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* TheDogBitesBack: When the Yangban lead parahumans Null, One, and Two die in the CUI strike, many of the now-freed brainwashed cape attack the CUI staff meant to control them.



* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Taylor decides to build herself a base in Mars, both to evoke her Mechanicus "mentors"' work and to get away from Earth, where both gangs and government agencies are trying to hunt her down.

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** The Yangban members that did not turn on the CUI after Null, One, and Two's fiery deaths choose instead to run away and attempt to escape the country.
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** As she acquires all her resources from Mars and different asteroids, any attempt to track her through money is completely useless.


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* StraightForTheCommander: Someone massacres the Chinese Union-Imperial leadership during a full cabinet meeting.


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* StartMyOwn:
** Taylor starts her own organization, aimed at fighting any threats to humanity, including villains.
** After Leviathan's death, Hookwolf privately decides to split off from Kaiser and start his own gang.


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** Legend reads the riot act to Alexandria and Eidolon for their ham-fisted attempt to "recruit" Mechanicus.
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* IResembleThatRemark: Jack Slash hates it when people call the Nine murder-hobos... mostly because he knows it's the truth, but he can't acknowledge it because of his ItsAllAboutMe attitude.

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* IResembleThatRemark: Jack Slash hates it when people call the Nine murder-hobos... mostly because he knows it's the truth, but he can't acknowledge it because of his ItsAllAboutMe attitude.murder-hobos, and will murder whoever said that along with anyone else nearby.
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*** When Danny sells off their family home, Taylor buys it anonymously so she can keep and preserve her good memories of the place.

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*** ** When Danny sells off their family home, Taylor buys it anonymously so she can keep and preserve her good memories of the place.

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In an universe that only knows war, Eldrad Ulthran, the most powerful of Eldar Farseers, learns of certain Entities and their plans, which will annihilate countless versions of Earth - including the one where the Emperor of Mankind resides, creating a new god of Chaos that will tip the balance of power. In order to prevent this, Eldrad brings together the lords of the Eldar (himself and Yvraine), Necrons (Szarekh the Silent King and Trazyn the Infinite) and Mechanicus (Belisarius Cawl and Oud Oudia Raskian) and sends their full knowledge of sciences and engineering so one potential parahuman can stop the Entities.

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In an a universe that only knows war, Eldrad Ulthran, the most powerful of Eldar Farseers, learns of certain Entities and their plans, which will annihilate countless versions of Earth - including the one where the Emperor of Mankind resides, creating a new god of Chaos that will tip the balance of power. In order to prevent this, Eldrad brings together the lords of the Eldar (himself and Yvraine), Necrons (Szarekh the Silent King and Trazyn the Infinite) and Mechanicus (Belisarius Cawl and Oud Oudia Raskian) and sends their full knowledge of sciences and engineering so one potential parahuman can stop the Entities.



** [[spoiler:Leviathan is killed during the fight at Brockton Bay, rather than in the Gold Morning.]]



* GodzillaThreshold: Since Taylor has pinpointed [[spoiler:Noelle]] as the likely target for [[spoiler:Leviathan's attack]], she orders the man manning the portal control system to dump said target into the Sun should the latter get too close.

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* GodzillaThreshold: Since Taylor has pinpointed [[spoiler:Noelle]] as the likely target for [[spoiler:Leviathan's attack]], she orders the man manning the portal control system arranges to dump said target into the Sun should the latter get too close.



* HumongousMecha: For the fight against [[spoiler:Leviathan]], Taylor brings out three 90-meter tall ''Castigator''-class Titan known as ''Paragon of Terra'', ''Mettalum Olympus'', and ''Casus Belli''.

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* HumongousMecha: For the fight against [[spoiler:Leviathan]], Taylor brings out three 90-meter tall ''Castigator''-class Titan Titans known as ''Paragon of Terra'', ''Mettalum Olympus'', and ''Casus Belli''.



* {{Hypocrite}}: Alexandria was all too ready to ignore the Truce in order to force Taylor into her custody, but seconds later warns her not to break the Truce herself.

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* {{Hypocrite}}: ** Alexandria was all too ready to ignore the Truce in order to force Taylor into her custody, but seconds later warns her not to break the Truce herself.
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* HumongousMecha: For the fight against [[spoiler:Leviathan]], Taylor brings out the 90-meter tall ''Castigator''-class Titan ''Paragon of Terra'', as well as the ''Mettalum Olympus'' and ''Casus Belli''.

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* HumongousMecha: For the fight against [[spoiler:Leviathan]], Taylor brings out the three 90-meter tall ''Castigator''-class Titan known as ''Paragon of Terra'', as well as the ''Mettalum Olympus'' Olympus'', and ''Casus Belli''.

