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* AdaptationExpansion: [[spoiler: The story continues after Heaven Ascension Dio is killed, with the new main plot being Jonathan travelling through various eras in order to fulfill the promises he made to his family.]]
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* AdaptationExpansion: [[spoiler: And ''how!''
** Mr. President has a few more rooms, such as a kitchen and a bathroom.
** There's generally a lot more focus on Jonathan and his relationship with his descendants.
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** Mr. President has a few more rooms, such as a kitchen and a bathroom.
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* RunningGag: Jonathan trying to get his descendants to [[SirSwearsALot use less colorful words]].
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** Jonathan's [[FishOutOfTemporalWater fascination with modern technology]].
** Jonathan trying to get his descendants to [[SirSwearsALot use less colorful words]].
** Jonathan's [[FishOutOfTemporalWater fascination with modern technology]].
** Jonathan trying to get his descendants to [[SirSwearsALot use less colorful words]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19035256/chapters/45210301 Jonathan Joestar, The First Jojo]]'' is a ''[[VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureEyesOfHeaven Jojo's Bizarre Adventure: Eyes Of Heaven]]'' fic that focuses on Jonathan learning of his [[KidFromTheFuture future]] [[HeroicLineage legacy]] while attempting to stop Dio's plan to rule the universe.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19035256/chapters/45210301 Jonathan Joestar, The First Jojo]]'' is a ''[[VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureEyesOfHeaven Jojo's Bizarre Adventure: Eyes Of Heaven]]'' fic retelling of ''VideoGame/JoJosBizarreAdventureEyesOfHeaven'' that primarily focuses on Jonathan learning of his [[KidFromTheFuture future]] [[HeroicLineage legacy]] while attempting to stop Dio's plan to rule the universe.
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* InvisibleToNormals: Zigzagged. Jonathan (and presumably other Hamon users) are able to vaguely see Stands. How visible the Stand is depends on their size. For example: Smaller Stands like the Sex Pistols are the most visible, while bigger Stands like Star Platinum are harder to make out.
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* InvisibleToNormals: Zigzagged. Jonathan (and presumably other Hamon users) are able to vaguely see Stands. How visible the Stand is depends on their size. For example: Smaller smaller Stands like the Sex Pistols are the most visible, while bigger Stands like Star Platinum are harder to make out.
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* BigWhat: Younger Joseph, after he finds out that Giorno is Jonathan's son.
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* BigOMG: Older Joseph, as per usual.
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* BridalCarry: Jonathan catches Jolyne in this manner when she first enters Mr. President's room.
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* MythologyGag: Jonathan's [[TrademarkFavoriteFood love of]] [[SweetTooth chocolate]] is a nod to a short, AdaptedOut scene of the ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood Phantom Blood]]'' manga.
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* MythologyGag: Jonathan's [[TrademarkFavoriteFood love of]] [[SweetTooth chocolate]] is a nod to a short, AdaptedOut scene of the ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood Phantom Blood]]'' manga.
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* RunningGag: Jonathan trying (and failing) to pronounce certain names, such as Kakyoin and Koichi's.
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* RunningGag: Jonathan trying (and failing) to pronounce certain names, such as Kakyoin and Koichi's.get his descendants to [[SirSwearsALot use less colorful words]].
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* CurseCutShort: As Jonathan heads into the Light Rift in chapter 8, Younger Joseph tells him to perform a GroinAttack on any enemy they fight, but Jonathan cuts him off right before he can say it.
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* FamilyOfChoice: Jonathan decides to accept Gappy as his family.
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* FamilyOfChoice: In chapter 15, Jonathan decides to accept Gappy as his family.
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** Jonathan when he sees everyone getting [[CurbStompBattle curb-stomped]] by Heaven Ascension Dio.
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** Johnny when he sees Diego's dinosaurs patrolling Rocky Mountain Village.
** Jonathan when he sees everyone getting [[CurbStompBattle curb-stomped]] by Heaven Ascension Dio.
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* MythologyGag: Jonathan's [[TrademarkFavoriteFood love of]] [[SweetTooth chocolate]] is a nod to a short, AdaptedOut scene of the ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood Phantom Blood]] manga.
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* MythologyGag: Jonathan's [[TrademarkFavoriteFood love of]] [[SweetTooth chocolate]] is a nod to a short, AdaptedOut scene of the ''[[Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventurePhantomBlood Phantom Blood]] Blood]]'' manga.
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* AccentUponTheWrongSyllable: Jonathan's English accent causes him to pronounce Jotaro's name as "Joutaro".
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* RunningGag: [[FishOutOfTemporalWater Jonathan being confused by various aspects of modern times.]]
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* TalkingToTheDead: The final scene of chapter 15 has Jonathan speaking to Danny's grave.
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**RunningGag: [[FishOutOfTemporalWater Jonathan being confused by various aspects of modern times.]]
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* PlaguedByNightmares: It's revealed that [[ShellShockedVeteran Jotaro repeatedly has extremely vivid dreams of [[spoiler: his family and friends being killed.]]
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* NoodleIncident: Apparently, Caesar and Joseph nearly destroyed a kitchen while trying to make tea.
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* NoodleIncident: Apparently, According to Lisa Lisa, Caesar and Joseph somehow [[EpicFail nearly destroyed a kitchen while trying to make tea.tea]].
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* ArgumentOfContradictions: In chapter 19, Polnareff has one with Jotaro after the latter decides to [[MundaneUtility use his Stand]] to play a ring-tossing game.
->"Hey, you're using Star Platinum!"
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->"That's ''cheating!"''
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->"Yes it is!"
->"Is not."
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->''"Argh!"''
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->"And?"
->"That's ''cheating!"''
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* SweatDrop: Used a few times throughout the fic.
