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* FirstKiss: Between Kirito and Yuuna in chapter 6. [[note]]Chapter 6: InHuman Morality[[/note]]
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* FirstKiss: Between Kirito and Yuuna in chapter 6. [[note]]Chapter 6: InHuman [=InHuman=] Morality[[/note]]
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* InstantExpert: Thanks to his biology, Kirito was capable of singing rather decently on his first try in chapter 2, 1 [[note]]Chapter 1: When the Monster met the Dreamer…[[/note]], which provoked Yuuna to declare him her singing rival.
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* {{Omake}}: Starting with 'Chapter chapter 5 [[note]]Chapter 5: Hidden Nature', Nature[[/note]], each chapter is followed by a series of omakes titled 'Lusus + Vampire' which is a {{Crossover}} with ''Manga/RosarioToVampire''
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* RealityEnsues: In 'Chapter chapter 4 [[note]]Chapter 4: What makes you Human?', Human?'[[/note]], [[spoiler: Suguha rode Kage the Crow through the air to mount a rescue of a captive Kirito...and failed since, a) Suguha was weak and off balance as a result of being exposed to the cold temperatures and strong winds for the first time, b) Kage was still a bird not that bright so ended up speeding straight into a cramped location, and c) Wayrum was still armed and had his weapon primed. The result: Waryum shoots down Kage(his weapon was SetToStun) and Suguha while barely getting hurt himself.]] [[Creator/SaintInfernalNeos SIN]] even refers to it as an example of this trope in the Author's Notes.
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* RealityEnsues: In chapter 4 [[note]What 'Chapter 4: What makes you Human?[[/note]], Human?', [[spoiler: Suguha rode Kage the Crow through the air to mount a rescue of a captive Kirito...and failed since, a) Suguha was weak and off balance as a result of being exposed to the cold temperatures and strong winds for the first time, b) Kage was still a bird not that bright so ended up speeding straight into a cramped location, and c) Wayrum was still armed and had his weapon primed. The result: Waryum shoots down Kage(his weapon was SetToStun) and Suguha while barely getting hurt himself.]] [[Creator/SaintInfernalNeos SIN]] even refers to it as an example of this trope in the Author's Notes.
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* RealityEnsues: In chapter 4[[note: What 4 [[note]What makes you Human?]], Human?[[/note]], [[spoiler: Suguha rode Kage the Crow through the air to mount a rescue of a captive Kirito...and failed since, a) Suguha was weak and off balance as a result of being exposed to the cold temperatures and strong winds for the first time, b) Kage was still a bird not that bright so ended up speeding straight into a cramped location, and c) Wayrum was still armed and had his weapon primed. The result: Waryum shoots down Kage(his weapon was SetToStun) and Suguha while barely getting hurt himself.]] [[Creator/SaintInfernalNeos SIN]] even refers to it as an example of this trope in the Author's Notes.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Subverted. Suguha and Kage's attempt to help Kirito from Wayrum's capture fail as stated in RealityEnsues.
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* RealityEnsues: In chapter 5, 4[[note: What makes you Human?]], [[spoiler: Suguha rode Kage the Crow through the air to mount a rescue of a captive Kirito...and failed since, a) Suguha was weak and off balance as a result of being exposed to the cold temperatures and strong winds for the first time, b) Kage was still a bird not that bright so ended up speeding straight into a cramped location, and c) Wayrum was still armed and had his weapon primed. The result: Waryum shoots down Kage(his weapon was SetToStun) and Suguha while barely getting hurt himself.]] [[Creator/SaintInfernalNeos SIN]] even refers to it as an example of this trope in the Author's Notes.
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* RealityEnsues: In chapter 5, [[spoiler: Suguha rode Kage the Crow through the air to mount a rescue on of a captive Kirito...and failed since, a) Suguha was weak and off balance as a result of being exposed to the cold temperatures and strong winds for the first time, b) Kage was still a bird not that bright so ended up speeding straight into a cramped location, and c) Wayrum was still armed and had his weapon primed. The result: Waryum shoots down Kage(his weapon was SetToStun) and Suguha while barely getting hurt himself. SIN ]] [[Creator/SaintInfernalNeos SIN]] even refers to it as an example of this trope in the Author's Notes.
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* FirstKiss: Between Kirito and Yuuna in chapter 8.
* InstantExpert: Thanks to his biology, Kirito was capable of singing rather decently on his first try in chapter 2, which provoked Yuuna to declare him her singing rival.
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* RealityEnsues: In chapter 5, Suguha rode Kage the Crow through the air to mount a rescue on a captive Kirito...and failed since, a) Suguha was weak and off balance as a result of being exposed to the cold temperatures and strong winds for the first time, b) Kage was still a bird not that bright so ended up speeding straight into a cramped location, and c) Wayrum was still armed and had his weapon primed. The result: Waryum shoots down Kage(his weapon was SetToStun) and Suguha while barely getting hurt himself. SIN even refers to it as an example of this trope in the Author's Notes.
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* NighInvulnerable: Kirito is this thanks to his very potent and adaptive HealingFactor. Waryum theorizes that the only way to put him down permanently would be to toss him into the sun.
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* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Kirito, while appearing the same age as his canon counter part is in fact over 350 Earth years old according to Waryum.
* ReallySevenHundredYearsOld: Kirito, while appearing the same age as his canon counter part is in fact over 350 Earth years old according to Waryum.
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* ExtraEyes: In his Non-Human form Kirito has [[EyesDoNotBelongThere eyes all over his body]]. They also have HellishPupils.
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* LegoGenetics: An ability Kirito discovers when trying to save [[spoiler: a crow, later named kage-chan,]] and later uses to save [[spoiler: the sleeping nights]]. Also uses it to [[spoiler: fly]].
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* LegoGenetics: An ability Kirito discovers when trying to save [[spoiler: a crow, later named kage-chan,]] Kage-chan,]] and later uses to save [[spoiler: the sleeping nights]]. Sleeping Knights]]. Also uses it to [[spoiler: fly]].fly, shoot plasma from a head-arm, create weapons out of his bones, morph his arm into a deadly bio-blade, etc]].
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Kirito is afraid of water. Ironic, in that its hinted that he was originally born as an aquatic creature.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Kirito is afraid of water. Ironic, [[spoiler: in that its hinted it's confirmed he had been 'deployed' in fully aquatic planets before and that he was originally born as an aquatic creature.should easily be able to adapt and survive even in the deepest parts of Earth's ocean.]]
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* {{Omake}}: Starting with 'Chapter 5: Hidden Nature', each chapter is followed by a series of omakes titled 'Lusus + Vamipire' which is a {{Crossover}} with ''Manga/RosarioToVampire''
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* {{Omake}}: Starting with 'Chapter 5: Hidden Nature', each chapter is followed by a series of omakes titled 'Lusus + Vamipire' Vampire' which is a {{Crossover}} with ''Manga/RosarioToVampire''
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* LegoGenetics: An ability Kirito discovers when trying to save [[spoiler: a crow, later named kage-chan,]] and later uses to save [[spoiler: the sleeping nights]]. Also uses it to [[spoiler: fly]].
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%% Something long, black, with skin that seemed like rock and filled with teeth-like spikes. And it had eyes. Lots and lots of eyes.
%% He was also some kind of alien experiment from a race of very careless (Or retarded in her opinion) aliens, the size of a cargo truck and filled with eyes, spikes, teeth, and tentacles, which she had the traumatic 'pleasure' of seeing firsthand up close and personal.
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* ButtMonkey: Waryum the Tryum.
* ItCanThink: Waryum is shocked by the fact that Kirito is not only capable of speech and thought, but that he can even dream and have nightmares.
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* WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong: What Minetaka thought after resuming the drive home. Also, the following Scene Break Quote.Quote.
* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Kirito is afraid of water. Ironic, in that its hinted that he was originally born as an aquatic creature.
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* ForScience: Half the reason Kirito was experimented on by the Tryums.
** ItAmusedMe: The other half.
** ItAmusedMe: The other half.
