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* BoomerangBigot: Dark tries to turn his anti-lesbian EvilTwin Dark Dark into a lesbian by giving him boobs with a Boob Note. However, this fails since having boobs doesn't make him a woman.
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* VillainHasAPoint: While Dark's EvilTwin Dark Dark is a homophobic incel, he's right when he tells Dark that using a Boob Note to give him boobs doesn't turn him into a lesbian, because one's gender is not determined by one's body parts.
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** Shakespeare is the king of England. And since this is before the Declaration of Independence, which means he's king of the whole world.
-->and a nuclear that L had stealed from the japan army.
-->and a nuclear that L had stealed from the japan army.
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** Shakespeare is was the king King of England. And since this is that was before the Declaration of Independence, which means he's he was king of the whole world.
-->and --->and a nuclear that L had stealed from the japan army.
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Has four complete dramatic readings, by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69Upzlw8azE The Holy Cabbage]] (lots of MSTing), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SFfEKEeeefI&list=PLYNcOqVhTmvb4blZ5PSEQ4ZrJNeWpREaM Lord Starfish]] (no MSTing except in annotations and the occasional snarky remark at the end of a chapter), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2XW0jzbttU Mutant Museum]] (formerly manwithoutabody), as well as a reading of the [[https://fanfiction.net/s/12895323 Spanish-translated version]] by [[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL4MvM5BZ0nPD0wss04ML2mRA2pi1dCagr RanguGamer]]. There are several unfinished ones, including [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOkboc6QdvE ReteikiAndYuma]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=At-6ewXwZGY hanfern]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnKgcpJ9mUE&feature=related OperationGoChan]] (acted out with action figures), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tyvW0EPNEfs Temascos]] (with snarky slideshows), and [[http://pamachu-productions.blogspot.com/2011/06/episode-4-light-and-dark-adventures-of.html Pamachu Productions.]] It's also inspired three fan-written sequels – [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9793696/1/Light-and-Dark-Returning-of-D-ark Returning of D'ark,]] [[Fanfic/LightAndDarkDEUXTheNewAdventuresOfDarkSoichiro Light and Dark DEUX,]] and [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1606355 SAD GOODBYES]] – a RoundRobin [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1638099 post game,]] and a WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/19IxBxWurMG1m0Z_dzkeronH-kMej81s4Qvq32dSz38M/edit?usp=sharing mission.]]
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Has four complete dramatic readings, by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69Upzlw8azE The Holy Cabbage]] (lots of MSTing), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SFfEKEeeefI&list=PLYNcOqVhTmvb4blZ5PSEQ4ZrJNeWpREaM Lord Starfish]] (no MSTing except in annotations and the occasional snarky remark at the end of a chapter), chapter) and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2XW0jzbttU Mutant Museum]] (formerly manwithoutabody), as well as a reading of the [[https://fanfiction.net/s/12895323 Spanish-translated version]] by [[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL4MvM5BZ0nPD0wss04ML2mRA2pi1dCagr RanguGamer]]. There are several unfinished ones, including [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOkboc6QdvE ReteikiAndYuma]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=At-6ewXwZGY hanfern]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnKgcpJ9mUE&feature=related OperationGoChan]] (acted out with action figures), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tyvW0EPNEfs Temascos]] (with snarky slideshows), and [[http://pamachu-productions.blogspot.com/2011/06/episode-4-light-and-dark-adventures-of.html Pamachu Productions.]] It's also inspired three fan-written sequels – [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9793696/1/Light-and-Dark-Returning-of-D-ark Returning of D'ark,]] [[Fanfic/LightAndDarkDEUXTheNewAdventuresOfDarkSoichiro Light and Dark DEUX,]] and [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1606355 SAD GOODBYES]] – a RoundRobin [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1638099 post game,]] and a WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/19IxBxWurMG1m0Z_dzkeronH-kMej81s4Qvq32dSz38M/edit?usp=sharing mission.]]
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-->''"Do ghosts exits?"''
-->''"THEY DO NOT MY GOOD YOUNG FREND BECOS THAT SORT OF THING IS IMPOSABLE?"''
-->''"But ur a shinigami aren't you imposable too?"''
-->''"NO COS THIS IS THE DEATH NOT WORLD WHERE SHINIGAMI ARE POSABLE"''
-->''"THEY DO NOT MY GOOD YOUNG FREND BECOS THAT SORT OF THING IS IMPOSABLE?"''
-->''"But ur a shinigami aren't you imposable too?"''