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* AlasPoorVillain: Cherish had joined the Slaughterhouse Nine for the sake of protecting herself from her father, only to suffer a lot at the hands of the other members [[spoiler:and end up getting headshot by Mechanicus' drones after witnessing Shatterbird's own death]].

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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Taylor chuckles when Jason asks if one of them has to get into the BodyDouble drone.
* AlasPoorVillain: Cherish had joined the Slaughterhouse Nine for the sake of protecting herself from her father, only to suffer a lot at the hands of the other members [[spoiler:and [[spoiler: and end up getting headshot by Mechanicus' drones after witnessing Shatterbird's own death]].death]].
* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler:Taylor takes advantage of Leviathan's likely reaction to being hit by powerful weapons that aren't enough to kill it (let itself get hit to cause the defenders' morale to drop) and sets the Endbringer up in position for an attack that ''will'' kill it.]]


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* BodyDouble: When her Skitarii point out that she could be at risk of being kidnapped if she personally goes to the fight against [[spoiler:Leviathan]], Taylor crafts a life-like body double she can control from Mars using a portal. Hilariously, even after she points this out to the Triumvirate, Alexandria still tries to make her surrender to the PRT by pointing out that her portals won't always work to help her escape.


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** Shadow Stalker attempts to browbeat Taylor by claiming that her own powers are much better than anything Taylor has done. Given that the list of things Taylor's done includes [[spoiler:killing two S-class threats (Nilbog and the Slaughterhouse Nine)]], it goes from just stupid to TooDumbToLive.
** Even after [[spoiler:Taylor used her creations to wipe Leviathan out]], the Triumvirate members think they can force Taylor to surrender.


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** [[spoiler:Leviathan barely gets to do any damage and causes ''zero'' casualties when it attacks Brockton Bay.]]


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* FailedASpotCheck: Taylor becomes amused when the PRT officer greeting her to the pre-Endbringer battle briefing doesn't seem to recognize her.


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* GodzillaThreshold: Since Taylor has pinpointed [[spoiler:Noelle]] as the likely target for [[spoiler:Leviathan's attack]], she orders the man manning the portal control system to dump said target into the Sun should the latter get too close.


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* HumongousMecha: For the fight against [[spoiler:Leviathan]], Taylor brings out the 90-meter tall ''Castigator''-class Titan ''Paragon of Terra'', as well as the ''Mettalum Olympus'' and ''Casus Belli''.


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* {{Hypocrite}}: Alexandria was all too ready to ignore the Truce in order to force Taylor into her custody, but seconds later warns her not to break the Truce herself.


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** The plan to deal with [[spoiler:Leviathan]] is actually called [[OperationBlank Operation Overkill]]. It features weapons that are ''much'' more powerful than what she used on Ellisburg.


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* NoodleIncident: When asked what happened to the Body Double Done version 1, Taylor just mimics an explosion with her hands.


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** [[spoiler:When Leviathan attacks Brockton Bay, Taylor doesn't hesitate in jumping to protect her hometown, even after everything she went through.]]
*** When Danny sells off their family home, Taylor buys it anonymously so she can keep and preserve her good memories of the place.


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* PokeInTheThirdEye: Tattletale gets a headache when she tries to use her power on Taylor's BodyDouble.


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* WeatherOfWar: Taylor notes that the weather condition Leviathan causes when it attacks is just as good a weapon as anything else it wields.
-->Moving towards the PRT building was like trying to hike up a ridiculously steep hill. Heavy and hard rain slammed into unprotected skin worse than hailstones. The skies themselves were dark and close, reducing daylight and temperatures. Visibility itself was down to a couple of dozen feet at most and cut nearly everyone off from anyone around them.\\
It was an atmosphere designed to carefully enhance the despair the creatures carried with them, combined with their reputations and most capes were unnerved before so much as catching sight of the incoming disaster.
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* Sophia let out a loud scream of rage after Piggot thrown the book at her.

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* ** Sophia let lets out a loud scream of rage after Piggot thrown throws the book at her.



** The dockworkers massively called out Danny for outing Taylor without even bothering to wait for her side of the story.

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-->'''Piggot:''' Did you not think for one second that someone might actually look into the case even if we caught, or worse, killed that girl? Did the thought not enter your head in the slightest?


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-->'''Piggot:''' What did you expect, you little idiot? The provisions for retaliating to an identity reveal and lethal attack on a Ward are in place to ensure that nobody beyond the Slaughterhouse 9 will ever try. And you just triggered them on an innocent party. If the PRT doesn't want a riot by nearly every non-Protectorate cape in the country we need to prove that such measures cannot be used for our gain. Congratulations, you are about to get hung out to dry. I would start thinking about what you are going to say to your lawyer, I'd suggest starting with the truth, but I'm not sure you'd know what that was if it hit you in the ass.


