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* RitualMagic: Susan uses a satanic ritual to [[spoiler:bring Manny back to life]]. Greg overhears this conservation, but doesn't mention it to Frank until later because he doesn't know how he'll react.
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* RitualMagic: Susan uses a satanic ritual to [[spoiler:bring Manny back to life]]. Greg overhears this conservation, conversation, but doesn't mention it to Frank until later because he doesn't know how he'll react.
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* SecondLawOfGenderBending: Following some initial panic attacks, most characters take their transformations very much in stride. In particular, Greg/Greta mainly just cares about how she can use her new situation to gain popularity at school, but eventually decides that she likes being a girl and that she probably wouldn't bother using an antidote even if it existed. Among other characters, "Rowlette" quickly accepts being a girl and promptly starts dating Bryce, Tyson happily starts having sex with the other guys, and Greg's Uncle Gary is elated at the opportunity for advancement at his job as an adult entertainer.
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* SecondLawOfGenderBending: Following some initial panic attacks, most characters take their transformations very much in stride. In particular, Greg/Greta mainly just cares about how she can use her new situation to gain popularity at school, but eventually decides that she likes being a girl and that she probably wouldn't bother using an antidote even if it existed. Among other characters, "Rowlette" quickly accepts being a girl and promptly starts dating Bryce, Tyson happily starts having sex with the other guys, and Greg's Uncle Gary is elated at the opportunity for advancement at his job as an adult entertainer. It's even lampshaded by Greg/Greta when they're shocked at how well they've taken to being a girl.
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''Irreversible Damage'' is a ''Literature/DiaryOfAWimpyKid'' fanfic (or LLB[[note]]Look-Like Book[[/note]]) written by [[https://www.reddit.com/user/IcyOpportunity9/ IcyOpportunity9]] of ''[[Fanfic/TheYogurtExtendedUniverse Yogurt Extended Universe]]'' fame.
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''Irreversible Damage'' is a ''Literature/DiaryOfAWimpyKid'' fanfic (or LLB[[note]]Look-Like Book[[/note]]) written in September 2021 by [[https://www.reddit.com/user/IcyOpportunity9/ IcyOpportunity9]] of ''[[Fanfic/TheYogurtExtendedUniverse Yogurt Extended Universe]]'' fame.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Mr. and Mrs. Jefferson's marriage was essentially this. Mrs. Jefferson had originally been dating Greg's father when they were in school, but their parents forced her to break up with him and marry her current husband, despite him being ten years older than her, because Greg's father wasn't well-off enough for their liking.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Mr. and Mrs. Jefferson's marriage was essentially this. Mrs. Jefferson had originally been dating dated Greg's father when they were in school, but their her parents forced her to break up with him and marry her current husband, despite husband (despite him being ten years older than her, her) because Greg's father wasn't well-off enough for their liking.
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* AttractiveBentGender: Once Greg realizes that he can use his new female form to get guys to do what he wants, he starts to put effort into his appearance and manages to make himself look very attractive. The inverse of this is parodied with Rowley, who looks precisely the same as he used to but with longer hair.
* BlackComedy: Greg find a potion lying on Chirag's floor that makes people endlessly dance until they die of exhaustion. It pops up frequently in the fanfic, but serves a major role in the B-plot.
* BlackComedy: Greg find a potion lying on Chirag's floor that makes people endlessly dance until they die of exhaustion. It pops up frequently in the fanfic, but serves a major role in the B-plot.
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* AttractiveBentGender: Once Greg realizes that he can use his new female form to get guys to do what he wants, he starts to put effort into his appearance and manages to make himself look very attractive. The inverse of this is parodied with Rowley, who looks precisely the same as he used identical to but with his original appearance save for having longer hair.
* BlackComedy: Gregfind finds a potion lying on Chirag's floor that makes people endlessly dance until they die of exhaustion. It pops up frequently in the fanfic, but serves a major role in the B-plot.
