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* BrownNote: Downplayed with [[spoiler:Shathra's]] voice, as it merely evokes a level of wrongness when she stops pretending to be human.
--> Okay. Fuck thaaaaat. [[spoiler:Shathra's]] disguised voice had sounded like something very badly playing at being a human, but when she wasn't pretending… I honestly wasn't certain that she was actually making words at all. She was a creature who dwelled in the Astral Realm, a dimension of pure psionic power, and it ''showed'', as her words ''crawled through my mind'', worming their way down my spine and making me shudder.
--> Okay. Fuck thaaaaat. [[spoiler:Shathra's]] disguised voice had sounded like something very badly playing at being a human, but when she wasn't pretending… I honestly wasn't certain that she was actually making words at all. She was a creature who dwelled in the Astral Realm, a dimension of pure psionic power, and it ''showed'', as her words ''crawled through my mind'', worming their way down my spine and making me shudder.
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* BavarianFireDrill: Ash is able to get into the CNN Building to confront [[spoiler:Shathra]] by pretending that she was asked to talk during one of their segments.
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** Ash calls the [[{{Franchise/Ghostbusters}} Ghostbusters]] to help with haunted NaziGold and to defeat [[spoiler:Shathra]].
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** Mister Sinister created Amelia in order to cause ''maximum'' [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/maverick-solutions-crime-doesnt-pay-enough-marvel-si.1066868/post-90629769 emotional damage]] [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/maverick-solutions-crime-doesnt-pay-enough-marvel-si.1066868/post-90850107 and confusion]] to [[spoiler:Emma Frost]].
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** Mister Sinister created Amelia the AMELIA Project in order to cause ''maximum'' [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/maverick-solutions-crime-doesnt-pay-enough-marvel-si.1066868/post-90629769 emotional damage]] [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/maverick-solutions-crime-doesnt-pay-enough-marvel-si.1066868/post-90850107 and confusion]] to [[spoiler:Emma Frost]].
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* CompositeCharacter: [[spoiler: Initially Godzilla seems to be primarily based on the versions from the classic films. Then during his fight with Legion, Godzilla's jaw splits open and he starts using ''[[Film/ShinGodzilla Shin Godzilla's]]'' Atomic Breath]].
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* AssimilationBackfire: [[spoiler:During their fight, John Sublime cuts off one of Ash's arms and grafts it to his body to start replenishing the biomass he lost fighting her. However he forgets the [[PlayingWithFire main property]] of H-cells and how they typically don't react well to foreigner tissue. He promptly catches on fire]].
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* OminousVisualGlitch: While eating with Kamala and Becky Ryan, Ash briefly sees a young Miles Morales and his family entering her pizza parlor before they shift into 616!Miles instead.
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** In issue 27 there are mentions of a massive white flash of light in orbit and Becky Ryan shows up at Me and the Boys, looking nervous and wearing bandages on one hand. [[spoiler:It's eventually revealed that the flash of light was a White Event and that Becky has become the host of the ''ComicBook/StarBrand'']].
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* HandCannon: Ash's choice of personal firearm is [[Franchise/RoboCop an OCP/Barretta Auto-9 machine-pistol]].
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* HandCannon: While wearing the Model 28 Iron Man armor, Ash wields [[Franchise/RoboCop an Auto-9 machine-pistol]].
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* GenreSavvy: Ash sometimes uses her knowledge of common comic tropes to her advantage.
** Ash anticipated Beautiful Garbage getting away with the plans they wanted from A.I.M., so she [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/maverick-solutions-crime-doesnt-pay-enough-marvel-si.1066868/post-91840086 sent Gil and Herman to Manufacturing in order to mess with the plans directly]], which allowed Ash to [[spoiler:follow them to their base and destroy it]].
** Ash anticipated Beautiful Garbage getting away with the plans they wanted from A.I.M., so she [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/maverick-solutions-crime-doesnt-pay-enough-marvel-si.1066868/post-91840086 sent Gil and Herman to Manufacturing in order to mess with the plans directly]], which allowed Ash to [[spoiler:follow them to their base and destroy it]].
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** Absynthe's Hyper-Adaptoid was [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/maverick-solutions-crime-doesnt-pay-enough-marvel-si.1066868/post-91840086 partially inspired]] by [[VideoGame/SystemShock SHODAN]].
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** Julia claims that Absynthe's Hyper-Adaptoid looks like [[VideoGame/SystemShock SHODAN]], and the author later confirms that it was [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/maverick-solutions-crime-doesnt-pay-enough-marvel-si.1066868/post-91840086 partially inspired]] by [[VideoGame/SystemShock SHODAN]].the later.
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** Members of the Winter Guard include [[Franchise/{{Rocky}} Colonel Drago]] and [[Franchise/StreetFighter Zangief]].
