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* BlowYouAway: [[spoiler:Kiichi Hogen's fan which is used to defeat Kouma]]
* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Kiritsugu's numerous assassinations comes back to bite him when a yakuza gang remembers him and try to take revenge starting the first conflict of the fic.
* TheCameo: Along with Adaptational Early Appearance, Several Type Moon characters: Aro Myorenji ([[spoiler:Pepe]] from FGO), Kiara, Bazett, Ibaraki's hands.
* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Kiritsugu's numerous assassinations comes back to bite him when a yakuza gang remembers him and try to take revenge starting the first conflict of the fic.
* TheCameo: Along with Adaptational Early Appearance, Several Type Moon characters: Aro Myorenji ([[spoiler:Pepe]] from FGO), Kiara, Bazett, Ibaraki's hands.
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* BlowYouAway: [[spoiler:Kiichi Hogen's fan fan, which is used to defeat Kouma]]
* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Kiritsugu's numerous assassinations comes back to bite him when a yakuza gang remembers him and try to take revenge starting the first conflict of thefic.
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* TheCameo: Along with Adaptational Early Appearance, Several Type Moon characters:Aro Arou Myorenji ([[spoiler:Pepe]] from FGO), Kiara, Bazett, and even Ibaraki's hands.Hand.
* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Kiritsugu's numerous assassinations comes back to bite him when a yakuza gang remembers him and try to take revenge starting the first conflict of the
* TheCameo: Along with Adaptational Early Appearance, Several Type Moon characters:
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* DraggedOffToHell: [[spoiler:Miroku is sent through Rashoumon after pissing off Kiichi.]]
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* DraggedOffToHell: [[spoiler:Miroku is sent through Rashoumon a gate to Hell after pissing off Kiichi.]]
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* FlingALightIntoTheFuture: [[spoiler:Paracelsus left a photonic crystal AI of himself to continue his work to make a cure for the Tohno family's demon blood.]]
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* FlingALightIntoTheFuture: [[spoiler:Paracelsus left a photonic crystal AI of himself to continue his work to make a cure for the Tohno family's demon blood.demonic blood heritage.]]
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* InSpiteOfANail: Although the Fourth Grail War was different the end result was about the same along with 2 occurrences as well.
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* InSpiteOfANail: Although the Fourth Grail War was different the end result was about the same along with 2 two occurrences as well.
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* MagicalEye: Wu Yi has 1 which gives them precognition while fighting Kiritsugu.
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* MagicalEye: Wu Yi has 1 which gives them him precognition while fighting Kiritsugu.
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* PowerCopying: Shirou manages to [[spoiler:use Ushiwakamaru's swordplay Hoemaru & Shukichi against Kiichi]]
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* PowerCopying: Shirou manages to [[spoiler:use Ushiwakamaru's swordplay swordplay, alongside the True Name release Hoemaru & as well as Shukichi against Kiichi]]
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* AdaptationOriginConnection: Shirou meets Aro Myorenji ([[spoiler:Pepe]]) while trying to learn Shugendo & ends up [[spoiler:in the conflict that resulted in the destruction of his family.]]
** Bazett has a brief cameo in Waver's class as a student.
** Bazett has a brief cameo in Waver's class as a student.
* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Miruko's demands [[spoiler:for Kiichi to turn them into a genuine Tengu gets them dragged off to hell.]]
* BlowYouAway: [[spoiler:Kiichi Hogen's fan which is used to defeat Kouma]]
* TheCameo: Along with Adaptational Early Appearance, Several Type Moon characters: Aro Myorenji ([[spoiler:Pepe]] from FGO), Kiara, Bazett, Ibaraki's hands.
* DraggedOffToHell: [[spoiler:Miroku is sent through Rashoumon after pissing off Kiichi.]]
* ExactWords: [[spoiler:Kiichi explains that the ancient head of the Myorenji was able to become a Tengu due to the deal made, but it was only made for him not anyone else.]]
* ExactWords: [[spoiler:Kiichi explains that the ancient head of the Myorenji was able to become a Tengu due to the deal made, but it was only made for him not anyone else.]]
* HandicappedBadass: combined with DentedIron, Kiritsugu.
* MagicalEye: Wu Yi has 1 which gives them precognition while fighting Kiritsugu.
* PowerCopying: Shirou manages to [[spoiler:use Ushiwakamaru's swordplay Hoemaru & Shukichi against Kiichi]]
* Teleportation: [[spoiler:Kiichi is capable of this with Shukichi]]
* ThePromise: [[spoiler:Kiichi]] has Shirou make one to return in 10 years in exchange for the fire he needs.
* ThePromise: [[spoiler:Kiichi]] has Shirou make one to return in 10 years in exchange for the fire he needs.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Kaburagi is perfectly willing to target kids for money.
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* WasOnceAMan: [[spoiler:The Myorenji clan were transormed into Yokai, spider demons & Tengu.]] Subverted for [[spoiler:Miroku who instigated it & was always a Jorogumo spider]]
* TheWorfEffect: Aro Myorenji & Kouma are on the receiving end of [[spoiler:Kiichi Hogen]]
* WouldHurtAChild: Kaburagi is perfectly willing to target kids formoney.money.
