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* GameplayAndStoryIntegration: Taylor's memory is impaired by Insight - she cannot remember things, places and actions she's seen or done under the influence of too much of it. While at the moment it's no issue, when trying to remember it later it only comes out as MissingTime. [[spoiler:For instance, she does not recall ever giving Sophia that vial...]]

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* GameplayAndStoryIntegration: Taylor's memory is impaired by Insight - she cannot remember things, places and actions she's seen or done under the influence of too much of it. While at the moment it's no issue, when trying to remember it later it only comes out as MissingTime. [[spoiler:For instance, she does not doesn't recall ever giving Sophia that vial...]]
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* GameplayAndStoryIntegration: Taylor's memory is impaired by Insight - she cannot remember things, places and actions she's seen or done under the influence of too much of it. While at the moment it's no issue, when trying to remember it later it only comes out as MissingTime. [[spoiler:For instance, she does not recall ever giving Sophia that vial...]]
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* Foreshadowing: [[spoiler:Taylor notes in '''Taylor (6)''' that her father [[EmptyShell enjoys watching the blank screen of the TV]] almost as much as the news.]]

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* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: [[spoiler:Taylor notes in '''Taylor (6)''' that her father [[EmptyShell enjoys watching the blank screen of the TV]] almost as much as the news.]]
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* Foreshadowing: [[spoiler:Taylor notes in '''Taylor (6)''' that her father [[EmptyShell enjoys watching the blank screen of the TV]] almost as much as the news.]]
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** [[spoiler: After '''Taylor (14)''' he starts blaming himself for both Sophia ''and'' Talyor, believing that he could have stopped things from escalating if he had noticed what was happening sooner. He also [[MotiveRant reveals ]]to Dauntless that he always feels responsible whenever something happens to Protectorate and Wards members under his command.]]

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** [[spoiler: After '''Taylor (14)''' he starts blaming himself for both Sophia ''and'' Talyor, Taylor, believing that he could have stopped things from escalating if he had noticed what was happening sooner. He also [[MotiveRant reveals ]]to Dauntless that he always feels responsible whenever something happens to Protectorate and Wards members under his command.]]
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* BloodLust: [[spoiler:Sophia's descent into insanity started when Taylor gave her a vial of her blood. She kept looking at it, moreso when she realized the extremely odd behavior of the blood. Eventually she gave into temptation and drank of the vial. By the time she finished drinking it -and become dependent on it as a doping agent - she had enough Insight to call up the Messengers and have them steal Armsmaster's sample. Eventually her consumption of Yharnam blood led to her transformation into a Cleric Beast.]]

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* BloodLust: [[spoiler:Sophia's descent into insanity started when she started following Taylor's nightly escapades and witnessed her first hunts in Brockton. Having caught Sophia, Taylor gave her a vial of her blood. She kept looking at it, moreso when she realized the extremely odd behavior blood as a reminder of the blood. her changes. Eventually she gave into temptation and drank of the vial. vial despite Taylor's warnings. By the time she finished drinking it -and - and become dependent on it as a doping agent - she had enough Insight to call up the Messengers and have them steal Armsmaster's sample. Eventually her consumption of Yharnam blood led to her transformation into a Cleric Beast.]]
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* BloodLust: [[spoiler:Sophia's descent into insanity started when Taylor gave her a vial of her blood. She kept looking at it, moreso when she realized the extremely odd behavior of the blood. Eventually she gave into temptation and drank of the vial. By the time she finished drinking it, she had enough Insight to call up the Messengers and have them steal Armsmaster's sample. Eventually her consumption of Yharnam blood led to her transformation into a Cleric Beast.]]