* BlackComedy: Greg
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* ComedicSociopathy: Greg displays his usual selfish streak, lack of perspective, and tendency to view everything solely in terms of how it personally conveniences or inconveniences him. However, unlike in canon where this applies just to the minor troubles and actions of a middle school kid, in this story his casual lack of interest in the consequences of his actions is applied to things like [[spoiler:turning Chirag invisible and then losing track of him, forcefully turning Rowley into a girl and then ditching him mid-panic attack, and magically compelling multiple people, including his own brother, to dance until they die of exhaustion]].
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* ComedicSociopathy: Greg displays his usual selfish streak, lack of perspective, and tendency to view everything solely in terms of how it personally conveniences or inconveniences him. However, unlike in canon where this applies just to the minor troubles and actions of a middle school kid, in this story his casual lack of interest in the consequences of his actions is applied to things like [[spoiler:turning Chirag invisible and then losing track of him, forcefully turning Rowley into a girl and then ditching him mid-panic attack, and magically compelling multiple people, including his own brother, to dance until they die of exhaustion]].
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Most people are far less put out by potions' various effects than one might assume. The various {{Gender Bender}}s go almost entirely unquestioned, nobody pays any mind to the people compelled to dance constantly until they start dying of exhaustion, and [[spoiler:Manny dying gets no emotional reaction out of anybody but Susan]]. Likewise, when [[spoiler:Greg and Rodrick come across their mother and aunt talking about using necromancy to resurrect Manny, Greg's only reaction is annoyance at Manny still being their mom's favorite child]].
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Most people are far less put out by potions' various effects than one might assume. The various {{Gender Bender}}s go almost entirely unquestioned, nobody pays any mind to the people compelled to dance constantly until they start dying of exhaustion, and [[spoiler:Manny dying gets no emotional reaction out of anybody but Susan]]. Likewise, when [[spoiler:Greg and Rodrick come across their mother and aunt talking about using necromancy to resurrect Manny, Manny]], Greg's only reaction is annoyance at Manny [[spoiler:Manny still being their mom's favorite child]].
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* AdaptationExpansion: Frank explains the backstory of Susan and Frank's relationship, specifically focusing on Uncle Larry, who is [[spoiler:Susan's former date and presumed true father of Manny]].
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In canon, there's no particular connection between the Heffley and Jefferson parents. In the story, [[spoiler:The now-Mrs. Jefferson used to date Frank Heffley during high school, and the two never fully lost their feelings for one another]].
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In canon, there's no particular connection between the Heffley and Jefferson parents. In the story, [[spoiler:The now-Mrs. Jefferson used to date Frank Heffley during high school, and the two never fully lost their feelings for one another]].
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* AdaptationExpansion: Frank explains the backstory of Susan and Frank's relationship, specifically focusing on Uncle Larry, who is [[spoiler:Susan's former date ex-boyfriend and presumed the true father of Manny]].
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In canon, there's no particular connection between the Heffley and Jefferson parents. Inthe this story, [[spoiler:The [[spoiler:the now-Mrs. Jefferson used to date Frank Heffley during high school, and the two never fully lost their feelings for one another]].
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In canon, there's no particular connection between the Heffley and Jefferson parents. In
* ParentalFavoritism: Susan blatantly prefers Manny over her other sons, refusing to punish him for anything and [[spoiler:using a ritual to bring him back from the dead]]. Frank doesn't share the same favoritism, likely because [[spoiler:Manny's the result of an affair between Susan and Uncle Larry]].
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* RitualMagic: Susan uses a satanic ritual to [[spoiler:bring Manny back to life]]. Greg overhears this conservation, and tries not to spoil it to others.
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* PlotAllergy: [[spoiler:Greg re-kills Manny by exploiting his allergy to peaches.]]
* RitualMagic: Susan uses a satanic ritual to [[spoiler:bring Manny back to life]]. Greg overhears this conservation,and tries not to spoil but doesn't mention it to others.Frank until later because he doesn't know how he'll react.
* RitualMagic: Susan uses a satanic ritual to [[spoiler:bring Manny back to life]]. Greg overhears this conservation,
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They have names.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Dad explains the backstory of Mum and Dad's relationship, specifically focusing on Uncle Larry, who is [[spoiler:Mom's former date and presumed true father of Manny]].