-->''"NO COS THIS IS THE DEATH NOT WORLD WHERE SHINIGAMI ARE POSABLE"''
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-->''"THEY
--->'''Blud:''' THEY DO NOT MY GOOD YOUNG FREND BECOS THAT SORT OF THING IS
-->''"But
--->'''Dark:''' But ur a shinigami aren't you imposable
-->''"NO
--->'''Blud:''' NO COS THIS IS THE DEATH NOT WORLD WHERE SHINIGAMI ARE
** It turns out ghosts ''do'' exist in that world, though.
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* BeenThereShapedHistory: After using a [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext time puddle]] to travel to the past and [[spoiler:replace Watari with Near (who is a clone)]], L laughs so hard he starts "[[https://wikipedia.org/wiki/Great_Fire_of_London the fire of London]]".
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* ThemeNaming: Light's siblings/clones/duplicates/whatever are called Dark, Night, Day, Dawn, Dusk, Shadow, and Twilight.
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* ThemeNaming: Light's Dark's siblings/clones/duplicates/whatever are called Dark, Light, Night, Day, Dawn, Dusk, Shadow, and Twilight.
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Has four complete dramatic readings, by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69Upzlw8azE The Holy Cabbage]] (lots of MSTing), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SFfEKEeeefI&list=PLYNcOqVhTmvb4blZ5PSEQ4ZrJNeWpREaM Lord Starfish]] (no MSTing except in annotations and the occasional snarky remark at the end of a chapter), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2XW0jzbttU Mutant Museum]] (formerly manwithoutabody), and a Spanish-translated version by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ltNJbhJXljE RanguGamer,]] as well as several unfinished ones, including [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOkboc6QdvE ReteikiAndYuma]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=At-6ewXwZGY hanfern]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnKgcpJ9mUE&feature=related OperationGoChan]] (acted out with action figures), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tyvW0EPNEfs Temascos]] (with snarky slideshows), and [[http://pamachu-productions.blogspot.com/2011/06/episode-4-light-and-dark-adventures-of.html Pamachu Productions.]] It's also inspired three fan-written sequels – [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9793696/1/Light-and-Dark-Returning-of-D-ark Returning of D'ark,]] [[Fanfic/LightAndDarkDEUXTheNewAdventuresOfDarkSoichiro Light and Dark DEUX,]] and [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1606355 SAD GOODBYES]] – a RoundRobin [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1638099 post game,]] and a WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/19IxBxWurMG1m0Z_dzkeronH-kMej81s4Qvq32dSz38M/edit?usp=sharing mission.]]
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Has four complete dramatic readings, by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69Upzlw8azE The Holy Cabbage]] (lots of MSTing), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SFfEKEeeefI&list=PLYNcOqVhTmvb4blZ5PSEQ4ZrJNeWpREaM Lord Starfish]] (no MSTing except in annotations and the occasional snarky remark at the end of a chapter), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2XW0jzbttU Mutant Museum]] (formerly manwithoutabody), and as well as a reading of the [[https://fanfiction.net/s/12895323 Spanish-translated version version]] by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ltNJbhJXljE RanguGamer,]] as well as [[https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PL4MvM5BZ0nPD0wss04ML2mRA2pi1dCagr RanguGamer]]. There are several unfinished ones, including [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOkboc6QdvE ReteikiAndYuma]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=At-6ewXwZGY hanfern]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnKgcpJ9mUE&feature=related OperationGoChan]] (acted out with action figures), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tyvW0EPNEfs Temascos]] (with snarky slideshows), and [[http://pamachu-productions.blogspot.com/2011/06/episode-4-light-and-dark-adventures-of.html Pamachu Productions.]] It's also inspired three fan-written sequels – [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9793696/1/Light-and-Dark-Returning-of-D-ark Returning of D'ark,]] [[Fanfic/LightAndDarkDEUXTheNewAdventuresOfDarkSoichiro Light and Dark DEUX,]] and [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1606355 SAD GOODBYES]] – a RoundRobin [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1638099 post game,]] and a WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/19IxBxWurMG1m0Z_dzkeronH-kMej81s4Qvq32dSz38M/edit?usp=sharing mission.]]
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** There's also a running theme of characters dancing for no apparent reason:
***"PLEASE GET ME A BLOOD BANANA." Said Blud as he danced around the rrom. Dark laughed at the dance it was like the Ketchup Song but it was about blood not ketchup though shinigami sometimes used blood as ketchup because it was blood.
***"Holly shit!" muttered Dark as Light's mom danced around the room under the control of the death note which was making her say all these things.
