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* OutOfFocus: Events that happened in the source works are typically mentioned as having happened off-screen, such as Blue finding (and eating) a toxic frog from "Scaly Raptor," or the events which saved Elise in "Raptor DNA." If the scene was changed due to the changes in the timeline, it gets expanded upon, but usually not to the degree that original things are.
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* OutOfFocus: Events that happened in the source works are typically mentioned as having happened off-screen, such as Blue finding (and eating) a toxic frog from "Scaly Raptor," or the events which saved Elise in "Raptor DNA." If the scene was changed due to the changes in the timeline, it gets expanded upon, but usually not to the degree that original things are. The reason for this is pretty simple- why rewrite the same thing again if not much, if anything, has changed?
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* TranslatorMicrobes: Because Owen got the amulet working and can understand Elise easily, he slacks off on teaching her sign language. This backfires, because since sign language is what is necessary for *others* to speak to her, the decision of Elise's personhood is much closer (she still gets personhood though).
** When Owen tries out the sounding chamber for the Raptors, he's able to understand what it's saying this time. This means that he understands *instantly* when he accidentally makes a mating call.
** When Owen tries out the sounding chamber for the Raptors, he's able to understand what it's saying this time. This means that he understands *instantly* when he accidentally makes a mating call.
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* TranslatorMicrobes: Because Owen got the amulet working and can understand Elise easily, he slacks off on teaching her sign language. This backfires, because since sign language is what is necessary for *others* ''others'' to speak to her, the decision of Elise's personhood is much closer (she still gets personhood though).
** When Owen tries out the sounding chamber for the Raptors, he's able to understand what it's saying this time. This means that he understands*instantly* ''instantly'' when he accidentally makes a mating call.
** When Owen tries out the sounding chamber for the Raptors, he's able to understand what it's saying this time. This means that he understands
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After ''Film/JurassicWorld'' was released, many people wrote fanfictions about it. One such story was that of ''Fanfic/ItsNotTheRaptorDNA'', a story about how the Indominus Rex from the film actually had human DNA, and was a person in a dinosaur's body. It was very successful.
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After ''Film/JurassicWorld'' was released, many people wrote fanfictions about it. One such story was that of ''Fanfic/ItsNotTheRaptorDNA'', a story about how the Indominus Rex from the film actually had human DNA, and was a person in a dinosaur's body.thus possessing sapience. It was very successful.
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Deconstructed with the [[spoiler: troodon. There are two tribes, but one is just isolationist, and the other as brainwashed fanatics. Thanks to their previous experiences, Gerry and Jess actively hate them both]].
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Deconstructed with the [[spoiler: troodon.Troodon. There are two tribes, but one is just isolationist, and the other as brainwashed fanatics. Thanks to their previous experiences, Gerry and Jess actively hate them both]].
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* TheDreaded: Troodons. Jess and Dr. Gerry, who fought them before, are normally extremely friendly and kind to everyone, but they outright state that the Troodons deserve to be wiped out, describing them as "Real Life Xenomorphs." Raptors and Dilophosaurs, even though they're "exempt" from Troodon predation, still fear them. And one of the two packs of Troodon has a fanatical belief that humans are just animals that deserve to be incubators for their young. It doesn't help that they have bites that cause paralysis, upon which Troodons will lay their eggs in your body to keep the eggs warm and give the hatchlings something to eat when they hatch... *while the host is still alive*.
* {{Fangirl}}: Rosenclaw is a fangirl for Not-Prey (read: Humans) and has a collection of human artifacts that she's scavenged, including firecrackers, a toy bat'leth, a lighter, and Charlie's football. Oddly enough, she's a troodon.
* {{Fangirl}}: Rosenclaw is a fangirl for Not-Prey (read: Humans) and has a collection of human artifacts that she's scavenged, including firecrackers, a toy bat'leth, a lighter, and Charlie's football. Oddly enough, she's a troodon.
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* TheDreaded: Troodons. Jess and Dr. Gerry, who fought them before, are normally extremely friendly and kind to everyone, but they outright state that the Troodons deserve to be wiped out, describing them as "Real Life Xenomorphs." Raptors and Dilophosaurs, even though they're "exempt" from Troodon predation, still fear them. And one of the two packs of Troodon has a fanatical belief that humans are just animals that deserve to be incubators for their young. It doesn't help that they have bites that cause paralysis, upon which Troodons will lay their eggs in your body to keep the eggs warm and give the hatchlings something to eat when they hatch... *while '''''while the host is still alive*.
alive'''''.
* {{Fangirl}}: Rosenclaw is a fangirl for Not-Prey (read: Humans) and has a collection of human artifacts that she's scavenged, including firecrackers, a toy bat'leth, a lighter, and Charlie's football. Oddly enough, she's atroodon.Troodon.