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*Sophia let out a loud scream of rage after Piggot thrown the book at her.
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** When the Skitarii are thrown against Heartbreaker, neither he nor the worst of his children are able to react before they are steamrolled.


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** [[spoiler:Several of the Heartbroken die in the Skitarii raid, instead of surviving to reach ''Ward''.]]


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** [[spoiler:Heartbreaker is shot twice instead of getting stabbed by Imp.]]

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** When she builds her first [[MiniMecha Knight]], she decides to take it out on a joy ride, and begins to cackle and twirl on her chair when she reviewa the data.



** After getting the data from her first foray in a [[MiniMecha Knight]], she cackles and twirls around on her chair.
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** When she finds a sleeping night guard in one of the supermarkets she's stealing, she makes it look like she caught the guy by surprise.
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* BullyingADragon: Despite ''knowing'' what her weapon can do, Jack Slash's first thought is that he can track Taylor down and either force her into the Nine or kill her and steal the weapon himself. Taylor, needless to say, doesn't find this funny at all.

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* BullyingADragon: Despite ''knowing'' what her weapon Plasma Annihilator can do, Jack Slash's first thought is that he can track Taylor down and either force her into the Nine or kill her and steal the weapon himself. Taylor, needless to say, doesn't find this funny at all.
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* ObstructiveBureaucrat: The PRT is ''deliberately'' inefficient thanks to Cauldron, in order to ensure that as many Parahumans trigger as possible, in the hopes that they'll get lucky and one of said triggers will be useful against Scion.

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* ObstructiveBureaucrat: The PRT is ''deliberately'' inefficient thanks to Cauldron, in order to ensure that as many Parahumans trigger as possible, in the hopes that they'll get lucky and one of said triggers will be useful against Scion.Scion (as well as making it look like only Parahumans can stop other Parahumans).

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* ObstructiveBureaucrat: The PRT is ''deliberately'' inefficient thanks to Cauldron, in order to ensure that as many Parahumans trigger as possible, in the hopes that they'll get lucky and one of said triggers will be useful against Scion.



* PlausibleDeniability: Part of why Piggot is able to keep her job is that she manages to claim that her draconian "contract" for Taylor was merely meant to scare her into good behavior instead of being a permanent thing if she was cooperative.



* SuicidalPacifism: Several of the PRT people Taylor recruits became disgusted with the organization because they were prevented from using potentially lethal measures even when faced with Parahumans that were trying to kill them - one of them lost his legs and left arm to a Cape that murdered thousands of people in a few hours while the Protectorate Capes let said Cape do whatever and the PRT troopers were killed while armed only with con foam sprayers.

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* SuicidalPacifism: Several of the PRT people Taylor recruits became disgusted with the organization because they were prevented from using potentially lethal measures even when faced with Parahumans that were trying to kill them - one of them lost his legs and left arm to a Cape that murdered thousands of people in a few hours while the Protectorate Capes let said Cape do whatever and the PRT troopers were killed while armed only with con foam sprayers.sprayers (with the capture of said Cape possibly being more the result of them ''tiring themselves out'' from the slaughter than Protectorate action).
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* SuicidalPacifism: Several of the PRT people Taylor recruits became disgusted with the organization because they were prevented from using potentially lethal measures even when faced with Parahumans that were trying to kill them - one of them lost his legs and left arm to a Cape that murdered thousands of people in a few hours while the Protectorate Capes let said Cape do whatever and the PRT troopers were killed while armed only with con foam sprayers.
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* BenevolentBoss: When Taylor begins to recruit people for her Skitarii, she offers incredible benefits (full health restoration, the best training and care in the world, equipment that makes anything else look like Legos and a generous pay and retirement packet), is upfront about the downsides (lots of combat, an implant that will prevent the recruits from betraying her and another that will destroy their bodies in case someone is captured or killed and she can't rescue them), and makes it clear that she wants people willing to ask questions and offer genuine advice.


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* HandicappedBadass: {{Downplayed}} - Taylor's first recruits for her organization are people coming from either the armed forces or the PRT that were drummed out after becoming handicapped, but before they start to work, she heals them so they'll be at peak human health.


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* ProperlyParanoid: Due to the security measures she's learned through her Trigger event, Taylor knows quite well the importance of ensuring everything is protected. The few times she's almost cornered (either by the Protectorate or by villains) it's because she wasn't paranoid ''enough''.
** When asked why she won't work with the PRT, Taylor states that, given how much the organization leaks information, it would be less than a year before her weapons were copied and used all across the planet.
** When recruiting the first members of the Skitarii, she gives them two implants, one that will prevent them from betraying her and another that will destroy their bodies and implants so no one can try to copy her inventions.
*** She also keeps surveillance of the people she's offered a job to make sure they won't sell her out to the PRT.