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* AdaptationExpansion: Dad Frank explains the backstory of Mum Susan and Dad's Frank's relationship, specifically focusing on Uncle Larry, who is [[spoiler:Mom's [[spoiler:Susan's former date and presumed true father of Manny]].
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* RitualMagic: Mom uses a satanic ritual to [[spoiler:bring Manny back to life]]. Greg overhears this conservation, and tries not to spoil it to others.
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* RitualMagic: Mom Susan uses a satanic ritual to [[spoiler:bring Manny back to life]]. Greg overhears this conservation, and tries not to spoil it to others.
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Most people are far less put out by potions' various effects than one might assume. The various {{Gender Bender}}s go entirely unquestioned, nobody pays any mind to the people compelled to dance constantly until they start dying of exhaustion, and [[spoiler:Manny dying gets no emotional reaction out of anybody but Susan]]. Likewise, when [[spoiler:Greg and Rodrick come across their mother and aunt talking about using necromancy to resurrect Manny, Greg's only reaction is annoyance at Manny still being their mom's favorite child]].
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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Most people are far less put out by potions' various effects than one might assume. The various {{Gender Bender}}s go almost entirely unquestioned, nobody pays any mind to the people compelled to dance constantly until they start dying of exhaustion, and [[spoiler:Manny dying gets no emotional reaction out of anybody but Susan]]. Likewise, when [[spoiler:Greg and Rodrick come across their mother and aunt talking about using necromancy to resurrect Manny, Greg's only reaction is annoyance at Manny still being their mom's favorite child]].
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* FailedASpotCheck: Chirag's father mistakes post-GenderBender Greg for his mother, despite his still being at middle school age.
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* FailedASpotCheck: Chirag's father mistakes post-GenderBender Greg for his mother, despite his him still being at middle school age.
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* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: To protect his/her identity, "Greta" instead claims that she recently got transferred to Westmore Middle School.
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* KarmaHoudini: Both Greg and Chirag spend the story causing chaos and mayhem, which in Greg's case includes causing numerous people to drink the dancing potion despite knowing full well that they'll dance until they die of exhaustion, [[spoiler:smothering Rowley with a pillow, and causing Manny to have a fatal allergic reaction]]. Neither gets any consequence for this.
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* KarmaHoudini: Both Greg and Chirag spend the story causing chaos and mayhem, which in Greg's case includes causing numerous people to drink the dancing potion despite knowing full well that they'll dance until they die of exhaustion, [[spoiler:smothering Rowley with a pillow, and causing Manny to have a fatal allergic reaction]]. Neither gets Aside from getting turned into girls themselves, neither of them get any consequence consequences for this.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Mr. and Mrs. Jefferson's marriage was essentially this. Mrs. Jefferson had originally been dating Greg's father when they were in school, but their parents forced her to break up with him and marry her current husband, despite his being ten years older than her, because Greg's father wasn't well-off enough for their liking.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Mr. and Mrs. Jefferson's marriage was essentially this. Mrs. Jefferson had originally been dating Greg's father when they were in school, but their parents forced her to break up with him and marry her current husband, despite his him being ten years older than her, because Greg's father wasn't well-off enough for their liking.
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* BlackComedy: Greg find a potion lying on Chirag's floor that makes people endlessly dance a "dab" until they die of exhaustion. It pops up frequently in the fanfic, but serves a major role in the B-plot.
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* BlackComedy: Greg find a potion lying on Chirag's floor that makes people endlessly dance a "dab" until they die of exhaustion. It pops up frequently in the fanfic, but serves a major role in the B-plot.
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* MundaneFantastic: The setting is fundamentally the same average, unremarkable suburbia as in canon, except that {{Magic Potion}}s and BlackMagic also exist. Greg is able to order magic potions over mail, their effects are never treated as especially unusual or remarkable outside of a brief discussion as to whether selling them like that is legal, and Greg barely registers his mother's casual discussion of necromancy as worth paying attention to.
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* {{Phonymon}}: Greta pokes fun at Rowley's female name, Rowlette, for sounding like a "Battlemon" name.
