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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6854365/1/Lily_Pilgrim_vs_Their_World Lily Pilgrim vs Their World]]'' is a [[ComicBook/ScottPilgrim Scott Pilgrim]] fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2808448/ ApellaZant]]. It takes place years after the events of Scott Pilgrim's Finest Hour. As the title implies, the story focuses on the daughter of Scott and Ramona, Lily Pilgrim. But while her parents' story may be over, it eventually comes back to haunt her.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6854365/1/Lily_Pilgrim_vs_Their_World Lily Pilgrim vs Their World]]'' is a [[ComicBook/ScottPilgrim Scott Pilgrim]] ''ComicBook/ScottPilgrim'' fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2808448/ ApellaZant]]. ApellaZant]].
It takes place years after the events of Scott Pilgrim's Finest Hour. As the title implies, the story focuses on the daughter of Scott and Ramona, Lily Pilgrim. But while her parents' story may be over, it eventually comes back to haunt her. \n\n\n
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It takes place years after the events of Scott Pilgrim's Finest Hour. As the title implies, the story focuses on the daughter of Scott and Ramona, Lily Pilgrim. But while her parents' story may be over, it eventually comes back to haunt her.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Though none of Lily's parents' friends (i.e. Kim, Knives, Stephan and Lisa) are related, Lily still sees them as her family.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Though none of Lily's parents' friends (i.e. Kim, Knives, Stephan Stephan, and Lisa) are related, Lily still sees them as her family.
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* FlashBack: Many happen throughout the story. A lot of which involve a young Lily Pilgrim mostly hearing the stories about her parents' adventures and fights against the evil exes.
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* FlashBack: Many happen throughout the story. A lot of which these involve a young Lily Pilgrim mostly hearing the stories about her parents' adventures and fights against the evil exes.
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* FourTemperamentEnsemble:
** Lily's band: Tanooki Dream
** Lily's band: Tanooki Dream
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* FourTemperamentEnsemble:
**FourTemperamentEnsemble: Lily's band: Tanooki Dream
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* ImplausibleSynchrony: All clocks at the Pilgrim household are set exactly 4 minutes forward, no discrepancies in their malfunctioning.
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* LikeMotherLikeDaughter: During the story, Lily is like her mother, Ramona Flowers, in a way. She's able to access the subspace highway and travel through it with her built-in roller skate shoes. However, Lily is also like her father too, having gotten her fighting skills from him, [[spoiler:even including her her fifth grade broadsword fighting skills too.]]
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* LikeMotherLikeDaughter: During the story, Lily is like her mother, Ramona Flowers, in a way. She's able to access the subspace highway and travel through it with her built-in roller skate shoes. However, Lily is also like her father too, having gotten her fighting skills from him, [[spoiler:even including her her fifth grade fifth-grade broadsword fighting skills too.]]
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* YouAreGrounded: Ramona says this to Lily [[spoiler:after she was late home due to her being attacked by Winfred Hailey on her way home and because of the fact that all clocks at the Pilgrim household were set 4 minutes forward, which Ramona forgets.]] Later on however, Ramona eventually gave up and ended her grounding because, as she put it, it was a disaster of grounding anyway.
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* YouAreGrounded: Ramona says this to Lily [[spoiler:after she was late home due to her being attacked by Winfred Hailey on her way home and because of the fact that all clocks at the Pilgrim household were set 4 minutes forward, which Ramona forgets.]] Later on on, however, Ramona eventually gave up and ended her grounding because, as she put it, it was a disaster of grounding anyway.anyway.
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** Lily's band: Tanooki Dream:Dream
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* FlashBack: Many happen throughout the story. A lot of which involve a young Lily Pilgrim mostly hearing the stories about her parents' adventures and fights against the evil exes.
** A couple of them even showed Lily being with her Mother and Aunt Kim, being taught how to skate through the [[PortalNetwork subspace highway]] and being encouraged when on stage and playing the drums.
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** A couple of them even showed Lily being with her Mother and Aunt Kim, being taught how to skate through the [[PortalNetwork subspace highway]] and being encouraged when on stage and playing the drums.
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* TheReveal:TheReveal: [[spoiler:Sean Williams reveals himself as the mastermind behind the Evil Ex proxies all for revenge on Lily's parents for killing his brother, Gideon.]]
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* CallBack:
There are many call backs to the original six books of Scott's adventure. Like his adventures of taking on the League of Evil Exes.
There are many call backs to the original six books of Scott's adventure. Like his adventures of taking on the League of Evil Exes.
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* CallBack:
There are many call backs toCallBack: Happens a lot during the original six books of Scott's adventure. Like story. When Lily was younger, Scott would tell her the stories about his adventures of taking and how he took on the League of Evil Exes.Exes, all of which are referring to the events of all six books, though Scott's view on the story is similar to the [[Film/ScottPilgrimVsTheWorld film adaptation.]] Something which Kim claimed Scott [[ExactWords didn't remember correctly.]]
There are many call backs to
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There are many call backs to the original six books of Scott's adventure. Like his adventures of taking on the League of Evil Exes.
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* LikeMotherLikeDaughter: During the story, Lily is like her mother, Ramona Flowers, in a way. She's able to access the subspace highway and travel through it with her built-in roller skate shoes.
** However, Lily is also like her father too, having gotten her fighting skills from him, [[spoiler:even including her her fifth grade broadsword fighting skills too.]]
* LikeMotherLikeDaughter: During the story, Lily is like her mother, Ramona Flowers, in a way. She's able to access the subspace highway and travel through it with her built-in roller skate shoes.