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* WellIntentionedExtremist:
** Alexandria reflects on her (and Cauldron's) actions in the aftermath of the Slaughterhouse Nine's destruction, pondering if they really are this or it's just what they are telling themselves to feel better about everything they do.
** Taylor doesn't care much about rule of law. As long as (a) it helps save humanity and (b) it isn't against her morality, such things can take a hike.

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* OhCrap: The general reaction in PHO when Taylor fires the Plasma Annihilator for the first time - which gets worse when she uses it to destroy Ellisburg.



* ParentalNeglect: When Danny is told about Taylor's supposed crimes, he signs over his guardianship of her without much discussion and outs her on public TV. After the deal breaks through when Taylor clears her name, he rejects a chance to recover the guardianship. It is later revealed that Danny was pressured and manipulated by the PRT into signing out the guardianship under the belief that the heroes would "save" his daughter. Furthermore, he was declared by the state to be mentally ineligible to take custody over Taylor. As a result, Danny [[ItsAllMyFault blames himself for Taylor's situation]].

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* ParentalNeglect: When Danny is told about Taylor's supposed crimes, he signs over his guardianship of her without much discussion and outs her on public TV. After the deal breaks through when Taylor clears her name, he rejects is denied guardianship but is granted a chance to recover the guardianship. regain it - but he chooses to reject it.
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It is later revealed that Danny was pressured and manipulated by the PRT into signing out the guardianship under the belief that the heroes would "save" his daughter.daughter (and because they were threatening to sign a Kill Order). Furthermore, he was declared by the state to be mentally ineligible to take custody over Taylor. As a result, Danny [[ItsAllMyFault blames himself for Taylor's situation]].



** Much of the drama of the story derives from how the PRT went on the warpath against Taylor and marked her as a villain before making sure that she was actually one.

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** Much of the drama of the story derives from how the PRT went on the warpath against Taylor and publicly marked her as a villain before making doing enough investigation to make sure that she was actually one.

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** [[spoiler:William Manton gets killed by the drones she used to bring Lung down, instead of getting crushed by Dragon.]]

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** [[spoiler:William Manton gets killed turned into LudicrousGibs by the drones she used to bring Lung down, instead of getting crushed by Dragon.]]



* HeroicBSOD: Piggot goes almost catatonic when she learns Taylor razed [[TraumaButton Ellisburg]] to the bedrock.

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* HeroicBSOD: HeroicBSOD:
** When she finds herself in a relatively safe place at the Docks, Taylor has a breakdown as she tries to deal with everything that has gone wrong. She has a worse breakdown, one that lasts ''days'', after finally making her way to Mars.
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* IronicDeath: [[spoiler:Mannequin chose to isolate himself from the world by putting his organs into a robotic body. His death comes from being crushed like a can.]]


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* JawDrop: Jack Slash's reaction [[spoiler:when Taylor's drones completely ignore all of the Siberian's attacks]].
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** Sophia ruins Taylor's life by invoking the Protectorate's protocols to [[MakeAnExampleOutOfThem make an example out of anyone threatening a Ward's life]]. When the truth is revealed, the Protectorate proceeds to make an example out of Sophia for manipulating them.

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** Sophia ruins Taylor's life by invoking the Protectorate's protocols to [[MakeAnExampleOutOfThem [[MakeAnExampleOfThem make an example out of anyone threatening a Ward's life]]. When the truth is revealed, the Protectorate proceeds to make an example out of Sophia for manipulating them.

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* BullyingADragon: Despite ''knowing'' what her weapon can do, Jack Slash's first thought is that he can track Taylor down and either force her into the Nine or kill her and steal the weapon himself.

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* BullyingADragon: Despite ''knowing'' what her weapon can do, Jack Slash's first thought is that he can track Taylor down and either force her into the Nine or kill her and steal the weapon himself. Taylor, needless to say, doesn't find this funny at all.



** When Taylor realizes [[ThePeepingTom a voyeur]] reported where she was, she warns the guy's target and erases every video he still has of the woman.

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** When Taylor realizes [[ThePeepingTom a voyeur]] reported where she was, she warns the guy's usual target and erases every video he still has of the woman.



* FrameUp: Sophia accuses Taylor of attacking her unprovoked, something that her classmates and the school officers corroborate, triggering a manhunt. Then Taylor publishes the videos of what actually happened, the case collapses over itself, and the PRT now looks incredibly incompetent over the entire issue.

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* FrameUp: Sophia accuses Taylor of attacking her unprovoked, something that her classmates and the school officers corroborate, triggering a manhunt. Then Taylor publishes proof of the videos actual events and of what actually happened, Sophia's extended bullying campaign, the case collapses over itself, and the PRT now looks incredibly incompetent over the entire issue.



* HollywoodHacking: Taylor's computer and skills are so advanced that the best firewalls the PRT uses are little more than speedbumps for her.