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The story follows Greg’s purchase of three magic potions from a shady comic book ad. While the first two potions fail to impress Greg, he is surprised to discover that the third potion is able to reverse the gender of the drinker. Greg decides to use it to fix problems with his school, which goes well until Greg [[OhCrap finds himself drinking the “gender bender” potion]]. It all goes downhill from there.
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The story follows Greg’s Greg's purchase of three magic potions from a shady comic book ad. While the first two potions fail to impress Greg, he is surprised to discover that the third potion is able to reverse the gender of the drinker. Greg decides to use it to fix problems with his school, which goes well until Greg [[OhCrap finds himself drinking the “gender bender” "gender bender" potion]]. It all goes downhill from there.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Dad explains the backstory of Mum and Dad’s relationship, specifically focusing on Uncle Larry, who is [[spoiler:Mom’s former date and presumed true father of Manny]].
* BlackComedy: Greg find a potion lying on Chirag’s floor that makes people endlessly dance a “dab” til they’re dead. It pops up frequently in the fanfic, but serves a major role in the B-plot.
* GroinAttack: [[spoiler: Greg kicks Christopher in between his nutsack during the end of their date because the latter wasn’t careful to not blurt out about how easy it was for girls to get pregnant by Tyson. It’s implied that after this incident, Christopher won’t have an easy time to impregnate other girls. This isn’t the only reason why he kicked him in the nuts, though. Greg is told by his dad to not do it to other guys but since he drank the genderswap potion by accident, he doesn’t think that rule applies to him anymore. There were also other guys he thinks deserves it.]]
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: To protect his/her identity, “Greta” instead claims that she recently got transferred to Westmore Middle School.
* LazilyGenderFlippedName: Greg changes his name to “Greta”, and Rowley changes his name to “Rowlette” after being turned into girls.
* BlackComedy: Greg find a potion lying on Chirag’s floor that makes people endlessly dance a “dab” til they’re dead. It pops up frequently in the fanfic, but serves a major role in the B-plot.
* GroinAttack: [[spoiler: Greg kicks Christopher in between his nutsack during the end of their date because the latter wasn’t careful to not blurt out about how easy it was for girls to get pregnant by Tyson. It’s implied that after this incident, Christopher won’t have an easy time to impregnate other girls. This isn’t the only reason why he kicked him in the nuts, though. Greg is told by his dad to not do it to other guys but since he drank the genderswap potion by accident, he doesn’t think that rule applies to him anymore. There were also other guys he thinks deserves it.]]
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: To protect his/her identity, “Greta” instead claims that she recently got transferred to Westmore Middle School.
* LazilyGenderFlippedName: Greg changes his name to “Greta”, and Rowley changes his name to “Rowlette” after being turned into girls.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Dad explains the backstory of Mum and Dad’s Dad's relationship, specifically focusing on Uncle Larry, who is [[spoiler:Mom’s [[spoiler:Mom's former date and presumed true father of Manny]].
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In canon, there's no particular connection between the Heffley and Jefferson parents. In the story, [[spoiler:The now-Mrs. Jefferson used to date Frank Heffley during high school, and the two never fully lost their feelings for one another]].
* AdaptationalVillainy: In canon, Greg is selfish and manipulative but not really outside of the norm for teenaged boys. Here, he's willing to liberally use magic potions to screw people over, up to and including forcing people to dance until they die and [[spoiler:making Rowley's limbs fall off before smothering him with a pillow]].
* ArrangedMarriage: Mr. and Mrs. Jefferson's marriage was essentially this. Mrs. Jefferson had originally been dating Greg's father when they were in school, but their parents forced her to break up with him and marry her current husband, despite his being ten years older than her, because Greg's father wasn't well-off enough for their liking.
-->'''Frank:''' I know I'm not as rich as Robert, but I love Linda and I know he doesn't!\\
'''Linda's father:''' Come back when you're rich and we'll discuss this again!
