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* KillSteal: The only reason why Tatsumi fights Akame in the rewrite is so that he can be the one to kill Aria for the torture she and her family inflicted upon innocent people.
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* HotterAndSexier: A side effect for everyone in Tatsumi's harem from receiving Tyrant abilities is that their physiques end up filling out the areas where they were once lacking, giving them more muscular, defined appearances.
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* HotterAndSexier: A side effect for everyone in Tatsumi's harem from receiving Tyrant abilities is that their physiques end up filling out the areas where they were once lacking, are substantially enhanced, giving them more muscular, defined muscular and well-endowed appearances.
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** Lubbock can call on a spirit spider to kill and consume foes trapped within Cross-Tail's strings as well as warn him of enemies that pass by his strings undetected.
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** Lubbock can call on a spirit spider to kill and consume foes trapped within Cross-Tail's strings as well as warn him of enemies that pass by manage to get past his strings undetected.without triggering them.
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Currently undergoing a rewrite at 4 chapters (technically 5 due to the author splitting chapter 4 into multiple parts).
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Currently undergoing a rewrite at 4 8 chapters (technically 5 due to the author splitting chapter chapters 3 and 4 into multiple parts).
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Surprisingly enough, [[AxCrazy Seryu]] gets this treatment after reading her former mentor Ogre's diary at Tatsumi's request, becoming TheMole for Night Raid among the Jaegers after [[BrokenPedestal learning that Ogre never really cared for her.]]
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Surprisingly enough, [[AxCrazy [[KnightTemplar Seryu]] gets this treatment after reading her former mentor Ogre's diary at Tatsumi's request, becoming TheMole for Night Raid among the Jaegers after [[BrokenPedestal learning that Ogre never really cared for her.]]
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* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: This incarnation of Tatsumi is much more self-assured, level-headed, and intelligent as well as a bit trollish thanks to his memories of his previous life providing him with greater experience.
* BattleHarem: This is the world of Akame ga Kill, of course everyone in Tatsumi's harem can kick major ass!
* BattleHarem: This is the world of Akame ga Kill, of course everyone in Tatsumi's harem can kick major ass!
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* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: This incarnation of Tatsumi is much more self-assured, level-headed, and intelligent as well as a bit trollish thanks to his memories of his previous life providing making him with greater experience.
far wiser than he once was.
* BattleHarem:This is the world Very much a given due to all of Akame ga Kill, of course everyone in Tatsumi's harem can kick major ass!lovers being ActionGirl[=s=] in their own right.
* BattleHarem:
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** Suzuka's mummy enhances her innate abilities as a Rakshasa to the point that she's NighInvulnerable.
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** Suzuka's mummy enhances her innate physiological abilities as a Rakshasa to the point that she's NighInvulnerable.
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* HotterAndSexier: A side effect for everyone in Tatsumi's harem from receiving Tyrant abilities.
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* HotterAndSexier: A side effect for everyone in Tatsumi's harem from receiving Tyrant abilities.abilities is that their physiques end up filling out the areas where they were once lacking, giving them more muscular, defined appearances.
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Currently undergoing a rewrite at 4 chapters.
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Currently undergoing a rewrite at 4 chapters.chapters (technically 5 due to the author splitting chapter 4 into multiple parts).
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* AdaptationalBadass: Tatsumi not only has Tyrant abilities as a [[HalfHumanHybrid half-Danger Beast hybrid,]] his new teigu, Starblaze, possesses all of Incursio's previous abilities along with Grand Chariot's defense and [[PlayingWithFire the ability to control fire]]
** Sayo receives the bow Teigu Darken Sky, complementing her existing skills as an archer and granting her the ability to inflict TemporaryBlindness on enemies with supercharged darkness arrows that can only be dispelled by daylight
** Sheele receives Night's Reach as her new teigu and receives Tyrant abilities from Tatsumi, enhancing her hand-to-hand combat skills
** Spear upgrades her spear to utilize explosive spearheads and takes up Sheele's former teigu Extase at the request of her old friend
** Wave gets his teigu upgraded into Dragon Whale, adding in [[MakingASplash hydrokinesis]] alongside Grand Chariot's toughness
** Everyone in Tatsumi's harem are granted Tyrant abilities, upgrading their bodies to be stronger and tougher in combat
** Nearly everyone in Night Raid and the Jaegers will get this treatment through Tatsumi's spirit necklaces [[AllThereInTheManual the author describes in their notes]]
** Sayo receives the bow Teigu Darken Sky, complementing her existing skills as an archer and granting her the ability to inflict TemporaryBlindness on enemies with supercharged darkness arrows that can only be dispelled by daylight
** Sheele receives Night's Reach as her new teigu and receives Tyrant abilities from Tatsumi, enhancing her hand-to-hand combat skills
** Spear upgrades her spear to utilize explosive spearheads and takes up Sheele's former teigu Extase at the request of her old friend
** Wave gets his teigu upgraded into Dragon Whale, adding in [[MakingASplash hydrokinesis]] alongside Grand Chariot's toughness
** Everyone in Tatsumi's harem are granted Tyrant abilities, upgrading their bodies to be stronger and tougher in combat
** Nearly everyone in Night Raid and the Jaegers will get this treatment through Tatsumi's spirit necklaces [[AllThereInTheManual the author describes in their notes]]
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* AdaptationalBadass: Tatsumi not only has Tyrant abilities as a [[HalfHumanHybrid half-Danger Beast hybrid,]] his new teigu, Starblaze, possesses all of Incursio's previous abilities along with Grand Chariot's defense and [[PlayingWithFire the ability to control fire]]
fire]].
** Sayo receives the bow Teigu Darken Sky, complementing her existing skills as an archer and granting her the ability to inflict TemporaryBlindness on enemies with supercharged darkness arrows that can only be dispelled bydaylight
daylight.
** Sheele receives Night's Reach as her new teigu and receives Tyrant abilities from Tatsumi, enhancing her hand-to-hand combatskills
skills.
** Spear upgrades her spear to utilize explosive spearheads and takes up Sheele's former teigu Extase at the request of her oldfriend
friend.
** Wave gets his teigu upgraded into Dragon Whale, adding in [[MakingASplash hydrokinesis]] alongside Grand Chariot'stoughness
toughness.
** Everyone in Tatsumi's harem are granted Tyrant abilities, upgrading their bodies to be stronger and tougher incombat
combat.
** Nearly everyone in Night Raid and the Jaegers will get this treatment through Tatsumi's spirit necklaces [[AllThereInTheManual the author describes in theirnotes]]notes]].
** Sayo receives the bow Teigu Darken Sky, complementing her existing skills as an archer and granting her the ability to inflict TemporaryBlindness on enemies with supercharged darkness arrows that can only be dispelled by
** Sheele receives Night's Reach as her new teigu and receives Tyrant abilities from Tatsumi, enhancing her hand-to-hand combat
** Spear upgrades her spear to utilize explosive spearheads and takes up Sheele's former teigu Extase at the request of her old
** Wave gets his teigu upgraded into Dragon Whale, adding in [[MakingASplash hydrokinesis]] alongside Grand Chariot's
** Everyone in Tatsumi's harem are granted Tyrant abilities, upgrading their bodies to be stronger and tougher in
** Nearly everyone in Night Raid and the Jaegers will get this treatment through Tatsumi's spirit necklaces [[AllThereInTheManual the author describes in their
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* AscendedExtra: Spear, who was a mere side-character who got killed off moments after her introduction, is SparedByTheAdaptation and joins Night Raid
* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: This incarnation of Tatsumi is much more self-assured, level-headed, and intelligent as well as a bit trollish thanks to his memories of his previous life providing him with greater experience
* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: This incarnation of Tatsumi is much more self-assured, level-headed, and intelligent as well as a bit trollish thanks to his memories of his previous life providing him with greater experience
to:
* AscendedExtra: Spear, who was a mere side-character who got killed off moments after her introduction, is SparedByTheAdaptation and joins Night Raid
Raid.
* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: This incarnation of Tatsumi is much more self-assured, level-headed, and intelligent as well as a bit trollish thanks to his memories of his previous life providing him with greaterexperienceexperience.
* AdaptationalPersonalityChange: This incarnation of Tatsumi is much more self-assured, level-headed, and intelligent as well as a bit trollish thanks to his memories of his previous life providing him with greater
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* DeathFakedForYou: Sheele's death at the hands of Seryu is falsified to make it easier for Seryu to infiltrate the Jaegers and for Sheele to operate as an assassin
* DownerBeginning: Both the original and rewrite have this, the latter even more so with the TotalPartyWipe on both sides
* DownerBeginning: Both the original and rewrite have this, the latter even more so with the TotalPartyWipe on both sides
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* DeathFakedForYou: Sheele's death at the hands of Seryu is falsified to make it easier for Seryu to infiltrate the Jaegers and for Sheele to operate as an assassin
assassin.
* DownerBeginning: Both the original and rewrite havethis, a dark beginning, the latter even more so with the TotalPartyWipe on both sidesMutualKill between the Revolutionary Army and Empire.
* DownerBeginning: Both the original and rewrite have
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** Akame's raven enhances her agility and grants her the ability to fly
** Bulat's demon adds in demonic weapons and abilities for him to utilize in combat
** Bulat's demon adds in demonic weapons and abilities for him to utilize in combat
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** Akame's raven enhances her agility and grants her the ability to fly
fly.
** Bulat's demon adds in demonic weapons and abilities for him to utilize incombatcombat.
** Bulat's demon adds in demonic weapons and abilities for him to utilize in
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** Lubbock can call on a spirit spider to kill and consume foes trapped within Cross-Tail's strings as well as warn him of enemies that pass by his strings undetected
** Najenda's wolf allows her to [[TheBeastmaster summon spirit animals to aid her in combat]], with the animals being stronger in daylight
** Spear's sabretooth tiger grants her SuperSpeed and incredible agility in addition to enhancing her attack power
** Najenda's wolf allows her to [[TheBeastmaster summon spirit animals to aid her in combat]], with the animals being stronger in daylight
** Spear's sabretooth tiger grants her SuperSpeed and incredible agility in addition to enhancing her attack power
to:
** Lubbock can call on a spirit spider to kill and consume foes trapped within Cross-Tail's strings as well as warn him of enemies that pass by his strings undetected
undetected.
** Najenda's wolf allows her to [[TheBeastmaster summon spirit animals to aid her in combat]], with the animals being stronger indaylight
daylight.
** Spear's sabretooth tiger grants her SuperSpeed and incredible agility in addition to enhancing her attackpowerpower.
** Najenda's wolf allows her to [[TheBeastmaster summon spirit animals to aid her in combat]], with the animals being stronger in
** Spear's sabretooth tiger grants her SuperSpeed and incredible agility in addition to enhancing her attack
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** Chelsea's fox expands her disguise options when using Gaea Foundation and grants her ImprovisationalIngenuity for situations in which an enemy is approaching
** Wave's shark enhances his speed and strength while giving him the ability to avoid damage by changing his body into water
** Wave's shark enhances his speed and strength while giving him the ability to avoid damage by changing his body into water
to:
** Chelsea's fox expands her disguise options when using Gaea Foundation and grants her ImprovisationalIngenuity for situations in which an enemy is approaching
approaching.
** Wave's shark enhances his speed and strength while giving him the ability to avoid damage by changing his body intowaterwater.
** Wave's shark enhances his speed and strength while giving him the ability to avoid damage by changing his body into
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** Esdeath's snow leopard enhances her already powerful [[AnIcePerson cryokinesis]] up to eleven, expands her options for ice attacks, and also [[HeroicSecondWind provide extra energy for her to keep her in the fight for longer periods of time]] if she uses a trump card
** Cosmina's rabbit further enhances her CompellingVoice and teigu abilities to the point that people instantly obey her spoken commands as well as protect her allies from her teigu's effects to avoid FriendlyFire
** Seryu's bear allows her to become a FullConversionCyborg impervious to conventional weaponry and grants her teigu new and deadly attacks for it to utilize
** Leone's lion enhances her natural strength and senses while also granting her the ability to summon a lion to help her in battle
** Run's angel enhances his flight capabilities, upgrades his weapons to be sharper and faster, and also grants him the power to respectively summon weapons made out of light and darkness at day and night
** Cosmina's rabbit further enhances her CompellingVoice and teigu abilities to the point that people instantly obey her spoken commands as well as protect her allies from her teigu's effects to avoid FriendlyFire
** Seryu's bear allows her to become a FullConversionCyborg impervious to conventional weaponry and grants her teigu new and deadly attacks for it to utilize
** Leone's lion enhances her natural strength and senses while also granting her the ability to summon a lion to help her in battle
** Run's angel enhances his flight capabilities, upgrades his weapons to be sharper and faster, and also grants him the power to respectively summon weapons made out of light and darkness at day and night
to:
** Esdeath's snow leopard enhances her already powerful [[AnIcePerson cryokinesis]] up to eleven, expands her options for ice attacks, and also [[HeroicSecondWind provide extra energy for her to keep her in the fight for longer periods of time]] if she uses a trump card
card.
** Cosmina's rabbit further enhances her CompellingVoice and teigu abilities to the point that people instantly obey her spoken commands as well as protect her allies from her teigu's effects to avoidFriendlyFire
FriendlyFire.
** Seryu's bear allows her to become a FullConversionCyborg impervious to conventional weaponry and grants her teigu new and deadly attacks for it toutilize
utilize.
** Leone's lion enhances her natural strength and senses while also granting her the ability to summon a lion to help her inbattle
battle.
** Run's angel enhances his flight capabilities, upgrades his weapons to be sharper and faster, and also grants him the power to respectively summon weapons made out of light and darkness at day andnightnight.
** Cosmina's rabbit further enhances her CompellingVoice and teigu abilities to the point that people instantly obey her spoken commands as well as protect her allies from her teigu's effects to avoid
** Seryu's bear allows her to become a FullConversionCyborg impervious to conventional weaponry and grants her teigu new and deadly attacks for it to
** Leone's lion enhances her natural strength and senses while also granting her the ability to summon a lion to help her in
** Run's angel enhances his flight capabilities, upgrades his weapons to be sharper and faster, and also grants him the power to respectively summon weapons made out of light and darkness at day and
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** Suzuka's mummy enhances her innate abilities as a Rakshasa to the point that she's NighInvulnerable
** Tatsumi's Tyrant turns him into TheJuggernaut and enhances the power of his Teigu's weapons
* HappilyAdopted: Ears is saved from Dr. Stylish and adopted by Tatsumi, going by the name of Lilac
** Tatsumi's Tyrant turns him into TheJuggernaut and enhances the power of his Teigu's weapons
* HappilyAdopted: Ears is saved from Dr. Stylish and adopted by Tatsumi, going by the name of Lilac
to:
** Suzuka's mummy enhances her innate abilities as a Rakshasa to the point that she's NighInvulnerable
NighInvulnerable.
** Tatsumi's Tyrant turns him into TheJuggernaut and enhances the power of his Teigu'sweapons
weapons.
* HappilyAdopted: Ears is saved from Dr. Stylish and adopted by Tatsumi, going by the name ofLilacLilac.
** Tatsumi's Tyrant turns him into TheJuggernaut and enhances the power of his Teigu's
* HappilyAdopted: Ears is saved from Dr. Stylish and adopted by Tatsumi, going by the name of
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* HotterAndSexier: A side effect for everyone in Tatsumi's harem from receiving Tyrant abilities
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* HotterAndSexier: A side effect for everyone in Tatsumi's harem from receiving Tyrant abilitiesabilities.
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* PornWithPlot: The lemons are rather detailed, but they don't detract from the robust storyline
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* PornWithPlot: The lemons are rather detailed, but they don't detract from the robust storylinestoryline.
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** Sayo, Ieyasu, and Sheele avoid their canonical deaths, with Sayo joining Night Raid and Ieyasu returning home
** Spear, Chouri, and by extension Bulat live past their canonical deaths thanks to the Three Beasts getting killed by Night Raid immediately after their introduction
** Chapter 23 of the original confirmed that Air, Luna, and Fal will survive this time and be adopted by Night Raid to keep Lilac company
* TrainingFromHell: Tatsumi subjects himself with this in the rewrite so he can get a better grip on his new powers and be strong enough to save his friends from their previous fates
* TotalPartyWipe: The original has the first Danger Beast wipe out everyone from Night Raid and the Jaegers before Tatsumi was sent back in time. The rewrite takes it in a much darker direction by having the Revolutionary Army and Empire [[MutualKill wipe each other out]] in a final battle so destructive that it renders the sacrifices on both sides meaningless
** Spear, Chouri, and by extension Bulat live past their canonical deaths thanks to the Three Beasts getting killed by Night Raid immediately after their introduction
** Chapter 23 of the original confirmed that Air, Luna, and Fal will survive this time and be adopted by Night Raid to keep Lilac company
* TrainingFromHell: Tatsumi subjects himself with this in the rewrite so he can get a better grip on his new powers and be strong enough to save his friends from their previous fates
* TotalPartyWipe: The original has the first Danger Beast wipe out everyone from Night Raid and the Jaegers before Tatsumi was sent back in time. The rewrite takes it in a much darker direction by having the Revolutionary Army and Empire [[MutualKill wipe each other out]] in a final battle so destructive that it renders the sacrifices on both sides meaningless
to:
** Sayo, Ieyasu, and Sheele avoid their canonical deaths, with Sayo joining Night Raid and Ieyasu returning home
home.
** Spear, Chouri, and by extension Bulat live past their canonical deaths thanks to the Three Beasts getting killed by Night Raid immediately after theirintroduction
introduction.
** Chapter 23 of the original confirmed that Air, Luna, and Fal will survive this time and be adopted by Night Raid to keep Lilaccompany
company.
* TrainingFromHell: Tatsumi subjects himself with this in the rewrite so he can get a better grip on his new powers and be strong enough to save his friends from their previousfates
fates.
* TotalPartyWipe: The original has the first Danger Beast wipe out everyone from Night Raid and the Jaegers before Tatsumi was sent back in time. The rewrite takes it in a much darker direction by having the Revolutionary Army and Empire [[MutualKill wipe each other out]] in a final battle so destructive that it renders the sacrifices on both sidesmeaninglessmeaningless.
** Spear, Chouri, and by extension Bulat live past their canonical deaths thanks to the Three Beasts getting killed by Night Raid immediately after their
** Chapter 23 of the original confirmed that Air, Luna, and Fal will survive this time and be adopted by Night Raid to keep Lilac
* TrainingFromHell: Tatsumi subjects himself with this in the rewrite so he can get a better grip on his new powers and be strong enough to save his friends from their previous
* TotalPartyWipe: The original has the first Danger Beast wipe out everyone from Night Raid and the Jaegers before Tatsumi was sent back in time. The rewrite takes it in a much darker direction by having the Revolutionary Army and Empire [[MutualKill wipe each other out]] in a final battle so destructive that it renders the sacrifices on both sides
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Currently undergoing a rewrite at 2 chapters.
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Currently undergoing a rewrite at 2 4 chapters.
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** Esdeath's snow leopard enhances her already powerful [[AnIcePerson cryokinesis]] UpToEleven, expands her options for ice attacks, and also [[HeroicSecondWind provide extra energy for her to keep her in the fight for longer periods of time]] if she uses a trump card
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** Esdeath's snow leopard enhances her already powerful [[AnIcePerson cryokinesis]] UpToEleven, up to eleven, expands her options for ice attacks, and also [[HeroicSecondWind provide extra energy for her to keep her in the fight for longer periods of time]] if she uses a trump card
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* TotalPartyWipe: The original has the first Danger Beast wipe out everyone from Night Raid and the Jaegers before Tatsumi was sent back in time. The rewrite takes it in a much darker direction by having the Revolutionary Army and Empire wipe each other out in a final battle so destructive that it renders the sacrifices on both sides meaningless
to:
* TotalPartyWipe: The original has the first Danger Beast wipe out everyone from Night Raid and the Jaegers before Tatsumi was sent back in time. The rewrite takes it in a much darker direction by having the Revolutionary Army and Empire [[MutualKill wipe each other out out]] in a final battle so destructive that it renders the sacrifices on both sides meaningless
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After Night Raid is subject to TotalPartyWipe from a Danger Beast that showed up from nowhere, Tatsumi is given a chance to SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong by the goddess Zenovia. Now reborn with the powers of the Tyrant within him, Tatsumi will use his newfound abilities to change everyone's fates and tear down the corrupt Empire once and for all.
to:
After Night Raid is subject to TotalPartyWipe from a Danger Beast that showed up from nowhere, Tatsumi loses everyone that he had loved to tragic circumstances, he is given a chance to SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong by the goddess Zenovia. Now reborn with the powers of the Tyrant within him, Tatsumi will use his newfound abilities to change everyone's fates and tear down the corrupt Empire once and for all.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Tatsumi not only has Tyrant abilities as a [[HalfHumanHybrid half-Danger Beast hybrid,]] his teigu, Starblaze, possesses all of Incursio's previous abilities along with Grand Chariot's defense and [[PlayingWithFire pyrokinesis]]
to:
* AdaptationalBadass: Tatsumi not only has Tyrant abilities as a [[HalfHumanHybrid half-Danger Beast hybrid,]] his new teigu, Starblaze, possesses all of Incursio's previous abilities along with Grand Chariot's defense and [[PlayingWithFire pyrokinesis]]the ability to control fire]]
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* DeathFakedForYou: Sheele's death at the hands of Seryu is falsified to make it easier for Seryu to infiltrate the Jaegers and for Sheele to operate without fear of detection.
to:
* DeathFakedForYou: Sheele's death at the hands of Seryu is falsified to make it easier for Seryu to infiltrate the Jaegers and for Sheele to operate without fear of detection.as an assassin
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** Akame's spirit raven enhances her agility and grants her the ability to fly
** Bulat's spirit demon adds in demonic weapons and abilities for him to utilize in combat
** Mine's spirit hawk can buff Pumpkin's shots to pack a bigger punch and [[ArmorPiercingAttack bypass armor]].
** Bulat's spirit demon adds in demonic weapons and abilities for him to utilize in combat
** Mine's spirit hawk can buff Pumpkin's shots to pack a bigger punch and [[ArmorPiercingAttack bypass armor]].
to:
** Akame's spirit raven enhances her agility and grants her the ability to fly
** Bulat'sspirit demon adds in demonic weapons and abilities for him to utilize in combat
** Mine'sspirit hawk can buff Pumpkin's shots to pack a bigger punch and [[ArmorPiercingAttack bypass armor]].
** Bulat's
** Mine's
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** Najenda's spirit wolf allows her to [[TheBeastmaster summon spirit animals to aid her in combat]], with the animals being stronger in daylight
** Spear's sabretooth tiger spirit grants her SuperSpeed and incredible agility in addition to enhancing her attack power
** Sheele's spirit panda allows her to [[BarrierWarrior summon barriers to protect her allies in combat]].
** Chelsea's spirit fox expands her disguise options when using Gaea Foundation and grants her ImprovisationalIngenuity for situations in which an enemy is approaching
** Wave's spirit shark enhances his speed and strength while giving him the ability to avoid damage by changing his body into water
** Kurome's spirit reaper upgrades her undead puppets to be much stronger, tougher, and faster, but only works at its best during nighttime.
** Esdeath's snow leopard spirit enhances her already powerful [[AnIcePerson cryokinesis]] UpToEleven, expands her options for ice attacks, and also [[HeroicSecondWind provide extra energy for her to keep her in the fight for longer periods of time]] if she uses a trump card
** Cosmina's spirit rabbit further enhances her CompellingVoice and teigu abilities to the point that people instantly obey her spoken commands as well as protect her allies from her teigu's effects to avoid FriendlyFire
** Seryu's spirit bear allows her to become a FullConversionCyborg impervious to conventional weaponry and grants her teigu new and deadly attacks for it to utilize
** Leone's spirit lion enhances her natural strength and senses while also granting her the ability to summon a lion to help her in battle
** Run's spirit angel enhances his flight capabilities, upgrades his weapons to be sharper and faster, and also grants him the power to respectively summon weapons made out of light and darkness at day and night
** Spear's sabretooth tiger spirit grants her SuperSpeed and incredible agility in addition to enhancing her attack power
** Sheele's spirit panda allows her to [[BarrierWarrior summon barriers to protect her allies in combat]].
** Chelsea's spirit fox expands her disguise options when using Gaea Foundation and grants her ImprovisationalIngenuity for situations in which an enemy is approaching
** Wave's spirit shark enhances his speed and strength while giving him the ability to avoid damage by changing his body into water
** Kurome's spirit reaper upgrades her undead puppets to be much stronger, tougher, and faster, but only works at its best during nighttime.
** Esdeath's snow leopard spirit enhances her already powerful [[AnIcePerson cryokinesis]] UpToEleven, expands her options for ice attacks, and also [[HeroicSecondWind provide extra energy for her to keep her in the fight for longer periods of time]] if she uses a trump card
** Cosmina's spirit rabbit further enhances her CompellingVoice and teigu abilities to the point that people instantly obey her spoken commands as well as protect her allies from her teigu's effects to avoid FriendlyFire
** Seryu's spirit bear allows her to become a FullConversionCyborg impervious to conventional weaponry and grants her teigu new and deadly attacks for it to utilize
** Leone's spirit lion enhances her natural strength and senses while also granting her the ability to summon a lion to help her in battle
** Run's spirit angel enhances his flight capabilities, upgrades his weapons to be sharper and faster, and also grants him the power to respectively summon weapons made out of light and darkness at day and night
to:
** Najenda's spirit wolf allows her to [[TheBeastmaster summon spirit animals to aid her in combat]], with the animals being stronger in daylight
** Spear's sabretooth tigerspirit grants her SuperSpeed and incredible agility in addition to enhancing her attack power
** Sheele'sspirit panda allows her to [[BarrierWarrior summon barriers to protect her allies in combat]].
** Chelsea'sspirit fox expands her disguise options when using Gaea Foundation and grants her ImprovisationalIngenuity for situations in which an enemy is approaching
** Wave'sspirit shark enhances his speed and strength while giving him the ability to avoid damage by changing his body into water
** Kurome'sspirit reaper upgrades her undead puppets to be much stronger, tougher, and faster, but only works at its best especially during nighttime.
** Esdeath's snow leopardspirit enhances her already powerful [[AnIcePerson cryokinesis]] UpToEleven, expands her options for ice attacks, and also [[HeroicSecondWind provide extra energy for her to keep her in the fight for longer periods of time]] if she uses a trump card
** Cosmina'sspirit rabbit further enhances her CompellingVoice and teigu abilities to the point that people instantly obey her spoken commands as well as protect her allies from her teigu's effects to avoid FriendlyFire
** Seryu'sspirit bear allows her to become a FullConversionCyborg impervious to conventional weaponry and grants her teigu new and deadly attacks for it to utilize
** Leone'sspirit lion enhances her natural strength and senses while also granting her the ability to summon a lion to help her in battle
** Run'sspirit angel enhances his flight capabilities, upgrades his weapons to be sharper and faster, and also grants him the power to respectively summon weapons made out of light and darkness at day and night
** Spear's sabretooth tiger
** Sheele's
** Chelsea's
** Wave's
** Kurome's
** Esdeath's snow leopard
** Cosmina's
** Seryu's
** Leone's
** Run's
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** Suzuka's spirit mummy enhances her innate abilities as a Rakshasa to the point that she's NighInvulnerable
