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* {{Pun}}: One of Eulogy's quotes from the final chapter, set during the Meloetta chapter since Waltz and Tango are names of two Meloetta.
--> “Ah, so approaches death. Do not mistake calm for resignation, doctor; I have danced with death before. Admittedly, it’s usually a waltz and this seems to be a tango.”
--> “Ah, so approaches death. Do not mistake calm for resignation, doctor; I have danced with death before. Admittedly, it’s usually a waltz and this seems to be a tango.”
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** Zygarde, Giratina, Palkia, Dialga, and Kyurem are also entirelly unique beings created by Arceus.
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** Zygarde, Giratina, Palkia, Dialga, and Kyurem are also entirelly entirely unique beings created by Arceus.
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''Intelligence Factor: A Survey of Pokérin's Sapient Species'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' and ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' crossover by Creator/GMBlackjack, mostly. The Hariyama, Medicham, and Mienshao chapters and most of the E comments are by Creator/{{Masterweaver}}. It is written as a scientific journal by Dr. Julian Bashir recounting his travels around the world of Pokérin to study the intelligence of Pokémon. It can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30823067/chapters/76090625 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://offprint.net/prose/D27Ee2UaP Offprint]] and is complete.
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''Intelligence Factor: A Survey of Pokérin's Sapient Species'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' and ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' crossover by Creator/GMBlackjack, mostly. The Hariyama, Medicham, and Mienshao Mienshao, Supplemental: Various Quotes from Eulogy as Recorded by Dee chapters and most of the E comments are by Creator/{{Masterweaver}}. It is written as a scientific journal by Dr. Julian Bashir recounting his travels around the world of Pokérin to study the intelligence of Pokémon. It can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30823067/chapters/76090625 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://offprint.net/prose/D27Ee2UaP Offprint]] and is complete.
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Chapter 68, The State of Pokérinian Civilization, summarises Pokérin's first steps to joining the Federation, and what various supporting characters got up to after the crew finished their survey.
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: Chapter 68, The State of Pokérinian Civilization, summarises Pokérin's first steps to joining the Federation, and what various supporting characters got up to after the crew finished their survey. The real epilogue is chapter 69, however.
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 67: Hexagons are the best shape, a reference to WebAnimation/CGPGrey's [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=thOifuHs6eY "Hexagons are the Bestagons"]] video.
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* AllMythsAreTrue: [[spoiler:According to Giratina all of the legendary Pokémon are real and even myths with no basis in reality can become real thanks to [[ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve Infinity Energy]].]]
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* AllMythsAreTrue: [[spoiler:According to Giratina all of the legendary Pokémon are real and even even]] myths with [[spoiler:with no basis in reality reality]] can become real thanks to [[ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve Infinity Energy]].]]
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* ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve: [[spoiler:It turns out that Infinity Energy improves itself by mimicking everything around it. There were no sapient Pokémon until Pokérinians evolved and Infinity Energy could "borrow" it from them. In turn, the way Pokérinians think things such as ghosts "should" be causes Infinity Energy to make those conceptions into reality.]]
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* ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve: [[spoiler:It turns out that Infinity Energy improves itself by mimicking everything around it. There were no sapient Pokémon until Pokérinians evolved and Infinity Energy could "borrow" it from them. In turn, turn]], the way Pokérinians [[spoiler:Pokérinians]] think things [[spoiler:things such as ghosts "should" be causes Infinity Energy to to]] make those conceptions into reality.]]reality.
* ClassifiedInformation: Chapter 67: “The Creation Must Converse”:
--> The following account is classified, for the time being, and is revealed only on a need-to-know basis.
* ClassifiedInformation: Chapter 67: “The Creation Must Converse”:
--> The following account is classified, for the time being, and is revealed only on a need-to-know basis.
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* {{BFS}}: Three-times height sword in the Meloetta chapter:
--> and an artificial arm shaped into a blade three times her height. Granted, Meloetta are short individuals, but this still was rather absurd.
--> and an artificial arm shaped into a blade three times her height. Granted, Meloetta are short individuals, but this still was rather absurd.
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''Intelligence Factor: A Survey of Pokérin's Sapient Species'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' and ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' crossover by Creator/GMBlackjack, mostly. The Hariyama, Medicham, and Mienshao chapters are by Creator/{{Masterweaver}}. It is written as a scientific journal by Dr. Julian Bashir recounting his travels around the world of Pokérin to study the intelligence of Pokémon. It can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30823067/chapters/76090625 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://offprint.net/prose/D27Ee2UaP Offprint]] and is complete.
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''Intelligence Factor: A Survey of Pokérin's Sapient Species'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' and ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' crossover by Creator/GMBlackjack, mostly. The Hariyama, Medicham, and Mienshao chapters and most of the E comments are by Creator/{{Masterweaver}}. It is written as a scientific journal by Dr. Julian Bashir recounting his travels around the world of Pokérin to study the intelligence of Pokémon. It can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30823067/chapters/76090625 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://offprint.net/prose/D27Ee2UaP Offprint]] and is complete.
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* HeinzHybrid: What it's hypothesized [[spoiler:Jynx]] are, from the ancient past.
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* PunnyName: S. K. Shelton the Slowking.
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''Intelligence Factor: A Survey of Pokérin's Sapient Species'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' and ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' crossover by Creator/GMBlackjack, mostly. The Hariyama Hariyama, Medicham, and Medicham Mienshao chapters are by Creator/{{Masterweaver}}. It is written as a scientific journal by Dr. Julian Bashir recounting his travels around the world of Pokérin to study the intelligence of Pokémon. It can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30823067/chapters/76090625 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://offprint.net/prose/D27Ee2UaP Offprint]] and is complete.
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''Intelligence Factor: A Survey of Pokérin's Sapient Species'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' and ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' crossover by Creator/GMBlackjack, with at least the Hariyama chapter by Creator/{{Masterweaver}}. It is written as a scientific journal by Dr. Julian Bashir recounting his travels around the world of Pokérin to study the intelligence of Pokémon. It can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30823067/chapters/76090625 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://offprint.net/prose/D27Ee2UaP Offprint]] and is complete.
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''Intelligence Factor: A Survey of Pokérin's Sapient Species'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' and ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' crossover by Creator/GMBlackjack, with at least the mostly. The Hariyama chapter and Medicham chapters are by Creator/{{Masterweaver}}. It is written as a scientific journal by Dr. Julian Bashir recounting his travels around the world of Pokérin to study the intelligence of Pokémon. It can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30823067/chapters/76090625 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://offprint.net/prose/D27Ee2UaP Offprint]] and is complete.
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* NameAndName: "Honchkrow and Vespiquen", or "Vespiquen and Honchkrow", both are used for the chapter name, but the point is that it's the first chapter named after two Pokemon species.
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* MythologyGag: The Japanese names of Pokemon are alternate names, and such.
** Gardevoir's Japanese name, Sirnight, is the derogatory term for a malnourished, and therefore more feminine, Gallade.
** Yukimenoko is the name of one Froslass.
** Gardevoir's Japanese name, Sirnight, is the derogatory term for a malnourished, and therefore more feminine, Gallade.
** Yukimenoko is the name of one Froslass.
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* {{Omniglot}}: Dusknoir:
--> Regardless, it is actually somewhat easy to communicate with them. They are significantly smarter than the average Pokérinian, and so long as you have a radio transmitter and receiver, they can talk—in whatever language you wish, it does not seem to matter, they always seem to know it.
--> Regardless, it is actually somewhat easy to communicate with them. They are significantly smarter than the average Pokérinian, and so long as you have a radio transmitter and receiver, they can talk—in whatever language you wish, it does not seem to matter, they always seem to know it.
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** Siren, Cynthia's Roserade, a member of a species acknowledged to ''not'' be sapient, manages to achieve this for herself for the sake of spiting the researchers.
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** Siren, Cynthia's Dr. Bashir's Roserade, a member of a species acknowledged to ''not'' be sapient, manages to achieve this for herself for the sake of spiting the researchers.
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** Siren the Roserade, a species acknowledged to ''not'' be sapient, manages to achieve this for herself for the sake of spiting the researchers.
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** Siren the Siren, Cynthia's Roserade, a member of a species acknowledged to ''not'' be sapient, manages to achieve this for herself for the sake of spiting the researchers.
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''Intelligence Factor: A Survey of Pokérin's Sapient Species'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' and ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' crossover by Creator/GMBlackjack.Creator/GMBlackjack, with at least the Hariyama chapter by Creator/{{Masterweaver}}. It is written as a scientific journal by Dr. Julian Bashir recounting his travels around the world of Pokérin to study the intelligence of Pokémon. It can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30823067/chapters/76090625 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://offprint.net/prose/D27Ee2UaP Offprint]] and is complete.
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''Intelligence Factor: A Survey of Pokérin's Sapient Species'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' and ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' crossover by [=GMBlackjack=], author of ''Fanfic/SongsOfTheSpheres''. It is written as a scientific journal by Dr. Julian Bashir recounting his travels around the world of Pokérin to study the intelligence of Pokémon. It can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30823067/chapters/76090625 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://offprint.net/prose/D27Ee2UaP Offprint]] and is complete.
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''Intelligence Factor: A Survey of Pokérin's Sapient Species'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' and ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' crossover by [=GMBlackjack=], author of ''Fanfic/SongsOfTheSpheres''.Creator/GMBlackjack. It is written as a scientific journal by Dr. Julian Bashir recounting his travels around the world of Pokérin to study the intelligence of Pokémon. It can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30823067/chapters/76090625 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://offprint.net/prose/D27Ee2UaP Offprint]] and is complete.
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* EmotionsVsStoicism: [=Porygon2=] are entirely emotionless and focus on tasks like a computer would, yet they still have desires to do things. Meanwhile, Porygon-Z has chaotic emotions that seem to change every few seconds, and its behaviours don't follow logic — or at least, not the Vulcans' definition of logic.
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* EmotionsVsStoicism: [=Porygon2=] are entirely emotionless and focus on tasks like a computer would, yet they still have desires to do things. Meanwhile, Porygon-Z has chaotic emotions that seem to change every few seconds, and its behaviours don't follow logic — or at least, not the [[StrawVulcan Vulcans' definition of logic.logic]].
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* UpliftedAnimal: Some Pokémon have this occur to them naturally, were they only become sapient after evolution. One such example is a Vespiquen the team encouters early in Sinnoh, who a while after encountering them develops her own language, barters her honey for amenities to her hive, and even develops a taste for mathematics.
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* UpliftedAnimal: UpliftedAnimal:
** Some Pokémon have this occur to them naturally,were where they only become sapient after evolution. One such example is a Vespiquen the team encouters encounters early in Sinnoh, who a while after encountering them develops her own language, barters her honey for amenities to her hive, and even develops a taste for mathematics.
** Some Pokémon have this occur to them naturally,
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** Siren the Roserade, a species acknowledged to ''not'' be sapient, manages to achieve this for herself for the sake of spiting the researchers.
** Siren the Roserade, a species acknowledged to ''not'' be sapient, manages to achieve this for herself for the sake of spiting the researchers.
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* AllMythsAreTrue: According to Giratina all of the legendary Pokémon are real and even myths with no basis in reality can become real thanks to [[ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve Infinity Energy]].
-->'''Giratina''': "Yes, all these creatures you hear only about in legend are real. Well, most. There are some absurd stories you come up with. But, inevitably, those that gain enough traction will lead to beings of their own..."
-->'''Giratina''': "Yes, all these creatures you hear only about in legend are real. Well, most. There are some absurd stories you come up with. But, inevitably, those that gain enough traction will lead to beings of their own..."
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* AllMythsAreTrue: According [[spoiler:According to Giratina all of the legendary Pokémon are real and even myths with no basis in reality can become real thanks to [[ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve Infinity Energy]].
-->'''Giratina''':Energy]].]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Giratina''': "Yes, all these creatures you hear only about in legend are real. Well, most. There are some absurd stories you come up with. But, inevitably, those that gain enough traction will lead to beings of their own...""]]
-->'''Giratina''':
--> [[spoiler:'''Giratina''': "Yes, all these creatures you hear only about in legend are real. Well, most. There are some absurd stories you come up with. But, inevitably, those that gain enough traction will lead to beings of their own...
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* BrotherSisterTeam: Latios and Latias are always born in pairs, and twins stay with each other for life.
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* ArbitrarySkepticism: Downplayed. In the beginning, when Julian was beginning his research, he had no idea there are far more fantastical elements and thus was more skeptical of what had already been studied.
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* AllMythsAreTrue: According to Giratina all of the legendary Pokémon are real and even myths with no basis in reality can become real thanks to [[ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve Infinity Energy]].
-->'''Giratina''': "Yes, all these creatures you hear only about in legend are real. Well, most. There are some absurd stories you come up with. But, inevitably, those that gain enough traction will lead to beings of their own..."
* ArbitrarySkepticism:Downplayed.[[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]]. In the beginning, when Julian was beginning his research, he had no idea there are far more fantastical elements and thus was more skeptical of what had already been studied.
-->'''Giratina''': "Yes, all these creatures you hear only about in legend are real. Well, most. There are some absurd stories you come up with. But, inevitably, those that gain enough traction will lead to beings of their own..."
* ArbitrarySkepticism:
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* SingleSpecimenSpecies: Unusually for a ''Pokémon'' fanfic, this is averted with most legendaries — it's explicitly stated that there are multiple Latis, Darkrais, Cresselias, and Tapus. It's played straight with Regigigas, though; only one has ever existed, because it was created by Zygarde for the sole purpose of shaping the world. Diancie is also a one-of-a-kind mutation.
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* SingleSpecimenSpecies: SingleSpecimenSpecies:
** Unusually for a ''Pokémon'' fanfic, this is averted with most legendaries — it's explicitly stated that there are multiple Latis, Darkrais, Cresselias, andTapus. Tapus.
** It's played straight with Regigigas, though; only one has ever existed, because it was created by Zygarde for the sole purpose of shaping the world. Zygarde also created Rayquaza to act as a guardian for Pokérin from extraterrestrial threats.
** Diancie is also a one-of-a-kindmutation.mutation.
** Zygarde, Giratina, Palkia, Dialga, and Kyurem are also entirelly unique beings created by Arceus.
** Unusually for a ''Pokémon'' fanfic, this is averted with most legendaries — it's explicitly stated that there are multiple Latis, Darkrais, Cresselias, and
** It's played straight with Regigigas, though; only one has ever existed, because it was created by Zygarde for the sole purpose of shaping the world. Zygarde also created Rayquaza to act as a guardian for Pokérin from extraterrestrial threats.
** Diancie is also a one-of-a-kind
** Zygarde, Giratina, Palkia, Dialga, and Kyurem are also entirelly unique beings created by Arceus.
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''Intelligence Factor: A Survey of Pokérin's Sapient Species'' is a ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' and ''Series/StarTrekDeepSpaceNine'' crossover by [=GMBlackjack=], author of ''Fanfic/SongsOfTheSpheres''. It is written as a scientific journal by Dr. Julian Bashir recounting his travels around the world of Pokérin to study the intelligence of Pokémon. It can be found on [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/30823067/chapters/76090625 Archive of Our Own]] and [[https://offprint.net/prose/D27Ee2UaP/intelligence-factor-a-survey-of-pokerin-s-sapient-species net/prose/D27Ee2UaP Offprint]] and is complete.
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** Julian notes most Pokemon have an inclination for battling and companionship. Regardless of sapience, this is undeniable. He also started to realize just how complex the relationship is because even if the Pokemon are sapient, they have a symbiotic relationship and a bond that the Federation isn’t used to since they’re used to enslaved races not willing complex relations.
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** Malamar has a tendency to be megalomaniacs or at least desire chaos. Julian wonders if the non-megalomaniacal ones never leave their cities... or if they purge ones who have different ideals.
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** Musharna spends most of their lives sleeping, and their society exists within a giant, interconnected dream.
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** Musharna spends spend most of their lives sleeping, and their society exists within a giant, interconnected dream.
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* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: [[The general reaction from the Star Trek characters to the uber Legendaries. Julian has no idea how on earth he's going to report on this at all, especially after meeting these higher beings that exist far beyond the understanding of humans or even science.]]
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* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: [[The [[spoiler: The general reaction from the Star Trek characters to the uber Legendaries. Julian has no idea how on earth he's going to report on this at all, especially after meeting these higher beings that exist far beyond the understanding of humans or even science.]]
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* DidWeJustHaveTeaWithCthulhu: [[The general reaction from the Star Trek characters to the uber Legendaries. Julian has no idea how on earth he's going to report on this at all, especially after meeting these higher beings that exist far beyond the understanding of humans or even science.]]
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** Musharna spend spends most of their lives sleeping, and their society exists within a giant, interconnected dream.