* AttractiveBentGender: Once Greg realizes that he can use his new female form to get guys to do what he wants, he starts to put effort into his appearance and manages to make himself look very attractive. The inverse of this is parodied with Rowley, who looks precisely the same as he used to but with longer hair.
* BlackComedy: Greg find a potion lying onChirag’s Chirag's floor that makes people endlessly dance a “dab” til they’re dead."dab" until they die of exhaustion. It pops up frequently in the fanfic, but serves a major role in the B-plot.
* CensorBox: After Rowley is turned into a girl, a large black box marked "CENSORED" is used to cover his bare chest.
* ComedicSociopathy: Greg displays his usual selfish streak, lack of perspective, and tendency to view everything solely in terms of how it personally conveniences or inconveniences him. However, unlike in canon where this applies just to the minor troubles and actions of a middle school kid, in this story his casual lack of interest in the consequences of his actions is applied to things like [[spoiler:turning Chirag invisible and then losing track of him, forcefully turning Rowley into a girl and then ditching him mid-panic attack, and magically compelling multiple people, including his own brother, to dance until they die of exhaustion]].
* FailedASpotCheck: Chirag's father mistakes post-GenderBender Greg for his mother, despite his still being at middle school age.
* FirstLawOfGenderBending: No antidote for the potions is known to exist, thus making the various gender swaps entirely permanent.
* GenderBender: One of the potions reverses the physical sex of those who drink it. This ends up seeing considerable use in the story, and multiple characters -- including Greg himself -- undergo permanent sex changes.
* GilliganCut: One entry, written when [[spoiler:Susan finds Manny's body]], ends with Greg hoping that the funeral won't be the next day. The next entry opens with him attending the funeral.
* GroinAttack:[[spoiler: Greg [[spoiler:Greg kicks Christopher in between his nutsack during at the end of their date because after the latter wasn’t careful to not blurt blurts out about how easy it was is for girls to get pregnant by Tyson. It’s pregnant. It's implied that after this incident, Christopher won’t won't have an easy time to impregnate impregnating other girls. This isn’t isn't the only reason why he kicked him in the nuts, though. Greg is told by his dad to not do it to other guys but but, since he drank the genderswap potion by accident, he doesn’t doesn't think that rule applies to him anymore. There were also other guys that he thinks deserves deserve it.]]
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: To protect his/her identity,“Greta” "Greta" instead claims that she recently got transferred to Westmore Middle School.
* {{Invisibility}}: One of the potions turns drinkers invisible, including their clothing. Greg believes that this can be reversed with water, such as with a shower or rain, but it turns out that that only works in cartoons. Chirag turns himself invisible by drinking one of the potions, and while he's pretty upset over this at first he eventually comes to enjoy the ability to do whatever he wants without getting caught.
* KarmaHoudini: Both Greg and Chirag spend the story causing chaos and mayhem, which in Greg's case includes causing numerous people to drink the dancing potion despite knowing full well that they'll dance until they die of exhaustion, [[spoiler:smothering Rowley with a pillow, and causing Manny to have a fatal allergic reaction]]. Neither gets any consequence for this.
* LazilyGenderFlippedName: Greg changes his name to“Greta”, "Greta", and Rowley changes his name to “Rowlette” "Rowlette" after being turned into girls.girls.
* MagicPotion: These are apparently made commercially, and people don't find their existence particularly noteworthy or unusual in an of itself. Greg purchases a set of three random potions over the mail and Chirag later gets a few more by mistake, and it's possible for middle school children to recreate them after spending some time analyzing them. Their effects on people who drink them include increasing the potency and noise of their farts, turning them invisible, causing them to constantly perform a swaying dance, making their limbs fall off, and reversing their genders. Greg spends a significant part of the story slipping potions into people's drinks for amusement, convenience, and petty revenge.
* {{Necromancy}}: After [[spoiler:Manny dies]], Greg finds his mother and aunt casually discussing using necromancy to contact the dead. Later, [[spoiler:Susan uses a necromantic ritual to return Manny to life]].
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In canon, there's no particular connection between the Heffley and Jefferson parents. In the story, [[spoiler:The now-Mrs. Jefferson used to date Frank Heffley during high school, and the two never fully lost their feelings for one another]].