** However, Lily is also like her father too, having gotten her fighting skills from him, [[spoiler:even including her her fifth grade broadsword fighting skills too.]]
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* LikeMotherLikeDaughter: During the story, Lily is like her mother, Ramona Flowers, in a way. She's able to access the subspace highway and travel through it with her built-in roller skate
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* YouAreGrounded: Ramona says this to Lily [[spoiler:after she was late home due to her being attacked by Winfred Hailey on her way home and because of the fact that all clocks at the Pilgrim household were set 4 minutes forward, which Ramona forgets.]]
** Later on however, Ramona eventually gave up and ended her grounding because, as she put it, it was a disaster of grounding anyway.
** Later on however, Ramona eventually gave up and ended her grounding because, as she put it, it was a disaster of grounding anyway.
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* YouAreGrounded: Ramona says this to Lily [[spoiler:after she was late home due to her being attacked by Winfred Hailey on her way home and because of the fact that all clocks at the Pilgrim household were set 4 minutes forward, which Ramona forgets.]]
**]] Later on however, Ramona eventually gave up and ended her grounding because, as she put it, it was a disaster of grounding anyway.
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* ShoutOut: There were many shout-outs during the story. One of which referenced near enough the same phrase said by Jor-El to Kal-El in SupermanTheMovie, spoken by Scott before Ramona stopped him from finishing.
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* ShoutOut: There were many shout-outs during the story. One of which referenced near enough the same notable references was the phrase said spoken by Jor-El to his son, Kal-El in SupermanTheMovie, SupermanTheMovie. The Phrase was spoken by Scott Scott, who tried to speak the words to his newborn daughter before Ramona stopped him from finishing.finishing.
--> '''Scott''': You will make my strength your own. You will see my life through your eyes, as your life will be seen through mine. The daughter becomes the...
--> '''Ramona''': Scott...don't be a geek.
--> '''Scott''': You will make my strength your own. You will see my life through your eyes, as your life will be seen through mine. The daughter becomes the...
--> '''Ramona''': Scott...don't be a geek.
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* AHeroIsBorn: Heroine in the case of the story. Lily is born 8 months after her mother, Ramona Flowers, discovered that [[PregnancyScare she was pregnant.]]
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* AHeroIsBorn: Heroine in the case of the story. Lily is born 8 months after her mother, Ramona Flowers, discovered that she was [[PregnancyScare she was pregnant.]]
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* ShoutOut: There were many shout-outs during the story. One of which referenced near enough the same phrase said by Jor-El to Kal-El in SupermanTheMovie, spoken by Scott before Ramona stopped him from finishing.
* TimeSkip: The whole story begins two years after Scott Pilgrim's Finest Hour, and Lily's story begins around 18 years after she was born.
* TimeSkip: The whole story begins two years after Scott Pilgrim's Finest Hour, and Lily's story begins around 18 years after she was born.
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* LikeMotherLikeDaughter:LikeMotherLikeDaughter: During the story, Lily is like her mother, Ramona Flowers, in a way. She's able to access the subspace highway and travel through it with her built-in roller skate shoes.
** However, Lily is also like her father too, having gotten her fighting skills from him, [[spoiler:even including her her fifth grade broadsword fighting skills too.]]
** However, Lily is also like her father too, having gotten her fighting skills from him, [[spoiler:even including her her fifth grade broadsword fighting skills too.]]
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* YouAreGrounded: Ramona says this to Lily [[spoilers:after she was late home due to her being attacked by Winfred Hailey on her way home and because of the fact that all clocks at the Pilgrim household were set 4 minutes forward, which Ramona forgets.]]
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* YouAreGrounded: Ramona says this to Lily [[spoilers:after [[spoiler:after she was late home due to her being attacked by Winfred Hailey on her way home and because of the fact that all clocks at the Pilgrim household were set 4 minutes forward, which Ramona forgets.]]
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* FanCreatedOffspring: Lily herself.
* FanCreatedOffspring: Lily herself.
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FamilyOfChoice: Though none of Lily's parents' friends (i.e. Kim, Knives, Stephan and Lisa) are related, Lily still sees them as her family.
* FanCreatedOffspring: Lily Pilgrim herself.
* FanCreatedOffspring: Lily Pilgrim herself.
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* YouAreGrounded:YouAreGrounded: Ramona says this to Lily [[spoilers:after she was late home due to her being attacked by Winfred Hailey on her way home and because of the fact that all clocks at the Pilgrim household were set 4 minutes forward, which Ramona forgets.]]
** Later on however, Ramona eventually gave up and ended her grounding because, as she put it, it was a disaster of grounding anyway.
** Later on however, Ramona eventually gave up and ended her grounding because, as she put it, it was a disaster of grounding anyway.
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* AHeroIsBorn: Heroine in the case of the story. Lily is born 8 months after her mother, Ramona Flowers, discovered that [[PregnancyScare she was pregnant.]]
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* HappilyMarried: In the story, Scott and Ramona eventually got married before Lily was even born.
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* HappilyMarried: In the story, Scott and Ramona eventually got married before Lily was even born.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6854365/1/Lily_Pilgrim_vs_Their_World Lily Pilgrim vs Their World]]'' is a [[ComicBook/ScottPilgrim Scott Pilgrim]] fanfic written by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2808448/ ApellaZant]]. It takes place years after the events of Scott Pilgrim's Finest Hour. As the title implies, the story focuses on the daughter of Scott and Ramona, Lily Pilgrim. But while her parents' story may be over, it eventually comes back to haunt her.
!!The main story of this fanfic contains examples of:
!!The main story of this fanfic contains examples of:
