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The story is not for the light-hearted, however, as the author dives deep into a Machiavellianism-esque horror show of nightmare fuel and poignant intrigue, with a sample paragraph such as:
* <em>I feel it grow inside me, something sick and distorted, living (and dying) as chaotic beauty. To call it energy wouldn’t be completely true, as it’s closer to just a state of emotion running wild in my veins, vibrating and rushing towards the exit. It wants out, it wants to be released into the world to join the rest of the cursed, wretched, wicked power laying siege on the country. It cries out at night when the moon’s gone and I can’t hear Toge’s soft breaths because cotton fills my ears, sap shuts my eyes, and iron-tinged sweat weighs me down into a stifling cocoon. </em>
* <em>I feel it grow inside me, something sick and distorted, living (and dying) as chaotic beauty. To call it energy wouldn’t be completely true, as it’s closer to just a state of emotion running wild in my veins, vibrating and rushing towards the exit. It wants out, it wants to be released into the world to join the rest of the cursed, wretched, wicked power laying siege on the country. It cries out at night when the moon’s gone and I can’t hear Toge’s soft breaths because cotton fills my ears, sap shuts my eyes, and iron-tinged sweat weighs me down into a stifling cocoon. </em>
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The story is not for defies the light-hearted, however, as the author dives deep into a Machiavellianism-esque horror show of nightmare fuel and poignant intrigue, standard self-insert formula, with a near parody of GodModeSue in the form of Tomoe acknowledging the ridiculous power imbalances between sorcerer abilities, and often thinking of herself as a non-human creature. The sample paragraph such as:
* <em>I feel it grow inside me, something sickbelow highlights this:
*''We walk among the stars anddistorted, living (and dying) as chaotic beauty. To call it energy wouldn’t be completely true, as it’s closer to just ourselves gods. We wear a state crown of emotion running wild broken antlers in my veins, vibrating someone else’s dignity and rushing towards shame. We’re different, us versus them, us versus the exit. It wants out, it wants to world, and there’s never any changing that. We’ll be released into alone, high in the world to join clouds, asking the rest of sun to set and the cursed, wretched, wicked power laying siege on the country. It cries out at night when the moon’s gone and I can’t hear Toge’s soft breaths because cotton fills my ears, sap shuts my eyes, and iron-tinged sweat weighs me down into a stifling cocoon. </em>
moon to rise.''
* <em>I feel it grow inside me, something sick
*''We walk among the stars and
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The story is not for the light-hearted, however, as the author dives deep into a Machiavellianism-esque horror show of nightmare fuel and poignant intrigue, with a sample paragraph such as:
*<em>I feel it grow inside me, something sick and distorted, living (and dying) as chaotic beauty. To call it energy wouldn’t be completely true, as it’s closer to just a state of emotion running wild in my veins, vibrating and rushing towards the exit. It wants out, it wants to be released into the world to join the rest of the cursed, wretched, wicked power laying siege on the country. It cries out at night when the moon’s gone and I can’t hear Toge’s soft breaths because cotton fills my ears, sap shuts my eyes, and iron-tinged sweat weighs me down into a stifling cocoon. </em>
*<em>I feel it grow inside me, something sick and distorted, living (and dying) as chaotic beauty. To call it energy wouldn’t be completely true, as it’s closer to just a state of emotion running wild in my veins, vibrating and rushing towards the exit. It wants out, it wants to be released into the world to join the rest of the cursed, wretched, wicked power laying siege on the country. It cries out at night when the moon’s gone and I can’t hear Toge’s soft breaths because cotton fills my ears, sap shuts my eyes, and iron-tinged sweat weighs me down into a stifling cocoon. </em>
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* Child Soldiers: Classic shounen anime. What did you expect?
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* Child Soldiers: ChildSoldiers: Classic shounen anime. What did you expect?
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''making sure my brother has both arms by the time he turns 18: a story''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38037781/chapters/95007688]] by author {{lulu_lisbon}} is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction in the Jujutsu Kaisen fandom.
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* {{Body Motifs}}
** A loss of bodily anonymity and control makes frequent appearances.
* {{Burn the Witch}}:
** The Inumaki twins are not treated very well.
* {{Character Signature Song}}:
** All characters have an associated music genre/style in Tomoe's narration. Often used to indirectly highlight each character's personality.
* {{Child Soldiers}}:
** Classic shounen anime. What did you expect?
* {{Coming of Age Story}}:
** The entire fic details the growth of Tomoe and her peers. Notably, she has changed from a passive child to a manipulative and cunning planner.
* {{Deconstructed Character Archetype}}:
** Gojo and Tomoe are meant to be protagonist heroes in this story, but they are repeatedly shown to have manipulative, sly, and villain-type traits.