* AdaptationalVillainy: In canon, Greg is selfish and manipulative but not really outside of the norm for teenaged boys. Here, he's willing to liberally use magic potions to screw people over, up to and including forcing people to dance until they die and [[spoiler:making Rowley's limbs fall off before smothering him with a pillow]].
* ArrangedMarriage: Mr. and Mrs. Jefferson's marriage was essentially this. Mrs. Jefferson had originally been dating Greg's father when they were in school, but their parents forced her to break up with him and marry her current husband, despite his being ten years older than her, because Greg's father wasn't well-off enough for their liking.
-->'''Frank:''' I know I'm not as rich as Robert, but I love Linda and I know he doesn't!\\
'''Linda's father:''' Come back when you're rich and we'll discuss this again!
* AttractiveBentGender: Once Greg realizes that he can use his new female form to get guys to do what he wants, he starts to put effort into his appearance and manages to make himself look very attractive. The inverse of this is parodied with Rowley, who looks precisely the same as he used to but with longer hair.
* BlackComedy: Greg find a potion lying on
* CensorBox: After Rowley is turned into a girl, a large black box marked "CENSORED" is used to cover his bare chest.
* ComedicSociopathy: Greg displays his usual selfish streak, lack of perspective, and tendency to view everything solely in terms of how it personally conveniences or inconveniences him. However, unlike in canon where this applies just to the minor troubles and actions of a middle school kid, in this story his casual lack of interest in the consequences of his actions is applied to things like [[spoiler:turning Chirag invisible and then losing track of him, forcefully turning Rowley into a girl and then ditching him mid-panic attack, and magically compelling multiple people, including his own brother, to dance until they die of exhaustion]].
* FailedASpotCheck: Chirag's father mistakes post-GenderBender Greg for his mother, despite his still being at middle school age.
* FirstLawOfGenderBending: No antidote for the potions is known to exist, thus making the various gender swaps entirely permanent.
* GenderBender: One of the potions reverses the physical sex of those who drink it. This ends up seeing considerable use in the story, and multiple characters -- including Greg himself -- undergo permanent sex changes.
* GilliganCut: One entry, written when [[spoiler:Susan finds Manny's body]], ends with Greg hoping that the funeral won't be the next day. The next entry opens with him attending the funeral.
* GroinAttack:
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: To protect his/her identity,
* {{Invisibility}}: One of the potions turns drinkers invisible, including their clothing. Greg believes that this can be reversed with water, such as with a shower or rain, but it turns out that that only works in cartoons. Chirag turns himself invisible by drinking one of the potions, and while he's pretty upset over this at first he eventually comes to enjoy the ability to do whatever he wants without getting caught.
* KarmaHoudini: Both Greg and Chirag spend the story causing chaos and mayhem, which in Greg's case includes causing numerous people to drink the dancing potion despite knowing full well that they'll dance until they die of exhaustion, [[spoiler:smothering Rowley with a pillow, and causing Manny to have a fatal allergic reaction]]. Neither gets any consequence for this.
* LazilyGenderFlippedName: Greg changes his name to
* MagicPotion: These are apparently made commercially, and people don't find their existence particularly noteworthy or unusual in an of itself. Greg purchases a set of three random potions over the mail and Chirag later gets a few more by mistake, and it's possible for middle school children to recreate them after spending some time analyzing them. Their effects on people who drink them include increasing the potency and noise of their farts, turning them invisible, causing them to constantly perform a swaying dance, making their limbs fall off, and reversing their genders. Greg spends a significant part of the story slipping potions into people's drinks for amusement, convenience, and petty revenge.
* {{Necromancy}}: After [[spoiler:Manny dies]], Greg finds his mother and aunt casually discussing using necromancy to contact the dead. Later, [[spoiler:Susan uses a necromantic ritual to return Manny to life]].