* {{Fangirl}}: Rosenclaw is a fangirl for Not-Prey (read: Humans) and has a collection of human artifacts that she's scavenged, including firecrackers, a toy bat'leth, a lighter, and Charlie's football. Oddly enough, she's a
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* TakeThat: Daemon Bridges, a highly controversial character from "Raptor DNA," is arrested and put into an insane asylum before the story begins.
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* TakeThat: Daemon Bridges, a highly controversial character from "Raptor DNA," is revealed to have been arrested and put thrown into an insane asylum before the story begins.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/its-not-the-scaly-raptor-dna.366078/ Its Not The Scaly Raptor DNA]]'' is a FusionFic of the two universes, in which after the initial events of INTRDNA, Owen finds the amulet and transforms. Now, with Raptor Squad, Elise the Indominus Rex, and Claire by his side, things are going to get pretty weird in the park.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/its-not-the-scaly-raptor-dna.366078/ Its It's Not The the Scaly Raptor DNA]]'' is a FusionFic of the two universes, in which after the initial events of INTRDNA, Owen finds the amulet and transforms. Now, with Raptor Squad, Elise the Indominus Rex, and Claire by his side, things are going to get pretty weird in the park.park.
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After Film/JurassicWorld ''Film/JurassicWorld'' was released, many people wrote fanfictions about it. One such story was that of ''Fanfic/ItsNotTheRaptorDNA'', a story about how the Indominus Rex from the film actually had human DNA, and was a person in a dinosaur's body. It was very successful.
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** When Owen tries out the sounding chamber for the Raptors, he's able to understand what it's saying this time. This means that he understands *instantly* when he accidentally makes a mating call.call.
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Deconstructed with the [[spoiler: troodon]].
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Dr. Antonio Romano. While he wasn't ''evil'' per se in the source work, he was complicit in at least some of Bridges' crimes. [[spoiler: Here, he saw that Bridges was hopelessly insane and was the anonymous source who called the cops on what he was doing, getting the man sentenced to an asylum.]]
* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Deconstructed with the [[spoiler:troodon]].troodon. There are two tribes, but one is just isolationist, and the other as brainwashed fanatics. Thanks to their previous experiences, Gerry and Jess actively hate them both]].
* AxCrazy: Rexy uses Madre Del Diablo (mother of Carnifex and mate of Sobek) as an example to Elise. While she finds it admirable that Elise wants everyone to get along, some are like Madre and are just evil or insane and don't give you a choice for peaceful coexistence.
* TheDreaded: Troodons. Jess and Dr. Gerry, who fought them before, are normally extremely friendly and kind to everyone, but they outright state that the Troodons deserve to be wiped out, describing them as "Real Life Xenomorphs." Raptors and Dilophosaurs, even though they're "exempt" from Troodon predation, still fear them. And one of the two packs of Troodon has a fanatical belief that humans are just animals that deserve to be incubators for their young. It doesn't help that they have bites that cause paralysis, upon which Troodons will lay their eggs in your body to keep the eggs warm and give the hatchlings something to eat when they hatch... *while the host is still alive*.
* {{Fangirl}}: Rosenclaw is a fangirl for Not-Prey (read: Humans) and has a collection of human artifacts that she's scavenged, including firecrackers, a toy bat'leth, a lighter, and Charlie's football. Oddly enough, she's a troodon.
* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Deconstructed with the [[spoiler:
* AxCrazy: Rexy uses Madre Del Diablo (mother of Carnifex and mate of Sobek) as an example to Elise. While she finds it admirable that Elise wants everyone to get along, some are like Madre and are just evil or insane and don't give you a choice for peaceful coexistence.
* TheDreaded: Troodons. Jess and Dr. Gerry, who fought them before, are normally extremely friendly and kind to everyone, but they outright state that the Troodons deserve to be wiped out, describing them as "Real Life Xenomorphs." Raptors and Dilophosaurs, even though they're "exempt" from Troodon predation, still fear them. And one of the two packs of Troodon has a fanatical belief that humans are just animals that deserve to be incubators for their young. It doesn't help that they have bites that cause paralysis, upon which Troodons will lay their eggs in your body to keep the eggs warm and give the hatchlings something to eat when they hatch... *while the host is still alive*.
* {{Fangirl}}: Rosenclaw is a fangirl for Not-Prey (read: Humans) and has a collection of human artifacts that she's scavenged, including firecrackers, a toy bat'leth, a lighter, and Charlie's football. Oddly enough, she's a troodon.
* SecretKeeper: People who know about the Amulet and those who can transform. While some stumble upon it (like Barry, Claire, and Masrani), many of the others are told because it makes sense and helps keep the secret (the ones manning the cameras and Zara, for example).
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** Zara lives.
** Masrani as well.
** Masrani as well.
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** Zara lives.
lives, unlike the two sources.
** Masrani aswell.well, as per Scaly Raptor but not "Raptor DNA."
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* TakeThat: Daemon Bridges, a highly controversial character from "Raptor DNA," is arrested and put into an insane asylum before the story begins.
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* TakeThat: Daemon Bridges, a highly controversial character from "Raptor DNA," is arrested and put into an insane asylum before the story begins.begins.