*** Example: [[spoiler: Gojo's non-sexual grooming of his students]]
*** Example: [[spoiler: Tomoe willingly using her sexuality and Gojo's trust in her to manipulate him]]
* {{Did They Or Didnt They}}:
** Tomoe may or may not have slept with [[spoiler:Hakari]] and/or [[spoiler:Kirara]]. Even the readers don't know.
* {{Most Writers Are Adults}}:
** All of the teenage characters' intellect is interchangeable with the adults.
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* {{Next Life as a Fictional Character}}:
** The woes of self-insert fanfiction. Tomoe can't help it!
* {{Power Dynamics Squick}}:
** Naoya is betrayed by the boner despite his insistence on being a Sigma Male.
* {{Price of Power Index}}:
** See: cursed speech.
* {{Red Light District}}:
** Akihabara. Or, Hakari being himself.
* {{Sibling YinYang}}:
** Tomoe and Toge are similar in many ways, but Tomoe is notably more mature whilst Toge can sometimes be bullheaded. Tomoe is a front-line fighter, pushed into the spotlight constantly even when she doesn't want to. Toge is classified as a "ninja," using weaponry and taking enemies out in the shadows. The little brother also seems to have healthier friendships with people his age, out of the influence of Gojo.
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* {{Tell Me About My Father}}:
** Tomoe and Toge don't care, this trope is interestingly averted when it would otherwise be common. Tomoe has a huge mother complex and really only values feminine relationships, whilst Toge is raised by a mother and a sister figure and thus finds male guardians unnecessary, especially after Gojo.
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* {{Tell Me About My Father}}:
** Tomoe and Toge don't care, this trope is interestingly averted when it would otherwise be common. Tomoe has a huge mother complex and really only values feminine relationships, whilst Toge is raised by a mother and a sister figure and thus finds male guardians unnecessary, especially after Gojo.
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* {{Youth Is Wasted on the Dumb}}:
** Megumi's soy sauce drinking habit.
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*{{Story Breaker Power}}:
**All special grade sorcerers, pretty much.
***Gojo's six eyes with infinity. Yaga's cursed puppets. Yuuta unleashing Rika to do unfathomable damage. Tomoe's reality bending, death-defying cursed speech.
*{{Tell Me About My Father}}:
**Tomoe and Toge don't care, this trope is interestingly averted when it would otherwise be common. Tomoe has a huge mother complex and really only values feminine relationships, whilst Toge is raised by a mother and a sister figure and thus finds male guardians unnecessary, especially after Gojo.
*{{Wham Episode}}:
**Chapter 6: The status quo of the story is dramatically altered and we see into Tomoe's psyche and line of thought once it is revealed that [[spoiler:being a mother]] is a core part of her identity that she lost, and she's willing to [[spoiler:revive the cursed wombs]] to gain piety from them.
**Chapter 8: Tomoe [[spoiler:destroys Geto Suguru's corpse so that Kenjaku can't use it]].
**Chapter 12: The Inumaki Clan is elevated in status, much to many people's dismay.
**All special grade sorcerers, pretty much.
***Gojo's six eyes with infinity. Yaga's cursed puppets. Yuuta unleashing Rika to do unfathomable damage. Tomoe's reality bending, death-defying cursed speech.
*{{Tell Me About My Father}}:
**Tomoe and Toge don't care, this trope is interestingly averted when it would otherwise be common. Tomoe has a huge mother complex and really only values feminine relationships, whilst Toge is raised by a mother and a sister figure and thus finds male guardians unnecessary, especially after Gojo.
*{{Wham Episode}}:
**Chapter 6: The status quo of the story is dramatically altered and we see into Tomoe's psyche and line of thought once it is revealed that [[spoiler:being a mother]] is a core part of her identity that she lost, and she's willing to [[spoiler:revive the cursed wombs]] to gain piety from them.
**Chapter 8: Tomoe [[spoiler:destroys Geto Suguru's corpse so that Kenjaku can't use it]].
**Chapter 12: The Inumaki Clan is elevated in status, much to many people's dismay.
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*{{Sibling Yin-Yang}}:
**Tomoe and Toge are similar in many ways, but Tomoe is notably more mature whilst Toge can sometimes be bullheaded. Tomoe is a front-line fighter, pushed into the spotlight constantly even when she doesn't want to. Toge is classified as a "ninja," using weaponry and taking enemies out in the shadows. The little brother also seems to have healthier friendships with people his age, out of the influence of Gojo.