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* BloodLust: [[spoiler:Sophia's descent into insanity started when Taylor gave her a vial of her blood. She kept looking at it, moreso when she realized the extremely odd behavior of the blood. Eventually she gave into temptation and drank of the vial. By the time she finished drinking it, it -and become dependent on it as a doping agent - she had enough Insight to call up the Messengers and have them steal Armsmaster's sample. Eventually her consumption of Yharnam blood led to her transformation into a Cleric Beast.]]
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* BloodLust: [[spoiler:Sophia's descent into insanity started when Taylor gave her a vial of her blood. She kept looking at it, moreso when she realized the extremely odd behavior of the blood. Eventually she gave into temptation and drank of the vial. By the time she finished drinking it, she had enough Insight to call up the Messengers and have them steal Armsmaster's sample. Eventually her consumption of Yharnam blood led to her transformation into a Cleric Beast.]]
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** Because she's tied to the Moon Presence through the Dream, when she's back on Brockton Bay she's not right in the head. [[spoiler:Which is why she never noticed what happened to her father until it was too late.]]

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** Because she's tied to the Moon Presence through the Dream, when she's back on Brockton Bay she's not right in the head. [[spoiler:Which is why she never noticed what happened to her father until it was too late. The moment she eats a Third Cord, the memories start rushing back.]]
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* AnotherDimension: [[spoiler:Winslow has been so affected by Taylor it has transitioned to what is basically a part of the Nightmare Frontier (author calls it Nightmare of Winslow). Both Armsmaster and Miss Militia, who have the highest Insight of the PRT, end up there by '''PRT (9)'''.]]


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* {{Mordor}}: [[spoiler:The Nightmare of Winslow, an alternate-reality version of Winslow that exists within the nightmare of a Great One/Elder God.]]
--> [[spoiler:Instead, Winslow was sitting in some sort of badlands, the ground dry and cracked, and littered with tombstones that oozed a red substance. A few silver-colored creatures prowled in the distance. Armsmaster walked to the window, and peered out in silence at the dead land under the cancerous sun.]]

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* DetectEvil: Taylor words her <Impurity> Rune so that she can perceive those that meet her definition of corrupted ([[BloodKnight Enjoyment of violence]] and disregard for the lives of others), making them seem to glow in her view regardless of obstacles. [[spoiler:When she sees it on herself after her rampage in Brockton Bay, it makes it clear that by her own definition she had become evil.]]

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* DetectEvil: Taylor words her <Impurity> Rune so that she can perceive those that meet her definition of corrupted ([[BloodKnight Enjoyment of violence]] and disregard for the lives of others), making them seem to glow in her view regardless of obstacles. [[spoiler:When she sees it on herself after her rampage in Brockton Bay, it makes it clear that by her own definition she had become evil.corrupted.]]



-->I only stopped because I could not run anymore.

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-->I --> I only stopped because I could not run anymore.


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** '''Taylor (15)''': [[spoiler:Taylor has been branded with the mark of <Impurity> and found the first of the cords, which she eats]]

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* DetectEvil: Taylor words her <Impurity> Rune so that she can perceive those that meet her definition of corrupted ([[BloodKnight Enjoyment of violence]] and disregard for the lives of others), making them seem to glow in her view regardless of obstacles.

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* DetectEvil: Taylor words her <Impurity> Rune so that she can perceive those that meet her definition of corrupted ([[BloodKnight Enjoyment of violence]] and disregard for the lives of others), making them seem to glow in her view regardless of obstacles. [[spoiler:When she sees it on herself after her rampage in Brockton Bay, it makes it clear that by her own definition she had become evil.]]



* HeelRealization: Taylor [[spoiler:realizes that she's the bad guy in '''Taylor (14)''', just before she ''nearly'' kills Assault, and does kill several PRT Troopers and Police.]]
* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Taylor realizes she runs the risk of falling into this with realizing it during '''Taylor (10)'''.

