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** In this story, the Inheritors are the descended from the Elder God Hyppus.
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** In this story, the Inheritors are the descended from the Elder God Hyppus.
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** In this story, the Inheritors are the descended from the Elder God Hyppus.
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* ThemeNaming: Most of Sublime's lieutenants are named after the demons from the ''Literature/ArsGoetia''.
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* NonIndicativeName: Even though the Fearsome Five get a [[SixthRanger sixth member]], an octogenarian GetawayDriver named James, they don't change their team's name.
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted. Ash books an appointment with one in order to help process her feelings after [[spoiler:her fight with the Wild Sentinels and the Genosha Massacre]].
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* ThereAreNoTherapists: Averted. Several characters see therapists in order to cope with the traumatic events they've experienced.
** Ash books an appointment with one in order to help process her feelings after [[spoiler:her fight with the Wild Sentinels and the GenoshaMassacre]].Massacre]].
** Becky Ryan starts seeing a therapist after [[spoiler:her father was arrested]].
** Ash books an appointment with one in order to help process her feelings after [[spoiler:her fight with the Wild Sentinels and the Genosha
** Becky Ryan starts seeing a therapist after [[spoiler:her father was arrested]].
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* FriendlessBackground: Becky Ryan laments that, because of the lifestyle forced upon her by her father, she never got to make any real friends before she met Ash.
--> Becky actually had trouble remembering if there'd ever been a time when she felt normal. It had all been contests and pageants. Being tugged around by the hand by her dad, rushing through crowds to talk with event organizers and talent agents. She'd always tried to talk with the other kids, but... their parents would shush them, and pull them away. She was competition after all.
--> Becky actually had trouble remembering if there'd ever been a time when she felt normal. It had all been contests and pageants. Being tugged around by the hand by her dad, rushing through crowds to talk with event organizers and talent agents. She'd always tried to talk with the other kids, but... their parents would shush them, and pull them away. She was competition after all.
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** Members of the Oktober Guard include [[Franchise/{{Rocky}} Colonel Drago]] and [[Franchise/StreetFighter Zangief]].
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** Members of the Oktober Guard and Winter Guard include [[Franchise/{{Rocky}} Colonel Drago]] and [[Franchise/StreetFighter Zangief]].Zangief]] respectively.
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** Members of the Winter Guard include [[Franchise/{{Rocky}} Colonel Drago]] and [[Franchise/StreetFighter Zangief]].
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** Members of the Winter Oktober Guard include [[Franchise/{{Rocky}} Colonel Drago]] and [[Franchise/StreetFighter Zangief]].
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Ash [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/97381021 thinks there's no way]] [[spoiler:Johnny Cage is the same one she's familiar with]].
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* CanonWelding: The author has [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/89964614 selected certain properties published by Marvel]] to be added into the story. She later explains that she is going to stick to things that either [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/89966696 crossed over with Marvel in a way that is at least semi-canon, or actually licensed out to Marvel]]. Several other properties are or aren't included [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/posts/6609802 depending on whether or not the author thinks they can slot them in]].
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* CanonWelding: The author has [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/89964614 selected certain properties published by Marvel]] to be added into the story. She later explains that she is going to stick to things that either [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/89966696 crossed over with Marvel in a way that is at least semi-canon, or actually licensed out to Marvel]]. Several other properties are or aren't included [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/posts/6609802 depending on whether or not the author thinks they can slot them in]]. It's later explained that [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/97369585 licensed comics done by companies that Marvel acquired]] will be considered and that [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/97376632 the author's policy on this trope is they have to be able to be fit in a relatively seamless way]].
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* ObliviousToHisOwnDescription: Some of the reasons Doctor Doom finds [[SurroundedByIdiots the members of Norman's Cabal insufferable]] are the Leader's [[InsufferableGenius ego regarding his intellect]], Norman's [[DidntThinkThisThrough lack of foresight]] or clear goal, and Selene's [[EvilIsPetty pettiness]] and obsession with Maverick. All of these things can also apply to Doom himself, and he never realizes this for a moment.