* YouRemindMeOfX: [[spoiler:Kiichi feels this way about Shirou when he uses Ushiwakamaru's weapon & fighting style.]]
* TheWorfEffect: Aro Myorenji & Kouma are on the receiving end of [[spoiler:Kiichi Hogen]]
* WouldHurtAChild: Kaburagi is perfectly willing to target kids for
* YouRemindMeOfX: [[spoiler:Kiichi feels this way about Shirou when he uses Ushiwakamaru's weapon & fighting style.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13818255/1/%E6%B7%B7%E6%B2%8C%E3%81%AE%E6%88%A6%E3%81%84-Konton-no-Tatakai 混沌の戦い — Konton no Tatakai]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Melqart. The story expands on the Nasuverse as a whole while also going over Kiritsugu & Shirou's lives after the [[Literature/FateZero Fourth War]], but with major differences. Currntly only available in Spanish.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13818255/1/%E6%B7%B7%E6%B2%8C%E3%81%AE%E6%88%A6%E3%81%84-Konton-no-Tatakai 混沌の戦い — Konton no Tatakai]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Melqart. The story expands on the Nasuverse as a whole while also going over Kiritsugu & Shirou's lives after the [[Literature/FateZero Fourth War]], but with major differences. Currntly Currently only available in Spanish.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Waver states that Shirou generating lightning with the Sowlio Rune shouldn't have worked. He continuously manages to use it this way in spite of hearing this.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Waver states that Shirou generating lightning with the Sowlio Sol Rune shouldn't have worked. He continuously manages to use it this way in spite of hearing this.
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* BilingualBonus: The fic is written in Spanish, but can be translated with google.
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* BilingualBonus: The fic is written in Spanish, but can be translated with google.Google.
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* IgnoranceIsBliss: The doctor Kiritsugu meets early on tells him that this won't keep Shirou safe after learning [[spoiler:that Shirou has a Magic Crest and Sword Element/Origin that would make other mages want to experiment on him.]]
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* IgnoranceIsBliss: Averted. The doctor Kiritsugu meets early on tells him that this won't keep Shirou safe after learning [[spoiler:that Shirou has a Magic Crest and Sword Element/Origin that would make other mages want to experiment on him.]]
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* ShockAndAwe: Shirou uses the Sowlio Rune to create a lightning sword.
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* ShockAndAwe: Shirou uses the Sowlio Sol Rune to create a lightning sword.
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* AchievementsInIgnorance: Waver states that Shirou generating lightning with the Sowlio Rune shouldn't have worked. He continuously manages to use it this way in spite of hearing this.
* AmbiguousSituation: The activation of [[spoiler:Shirou's Crest is explained by Paracelsus as being due to either a large influc of mana or blood relation. This happened after he received a boost from Kohaku's synchronizer ability so it could be either.]]
* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Kiritsugu's numerous assassinations comes back to bite him when a yakuza gang remembers him and try to take revenge starting the first conflict of the fic.
* FlingALightIntoTheFuture: [[spoiler:Paracelsus left a photonic crystal AI of himself to continue his work to make a cure for the Tohno family's demon blood.]]
* Foreshadowing: The organization has Kaburagi [[spoiler:throw a type of magical projector into the Fuyuki River.]]
* Foreshadowing: The organization has Kaburagi [[spoiler:throw a type of magical projector into the Fuyuki River.]]
* InternalReveal: Taiga learns about the Moonlit World after being kidnapped alongside Shirou.
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** There are mentions of the Reiroukan, Sajyou, and other families from Fate Prototype.
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** There are mentions of the Reiroukan, Sajyou, and other families from Fate Prototype.Prototype as well as El-Melloi II Case Files/Adventures.
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* RaceAgainstTheClock: [[spoiler:Shirou has around 3 years to improve his skills in magecraft to create an antidote to Kiritsugu's curse before it kills him.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Maiya was brought to a hospital by Saber though she is now in a coma.]]
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: When Raiga brings Shirou on a hunting trip [[spoiler:he ends up introducing mentioning his last name to Rin who mentions it while speaking with Kirei which lets him know that there is someone related to Kiritsugu.]]
* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: When Raiga brings Shirou on a hunting trip [[spoiler:he ends up introducing mentioning his last name to Rin who mentions it while speaking with Kirei which lets him know that there is someone related to Kiritsugu.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13818255/1/%E6%B7%B7%E6%B2%8C%E3%81%AE%E6%88%A6%E3%81%84-Konton-no-Tatakai 混沌の戦い — Konton no Tatakai]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Melqart. The story expands on the Nasuverse as a whole while also going over Kiritsugu & Shirou's lives after the [[Literature/FateZero Fourth War]], but with major differences.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13818255/1/%E6%B7%B7%E6%B2%8C%E3%81%AE%E6%88%A6%E3%81%84-Konton-no-Tatakai 混沌の戦い — Konton no Tatakai]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Melqart. The story expands on the Nasuverse as a whole while also going over Kiritsugu & Shirou's lives after the [[Literature/FateZero Fourth War]], but with major differences.
differences. Currntly only available in Spanish.