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* SecondLawOfGenderBending: Following some initial panic attacks, most characters take their transformations very much in stride. In particular, Greg/Greta mainly just cares about how she can use her new situation to gain popularity at school, but eventually decides that she likes being a girl and that she probably wouldn't bother using an antidote even if it existed. Among other characters, "Rowlette" quickly accepts being a girl and promptly starts dating Bryce, Tyson happily starts having sex with the other guys, and Greg's Uncle Gary is elated at the opportunity for advancement at his job as an adult entertainer.
* SmallNameBigEgo: Rowley has a decidedly overinflated sense of how skilled he is at fighting; he's convinced that his martial arts classes have made him a competent fighter, but he's even worse at physical activity than Greg is. In particular, he decides to settle his issue with Greg with a fight, and when the latter arrives at his house he finds Rowley dressed in his martial arts uniform and greeting him with "So you have chosen your destiny, mortal." The fight ends a moment later when Greg pushes Rowley over.
* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Most people are far less put out by potions' various effects than one might assume. The various {{Gender Bender}}s go entirely unquestioned, nobody pays any mind to the people compelled to dance constantly until they start dying of exhaustion, and [[spoiler:Manny dying gets no emotional reaction out of anybody but Susan]]. Likewise, when [[spoiler:Greg and Rodrick come across their mother and aunt talking about using necromancy to resurrect Manny, Greg's only reaction is annoyance at Manny still being their mom's favorite child]].
* SmallNameBigEgo: Rowley has a decidedly overinflated sense of how skilled he is at fighting; he's convinced that his martial arts classes have made him a competent fighter, but he's even worse at physical activity than Greg is. In particular, he decides to settle his issue with Greg with a fight, and when the latter arrives at his house he finds Rowley dressed in his martial arts uniform and greeting him with "So you have chosen your destiny, mortal." The fight ends a moment later when Greg pushes Rowley over.
* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: Most people are far less put out by potions' various effects than one might assume. The various {{Gender Bender}}s go entirely unquestioned, nobody pays any mind to the people compelled to dance constantly until they start dying of exhaustion, and [[spoiler:Manny dying gets no emotional reaction out of anybody but Susan]]. Likewise, when [[spoiler:Greg and Rodrick come across their mother and aunt talking about using necromancy to resurrect Manny, Greg's only reaction is annoyance at Manny still being their mom's favorite child]].
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Not connected, plus has its own page
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The fanfic has an on-going pseudo-sequel, ''All Because of Uncle Gary'', best described as an AlternateContinuity of events during ''The Third Wheel'' and ''Hard Luck'' if Rodrick and Uncle Gary had accidentally turned Greg into a girl via a failed satanic ritual.
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''Irreversible Damage'' is a ''Literature/DiaryOfAWimpyKid'' fanfic (or LLB[[note]]Look Like Books[[/note]]) written by [[https://www.reddit.com/user/IcyOpportunity9/ IcyOpportunity9]] of ''[[Fanfic/TheYogurtExtendedUniverse Yogurt Extended Universe]]'' fame.
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''Irreversible Damage'' is a ''Literature/DiaryOfAWimpyKid'' fanfic (or LLB[[note]]Look Like Books[[/note]]) LLB[[note]]Look-Like Book[[/note]]) written by [[https://www.reddit.com/user/IcyOpportunity9/ IcyOpportunity9]] of ''[[Fanfic/TheYogurtExtendedUniverse Yogurt Extended Universe]]'' fame.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Greg’s life will never be the same, following a GenderBender incident.]]
''Irreversible Damage'' is a ''Literature/DiaryOfAWimpyKid'' fanfic (or LLB[[note]]Look Like Books[[/note]]) written by [[https://www.reddit.com/user/IcyOpportunity9/ IcyOpportunity9]] of ''[[Fanfic/TheYogurtExtendedUniverse Yogurt Extended Universe]]'' fame.
The story follows Greg’s purchase of three magic potions from a shady comic book ad. While the first two potions fail to impress Greg, he is surprised to discover that the third potion is able to reverse the gender of the drinker. Greg decides to use it to fix problems with his school, which goes well until Greg [[OhCrap finds himself drinking the “gender bender” potion]]. It all goes downhill from there.
Read it [[https://imgur.com/a/ZZaShNp here]].
