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''Hold it in'' is a WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/Videogame/{{Transistor}} crossover quest fic written by Prok. Here, Jaune awakened his semblance much earlier and it's a different one from canon. But it was too powerful for a child that it made him pass out from nausea. In order to properly control it, he created a computer in the shape of a giant sword. It was then the Transistor, the titular sentient AI, was born into this world.
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''Hold it in'' is a WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/Videogame/{{Transistor}} crossover quest fic written by Prok. Here, Jaune awakened his semblance much earlier and it's a different one from canon. But it was too powerful for a child that and it made him pass out from nausea. In order to properly control it, he created a computer in the shape of a giant sword. It was then the Transistor, the titular sentient AI, was born into this world.
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The crossover quest can be read on Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Link]]).
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The crossover quest can be read on Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom Website/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Link]]).
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In this quest fic, Jaune awakened his semblance much earlier and it's a different one from canon. But it was too powerful for a child that it made him pass out from nausea. In order to properly control it, he created a computer in the shape of a giant sword. It was then the Transistor, the sentient AI, was born into this world.
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The crossover quest, written by Prok, can be read on Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Link]]).
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The crossover quest, written by Prok, quest can be read on Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Link]]).
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But you have nothing to worry about for you have the Videogame/{{Transistor}}.
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But you have nothing to worry about for about. For you have the Videogame/{{Transistor}}.
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The crossover quest quest, written by Prok, can be read on Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Link]]).
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The crossover quest can be read on Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom (''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Link]]'')
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The crossover quest can be read on Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom (''[[https://forums.([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Link]]'')
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*** LivingWeapon: The Transistor stores two AI: Bracket and Blue.
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*** LivingWeapon: The Transistor stores two AI: Bracket and Blue.Blue.
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You are Jaune Arc and you're about to face your final test of Signal Academy. If you pass the test, you will be recommended to Beacon Academy. But you have nothing to worry about because you have the Videogame/{{Transistor}}.
''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Hold It In]]'' is an WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/Videogame/{{Transistor}} Crossover Quest Fic written by Prok on Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom.
In this story, Jaune Arc awakened his semblance much earlier and it's a different one from canon. But it was too powerful for a child that it made him pass out from nausea. In order to properly control it, he created a computer in the shape of a square sword. It was then the Transistor, a sentient AI, born to this world.
''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Hold It In]]'' is an WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/Videogame/{{Transistor}} Crossover Quest Fic written by Prok on Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom.
In this story, Jaune Arc awakened his semblance much earlier and it's a different one from canon. But it was too powerful for a child that it made him pass out from nausea. In order to properly control it, he created a computer in the shape of a square sword. It was then the Transistor, a sentient AI, born to this world.
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You are Jaune Arc and you're about to face your final test of from Signal Academy. If you pass the test, you will be recommended to Beacon Academy. Academy.
But you have nothing to worry aboutbecause for you have the Videogame/{{Transistor}}.
''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Hold It In]]'' is an WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/Videogame/{{Transistor}} Crossover Quest Fic written by Prok on Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom.
In this story, quest fic, Jaune Arc awakened his semblance much earlier and it's a different one from canon. But it was too powerful for a child that it made him pass out from nausea. In order to properly control it, he created a computer in the shape of a square giant sword. It was then the Transistor, a the sentient AI, was born to into this world.
But you have nothing to worry about
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The crossover quest can be read on Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom (''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Link]]'')
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You are Jaune Arc and you're about to face your final test of Signal Academy. If you pass the test, you will be recommended to Beacon Academy. But you have nothing to worry about, for you have the Videogame/{{Transistor}}.
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You are Jaune Arc and you're about to face your final test of Signal Academy. If you pass the test, you will be recommended to Beacon Academy. But you have nothing to worry about, for about because you have the Videogame/{{Transistor}}.
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In this story, Jaune Arc awakened his semblance much earlier and it's a different one from canon. But it was too powerful for a child that it made him pass out from nausea. In order to properly control it, he created a computer in the shape of a square sword. It was then the Transistor, a sentient AI, born to this world.
Thus begin the story of Jaune Arc and his AIs to be huntsman and saves the world.
Thus begin the story of Jaune Arc and his AIs to be huntsman and saves the world.
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You are Jaune Arc and you're about to face your final test of Signal Academy. If you pass the test, you will be recommended to Beacon Academy. But you have nothing to worry about, for you have the Videogame/Transistor.
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You are Jaune Arc and you're about to face your final test of Signal Academy. If you pass the test, you will be recommended to Beacon Academy. But you have nothing to worry about, for you have the Videogame/Transistor.
Videogame/{{Transistor}}.
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You are Jaune Arc who is about to enter the final test of Signal Academy. If you pass the test, you will be recommended to Beacon Academy. But you have nothing to worry about. For you have the Transistor.
''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Hold It In]]'' is an WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/Videogame/{{Transistor}} Crossover Quest Fic written by Prok on Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom. You will guide Jaune Arc in his action to become a Huntsman.