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* HollywoodHacking: Taylor's computer computers and skills are so advanced that the best firewalls the PRT uses are little more than speedbumps for her.



** She calls out Kaiser as this during her talk with him, because he claims she's breaking the Unwritten Rules by contacting him in his civilian identity - the same he repeatedly breaks on his own by killing or selling out other capes.
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Taylor didn't like having to [[spoiler:kill Bakuda]], but she didn't have the means to keep her imprisoned and knew that sending her to the Protectorate would only mean [[spoiler:Bakuda would just wait until she could slip out to continue her plans]].

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** She calls out Kaiser as this during her talk with him, because he claims she's breaking the Unwritten Rules by contacting him in his civilian identity - the same rules he repeatedly breaks on his own by killing or selling out other capes.
* IDidWhatIHadToDo: Taylor didn't like having to [[spoiler:kill Bakuda]], but she didn't have the means to keep her imprisoned and knew that sending her to the Protectorate would only mean [[spoiler:Bakuda would just wait until she could slip out to continue of her plans]].chains and restart her plans to kill everyone]].
* IHaveNoSon: Inverted. When Danny outs Taylor on TV, Taylor rejects him as a father and considers herself an orphan.



** The reason the PRT was so heavy-handed in going after Taylor, to the point of having ''her father out her on TV'' (after telling him that unless he went along with what they were saying that they'd give her a ''kill order'') and Piggot trying to force a draconian contract on her (described by many as "contractual slavery"), is because the testimony of Sophia and her cronies made her out to be a villain deliberately targeting Sophia for being a Ward while she was in her secret identity (not helped by Sophia's bullying campaign and Winslow's covering for her giving them a completely inaccurate picture of Taylor's personality), and the measures were supposed to make sure that ''no one'' save the Nine would try something else like that again. When Taylor publishes the evidence showing that it was ''Sophia'' who attacked ''her'', and as a civilian, the PRT loses a lot of face as a result. Piggot then informs Sophia that she'll be hung out to dry, itself an example of this to make sure that no one ''else'' tries to manipulate the PRT's measures to their benefit like she did.
** Taylor destroys the Slaughterhouse Nine in a drawn-out manner and then publishes the full video as a warning of what she can do to anyone planning to capture her and force her to work for them.
* MercyKill: [[spoiler:Taylor kills Bakuda swiftly and painlessly with a combination of drugs, since she knows that there's no way that Bakuda will stay with the PRT if they capture her. Given that the alternative was to shoot her down, it was a better option.]]

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** The reason the PRT was so heavy-handed in going after Taylor, to the point of having ''her father out her on TV'' (after telling him that unless he went along with what they were saying that they'd give her a ''kill order'') and Piggot trying to force a draconian contract on her (described by many everyone that read it as "contractual slavery"), is because the testimony of Sophia and her cronies made her out to be a villain deliberately targeting Sophia for being a Ward while she was in her secret identity (not helped by Sophia's bullying campaign and Winslow's covering for her giving them a completely inaccurate picture of Taylor's personality), and the measures were supposed to make sure that ''no one'' save the Nine would try something else like that again. When Taylor publishes the evidence showing that it was ''Sophia'' who attacked ''her'', and as a civilian, the PRT loses a lot of face as a result. Piggot then informs Sophia that she'll be hung out to dry, itself an example of this to make sure that no one ''else'' tries to manipulate the PRT's measures to their benefit like she did.
** Taylor destroys the Slaughterhouse Nine in a drawn-out manner and then publishes the full video as a warning of what she can do to anyone planning to who thinks they can capture her and force her to work for them.
* MercyKill: [[spoiler:Taylor kills Bakuda swiftly and painlessly with a combination of drugs, since she knows that there's no way that Bakuda will stay with the PRT if they capture her. Given that the alternative her initial idea was to shoot blow up her down, head with a laser rifle, it was a better option.]]



** Whatever respect Taylor had for the organization vanishes as they try to arrest her without even considering her innocence.

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** Whatever respect Taylor had for the organization vanishes as they try to arrest her without even considering her innocence. As some people in PHO point out later on, this also loses them one of the most powerful Tinkers to ever show up.



* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Taylor decides to build herself a base in Mars, both to evoke her Mechanicus "mentors"' work and to get out of Brockton Bay, where every gang is hunting for her.

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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Taylor decides to build herself a base in Mars, both to evoke her Mechanicus "mentors"' work and to get out of Brockton Bay, away from Earth, where every gang is hunting for her.both gangs and government agencies are trying to hunt her down.



** Taylor loses two of her temporary refuges because of minor things. The first because she used the house's [=WiFi=] to post a message in PHO and gets tracked by Dragon, and the second because [[ThePeepingTom a voyeur]] accidentally saw one of her drones and reported it to Oni Lee.