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** [[spoiler:Two of the members of Doom's Cabal are [[Franchise/StreetFighter M. Bison]] and [[Franchise/MortalKombat Kano]]]].
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** [[spoiler:Two of the members of Doom's Kingsley's Cabal are [[Franchise/StreetFighter M. Bison]] and [[Franchise/MortalKombat Kano]]]].
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** The "Unthinkable" storyline from ''Fantastic Four'' Vol 3 is revealed to have been a ploy by Doom using bio-androids to distract the Fantastic Four from [[spoiler:intervening in the plans of his iteration of the Cabal]].
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** The "Unthinkable" storyline from ''Fantastic Four'' Vol 3 is revealed to have been a ploy by Doom using bio-androids to distract the Fantastic Four from [[spoiler:intervening in the plans of his Kingsley's iteration of the Cabal]].
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* SurroundedByIdiots: [[spoiler:Doom quickly tires of his fellow Cabal members, becoming fed up with their egos and lack of vision. He rectifies this by forming a new Cabal made up of people he finds more tolerable]].
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* SurroundedByIdiots: [[spoiler:Doom quickly tires of his fellow Cabal members, becoming fed up with their egos and lack of vision. He rectifies this by forming joining a new Cabal made up of people he finds more tolerable]].
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* UnwittingPawn: Special Issue #4 reveals that Maria Hill has been under the subtle control of [[spoiler:Norman Osborn for an indeterminate amount of time, and that this control has been hijacked by Roderick Kingsley and his Cabal for their own purposes]].
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* ActuallyADoombot: Both WordOfGod and Doctor Doom's POV in Special Issue #4 reveal that Doom's previous appearances in the story were actually his adoptive son/body double Kristoff Vernard or a Doombot.
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* ActuallyADoombot: Both WordOfGod and Doctor Doom's POV in Special Issue #4 reveal that Doom's previous appearances in the story were actually his adoptive son/body ward and body double Kristoff Vernard or a Doombot.
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* ActuallyADoombot: Both WordOfGod and Doctor Doom's POV in Special Issue #4 reveal that Doom's previous appearances in the story were actually his adoptive son/body double Kristoff Vernard or a Doombot.
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** The first chapter has the Tinkerer mention that the Mark IV Crimson Dynamo Armor is made of a carborundum matrix alloy. However, every other time it's said to be made of carbonadium instead. The author [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/90267395 admits she mixed up a key element of their story due to their similar sounding names]] but decided to roll with it as it was too late to change it.
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** The first chapter issue has the Tinkerer mention that the Mark IV Crimson Dynamo Armor is made of a carborundum matrix alloy. However, every other time it's said to be made of carbonadium instead. The author [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/90267395 admits she mixed up a key element of their story due to their similar sounding names]] but decided to roll with it as it was too late to change it.
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** Ash's "Hero Suit" Mark II looks very similar to [[Series/KamenRider555 the Faiz Armor]].
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** Ash's appearance is based off of ''[[Franchise/FateSeries Fate]]'' Mordred. The fact that this makes her a Saberface has been [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/90109286 pointed]] [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/90113201 out]] by the readers. [[spoiler:Over the course of events post Ragnarok, she begins to more resemble Morgan le Fay from the same series, through her hair turning white and the physical changes as a result of her powers.]]
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** Ash's appearance is based off of ''[[Franchise/FateSeries Fate]]'' Mordred. The fact that this makes her a Saberface has been [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/90109286 pointed]] [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/90113201 out]] by the readers. [[spoiler:Over the course of events post Ragnarok, she begins to more resemble [[https://forum.questionablequesting.com/posts/7622973 Morgan le Fay Fay]] from the same series, through her hair turning white and the physical changes as a result of her powers.]]
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* ExistentialHorror: Reboots are [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/96697469 a source of this for Ash]].
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* HealthcareMotivation: Inverted. Sandman joins Maverick in order to get a steady paycheck to pay off his daughter Penny's medical expenses.
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** Inverted. Sandman joins Maverick in order to get a steady paycheck to pay off his daughter Penny's medicalexpenses.expenses.