**Tomoe and Toge are similar in many ways, but Tomoe is notably more mature whilst Toge can sometimes be bullheaded. Tomoe is a front-line fighter, pushed into the spotlight constantly even when she doesn't want to. Toge is classified as a "ninja," using weaponry and taking enemies out in the shadows. The little brother also seems to have healthier friendships with people his age, out of the influence of Gojo.
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*{{Body Motifs}}
**A loss of bodily anonymity and control makes frequent appearances.
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*{{Character Signature Song}}:
**All characters have an associated music genre/style in Tomoe's narration. Often used to indirectly highlight each character's personality.
**All characters have an associated music genre/style in Tomoe's narration. Often used to indirectly highlight each character's personality.
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*{{Deconstructed Character Archetype}}:
**Gojo and Tomoe are meant to be protagonist heroes in this story, but they are repeatedly shown to have manipulative, sly, and villain-type traits.
***Example: [[spoiler: Gojo's non-sexual grooming of his students]]
***Example: [[spoiler: Tomoe willingly using her sexuality and Gojo's trust in her to manipulate him]]
**Gojo and Tomoe are meant to be protagonist heroes in this story, but they are repeatedly shown to have manipulative, sly, and villain-type traits.
***Example: [[spoiler: Gojo's non-sexual grooming of his students]]
***Example: [[spoiler: Tomoe willingly using her sexuality and Gojo's trust in her to manipulate him]]
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*{{A God Am I}}:
**Gojo thinks himself above the rest of the world.
**This fic specifically highlights how mentally out of shape Gojo is compared to others. No more romantic nice guy.
**Gojo thinks himself above the rest of the world.
**This fic specifically highlights how mentally out of shape Gojo is compared to others. No more romantic nice guy.
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** Tomoe narrates a form of "communication" with the death paintings, usually in the form of dreaming and/or agonising over bloody pulps of leftover fetal remains.
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** Tomoe narrates a form of "communication" with the [[spoiler:the death paintings, paintings]], usually in the form of dreaming and/or agonising over bloody pulps of leftover fetal remains.
[[spoiler:fetal remains]].
*{{Burn the Witch}}:
**The Inumaki twins are not treated very well.
*{{Burn the Witch}}:
**The Inumaki twins are not treated very well.
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*{{Bloody Horror}}:
**On par with a Jujutsu Kaisen story.
**Tomoe narrates a form of "communication" with the death paintings, usually in the form of dreaming and/or agonising over bloody pulps of leftover fetal remains.
*{{Child Soldiers}}:
**Classic shounen anime. What did you expect?
*{{Coming of Age Story}}:
**The entire fic details the growth of Tomoe and her peers. Notably, she has changed from a passive child to a manipulative and cunning planner.
**On par with a Jujutsu Kaisen story.
**Tomoe narrates a form of "communication" with the death paintings, usually in the form of dreaming and/or agonising over bloody pulps of leftover fetal remains.
*{{Child Soldiers}}:
**Classic shounen anime. What did you expect?
*{{Coming of Age Story}}:
**The entire fic details the growth of Tomoe and her peers. Notably, she has changed from a passive child to a manipulative and cunning planner.
*{{Most Writers Are Adults}}:
**All of the teenage characters' intellect is interchangeable with the adults.
**All of the teenage characters' intellect is interchangeable with the adults.
*{{Next Life as a Fictional Character}}:
**The woes of self-insert fanfiction. Tomoe can't help it!
**The woes of self-insert fanfiction. Tomoe can't help it!
*{{Price of Power Index}}:
**See: cursed speech.
**See: cursed speech.
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** Gojo is sexually repressed because boohoo, he's too paranoid to be intimate with anyone. Tomoe heavily suspects it is being taken out on her, with his mommy issues.issues.
*{{Youth Is Wasted on the Dumb}}:
**Megumi's soy sauce drinking habit.
*{{Youth Is Wasted on the Dumb}}:
**Megumi's soy sauce drinking habit.
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''making sure my brother has both arms by the time he turns 18: a story'' by author {{lulu_lisbon}} is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction in the Jujutsu Kaisen fandom.
Other side stories and fanart can be found in the links below.
* Link to fanart by tryllesofbirdsongs on tumblr
* Link to general fanart by lulu_lisbon on tumblr
* Link to assorted side stories and crossovers of Tomoe on a "ramblings" page
Other side stories and fanart can be found in the links below.
* Link to fanart by tryllesofbirdsongs on tumblr
* Link to general fanart by lulu_lisbon on tumblr
* Link to assorted side stories and crossovers of Tomoe on a "ramblings" page
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''making sure my brother has both arms by the time he turns 18: a story'' story''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38037781/chapters/95007688]] by author {{lulu_lisbon}} is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction in the Jujutsu Kaisen fandom.
Other side stories and fanart can be found in the links below.