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** Taylor loses two of her temporary refuges because of minor things. The first because she used the house's [=WiFi=] to post a message in PHO and gets got tracked by Dragon, and the second because [[ThePeepingTom a voyeur]] accidentally saw one of her drones and reported it to Oni Lee.



* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: Taylor, learning of the Nine wanting to draw her out and either kill or make her a member of their group, decides to not only kill them, but make it so their last days on Earth are about them suffering the same kind of horror-movie-worthy events they have inflicted on hundreds of people.
** She kidnaps [[spoiler:Bonesaw and all her spiderbots]] in the dead of the night, and kills [[spoiler:her along with all her dead-man-trigger diseases she had prepared]], with none of the Nine being the wiser until the next morning.
** She sets up an incendiary bomb to destroy [[spoiler:Murder Rat]], exploding when the Nine are settling up the next night.
** Right after that, she kills [[spoiler:Burnscar]] in front of the entire group with a Warp Spider drone.
** The next morning, she sends the Warp Spider again to distract [[spoiler:Crawler]] so she can set him up for a Necron Lokhust Heavy Destroyer to kill.
** [[spoiler:William Manton is killed by a drone that is unstoppable and cannot be hit if it doesn't want - much like the Siberian.]]
** Jack Slash [[spoiler:gets killed after being hunted for days, put through the wringer as he realizes his own mortality, and finally put down after having his philosophy ripped apart]].
* TooDumbToLive: Taylor's opinion of the Undersiders for robbing a casino without checking its owner's identity or ensuring they wouldn't be identified.

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* ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine: ATasteOfTheirOwnMedicine:
** Sophia ruins Taylor's life by invoking the Protectorate's protocols to [[MakeAnExampleOutOfThem make an example out of anyone threatening a Ward's life]]. When the truth is revealed, the Protectorate proceeds to make an example out of Sophia for manipulating them.
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Taylor, learning of the Nine wanting to draw her out and either kill or make her a member of their group, decides to not only kill them, but make it so their last days on Earth are about them suffering the same kind of horror-movie-worthy events they have inflicted on hundreds of people.
** *** She kidnaps [[spoiler:Bonesaw and all her spiderbots]] in the dead of the night, and kills [[spoiler:her along with all her dead-man-trigger diseases she had prepared]], with none of the Nine being the wiser until the next morning.
** *** She sets up an incendiary bomb to destroy [[spoiler:Murder Rat]], exploding when the Nine are settling up the next night.
** *** Right after that, she kills [[spoiler:Burnscar]] in front of the entire group with a Warp Spider drone.
** *** The next morning, she sends the Warp Spider again to distract [[spoiler:Crawler]] so she can set him up for a Necron Lokhust Heavy Destroyer to kill.
** *** She kills [[spoiler:Shatterbird]] without any kind of warning, [[spoiler:much like she's destroyed entire cities with her singing without any warning]].
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** *** Jack Slash [[spoiler:gets killed after being hunted for days, put through the wringer as he realizes his own mortality, and finally put down after having his philosophy ripped apart]].
* TooDumbToLive: Taylor's opinion of the Undersiders for robbing a casino without checking its owner's identity or ensuring they wouldn't be identified.
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* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: {{Discussed}} and {{Averted}}. Knowing how devastating a decision made on an impulsive reaction could be, Taylor keeps up several protocols that will prevent her drones from acting if she's mentally compromised.

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* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: TooDumbToLive: Taylor's opinion of the Undersiders for robbing a casino without checking its owner's identity or ensuring they wouldn't be identified.
* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness:
** Much of the drama of the story derives from how the PRT went on the warpath against Taylor and marked her as a villain before making sure that she was actually one.
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* HurlItIntoTheSun: Taylor's go-to method to destroy anything that ''really'' needs to be destroyed is to do this.

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* HurlItIntoTheSun: Taylor's go-to method to destroy anything that ''really'' needs to be destroyed is to do this.destroyed.
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** After getting the data f4om her first foray in a [[MiniMecha Knight]], she cackles and twirls around on her chair.

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** After getting the data f4om from her first foray in a [[MiniMecha Knight]], she cackles and twirls around on her chair.
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* TooDumbToLive: Taylor's opinion of the Undersiders for robbing a casino without checking its owner's identity or ensuring they wouldn't be identified.
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** After getting the data f4om her first foray in a [[MiniMecha Knight]], she cackles and twirls around on her chair.

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* AlasPoorVillain: Cherish had joined the Slaughterhouse Nine for the sake of protecting herself from her father, only to suffer a lot at the hands of the other members and end up getting headshot by Mechanicus' drones after witnessing Shatterbird's own death.