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* HeelRealization: Taylor [[spoiler:realizes that she's the bad guy in '''Taylor (14)''', just before she ''nearly'' kills Assault, and does kill several PRT Troopers and Police. Her next chapter compounds it by showing that she has the mark of <Impurity> on her.]]
* HeWhoFightsMonsters: Taylor realizes she runs the risk of falling into this with realizing it during '''Taylor (10)'''.
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** [[spoiler: After '''Taylor (14)''' he starts blaming himself for both Sophia ''and'' Talyor, believing that he could have stopped things from escalating if he had noticed what was happening sooner. He also [[MotiveRant reveals ]]to Dauntless that he always feels responsible whenever something happens to Protectorate and Wards members under his command.]]
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** [[spoiler:Daniel Herbert's CRI in '''PRT (8)''' reveals horrifying details on what his daughter's mere presence has done to him. He has non-cancerious tumors all over his body that are filled with eyes, teeth, and more. His Corona Gemma, instead of flaring out into the frontal and temporal lobes, had stretched downwards, reaching dozens of thin tendrils through the grey and white matter, the thin growths twisting down to the brain stem to look like a spider more than a human's brain.]]
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* XRayVision: It's revealed in '''PRT (7)''' [[spoiler:that Danny can somehow perceive what Armsmaster is doing when there is a solid wall between them. He didn't even recognize that it was strange, indicating that he may have gained "eyes on the inside" that provide this.]]
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* PoisonousPerson: Taylor's blood is essentially poison to everyone else. [[spoiler: It's even [[PoisonIsCorrosive caustic]] enough to stop Hookwolf from healing.]]
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* CopKiller: [[spoiler:Between her involvement in Sophia's death and actually cutting down PRT Troopers and Police trying to route her in ''Taylor (14)''', Taylor is treated as this.]]

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* CopKiller: [[spoiler:Between her involvement in Sophia's death and actually cutting down PRT Troopers and Police trying to route her in ''Taylor '''Taylor (14)''', Taylor is treated as this.]]

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* CopKiller: [[spoiler:Between her involvement in Sophia's death and actually cutting down PRT Troopers and Police trying to route her in ''Taylor (14)''', Taylor is treated as this.]]



* HeelRealization: Taylor [[spoiler:realizes that she's the bad guy in '''Taylor (14)''', just before she ''nearly'' kills Assault, and several PRT Troopers and Police.]]

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* HeelRealization: Taylor [[spoiler:realizes that she's the bad guy in '''Taylor (14)''', just before she ''nearly'' kills Assault, and does kill several PRT Troopers and Police.]]
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* OnlyWorksOnce: Velocity tried to tag Taylor a second time with containment foam grenades. She's nearly guts him for it, stating he doesn't get her twice.

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** Because she's tied to the Moon Presence through the Dream, when she's back on Brockton Bay she's not right in the head. [[spoiler:Which is why she never noticed what happened to her father until it was too late.]]



* ShellShockedVeteran: Djura, as evident in his talks with Taylor. He might've stopped dreaming, but he never did escape the Hunt.

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* ShellShockedVeteran: Djura, as evident in his talks with Taylor. He might've stopped dreaming, but he never did escape the Hunt. [[spoiler:Taylor comes to realize that she's just as trapped.]]

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* AteHisGun: Taylor does this '''Taylor (14)''', right in front of the PRT. [[JustifiedTrope She wanted to go back to the Hunter's Dream.]]

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* AteHisGun: Taylor does this '''Taylor (14)''', right in front of the PRT.PRT, claiming she's just going back to sleep. [[JustifiedTrope She wanted to go back to the Hunter's Dream.]]



* HeelRealization: Taylor [[spoiler:realizes that she's the bad guy in '''Taylor (14)''', just before she ''nearly'' kills Assault.]]

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* HeelRealization: Taylor [[spoiler:realizes that she's the bad guy in '''Taylor (14)''', just before she ''nearly'' kills Assault.Assault, and several PRT Troopers and Police.]]


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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Assault/Ethan for Taylor, according to [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/20921857/ Word of God]].

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* AteHisGun: Taylor does this '''Taylor (14)''', right in front of the PRT. [[JustifiedTrope She wanted to go back to the Hunter's Dream.]]



* HeelRealization: Taylor [[spoiler:realizes that she's the bad guy in '''Taylor (14)''', just before she ''nearly'' kills Assault.]]



* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler:Armsmaster considers Sophia's ultimate fate his fault.]]

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* ItsAllMyFault: [[spoiler:Armsmaster considers Sophia's ultimate fate his fault.fault... then he starts blaming Taylor.]]