** Tatsumi's Tyrant spirit turns him into TheJuggernaut and enhances the power of his Teigu's weapons
** Tatsumi's Tyrant spirit turns him into TheJuggernaut and enhances the power of his Teigu's weapons
to:
** Suzuka's spirit mummy enhances her innate abilities as a Rakshasa to the point that she's NighInvulnerable
** Tatsumi's Tyrantspirit turns him into TheJuggernaut and enhances the power of his Teigu's weapons
** Tatsumi's Tyrant
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** First, Sayo, Ieyasu, and Sheele avoid their canonical deaths, with Sayo joining Night Raid and Ieyasu returning home
** Next, Spear, Chouri, and by extension Bulat live past their canonical deaths thanks to the Three Beasts getting killed by Night Raid immediately after their introduction by Night Raid
** Chapter 23 confirms that Air, Luna, and Fal will survive this time and be adopted by Night Raid to keep Lilac company
** In general, it is all but guaranteed that the major Night Raid and Jaegers members ''will'' get to survive this story
* TotalPartyWipe: The original has the first Danger Beast wipe out everyone from Night Raid and the Jaegers before Tatsumi was sent back in time. The rewrite takes it in a much darker direction by having the Revolutionary Army and Empire wipe each other out in the final battle so destructive that it renders the sacrifices on both sides meaningless
** Next, Spear, Chouri, and by extension Bulat live past their canonical deaths thanks to the Three Beasts getting killed by Night Raid immediately after their introduction by Night Raid
** Chapter 23 confirms that Air, Luna, and Fal will survive this time and be adopted by Night Raid to keep Lilac company
** In general, it is all but guaranteed that the major Night Raid and Jaegers members ''will'' get to survive this story
* TotalPartyWipe: The original has the first Danger Beast wipe out everyone from Night Raid and the Jaegers before Tatsumi was sent back in time. The rewrite takes it in a much darker direction by having the Revolutionary Army and Empire wipe each other out in the final battle so destructive that it renders the sacrifices on both sides meaningless
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** First, Sayo, Ieyasu, and Sheele avoid their canonical deaths, with Sayo joining Night Raid and Ieyasu returning home
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** Chapter 23confirms of the original confirmed that Air, Luna, and Fal will survive this time and be adopted by Night Raid to keep Lilac company
** In general, it is all but guaranteed that the major Night Raid and Jaegers members ''will'' get to survive * TrainingFromHell: Tatsumi subjects himself with this story
in the rewrite so he can get a better grip on his new powers and be strong enough to save his friends from their previous fates
* TotalPartyWipe: The original has the first Danger Beast wipe out everyone from Night Raid and the Jaegers before Tatsumi was sent back in time. The rewrite takes it in a much darker direction by having the Revolutionary Army and Empire wipe each other out inthe a final battle so destructive that it renders the sacrifices on both sides meaningless
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* TotalPartyWipe: The original has the first Danger Beast wipe out everyone from Night Raid and the Jaegers before Tatsumi was sent back in time. The rewrite takes it in a much darker direction by having the Revolutionary Army and Empire wipe each other out in the final battle so destructive that it renders everything the sacrifices on both sides meaningless
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** In general, it is all but guaranteed that the major Night Raid and Jaegers members ''will'' get to survive this story
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** In general, it is all but guaranteed that the major Night Raid and Jaegers members ''will'' get to survive this storystory
* TotalPartyWipe: The original has the first Danger Beast wipe out everyone from Night Raid and the Jaegers before Tatsumi was sent back in time. The rewrite takes it in a much darker direction by having the Revolutionary Army and Empire wipe each other out in the final battle so destructive that it renders everything meaningless
* TotalPartyWipe: The original has the first Danger Beast wipe out everyone from Night Raid and the Jaegers before Tatsumi was sent back in time. The rewrite takes it in a much darker direction by having the Revolutionary Army and Empire wipe each other out in the final battle so destructive that it renders everything meaningless
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''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14075385/1/Kill-the-Second-Chance Kill the Second Chance]]'' is a ''Manga/AkameGaKill'' PeggySue fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/14739674/FireWolf674 FireWolf674]].
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