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* AlasPoorVillain: Cherish had joined the Slaughterhouse Nine for the sake of protecting herself from her father, only to suffer a lot at the hands of the other members and [[spoiler:and end up getting headshot by Mechanicus' drones after witnessing Shatterbird's own death.death]].



* BodyHorror: {{Invoked|Trope}} by Taylor, who makes herself look like Belisarius Cawl when she shows her image.



** [[spoiler:Jack Slash becomes vaporized by three Doomsday Blasters instead of getting trapped in a Gray Boy time loop and dying in the Gold Morning.]]

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** [[spoiler:Jack Slash becomes vaporized by three Doomsday Blasters instead of getting trapped in a Gray Grey Boy time loop and dying in the Gold Morning.]]



* {{Hypocrite}}: Taylor notes this of Tattletale, who keeps complaining about being forced to work for Coil, yet has no problem in helping Coil force Taylor to work for him. To be fair to Tattletale, it's implied that she was delaying him from finding her as much as she could, but Taylor doesn't know this.

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* {{Hypocrite}}: {{Hypocrite}}:
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Taylor notes this of Tattletale, who keeps complaining about being forced to work for Coil, yet has no problem in helping Coil force Taylor to work for him. To be fair to Tattletale, it's implied that she was delaying him from finding her as much as she could, but Taylor doesn't know this.this.
** She calls out Kaiser as this during her talk with him, because he claims she's breaking the Unwritten Rules by contacting him in his civilian identity - the same he repeatedly breaks on his own by killing or selling out other capes.



** When attacking the plane carrying Gessellschaft capes to America, she has the warplane dedicated to it fire into it until little more than a few pieces of scrap remain.



** [[spoiler:Mannequin gets crushed into the size of a can by a gravitational singularity.]]



** When she realizes that the PRT is sending sensors to allied countries in an attempt to track her, Taylor briefly considers sending a selfie to "lead" them to the North Pole or one where a penguin of a particular species "accidentally" photobombs the entire thing. She only refrains from it because it would distract hero teams from fighting villains ([[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial not because getting a penguin to photobomb a picture is too hard]]).

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** When she realizes that the PRT is sending sensors to allied countries in an attempt to track her, Taylor briefly considers sending a selfie to "lead" them to the North Pole or one somewhere where a penguin of a particular species "accidentally" photobombs the entire thing. She only refrains from it because it would distract hero teams from fighting villains ([[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial not because getting a penguin to photobomb a picture is too hard]]).



** Taylor sets up things so Purity won't be forced to deal with Kaiser anymore and keep custody of Theo and Aster, both because it helps the woman and because it would ensure she stops doing Kaiser's bidding.

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** Taylor sets up things so Purity won't be forced to deal with Kaiser anymore and keep custody of Theo and Aster, both because it helps the woman and because it would ensure she stops doing Kaiser's bidding. [[spoiler:She also destroys a plane full of Gessellschaft capes coming to Brockton Bay at Kaiser's request to force Purity back into the Empire.]]


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** [[spoiler:William Manton is killed by a drone that is unstoppable and cannot be hit if it doesn't want - much like the Siberian.]]
** Jack Slash [[spoiler:gets killed after being hunted for days, put through the wringer as he realizes his own mortality, and finally put down after having his philosophy ripped apart]].


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* BullyingADragon: Despite ''knowing'' what her weapon can do, Jack Slash's first thought is that he can track Taylor down and either force her into the Nine or kill her and steal the weapon himself.



** The reason the PRT was so heavy-handed in going after Taylor, to the point of having ''her father out her on TV'' and Piggot trying to force a draconian contract on her (described by many as "contractual slavery"), is because the testimony of Sophia and her cronies made her out to be a villain deliberately targeting Sophia for being a Ward while she was in her secret identity (not helped by Sophia's bullying campaign and Winslow's covering for her giving them a completely inaccurate picture of Taylor's personality), and the measures were supposed to make sure that ''no one'' save the Nine would try something else like that again. When Taylor publishes the evidence showing that it was ''Sophia'' who attacked ''her'', and as a civilian, the PRT loses a lot of face as a result. Piggot then informs Sophia that she'll be hung out to dry, itself an example of this to make sure that no one ''else'' tries to manipulate the PRT's measures to their benefit like she did.

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** The reason the PRT was so heavy-handed in going after Taylor, to the point of having ''her father out her on TV'' (after telling him that unless he went along with what they were saying that they'd give her a ''kill order'') and Piggot trying to force a draconian contract on her (described by many as "contractual slavery"), is because the testimony of Sophia and her cronies made her out to be a villain deliberately targeting Sophia for being a Ward while she was in her secret identity (not helped by Sophia's bullying campaign and Winslow's covering for her giving them a completely inaccurate picture of Taylor's personality), and the measures were supposed to make sure that ''no one'' save the Nine would try something else like that again. When Taylor publishes the evidence showing that it was ''Sophia'' who attacked ''her'', and as a civilian, the PRT loses a lot of face as a result. Piggot then informs Sophia that she'll be hung out to dry, itself an example of this to make sure that no one ''else'' tries to manipulate the PRT's measures to their benefit like she did.