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* MissingTime: Anytime that Taylor ventures into an area without high-enough insight, she can't remember what she did. [[spoiler:This includes the Chalice Dugeons and encountering Rom.]]
* MoralityChain: Assault, in a strange way, befriended Taylor. As a result, he ended up as this [[spoiler:after her Dad was brain-dead.]]


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** Taylor as well when she finds a pearl slug husk.
--> It was full of an oddly luminescent, pale slime, and it smelled... odd. Something not quite like moonlight. Starlight, I decided, after I held the shell to my nose for a minute or two, breathing it in. It smelled of starlight.


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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler:When Taylor learns the PRT has her father, she cuts through everyone in her way until the heroes show up, and narrow avoids killing them because Assault tried to reason with her.]]


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* TragicMonster: [[spoiler:Taylor.]]


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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: [[spoiler:Taylor can't go home again since the PRT knows who she is.]]
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* TheUnmasking: [[spoiler:The PRT figures out who Bloodmoon is in '''PRT (6)''' by checking her home.]]


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* WhamEpisode: '''PRT (6)''' [[spoiler:has the PRT find out who Bloodmoon is, and revealed that Danny is essentially been turned into a walking machine by gaining too much insight.]]
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* DetectEvil: Taylor words her <Impurity> Rune so that she can perceive those that meet her definition of corrupted ([[BloodKnight Enjoyment of violence]] and disregard for the lives of others), making them seem to glow in her view regardless of obstacles.
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* AntiHero: Taylor. Despite her well-meaning attempt

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* AntiHero: Taylor. Despite her well-meaning attemptattempt at cleaning up her city, she does have a body-count of over 50 people.



* EnemyMine: [[AvertedTrope Not in the Taylor vs Hookwolf rematch.]] The PRT attempts to arrest both of them.

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* EnemyMine: [[AvertedTrope Not in the Taylor vs Hookwolf rematch.]] The PRT attempts to arrest both ''both'' of them.

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You must be unbiased when posting. They are cops, she is a Cape serial killer.


* AntiHero: Taylor. Despite her well-meaning attempt



* EnemyMine: Averted in the Taylor vs Hookwolf rematch. Rather than teaming up with her to take down Hookwolf, the Protectorate instead fight both of them and get in her way.

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* EnemyMine: Averted [[AvertedTrope Not in the Taylor vs Hookwolf rematch. Rather than teaming up with her rematch.]] The PRT attempts to take down Hookwolf, the Protectorate instead fight arrest both of them and get in her way.them.



* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The Protectorate capes in a nutshell, any time Taylor/Bloodmoon is involved. Best demonstrated when Velocity foams her... just in time to leave her helpless when Hookwolf drops by.

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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The Protectorate capes in a nutshell, any time Taylor/Bloodmoon is involved. Best demonstrated when Velocity foams her... just ends up foaming Taylor in time to leave place, stopping her helpless in the middle of a hunt... right when Hookwolf drops by.by unannounced, forcing him to retreat while leaving her helpless as he kills her. Though, and [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/20699028/ Word of God]] confirms it, had his backup arrived they would have tried to protect her.



* SerialKiller: The PRT has pretty much decided that Taylor is one. They're not exactly wrong, since she goes out to hunt GangBangers during the [[{{Lunacy}} Full Moon]]. The problem is, they seem to care more about taking ''her'' down than the scum she's hunting.

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* SerialKiller: The PRT has pretty much decided that Taylor is one. They're not exactly wrong, since she goes out to hunt GangBangers during the [[{{Lunacy}} Full Moon]]. The problem is, they seem to care more about taking ''her'' down than the scum she's hunting.


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* VillainProtagonist: Taylor, from the Brockton Bay perspective. She is a Serial Killer.

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* EnemyMine: Averted in the Taylor vs Hookwolf rematch. Rather than teaming up with her to take down Hookwolf, the Protectorate instead fight both of them and get in her way.



* ImplacableMan: '''Taylor.''' You cannot stop her. You cannot kill her. If she wants you dead, you will be hunted and slaughtered.