***"Let's stay calm and not do anything rash!" shreked Light dancing around like a little girl.
***"I AM NOT DARK ANYMORE! FROM NO ON MY NAME WILL BE..... DU'ARQ!"\\
Everyone did the new name dance and then there was a feast with twelve turkeys and a pig and a soup made from blood bananas and this was served with blood wine and not alcholic blood wine for the kiddies and also there was mineral water to.
***"hiphiphooray!" they cheered and then a DJ came on and they all danced the night away to some beats.
***Yay!" said matsuda with a happy dance which made her laugh and then he fell off and dead.
***"THAT'LL TEACH YOU!" ckira screamed dancing on the dead car.
***"OMG!" raye screamed dancing like a dancy man.
***Every dad in the world went "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" all angry and shocked and scarred and repressed and dancing with unhappy and screaming and ragey and angry and pokey all at the same time except the evil one who just put his fingers together and said "JUST AS PALNNED!"
***They were blood banana cookies so he fed them all to Blud and Blud did the happy shinigami dance.
***"LETS HIT THE DECK" roared ray pember dancing to the helicopter.
***"What is this?" misa asked doing the scared dance.
***Blud was so exited about the fight now that he kept dancing in circles around the planet to get rid of his energy. LIGHT YAGAMI IS A MACHINE GUN DOG AND DAWN IS DEAD AND CYBERTAKADA IS NAKED WHAT MORE COULD YOU WANT he sang dancing past Ruyk and flipping him lots of birds cos his guy was dead.
***Then Sayu did a sexy dance for cybertakada and they started sexing.
***YOU WILL LOOK SO PRETTY AND WE SHALL DANCE ALL THROUGH THE NIGHT AND MAKE SWEET PASSIONATED LOVE ALL OVER THE BATTLE RING WHICH WILL BE RENAMED THE SEX RING AND FILLED WITH WINE AND EVERYONE WILL WATCH AND GET ALL TURNED ON TOO.\\
"Not so fast CHUMP" Dark roared and kneed blud in the man thing. Blud yipped like a little girl and danced all over the battle ring.
***"Oh! Blud! That is the best feeling I have ever had!" screamed Samanther as the hand danced over her like a mad dancer made of blood having sex with the dancefloor which was her body in this case.
***'''"SHUT UP RUYK OR I WILL PUT A MAYPOLE INTO YOUR SKULL AND MAKE THE KIDDIES DANCE OVER YOUR FACE"'''
***Ruyk looked even harder and it was so f-cking cool that he started dancing on teh spot and he fell and landed on a pile of apple flavor heroine!
***"PLEASE GET ME A BLOOD BANANA." Said Blud as he danced around the rrom. Dark laughed at the dance it was like the Ketchup Song but it was about blood not ketchup though shinigami sometimes used blood as ketchup because it was blood.
***"Holly shit!" muttered Dark as Light's mom danced around the room under the control of the death note which was making her say all these things.
***"Let's stay calm and not do anything rash!" shreked Light dancing around like a little girl.
***"I AM NOT DARK ANYMORE! FROM NO ON MY NAME WILL BE..... DU'ARQ!"\\
Everyone did the new name dance and then there was a feast with twelve turkeys and a pig and a soup made from blood bananas and this was served with blood wine and not alcholic blood wine for the kiddies and also there was mineral water to.
***"hiphiphooray!" they cheered and then a DJ came on and they all danced the night away to some beats.
***Yay!" said matsuda with a happy dance which made her laugh and then he fell off and dead.
***"THAT'LL TEACH YOU!" ckira screamed dancing on the dead car.
***"OMG!" raye screamed dancing like a dancy man.
***Every dad in the world went "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" all angry and shocked and scarred and repressed and dancing with unhappy and screaming and ragey and angry and pokey all at the same time except the evil one who just put his fingers together and said "JUST AS PALNNED!"
***They were blood banana cookies so he fed them all to Blud and Blud did the happy shinigami dance.
***"LETS HIT THE DECK" roared ray pember dancing to the helicopter.
***"What is this?" misa asked doing the scared dance.
***Blud was so exited about the fight now that he kept dancing in circles around the planet to get rid of his energy. LIGHT YAGAMI IS A MACHINE GUN DOG AND DAWN IS DEAD AND CYBERTAKADA IS NAKED WHAT MORE COULD YOU WANT he sang dancing past Ruyk and flipping him lots of birds cos his guy was dead.