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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Taylor decides against having a penguin "accidentally" photobomb her and send the heroes on a wild goose chase because it would distract the heroes from actual criminals... ''not'' because getting a penguin to do something like that is surprisingly hard.
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* ParentalNeglect: When Danny is told about Taylor's supposed crimes, he signs over his guardianship of her without much discussion and outs her on public TV. After the deal breaks through when Taylor clears her name, he rejects a chance to recover the guardianship.

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* ParentalNeglect: When Danny is told about Taylor's supposed crimes, he signs over his guardianship of her without much discussion and outs her on public TV. After the deal breaks through when Taylor clears her name, he rejects a chance to recover the guardianship. It is later revealed that Danny was pressured and manipulated by the PRT into signing out the guardianship under the belief that the heroes would "save" his daughter. Furthermore, he was declared by the state to be mentally ineligible to take custody over Taylor. As a result, Danny [[ItsAllMyFault blames himself for Taylor's situation]].

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* AlasPoorVillain: Cherish had joined the Slaughterhouse Nine for the sake of protecting herself from her father, only to suffer a lot at the hands of the other members and end up getting headshot by Mechanicus' drones after witnessing Shatterbird's own death.



** So far, Taylor vs the Slaughterhouse Nine has gone 2-0, with the latter being unable to do anything as her drones kill them one by one.

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** So far, Taylor vs the Slaughterhouse Nine has gone 2-0, with ends in an overwhelming victory for the latter being former, as the murderhobos are completely unable to do anything as her drones kill them one by one.that even slightly inconveniences Taylor.



** [[spoiler:Shatterbird gets turned into plasma instead of being crushed in the ruins of Coil's underground base by Vista.]]
** [[spoiler:Rather than being turned into a HeadJar and having the Butcher in her mind until the Gold Morning, Cherish gets head shot with a Ranger sniper rifle.]]
** [[spoiler:William Manton gets killed by the drones she used to bring Lung down, instead of getting crushed by Dragon.]]
** [[spoiler:Mannequin gets crushed into a gravitational singularity instead of dying to one of Bakuda's bombs.]]
** [[spoiler:Jack Slash becomes vaporized by three Doomsday Blasters instead of getting trapped in a Gray Boy time loop and dying in the Gold Morning.]]



* MakeAnExampleOfThem: The reason the PRT was so heavy-handed in going after Taylor, to the point of having ''her father out her on TV'' and Piggot trying to force a draconian contract on her (described by many as "contractual slavery"), is because the testimony of Sophia and her cronies made her out to be a villain deliberately targeting Sophia for being a Ward while she was in her secret identity (not helped by Sophia's bullying campaign and Winslow's covering for her giving them a completely inaccurate picture of Taylor's personality), and the measures were supposed to make sure that ''no one'' save the Nine would try something else like that again. When Taylor publishes the evidence showing that it was ''Sophia'' who attacked ''her'', and as a civilian, the PRT loses a lot of face as a result. Piggot then informs Sophia that she'll be hung out to dry, itself an example of this to make sure that no one ''else'' tries to manipulate the PRT's measures to their benefit like she did.

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* MakeAnExampleOfThem: MakeAnExampleOfThem:
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The reason the PRT was so heavy-handed in going after Taylor, to the point of having ''her father out her on TV'' and Piggot trying to force a draconian contract on her (described by many as "contractual slavery"), is because the testimony of Sophia and her cronies made her out to be a villain deliberately targeting Sophia for being a Ward while she was in her secret identity (not helped by Sophia's bullying campaign and Winslow's covering for her giving them a completely inaccurate picture of Taylor's personality), and the measures were supposed to make sure that ''no one'' save the Nine would try something else like that again. When Taylor publishes the evidence showing that it was ''Sophia'' who attacked ''her'', and as a civilian, the PRT loses a lot of face as a result. Piggot then informs Sophia that she'll be hung out to dry, itself an example of this to make sure that no one ''else'' tries to manipulate the PRT's measures to their benefit like she did.did.
** Taylor destroys the Slaughterhouse Nine in a drawn-out manner and then publishes the full video as a warning of what she can do to anyone planning to capture her and force her to work for them.



** It's implied that the dockworkers called out Danny for outing Taylor without even bothering to wait for her side of the story.

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** It's implied that the The dockworkers massively called out Danny for outing Taylor without even bothering to wait for her side of the story.
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** She once complains that she's living in a tragedy because she's run out of decent tea.

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** She Taylor once complains that she's living in a tragedy because she's run out of decent tea.

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