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* PaintingTheMedium: Since Marie doesn't really know her daughter, even when she's using her prefered name she gets it wrong, which is illustrated by how any instance of Loona being said in Marie's dialogue is instead written as Luna.
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* MeaningfulName: Loona's birth name is Diana, the same as the Roman goddess of The Moon.
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** IMP still has Striker's blessed sniper rifle which Moxie whips out against Marie during her fight with IMP. After the conflict the Goetia confiscates the weapon.
** Moxie's mafia family is mentioned twice in passing, first by Blitzo as a joke and later by Millie as an example of how avoiding a topic can backfire.
** Moxie's mafia family is mentioned twice in passing, first by Blitzo as a joke and later by Millie as an example of how avoiding a topic can backfire.
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** IMP still has Striker's blessed Carmine crafted sniper rifle which Moxie Moxxie whips out against Marie during her fight with IMP. After the conflict the Goetia confiscates the weapon.
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**Moxie's Moxxie's mafia family is mentioned twice in passing, first by Blitzo as a joke an example of ridiculous things he's learned about the people in his life and later by Millie as an example of how avoiding a topic can backfire.
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* HealingFactor: As an immortal Goetia IMP's standard weapons have no real effect on Marie aside from incurring her wrath, evidenced by Blitzo shooting her point black in the head only for her to split the bullet out. The exception is blessed weapons wounds form which require a healing potion and leave scars.
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* HealingFactor: As an immortal Goetia IMP's standard weapons have no real effect on Marie aside from incurring her wrath, evidenced by Blitzo shooting her point black in the head only for her to split the bullet out. The exception is blessed angelic weapons wounds form which require a healing potion and leave scars.
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* MaternallyChallenged: In flashbacks, we're shown that while Marie is great warrior and general she found raising baby Diana a challenge something her husband, who parenthood seemed to come easier to, both teased and comforted her over.
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* [[MamaBear Mama Wolf]]: Marie is naturally very protective of her daughter even after almost twenty years apart with said daughter hating her. The opening of chapter 9 reveals she once locked herself in her study and went full conspiracy nut complete with board trying to figure out who had tried to have baby Diana assassinated.
* MaternallyChallenged: In flashbacks, we're shown that while Marie is great warrior and general she found raising baby Diana difficult to get achallenge handle on something her husband, who to whom parenthood seemed to come easier to, easier, both teased and comforted her over.
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* FallenAngel: Marchosias is one, having joined Lucifer and his army in his attempt to overthrow Heaven. After her side lost, Marchosias was cursed and damned to Hell alongside the other Lucifer loyalists, and with few other options, joined the Ars Goetia as a Marchioness Demon.
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* FallenAngel: Marchosias is one, one per demonic lore, having joined Lucifer and his army in his attempt to overthrow Heaven. After her side lost, Marchosias was cursed and damned to Hell alongside the other Lucifer loyalists, and with few other options, joined the Ars Goetia as a Marchioness Demon.
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* HalfBreedAngst: Loona experiences this upon learning she's half Goetia.
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According to [=FaroeKing=] they were inspired by Fanfic/GrowingUpImpish by [=CheyCartoongirl8=] and [=CynicalGenre=] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/2381278 Familial Modulation]] by Cybra which have a similar premise.
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According to [=FaroeKing=] they were inspired by Fanfic/GrowingUpImpish by [=CheyCartoongirl8=] and [=CynicalGenre=] and [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/2381278 Familial Modulation]] by Cybra which have a similar premise.premise of a member of IMP secretly being related to a powerful member of the upper levels of Hell's hierarchy.
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** During a disaster montage in chapter 7, a job gone wrong led to IMP getting DHORKS' attention again.
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* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou: Marchosias didn't intentionally abandon her daughter, since Loona was kidnapped when she was a baby and Marchosias was led to believe that she had been killed after they found one of her wings.
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* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou: Marchosias didn't intentionally abandon her daughter, since Loona was kidnapped when she was a baby baby, during Extermination Day no less, and Marchosias was led to believe that she had been killed after they found one of her wings.
* FreudianSlip: A few times, Loona almost refers to Moxxie and Millie as friends during highly emotional moments but catches herself and swaps out for co-workers.