***Then Sayu did a sexy dance for cybertakada and they started sexing.
***YOU WILL LOOK SO PRETTY AND WE SHALL DANCE ALL THROUGH THE NIGHT AND MAKE SWEET PASSIONATED LOVE ALL OVER THE BATTLE RING WHICH WILL BE RENAMED THE SEX RING AND FILLED WITH WINE AND EVERYONE WILL WATCH AND GET ALL TURNED ON TOO.\\
"Not so fast CHUMP" Dark roared and kneed blud in the man thing. Blud yipped like a little girl and danced all over the battle ring.
***"Oh! Blud! That is the best feeling I have ever had!" screamed Samanther as the hand danced over her like a mad dancer made of blood having sex with the dancefloor which was her body in this case.
***'''"SHUT UP RUYK OR I WILL PUT A MAYPOLE INTO YOUR SKULL AND MAKE THE KIDDIES DANCE OVER YOUR FACE"'''
***Ruyk looked even harder and it was so f-cking cool that he started dancing on teh spot and he fell and landed on a pile of apple flavor heroine!
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Has four complete dramatic readings, by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69Upzlw8azE The Holy Cabbage]] (lots of MSTing), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SFfEKEeeefI&list=PLYNcOqVhTmvb4blZ5PSEQ4ZrJNeWpREaM Lord Starfish]] (no MSTing except in annotations and the occasional snarky remark at the end of a chapter), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2XW0jzbttU Mutant Museum]] (formerly manwithoutabody), and a Spanish-translated version by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ltNJbhJXljE RanguGamer,]] as well as several unfinished ones, including [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOkboc6QdvE ReteikiAndYuma]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=At-6ewXwZGY hanfern]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnKgcpJ9mUE&feature=related OperationGoChan]] (acted out with action figures), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tyvW0EPNEfs Temascos]] (with snarky slideshows), and [[http://pamachu-productions.blogspot.com/2011/06/episode-4-light-and-dark-adventures-of.html Pamachu Productions.]] It's also inspired three fan-written sequels – [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9793696/1/Light-and-Dark-Returning-of-D-ark Returning of D'ark,]] [[Fanfic/LightAndDarkDEUXTheNewAdventuresOfDarkSoichiro Light and Dark DEUX,]] and [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1606355 SAD GOODBYES]] – a RoundRobin [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1638099 post game,]] and a [[WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum]] [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/19IxBxWurMG1m0Z_dzkeronH-kMej81s4Qvq32dSz38M/edit?usp=sharing mission.]]
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Has four complete dramatic readings, by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69Upzlw8azE The Holy Cabbage]] (lots of MSTing), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SFfEKEeeefI&list=PLYNcOqVhTmvb4blZ5PSEQ4ZrJNeWpREaM Lord Starfish]] (no MSTing except in annotations and the occasional snarky remark at the end of a chapter), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2XW0jzbttU Mutant Museum]] (formerly manwithoutabody), and a Spanish-translated version by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ltNJbhJXljE RanguGamer,]] as well as several unfinished ones, including [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOkboc6QdvE ReteikiAndYuma]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=At-6ewXwZGY hanfern]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnKgcpJ9mUE&feature=related OperationGoChan]] (acted out with action figures), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tyvW0EPNEfs Temascos]] (with snarky slideshows), and [[http://pamachu-productions.blogspot.com/2011/06/episode-4-light-and-dark-adventures-of.html Pamachu Productions.]] It's also inspired three fan-written sequels – [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9793696/1/Light-and-Dark-Returning-of-D-ark Returning of D'ark,]] [[Fanfic/LightAndDarkDEUXTheNewAdventuresOfDarkSoichiro Light and Dark DEUX,]] and [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1606355 SAD GOODBYES]] – a RoundRobin [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1638099 post game,]] and a [[WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum]] [[PPC WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum]] [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/19IxBxWurMG1m0Z_dzkeronH-kMej81s4Qvq32dSz38M/edit?usp=sharing mission.]]
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Has four complete dramatic readings, by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69Upzlw8azE The Holy Cabbage]] (lots of MSTing), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SFfEKEeeefI&list=PLYNcOqVhTmvb4blZ5PSEQ4ZrJNeWpREaM Lord Starfish]] (no MSTing except in annotations and the occasional snarky remark at the end of a chapter), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2XW0jzbttU Mutant Museum]] (formerly manwithoutabody), and a Spanish-translated version by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ltNJbhJXljE RanguGamer,]] as well as several unfinished ones, including [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOkboc6QdvE ReteikiAndYuma]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=At-6ewXwZGY hanfern]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnKgcpJ9mUE&feature=related OperationGoChan]] (acted out with action figures), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tyvW0EPNEfs Temascos]] (with snarky slideshows), and [[http://pamachu-productions.blogspot.com/2011/06/episode-4-light-and-dark-adventures-of.html Pamachu Productions.]] It's also inspired three fan-written sequels – [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9793696/1/Light-and-Dark-Returning-of-D-ark Returning of D'ark,]] [[Fanfic/LightAndDarkDEUXTheNewAdventuresOfDarkSoichiro Light and Dark DEUX,]] and [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1606355 SAD GOODBYES]] – a RoundRobin [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1638099 post game,]] and a [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/19IxBxWurMG1m0Z_dzkeronH-kMej81s4Qvq32dSz38M/edit?usp=sharing PPC mission.]]