''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Hold It In]]'' is an WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/Videogame/{{Transistor}} Crossover Quest Fic written by Prok on Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom. You will guide Jaune Arc in his action to become a Huntsman.
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You are Jaune Arc who is and you're about to enter the face your final test of Signal Academy. If you pass the test, you will be recommended to Beacon Academy. But you have nothing to worry about. For about, for you have the Transistor.
Videogame/Transistor.
''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Hold It In]]'' is an WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/Videogame/{{Transistor}} Crossover Quest Fic written by Prok onSandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom. You will guide Jaune Arc in his action to become a Huntsman.
Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom.
''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Hold It In]]'' is an WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/Videogame/{{Transistor}} Crossover Quest Fic written by Prok on
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''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Hold It In]]'' is an WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/Videogame/{{Transistor}} Crossover Quest Fic written by Prok on Website/{{SufficientVelocityDotCom}}. You will guide Jaune Arc in his action to become a Huntsman.
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''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/ Hold It In]]'' is an WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/Videogame/{{Transistor}} Crossover Quest Fic written by Prok on Website/{{SufficientVelocityDotCom}}.Sandbox/SufficientVelocityDotCom. You will guide Jaune Arc in his action to become a Huntsman.
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''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/page-3#post-8772135 Hold It In]]'' is an WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/Videogame/{{Transistor}} Crossover Quest Fic written by Prok on Website/{{SufficientVelocityDotCom}}. You will guide Jaune Arc in his action to become a Huntsman.
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''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/page-3#post-8772135 39520/ Hold It In]]'' is an WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/Videogame/{{Transistor}} Crossover Quest Fic written by Prok on Website/{{SufficientVelocityDotCom}}. You will guide Jaune Arc in his action to become a Huntsman.
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** BFS: {{BFS}}: The Transistor is a huge sword.
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You are Jaune Arc who is about to enter the final test of Signal Academy. If you pass the test, you will be recommended to Beacon Academy. But you have nothing to worry about. For you have the Transistor.
''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/page-3#post-8772135 Hold It In]]'' is an WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/Videogame/{{Transistor}} Crossover Quest Fic written by Prok on Website/{{SufficientVelocityDotCom}}. You will guide Jaune Arc in his action to become a Huntsman.
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!! This quest provides examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass: Let's just say that Jaune is not the same wimp kid he was in the show.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Several in fact,
** Jaune meets both Velvet and Coco after taking the final test, though only cameos.
** During a part-time job, Jaune meets Weiss Schnee in a hotel.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Thanks to the Transistor, Jaune is much smarter than he was in the show. He's also a computer whiz.
* ArtificialIntelligence: Jaune creates Bracket and Blue, two AIs to help him.
** BenevolentAI: Both Bracket and Blue are benevolent and want to help their sysadmin, Jaune.
* CoolSword: The Transistor.
** BFS: The Transistor is a huge sword.
** ClingyMacGuffin: Jaune needs it to perform Function. Without it, he will suffer migraines at best, possibly fatal aneurysms at worst.
** EmpathicWeapon: The Transistor is very empathetic.
*** OnlyTheChosenMayWield: Nobody else can wield the Transistor because it's super heavy. Only Jaune can wield it by hovering it.
*** TalkingWeapon: Once upgraded, it has the ability to talk.
*** LivingWeapon: The Transistor stores two AI: Bracket and Blue.
-->--Transistor
You are Jaune Arc who is about to enter the final test of Signal Academy. If you pass the test, you will be recommended to Beacon Academy. But you have nothing to worry about. For you have the Transistor.
''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/hold-it-in-rwby-transistor.39520/page-3#post-8772135 Hold It In]]'' is an WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}/Videogame/{{Transistor}} Crossover Quest Fic written by Prok on Website/{{SufficientVelocityDotCom}}. You will guide Jaune Arc in his action to become a Huntsman.
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!! This quest provides examples of:
* AdaptationalBadass: Let's just say that Jaune is not the same wimp kid he was in the show.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Several in fact,
** Jaune meets both Velvet and Coco after taking the final test, though only cameos.
** During a part-time job, Jaune meets Weiss Schnee in a hotel.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: Thanks to the Transistor, Jaune is much smarter than he was in the show. He's also a computer whiz.
* ArtificialIntelligence: Jaune creates Bracket and Blue, two AIs to help him.
** BenevolentAI: Both Bracket and Blue are benevolent and want to help their sysadmin, Jaune.
* CoolSword: The Transistor.
** BFS: The Transistor is a huge sword.
** ClingyMacGuffin: Jaune needs it to perform Function. Without it, he will suffer migraines at best, possibly fatal aneurysms at worst.
** EmpathicWeapon: The Transistor is very empathetic.
*** OnlyTheChosenMayWield: Nobody else can wield the Transistor because it's super heavy. Only Jaune can wield it by hovering it.
*** TalkingWeapon: Once upgraded, it has the ability to talk.
*** LivingWeapon: The Transistor stores two AI: Bracket and Blue.