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* BilingualBonus: The fic is written in Spanish, but can be translated.
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* BilingualBonus: The fic is written in Spanish, but can be translated.translated with google.
* CrashIntoHello: How Shirou usually meets with Kohaku.
* CrashIntoHello: How Shirou usually meets with Kohaku.
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** The yakuza from FGO feature as early antagonists in the first arcs.
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** The yakuza from FGO feature as early antagonists in the first arcs.arcs.
* ShockAndAwe: Shirou uses the Sowlio Rune to create a lightning sword.
* WouldHurtAChild: Kaburagi is perfectly willing to target kids for money.
* ShockAndAwe: Shirou uses the Sowlio Rune to create a lightning sword.
* WouldHurtAChild: Kaburagi is perfectly willing to target kids for money.
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[AU]. Magia y espadas. Brasas y relámpagos. Sueños imposibles e ideales heredados. La historia que nunca debió de haber ocurrido. La esperanza que se creyó haber perdido. La destrucción de la anatema, y el ascenso de una leyenda. Un nuevo ciclo, un nuevo camino. Un nuevo destino.
[AU]. Magic and swords. Embers and lightning. Impossible dreams and inherited ideals. The story that should never have happened. The hope that was thought to have been lost. The destruction of anathema, and the rise of a legend. A new cycle, a new path. A new destination.
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13818255/1/%E6%B7%B7%E6%B2%8C%E3%81%AE%E6%88%A6%E3%81%84-Konton-no-Tatakai 混沌の戦い — Konton no Tatakai]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Melqart. The story expands on the Nasuverse as a whole while also going over Kiritsugu & Shirou's lives after the [[Literature/FateZero Fourth War]], but with major differences.
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!!''Konton No Tatakai'' provides examples of:
* AdaptationExpansion: The author is fond of using minor characters of the series and giving them expanded roles like the [[spoiler:Master of Assassin for the Black Faction.]]
* AlternateUniverse: The Fourth Grail War is shown to have happened differently from canon with [[spoiler:Paracelsus being the Caster summoned by the Reiroukan family and the Archer being someone who uses an actual bow.]]
* BilingualBonus: The fic is written in Spanish, but can be translated.
* IgnoranceIsBliss: The doctor Kiritsugu meets early on tells him that this won't keep Shirou safe after learning [[spoiler:that Shirou has a Magic Crest and Sword Element/Origin that would make other mages want to experiment on him.]]
* InSpiteOfANail: Although the Fourth Grail War was different the end result was about the same along with 2 occurrences as well.
** Gilles de Rais still appeared in spite of a different Caster being summoned and caused havoc.
** Gilgamesh also appeared, but there was mention of an Archer who actually used a bow.
* MythologyGag: All over the place in this fic.
** Early on Shirou & Kiritsugu visit the town where Tsukihime takes place and meet characters from the series.
** There are mentions of the Reiroukan, Sajyou, and other families from Fate Prototype.
** The Haunted House from Fate/Hollow Ataraxia is the base of the master of Caster from the Fourth War.
** The yakuza from FGO feature as early antagonists in the first arcs.
[AU]. Magic and swords. Embers and lightning. Impossible dreams and inherited ideals. The story that should never have happened. The hope that was thought to have been lost. The destruction of anathema, and the rise of a legend. A new cycle, a new path. A new destination.
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13818255/1/%E6%B7%B7%E6%B2%8C%E3%81%AE%E6%88%A6%E3%81%84-Konton-no-Tatakai 混沌の戦い — Konton no Tatakai]]'' is a ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' AlternateUniverseFic written by Melqart. The story expands on the Nasuverse as a whole while also going over Kiritsugu & Shirou's lives after the [[Literature/FateZero Fourth War]], but with major differences.
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!!''Konton No Tatakai'' provides examples of:
* AdaptationExpansion: The author is fond of using minor characters of the series and giving them expanded roles like the [[spoiler:Master of Assassin for the Black Faction.]]
* AlternateUniverse: The Fourth Grail War is shown to have happened differently from canon with [[spoiler:Paracelsus being the Caster summoned by the Reiroukan family and the Archer being someone who uses an actual bow.]]
* BilingualBonus: The fic is written in Spanish, but can be translated.
* IgnoranceIsBliss: The doctor Kiritsugu meets early on tells him that this won't keep Shirou safe after learning [[spoiler:that Shirou has a Magic Crest and Sword Element/Origin that would make other mages want to experiment on him.]]
* InSpiteOfANail: Although the Fourth Grail War was different the end result was about the same along with 2 occurrences as well.
** Gilles de Rais still appeared in spite of a different Caster being summoned and caused havoc.
** Gilgamesh also appeared, but there was mention of an Archer who actually used a bow.
* MythologyGag: All over the place in this fic.
** Early on Shirou & Kiritsugu visit the town where Tsukihime takes place and meet characters from the series.
** There are mentions of the Reiroukan, Sajyou, and other families from Fate Prototype.
** The Haunted House from Fate/Hollow Ataraxia is the base of the master of Caster from the Fourth War.
** The yakuza from FGO feature as early antagonists in the first arcs.