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** Loona confides in Blitz that she has inherited this, as a teenager she fell from height that should have either killed her or left her paraplegic but she recovered in hours.
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* MaternallyChallenged: In flashbacks, we're show that Marie is great warrior and general but found raising baby Diana a challenge something her husband, who parenthood seemed to come easier to, both teased and comforted her over.
* MayflyDecemberRomance: Blitz and Stolas' relationship is pointed out as this as Goetia demons are immortal while Imp do have a limited lifespan.
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* MaternallyChallenged: In flashbacks, we're show shown that while Marie is great warrior and general but she found raising baby Diana a challenge something her husband, who parenthood seemed to come easier to, both teased and comforted her over.
* MayflyDecemberRomance: Blitz and Stolas' relationship is pointed out as this as Goetia demons are immortal whileImp do imps have a limited lifespan.
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* ParentalNeglect: Paimon's even extends into Grandparental, as at a party celebrating Octavia's birth he was more interested in showing of a new cowl.
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** To protect her child from the upper ranks of Hell, only Marie's staff knew of her existence.
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* TheVoice: Vortex has a conversation with Loona over the phone and is heard snoring when she wakes up on his couch but has yet to appear in person.
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* TheVoice: Vortex has had a conversation with Loona over the phone and is heard snoring when she wakes up on his couch but has yet to appear in person.
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* MaternallyChallenged: In flashbacks, we're show that Marie is great warrior and general but found raising baby Diana a challenge something her husband husband, who parenthood seemed to come easier to, both teased and comforted her over.
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** She's a winged she wolf with griffin wings and a serpent's tail that can breath fire as the demon is often described.
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* ParentalNeglect: Paimon's even extened to Grandparental, as at a party celebrating Octavia's birth he was more interested in showing of a new cowl.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36619858/chapters/91341628 Loona Goetia]]'' is a ''WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss'' fanfiction, written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/FaroeKing/pseuds/FaroeKing FaroeKing]], writer of Fanfic/NewestPupInTheFamily and Fanfic/YouAreMyRealDad, on Archive of Our Own.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36619858/chapters/91341628 Loona Goetia]]'' is a ''WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss'' fanfiction, written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/FaroeKing/pseuds/FaroeKing FaroeKing]], writer author of Fanfic/NewestPupInTheFamily and Fanfic/YouAreMyRealDad, on Archive of Our Own.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: As Alphonse reminds Marie it doesn't matter how badass you are cauterizing wounds won't stop internal bleeding.
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* ThatManIsDead: Loona refuses to be called "Diana" by her birth mother, [[InsistantTerminology insisting that she's called Loona.]]
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** In chapter 5, we're treated to Loona shouting "Shut the fuck up!" when the other characters yelling gets on her nerves.
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* PocketDimension: Stolas can access one, where he takes Blitzo to so that can talk.
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* PocketDimension: Stolas can access one, the star field he took young Octavia to sing her a lullaby, where he takes Blitzo to so that can talk.
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** She is a fallen angel and according to WordOfGod like her counterpart Marie was a member of the angelic order of Dominations before she fell.
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* ThatManIsDead: Loona refuses to be called "Diana" by her birth mother, insisting that she's called Loona.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36619858/chapters/91341628 Loona Goetia]]'' is a ''WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss'' fanfiction, written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/FaroeKing/pseuds/FaroeKing FaroeKing]] on Archive of Our Own.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/36619858/chapters/91341628 Loona Goetia]]'' is a ''WebAnimation/HelluvaBoss'' fanfiction, written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/FaroeKing/pseuds/FaroeKing FaroeKing]] FaroeKing]], writer of Fanfic/NewestPupInTheFamily and Fanfic/YouAreMyRealDad, on Archive of Our Own.
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* CurbStompBattle: Marie delivers one to Blitzo, Millie and Moxxie when the former refuses to let her see Loona.
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* CurbStompBattle: CurbStompCushion: Marie delivers one to Blitzo, Millie and Moxxie when the former refuses to let her see Loona.Loona. Though the imps are able to get a few good hits, in particular with Striker’s rifle, which manages to weaken Marie at points.