** Absorbing Man joins Maverick for the same reason as Sandman, only it's for his wife instead of a daughter.
** Inverted. Sandman joins Maverick in order to get a steady paycheck to pay off his daughter Penny's medical
** Absorbing Man joins Maverick for the same reason as Sandman, only it's for his wife instead of a daughter.
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* CompositeCharacter: [[spoiler: Initially Godzilla seems to be primarily based on the version from the Marvel comic with elements from the classic films thrown in. Then during his fight with Legion, Godzilla's jaw splits open and he starts using ''[[Film/ShinGodzilla Shin Godzilla's]]'' Atomic Breath]].
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* CompositeCharacter: [[spoiler: Initially [[spoiler:Initially Godzilla seems to be primarily based on the version from the Marvel comic with elements from the classic films thrown in. Then during his fight with Legion, Godzilla's jaw splits open and he starts using ''[[Film/ShinGodzilla Shin Godzilla's]]'' Atomic Breath]].Breath]].
* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: Ash reveals that most street level career supervillains either become this or go crazy.
--> Aleksei was the exception that proves the rule: a lot of street level villains had become very burned out, especially those with multi-decade long careers. I'd seen it in a lot of folk at the Bar with No Name. When you survived as a supervillain for more than five years, two things tended to happen. Either you started treating it like just another nine-to-five where you went to jail sometimes and rarely got to keep your paychecks, or you went around the bend and went nuts in some way or another.
* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: Ash reveals that most street level career supervillains either become this or go crazy.
--> Aleksei was the exception that proves the rule: a lot of street level villains had become very burned out, especially those with multi-decade long careers. I'd seen it in a lot of folk at the Bar with No Name. When you survived as a supervillain for more than five years, two things tended to happen. Either you started treating it like just another nine-to-five where you went to jail sometimes and rarely got to keep your paychecks, or you went around the bend and went nuts in some way or another.
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* AbandonedWarehouse: After Ash runs into one too many of these being in good condition and used as a base by bad guys, she asks some heroes about this, who note that she might be onto something.
--> '''Luke Cage:''' I remember a few years back, there was someone working for The Kingpin. Called themselves 'The Realtor', was involved in schemes pretty much like you described. But they vanished completely after about a year. I thought that the Punisher got'em... but this is kinda suspicious.
--> '''Luke Cage:''' I remember a few years back, there was someone working for The Kingpin. Called themselves 'The Realtor', was involved in schemes pretty much like you described. But they vanished completely after about a year. I thought that the Punisher got'em... but this is kinda suspicious.
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* ComicBookTime: This is actually a universal force that's [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/96657464 been commented on by some characters in-universe]].
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* ComicBookTime: This is actually a universal force that's [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/96523106 been commented]] [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/96657464 been commented on by some characters in-universe]].in-universe]].
* CompositeCharacter: [[spoiler: Initially Godzilla seems to be primarily based on the version from the Marvel comic with elements from the classic films thrown in. Then during his fight with Legion, Godzilla's jaw splits open and he starts using ''[[Film/ShinGodzilla Shin Godzilla's]]'' Atomic Breath]].
* CompositeCharacter: [[spoiler: Initially Godzilla seems to be primarily based on the version from the Marvel comic with elements from the classic films thrown in. Then during his fight with Legion, Godzilla's jaw splits open and he starts using ''[[Film/ShinGodzilla Shin Godzilla's]]'' Atomic Breath]].
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* CompositeCharacter: [[spoiler: Initially Godzilla seems to be primarily based on the version from the Marvel comic with elements from the classic films thrown in. Then during his fight with Legion, Godzilla's jaw splits open and he starts using ''[[Film/ShinGodzilla Shin Godzilla's]]'' Atomic Breath]].
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** Maria Hill's extreme stance against superheroes is revealed to be a result of being mind controlled by Norman Osborn.
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** Maria Hill's extreme stance against superheroes is revealed to be a result of being [[spoiler:being mind controlled by Norman Osborn.Osborn]].