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* ImplacableMan: '''Taylor.''' You cannot stop her. You cannot kill her.her (not permanently at any rate). If she wants you dead, you will be hunted and slaughtered.



* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The Protectorate capes in a nutshell, any time Taylor/Bloodmoon is involved.

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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The Protectorate capes in a nutshell, any time Taylor/Bloodmoon is involved. Best demonstrated when Velocity foams her... just in time to leave her helpless when Hookwolf drops by.
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--> It was not quite three stories tall, but it seemed to loom far larger. It was animalistic in appearance, in the same distorted way a carnival mirror's reflection is still humanoid. Its limbs were too long, it's hands just a little too like hands and not paws, its eyes a little too aware. Its scream was high and desperate. It was a human girl's scream, birthed in a throat framed by too many teeth.

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--> It was not quite three stories tall, but it seemed to loom far larger. It was animalistic in appearance, in the same distorted way a carnival mirror's reflection is still humanoid. Its limbs were too long, it's its hands just a little too like hands and not paws, its eyes a little too aware. Its scream was high and desperate. It was a human girl's scream, birthed in a throat framed by too many teeth.



* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Hookwolf kills Taylor in '''Brockton Bay (2)''' by turning himself into what amounted to a wood-chipper and then lunging for her while she was bound.

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* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Hookwolf kills Taylor in '''Brockton Bay (2)''' by turning himself into what amounted amounts to a wood-chipper and then lunging for her while she was is bound.



* ImplacableMan: '''Taylor!''' You cannot stop her. You cannot kill her. If she wants you dead, you will be hunted and slaughtered.

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* ImplacableMan: '''Taylor!''' '''Taylor.''' You cannot stop her. You cannot kill her. If she wants you dead, you will be hunted and slaughtered.



* InvisibleToNormals: Things like the Messengers can't be perceived by those without enough Insight, [[spoiler:as evidenced in '''PRT (4)''' when a video footage shown to several others only show thing floating on their own.]]

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* InvisibleToNormals: Things like the Messengers can't be perceived by those without enough Insight, [[spoiler:as evidenced in '''PRT (4)''' when a video footage shown to several others only show thing things floating on their own.]]



* LosingYourHead: [[spoiler:Hookwolf lost his metal head when the Boom Hammer hit it hard enough to explode, but remained alive until she found the core.]]
* LudicrousGibs: What was left when Hookwolf killed Taylor. [[spoiler:She returned the favor later on with the Boom Hammer.]]

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* LosingYourHead: [[spoiler:Hookwolf lost his metal head when the Boom Hammer hit it hard enough to explode, but remained alive until she found the his core.]]
* LudicrousGibs: What was left when Hookwolf killed Taylor. [[spoiler:She returned returns the favor later on with the Boom Hammer.]]



* SerialKiller: The PRT has pretty much decided that Taylor is one. They're not exactly wrong since she goes out to hunt GangBangers during the [[{{Lunacy}} Full Moon]].

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* SerialKiller: The PRT has pretty much decided that Taylor is one. They're not exactly wrong wrong, since she goes out to hunt GangBangers during the [[{{Lunacy}} Full Moon]].Moon]]. The problem is, they seem to care more about taking ''her'' down than the scum she's hunting.

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* TheNoseKnows: In the very first chapter, Sophia manages to smell a number of scents off of Taylor... including one that shouldn't exist.

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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: The Protectorate capes in a nutshell, any time Taylor/Bloodmoon is involved.
* TheNoseKnows: In the very first chapter, Sophia manages to smell a number of scents off of Taylor... [[TastesLikePurple including one that shouldn't exist.exist]].
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* ImplacableMan: '''Taylor!''' You cannot stop her. You cannot kill her. If she wants you dead, you will be hunted and slaughtered.


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* LosingYourHead: [[spoiler:Hookwolf lost his metal head when the Boom Hammer hit it hard enough to explode, but remained alive until she found the core.]]


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* MakeMeWannaShout: Triumph.

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