The fanfic has an on-going pseudo-sequel, ''All Because of Uncle Gary'', best described as an AlternateContinuity of events during ''The Third Wheel'' and ''Hard Luck'' if Rodrick and Uncle Gary had accidentally turned Greg into a girl via a failed satanic ritual.
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!!''Irreversible Damage'' includes examples of:
* AdaptationExpansion: Dad explains the backstory of Mum and Dad’s relationship, specifically focusing on Uncle Larry, who is [[spoiler:Mom’s former date and presumed true father of Manny]].
* BlackComedy: Greg find a potion lying on Chirag’s floor that makes people endlessly dance a “dab” til they’re dead. It pops up frequently in the fanfic, but serves a major role in the B-plot.
* GroinAttack: [[spoiler: Greg kicks Christopher in between his nutsack during the end of their date because the latter wasn’t careful to not blurt out about how easy it was for girls to get pregnant by Tyson. It’s implied that after this incident, Christopher won’t have an easy time to impregnate other girls. This isn’t the only reason why he kicked him in the nuts, though. Greg is told by his dad to not do it to other guys but since he drank the genderswap potion by accident, he doesn’t think that rule applies to him anymore. There were also other guys he thinks deserves it.]]
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: To protect his/her identity, “Greta” instead claims that she recently got transferred to Westmore Middle School.
* LazilyGenderFlippedName: Greg changes his name to “Greta”, and Rowley changes his name to “Rowlette” after being turned into girls.
* RitualMagic: Mom uses a satanic ritual to [[spoiler:bring Manny back to life]]. Greg overhears this conservation, and tries not to spoil it to others.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Greg’s life will never be the same, following a GenderBender incident.]]
''Irreversible Damage'' is a ''Literature/DiaryOfAWimpyKid'' fanfic (or LLB[[note]]Look Like Books[[/note]]) written by [[https://www.reddit.com/user/IcyOpportunity9/ IcyOpportunity9]] of ''[[Fanfic/TheYogurtExtendedUniverse Yogurt Extended Universe]]'' fame.
The story follows Greg’s purchase of three magic potions from a shady comic book ad. While the first two potions fail to impress Greg, he is surprised to discover that the third potion is able to reverse the gender of the drinker. Greg decides to use it to fix problems with his school, which goes well until Greg [[OhCrap finds himself drinking the “gender bender” potion]]. It all goes downhill from there.
Read it [[https://imgur.com/a/ZZaShNp here]].
The fanfic has an on-going pseudo-sequel, ''All Because of Uncle Gary'', best described as an AlternateContinuity of events during ''The Third Wheel'' and ''Hard Luck'' if Rodrick and Uncle Gary had accidentally turned Greg into a girl via a failed satanic ritual.
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!!''Irreversible Damage'' includes examples of:
* AdaptationExpansion: Dad explains the backstory of Mum and Dad’s relationship, specifically focusing on Uncle Larry, who is [[spoiler:Mom’s former date and presumed true father of Manny]].
* BlackComedy: Greg find a potion lying on Chirag’s floor that makes people endlessly dance a “dab” til they’re dead. It pops up frequently in the fanfic, but serves a major role in the B-plot.
* GroinAttack: [[spoiler: Greg kicks Christopher in between his nutsack during the end of their date because the latter wasn’t careful to not blurt out about how easy it was for girls to get pregnant by Tyson. It’s implied that after this incident, Christopher won’t have an easy time to impregnate other girls. This isn’t the only reason why he kicked him in the nuts, though. Greg is told by his dad to not do it to other guys but since he drank the genderswap potion by accident, he doesn’t think that rule applies to him anymore. There were also other guys he thinks deserves it.]]
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: To protect his/her identity, “Greta” instead claims that she recently got transferred to Westmore Middle School.
* LazilyGenderFlippedName: Greg changes his name to “Greta”, and Rowley changes his name to “Rowlette” after being turned into girls.
* RitualMagic: Mom uses a satanic ritual to [[spoiler:bring Manny back to life]]. Greg overhears this conservation, and tries not to spoil it to others.
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