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Has four complete dramatic readings, by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=69Upzlw8azE The Holy Cabbage]] (lots of MSTing), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SFfEKEeeefI&list=PLYNcOqVhTmvb4blZ5PSEQ4ZrJNeWpREaM Lord Starfish]] (no MSTing except in annotations and the occasional snarky remark at the end of a chapter), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N2XW0jzbttU Mutant Museum]] (formerly manwithoutabody), and a Spanish-translated version by [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ltNJbhJXljE RanguGamer,]] as well as several unfinished ones, including [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOkboc6QdvE ReteikiAndYuma]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=At-6ewXwZGY hanfern]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnKgcpJ9mUE&feature=related OperationGoChan]] (acted out with action figures), [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tyvW0EPNEfs Temascos]] (with snarky slideshows), and [[http://pamachu-productions.blogspot.com/2011/06/episode-4-light-and-dark-adventures-of.html Pamachu Productions.]] It's also inspired three fan-written sequels – [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9793696/1/Light-and-Dark-Returning-of-D-ark Returning of D'ark,]] [[Fanfic/LightAndDarkDEUXTheNewAdventuresOfDarkSoichiro Light and Dark DEUX,]] and [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1606355 SAD GOODBYES]] – a RoundRobin [[http://dn-kink2.livejournal.com/1491.html?thread=1638099 post game,]] and a [[WebOriginal/ProtectorsOfThePlotContinuum]] [[https://docs.google.com/document/d/19IxBxWurMG1m0Z_dzkeronH-kMej81s4Qvq32dSz38M/edit?usp=sharing PPC mission.]]
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It focuses on Dark Yagami, Light's twin brother who trained at Whammy House but is secretly Kira...at first. The story meanders to such an extent that any possible summary would be almost irrelevant by the third chapter, by which point Light's sister Sayu is "sexing" with Misa to steal her Death Note for her dad, who has taken Watari's job because Dark told him to but is secretly working for L. Later he goes to prison and then comes back and becomes King of the Shinigami before time travelling to France to kill Near to stop a [[TemporalParadox time paradox]]. So... yeah.
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It focuses on Dark Yagami, Light's twin brother who trained at Whammy House but is secretly Kira... at first. The story meanders to such an extent that any possible summary would be almost irrelevant by the third chapter, by which point Light's sister Sayu is "sexing" with Misa to steal her Death Note for her dad, who has taken Watari's job because Dark told him to but is secretly working for L. Later he goes to prison and then comes back and becomes King of the Shinigami before time travelling to France to kill Near to stop a [[TemporalParadox time paradox]]. So... yeah.
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--->"So it could be anyone? We are doomed! Doooomed! Dooooooomed!" wailed Light like a baby who licked saying "doooooomed".
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* BottomlessMagazines: Dark has a gun that holds 100,000 bullets. On one hand, it's not breaking any established limits, but on the other hans, it's far too many for a real gun to have.
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* BottomlessMagazines: Dark has a gun that holds 100,000 bullets. On one hand, it's not breaking any established limits, but on the other hans, hand, it's far too many for a real gun to have.
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* AnAesop: ''Dark Yagami's Lesbean Quest'' has a moral in favor of lesbian rights and that it’s okay that they aren’t attracted to men.
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%%* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: And it heals ''bullet wounds''.
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* CatchPhrase: "(Event will happen) or my name isn't (Name)!". L in particular is fond of this phrase, and it even gets written on Death Notes a few times.
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* ContinuitySnarl:
** An impressive feat, considering that this story is only 36 pages long and written by a single person. Nobody (including the author himself) has an idea of what's going on by the end of it - and the story just keeps on getting funnier because of this.
** The ending just makes this infinitely worse.
** An impressive feat, considering that this story is only 36 pages long and written by a single person. Nobody (including the author himself) has an idea of what's going on by the end of it - and the story just keeps on getting funnier because of this.
** The ending just makes this infinitely worse.
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* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: And it heals ''bullet wounds''.
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* ADayInTheLimeLight: Chapter 21, for Soichiro.
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