* TranslatorMicrobes: Because Owen got the amulet working and can understand Elise easily, he slacks off on teaching her sign language. This backfires, because since sign language is what is necessary for *others* to speak to her, the decision of Elise's personhood is much closer (she still gets personhood though).
** When Owen tries out the sounding chamber for the Raptors, he's able to understand what it's saying this time. This means that he understands *instantly* when he accidentally makes a mating call.
* TranslatorMicrobes: Because Owen got the amulet working and can understand Elise easily, he slacks off on teaching her sign language. This backfires, because since sign language is what is necessary for *others* to speak to her, the decision of Elise's personhood is much closer (she still gets personhood though).
** When Owen tries out the sounding chamber for the Raptors, he's able to understand what it's saying this time. This means that he understands *instantly* when he accidentally makes a mating call.
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* AlwaysChaoticEvil: Deconstructed with the [[spoiler: troodon]].
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* SpaceWestern: What Blue's descendant (also named Blue) found herself in, apparently.
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* FusionFic: between two fanfictions of Jurassic World.
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* FusionFic: between Between two fanfictions of Jurassic World.
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/its-not-the-scaly-raptor-dna.366078/ Its Not The Scaly Raptor DNA]] is a FusionFic of the two universes, in which after the initial events of INTRDNA, Owen finds the amulet and transforms. Now, with Raptor Squad, Elise the Indominus Rex, and Claire by his side, things are going to get pretty weird in the park.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Zara lives.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: SparedByTheAdaptation:
** Zaralives.lives.
** Masrani as well.
** Zara
** Masrani as well.
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** All of Raptor Squad, as per ''Scaly Raptor'' canon, which is somewhat unusual given that Charlie died in ''Raptor DNA''.
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** All of Raptor Squad, as per ''Scaly Raptor'' canon, which is somewhat unusual given that Charlie died in ''Raptor DNA''.DNA''.
* TakeThat: Daemon Bridges, a highly controversial character from "Raptor DNA," is arrested and put into an insane asylum before the story begins.
* TakeThat: Daemon Bridges, a highly controversial character from "Raptor DNA," is arrested and put into an insane asylum before the story begins.
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* OutOfFocus: Events that happened in the source works are typically mentioned as having happened off-screen, such as Blue finding (and eating) a toxic frog from "Scaly Raptor," or the events which saved Elise in "Raptor DNA." If the scene was changed due to the changes in the timeline, it gets expanded upon, but usually not to the degree that original things are.
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Its Not The Scaly Raptor DNA is a FusionFic of the two universes, in which after the initial events of INTRDNA, Owen finds the amulet and transforms. Now, with Raptor Squad, Elise the Indominus Rex, and Claire by his side, things are going to get pretty weird in the park.
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/its-not-the-scaly-raptor-dna.366078/ Its Not The Scaly Raptor DNA DNA]] is a FusionFic of the two universes, in which after the initial events of INTRDNA, Owen finds the amulet and transforms. Now, with Raptor Squad, Elise the Indominus Rex, and Claire by his side, things are going to get pretty weird in the park.
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After Film/JurassicWorld was released, many people wrote fanfictions about it. One such story was that of ''Fanfic/ItsNotTheRaptorDNA'', a story about how the Indominus Rex from the film actually had human DNA, and was a person in a dinosaur's body. It was very successful.
Inspired by it, Harry Leferts created his own Jurassic World story, ''Fanfic/TheScalyRaptor,'' where Owen Grady finds a magical amulet that allows him to shapeshift into a raptor, as well as understand them. Both stories went in wildly different directions, but they never crossed over.
Its Not The Scaly Raptor DNA is a FusionFic of the two universes, in which after the initial events of INTRDNA, Owen finds the amulet and transforms. Now, with Raptor Squad, Elise the Indominus Rex, and Claire by his side, things are going to get pretty weird in the park.
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!!This Fanfic Provides Examples Of:
* FusionFic: between two fanfictions of Jurassic World.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Zara lives.
** All of Raptor Squad, as per ''Scaly Raptor'' canon, which is somewhat unusual given that Charlie died in ''Raptor DNA''.
Inspired by it, Harry Leferts created his own Jurassic World story, ''Fanfic/TheScalyRaptor,'' where Owen Grady finds a magical amulet that allows him to shapeshift into a raptor, as well as understand them. Both stories went in wildly different directions, but they never crossed over.
Its Not The Scaly Raptor DNA is a FusionFic of the two universes, in which after the initial events of INTRDNA, Owen finds the amulet and transforms. Now, with Raptor Squad, Elise the Indominus Rex, and Claire by his side, things are going to get pretty weird in the park.
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!!This Fanfic Provides Examples Of:
* FusionFic: between two fanfictions of Jurassic World.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Zara lives.
** All of Raptor Squad, as per ''Scaly Raptor'' canon, which is somewhat unusual given that Charlie died in ''Raptor DNA''.