he became resentful of [[MagneticHero how easy it was for Ren to pick up friends]] [[TrueCompanions who were so loyal to him and each other]]. This is why he thought to frame him for the murder.]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler: By the end of the fic, Sae is no longer antagonistic towards Mia and Ren.]]
* HeelRealization: It is a slow one, but [[spoiler: Sae comes to realize what she became over the course of the fic]].
* HotBlooded: Ryuji, much like canon, tends to have very strong emotions and is prone to being confrontational and shouting often.
* IncomingHam: Ohya knows how to make an entrance.
-->''"HOLD ON TO YOUR BUTTS, [[ThisIsForEmphasisBitch BITCHES]], BECAUSE THE PARTY IS HERE!"''
* JokeAndReceive: An example that serves as a CallForward. While astounded at the idea that a high school student could work with the police as a detective, she compares it to the idea of a thirteen-year-old prosecutor -- a pretty obvious reference to Franziska von Karma. With the timeframe of the fic, von Karma has already been a prosecutor for at least four years.
* JustAKid: When Makoto tried to confront Sae about her [[AmoralAttorney prosecuting methods]] in the past, Sae responded by saying she wouldn't understand since she's a kid.
* JustFollowingOrders: How Sae justifies her actions as an AmoralAttorney.
* TheKillerWasLeftHanded: [[spoiler: The security footage supposedly showing Ren had the killer shoving the gun in his coat using his left-hand. However, the prints recovered from the gun were from Ren's right hand.]]
* LampshadeHanging: The protagonists tend to point out their [[NoBadgeNoProblem legally dubious investigation methods]].
* LastSecondWordSwap: Mia looks like she's about to drop an f-bomb at one point out of frustration, but she composes herself and changes it to "fine."
* LimpAndLivid: The description of Sae after her supposedly airtight evidence was invalidated describes her this way.
* LowerDeckEpisode: To ''Persona 5''. While the Metaverse is implied to be used, it is presented from the perspective of someone who knows nothing about it. While the ''Ace Attorney'' is no stranger to supernatural happenings (Mia herself being a spirit medium from a family of mediums), there is nothing on that scale.
* MaskOfSanity: [[spoiler: Akechi]] puts up a good front, but it is later revealed to be borderline AxCrazy. [[spoiler: First shown when he corners Mia, Futaba, and Makoto in his place. The second is during his VillainousBreakdown during the third day of the trial.]]
* MsFanservice: Mia and Ann. Oddly enough, both of them {{lampshade|Hanging}} this aspect for the other. Mia narrates how Ann looks definitely fits a model. Ann openly goes into detail by saying that Mia looks like a model and mentions her face, [[BuxomIsBetter proportions]], [[ShesGotLegs legs]], and BeautyMark.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: Sae realizing that she was used as a pawn to prosecute an innocent person made her realize just how corrupt she was.]]
* NoodleIncident: Apparently, the Grand Royal got in some legal trouble over something to do with seafood.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Finding the real murderer enrages Makoto so much that she not only drops a PrecisionFStrike, but she also declares that she'll kill them. [[spoiler: Especially since it was someone who seemed to be helping them prove Ren's innocence.]]
* PrecisionFStrike: The fic does have some profanity, but never has any f-bombs. Ryuji comes the closest to that, but he only uses "eff" like in the game. However, there are two in this fic. Not only is it in a work that doesn't have f-bombs, but they also come from unlikely sources.
** When Sae loses her open-and-shut case, she [[LimpAndLivid breaks down]] and releases an ''AtomicFBomb''. [[{{Understatement}} Looks like she didn't take it well.]]
** When Makoto finds out who the real culprit is, Makoto loses her cool and shouts, "I'll fucking kill [[spoiler: him]]!"
* PunnyName: The OriginalCharacter who is the manager of the Grand Royal hotel is named '''Grant Roy Al'''bertson.
* RedOniBlueOni: Ryuji and Makoto respectively. Ryuji is brash, openly emotional, and confrontational. Makoto tends to be calm and reserved unless she's reacting to Ryuji's impulsiveness.
* ResentfulGuardian: Like in the game, Sae regards Makoto as more of a burden.
* ASinisterClue: [[spoiler: Akechi is left-handed and the killer who framed Ren.]]
* SkewedPriorities: Ann takes more time taking selfies just before meeting with the attorney who is attempting to exonerate her friend from a false murder charge.
* SoreLoser: Mia lampshades the fact about Sae when she has a meltdown in court after she loses her lead.
* SpannerInTheWorks: [[spoiler: Akechi could have gotten away with the murder if not for Futaba. The hotel did not pursue the thief in the hoodie since they returned the bag without stealing anything in it. However, Futaba's hacking experience allows her to find the hooded figure and follow him back to Akechi's place. They never would have been able to open the safe without her either.]]
* TheUnfought: Munehisa Iwai is met at Untouchables, but he does not appear in court.
* UnwittingPawn: [[spoiler: Akechi had manipulated Sae into convicting Ren by putting forth evidence that would finger him as the murderer. He even openly gloats about it once he is caught.]]
* VictoriasSecretCompartment: When Mia finds [[spoiler: a notebook of Shido's containing a list of opponents that he has implied to have had killed]], she stuffs it away in her coat, wanting to keep this evidence from Sae on the chance that the police attempt to cover it up.
* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler: Akechi starts going full AxCrazy as Mia starts to corner him as being the true culprit. He's shouting and ranting against the evidence that Mia has laid out. Once there is no room for doubt, he releases a SkywardScream and breaks down sobbing before launching into his MotiveRant.]]
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