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** After Tony 2.0 fails to stop a robot from transmitting vital A.I.M. data, he laments:
---> [[Film/AvengersInfinityWar Should have gone for the head]]... or torso, as it was.
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* YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness: [[spoiler:During his fight with Ash, Sublime reveals that the U-Men had always been an R&D project rather than his true end goal and that he's already gotten everything he could out of them. So he sent the bulk of them to attack New York, knowing that the city's massive super population will inevitably wipe them all out. He considers [[EvilIsPetty destroying her office and killing all her other employees to be a bonus]]]].
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** Julia the Beekeeper threatens to [[Film/SpiderMan1 skeletonize]] one of her ex-coworkers in order to get their assistance in getting through the defenses of an A.I.M. base.
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* MonumentalDamage: [[spoiler:The U-Men destroy the Statue of Liberty when they begin their attack on New York]].
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** On [[ComicBook/MarvelNoir Earth-90214]], Ash opened a detective agency called Maverick Investigations.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Sandman is Normal Osborn's third cousin through the former's ex-wife Emma Osborn.
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** In this fic, Yuriko Watanabe's grandmother, who Ash hired as a secretary, is Marnie, aka Rumor.
** Sandman is Normal Osborn's third cousin through the former's ex-wife Emma Osborn.
** In this fic, Yuriko Watanabe's grandmother, who Ash hired as a secretary, is Marnie, aka Rumor.
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** When trying to hack the systems of an A.I.M. base, one of the Beekeepers notes that they make use of {{Mini Game}}s and that ''VideoGame/{{Galaga}}'' is only to be used for stuff relating to [[Film/TheAvengers2012 SHIELD infiltration and data recovery]].
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** Julia the Beekeeper threatens to [[Film/SpiderMan1 skeletonize]] one of her ex-coworkers in order to get their assistance in getting through the defenses of an A.I.M. base.
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* EvilNerd: Julia Blevins, one of the Beekeepers, self-identifies as this and outright says a lot of members of A.I.M. is as well.
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* EvilNerd: Julia Blevins, one of the Beekeepers, self-identifies as this and outright says a lot of members of A.I.M. is as well.
--> "Hmmm…" Julia cocked her head to the side as the terminal screen flashed. The entire A.I.M. internal security system was absolutely fascinating, because it had to be relatively beginner friendly (by A.I.M. standards), and also able to resist intrusion from the various super-hackers and other meddlers who always broke in. Thus, the ultimate, mildly idiotic solution. The actual system, alongside the command-line interface, included a variety of what could be most charitably be referred to as 'minigames', graphic-assisted tasks that had to be completed in the proper order to hook up. God, A.I.M. were such ''nerds'', and absolutely proud of it.\\
Julia had to giggle again. She totally resembled that label. It was probably the glasses. But everyone told her they were cute though, so she didn't really mind.
--> "Hmmm…" Julia cocked her head to the side as the terminal screen flashed. The entire A.I.M. internal security system was absolutely fascinating, because it had to be relatively beginner friendly (by A.I.M. standards), and also able to resist intrusion from the various super-hackers and other meddlers who always broke in. Thus, the ultimate, mildly idiotic solution. The actual system, alongside the command-line interface, included a variety of what could be most charitably be referred to as 'minigames', graphic-assisted tasks that had to be completed in the proper order to hook up. God, A.I.M. were such ''nerds'', and absolutely proud of it.\\
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Both Ash and Emma Frost are still recovering from [[spoiler:the Genosha Massacre]] when they meet, inadvertently making things worse for the both of them when the latter's telepathy goes out of control, forcing their traumas to feed into one another.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Both Ash and Emma Frost are still recovering from [[spoiler:the Genosha Massacre]] when they meet, inadvertently [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/maverick-solutions-crime-doesnt-pay-enough-marvel-si.1066868/post-91016565 making things worse for the both of them them]] when the latter's telepathy goes out of control, forcing their traumas to feed into one another.
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* CanonWelding: The author has [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/89964614 selected certain properties published by Marvel]] to be added into the story. She later explains that they are going to stick to things that either [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/89966696 crossed over with Marvel in a way that is at least semi-canon, or actually licensed out to Marvel]]. Several other properties are or aren't included [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/posts/6609802 depending on whether or not the author thinks they can slot them in]].
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* CanonWelding: The author has [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/89964614 selected certain properties published by Marvel]] to be added into the story. She later explains that they are she is going to stick to things that either [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/89966696 crossed over with Marvel in a way that is at least semi-canon, or actually licensed out to Marvel]]. Several other properties are or aren't included [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/posts/6609802 depending on whether or not the author thinks they can slot them in]].