* Link to fanart by tryllesofbirdsongs on tumblr
* Link to general fanart by lulu_lisbon on tumblr
* Link to assorted side stories and crossovers of Tomoe on a "ramblings" page
* Link to fanart by tryllesofbirdsongs on tumblr
* Link to general fanart by lulu_lisbon on tumblr
* Link to assorted side stories and crossovers of Tomoe on a "ramblings" page
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''making sure my brother has both arms by the time he turns 18: a story'' by author lulu_lisbon is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction in the Jujutsu Kaisen fandom.
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''making sure my brother has both arms by the time he turns 18: a story'' by author lulu_lisbon {{lulu_lisbon}} is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction in the Jujutsu Kaisen fandom.
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** Tomoe and Gojo's entire relationship.
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** Tomoe and Gojo's entire relationship.relationship.
*You Need To Get Laid:
**Gojo is sexually repressed because boohoo, he's too paranoid to be intimate with anyone. Tomoe heavily suspects it is being taken out on her, with his mommy issues.
*You Need To Get Laid:
**Gojo is sexually repressed because boohoo, he's too paranoid to be intimate with anyone. Tomoe heavily suspects it is being taken out on her, with his mommy issues.
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* Naoya is betrayed by the boner despite his insistence on being a Sigma Male.
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*Red Light District:
**Akihabara. Or, Hakari being himself.
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*Did They Or Didn't They?:
**Tomoe may or may not have slept with [[spoiler:Hakari]] and/or [[spoiler:Kirara]]. Even the readers don't know.
**Tomoe may or may not have slept with [[spoiler:Hakari]] and/or [[spoiler:Kirara]]. Even the readers don't know.
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** Visceral descriptions of dead babies.babies.
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**Tomoe and Gojo's entire relationship.
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**Tomoe and Gojo's entire relationship.
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** Toge and Megumi become parkour/free running enthusiasts.enthusiasts.
*Nausea Fuel:
**Gojo is heavily implied to have mommy issues and uses Tomoe as a step-in figure.
***Tomoe notes that although they don't share any romantic interest, Gojo is still inappropriately attached to her.
**[[spoiler:Childbirth]]
**Naoya is implied to be sexually aroused when
*Nausea Fuel:
**Gojo is heavily implied to have mommy issues and uses Tomoe as a step-in figure.
***Tomoe notes that although they don't share any romantic interest, Gojo is still inappropriately attached to her.
**[[spoiler:Childbirth]]
**Naoya is implied to be sexually aroused when
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''making sure my brother has both arms by the time he turns 18: a story,'' alternatively called ''making sure my brother'' or ''MSMBHBABTTHT18:AS'' by author lulu_lisbon is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction in the Jujutsu Kaisen fandom.
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''making sure my brother has both arms by the time he turns 18: a story,'' alternatively called ''making sure my brother'' or ''MSMBHBABTTHT18:AS'' story'' by author lulu_lisbon is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction in the Jujutsu Kaisen fandom.
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A young woman from our world is reincarnated into Inumaki Tomoe, the twin sister of the character Inumaki Toge. The story starts from Tomoe's childhood and continues into the Jujutsu Tech years, where she tries to move the plot in a way that her brother keeps both arms during the pinnacle Shibuya attack, but all of her actions have consequences.
''making sure my brother has both arms by the time he turns 18: a story,'' alternatively called ''making sure my brother'' or ''MSMBHBABTTHT18:AS'' by author lulu_lisbon is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction in the Jujutsu Kaisen fandom.
Other side stories and fanart can be found in the links below.
*Link to fanart by tryllesofbirdsongs on tumblr
*Link to general fanart by lulu_lisbon on tumblr
*Link to assorted side stories and crossovers of Tomoe on a "ramblings" page
''making sure my brother has both arms by the time he turns 18: a story'' contains examples of:
*Adaptational Badass
**Toge becomes a ninja.
**Toge and Megumi become parkour/free running enthusiasts.
''making sure my brother has both arms by the time he turns 18: a story,'' alternatively called ''making sure my brother'' or ''MSMBHBABTTHT18:AS'' by author lulu_lisbon is an ongoing self-insert fanfiction in the Jujutsu Kaisen fandom.
Other side stories and fanart can be found in the links below.
*Link to fanart by tryllesofbirdsongs on tumblr
*Link to general fanart by lulu_lisbon on tumblr
*Link to assorted side stories and crossovers of Tomoe on a "ramblings" page
''making sure my brother has both arms by the time he turns 18: a story'' contains examples of:
*Adaptational Badass
**Toge becomes a ninja.
**Toge and Megumi become parkour/free running enthusiasts.